V5 P11, ~26%

I kept Detect Mana active and watched as Chris's mana level went down. Then I used Regulate Mana to restock her with my Euini's mana stores.

Should probably be "my and Euini's".

If not too late

V2P11, “guess he can’t bestow her mana on you!” - she

Vol2 p8, 57%, "there's a large drop in inefficiency" should just be "there's a large drop in efficiency"

V3P9:

~65% "oh say, twenty-five celsius, and fifty percent"
~86% "add two tablespoons of sugar"

Gotta love the Anglophone world's inconsistent use of metric/imperial in everyday speech.

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

Volume 6, part 9:

[28%] “It’s getting pretty hot these days, isn’t it?” […]

“Oh... Y-Yeah, it has.”

"has" -> "is" (or alternatively change the previous line to “It’s gotten pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”)

Thanks, should be fixed now.

V2P3
[56%] Ever since Norn was rescued, Lillia and Norn had been helping her ➡ Fol, I think.

V2P8
though she sometimes said some words that were too difficult for me to grasp, such as, "I wonder how I can get some good old fan service to happen. Maybe Prince Raph would be happy if he got a good glimpse of my panties?"

I think you should probably reword the whole sentence around the word "pantsushot".
Like "Maybe Prince Ralph would be glad if I gave him a pantsushot from time to time?"

V3 P3 (82% - 6th line up from bottom of page)

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Replace "mover" with "move".

Part 8, at 69%, pretty sure the wrong name was used. All 4 of them are supposed to have attacked, yet Franz's name is used twice. I think the first one, where Franz ised magic, as supposed to be Connie instead, as Franz was running with a sword at the time.

Volume 3 - Part 5:

[5%] Oh no, you’vc found my weak spots! >> should be you've

V14P8 91%: All six types of ogres - Red Ogre, Blue Ogre, Yellow Ogre, White Ogre, Yellow Ogre, and Black Ogre : Yellow Ogre is listed twice instead of some other colour.

V5 P9
(9% - 9th line down from top of page)

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Add missing "she" to sentence

(91% - 11th line down from top of page)

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"First and foremost" - most importantly; more than anything else.
e.g. "I'm first and foremost a writer"

In part 14 at about 56% Krai says "that's not my ken" given the context I assume the translator just forgot to translate ken to sword.

v4p7:

64% - Even in death, he had been robbed his dignity. -> Probable missing word: he had been robbed of his dignity. I think that some versions of english (British? Another American dialect? Other?) sometimes don't use “of”, but it probably should be there in this case.

V1 P3

84% "Ten years ago, Milly had had everything."

Repetition. Using a single had gives the same meaning while simplifying the sentence.

"Ten years ago, Milly had everything."

@Jojajones We're witnessing the cannonization of a pun. Seen it used in another book title already. A bit blunt if you ask me, but to each generation their sense.

Volume 12 P3:

Haruka, I think you and Haruka could

The double reference to Haruka is weird I could also read it as: Haruka, I think Haruka and Haruka could

Volume 12 P5:

it had been an eternity since last we were able to sup on white rice and the like.

Sup on white rice? What does that mean?

V4P1p4 71%:

Leave it to Martina and I

Should be "to Martina and me". It's the object of a preposition.