v4p6 ~60%

"I'm really sorry.."

Should probably either a single or three dots.

V9P1.3

hoped against hope that Sheryl that running away - seems to be missing some words, maybe "that Sheryl could be convinced that running away"

none of them were foolish enough to declare openly that they were working with the gang, but their intentions had been obvious when they'd stopped coming all of a sudden - Again missing words, is the first part supposed to be "no longer working," considering the second part?

V3P10, 60%: "There was no telling what tactics he might resort to text" - next (Liliana is the one who resorts to text)

v3 p4

~67%

When discussing what to do with the newborn monster and marveling over the fact that the orb in Ren’s room had been an egg the whole time, they came to the decision of ushering it into the family. There was precedence, and not even just among nobles, of people raising monsters.

Probably that should be:

precedent

Reference: 'Precedent' vs. 'Precedence'.

V14 P6 (6% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

All the while, Light move not an inch from his spot,...

Wrong tense. Correct to "moved not",

e.g. All the while, Light moved not an inch from his spot,...
-or-
All the while, Light didn't move an inch from his spot,...

Arc 2 V1 P5

At around 30% Ryo states:

“I see. So, it’s like the Crimson Sword of the past.”

“Warren the shield bearer was the absolute supportive pillar of the party, and he could do anything, from defense to cooking. The brains of the party was Rihya, who had been a renowned priest. Lyn, who could even cast Bullet Rain, was our main source of offense. Despite this, our leader was Abel, because he was the prince.”

While Ryo did fight alongside Crimson Sword from time to time, I don't think he was ever actually a member, was he? If so, the first-person plural possessive might not be appropriate. Suggest instead:

“Warren the shield bearer was the absolute supportive pillar of the party, and he could do anything, from defense to cooking. The brains of the party was Rihya, who had been a renowned priest. Lyn, who could even cast Bullet Rain, was the main source of offense. Despite this, its leader was Abel, because he was the prince.”

~ 50%

While the news was no bother to him—he’d just finished enjoying not only a Mont Blon but a modified mille-crêpes as well—he didn’t think it was right for this person to be so loud that they were causing trouble for the other patrons. He glanced over and saw three youths, likely adventurers, were the cause of the commotion.

"Mont Blon" -- "Mount Blonde"? I cannot find a reference to "Mont Blon" anywhere via search, so maybe that should also be

Mont Blanc

V8, P5, around 22%:

Neither! In all likelihood, our enemy is Marquess Dozraan Dozran!

Duplicated letter.

Volume 13 part 6 0%

If we can beat it, we will retreat and wait for Krena and Haku...

"can" should probably be "can't".

V4 P9 (0% - last sentence at bottom of page)

Then my mother lied down next to me,...
The correct word should be "laid", the past tense of lay.

e.g: Then my mother laid down next to me,...

FYI: Lied is the past tense of lie (an untruth).

V7 Part 3

At the moment, Elvan was making his way to a dungeon with said viscount's daughter, Alicia, and his younger brother Amor.

Amor is the king's younger brother, but the way this is written, it looks like he is Elvan's younger brother. There should also be a comma before "Amor".

Clara knew, from her past life, that he otome game furnished the characters with several opportunities to receive gifts.

"he" should be "the".

Volume 14 Part 10
07% Yuki tilted her head as looked -> Yuki tilted her head as she looked
30% you could use burn mana -> you could burn mana
30% and Transport only would if the target wasn't resisting -> and Transport would only work if the target wasn't resisting
79% yourselves,after -> yourselves, after [missing space after comma]

v10p2:

62% - […] reported everything to us.”The man […] - Missing space: everything to us.” The man

V6, P6, around 53%:

“ You’ve got the processing side handled?”

It's missing the opening quotation mark.

V11, P5, around 56%:

Training mechs had limited fuel capacity—moving so rigorously would consume the fuel in an instant.

I'm 90% sure it should be "vigorously".

V5P8:

44%: "She was stronger than Daggers and amazing;y sharp."

v5p3, ~26%

Smiling, Nina headed for the table where Nina and the others were waiting for her.

While I wouldn't put it past Nina to be able to exist in multiple places at once (any maid could do the same), I nevertheless suspect that someone else's name should be in the latter part of the sentence.

10.12:

I think if I ever divide and have ancestors of my own

Um, "ancestors"? Offspring are descendants.

V5 P9, 48%
“I see... I think I understand why elven sorcery hasn’t progressed or seen much innovated over the years."
Innovated -> innovation