Volume 2 - Part 2:
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Current: The adventurers, face down on the ground, felt the air above their heads being disturbed by the flying body parts.Abel shuddered.
Recommend: The adventurers, face down on the ground, felt the air above their heads being disturbed by the flying body parts. Abel shuddered.
Add space after the period.
[47%]
Current: Next to him, Amon dug into his own plate like a hungry demon hell,
Suggestion: Next to him, Amon dug into his own plate like a hungry demon from hell,
Not sure with this one though, if it's actually missing a word or if demon hell is a monster in this world.
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Current: "Only because I deflected them with my sword," someone said from behind them.Nils jerked around in surprise.
Recommend: "Only because I deflected them with my sword," someone said from behind them. Nils jerked around in surprise.
Add space after the period.