v7 p6

~62%

Out of nowhere, steel arrows rained down from above. Using wind magic, Karla summoned a gust that blew her safely away as the arrows sank into the ground where her feet had been.
Levinstrike.
Ice Lance.
Karla summoned a Levinstrike as she leaped away, which her attacker intercepted with his Ice Lance. The lightning pierced the darkness of the corridor, illuminating a group that was clad in black from head to toe, as well as the wrinkled face of the elderly man who had unleashed Ice Lance. His lips twisted into a crooked smile that didn’t reach his eyes.

What is Levinstrike? Google suggests it's the name of a FF XIV character? Maybe that should be:

Lightningstrike

~77%

> A menacing aura, intertwined with an oddly potent murderous intent, seemed to emanate suddenly from the wizened Elgrim. His combat power was close to 300. Even the champions who fought under him felt their breath catch in their throats, and the monsters who had been watching from nearby scattered in terror.

Please re-check that number. Karla and Alia both have combat power over 1,600 so that should probably be

3,000

(Oh, looks like Tacitus and watem already caught this.)

Volume 3 Part 12
34% placing himself in position to Duke Ealdred -> placing himself in opposition to Duke Ealdred

Volume 4 Part 7
58% I see.. That's an interesting. ->

I see... that's an interesting concept. I see. That's an interesting concept. I see. That's interesting.

59% Due to the punctuation, it looks like Two Days Since Firing the Kiln is supposed to be a section title; perhaps centered and/or placed above the paragraph it is currently in. Ah, I see kingpendragon has already noted this.

Volume 10 Part 4
72% Using magic didn't require took imagination, not just skill and a big enough mana pool to seal the deal.

After reading the next few paragraphs I believe she's trying to say that using magic didn't require imagination, but it wasn't just skill etc... From what Maria told them, it seems the clerics are taught to recall scripture stories to use in place of anatomy knowledge and imagination. Perhaps the sentence could read: Using magic didn't require imagination, but it wasn't just skill and a big enough mana pool to seal the deal.

94% eight hours.' -> eight hours."

v1p11:

16% - What had she fallen for this man? -> Seems like something’s wrong. Perhaps “Why had she fallen for this man?” Or maybe “What had she fallen for in this man?”, but less likely? There’s always “None-of-the-above”, too.

V7P3, 76%: "As soon as they saw that we were [making] a break for it"

@Hylebos said in Looks like a Job for a Maid! The Tales of a Dismissed Supermaid - Corrections Topic:

v5p6 ~71%:

"I could tell just by watching the way he cooked—it was all a bit off, from the way he chopped the veges to how he cooked the meat.

veges -> veggies? This might legitimately be one of those style guide things where y'all are to prefer the spelling of certain words one way or another but I just wanted to double check to make sure.

I had assumed that it was an intentional misspelling, but searching through the previous four books doesn’t show any previous uses of “veges” or “veggies”. It’s been “vegetables” all the way… What will the overlord here decide? :)

V3 P6, 9%
"Meaning Werlick was the one who forged that sword"
Werlick -> Werlich

62%
"Ren waited from the incoming blow, his stance unsteady, but his sword ready to move at a moment’s notice. It was quite the contradiction."
From -> for. (Or 'waited from' -> awaited)

98%
"Fiona’s hands slowly fell from her shoulders and he grabbed the hem of Ren’s sleeve."
He -> she

v6 p6

~5%

“Sure do!” Blanc replied. “You were talking about taking over portal towns, right? Though, for what reason, I’m still not exactly sure.”
“Right! That’s right!” Lyla said. “So why did you mention something about a mafia?”
“Well, by portal team, you mean those towns next to the dungeons, right? In Shape, that’d be the town of Klinngl, since it’s next to the one-star dungeon, the Cherva Conifer Forest!”

portal town

v5P2p6:

63% - Morizt -> Moritz

V2P3, 27%: "Elementary spirit arts were taught at the sixth rank, but [he|Akira] couldn't even reach the rank below that."

This isn't really correction, but more of a question:
In Volume 6, at 17% of part 1, Aoi says, "the temporal beings known as spirits."
Would it be better to use the word "ephemeral" instead of "temporal" in this context?

V14 P12, 22%
“Oh, right, there’s this amazing spell that [can] chop right through a bundle of roots,” said Yoshino.

26%
“The Planeshift spell does not work [well? easily?] against living beings, but it apparently works against normal treants, correct?” Kaho asked.

V8P9, 46%:

I channeled mithril into my sword, took aim, and swung down
[…]
I looked down and saw my mithril sword crumble to dust until it had disappeared completely.
That was because I'd infused it with divine power.

should be divine power judging by the later text (from the start of the next section down the page).

93%:

I unleashed an area Tornado spell. It swept up the monsters in its funnel...but then disappeared a moment later.
It won't work after all, then. Chris had said that the magic-type monsters at the back had ways to interfere with attack spells, and she was right. The reason I'd decided to join the fray directly was because it had looked like spells would work.

should that be wouldn’t?

v6p5:

33% - traveling along the cost, -> Typo: coast 97% - when they wake up they’re head is perfectly clear -> their

v2p2:

87% - Haruka’s training regiment and facilities […] -> Wrong word/misspelling, unless a military unit was intended: Haruka’s training regimen […]

V1, P10 around 52%:

One Saturday after everything calmed down,Maya down, Maya and I were visiting our parents’ graves.

Missing space.

Around 78%:

Ruka hurriedly shook her head, denying what RInne Rinne had said.

Capitalization mistake.

V7 P2 (37% - 13th line down from top of page)

As time passed, it wore down there their physical and mental strength.

Remove "there" from sentence.

e.g. As time passed it wore down their physical and mental strength.