@Khazidhea said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

“Yeah, Yuki-san’s magic can crush and extinguish an orc’s head with ease,”

Probably “disintegrate”, “destroy”, or “eliminate”, although any word that makes sense would also make “crush and” redundant, so this sentence needs some work throughout.

This feels like a case where a word has multiple meanings and the wrong one got translated. Like, in English we have “quench”, “extinguish”, and “snuff” which should often be translated into fire-related words, but sometimes they mean “drink”, “murder”, and “murder” respectively. Humans do get that wrong sometimes, but A.I. is terrible at it, especially if the intended meaning is the rarer one. It makes me wonder what tools the translator is using.

V1P1
~19%

when we were in the cellar library that the previous head of House Lumiole had used.

Extra letter? Lumiole->Lumiol

V1P7
~21%

Two men were holding me down, and there were now other four men surrounding me as well.

Wrong word order? other four->four other

~63%

The opened up the front door, then bowed reverently

Missing letter and missing full stop? The->They and reverently->reverently.

V1P5
~42%

“Forget everything I said. Fight Ashley as if you’re trying to kill him.”

Missing start “? Fight Ashley->“Fight Ashley

V1P9
~15%

“They gather up packs and use those numbers strategically.

Maybe extra word / wrong word? (Sorry if it is okay as it is but I am not see 'gather up packs' before or when search) gather up packs->gather in packs (or gather as packs or gather up)

~46%

As long as you carry the blood of your house, and you have to uphold your family’s honor.”

Extra word or maybe missing more sentence? (Because sentence is start with 'as long as' but is not say what Saki is have to do while the first part is true, maybe extra 'and' because she is have to uphold family honor or maybe missing end of sentence because while she is have the blood from house and have to uphold honor she is can not choose who for marriage.) and you have to->you have to

~77%

Kuhoin style intermediate spirit art... “Piercing Shirke!”

Maybe wrong word/misspell? (Sorry, I am search for Shirke because I am not know word but I can not see anything about word (only shirk) sorry if it is a word from the series or a Japanese word but maybe a misspell of strike or shriek?) Shirke->Shriek (or Strike?)

V3 P1, 54%
When she opens her mouth again it’s to say, “I should have said this far sooner: Both I and my country own all of you a great debt."
Own -> owe

V5P2

29%: "I had returned home after finishing my daily regiment" -> regimen

@Hylebos Thank you for your inquiry! In fact, JNC's style guide calls for "leaped" instead of "leapt," so that is why we have used it here. :-)

Volume 7 part 9 71%

Within under a minute he'd torn out several more,

Within a minute and under a minute mean the same thing, using both is redundant, although within makes more sense in this particular sentance.