V1P5 second page:
“That just means there’s room for our little family to grow larger.” “Bigger?” echoed Rys, blinking. “Who are you thinking of inviting?”
Two things - change of speaker, so there should be a paragraph break.
And for Rys to echo something, she'd have to say the same thing, so either change larger to bigger, or Bigger to Larger. I recommend the former.