V4 P10 (38% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe "as" is missing and should be added:
...it took me half as long as them...

Note: "as long as" is a phrase of "long"

during the whole time that.
"they have been there as long as anyone can remember" provided that.
"as long as you fed him, he would be cooperative" - Oxford/Cambriage Dictionaries

v7p10:

[…] it sounded like these crazy things happened on the daily for them. -> I’m not familiar with this specific phrase, although its meaning is obvious. From which variant of english does it come? I would have used “on a daily basis” in this instance, but if the translation team is happy with it, I’m good. :)

V3 P6, 4%
"If you mother tries to harm her, she'll get their comeuppance"
Their -> her

7%
"to say he had no affection for his own children would be untruet
untruet -> untrue

33%
"the coachman said, a surprisingly casually..."
Delete the 'a'

30% "Even if she was the retired matriarch of the household... it seemed odd she had no guards"
33% "The guard groaned in pain... then he turned on his heel and fled, abandoning my aunt"
Where'd this guard come from? None was introduced, as far as I can tell. At first I thought it might be talking about the coachman, but he sticks around (doesn't flee).

V4, P4, around 40%:

Particularly that mikagami no jutsu.Mikagami... jutsu. Mikagami... Was that “water mirror”?

Missing space.

V15P5

[37%] some of the information fee, though.I even got down on my knees < Missing spaces between the sentences

Volume 1 - Part 9:

[62%]

Also, I've heard that he formed some of these those connections because he's trying to find someone.

It's probably just one of these words. those sounds best tho.

@HarmlessDave It has indeed always been described that way, going back to about volume 4 from what I see. If it helps explain why, the JP term used is 魔界, which is quite literally "demon world."

Volume 2 - Part 6:

[64%]

Yeah, he must have a high-level mage working for him!Still, it would've taken a ton of mana.

Add space between sentences.

[77%]

That could only mean one thing: the moan definitely hadn't been there before.

moan > moat

Volume 16, part 7

“letting out a ferocious war as he performed his killer downward slash.”
“war” should be “roar”
16%

“Abel chuckled. “I really can’t win against you. Of course, I didn’t think having that shield would make blocking easy, but you really are in for a world of shame if you fail to properly naturalize the force. He turned towards Mia. “Hey, Mia. What are you doing here?”

This paragraph doesn’t seem right at all —I am guessing that “naturalize”
should be “neutralize” at the minimum—and possibly the speaker should switch after the first sentence and have Sion (not Abel) say
“Of course, I didn’t think having that shield would make blocking easy, but you really are in for a world of shame if you fail to properly neutralize the force.”

It makes more sense that way.

17%

@Poncho9761 said in The Frontier Lord Begins with Zero Subjects - Corrections Topic:

V12P4 ~0%
"It's been a day since the mother baar had..." -> "It's It'd been a day since the mother baar had..."

"...to the fact his wife chewed him out but good the day before." -> "...to the fact his wife had chewed him out but good the day before."
There are multiple ways I believe to fix the 2nd issue I'm pointing out, but this was the one based on the sentence and my preferences.

"chewed him out but good" is a form of idiomatic English, and Dias very much is an idiomatic kinda guy.
It really fit the kind of person Dias is, at least from my perspective.

V3P4 ~14%
"The room emptied as one after another their names were called..." -> "The room emptied as, one after another, their names were called..."

V3P5 ~0%
"...you can hardly have operas with orchestras." -> "...you can hardly have operas with without orchestras."
~37%
"I was a complete stranger to our selection." -> "I was a complete stranger to our selections."
~52%
"While it might not qualify a race, we could..." -> "While it might not qualify as a race, we could..."
~74%
"This was the sort of the pressure he exerted on the monsters in Mystic Forest..." -> "This was the sort of the pressure he exerted on the monsters in the Mystic Forest..."
2nd struck-through 'the' could be kept but I wouldn't personally but that's me.

V6P11
~77%

“I’m tired of sleeping outside.

Missing ending "?; outside.->outside."

v9p9 ~30%:

WIth a guild so big, there was probably a lot of trouble that needed responding to, she figured.

WIth -> With.

@Geezer-Weasalopes said in Scooped Up by an S-Rank Adventurer! - Corrections Topic:

@b-scot-morgan said in Scooped Up by an S-Rank Adventurer! - Corrections Topic:

Also, wouldn't that be "tolls" rather than "toll's"?

Not in this case. Toll is a man's name, and the sentence refers to Toll's expression.

Also

v11.1 p15 ~35%

After the time I’d sent the Craving Blade off with my space-time magic, only for it to return and burn me, I realized that I would need to deal with the lingering heat. I had used it to my advantage this time and completely incinerated the enemy.

I don't remember the Craving Blade ever burning him after being transported elsewhere, back in volume 3 after he sent it off it later just reappeared by his bedside in volume 4.1, with no heat or burning involved.

Checking the source

過去に渇望の剣を空間遷移にて吹き飛ばしたが帰ってこられた反省より、熱で念入りに焼いた後に余熱の処理をかねて放逐する術式は正しく敵を消し飛ばした。

which is something vaguely to the effect of "having learned from the time when I sent the Craving Blade away with space-bending only for it to return, the spell now completely incinerates the enemy and then banishes it to deal with the residual heat, obliterating it entirely."

which would be more consistent with the events of those volumes.

It's also more consistent with what he describes himself as doing here, where the space bending is a way to dump both the enemy and the lingering heat, not the source of heat (that was the fusion reaction).

Later text in the story makes direct references to Uranus and Medusa when describing Ragna's weapon, making it clear that the author intended the katakana name ハルパー to be the harpe of Greek legend, so how will that be handled at that point in the story if the name has been instead transliterated as "Halper" now?

V5 P6, 41%
"Sark was also talking to Hikari about all kinds of things, but she didn’t seem l particularly responsive."
Erroneous 'I' to remove

v2p4 ~46%: inasmuch -> in as much