@missionpoit It looks like this was a misinterpretation on our end and should be "malt" instead of maltose. Good catch, thank you!

V1P2
~21%

abuse he’d endured by the hand adults

Missing word? (I am see it is ask before but it is not change but some other correction are have change in prepub) by the hand adults->by the hand of adults

~32%

It sounded like she was speaking from experience

Missing fullstop? experience->experience.

~84%

It was a future was so dazzlingly bright that it hurt to look at.

Missing word? future was so -> future that was so

V1P3
~0%

“No need to worry about that, Nikura,” Kenji said confidentially after checking the gauge he was carrying.

Maybe wrong word? (not sure if this needs to be secret from other?) confidentially->confidently

~0%

Kenji’s gaze shifted to the spot where imagined Ryota was waiting.

Missing word? where imagined->where he imagined

~0%

challenging them to strike the blights that the defense brigade rounded up with as much power they could muster.

Missing word? as much power they->as much power as they

~12%

Akira gritted his teeth as he noticed the other shielders staring at him

Missing fullstop? at him->at him.

~32%

A thunderous fwum! followed

Missing fullstop? followed->followed.

~59%

her power levels steadily climbing

Missing fullstop? steadily climbing->steadily climbing.

~71%

the look that appeared on Saki’s face “What’s wrong?”

Missing fullstop? (Ask because speech is start with capital) face “What’s->face. “What’s

~94%

Word Notes: Spirit Art Styles

Missing letter? Word->World

V1P4
~0%

they rose and thrust their spears into hog one after the other.

Missing word? into hog->into the hog

~0%

Since the incident hadn’t been too serious, Kenji called for the leader of the gunners rather than demand an explanation from the ground squad.

Wrong tense? demand->demanding

~42%

“Ha. The old man’s backing him changes nothing.

Extra " 's "? The old man’s backing him->The old man backing him (or The old man’s backing him->The old man’s backing)

~63%

Haru knew about Akira being exiled after failing to get recognized as an adherent in his hometown and understood why was afraid to go through another lot drawing ceremony.

Missing word? why was->why he was

~84%

Thinking back, everything he’d about him was weird.

Extra word? everything he'd about->everything about

~84%

Kozaburo folded in his arms

Maybe extra word? folded in his arms->folded his arms

V1P5
~0%

writing something at the rear of the reception area,

Wrong sentence end? (Because next is start with capital) area,->area.

~12%

the Ugetsu and their retainers had begun openly showing their disdain for him

Missing full stop? him->him.

~12%

except the people were gone, and shrine grounds surrounding him were entirely peaceful.

Missing word?; and shrine->and the shrine

~24%

His thoughts grew muddled when to make sense of what he was seeing.

Missing word? when to make->when trying to make (or just when->trying)

~35%

“All right...” Akira reigned himself to walking to the northeast side of the city.

Missing letter/wrong word? reigned->resigned

~59%

he looked at his own palm and found it was turning translucent along the rest of his arm.

Missing word? along->along with (or alongside)

~71%

“‘Show thy devotion unto Kugatachi...’”

Maybe extra ‘ here? (Show thy devotion for other shrine are just have " not ’ too, I do not know if this shrine is special?) “‘Show thy devotion unto Kugatachi...’”->“Show thy devotion unto Kugatachi...”

~71%

Akira thought nothing in response to the girl’s words except, Oh, okay...

Extra capital? Oh->oh

~82%

“‘Show thy devotion unto Chinowa?!’”

Also extra ‘ here? (First three are not have but Kugatachi and Chinowa are have?) “‘Show thy devotion unto Chinowa?!’” ->“Show thy devotion unto Chinowa?!”

V1P6
~0%

Under the flickering orange light of lamps, some of burning oil and others electrical, the festival music was growing louder, the crowd more lively along the path.

Missing word? crowd more->crowd growing more

~13%

Though he’d never met this woman before, his heart filled with warmth, as he’d lived with her for many years.

Maybe missing word? (since he has actually lived with her but not sure if he knows that when Akira thinks this) as he'd->as if he'd

~40%

Huh...?”

