Volume 3 - Part 2:

[84%]

A duke had once been charged with high reason

Typo. reason > treason

@kingpendragon said in Mercedes and the Waning Moon - Corrections Topic:

V1 P7 around 51%:

Benkei shot his crossbow into the air with his crossbow.

The end is duplicated.

I think this one should be "Benkei shot an arrow into the air with his crossbow" as that then ties in with the following text, "Pulled by gravity, the arrow dived straight down and pierced the Historie."

Something for the translator to consider is that a crossbow normally fires bolts rather than arrows.

V2 P12

91% "while maintaining a delicate balance between nobles houses."

Unnecessary plural, "while maintaining a delicate balance between noble houses."

V3P5
~53%

Back then, he’d travel often between the duchy and the capital, spending his time in the capital indulging in recreation with our father, and his time in the duchy forcing people to do his bidding by throwing our father’s name.

Potentially missing the word 'around'? I've never seen the phrase used without so I don't know but I just thought I'd put this here just in case; ->throwing our father's name around.

15.7, ~65%

chock it up

Old habits die hard. The phrase is "chalk it up"

Vol 9, part 1

64% - about forty-five shilometers.
Is this supposed to be kilometers?

@Hylebos
Nah, it's a simple typo, one which actually works as such on a standard QWERTY keyboard.
[Duke Mahati] or [Eldan, Duke of Mahati]
'r' and 'f' are adjacent, and even get hit using the same finger if touch-typing.

Juha is letting him know the various ways he can refer to Eldan formally, depending upon circumstances, and this isn't something Juha would mess up!

V1P7
~48%

[...] I swung down my bible. Another twinge ran through my arm as I struck, but the corner of the book finally hit him squarely in the neck. It was a blow that would shatter bones, twist his head sideways.

May be entirely wrong here but when reading the last sentence here it seems like something is missing around the 'twist'; either an 'and' -> shatter bones, and his head or making it 'twisting'->shatter bones, twisting his head, apologies if it is undeeded.

Multiple instances through-out part 1 of million krams needing to be hundred millions krams

@Ingraman said in Dahlia in Bloom - Corrections Topic:

Vv9p4:

0% - The Black Dog, the Kit, and First-Name Bases -> Maybe it’s a reference to something that happens in this part that I haven’t gotten to, since I only just started reading the part, but usually the phrase would be “First-Name Basis”. Or have I been wrong all these years? I’m not asking Google. :p

Bases is the plural of basis but I don't think it applies here. So it probably should be First-Name Basis as you suggested.

@Geezer-Weasalopes said in Management of a Novice Alchemist - Corrections Topic:

I'm insufficiently attached to this story to bother reporting these any longer, given the effort required to transcribe the text.

I’m getting tired of reporting missing quotation marks and missing spaces, because reporting so many gets in the way of reading.

Too much publishing going on for the editors to keep up?

V3 P4
(40%)
His words have more thorns when speaks to Noah.
--> when he speaks

Volume 2 - Part 3:

[47%] Canon and Char both knew that this spell as well >> remove that

V4 P10

(38%) "How did you get in here?" she sais.
--> she said.
(85%) ...if they didn't know where Allen's party wasfrom,...
--> Allen's party was from,...

V14 P14, 7%
"as he gazed... with a faint grin. "It's hard to bite back a grin..."'
Not an error, but personal preference against repetition of words in quick succession. Maybe change one to smile, or other alternate?

1.7:

Early Giors Dynasty

Should be Giolus.

V10P8
~24%

“Whoa! Lyle, did you see that?!” the seventh head excitedly from the Jewel. I ignored him entirely.

Missing a word about the seventh head 'speaking'; something like the seventh head excitedly->the seventh head exclaimed excitedly?

~35%

I could hear cheers from the Jewels.

Lyle only has one Jewel; Jewels->Jewel?

~59%

What sorts of attacks would they use, and what weaknesses did they share? Shannon had investigated monsters resembling Tressy to see what came up. Her research suggested that most large sea creatures attacked by pulling ships underwater.

I can see Shannon doing this but based on the context is this maybe meant to be Clara since it is discussing her using her art to help research aquatic monsters?; Shannon->Clara

~82%

The bridge was in danger, and Tressy was charging again. I was faced with a thread on two fronts and swiftly made my choice.

thread->threat?

V3P8
~15%

“Then why did you at least tell me what you were doing?!” she demanded.

did -> didn't?