2.1
Lots of formatting issues here. The first words of dialogue tags should not be capitalized unless it's a name. The last volume did this correctly. Did the editor change?
For example:
“Forgive me...” The governor said with a sigh. ---> “Forgive me...” the governor said with a sigh.
The centurion shook his head in response, “I don’t know, sir." ---> The centurion shook his head in response. “I don’t know, sir."
Shaking one's head seems unrelated to speaking, so it should stop with a period. If you want to use a comma, you'd add on "and said" or something similar.
The editor should read the previous volume and make sure to align the formatting for consistency.