V2 P3 (55% - 11th & 12th line down from top of page,

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It's already been established several times that Lofus lost his left arm and left eyesight during the sea battle. His own father stated: "I also heard that you lost your left arm and sight in your left eye." during his discussion with Lofus.

If the left arm is missing, so is the left hand. Therefore, for accuracy in the story line, "hands" should be changed to "hand".

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

I am aware that this almost goes to the side of nitpicky, but since it caught my attention I will bring it up. You can just ignore it if need be, after all.

Volume 6, part 3:

[56%] “You. Yes, the skinny old man with the white in your hair. […]”

While in Japanese people say that hair turns white as they age (right?), in English we usually talk about graying.

"the white" -> "(the) gray"

Edit: Volume 6, part 10:

[17%] Claire couldn’t express her true feelings and had to juggle watching the expressions of others while changing her own to match hers to match.

Repetition.

[62%] […] that powerful woman had a way of taking on an older sister role around those she alongside.

Missing a word.

Apologies, should all be fixed now. And great call on the gray hair!

@Iseguy said in The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic:

6.2

Elena glutched the knife to her chest and nodded.

“clutched”

Hi, sorry for the tardy reply! This is actually correct; per Merriam-Webster, "to glutch" is "to clutch an object received from, bequeathed by, or pertaining to the Grinch." That's actually where Elena got that knife. It's all explained in this year's Christmas bonus story, but sadly, due to licensing issues, it probably will not be translated, hence the apparent continuity error.

Spoilered just in case:

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We still haven't gotten last year's Christmas story, in which

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v3 p2

~45%

Einharjar Palace, where the emperor resided with his family, was situated in the heart of the capital of Grenflare.

~55%

The complex designs gracing Einherjar Palace’s walls slowly came into view.

The spelling of the palace's name should be consistent. I believe the usual spelling is Einherjar.

v32p5 ~5%:

As Shilly Rou continued to mash up the shaska, it was easy to tell that the pulp was getting stickier and sticker over time.

sticker over time -> stickier over time.

V3 P9 (12% - Line 9 & 10 from top of the page)

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Change "award" to "away".

Thank you for these corrections.

v5p4:

92% - Without her rope, it probably would’ve taken a lot longer for Lilia and I to reach the shore. -> Probably a case where me should be used, since “a lot longer for I to reach the shore” just doesn’t work: a lot longer for Lilia and me to reach the shore.

V2P8:

~44%:

You get coconut juice and oil from them

In English, I've only ever heard the liquid in a coconut referred to as coconut water. Unless it's mixed with a bunch of other junk, and then it's "juice". And the liquid from the flesh is "milk" somehow.

Also ~44%:

Even with easy jobs, this moment always was always a relief.

Extra always.

v4 p10

~5%

<Holy mother of vague, Mali. If you worded it that way on purpose to both grab my attention, then congratulations, it worked.>

Something seems awkward here. "Both" is used to indicate two or more things -- but there is no additional thing mentioned beyond the grabbing of Leah's attention, e.g. both grab my attention and confuse me. Maybe the both is unnecessary and can be omitted?

@zeji13 said in The Petty Villain Plays by the Rules - Corrections Topic:

v1p12:

Nanalie family name is Ronamis in the chapter title and RonamisRominas in the rest of the chapter. Not sure which is the right one, but the latter looks like a bulk replace mistake.

Yep, "Replace All" mistake was the first thing I thought of too.

V12 P8 (80% - 13th & 14 line up from bottom of page)

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add "if" to sentence for better syntax.

V5 P11, ~26%

I kept Detect Mana active and watched as Chris's mana level went down. Then I used Regulate Mana to restock her with my Euini's mana stores.

Should probably be "my and Euini's".

Vol2 p8, 57%, "there's a large drop in inefficiency" should just be "there's a large drop in efficiency"

V3P9:

~65% "oh say, twenty-five celsius, and fifty percent"
~86% "add two tablespoons of sugar"

Gotta love the Anglophone world's inconsistent use of metric/imperial in everyday speech.

V2P8
though she sometimes said some words that were too difficult for me to grasp, such as, "I wonder how I can get some good old fan service to happen. Maybe Prince Raph would be happy if he got a good glimpse of my panties?"

I think you should probably reword the whole sentence around the word "pantsushot".
Like "Maybe Prince Ralph would be glad if I gave him a pantsushot from time to time?"

V3 P3 (82% - 6th line up from bottom of page)

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Replace "mover" with "move".

Part 8, at 69%, pretty sure the wrong name was used. All 4 of them are supposed to have attacked, yet Franz's name is used twice. I think the first one, where Franz ised magic, as supposed to be Connie instead, as Franz was running with a sword at the time.