v5 p1

~50%

Linte suddenly looked at me with a strangely suspicious expression.“"Kudo, you don’t have mirrors at your place, do you?”

=> Kudo (extra double quote removed).

V13, p8, 77%
...tossed the beans into a large spot...
spot=pot

Volume 13:
Page 22: Since Reinbach had already retired, it was up to Reinbach to take on any chalenges the Jamils faced -> Reinhart
page 22: if Reinbach were to overstep and involve himself too much, the other nobles might see that as weakness on Reinbach’s part -> Reinhart's

Volume 14:
Page 14: as the grave slimes' Attract Haunts skill funneled them in -> Spirits
page 66: Class-4: 120,000+ sutes -> 12,000+
Page 106: Humas offer payment when giving quests -> Humans

Volume 15:
Page 75: They called Ryoma's grandpa the God of Military Arts again. See previous comment.

14.2:

First they weaved raw wool into fabric

First they wove raw wool into fabric

It's a verb tense thing.
It's describing the process, so it's more of a "You do this and then this" rather than "They'd done this and then that other thing."

With weaved it'd be "First they'd weaved raw wool into fabric"
All the tenses need to match.

V1P5, 88%
must’ve been surprised at how quaint things were out in Liberta.

Liberta --> Leberta.

V1P6, 67%
It’s impossible, but I feel like I’ve smelled it sometimes in Liberta.”

Liberta --> Leberta.

V1P7, 6%

Laura replied with a smile, before asking Dinar which glass she wanted.

Dinar --> Dina

V1P9, 20%
The Ferletts were just this kind of family.

Ferletts --> Ferlettis

V1P9, 37%
“I’ve heard you’re one of the Robios’ errand boys.

Robios’ --> Rubios'

V1P10, 27%
“Look at me like that all you want, butI’m telling the truth.

butI’m --> but I’m

V1P10, 61%
I’m unclear on any further details about the mani.
mani --> man

In pre-pub part 9, 8%

...never lay a hand on our son Jonas, his employer.... Or his father-in-law 's company the Haldrad company.

Yusef is his step father. Not father in law. Also, occurrence of company twice in succession is a bit awkward.

v1p10:

34% - don’t ever aim your wind gun someone -> Missing word: don’t ever aim your wind gun at someone

V1 P1, 50%
"The lord of macig remained as expressionless as ever."
Macig -> magic

P5, 43%
"He was such a malicious man - how dared he look at her so tenderly?"
Dared -> dare

P6, 17%
"Most people would reply that Iora must’ve written the letter. Arvine had made the right decision, asking Iora if she was the author of the letter."
I think, unless I'm missing some other context, that that might be Arvine -> Aides or Leo

P10, 19%
"once they became, respectively, the crown princes and the marchioness"
Princes -> princess

V1 P10, 33%
"Why had the viscount corrected himself from saying Ren Ashton to the Asthon family?"
Asthon -> Ashton

V4 P6 (65% - 1s line at top of page)

They don't look a alike at all.

Remove excess "a".

V8.1P8
12%
then it was better than no one did - better that no one did

@Ingraman Thanks for that! Not quite sure what happened there -- I had to manually search for the line and it definitely took some wrestling to fix!

Volume 21. Part 2 (95%).

The phrase Chastille uses to encourage Barbatos is a direct reference to the Haunted House in volume 14 ("Wells, have courage"), so I'd suggest using "Barbatos, have courage" too instead of "Be bold, Barbatos" since it's the same phrase she said to his past self (Wells was Barbatos's name when he was a kid).

Volume 21. Part 4 (25%)

In volume 20, the blade Asmodeus gave Kuroka was translated as "Serpent Slayer."

V5P7 around 43% and later:

either Amalia, Charlotta, or myself will attend the event as your guardian.

(And other instances of "guardian")
The word I've usually seen for an older woman who accompanies a young woman to a party is "chaperone". I have the impression "guardian" implies a long-term legal relationship. Would "chaperone" be an appropriate translation here?

Volume 12 Part 1
26% the both Summons flew off -> both of the Summons flew off

Here is a special entry for all the old grognards out there:
The text mentions Magitech Mechanic and Magic Mechanic, but...
42% Let's not forget Manic Mechanic, who can make any vehicle twice as fast - but only while ZZ Top is playing.

V1 P9, 85%
"and finally, they punched through the centre [of] the human upper body's forehead"

v4P2p3:

43% - “The Lubeck goes without saying, but […] ->Wrong word? Maybe “That Lubeck goes without […]”? Drop the word altogether? Or some other phrasing… (Edit: The Lubeck matter […] ?)

v3p4

0%: "The third floor was the haunt of human-sized bad monsters. " -> bat 0%: "and she clearly meant it as a complement." -> compliment