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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Corrections in Discussion Topics
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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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    • majikayo

      From Two-Bit Baddie to Total Heartthrob: This Villainess Will Cross-Dress to Impress! Corrections Topic
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      v5p4:

      92% - Without her rope, it probably would’ve taken a lot longer for Lilia and I to reach the shore. -> Probably a case where me should be used, since “a lot longer for I to reach the shore” just doesn’t work: a lot longer for Lilia and me to reach the shore.
    • majikayo

      Looks like a Job for a Maid! The Tales of a Dismissed Supermaid - Corrections Topic
      job for a maid • • majikayo

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      hornet65

      V2P8:

      ~44%:

      You get coconut juice and oil from them

      In English, I've only ever heard the liquid in a coconut referred to as coconut water. Unless it's mixed with a bunch of other junk, and then it's "juice". And the liquid from the flesh is "milk" somehow.

      Also ~44%:

      Even with easy jobs, this moment always was always a relief.

      Extra always.

    • majikayo

      Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic
      zilbagias • • majikayo

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      @Khazidhea said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

      V6 P8, 42%
      "So if vampires seeked out blood for the flavour..."
      I may not be correct on this in this instance, but as I know it: seeked -> sought

      Nope, you are correct. Should be fixed now.

    • majikayo

      The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic
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      V6 P12, 71%
      "She turned to see a girl with hair the colour of burnished iron holding a small crossbow, breathing heard..."
      Heard -> hard

    • majikayo

      EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic
      exp is golden • • majikayo

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      v4 p10

      ~5%

      <Holy mother of vague, Mali. If you worded it that way on purpose to both grab my attention, then congratulations, it worked.>

      Something seems awkward here. "Both" is used to indicate two or more things -- but there is no additional thing mentioned beyond the grabbing of Leah's attention, e.g. both grab my attention and confuse me. Maybe the both is unnecessary and can be omitted?

    • alahue

      The Petty Villain Plays by the Rules - Corrections Topic
      petty villain • • alahue

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      @zeji13 said in The Petty Villain Plays by the Rules - Corrections Topic:

      v1p12:

      Nanalie family name is Ronamis in the chapter title and RonamisRominas in the rest of the chapter. Not sure which is the right one, but the latter looks like a bulk replace mistake.

      Yep, "Replace All" mistake was the first thing I thought of too.

    • alahue

      The Frontier Lord Begins with Zero Subjects - Corrections Topic
      frontier lord • • alahue

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      karasutengu

      V12 P8 (80% - 13th & 14 line up from bottom of page)

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      add "if" to sentence for better syntax.

    • Meiru

      Isekai Walking - Corrections Topic
      isekai walking • • Meiru

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      V5 P11, ~26%

      I kept Detect Mana active and watched as Chris's mana level went down. Then I used Regulate Mana to restock her with my Euini's mana stores.

      Should probably be "my and Euini's".

    • philhouse

      Zero Damage Sword Saint - Corrections
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      Shiroi Hane

      If not too late

      V2P11, “guess he can’t bestow her mana on you!” - she

    • alahue

      Fearsome Witch - Corrections Topic
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      Vol2 p8, 57%, "there's a large drop in inefficiency" should just be "there's a large drop in efficiency"

    • majikayo

      Disowned but Not Disheartened! Life Is Good with Overpowered Magic - Corrections
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      V3P9:

      ~65% "oh say, twenty-five celsius, and fifty percent"
      ~86% "add two tablespoons of sugar"

      Gotta love the Anglophone world's inconsistent use of metric/imperial in everyday speech.

    • Meiru

      Repeated Vice - Corrections Topic
      repeated vice • • Meiru

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      b.scot.morgan

      V2P3
      [56%] Ever since Norn was rescued, Lillia and Norn had been helping her ➡ Fol, I think.

    • Meiru

      Miss Blossom’s Backward Beauty Standards - Corrections Topic
      backward beauty j-novel heart • • Meiru

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      AlexUsman

      V2P8
      though she sometimes said some words that were too difficult for me to grasp, such as, "I wonder how I can get some good old fan service to happen. Maybe Prince Raph would be happy if he got a good glimpse of my panties?"

      I think you should probably reword the whole sentence around the word "pantsushot".
      Like "Maybe Prince Ralph would be glad if I gave him a pantsushot from time to time?"

    • philhouse

      The Goddess Says, "Kill the Tsundere Witch!" - Corrections
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      karasutengu

      V3 P3 (82% - 6th line up from bottom of page)

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      Replace "mover" with "move".

    • majikayo

      One Last Hurrah! The Grayed Heroes Explore a Vivid Future - Corrections Topic
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      radiantmemories

      Part 8, at 69%, pretty sure the wrong name was used. All 4 of them are supposed to have attacked, yet Franz's name is used twice. I think the first one, where Franz ised magic, as supposed to be Connie instead, as Franz was running with a sword at the time.

    • Meiru

      Knock Yourself Out! The Goddess Beat the Final Boss in the Tutorial, So Now I'm Free to Do Whatever - Corrections Topic
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      pcj

      Volume 3 - Part 5:

      [5%] Oh no, you’vc found my weak spots! >> should be you've
    • myskaros

      A Late-Start Tamer's Laid-Back Life - Corrections Topic
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      V14P8 91%: All six types of ogres - Red Ogre, Blue Ogre, Yellow Ogre, White Ogre, Yellow Ogre, and Black Ogre : Yellow Ogre is listed twice instead of some other colour.

    • majikayo

      Duchess in the Attic - Corrections Topic
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      karasutengu

      V5 P9
      (9% - 9th line down from top of page)

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      Add missing "she" to sentence

      (91% - 11th line down from top of page)

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      "First and foremost" - most importantly; more than anything else.
      e.g. "I'm first and foremost a writer"

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