volume 5 part 4
desktop viewing left to right 80%

I thought only male beetles had those, Lean thought, it's not like insect monsters have a defined sex in the first place. The same must go for traits inherited through those monsters.

Lean -> Leah
Minor typo

desktop viewing left to right 91%

The quality of the item? Choice. Not a quality you often saw in video games, but at VR farmer's markets?

Choice -> Depends
I don't know the kanji but to me it felt more natural there to be Depends

V10, P4, aound 86%:

Jay eyes eyed Chris appraisingly for a moment, then sighed.

Wrong letter.

V10, P5, around 35%:

Wait. Expending Expanding the field around Rosa?

Wrong letter.

Volume 2 Part 8
48% your worthless little beast -> you worthless little beast

V2P5 95% she->he: She couldn't see eye to eye with him, nor could she ever feel the way he did.

Volume 3 Part 6
06% My eyes widened IN surprise -> My eyes widened in surprise
56% mana repletion disorder -> mana depletion disorder
70% Lenrautian -> Lenarutian
84% It was no surprise given the eloquence, fighting skills, and magic abilities I'd shown off during my official face-toface with Farah.

Farah? Weren't all of those abilities shown off in his interaction with the prince, Rhesis?

Vllume 12 Part 11
55% dug through her magic back -> magic bag
94% do not I believe -> I do not believe

V13 P3 (60% - 5th line down from top of page)

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for better syntax remove the high-lighted word ("her").
e.g. 'Dahlia had decided to entrust everything to Lucia, her friend and couturier,'

v5 p1

~38%

“Yeah, it’s a tall tree that grows near the sea. The fibers you can make from it are really stiff and hard, so it’s good for stuff like cleaning pots. Have you never seen it before?” “No, I haven’t. Back in the forest, we let churus fruit go rotten, then took the fibers from that. It wasn’t nearly as hard as the yaya bark, though.”

Missing paragraph break between before?” “No

There seems to be content missing immediately following the image again here.

Chichi and Kano were just starting to bicker before the image and then suddenly Kano is stuffing 3 cookies in her face in what appears to be an attempt at one upsmanship to an event that is missing

4.5:

Hhe'd thought this was a great plan.

He'd thought this was a great plan.

@Gamen said in Zero Damage Sword Saint - Corrections:

@Geezer-Weasalopes

After the day’s classes, my teacher informed me that someone from the Dungeon Union had asked to see me.“
A summons from the 100th Level of Babel?”

With the assist from Gamen [thanks!]

After the day’s classes, my teacher informed me that someone from the Dungeon Union had asked to see me.
“A summons from the 100th Level of Babel?”

As you can see, shifting the " from the end of one line to the beginning of the next makes much more sense.

Very end of 10.6 Benimori-san is described as a "youkai", was that supposed to be "kouhai"?

Volume 11 part 1 96%

If Krai had achieved something Yggdra that was impossible to overlook,...

A word is missing before Yggdra, in is probably the best but for could also work.

V17 p5

"You imbecil"

It's "imbecile."

Volume 21. Part 2. 95%

"Don't go stinkin' your neck in stupid shit while I ain't watchin', got it?" > Don't go stickin' your neck in stupid shit while I ain't watchin', got it?"

V17P6

"My apologies, Your Highness. It appears I have made quite an unreasonable demand. ..."

I struggled to figure out who was speaking here. It feels Ludwigian, but please don't yank me out of the flow of the story to try to puzzle this out.

Shipping boats pass through her all the time

her -> here

V1P10
There was a fixed regiment for infantrymen training - fixed regimen

V2P3
...will likely be seceded as part... - I don't think secede is the right word here. If the peace settlement will involve conceding territory outside the southern cities to Sabat, it should probably be "annexed"

v5p10 Afterword - "I think I managed to pack in quite a bit of web-exclusive content this time around" and "It looks like there are going to be more and more web-exclusive stories moving forward" - is it actually "web-exclusive", as in exclusive to the web novel? How can it be web-exclusive when it's included in the light novel?