V4 P3, 85%
"The first golden age was twenty-two hundred years ago, when our ancestor Lord Aeolus..."
...
"... Over two hundred centuries have passed since Lord Aeolus left this world"
One of these is off by a digit (2200 vs 20 000)

V6P6
~11%

“Right...” King Atos nodded, then spoke haltingly. “When I’m in the palace..I-I-I sometimes sing by myself like this. In a place where n-nobody else can hear...”

Missing a .?; palace..I->palace...I

v3P2p2:

15% - […] our cat sometimes pounces upon the table to steal our food the moment you let our guard down. -> There’s a bit of inconsistency between the possessives and pronoun. Possibly: our cat - our food - we - our guard. Or (but I like it a little less): our cat - your food - you - your guard.

Edit:

48% - Were it only I could have prepared the sweets to go with it […] -> Possibly missing word? It might be okay as published, but I have the urge to put it as: Were it only that I could have […]

V1P10, 37%: "Thepieces for the ground" - missing space

V2P1, 41%: "That your has not been recorded" - yours

47%: "WE can't let this happen!" - capitalisation

61%: "as she cleaned up the orb" - should that be ink or carpet?

v11 cI p1

~45%

As long as she knew the Aerotech prototypes would turn out well once testing was over with, then Count Thaumpalatine Ubiorum didn’t give a damn whether the people of Ende Erde died in their thousands or the trade routes were completely eradicated.

=> Thaumapalatine (It has been spelled consistently with the extra a.)

V4 P7 (5% - 1 line below line beginning with "It sounds like fun.")

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we'd like to leave society behind...

@Khazidhea said in Notorious No More - Corrections Topic:

V2 P10, 33%
"Even when I had tried to provoke ,other into turning on me instead"
,other -> mother

“Not that she would do something as untoward as screaming, of course—he was a proper young lady.
I glanced at her... wWit, what exactly was that spellbound expression she was wearing?!"
He -> she. Not sure about 'wWit', maybe wait?

Yeah, has to be a Wait.
There are also these two:
"fresh welts.I had" < missing space
"on his face face to boot" < repetition

V2 P4, 6%
"I used to be so certain she hated me, but after seeing that face... tt was clear there had been a misunderstanding"
tt -> it

v3 p2

~60%

Lacey’s home used to be feared as a cursed property by the villagers, so other than Yorma, Reeve, their older brother Allen, and the fox-eyed merchant Lanze, who occasionally visited Plume Villages, people rarely visited the place.

=> Plume Village (singular)

v3 p4

~1%

“Family” was such a foreign word to her,something that she thought that she would never have a connection to.

=> her, something (missing space)

@Poncho9761 said in The Frontier Lord Begins with Zero Subjects - Corrections Topic:

V11P2 ~50%
'...a child, started up at me...' -> '...a child, stared up at me...' EDIT: oops, @heimdal7 beat me to it...
~71%
'...and give it some that good ol' energy.' -> '...and give it some of that good ol' energy.'
~96%
'...and the grandma all let out...' -> '...and the grandmas all let out...'

Funny enough I just happen to wake in the middle of the night and saw this posted in real time.

@Rinvelt alright, cool, thanks for the heads up on both of those (the unique spelling of 'Ser' and the mistake from the author). Cool to see how 'the sausage gets made' sometimes!

As for correction!
V6P9 ~50%
'He was a S-rank adventurer...' -> 'He was an S-rank adventurer...'

@somerandomperson-29-2dnw0hn said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@majikayo
V5 P6 85%

" The boisterous soldiers who had returned to camo"
camo -> camp

Thanks, that should be fixed now.

V1 P5

31% "to check in on Baul's"

Checking in on Baul's what? As nothing requiring ownership is indicated, you could simplify this, "to check in on Baul"

V1P5 0%:

Miss Mystère walked along, asking the servants to prepare tea before showing me into the estate. -> "ushered" ? “My name is Cocolette Blossom,” I replied politely. “I am here today on Miss Mystère’s invitation. -> "at"?
25%: “You got an interest in magic?” Lord Dwarphister asked suddenly. -> wouldn't a noble at least say "You've" or "You have"?
83%: I may not even live to see the seeds I would plant sprout, if they even do at all. -> "to see if the seeds I plant would sprout..."

"Ny name is Daniel Kimberley"
V3p1 89% Ny => My

@Gamen

Hello,

This has been corrected. Thank you for reporting

I’m not sure if this is applicable as the issue appears to be in the original work.

The author revealed that Yahagi and Michelle were engaged in volume 3 part 1.

“… I’ll also introduce you as my fiancée.” That was right. We were finally engaged.

Later, in volume 4 part 9, Yahagi reveals that he plans on proposing that evening:

What was going to happen when I proposed to her after this?

If JNC has authorization, the plot hole could be resolved via modifying the 2nd quote to say that Yahagi is setting a wedding date.

V2 P3 (42% - next to last line on page)

..., I threw my first out in front of me.

I threw my fist out in front of me.

(since the next line says the pope's fist slammed into hers, "first" should be changed to "fist")