v5 p4

~55% flasht => flash

1.3:

he'd said."Rather than

he'd said. "Rather than

Concerning "swot."
Yep, UK slang.
But I've no clue what would be an equivalent US version.
Or at least not one that isn't completely derogatory.

V3P4
[10%] with impressive synchronicity ➡ synchronization, I think.

[92%] But being driven by that alone goal was too ➡ goal alone

v1p10:

Uhh… - I’m pretty sure that I saw at least two sentences butting up against one another without a space in between, but I didn’t make note of it. :p

V12P7
~55%

“No! Let me keep on protecting you!I understand that you want to fight alone, but as a teacher I want to protect my students!”

“And besides, I think wielding me as you fight will be good training.Someday, we’re going to be fighting something even stronger!”

“You learned human speech,”Inglis assumed. “Then you are not Aulglora, but the mechanical dragon from Illuminas?”

Just missing some spaces between the words in bold.

(Also missing between the:

Wham!Wham!

at ~36% but not sure if that one is intentional)

V4 P7 (88%)

I cannot trustanything yousay.
--> I cannot trust anything you say.
(need to add spaces between words)

8.14:

What w0uld normally

What would normally

Bomiras ain't cool enough to speak L33T.

I'd like to request more speaker tags in the translation. For most of today's part, (Volume 1, Part 15) I had no idea who was speaking. It brought me out of the story several times.

v2p3 ~56%

In the end, it was one of those "tit for tat" situations with both of us inflicting damage on one another. A moderate 670 points of damage—nod bad compared to the havoc Cerberus wreaked on me.

nod -> not

16.7:

But To my surprise

But to my surprise

My guess is that the initial TL was "To my surprise" and then the "But" got added to the front without changing the case of the previous starting word.

46% four hundred thousand -> four million. (20 days at 200,000/day -> 4,000,000 yens, also consistent with the 660,000/person.)

1.3:

the guild's sign!Darn it.

the guild's sign! Darn it.

Vol 12 Short Historie part 9.
about 72% at the end of the short story "An old Story for Her and for Him"

The last phrase said:

Seeing the two of them smiling ear to ear, Belgrieve cocked his head curiously.

Is that Right? Should not be another person \ character "name" instead of "Belgrieve" ??

I do not see any connection between Young Hinamo, her brother and Maureen with "Believe"

1.3:

for that matter)would end up

for that matter) would end up

@Geezer-Weasalopes said in Knock Yourself Out! The Goddess Beat the Final Boss in the Tutorial, So Now I'm Free to Do Whatever - Corrections Topic:

@xdbx said in Knock Yourself Out! The Goddess Beat the Final Boss in the Tutorial, So Now I'm Free to Do Whatever - Corrections Topic:

~ 30% “please.kill me already.” => Please... kill or maybe Please, kill or Please! Kill

If nothing else, give it a space between the ending punctuation and the next word.
(Given the number of missing spaces in all of the new series' initial releases I'm presuming this error exists within the posted version, rather than being added by @xdbx.)

He was in rather poor shape at that time; maybe he couldn’t punctuate or capitalize correctly. :)

v5 p6

~55% Henblitz didn’t know what Beryl had been like before coming to Baltrain. He knew the man had taught at this dojo, but what kind of life had be led?

Should that be had he led?

V4 P4 67%:

“Viro didn’t tell you? I joined the Rainbow Sword to take part in that one mission.”

Should be Rainbow Blade.

v3p6:

86% - […], the heated people would sew people to itself just as securely. -> Too many people! :) Presumably table?