Missing start "? Huh...?”->“Huh...?”

V1 P7
~0%

Under the flicking light of evenly spaced lamps,

Wrong word? flicking->flickering

~0%

Divine precincts weren’t subject to natural laws nor defined by physics.

Maybe wrong word? defined->confined

~13%

But however imperfect though he might have been,

Maybe extra word? however imperfect though->however imperfect

~40%

Three Grand Shrines and Four Temples maintained a strict policy stating that

Missing starting word? Three Grand Shrines->The Three Grand Shrines

~67%

he realized that a girl with no more than twelve years life experience had just just seen right through him.

Extra word? just just->just

@karasutengu Thank you! It'll be fixed in the final version.

v1p7:

51% - If I can’t kill when she’s queen -> Missing word? If I can’t kill her when she’s queen

V1P4 ~15% in:
"An incredulous claim."

Perhaps "incredible" was intended here? (Only a person can be incredulous, not a claim).

Hope it's not too late yet:

V4P3 ~43%

[...] with the other Rogeubert sailors, [...]

should be Roguebert.

~52%

[...] some kind of liesurely cruise?

should be leisurely.

V4P4 ~63%

[...] he came from the from a family of knights [....]

"from the" is duplicate, kinda.

~67%

"Lofus, not everyone like black coffee," [...]

should be likes.

V4P5 36%

[...] reproduce, leaving to even mightier mages.

should probably be leading.

~45%

[...] they had beene on the worst of terms

should be been.

~73%

[...] among thecream of the crop [...]

should be the cream.

V4P7 ~26%

[...] between a marquess and a duke's house.

Two things feel odd here. First, it should probably be a marquess' or marquess's - Lofus is not yet head of his house. Second, while house appears possible, I'm not sure if the heirs to the house can be considered speaking as the house - maybe it should be just that, heirs instead of house.

~30%

[...] lifed a life of isolation.

Should be lived.

~48%

[...] killed. the entirety [...]

should be The.

Also, just as a comment, the gender neutral version here reads weird as it jumps from the singular "the magistrate was" to the plural "they were".

~52%

[...] the evil magistrate and auditor was executed [...]

Weren't these two different persons? The jobs would usually be opposite to each other.

~57%

[...] staunchly loyal to Luens [...]

Should be Ludens I think.

~61%

[...] Lofus continued to spend his days in bliss [...]

While I'm sure that ignorance is bliss in this case, is it a common shorthand? Because I doubt that his daily life is bliss...

V4P8 ~18%

They were quickly repelled away.

I'd remove the away. It makes no sense together with repelled.

~55%

"Ah, revenge for someone close you,"

Misses a to.

~73%

[...] for the prestige.I'm the odd one out [...]

Misses a space after the period.

V4P9 91%

[...] compatible with holumagic [...]

Maybe holy magic? I can't be sure this is not some weird play, but...

And indeed, she's has shown us [...]

I really prefer the has over the 's, but one needs to go.

~96%

Just because she's very compatible with holy magic, it's not like she can do much anyway.

That sentence needs rewording, e.g. Just because [...] does't mean she can or Even though she's [...] it's not like or something along that.

~100%

[...] at all, but Lofus, uses it as easily [...]

The second comma shouldn't be there.

@Hylebos said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

v14p3 ~0%:

Then again, there was the off chance a golem could just hip over the bulwark since they had legs.

hip -> trip, though I suppose it could have also been hop, though that seems less likely.

I’m casting a vote for “hop”, because of the “then again” there. :)

73% - A few days had passed since we had first discovered a raw garnet, and we’d much faster progress with mapping out the passageway. -> Maybe technically correct as a contraction of “we had much faster progress”, but I’m inclined to suggest “and we’d made much faster progress” or just take the contraction out. Or are too many “we had”s in one sentence not a good idea? ;)

V13 P9, 6%
"Ripples formed on the surface of the coffee in Dahlia’s hands. She decided to set down her cup to add some milk into it."
Then just following on:
13% "Dahlia was served more coffee, but she did not reach for it. That was how surprised she was by what Zanardi said."

