Smartphone Vol 23 part 8
I am not sure how to keep posting to my old comments about Smartphone. They combined a line and, I think, I have to follow the chain. I saw many comments deleted, after they did that.
Anyway, I enjoyed part 8. The hints at what's to come and the expectation of what his wives will look like were intriguing. There was just one interning part, spoiler if I was to comment more, that I would like to have explained.
I am not sure how to keep posting to my old comments about Smartphone.
Since you’re commenting about V23P8, I assume you’re a JNC member? Pre-pub discussion generally takes place in the Members Only section of the forum, with Smartphone having its own subsection. Within that you will find the Volume 23 Discussion, which is where you probably should be writing these sorts of comments, so you can discuss with other readers!