V7P3, 76%: "As soon as they saw that we were [making] a break for it"

@Hylebos said in Looks like a Job for a Maid! The Tales of a Dismissed Supermaid - Corrections Topic:

v5p6 ~71%:

"I could tell just by watching the way he cooked—it was all a bit off, from the way he chopped the veges to how he cooked the meat.

veges -> veggies? This might legitimately be one of those style guide things where y'all are to prefer the spelling of certain words one way or another but I just wanted to double check to make sure.

I had assumed that it was an intentional misspelling, but searching through the previous four books doesn’t show any previous uses of “veges” or “veggies”. It’s been “vegetables” all the way… What will the overlord here decide? :)

V3 P6, 9%
"Meaning Werlick was the one who forged that sword"
Werlick -> Werlich

62%
"Ren waited from the incoming blow, his stance unsteady, but his sword ready to move at a moment’s notice. It was quite the contradiction."
From -> for. (Or 'waited from' -> awaited)

98%
"Fiona’s hands slowly fell from her shoulders and he grabbed the hem of Ren’s sleeve."
He -> she

v6 p6

~5%

“Sure do!” Blanc replied. “You were talking about taking over portal towns, right? Though, for what reason, I’m still not exactly sure.”
“Right! That’s right!” Lyla said. “So why did you mention something about a mafia?”
“Well, by portal team, you mean those towns next to the dungeons, right? In Shape, that’d be the town of Klinngl, since it’s next to the one-star dungeon, the Cherva Conifer Forest!”

portal town

v5P2p6:

63% - Morizt -> Moritz

V4, P7, around 61%:

Two Days Since Firing the KilnToday, I was joined by Mer and Danae,

There should be a line break between "Kiln" and "Today".

V2P3, 27%: "Elementary spirit arts were taught at the sixth rank, but [he|Akira] couldn't even reach the rank below that."

This isn't really correction, but more of a question:
In Volume 6, at 17% of part 1, Aoi says, "the temporal beings known as spirits."
Would it be better to use the word "ephemeral" instead of "temporal" in this context?

V14 P12, 22%
“Oh, right, there’s this amazing spell that [can] chop right through a bundle of roots,” said Yoshino.

26%
“The Planeshift spell does not work [well? easily?] against living beings, but it apparently works against normal treants, correct?” Kaho asked.

V8P9, 46%:

I channeled mithril into my sword, took aim, and swung down
[…]
I looked down and saw my mithril sword crumble to dust until it had disappeared completely.
That was because I'd infused it with divine power.

should be divine power judging by the later text (from the start of the next section down the page).

93%:

I unleashed an area Tornado spell. It swept up the monsters in its funnel...but then disappeared a moment later.
It won't work after all, then. Chris had said that the magic-type monsters at the back had ways to interfere with attack spells, and she was right. The reason I'd decided to join the fray directly was because it had looked like spells would work.

should that be wouldn’t?

v6p5:

33% - traveling along the cost, -> Typo: coast 97% - when they wake up they’re head is perfectly clear -> their

v2p2:

87% - Haruka’s training regiment and facilities […] -> Wrong word/misspelling, unless a military unit was intended: Haruka’s training regimen […]

10.4

I could technically have a bit of alcohol if I used magic to boost my kidney function.

The breakdown of alcohol happens entirely in the liver.

This is common knowledge where I'm from, and I thought everywhere. Is it not in Japan?

Might be something to consider localizing.

(The kidneys can't concentrate alcohol. Totally drunk, your blood might be 0.2% alcohol. One-fifth of one percent. At that 0.2% BAC, only 0.2% of what the kidneys remove will be alcohol. Basically nothing. Relying just on your kidneys, drinking a lot of water, you would get sober in a few weeks, maybe.)

v7 p5

~1%

I’d come to a pivotal decision point. I wasn’t about to let this group of soldiers deliver the supplies, of course. But I needed to locate the Jaysha’s party as a matter of priority, because with each passing minute, there was a growing danger that they might launch an ambush on Camille and the others. I had a good chance of finding them if I followed the resupply team, but I’d need to take into consideration that I might end up in a head-on fight. I’d make things a lot easier for myself if I destroyed the supplies and exhausted their resupply team first.

@zeji13 said in The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic:

locate the Jaysha's party -> locate Aishe's party

There's definitely something wrong there, but it's not clear what the fix should be. It might be what you propose, but since there are multiple other parties in the dungeon it might be something like:

But I needed to locate the other parties as a matter of priority, because with each passing minute, there was a growing danger that they might launch an ambush on Camille and the others. I had a good chance of finding at least one of them if I followed the resupply team

V1, P10 around 52%:

One Saturday after everything calmed down,Maya down, Maya and I were visiting our parents’ graves.

Missing space.

Around 78%:

Ruka hurriedly shook her head, denying what RInne Rinne had said.

Capitalization mistake.

V7 P2 (37% - 13th line down from top of page)

As time passed, it wore down there their physical and mental strength.

Remove "there" from sentence.

e.g. As time passed it wore down their physical and mental strength.

For volume 18: In part 5, 'beat red' should be 'beet red'

Edit: Also in part 6 it should be 'bare skin' not 'bear skin'

In part 7 it should be "forbidden tome" not "forbidden tomb" and "gripped heart" should be "gripped her heart"

In part 8, "to empty her stomach" should probably be something like "to fill her empty stomach"

v13p7 ~80%

Gamut hat to go through Rohzenheim […]

Should probably be Giamut.