Just some things I picked up on, that may have already been listed.
At 82% Sister Myne should be Lady Myne (the smith knows Myne through the Gilberta Company not the Temple)
At 92% Myne says "Roger" but the people of this world would not understand that as meaning ok, or understood. Which would work better. Also Myne is a book freak not a military buff... (as far as i know)
Thank you for taking the time to point these out.
For Boowkorm volumes we actually have a dedicated thread for corrections for each volume.
Could you please repost your corrections in that topic and as I will closing this one down.