@Vorthod Thank you for the feedback!
This series has changed hands a few times now and unfortunately there has been a miscommunication on some terms.
I have been trying my best to rectify this, but this series has a habit of characters suddenly returning after six or seven volumes and they fall through the cracks.
I will pass along your feedback for the previous volumes and see what can be done.

V13 P13, 8%
"Off in a corner of the orphange’s grounds, Metea stood..."
Orphange -> Orphanage

56% "Ishuca gently bent her arms and opened her palms upward as she flashes a compassionate smile at the Wings."
Flashes -> flashed

61% "Nao gently patted Remi’s head, and Kaho looked on in a way as if she thought it were a heartwarming moment."
Not sure on this, but might work just as well (or slightly better) without the 'in a way'

v4 p3 and p4

Was some material omitted between p3 and p4? P3 ends with the wight summoning 10 Dullahans and ordering them to attack:

“Defend me and remove these insolent wretches. Dark Summon.”
A thick, vile mist billowed into existence and coalesced into the shape of a knight mounted on horseback—except the knight had no head.
“A Dullahan?! He can summon undead that high in level?!” Alec shouted in disbelief.
Except it wasn’t just one. A second, then a third, and then another appeared, until there were ten Dullahans standing in formation in front of their king.
The wight pointed his staff at us. “Destroy them.”

But at the beginning of p4 the wight is attacking directly and several of the Dullahans have already been defeated:

The moment the wight tried to attack us, Guy struck him with his staff. There was a bright flash of light, and the wight’s bones started to disintegrate.
“Gaaaah...”
But it was somehow still alive, even though it was technically dead.
When Guy tried to attack again, the wight’s body was sucked into the ground, and then it reappeared somewhere else a few moments later. Apparently, it could travel from shadow to shadow.

The continuity seems broken here, perhaps some text in which the Dullahans attack has been skipped?

Wails are definitely not large marine mammals .

If it’s not too late:
V6P11, 4%: “I’d have liked to capture [her] alive”

V8 P4 (12% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

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Add missing word "flags" in high-lighted area.

--> The two squires bearing flags - one bearing a red flag,...

V14, P7, around 95%

“Natrurally Naturally, we realize that this alone is not sufficient,”

Extra letter.

V2P3, 94%: “That was [why] the enemy would never leave Mashdale alone”

v12p14:

46% - Baronness Rossetti […] baronness -> Extra letter: Baroness, unless you’re perhaps going for another language’s version of the word, I guess. My visitation with The Great Google showed me a lot of typos… 95% - […] perhaps she could get away with eating all these cookies if trained afterwards. -> Missing word? […] if she trained afterwards.

V8.2 P4
13%
And even with Sheryl Family's - And even with the Sheryl Family's

27%
Naturally, Shijima was almost certain already knew - Redundant wording here

v2 p1 ~100%

She had been the who forced […]

She had been the one who forced […]

v3p1 ~6%:

"How dare you..." the body grumbled once more.

Not sure that shortening bodyguard to body works...

@trutherford2388 FYI, from my understanding, this will likely be the new norm moving forward, to better support annotations down the line. Just so you know to expect it!

V4 P6, 92%
"Eugene was the off man out; he had landed on his feet. He reached down and helped me up."
Off -> odd

Volume 21. Part 9 (23%)

Kasytilio should be Kaslytilio like in volume 19

v7 p8

~5%

The following day, just as the Imperial Magic Division departed the royal capital, a lavish entourage arrived at the north gate. It was none other than the King’s younger brother, Duke Raymond of Flitwick, accompanied by his personal knights. On that day, the sixth since the fall of Crystal Palace, the north gate was finally opened.
...
Parker Fletcher, the king’s younger brother, nodded vigorously. “I couldn’t agree more.”

Please re-check this translation. While Duke Flitwick is the king's younger brother, I do not believe this Parker Fletcher is another brother; I think he's just Raymond's right-hand man.

~ 40%

“Yes, Lord Mannerism, thank you for coming.”
Marquis Meusel, supreme commander of the Empire’s expedition, was accompanied by his chief adjutant and son, Linus. Dozens of northern Knightley nobles were already in the room.

~65%

Seated upon the throne, King Raymond addressed Marquis Meusel, who sat in the visitors’ section.
“Now then, Lord Mannerism, don’t you have a word or two for my ascension?”

Please re-check these translations. Should Lord Mannerism be Lord Meusel?

V6P5 ~0%

To begin with, not a one of them

Not one of them, or not a single one of them

V10 P3, 44%
“So this is just a guess, but so you think they just wanted to impress you, Chris?”
So -> do