v3P2p8:

60% - […] Wilhelmina had been a tight spot […] -> Is this a Britishism that’s leaked through, or some other regional American dialect? I would have expected an “in” in there: “Wilhelmina had been in a tight spot”.

I’m still recovering from reading the part up to this point, and the use of “snub out” rather than “stub out” earlier (finding that it’s valid, although not a usage of snub that I’ve come across recently. More British?). I’m still slightly dreading reading the rest of the part. ^^;

<sigh> You just won’t let me finish! :p

77% - There was no time for umming and ahhing. -> That’s the British version of “hemming and hawing”, IIRC. I don’t particularly care which is used. Great! Now I see a reference to “humming and harring” in my Googling research! I don’t need more complications!

v9p4:

87% - I shall thoroughly appriase your alcohol collection […] -> Typo’d appraise? I shall thoroughly appraise your alcohol collection […]

V4, P9, around 12%

Goatee, probably eager to finally get away from me, sidestepped the lookout and opened the door — which I when I struck.

That phrase makes no sense to me. I think it should be "which I then struck" or something along those lines.

@b-scot-morgan said in EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic:

V4P4
[44%] it looked [less] like a newt or salamander and more like ➡ add less between looked and like.

[71%] The count gently removed her fist from his head ➡ his fist from her head, since clearly Blanc is the one who got bonked on the noggin here, not the count

for PC viewing it seems the 71% is at 69%

v5p6 ~38%:

"You've got nothing to worry about, Emma. I'm so stupid that I don't know who my little sister is."

I'm so stupid -> I'm not so stupid. :P

V3P1 79%:

chaos the town of Elegari had just become the latest victim of

This phrase doesn't flow well. Possible alternatives: "chaos whose latest victim was the town of Elegari" or "chaos which had just claimed the town of Elegari as its latest victim"

V16 P2 (24% - 4th line down from top of page)

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I believe this should be "heed" instead of head.

V6P10
~13%

Without waiting for them to respond, I turned back to the volcano, blazing with an internal fire all my own.

Missing word?; blazing with an internal fire all my own->blazing with an internal fire all of my own

~53%

“I appreciate that, but...” I wasn’t sure what to see. “How did you guys find out?”

Wrong word?; see->say

~67%

“You no doubt have people important to you back home. Asking you to side with demonking and oppose humanity as the Demon Lord was unfair,” Queen Prusche added.

Wrong word?; demonking->demonkind

~80%

I hadn’t changed even after living more than a century and reincarnated.

Missing word?; and reincarnated->and being reincarnated

~80%

Perhaps there was a bath where I could’ve shared their ideals and lived as the Demon Lord.

Uhh, not sure if this is a saying I don't know about (or maybe a reference to chatting in an onsen or something like might happen in other LNs) but maybe wrong word?; bath->path

V3 P1 (or maybe V2 P12):

The full name of the character Captain Dread is spelled inconsistently between volumes. In V3 P1, ~30%, it's spelled thusly:

Captain Dread’s sacred beast name was Dragolena. His magic power included the earth attribute. Because of that, he sometimes guided Dia on how to use her power, and Dia had grown quite attached to the captain.

But back in in V2 P12 it was:

“Casquette Bel Tsukina Lavi. Drogolena Lavi. Lend your strength to the blessing I bestow.” Since he’d been contracted to me since my time as a princess, Cas had a particularly long name.

I'd suggest making it consistent.

~40%

Moonshadow was the pseudonymI used for my designer activities, to conceal the fact that I was Lady Robur.

pseudonym I

~60%

My dependable daughter... By the time I’d reached my thisw lifetime, she would be a grandmother blessed with grandchildren.

this

v7p4:

86% - […], so she hastily stepped awayOur battle reached a deadlock […] -> Missing the period and space between sentences: […], so she hastily stepped away. Our battle reached a deadlock […]

V4 P11

41% "We needed to shatter the enemy's morale because they could finish regrouping."

The key point here appears to be about timing. Rather than shattering them because they can regroup, a better fit may be to shatter them before they regroup.

"We needed to shatter the enemy's morale before they could finish regrouping."

@xdbx said in From Villainess to Healer - Corrections Topic:

v6 p6

Lots of instances of missing spaces around italics (text inside <em></em> tags).

It’s happening so regularly that I’m about to give up reporting them. It’s almost like it’s intended… <sigh>

V9, P3, around 27%

Now that he’s confident he can get by,he by, he can think about other people.

Missing space.

v12p5:

51% - […] approached the dead mind viper. -> Typo: bind viper (at least at 23%, 26% and 55% it is)

V1P11 23%:

I pat my half-brother's shoulder

pat -> patted

v8 p1

I happened to check the preview for the Japanese V8 on amazon japan.
In their "第一章 本戦の前に" (Chapter 1: Before the Matches) chapter, there's an illustration of Neal Liston sitting at a desk and talking with another image of him flying a Wingroad shown in the background.

This image is missing from your Chapter 1.

V1 P9

42% "and saw Colt, Ayle, Liz, and Belle... and Shenley... Dean was here... Felter Cayan and Rox were in attendance... That made seven students total,"

Is Foar bad at arithmetic or is this a mistranslation? Eight students are named but he counts seven.

V11p7, 5%

Griswad Griswald continued. “With that added benefit of being a countermeasure…