V8.1 P15 0% "Cash in on the debt Akira [owned] him now" -> owed
37% "They're probably both thinking about ways they can get you in [your] debt." -> their

v4p4 ~56%:

As he opened the window and stepped out onto the terrace, Kyne swooped down from above. Deenoark offered an arm for the bird to land, then brought him over to the wooden perch beside his desk, something he had built once Misha began sending letters back from Redford.

brought him over -> brought her over. Someone on the Discord caught this subtle one, apparently Kyne is a she-bird, as can be seen when she "used her beak to push the letter toward him,". Props to Durkan.

V3 P3 (47% - 11th line up from bottom of page)

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"go down without a fight"

v8p10
42% he was likely to be locked -> locked up?
76% That maybe I’ve been living my life having without something I should’ve always had. -> extra word?

V6 P1, 10%
"Ordinarily, a single egg (which an average adult would only just be able to hold with both hands) would produce approximately one hundred hell locusts, give or take a few either way. During a plague, that number would surge from one hundred to one million, if not higher."
With the numbers involved, I thought I'd check: is it definitely talking about how many come from each egg, rather than from a clutch of eggs? The latter seems much more likely, but you never know in a fantasy world.

v4p2p2 ~58%

“I’ll get back to the topic of Martin momentarily”

Martina*

v3P7 40%

"For some reason, Shenley had gone pale. He was holding her face and looked like she was about to let loose a wail like Edvard Munch’s painting The Scream." -> she

V1P7

70%: It was an investment, and investments could be recuperated. -> That should be recouped, no?

V1 P2, 35%
"Combined with the uniformly redbrick roofs"
Probably no error here, just my ignorance on the subject and unfamiliarity with the term as applied to roofs. Could it be red (or red brick) tiled roofs?

V13 P5, 21%
"As tiger beastgirls, Mary and Meta had the same problem, so there was one among us who could possibly take note"
Meta -> Metea

Also I don't think the latter half quite connects well. Perhaps 'but there was one' or 'so there was [only] one' might work slightly better?

55%
"Metea seems a little weary about parting with part of her bounty"
Weary -> wary

83%
"A normal stalk of corn usually takes a week to germinate after it’s planted, and should only grow up to somewhere between ten to twenty centimetres,” Natsuki replied. “But this one stands at over one hundred and fifty centimetres for some reason.”
If focussing on how quickly the corn has grown, an addition might help: "and should only grow up to somewhere between ten to twenty centimetres [since then/in these past weeks]"

@xdbx said in In Another World with Household Spells - Corrections Topic:

=> I Thank

Or even just,
=> Thank you

V1 P8 45%: In her frenzy, Aide's daughter <- this should be 'sister'

V1 P6 26%: "You made us Weapons." Shouldn't it be "You made me a Weapon."?

V2 P9 starting at 50%:
One of the jobs is labeled 'spy' although it was previously called 'scout'. And I think 'scout' is way more fitting.

v9p5 ~87%:

Were they shared carriages limited to the city streets?

they -> the, or perhaps just cut the shared carriages?

V3P2

86%: "...the noblewoman and her retinue fled with their tales between their legs" -> tails

@karasutengu it's implied. They're thugs, and in less posh circles it's common to leave the action implied instead of using correct English, especially when he already suggested it in the first half of the sentence.

v1p7 ~5%:

It could be a storm before we know it, so we're closeing up early."

closeing -> closing.