V2 P3 around 64% - "cast away all the crime and sweat"

Cleansing magic alone won't wash away all of Secret Grandma's crimes, so "grime" makes more sense.

V7 P1, 20%
"but because Akira the first approach would mean he couldn't use the artificial hands while waiting"
84%
"your rival in love kicked the bucket, so on the whole, I'd say things are looking up and you don't need to put"
I'm thinking that might be put -> pout

V4P5

While Leonard was in the capital, his little brother Arven Stewart, was filling in as the head of house.

There should be a comma right before "Arven Stewart", or no comma after it.

While Leonard was in the capital, his little brother, Arven Stewart, was filling in as the head of house.

(The principle description is "little brother", and "Arven Stewart" is a parenthetical clarification of this.)

While Leonard was in the capital, his little brother Arven Stewart was filling in as the head of house.

(The principle description is "Arven Stewart", and "little brother" is additional description of him.)

V3.1 p6

~2%

“I’m sure you are already aware that within the capital, there exist two potential future rulers: Prince Wilhelmina is one, Lord Reinald is the other.”

=> Princess

~100%

“Hugo & Co. were also on good terms with the Bachem family,” added Elena, “who would have moved in to help had they known something was coming, and our chief of staff would be beside himself. How about asking him directly?” (Elena)
“Good call. I’ll drop by Moritz’s home.” (Karen)
“You can do that? Just stop by?” I asked. (Can't be Karen, so Elena or Haring must have spoken this sentence)
“We’re on good terms, actually. He’ll make time.” (Karen)

I think the penultimate line of dialog may be misattributed. If the fourth-to-last is spoken by Elena then the third-to-last must be spoken by Karen, then the penultimate must have been said by either Elena or Haring.

v4p9 ~77%

I'm pretty done after running just ten or fifteen kilometers every day, so Iprobably had a long way to go.

Iprobably -> I probably

@faye-d Ah, ok. Thanks for the explanation.

Side Stories 1 Chapter 2: Ashes to Asdhes: Intro

I wrote it that way for the webcomic version

I wrote it that way for the webnovel version

Supported by the following paragraph speaking of it being the fast and loose world of webnovels.

v3p10 ~63%:

Even his marriage, the birth of his child, and the methods he applied to said child's education were dictated for him—ll for the sake of the great emperor.

ll -> all

V5 P4, 50%
"It's afternoon already?!" To think that I slept so late...
50% "Good afternoon." Anne Marie...
60% “Good morning,” I greeted them.
“Sharon! Morning,” L’lyeh said around her mouthful.
“Good morning, Miss Charlotte. I’ll have your lunch prepared immediately.”

Mornings -> afternoons (unless I missed something in that sequence of events)

V2P6 35%
Prince Albert -> President Albert

Vol.8 pt.11
Generally, when father is a priest's title it is capitalized. It's used lots of times uncapitalized so I won't give a specific reference.

Around 6% this sentence: The only one not bracing themselves was I. occurs. That "l" should be a "me".

6.10:

"Now then," I said. It's not certain that Misty

"Now then," I said. "It's not certain that Misty

the head clerk offered. There are only about ten

the head clerk offered. "There are only about ten

Besides, I didn't want to think the way the adoring looks they gave Misty were a lie.

Besides, I didn't want to think the adoring looks they gave Misty were a lie.
Besides, I didn't want to think the way they looked upon Misty was a lie.

Given how much it needs to be altered to preserve "the way" I'm thinking it best to go with the first option; it conveys their sentiments better as well.

V5P5 ~48%
"A letter seeking an meeting had been..." -> "A letter seeking an a meeting had been..."

V11P4
~31%

Then. there was a drawn out silence.

Wrong punctation?; Then. there->Then, there

Who'd invite such a suspicious visitor at night like this?

Missing word?; Who'd invite such->Who'd invite in such

~38%

I turned around left, the couple thanking me profusely with tears streaming down their faces, their kid sitting up in bed looking dumbfounded.

Missing word?; I turned around left->I turned around and left

~69%

As the guild master tried to regain composure and maintain an air of authority,Loreia, the receptionist, entered with a young girl who barely seemed to be an adult.

Missing space?; authority,Loreia,->authority, Loreia,

@xdbx Not to mention, the Japanese text seems to mention self-driving cars, but does not seem to suggest that an autonomous vehicle was actually responsible for the accident. It mostly just seems to say that our collision prevention technology as a whole has not eliminated traffic accidents.

V15 P9 44%

"Stop, stop! Lakan gave me enough trouble for banishing his uncle."
"He won't give you any trouble when those doctors mess up, because he won't be in this world anymore."
"I told you, stop assuming I'm going to die,"' Yoh said, but he got out a writing set.

would make more sense if it was "you (the Emperor) won't be in this world anymore" as she's talking about the Emperor dying.

V2P9
~0%

The realization he was doing that, together with the memory of all the times she had fallen on their way here for him to catch her, made her want to laugh.

Potentially missing word? Sorry if it is okay as it is, but to me when I first read it, it seemed that Misha was intentionally falling so that Kite would catch her (through the 'for him to catch her'); here for->here, only for

v4p3 ~7%

"We made it to the stairs so easily. Didn't run into many monsters either. Pretty lucky, eh?" Fred said to me while we were camping out near the stairs to the second floor.

Should be the seventh floor, not the second. Or "next" floor.