14.8

If she were found herself in a situation where she had to choose

12.11

We might have been getting favorable treatment because of Estelle being a Rank 5 adventure.

“adventurer.”

9.9

Charging at the Carla’s restrained form left kneeling on the floor,

Volume 2 - Part 5:

[46%]

amenuenses

amenuenses > amanuenses

[77%]

"I didn't do anything!'

' > "
Also, not sure if this shouldn't have been italicized or not. It didn't seem to be internal monologue to be italicized.

v2 p4

~5%

“In my eyes, there’s a ninety percent chance that Cormeca is a witch. She is a really fishy person. However, we cannot deal with this independently. You understand why Erifell and Dergo are waiting for the Carbuncles, attempting to do this the right way, don’t you?”

=> Derg

~85%

“The five-day arrival estimate refers to when all members of the Carbuncles unit come to Esma on carriage through other intermediary villages. However, that’s not a problem if I get just the one tocome running.”

=> to come

V6 P9, 92%
As I slipped past the ragged cloth serving as a door, a young dogfolk child, alerted by the greeting, wagged his tail and clung to my leg. Elena, who had been playing with the dwarven child, looked up at me and smiled warmly.
My read is that this is the same child in each instance. Unless I've missed something and dogfolk and dwarf can be used interchangably, dwarven -> dogfolk.

V3P6 ~70%
"The amazing thing about childhood friends is that that was all it took for him to understand me." -> "The amazing thing about childhood friends is that that was all it took for him to understand me."
~89%
"How so?"' -> "How so?" (removing the extra apostrophe)
~93%
"Hmm? Oh, I guess it just really just sank in how peaceful it's been lately." -> "Hmm? Oh, I guess it just really just sank in how peaceful it's been lately."

V12P5 ~17%
"Had he perhaps already realized the Eldan's visit was all in an effort..." -> "Had he perhaps already realized the that Eldan's visit was all in an effort..."

V6P3 ~56%
"I'd been affected by Master Robin's once before, but after..." -> "I'd been affected by Master Robin's magic once before, but after..."
Might be unnecessary, but it just felt off reading it w/o the explicit reference to his magic.

v11.1 p16 ~38%

He had some blue blood in him, being the grandson of a noble's illegitimate child

Could this please be double checked, unless I'm mistaken Giesebrecht's father was married to his mother according to part 3 ~76%.

~48%

Isolde

Erich and Margit's daughter's name was translated as Iseult back in volume 1, so ideally should be translated the same way here to maintain consistency.

v2p7 ~50%:

Seren had told me to go home, but he'd chosen to stay.

me -> him, pretty sure? At the very least, if there's an anonymous PoV character who is watching Sirius in this part, they're not mentioned again.

v2p7 ~56%:

"Father!" they called/

/ -> .

1.8:

mine drink

my drink

1.9:

No,, that was scheduled

No, that was scheduled

he practically forcibly joined in.

he forcibly joined in. he practically forced his way in.

Something where it's one or the other, anyway.

V16 P8

"Forcing them to first live in destitute inspired ...

destitute -> destitution

V3P2 22% Rosmaria and Lyla, her father's wife and her own step sister -> should be half sister, as they have the same father.

V4P1p2 21%:

it allowed time for Reinald and I to speak alone

I -> me

94%:

thank you for all your help Geoff.

Suggest adding a comma after "help".

v17p7 ~0%:

With bracelets around my wrists and the rake I made last night in my hand, I asked everyone to give me five meters' birth and encircle me.

birth -> berth.

@xdbx said in EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic:

Should that be rot damage?

I'm not sure. It could be "rot damage" was intended, or that "DoT damage" (from Damage over Time) was intended.. Both apply in this case, so it could be either.

V2 P5

76% "things like dragons Though a few of them"

Appears to be missing some punctuation after dragons.