2.1
Lots of formatting issues here. The first words of dialogue tags should not be capitalized unless it's a name. The last volume did this correctly. Did the editor change?
For example:

“Forgive me...” The governor said with a sigh. ---> “Forgive me...” the governor said with a sigh.

The centurion shook his head in response, “I don’t know, sir." ---> The centurion shook his head in response. “I don’t know, sir."
Shaking one's head seems unrelated to speaking, so it should stop with a period. If you want to use a comma, you'd add on "and said" or something similar.

The editor should read the previous volume and make sure to align the formatting for consistency.

V4 P6 ~20%
Rainbow Blade is called Rainbow Sword, right after being called Rainbow Blade.
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@Expendable I was thinking the same.

V1P11
~32%

My thoughts continued to swirl around the unknown quantity that the orcs represented, which made it impossible to sleep soundly. I’d made up my mind to fight them, but maybe memories of that busted-up orc hunting party kept haunting me. I covered my head with a sheet, shut my eyes tight, and told myself to sleep.

It seems an odd thing to be unsure about, whether or not memories of the results of the orc hunting party were haunting you. Is maybe meant to be many here? maybe->many

~74%

I swiftly closed the distance with the sword-wielder, and we clashed. As my sword came down, it deflected it with a minimal movement.

Maybe remove the 'a' before minimal movement? It's not an object but a type of action? deflected it with a minimal movement->deflected it with minimal movement

v6.1p14
[27%] Reina could envisage the expressions -> not sure if this is a Britishism, or of the nuance is intended.

V4p8
[8%] Whispers about its members had been circulating among the guild as they resided within the Gandakia Dungeon. -> feels a little ambiguous. Is it that whispers were circulating while they were residing in this dungeon, or whispers were circulating because they were?

58%] Floor Thirty-Four: Emergency Directive? Overcome the Mystery Porridge! -> chapter title not formatted right.

V3P5

At first, he hadn’t accepted that and had often lashed out at Pirislaria. She was the one person he had been unable to accept losing to—it would make him the weakest member of the part.

part-> party ?

“State your name, mighty one.” Mudelev addressed his opening, his lips curving with joy. It was a small, female, human child.

I can maybe see opening here but is it maybe meant to be opponent? opening->opponent?

Information was crucial. Knowing the enemy was advantageous, no matter the fight. Zolmnem fully understood how beneficial his Status Appraisal was when facing off against an unknown enemy for the time.

the time -> the first time?

“Hmm... He seems like a strong one. To an exceptional degree,” Mudevel said, stepping towards the boy.

Just a small typo in the name; Mudevel -> Mudelev

16% we forgot your brother. Lahan's older brother is not Maomao's brother. He is Lahan's brother by birth while Lahan is Maomao's brother by adoption by Lakan.

V3P2

~40%, "martial relationships" should probably be "marital relationships"

It's just a minor difference 😅

8.11:

[78%] Nadia was the daughter of the former Litoanyan royal family, and she had lost everything she had ever known at the age of just thirteen. The youngest daughter of a marquis's family, the devastating story of Nadia Felix Cernando was an event recorded in modern history.

Was Nadia from the royal family, or a marquis's family? Presumably she isn't from both...

v5p10

~71%

Rupture. Fressa had not once succeeded with the Technique, but she was positive she was close.

Erroneous-seeming Rupture. at the start of the paragraph, or perhaps it should have been Chi Fist: Rupture in full? Worth taking another look, at least.

~76%

After shouting at Fressa upon seeing her survive his Fireball attack, he ran frther down the hall.

frther -> farther

88%

She and Anzel had already hauled away the smuggled goods, and the magicians were likely on am airship home by now.

am -> an

V2P1

"Please forgive us, Your Majesty!"
[...]
"If it's something Her Majesty has decided ..."

This is non-standard usage. "Majesty" is normally reserved for the reigning monarch, other members of royalty (e.g. Princess Claudia) would be addressed as "Highness".

V8P12

She found herself through into the sky, falling helplessly. Humans were not meant to fly, and she couldn’t help the wave of instinctive fear that struck her.

through -> thrown?

v1p11:

2% - Might as well check to see if hipppopotamal is supposed to have those three “p”s together or not. Never know with monster names, but the usages later in the next paragraph and beyond only have a doubled “p”. :)

@Ingraman Fixed this last night, thank you!

v1 p16

~65% However, by taking Sven with me, Doctor Emma would lose one of her helpers...

Should that be Wendel? Sven is currently away at the capital studying; Karen wants to take Wendel with her as well.

@Geezer-Weasalopes said in Dimension Wave - Corrections Topic:

@xdbx said in Dimension Wave - Corrections Topic:

v2 p4

~35% I noticed a menu that I could bring up with the hoe equipped that had a There was only one option, but... I might as well plant them.

Plant what? Was a clause dropped? That sentence doesn't really make sense.

Something is missing.

Original text:
開拓者の七つ道具にあるクワの項目から種を選択できた。
一種類しかないが……とりあえずこれを植えておくか。

Volume 6, Part 14

That cautionless man obeys the roles so well it's frustrating.
roles = rules

The fox god slapped the ground with her tales, causing the air to tremble.
tales = tails

Thou are a testament to human idiocy!
are = art

Outside was the sheetwraiths.
was = were

There were shadows at the gate, with my eyesight they looked just like little beans, but they were most likely people who had seen our crash.
first comma = semicolon

Fluttering near the gate, was a flag of five spears on a yellow background.
first comma = remove