V14 P13, 73%
“I believe you acted disrespectful toward His Highness, Lunalinde-sama,” said Jude.
“Disrespectful? I simply wanted to provide some basic advice as the fiancée of—”
Disrespectful -> disrespectfully

88%
"...but Lunalinde-sama is pretty much guaranteed to become the next Duke Guardwell."
It's possible that this world has gender-neutral terms for peerage, otherwise Duke -> Duchess

v2p5:

59% - “Martina, Nadia, glad I found you two. Sounds like you were just looking for me.”. -> (Prior lines: “As soon as Nadia gets here, [….].” and […], the door to the hall opened and Nadia stepped in.) I think that Nadia is the one speaking the line, and I presume that she hasn’t cloned herself. Since Martina’s working with Sylvan on the carriage design, I presume that the “Nadia” is supposed to be: “Martina, Sylvan, glad I found you two.”

v5P2p8:

69% - HIs Highness […] -> Extra capitalization: His

V1P9
~40%

• Epilogue: The Channel Gets Reincarnated!

Do not know how it is in the Japanese, but maybe missing as chapter title? (At the moment it is only bold in text and prologue is a chapter title)

V8 P9 (6% - 16th line down from top of page)

...but at any rate, she was carried herself pretty seriously for once.

Remove superfluous "was" from sentence.
e.g.:

...,she carried herself pretty seriously for once.

Volume 2 Part 7 79%

"We're not children!" Keynerich and I shouted in unison. We were both sixteen years old! And under one hundred fifty centimeters tall!

Is under correct? I know they are short but that statement is contrary to the point they are trying to make.

v13p9 ~100%

Does an angel's rank change based on the number of stones offered.

Should likely be offered? with a question mark.

V6P2 ~74%

Lofus's forceful words silence Alba at once.

Should likely be silenced.

@xdbx said in The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic:

What is Levinstrike?

Levin is an old-fashioned word for lightning, e.g. levin bolt for lightning bolt. So it isn't wrong.

See: https://www.dictionary.com/browse/levin

Volume 10 Part 6
35% we were obliged demand payment -> we were obliged to demand payment
67% With that, Bishop Damian took Father Conner with him to help the other members of the expedition charge everything into the carriages

while charge is technically a synonym for load or pack, it is rarely used that way.

80% treasure in the Cused Mountain -> treasure in the Cursed Mountain

V1P11 ~0%

[...] glowing in the moonlight With a small altar at its center [...]

With the way the sentence is currently written, with should be lower case.

[...] brought about various reactions from the other Guild members But once they'd shared a drink [...]

Should probably be members, but or members. But

V3 P7, 28%
"On his way out, he realised he hadn’t seen Licia yet today. He didn’t want to wake her, but if [she] was already up, he wanted to at least greet her."

@b-scot-morgan said in Fearsome Witch - Corrections Topic:

This isn't really correction, but more of a question:
In Volume 6, at 17% of part 1, Aoi says, "the temporal beings known as spirits."
Would it be better to use the word "ephemeral" instead of "temporal" in this context?

I believe this is a correction, Mr. Morgan. You are quite correct with the word choice in context.

Paraphrasing the context: From the discussion between Aoi and Langus the Elf, it looks to me like Aoi's initial idea of a spirit being a short lived copy of the caster would indeed be described as ephemeral. Several paragraphs later, Langus mentions that this is not the Elven understanding of spirits and that a befriended spirit can watch over a caster even when the caster is not conscious. So, from Langus' perspective, spirits would be temporal or at least something other than ephemeral. The discussion ends with Aoi accepting that her concept of spirits was incorrect and she will have to redo her research.

A2V1P8 ~33%

"The imperial army[...]" Amon murmured.
"It's a little frightening..." Amon admitted.
"We'd die if they ataccked [...]" Nils said fearfully.
"Wow [...]" Ryo cheered.
This was the usual state of these four.

I feel inclined to believe that one of the two Amons should be Eto instead.

~37%

"Love live King Abel!"

Shouldn't this be long?

V4P8 ~67%

"Huh? Things were moving [...]

Misses the closing quotation marks after the question mark.

v2 p5

~55%

“It’s something I don’t consome enough of... The recent cultural transformations have made our lives far easier, but food from across the sea isn’t to my tastes.”

consume

v6 p7

“It is the same skill by which the human nobles use to control their knights, as I’m sure you’re familiar. Some monsters possess it as well.”

That clause doesn't scan. Maybe instead:

It is the same skill as that with which the human nobles control their knights, The same skill is used by the human nobles to control their knights,

V9.1P6
"Sorry to say it, but yeah." - Since this is Haruka speaking, presumably should be in italic like the others.