v6p9:

55% - A beautiful long-haired wearing a white apron […] -> Missing word: A beautiful long-haired what? Woman? Lady? And shouldn’t there be a comma between “beautiful” and “long-haired”? A beautiful, long-haired woman … Or something.

1.8:

mine drink

my drink

1.9:

No,, that was scheduled

No, that was scheduled

he practically forcibly joined in.

he forcibly joined in. he practically forced his way in.

Something where it's one or the other, anyway.

V16 P8

"Forcing them to first live in destitute inspired ...

destitute -> destitution

V3P2 22% Rosmaria and Lyla, her father's wife and her own step sister -> should be half sister, as they have the same father.

V4P1p2 21%:

it allowed time for Reinald and I to speak alone

I -> me

94%:

thank you for all your help Geoff.

Suggest adding a comma after "help".

v17p7 ~0%:

With bracelets around my wrists and the rake I made last night in my hand, I asked everyone to give me five meters' birth and encircle me.

birth -> berth.

@xdbx said in EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic:

Should that be rot damage?

I'm not sure. It could be "rot damage" was intended, or that "DoT damage" (from Damage over Time) was intended.. Both apply in this case, so it could be either.

V2 P5

76% "things like dragons Though a few of them"

Appears to be missing some punctuation after dragons.

v5p2 ~28%:

"I'm asking if you say my...my...!" Edward stammered.

say -> saw.

V1, P3, around 6%

“Is it true that anyone can use magic withpractice with practice?”

Missing space.

v6p5 80% To the extent that it would frankly be better to use nothing at all.” -> Not sure where this bit of dialogue is supposed to begin, but if it and the previous two paragraphs were all dialogue from Seika it's styled wrong since they should have had only opening quotes until this closing quote.

@alahue this story definitely needs something like a tragedy tag to give people a heads up on what they're getting in to.
Many people don't enjoy being blind sided with

spoiler
At the same time, people who do love it and are specifically looking for these kinds of stories don't have any way to tell that this story will scratch their itch

V4 P10 (38% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe "as" is missing and should be added:
...it took me half as long as them...

Note: "as long as" is a phrase of "long"

during the whole time that.
"they have been there as long as anyone can remember" provided that.
"as long as you fed him, he would be cooperative" - Oxford/Cambriage Dictionaries

v7p10:

[…] it sounded like these crazy things happened on the daily for them. -> I’m not familiar with this specific phrase, although its meaning is obvious. From which variant of english does it come? I would have used “on a daily basis” in this instance, but if the translation team is happy with it, I’m good. :)

V3 P6, 4%
"If you mother tries to harm her, she'll get their comeuppance"
Their -> her

7%
"to say he had no affection for his own children would be untruet
untruet -> untrue

33%
"the coachman said, a surprisingly casually..."
Delete the 'a'

30% "Even if she was the retired matriarch of the household... it seemed odd she had no guards"
33% "The guard groaned in pain... then he turned on his heel and fled, abandoning my aunt"
Where'd this guard come from? None was introduced, as far as I can tell. At first I thought it might be talking about the coachman, but he sticks around (doesn't flee).

V4, P4, around 40%:

Particularly that mikagami no jutsu.Mikagami... jutsu. Mikagami... Was that “water mirror”?

Missing space.

V15P5

[37%] some of the information fee, though.I even got down on my knees < Missing spaces between the sentences

Volume 1 - Part 9:

[62%]

Also, I've heard that he formed some of these those connections because he's trying to find someone.

It's probably just one of these words. those sounds best tho.