V13 P5, 21%
"As tiger beastgirls, Mary and Meta had the same problem, so there was one among us who could possibly take note"
Meta -> Metea

Also I don't think the latter half quite connects well. Perhaps 'but there was one' or 'so there was [only] one' might work slightly better?

55%
"Metea seems a little weary about parting with part of her bounty"
Weary -> wary

83%
"A normal stalk of corn usually takes a week to germinate after it’s planted, and should only grow up to somewhere between ten to twenty centimetres,” Natsuki replied. “But this one stands at over one hundred and fifty centimetres for some reason.”
If focussing on how quickly the corn has grown, an addition might help: "and should only grow up to somewhere between ten to twenty centimetres [since then/in these past weeks]"

@xdbx said in In Another World with Household Spells - Corrections Topic:

=> I Thank

Or even just,
=> Thank you

V1 P8 45%: In her frenzy, Aide's daughter <- this should be 'sister'

V1 P6 26%: "You made us Weapons." Shouldn't it be "You made me a Weapon."?

V2 P9 starting at 50%:
One of the jobs is labeled 'spy' although it was previously called 'scout'. And I think 'scout' is way more fitting.

v4P2p1:

66% - Corect. -> Missing letter, presumably: Correct.

v9p5 ~87%:

Were they shared carriages limited to the city streets?

they -> the, or perhaps just cut the shared carriages?

V3P2

86%: "...the noblewoman and her retinue fled with their tales between their legs" -> tails

@karasutengu it's implied. They're thugs, and in less posh circles it's common to leave the action implied instead of using correct English, especially when he already suggested it in the first half of the sentence.

@Khazidhea Thank you, we do try to reduce repetition and echos as much as possible.

v1p7 ~5%:

It could be a storm before we know it, so we're closeing up early."

closeing -> closing.

v4 p3

~82%

“Anyway, I’m sure those left behind will work things out. For now, there’s telling when you’d be able to make it back home, so you should probably find somewhere to relax,” Ryne said, trying to change the mood. “Now that your little lady is feeling better, it would be a waste to make her keep living life on the run. And we can’t exactly travel around with you.”

Should that be there’s no telling ?

V8 P7 (93% - 6th line up from bottom of last page)

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This doesn't sound right. Could the 2nd temple actually be "village"?
(as in: "by a stronger barrier than the village"

v7 p7

~45%

In the meantime, Nestart addressed his financial advisor/ “In addition, there won’t be any more budgeting issues. I’ve found myself with ample funds for this project after sorting through my grandfather’s treasures.”

=> advisor, (replace the / with a ,).

~80%

Edward had directed his question at the butler rather than at Wilson. Jild had come to the Van den Haak Viscounty on the orders of Edward himself after Friede’s blunder had forced Haldoria to cede land to the empire. He’d originally been Edward’s subordinate, and now he managed Wilson’s underlings on Edward’s behalf.”

The paragraph isn't dialog, so the trailing ” should not be present.

3.3:

he certainly hadn't to bump into him

he certainly hadn't expected to bump into him

Volume 1 - Part 7:

[51%] He titled the coffee pot >> should be tilted [86%] As long as I keep that sister-obsessed lunatic that I’m her >> should be thinking that

3.12:

pasted out drunk.

passed out drunk.

Sure, they were pasted. So much so they were passed out, OK?

V13 P14 (23% - last line at bottom of page)

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For proper English syntax, "I" should be changed to "I'll".
i.e.: I'll ask the king about doing something,