Volume 1, Part 7, 74%:
That lecture is supposed to have happened two days BEFORE the Stardust landed in the Gobi desert, yet the professor is talking about what happened in the Gobi desert. At this point nothing should have happened there yet...
@kevin-s I actually will argue back on this one, since I feel there is a very severe semantic mismatch going on. More specifically, I do not believe the type of "gesture of honor" you are associating with "salute" is actually what Lihaku is doing. The motion he's done is a societal courtesy in this sort of setting. It does not carry the sort of more serious connotation of a salute of "respect" as per the definition you're quoting. Is it a respectful gesture in and of itself? Of course, but that is again a consequence of how respect is structured in an East Asian culture as what this series is set in. But there are far higher forms of respect that also exist, where the weight behind using the word salute would be more fitting, ie the court officials saluting the emperor at some formal procession. If you use it here, it ends up creating a false equivalence between the degree of respect/formality.
I don't know what the original text said, but because of the context, I'm going to question Patriciel's questioning of Efia's powers. The way it's currently written, it sounded to me like he was questioning the amount of time her time travel was capable of doing, but nothing she'd said at that point mentioned anything about time travel, so how would he have known she traveled multiple months? From the context, I think what he meant to question was the vines, and that she had any power other than the time travel to begin with. So I think instead of "Your power only allowed you to travel a mere few days into the past" it should be something like "Your only power was to travel a few days into the past". But I don't know what the original was, so maybe I missed something.
[39%] known as the Demon King awaygand bust straight ► It should be away and (remove extra g).
[62%] “Okay,” Sagittarius responded,drawing his bow. ► Missing space.
[79%] on a different level,as were his rank, base stats, ► Missing space.
[80%] everyone around him worshipped and obeyed him ► It should be worshiped (US spelling).
[95%] noticed, he was being worshipped by bug people ► It should be worshiped (US spelling).
[34%] yeah, most of all, he was a preschooler ► Missing period.
[35%] supposed to take you serious after that?” ► It should be seriously.
[41%] weirdo!’” Iroha asked, broom now in hand ► Missing period.
[58%] I was already knee-deep in despair.. ► Duplicate period.
[77%] up straight. “You mean this voice?” ► Remove the bold format from the closing double quote.