v6 p3

~50%

“He’s illiterate and old, as is every custodian that has ever been employed to manage the royal archive. Frankly, I find it a questionable practice, but an illiterate custodian cannot disseminate the contents of the archive to the outside world. And an old custodian is more or less a guarantee they can’t learn how to read even if they wanted to. That they would go so far speaks volumes about the secrets being kept here.”

Something awkward about the grammar here -- an old custodian isn't a guarantee, rather employing an old custodian is a guarantee. And the the singular "old custodian" clashes with the with the plural "they can't" IMO. Maybe that was intended to be a gender-neutral "they", but as an alternative:

And an old custodian is more or less guaranteed to be unable to learn to read even given the desire to do so.

v6p5 ~54%

While getting mobbled by all these choco lovers, […]

I am not sure if mobbled really makes sense here after looking the word up, but being mobbed (as in attacked by a mob, not the other meaning) seems fitting.

v5p8 ~87%

[…] closely with the Treasure Guild to produce the Posiedon, and Milld […[

Should be Poseidon.

v4p5 ~0%

[…] I wasn't certain my would actually look at the memo I sent him.

Should be he.

V5 P9 (20% - 6th line up from bottom of page)

It's a good thing that you Owain aren't interested in power of status.
Need an "or" or "and" between "you Owain"
e.g.:

...good thing that you or Owain aren't interested...
-or-
...good thing that you and Owain aren't interested...

Vol 14 part 5

~83%: shoulda figured you’d be too dim-witted to refuse my generous offer,” said Santor

refuse should probably be accept

shoulda figured you’d be too dim-witted to accept my generous offer,” said Santor

Volume 14 Part 9
75% something that caught my idea -> something that caught my eye
Although, I like xdbx' suggestion on this too.

96% the deciding factor lied ->the deciding factor lay

V11 final - would avail should be wouldn’t, out duties should be out their duties

V2P2
~44%

“If any of the facilities in this town are worse than that our capital’s, I’ll be sure to stick it to you!” he’d said.

Missing word? than that our capital’s->than that of our capital’s (or extra word ->`than our capital's)

Volume 7 - Part 2:

[99%] see them fruition. >> see them to fruition.

V1p7 ~42%

“The pair's lips parted, andInami's hands followed the outline of Aoi's body, caressing him all over.”

Missing space

10.1

we’d written, just to see gauge the outside world’s reactions.

Volume 3 Part 8
56% every night in the royal order -> every knight in the royal order
76% kept in tough -> kept in touch - pcj got this one
88% mother had become further with father -> mother had become distant with father - although xbdx could be right with furious too

V3P2 ~60%

Return turned his back to her to go to his room.

Should probably be Ren.

This, combined with the outfits the party guests wore, the sight was absolutely resplendent no matter where one looked.

The sentence is wrong. It would be possible to use Thus in place of This, but I doubt that was the intention. So maybe

This combined with the outfits the party guests wore for a sight that was absolutely [...]

without the commas and with the small change in the middle.

~83%

Their daughters understood this, stepped away from their fathers' quiet battle.

Feels like something is wrong or missing. I'd say stepping instead of stepped would suffice, or an and connecting the halves.

@Valanduin said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

On top of that, at the moment Erhardt was most definitely confident that his was Jurgens, not me.

His what?

His enemy, likely.

I have noticed that in the most recent part the name of the capital changed from Crystal Palace to Silver Palace.

V6P5 90%:

hit the breaks

breaks -> brakes

@Valanduin Just double-checked it and nope, no error. If it helps, though, the spirit monster rank system seems to be something the Heavenly Realmers created to generalize how strong the different types of spirit monsters are, so this is saying that Minor Deity-rank spirit monsters are about as strong as literal Minor Deities.