v3P2p5:

75% - Lord Gerhad, however, did not say much […]. -> Typo/missing letter: Lord Gerhard, however, […].

V4 P6, 84%
"Much to my relief, Tudeo managed to nod in response—albeit barely—and I continued my overly familiar speel."
Speel -> spiel

V6 P9 (53% - 10th line down from top of page)

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Shouldn't this be:

"I might not be as capable as the others, but I know a lot about money."

4.5

“After selling everything that was left on the ship, I got them to quit and paid them their severance, thought it wasn’t all that much.”

“though”

V5P3 ~3%

The shipping containers they'd originally prepared for the amblypygids had been full up with owata pods, so the not-so-little guys were staying in the same rooms as the family during the voyage.

full → filled

@Khazidhea Yes, you're right, this should say "Rank F" instead. Thanks for catching this!

Volume 2 Part 7. "wrecked havoc" -> "wreaked havoc".

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/wreak-havoc

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/wreak havoc

v2p4:

99% - […] with Quinza’s group staring over. -> Typo: starting over. :)

Not sure this is the right topic, but there's an error in the epub release of V5.
In the Job Chart image the Hero job is repeated two times:

The chosen one destined to defeat the Demon Lord Creates dungeon

The latter is probably wrong

Volume 8 - Part 6:

[0%]

got sent to an inescapableprison?

Add space.

V4P8

... with the self-proclaimed Duke Raul because I'd killed the chancellor --- his father --- publicly announced his crimes, and declared that I would be seizing his holdings.

This is a list of three items: killed chancellor, announced his crimes, declared seizure. There should be a comma separating them, but the em-dashed insertion (--- his father ---) messes this up, making "killed the chancellor publicly announced his crimes" into a single item. Either second em-dash becomes a comma, or rearrange the order to make it work.

Less importantly, it is unclear whether the two "his" refer to the current or former Duke Raul. (Although for the second "his", the holdings are the same holdings, so it doesn't really matter.)

V7P1
~10%

With Operation Quiet Convo a total bust, I had no choice but to pivot to Operation Try to Keep Everyone Watching from Getting Crazy Ideas About Me

Very small, but for consistency and since everything is capitalized including the 'Me' (so small words are included), missing capital?; from->From

~10%

but she was currently with the prince, speaking of the future of the town with the clan chief.As for Safina, she’d left Kairomea atop Snow

I stopped to pat myself on the back for my excellent idea before declaring to Orthoaguina,“I’d like to learn about controlling or restraining incredible power.

~19%

when Orthoaguina had fallen, she jumped to his defense.Perhaps he realized as much and was grateful for it

Missing spaces?;
chief.As->chief. As
Orthoaguina,“I’d->Orthoaguina, “I’d
defense.Perhaps->defense. Perhaps

~19%

Sita’s descendants were the first to speak with Orthoaguina

Wrong word? Since Sita does not have descendants yet and it was the people that came before her, not after? descendants->ancestors

~76%

“Did the Argent Knight not have any allies?” Safina wondered. “As far as I know, I he didn’t, but...”

Extra word / letter? I know, I he didn’t->I know, he didn’t

~76%

Caught off guard and mind overloaded with so many different concerns, she was petrified and couldn’t suppress her loudly beating heart .

Extra space?; heart .->heart.

~86%

Of course, he’d instantly shot me a glance upon asking that, and all I could do was avert my gaze and flee from the situation...Point being, Orthoaguina copied the spirit tree’s method to step outside.

Since it's a capital assuming missing space?; situation...Point->situation... Point (or make P lowercase? P->p?)

V2 P13 (23% - 8th line down from top of page.)

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Vamillia was seen by both...

(Correct typo)

V11P5

If we're looking at getting ships, we either make them or we build them.

'Make' and 'build' are synonyms. Should one of these be 'buy'?

13.8

“Full glad am I to see you young ones with so much energy. Very good, very good.”

“Gladful” is still a word, even if it doesn't rate being recognized by the spell checker.

“Joyful” also works if you want to stick with popular words, although it's slightly less apt for this meaning.

V12P2

34% - made of wire rather than robe -> Should be rope

@Gaffary said in Goodbye, Overtime! - Corrections Topic:

v6p10:

40% - Lydia had learned that Mikhail was to summer in the Yulnova Duchy -> probably to spend the summer in or something like that

That one’s valid, but it might be more British than American english. I’ve encountered the phrase in the past, but I couldn’t tell you whether on TV or in print. Oxford English Dictionary says that “summer”, as a verb, means “spend the summer in a particular place.”

V6P1, around 16%:

She wanted to descend upon the Kingdom of Craydale Claydale and make them pay.

Wrong letter.