v6p5 ~26%:

Francesca absolutely picked up on Emma nonchalant;y interpreting the cat language.

nonchalant;y -> nonchalantly

This is a general thing, but sometimes the word "female" is used in odd places.

Volume 4 Part 1 Part 7 has sentences like "I'm glad to see another female reaching new heights...." and "I say nothing to females in jest." when it should be "another woman reaching new heights" and "I say nothing to women in jest."

v5p8 ~11%:

Even if, worst-case scenario, he ends up biting the hand that feeds him,, you won't have any trouble putting him down, Commander."

feeds him,, -> feeds him,

V1P15

Claws of wind tore ruthlessly through the monsters' thick hide, ...

Plural monsters, so hide -> hides

a1v6p15 21%

"With the lunch box his mother had made in hand, Captain Bure guided Ryo" - while it's possible that his mother had made him a lunch box, it is more likely that she made him a box lunch. 50%: "adjutant to the vice commander of the Imperial Magic Divisio—bowed before him." - Division 71%: "And their duel to the next level." - went to the next level? graduated to the next level? advanced to the next level?

V7P1, 99%: "In the first place, my high offenses didn't mean much" - should probably be just "offense", since we're not talking about a stat rather than a list of crimes.

V4 P2, 28%
"I made my way down into the clearing and over to Sumire just as it started fussing, assumingly out of frustration."
Assumingly -> presumably, or 'I assumed'

It looks like part 5 was uploaded a second time instead os part 6

V4p9 5%:

only had Henry or I to play with

I -> me
It's the object case in "had me to play with", and the conjunction doesn't change that.

Part 12, around 90%, Krai is thinking "I wanted to vomit" but IIRC in past prepubs he kept using "barf" in this sort of catchphrase situation. I'm not sure if this was later changed in the published volumes though, sorry.

V5, P4, around 52%:

Count Vadpauvre was stripped of his title at the was firm request of the nobility.

Extra word.

V3 P6 (38% - end of 8th line down from top of page)

alt text

Adding "see" helps the sentence make more sense.

V3 P11, 65% "After beating them senseless with physics"
Possibly as intended, though the phrasing is quite peculiar to me. Perhaps instead, 'After physically beating them senseless'?

96%
"I slowly exhaled the breath that threatened to stop..."
Might be just a failure of understanding on my part, but I couldn't quite make sense of this sentence as is.
I could come up with a few variations, but not quite sure on the emphasis:
"I slowly exhaled the breath that threatened to be my last..."
"I slowly exhaled the breath I had been holding, the pain threatening to stop me in my tracks..."

V3P7 ~67%
"I couldn't tell. No. I couldn't, but I didn't want to. This couldn't be real." -> "I couldn't tell. No. I couldn't, but I didn't want to. This couldn't be real."

V7P2 ~64%
"I arrived in just in time, before..." -> "I arrived in just in time, before..."

V6P7 ~95%
"...coming for you, Agnes." -> "...coming for from you, Agnes."

V12P6 ~91%
"...much in the way of romance the dogkin's explanation..." -> "...much in the way of romance, the dogkin's explanation..."

Shortly into today's release, Demon God becomes Demon king and every instance after that is the same way until the end of the release.