V4 P3 (39% - 10th line from bottom of page)

Since this tactic involved aiming at an attack at the underbellies of enemies flying above,...

aiming an attack...

(Better syntex - you're aiming at enemy ships, not at the battle itself)

v4p3:

60% - since the private forces of the nobility were just that—private--they followed -> A double hyphen was used, instead of a dash.

v2p9:

98% - […], Ria launched herself from my arms -> Lia

V6P1
~74%

as he finally yelled, still writhing over the ground

Apologies if it is okay as it is, but maybe wrong word / missing an 'on'? writhing over the ground->writhing on the ground
(or writhing over the ground->writhing over on the ground)

@MFDelta said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

v11p7 ~85%:

I had heard on some trivia show that Finland was where Santa Clause was from, but who knows really.

The Santa Clause was filmed in the United States and Canada by Hollywood Pictures, though it is possible that Yoshin does not know this

It's a real classic, that one.

V3P2 46%:
I'm so happy that the weaving class uses the right weaving terms! However, I don't think "wrapping the thread around the loom" makes sense. That sounds like Patience is making a yarn ball with the loom frame at its center. I guess that could apply to looms without moving parts, like tapestry frames, where you manually snake the weft between stationary warp threads for every row. But Patience later says "the wefts were threaded with a quick swish", so that means the warp must've been threaded into heddles that can move up and down, so I'm assuming the class is using rigid heddle looms or tabletop harness looms. To my limited knowledge, "wrapping the warp around the loom" wouldn't be possible with those models. A common general term for setting up a new warp on a loom is "warping the loom".

V1P5:

15%: "Could someone pop off back to Japan and grab me a bike or segway, please?"

This might need some review. According to Wikipedia "Segway" is a registered trademark and I've usually seen it spelled with a capital S.

V4 P6 (94% - 3rd line from bottom of last page)

She had competed with her brother before as target practice and won,...

competed with her brother before at target practice...
-or- competed with her brother before in target practice...

v5p10:

98% - I imagined that these peeches could get you […] -> It’s been all about the peaches on either side of this spelling, so I’m assuming that it’s a typo. :)

v11p6 ~26%:

If Metea found a hole that was the perfect shape, I bed she'd—"

bed -> bet

V8, P4, around 8%:

I’d rather you didn’t expectme expect me to do anything else.

Missing space.

V1 P11 (80% - 11th line from bottom of page)

A number of candidates had forth,...

A number of candidates had come forth,...

(Better syntex for understanding)

It might be just me and my bad English, so I ask first if someone can explain it to me if I just misunderstood

prepub snippet

I do not understand why the verb Scout is written like a subject.

I can somewhat understand it when it is in other parts meant to highlight Scouting Magic, making it stand out more so people understand it is something special.

But sometimes it feels rather confusing like in this case where it does not feel right? Can someone enlighten me? Thanks in advance!

V1 P4 (44% - 3rd line below Sentence beginning with:"Astrid, the president"...)

...presented their inventions and hobnob with colleagues.

and hobnobbed with colleagues.

(since the verb "presented" is used (past-tense) "hobnob" should also be past-tense (e.g. ...in which all inventors in attendance presented their inventions and hobnobbed with colleagues.

@jjyoung Just curious where you see that it should expire on Sep 15 because when I hover over the parts it shows they expired Aug 15 which seems to fall in line with the general expiration rule of the 15th of the month following the release of the ebook.

Arc 1 v5 p17

~10%

He couldn’t cut through the knives when he got close, and the moment he moved away, the throwing knives hurtled his way. Ryo had never faced such an before, which was perhaps why—

such an what before? Maybe opponent?

~63%

Ryo remembered that Sera, the Matriarc, and the guardian beast from Nils’s village had said regarding the substance emanating from his body.

=> Matriarch

V2 P2: "absorbed into the magestone" should be "magesword" -- this is the Emperor trying to power up his sword.

Oops. I assume it's too late to fix since the book has already been available in print for a bit now, but was re-reading Volume 11 and noticed a continuity error.

Halfway through Volume 11, Chapter 3, the family starts talking about an increase in parts of the animal population, and speculating that it's because they killed two bears. Diana later comments, "I've only seen one once."

In the novels, Forge Eizo has actually killed three bears. Eizo soloed the first bear in Volume 1. They killed a second bear in Volume 4 when a bear invaded Jolanda's home (Diana actually dealt the killing blow on that one). And the third bear in Volume 5 was how they got Lucy.

It's probably a discontinuity from the original web version of the story, since I believe Jolanda was a new character introduced for the novelization. I assume in the web version there were only two bears, and they forgot to correct the count in the Volume 11 reflections.