Volume 13 Part 2
15% Through regularly attacking and watching each other's backs, the two had established...
The preceding and following sentences are first person but this one reads third person. Suggest changing 'the two' to 'we':
Through regularly attacking and watching each other's backs, we had established...

v3 p6

~60%

We’d had about 40,000 villagers, but now our population sat well over 100,0000.

=> 100,000 (there's an extra zero).

v13p6 ~32%:

That said, because the merchant group didn’t want to draw attention to themselves, they were going in without armor——they couldn’t just act like merchants, they had to look the part too.

Double emdash.

V9 part 2

Around 67%-71%

Another ten billion case

"Would you like another ten billion krams?"

And again, it should be 1 billion

V1P4
"I'm Private Rodrey. You're as scrawny as they say." - If Rodrey's the one saying that second bit, why does he get angry afterward?

volume 4 Ch8 (52% in part 9)

0510: Alonson
The Eight and the Archangel seems to be all every kingdom’s NPCs

minor typo it should say the "Eighth"

33.3:

Did we really look that way? Yumi asked.

Did we really look that way?" Yumi asked.

V3 P5, 34%
"Back then, the True Ancestor treated me like some sort of tresspasser, and it was horrible"
Tresspasser -> trespasser

V4 P7 (30% - end of 11th line up from bottom of page)

"The wilder of the blade that gave you that."

Change wilder to wielder.

(A wielder is a person who holds, handles, or uses a tool, weapon, or instrument, such as a "sword-wielder".)

Thank you for the corrections to vol 7 posted thus far.

I read the phrase "The first to spend a penny on this battle were my adversaries" with considerable amusement. To spend a penny means to urinate.

v1 p4

~90%

It was hard to tell him that I’d suffered at his daughters hands and tried to get revenge, then got beaten down, so I was going to tell him that she’d seen me passing and asked me to bring a message, but—

=> daughter's (missing apostrophe).

Volume 7 part 4 second page :
Is Lunoa counted in the adventurers group ? The story says they're 5, but if we count the one near the coach, the 2 in the carriage and the 3 surrounding it, they should be 6.
If it was already like that in the Japanese version, no problem (I don't speak Japanese).

SSC1 P5 0%

However, Dora had been different. At her core, she was indifferent to matters of influence and high society. Or rather, she simply had something she prized more - her collection of ghost stories. Dore Greilich was a horror fanatic.

Every other time she's mentioned, the horror fanatic is Dora, not Dore.

50% onwards:
The Head Chef and the Vegetable Cake doesn't appear to have any scene breaks. Going by the previously published version, there should be breaks before the lines:

Now, let us spin the dial and turn over the hourglass, so that time may flow anew. Let us tell the story of a great man. From that day forward, Princess Mia never again left her meals unfinished. In fact, she didn’t just eat them. She savored them. “Her Highness...seems to be fatigued.” Some time later, after Mia returned to Saint-Noel Academy, Musta received a letter. Let us hasten the clock again. As a continental superpower, the Tearmoon Empire was known for its rich food culture. Equally famous was the widely-retold fact that the Great Sage of the Empire, Mia Luna Tearmoon, loved them dearly as well.

V1 P4 89%:

if worse comes to worse

Should be "if worse comes to worst" https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/if (the) worse comes to (the) worst
(or use "worst " twice: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/if (the) worst comes to (the) worst)

95%:

one in the same

This is an eggcorn. It's "one and the same."

@Khazidhea said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

65%
"She had took a reprieve deeper in the fortress to replenish her magic using magic stones, and has now returned."
Took -> taken. And I think also 'has' to 'had' (but I'm less sure on that)

Got this as well.

V4P7 30%:

"Master, what would you like me to do next?"

Until this point, Rope was speaking with square brackets and Akira was speaking without them, but at this point that gets reversed. Akira's next line has the square brackets.

V5 P1 (% -

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Replace "spend" with "spent". It sounds better and lines up better with the two sentences following it, which are both in past tense.