@Crey said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

@Ingraman Yes, Remi has been calling him Nao-chan since the first day they met.

I haven’t reread the earlier books, and I only own the first three to run a search on (huh… Advastlis isn’t named in the first or third books, and only by Diola in her book two side story? I was (mis)remembering that he’d introduced himself to the dead kids, but I guess that it was just “Evil God” at that point.). Maybe the next time that they’re on sale…

V8 P4 (12% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

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Add missing word "flags" in high-lighted area.

--> The two squires bearing flags - one bearing a red flag,...

V14, P7, around 95%

“Natrurally Naturally, we realize that this alone is not sufficient,”

Extra letter.

V2P3, 94%: “That was [why] the enemy would never leave Mashdale alone”

v12p14:

46% - Baronness Rossetti […] baronness -> Extra letter: Baroness, unless you’re perhaps going for another language’s version of the word, I guess. My visitation with The Great Google showed me a lot of typos… 95% - […] perhaps she could get away with eating all these cookies if trained afterwards. -> Missing word? […] if she trained afterwards.

V8.2 P4
13%
And even with Sheryl Family's - And even with the Sheryl Family's

27%
Naturally, Shijima was almost certain already knew - Redundant wording here

v2 p1 ~100%

She had been the who forced […]

She had been the one who forced […]

v3p1 ~6%:

"How dare you..." the body grumbled once more.

Not sure that shortening bodyguard to body works...

@trutherford2388 FYI, from my understanding, this will likely be the new norm moving forward, to better support annotations down the line. Just so you know to expect it!

V4 P6, 92%
"Eugene was the off man out; he had landed on his feet. He reached down and helped me up."
Off -> odd

Volume 21. Part 9 (23%)

Kasytilio should be Kaslytilio like in volume 19

v7 p8

~5%

The following day, just as the Imperial Magic Division departed the royal capital, a lavish entourage arrived at the north gate. It was none other than the King’s younger brother, Duke Raymond of Flitwick, accompanied by his personal knights. On that day, the sixth since the fall of Crystal Palace, the north gate was finally opened.
...
Parker Fletcher, the king’s younger brother, nodded vigorously. “I couldn’t agree more.”

Please re-check this translation. While Duke Flitwick is the king's younger brother, I do not believe this Parker Fletcher is another brother; I think he's just Raymond's right-hand man.

~ 40%

“Yes, Lord Mannerism, thank you for coming.”
Marquis Meusel, supreme commander of the Empire’s expedition, was accompanied by his chief adjutant and son, Linus. Dozens of northern Knightley nobles were already in the room.

~65%

Seated upon the throne, King Raymond addressed Marquis Meusel, who sat in the visitors’ section.
“Now then, Lord Mannerism, don’t you have a word or two for my ascension?”

Please re-check these translations. Should Lord Mannerism be Lord Meusel?

V6P5 ~0%

To begin with, not a one of them

Not one of them, or not a single one of them

V10 P3, 44%
“So this is just a guess, but so you think they just wanted to impress you, Chris?”
So -> do

v16 part 12 0%

"Yes, my bodyguard here took her time," said Jinshi.

Should this be actually be Maomao saying this instead (about Jinshi)? Jinshi is the one posing as a bodyguard, so it wouldn't make sense for him to say this about her. It also would make more sense for Maomao to be the one replying to Dr Wan-Wan since they know each other.

V10Pr, 57%: “the skylight Runa that had complimented” -that Runa had

5.5:

I might as well help you find him.

I might as well help you find him."

V3p9:

17%: “asked Wil with eyes” -> Wil asked with a wordless look/glare. 25%: “unordinary strength” -> extraordinary strength 25%: “seemingly fragile than” -> seemingly more fragile than 33%: “I just want all to get along” -> us all