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  Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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  The Magician Who Rose From Failure - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 1 - Part 4: [26%] It's black, four-storey building was close to the palace ► Should it be four-story (US Spelling)? [40%] Goldwald said, a little more harshly than he intended ► Should be Godwald
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  She's the Cutest... But We're Just Friends! - Corrections Topic
  cutestfriends • • myskaros  

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  Allow me to apologize in advance for this post. Everyone was still talking about the game even though it had been out for nearly a year. The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild was a launch game for the Nintendo Switch, releasing on March 3rd 2017. If the events narrated are indeed happening on the first day of high school approximately a year after the launch of the game, that should be the start of April 2018, so the game should have been out for "just over a year", instead of "nearly a year". Again, I offer my sincerest apologies for this post. Please feel free to ignore it, along with my shame over the fact that I didn't have to look any of this up.
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  My Friend's Little Sister Has It In for Me! - Corrections Topic
  imouza • • myskaros  

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  The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic
  apothecary • • myskaros  

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  While that solves part of the awkwardness, the usage of "the woman" instead of "a woman" or "this woman" still sounds unnatural. Using the here sounds extremely awkward if you try to read it aloud as actual dialogue.
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  The Greatest Magicmaster's Retirement Plan - Corrections Topic
  magicmaster • • lovelight  

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  @Terabyte Wow, sharp eyes. I just corrected it. Good catch!
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  The Great Cleric - Corrections Topic
  great cleric • • myskaros  

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  Volume 1, Part 4 75%: "It's only been a month, but I've been improving . . ." -> Should be week, as the text earlier says it's been a week already but he'll need a full month to finish training.
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  By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic
  graceofthegods • • lovelight  

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  37% ..., it could be baked into something like unfermented bread. Should be "unleavened".
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  The Epic Tale of the Reincarnated Prince Herscherik - Corrections Topic
  herscherik • • myskaros  

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  part 5 39% According to another guard's testimony at a later date, spent a lot of time staring into space that day , too. There is at least one word missing somewhere. Perhaps "spent" -> "he spent"?
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  My Instant Death Ability - Corrections Topic
  instant death • • lovelight  

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  Volume 3 - Part 3: [67%] figure out what the hell this whiny human wanted.> ► Remove extra > at the end. [74%] and began attacking their neighbouring countries. ► It should be neighboring (US spelling).
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  Record of Wortenia War - Corrections Topic
  wortenia • • lovelight  

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  @Terabyte said in Record of Wortenia War - Corrections Topic: [67%] insert10.jpg ► The illustration is already used at 42%. The one here is either a duplicate placed wrongly or it should be a different image. Fixed!
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  Can Someone Please Explain What’s Going On?! - Corrections Topic
  corrections • • myskaros  

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  Volume 5 - Part 6 [1%] Carthas was chosen because he was fairly average-sized → Cartham [68%] because of the pain and how boring this all ways. → was
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  Mapping: The Trash-Tier Skill That Got Me Into a Top-Tier Party - Corrections Topic
  mapping • • lovelight  

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  Volume 3 - Part 3: [85%] “So you misled and innocent young lady on purpose!” ► It should be an.
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  Fushi no Kami - Corrections Topic
  fushi no kami • • myskaros  

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  Volume 2 - Part 5 [6%] The restraint expression on her face → restrained [26%] “Don’t you know? I’d love to tell you, but if I start talking about your father, I’m going to be here for a long time,” Sir George replied with a wry smile. It looked like he had come with some business. It was not usual for a teacher to visit the dormitory before breakfast. → is this supposed to be in the same paragraph? I'm pretty sure this is a scene change in the middle of this paragraph. The quote at the beginning is at the end of the practice match the day before, the second sentence at breakfast the next morning.
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  Banner of the Stars - Corrections Topic
  banner • • lovelight  

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  Volume 5 Part 2 13% - I'm find with the usual food -> I'm fine with the usual food I'm a bit ambivalent on the usage of Platoon for the Capital Defense Platoon, simply because platoon implies a very, very small and hierarchically low ranked unit organization. Considering the nature of the unit, might I suggest Capital Defense Corps, or if the intent is to imply a small, select group, Capital Defense Cadre.
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  Outbreak Company - Corrections Topic
  outbreak • • lovelight  

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  Volume 16 - Part 4: [85%] Third Capital in Bahairam,” Minister Cordobal. Then he ► It should be Minister Cordobal said?
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  Cooking with Wild Game - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 11 - Part 2: [20%] like honey, and spiralled all the way down to her hips. ► It should be spiraled (US spelling). [28%] threatened with knives and brought her against my will, ► It should be here. Already reported. [42%] So mastermind behind those ridiculous orders is on the ► It should be the mastermind.
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  The World's Least Interesting Master Swordsman - Corrections Topic
  master sword • • lovelight  

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  Volume 5 - Part 2: [1%] received the same news,it didn’t have as much ► Missing space. [3%] a little guilty about the fact thatI’m not going to ► It should be that I’m (space). [76%] “My father is the lord and my mother is wife... ► It should be his wife.
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  The Bloodline - Corrections Topic
  bloodline • • lovelight  

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  Full Metal Panic! - Corrections Topic
  fmp • • lovelight  

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  @83drew I'm not the editor for this series so there's no point in mentioning me... 😅 === Volume 10 - Part 3: [0%] the C-130 transport helicopter landed on Rakan Island. ► Based on the description it should be an airplane? Already reported. [1%] deck open to take in supplies from transport helicopters. ► Just like above, it should probably be (air)planes rather than helicopter(s)? Even later on it talks about "planes".