V3P9

[53%] I'm gonna have to ask him to lend me his power.,. Hey Luke! < There seems to be some extra punctuation or the comma is meant to be another period

@RymaneT said in A Livid Lady's Guide to Getting Even - Corrections Topic:

@groudonvert-own27br Hi! Translator here!
Thank you for pointing this out! I just wanted to confirm this was a mistake on my part and not in the original Japanese version. There is only one adventurer resting in the carriage, which makes 5 of them total.

No problem ^^

It's a bit late now I know, but there's something who bothers me with volume 3, with the informations we now have about how the magic contracts work. I wonder if there's an error with the contract between Lucas and Friede during the money incident (that could be helpful for the manga version btw).

I mean, I know Friede is an idiot, but there's no way he would have missed a paragraph about cooperation for counterfeit money when he's the one behind it.
So in light of what we learned in volume 7, is there a possibility there's a translaton error in volume 3?

V12, P7, around 69%:

It was often too late to treat it once one knew what was happening, and it was said that even the temple was successful in fully curing the ailment a handful of times.In times. In this kingdom where even grave injuries could be healed with magic or high potions, head blockages, along with heart stoppages, were feared ailments.

Missing space.

13.6:

"Seirously, thank you for all the deliveries.

"Seriously, thank you for all the deliveries.

I wouldn't say no a little cash in return.

I wouldn't say no to a little cash in return.

"Iwouldn't feel all that great if you got sick, so it's important to get plenty of rest."

"I wouldn't feel all that great if you got sick, so it's important to get plenty of rest."

"We've already finished getting everything around for the most part."

"everything around" is a new one to me.
"everything done"? The other words I can think of are too close to others already used in this section.

just took all the wind out my sails

just took all the wind out off my sails

V1 p8:

~65% -- "After all, not only it wasn't my own" -> "After all, not only was it not my own"

V3 P6 87%: "Nina started." I trinkt it should be "startled"

v33p7 ~50%:

Yamiru Suun had coated herself in giba blood and tried to pressure into marrying her.

pressure into -> pressure me into

V9 part 6
Around 88%-91% (mobile view)

Well, that's just the way the cookie crumbles.
“What a surprise!”

These two sentences should have extra spacing since the settings had changed from Nia in front of her rented house with Lynoxis to Nia is in school

V3P3

0%: "I’m gonna master something or other! Marky my words!" -> Mark 17%: "But why revere a hopeless woman like here?" -> her 17%: "Ryouen averted her eyes and beat around the bush." -> began to beat around the bush? 33%: "Still, we had chosen to wait for her anyway because apparently, her skills were necessary for this quest." -> because, apparently, 33%: "so had apparently been Yui" -> so apparently had been

V8 P10 (69% - 11th line up from bottom of page)

All my worries are on.

All my worries are gone.

Volume 6 - Part 1:

[51%]

Please, Your Majestsy--

Majestsy > Majesty

V8.1 P15 0% "Cash in on the debt Akira [owned] him now" -> owed
37% "They're probably both thinking about ways they can get you in [your] debt." -> their

v4p4 ~56%:

As he opened the window and stepped out onto the terrace, Kyne swooped down from above. Deenoark offered an arm for the bird to land, then brought him over to the wooden perch beside his desk, something he had built once Misha began sending letters back from Redford.

brought him over -> brought her over. Someone on the Discord caught this subtle one, apparently Kyne is a she-bird, as can be seen when she "used her beak to push the letter toward him,". Props to Durkan.

V3 P3 (47% - 11th line up from bottom of page)

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"go down without a fight"

v4p2p2 ~58%

“I’ll get back to the topic of Martin momentarily”

Martina*

v3P7 40%

"For some reason, Shenley had gone pale. He was holding her face and looked like she was about to let loose a wail like Edvard Munch’s painting The Scream." -> she

V1P7

70%: It was an investment, and investments could be recuperated. -> That should be recouped, no?

V1 P2, 35%
"Combined with the uniformly redbrick roofs"
Probably no error here, just my ignorance on the subject and unfamiliarity with the term as applied to roofs. Could it be red (or red brick) tiled roofs?