P2 26% seems to have a formatting issue:
“You’ve prepared the goods?”
“No duh. I’m not about to disappoint one of my best customers.”
The line break between paragraphs should be a paragraph break. As a line break, it does not cause the second paragraph to be indented.
The same at 78%:
Warlkin turned to Utopia inquisitively. He seemed rather strange to Warlkin, recently. Before, he had always acted with the confidence and guidance of the great leader that he was. Lately, he had been on edge, raising his voice even over trivial matters.
“Orders from our lord. You are to head to the village of Rabbi and research...”
“Hey! I finally get a chance to play with some Bunnies, huh!? Hell yeah!”
I'm half expecting a fake-out where Sion and Abel resume their duel in a place that just happens to be a battlefield, or a former battlefield sometime in the past, but their duel has nothing to do with any larger battle.
Also ever since I played Trails Of Cold Steel I keep imagining situations like that when it comes to high school students who also deal with bigger maneuvers of national interest.
It is all fine and well to discuss whether the J-Novel Club membership is or is not “worth it”, however the Bookworm discussion topic is not that topic.
If anyone wants to continue discussing the membership and it’s “worth”, by all means please open a new topic,
Otherwise let us all please keep this on topic, which for this thread is the discussion of Bookworm Part 2 Volume 2
Boy, my reactions went from "Alus, you bad boy." to "Holy batshit, Alus!" pretty damn quickly. And I'll stick to my earlier assertion that Cecelnia is the the latest addition to the I want to be in his harem club that Alus has absolutely no interest in.
Sorry, Loki. And Fia. And the other noble girl who's name I forgot and am too lazy to look up.
@seltzermx said in Infinite Dendrogram Vol. 11 Discussion!:
@rahul-balaggan ah, so you can have one and not the other then. Thanks!!
In fact, it's much more common to have a superior job than a superior embryo. Superior jobs - while they are each unique - exist as a one per class grouping, and dendro has a lot of classes, with some being region exclusive, and others being discovered as time goes on. Also the requirements for the superior jobs aren't always known making some people acquire some superior jobs by just going around and doing their thing. What's more, as with anything, Tians can also possess a superior job - while obviously, only Masters possess an Embryo
@myskaros said in Seirei Gensouki Vol. 9 Discussion:
@dry-eyes said in Seirei Gensouki Vol. 9 Discussion:
53% "But Sir Haruto is a particularly special guest of Lady Liselotte. Make sure you don't do anything to upset her [him], okay?"
It's referring to Liselotte. "Don't do anything to Liselotte's special guest such that it would upset her."
Fair enough. It seems a bit indirect that way (ie don't upset her--Liselotte--by upsetting Haruto), but if you consider Liselotte probably likes likes Haruto, it adds a second meaning to it ;)
Oh man, he's got to work tomorrow? That's rough! He's still gotta walk back to the Fa house and do all the prep!
57% But there are still some matters that have that need to be [need of being] decided..." (or for a less formal tone: "matters that need to be decided")
71% In that came [case], I believe it best we follow
I can't wait to see what happens next 😀
Volume 6 - Part 4:
[9%] And I’ve been trying to explain things to you.”” ► Duplicate closing double quote.
[15%] without saying one word negative word about Kaname. ► Remove first/duplicate word.
[19%] was locked in an argument with his his wife, who had ► Duplicate his.
[33%] be storied submarine captain Killy B Sailor, coming ► It should be B. (missing period).
[70%] Mao scowled at them. “’Treat his injury?’” she scoffed. ► The starting single quote is wrongly a closing one.
[77%] it was unusual for her join a planned operation like ► It should be to join.
There it is! The "carved wholesale out of a mountain" bit! But this time around we have a bonus and finally know who did the excavation job. lol
Volume 13 - Part 3:
[87%] wanted t’ show.................................................?” ► It should be 48 periods (currently 49). Just nitpicking some more 😜
@steelblaidd said in Lazy Dungeon Master Vol. 9 Discussion:
Except for Haku
considering that he's still alive, and I can't tell if Haku actually has any friends (minions yes, but friends?) Keima might be the closest she's come to actually having a friend. That's kind of a big deal
definitely liked the conclusion for the volume, but like others have said I hope the invisible blade doesn't become a crutch/ass pull ability that just destroys everyone he comes across. I had already figured that was how Kai would finish the fight as he was out of his element for sure in this encounter.
As far as the new waifu, we know its a deer like race that has horns..I forget if they described them in detail at all or not in the previous part to know if their bodies are more bestial in nature or if they are more human with animal ears/horns types. I have a feeling it will be the latter, but who knows. Looking forward to the next volume.
Edit: looked at the cover art for volume 2 and looks like it is for sure more on the human side.