V1 P6

78% "We were following upstream of the Gupi River, heading for the origin of the Renard River."

Is this a correct translation?

It makes sense that they are following the Gupi River, as that is the cause of the problems. However, we are told earlier that the Gupi River is a tributary flowing into the Renard River (V1 P4 37%). If you follow the Gupi River upstream, you will reach the source of the Gupi River, not the Renard River.

Technically, you could argue that the source of the Gupi River is a second origin point of the Renard River (due to the Gupi River being a tributary) but is that what the author was aiming for here?

v4 p13

~70%

“Murus Lapis,”, Number said without even looking at Ryo. A wall of stone appeared instantly, repelling all of his sixteen Icicle Lances. Not a single scratch on him...

Which number? Number 1 (probably) or Number 2?

@Khazidhea Hello! Series editor here. You're correct in that it sounds like Liluetta's actively doing something--I think it's a matter of "scuffed" having multiple definitions. Scuffed can refer to the state of being scratched or roughed up, and it sounds like this is the definition you have in mind (for example, "Her shoes were all scuffed up"). But it can also be the act of scraping your feet or shoes along a surface, which is how it's used in this week's part. Hope this makes sense!

Oh, and since this is my first forum post ever (!), thank you to everyone in this thread for your corrections so far! The last one or two might not have made it into the prepub, but they should all be in the final ebook for volume 1.

V9 P4, 38%
"a restaurant with an usually large but otherwise simplistic sign"
The way it's phrased, I'm thinking usually -> unusually would fit better

V11P6
~79% "I looked at Bazack, ... but shook his head. I didn't know why he meant by that." -> Should this be "I didn't know what he meant by that."?

V16 P5 (91% - last page)
But that ride didn't look like Alice
--> But that rider didn't look like Alice

19.5:

so he could use that sorcery

so he couldn't use that sorcery

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving."

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving.

V15 P9 19% "wore shoddy clothes that were [parched] in places" -> patched

V1 P8

61% "of the conversation or or their impending fate"

Duplication.

66% "in front of my brothers' door room"

Is this backward? Perhaps, "in front of my brothers' room's door". It could also be simplified to either "in front of my brothers' door" or "in front of my brothers' room".

@karasutengu said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

V2 P5 (92% - last page bottom)
I spent the next while reading, bumping along...
Something appears missing between these two words such as "week planning", "five days conversing", etc. in my opinion.
--or--
Remove them both and replace with: "entire time", "return trip", etc.
(In my opinion this current sentence needs some modification to make more sense to the reader.)

I think in this context "while" is taking the form of the idiom "while away the time." "Spent the next while" means using up time in a leisurely pursuit (in this case reading). It is a common turn of phrase in literature and doesn't need a specific unit of time.

See while away at Meriam Webster.

3.1

Leah—and Lyla, actually—had sent Blanc tells explaining their absences.

“messages”?
A lot of this vocabulary is outside my field.

“Suppose I’ve spent millenia wallowing in filth simply because I had no butler!”

“Suppose I’d spend millennia”
I don't remember this character, but this seems like the kind of sentence that should be future tense.
Also, spelling.

“Should you continue to grow in power and find that this one can longer keep pace,” the earl said. “Return him to me, and I shall see to his improvement.”

“can no longer”
Also, these two sentences should be one.

@Libri-Liberorum "cut through" as an idiom in this context would be "moving through the crowd, forcibly pushing people apart if needed, to make a path for yourself". However, it indeed doesn't make a lot of sense here because you wouldn't do that to a single person, but to a group. Perhaps she "pushed past" Bernhard?

Volume 1 - Part 8:

[45%] Would you like someone else >> should be something (unless the food is a someone)

Volume 7, part 14

"Zerbudia's soldiers were the best out there, but Fox had among many things a numerical advantage."

Should have commas around "among many things" so that it is

"Zerbudia's soldiers were the best out there, but Fox had, among many things, a numerical advantage.

These commas are more important than the one at the end of "best out there" so that comma should be removed to prevent comma crowding so that the final line should read:

"Zerbudia's soldiers were the best out there but Fox had, among many things, a numerical advantage.

Volume 6, Part 12, %50:

Then, using Bird A's Awakened ability, Return to Nest Homing Instinct, ...

Same error in the epub.

V4P6 68%:
Everyone applaudour resident nature expert!
applaud our

@Farts

Hi,

Thank you for taking the time to report this. Just so you are aware you posted in the volume discussion thread. Not the corrections thread. I have moved your post to the corrections thread. Just for future reference a link to the corrections thread for any series can be found in the opening post of a discussion topic.

V5 P5 19%

Alicia is supposedly low on aether but it still shows as 265/300.

It also says "[Status Resistance Lv. 1] NEW!" despite the fact that she already had [Status Resistance Lv. 1] back at the end of part 2.