4.6:

She was the one who had fallenin love

She was the one who had fallen in love

V13P4

0%: "The long wait time for the share also meant that there was" -> shade 64%: "Then, it began taking in the magic from Dahlia’s fingertips like it was unraveling a thread." -> "thread" doesn't really unravel. Fabric or braids can unravel. I think the visual/metaphor that you want might be: "unraveling like thread/yarn from a sweater/spool"

V5 P2 (10% - 13th line down from top of page)

Remove redundant "once"
e.g:

alt text

or

alt text

Volume 4 Part 7
55% push past through -> push through

V2 P7 (38% - 4th line down from top of page)

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Seems like a word is missing such as "now"...
e.g. "You said 'the next' just now, right?"
I think that sounds better.

@Geolykt Agreed. I've heard of "choice produce" in grocery stores (which I think is the idea here), but not "depends" as a level of quality--which would be especially inappropriate for a higher level of quality.

V17 P3, 0%
"Yet despite Ganudo’s small size, the wealth gap was vast."
Ganudo's -> Gyrados Ganudos'

Volume 5 part 10 55%

There are plenty of jobs that an adventurer can do ... and guard envoys

Is envoys the correct word here? In this context an envoy would be a diplomat, guarding them would usually be a job for the knights in this sort of setting, adventurers who aren't professional bodyguards would not be a typical choice, it might happen if there is a staffing shortage but shouldn't be a typical job for adventures. Convoys would make a lot more sense in context.

@Charlie85 said in Hell Mode - Corrections Topic:

else they went backwards

They did indeed go backwards (kind of), as they were given class promotions after defeating Megades, which reset them back to Lvl. 1.

v3p6 ~13%

"I'm sorry? [...] what you discussed?""

has an extra " at the end.

v7p14 ~87%

Then must assume you're using your fae facet to fuel [...]

should likely be

Then I must assume [...]

And while we're at v2p7 69% (76% in the app)

[...] sludge, it immediately clear it wasn't [...]

lacking a became or was

V4 P8, 10%
"Reina was ranked seventh, Zelos was sixth, and Meryln was fifth."
Meryln -> Merlyn

V2P7:
15%:

He was so infatuated with his wife that he disliked even the idea of letting her see his family in the empire.

Isn’t the wife the one with family in the empire? If so, this should say her family.

58%:

He soon reached his destination: the Londard Trading Company, a major trading firm.

Shouldn’t this be Londart?

V10, P4, aound 86%:

Jay eyes eyed Chris appraisingly for a moment, then sighed.

Wrong letter.

V10, P5, around 35%:

Wait. Expending Expanding the field around Rosa?

Wrong letter.

Volume 2 Part 8
48% your worthless little beast -> you worthless little beast

There seems to be content missing immediately following the image again here.

Chichi and Kano were just starting to bicker before the image and then suddenly Kano is stuffing 3 cookies in her face in what appears to be an attempt at one upsmanship to an event that is missing

@Gamen said in Zero Damage Sword Saint - Corrections:

@Geezer-Weasalopes

After the day’s classes, my teacher informed me that someone from the Dungeon Union had asked to see me.“
A summons from the 100th Level of Babel?”

With the assist from Gamen [thanks!]

After the day’s classes, my teacher informed me that someone from the Dungeon Union had asked to see me.
“A summons from the 100th Level of Babel?”

As you can see, shifting the " from the end of one line to the beginning of the next makes much more sense.