@Libri-Liberorum

On the second point, the line was indeed translated correctly. The original JP is: "まぁ、生まれて十三年と聞けば短いと感じられるかもしれない。日本でいえば、小学生から中学生に上がるくらいの年齢だったか。"

The "くらい/about" part of the sentence is doing the heavy lifting here, haha. That, or the author is just going off unreliable memory for the ages.

Thanks for the due diligence!

V18P1
~42%

Chapter 1<

Just guessing that this is a typo and it's not meant to be chapter 'greater than 1'? (Though guess we'll see if there is a chapter 1 or chapter 2 later in the prepubs) Chapter 1< -> Chapter 1

3.2:

isn't it?" said Peridot. You don't spend

isn't it?" said Peridot. "You don't spend

V6P1
~35%

It was possible they’d been constructing using magic.

Sorry if it is okay as it is but wrong tense?; constructing->constructed

~82%

“Sorry,” Lulum responded apologetically. I should’ve told you sooner.”

Missing "?; I should’ve->"I should’ve

Probably should send this to support, too.

v5p8:

59% - An amused smile crept on the empire’s lips. -> Probably wrong word, given that Mikhail and his father are talking: An amused smile crept on the emperor’s lips. Perhaps also: crept onto [his] lips?

V5 P7, 0%
"and Mio had returned from their job quests as... a Warlock"

Probably not a point of correction, just me being curious. I'd always taken warlock to be "a man who practises witchcraft; a wizard or sorcerer" (first Googled definition returned). Now the term has likely changed over time (what with it being a class in D&D, and probably other sources). Just was curious if there were other alternatives that fit, or if that was how it was in the original.

Volume 3 - Part 12:

[80%] would have beena pipe dream >> should be been a

V11p7 67%:
At the sudden question, Nanami and I's minds were wiped blank.
This has come up before, using "Nanami and I's" instead of "Namami's and my". If the subject were singular, "I's" would still be wrong, as it would be "my mind".

v2 p5

~40%

It was true that Maximillion had long seen the fact that Lutz was an unlicensed smith who lived outside of the walls as a problem they would have to address. However, abiding by the Guild’s system, there could only be a select number of blacksmiths who were recognized as masters. Whether he were to compel the Guild to increase that number or ask a current master to step down in favor of Lutz, he could predict that there would be a great deal of pushback.

However, if they were to make him the personal enchanter of the Shander house, which worked outside of the Guild’s system, Lutz would still need to have produced considerable results that would convince anyone that he was worthy of the position. ...

Lutz isn't an enchanter, so should that be personal smith or personal bladesmith?

~55%

Putting that aside, there was something strange about what Clauida had said, saying that he might come...

=> Claudia

Arc 1 Volume 3: Willie's attire section replaced Sera's

11.13

Apparently the girls had apparently started sorting all of this out in preparation for our return

My instinct for this part is that every instance of “apparently” should be deleted, but this one especially.

10.8

“Perhaps a public beach would do some good in this sweltering country,” the Demon Lord.

“the Demon Lord mused.”

“My dream of a perfect nightcap... It’s falling apart... Salted uni, soy-soaked row, octopus dipped in wasabi...”

“roe”

@Poncho9761
For Ser Ildana, it's the first time, so of course there isn't a previous instance!

For "daemon," you're right. The term was coined by Caim for himself after fusioning with the Poison Queen, so it should be "demon lord" and not "daemon" here. But the author does use "daemon" in the JP text, so we decided to keep the mistake.

Thanks for the rest! I made the changes.

V4P11 ~12%
"...military might no longer hold any meaning-" -> "...military might no longer hold held any meaning-"

~31%
"..., but could actually could regrow lost limbs too." -> "..., but could actually could regrow lost limbs too."

V5P8 ~38%
"I guess two fellow pervers can get along." ->"I guess two fellow perverts can get along."

V10P8 ~89%
"...escaped through the window much in same the way she had entered." -> "...escaped through the window in much the same way she had entered."

Sent this to support, but I thought that I should also mention it here. I don’t buy the ebooks, so I don’t know if it’s already been corrected. Probably has been.

v2p9:

30% - Though I’d told Katsuragi-san that I needed to go to the store as welI, that wasn’t entirely true. -> Typo. The second “l” in “well” was a capital “I”.

V4P6, 35%: "After that, I made Lyaf Shields, Canard Buckles, and a golem core. I ended up making five Ryaf Shields"