Probably not intended that way, but this brings to mind the latest Naked Gun movie - each time coffee is set down, even if it's a full cup just been ordered, a new cup is put into their hands immediately.

Granted, time could be passing by quicker than I realised in this scene, with her previous cup growing cold and there being overly attentive staff, but adding in milk is often done when coffee is too hot still, so seemed a little jarring with nothing in between particularly giving a reason for it.

22% “Miss Rossetti, do you perhaps find this repulsing?” Zanardi asked.
My instincts lean towards 'repulsive' over 'repulsing' here

v3p3 ~82%:

"M-Mlitary regulations?"

Mlitary -> Military.

Also, the original post of the thread should be updated to point to the latest discussion topic, no?

@strangeattractor said in Trials and Tribulations - Corrections Topic:

I would have appreciated more speech tags so I would have some idea who is talking.

I agree, and this series is not the only one that has this issue.

V8.2 P15, 9%
"And both of Akira’s black blades shattered—along with Dorus’."
...
"But Akira halted his final blow right in front of Dorus’ nose."
...
"I won’t force you—not sure I can with my blades gone anyway"
...
“Thanks, that’s a huge relief,” Akira said with a sigh of his own. He lowered his blade away from Dorus’s face at last.

I found it a little hard to keep track of things in this sequence. After Akira's blades were broken, I assumed in the next instance that his 'final blow' was a punch, or similar. But then at the end he lowers his blade? (I don't think I missed him equipping a new weapon, or any mention of his swords repairing themselves)

29%
"And so the farther east one traveled toward the Front Line, the less influence the Big Five had on."
Sentence ends awkwardly. Likely to drop the 'on', or add a subject 'had on them/on the adventurer'

71%
"Though not everything was resolved or and Akira was still in danger, of course, at least he had kept his spirits up in a situation anyone would recognise as hopeless."
Erroneous 'or'. To be either dropped, or might have some missing words to follow it.

@eggnog said in In Another World with Household Spells - Corrections Topic:

V6P8 18% and everywhere else that "force" is mentioned:

"Force is what makes things work," I explained."[...] When force is applied to the food we eat, it becomes energy to move our bodies. A growing flower uses force to take energy from the sun[...]"

This is a very strange definition of force. The physics concept of force is a push or pull on a object, with a magnitude and direction. It's not the same thing as a chemical reaction which is what most of her examples sound like to me. While force is indeed applied to the food we eat when we chew it, I don't get the impression Patience is describing chewing there. Is Patience giving a meaningless explanation in Japanese, or is there another word that force might be translated as...? I think she's describing the conversion of energy from one form to another, so maaaaybe transduction? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transducer

I agree that what she is describing is a lot closer to energy transduction than anything else.
However, given the apparently primitive state of that world's natural philosophy, and the fact that Patience is just trying to get basic concepts across to her little brothers, I had assumed that she wasn't even trying to use the terminology correctly in terms of real world physics but was just repurposing terminology for her own ends.

V5p1:

0%: "from about halfway down all the way to their apexes" -> halfway up (just nitpicking directionality 8-) 9%: had known Solare back when he was being bullied by the other students.” -> extra quotes 36%: Strath, Elisa, and Shenley slowly followed from behind.” -> extra quotes

V10 P13, 60%
"With a bouquet of flowers in his hands that he had convinced a florist [to] put together at the break of dawn..."

v5 p5

~45%

Lily was taken to the first aid tent, and Commander Jacqueline made her way to the commanders’ tent to give her report. As for me, I’d completed the mission, thus freeing me from the team, so I returned to my tent. I sensed about two people inside—presumablySumire and Sara.

=> presumably Sumire

@Libri-Liberorum That one at least proves this is human translated. No machine would have made such miss take.

V1 P6, 85%
“I see I’ve lost,” Earl Schonheir replied. “You performed admirably"
Schonheir -> Schonheit

V4P5, 8%: “Also, there are some pretty healers hiding out in the institute." - while possibly also true, there’s a word missing like “good”.