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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Corrections in Discussion Topics
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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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    • philhouse

      Heir to a Monstermancer - Corrections Topic
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      v2 p4

      ~5%

      “In my eyes, there’s a ninety percent chance that Cormeca is a witch. She is a really fishy person. However, we cannot deal with this independently. You understand why Erifell and Dergo are waiting for the Carbuncles, attempting to do this the right way, don’t you?”

      => Derg

      ~85%

      “The five-day arrival estimate refers to when all members of the Carbuncles unit come to Esma on carriage through other intermediary villages. However, that’s not a problem if I get just the one tocome running.”

      => to come

    • majikayo

      The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic
      otome heroine • • majikayo

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      V6 P9, 92%
      As I slipped past the ragged cloth serving as a door, a young dogfolk child, alerted by the greeting, wagged his tail and clung to my leg. Elena, who had been playing with the dwarven child, looked up at me and smiled warmly.
      My read is that this is the same child in each instance. Unless I've missed something and dogfolk and dwarf can be used interchangably, dwarven -> dogfolk.

    • majikayo

      Disowned but Not Disheartened! Life Is Good with Overpowered Magic - Corrections
      disowned • • majikayo

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      Poncho9761

      V3P6 ~70%
      "The amazing thing about childhood friends is that that was all it took for him to understand me." -> "The amazing thing about childhood friends is that that was all it took for him to understand me."
      ~89%
      "How so?"' -> "How so?" (removing the extra apostrophe)
      ~93%
      "Hmm? Oh, I guess it just really just sank in how peaceful it's been lately." -> "Hmm? Oh, I guess it just really just sank in how peaceful it's been lately."

    • alahue

      The Frontier Lord Begins with Zero Subjects - Corrections Topic
      frontier lord • • alahue

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      Poncho9761

      V12P5 ~17%
      "Had he perhaps already realized the Eldan's visit was all in an effort..." -> "Had he perhaps already realized the that Eldan's visit was all in an effort..."

    • Meiru

      Lady Bumpkin and Her Lord Villain - Corrections Topic
      lady bumpkin • • Meiru

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      Poncho9761

      V6P3 ~56%
      "I'd been affected by Master Robin's once before, but after..." -> "I'd been affected by Master Robin's magic once before, but after..."
      Might be unnecessary, but it just felt off reading it w/o the explicit reference to his magic.

    • myskaros

      Min-Maxing My TRPG Build - Corrections Topic
      minmaxing trpg • • myskaros

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      Microdynames

      v11.1 p16 ~38%

      He had some blue blood in him, being the grandson of a noble's illegitimate child

      Could this please be double checked, unless I'm mistaken Giesebrecht's father was married to his mother according to part 3 ~76%.

      ~48%

      Isolde

      Erich and Margit's daughter's name was translated as Iseult back in volume 1, so ideally should be translated the same way here to maintain consistency.

    • myskaros

      To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic
      land mines • • myskaros

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      Segoth

      Vol 12 part 12.

      ~71%: escort questions between towns. In addition, the guild was in charge of dispatched labor

      Questions should be quests.

      escort quests between towns. In addition, the guild was in charge of dispatched labor

    • philhouse

      The Amazing Village Creator - Corrections Topic
      village creator • • philhouse

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      Hylebos

      v2p7 ~50%:

      Seren had told me to go home, but he'd chosen to stay.

      me -> him, pretty sure? At the very least, if there's an anonymous PoV character who is watching Sirius in this part, they're not mentioned again.

      v2p7 ~56%:

      "Father!" they called/

      / -> .

    • Meiru

      Repeated Vice - Corrections Topic
      repeated vice • • Meiru

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      1.8:

      mine drink

      my drink

      1.9:

      No,, that was scheduled

      No, that was scheduled

      he practically forcibly joined in.

      he forcibly joined in. he practically forced his way in.

      Something where it's one or the other, anyway.

    • L

      Tearmoon Empire - Corrections Topic
      j-novel heart tearmoon • • lovelight

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      Libri Liberorum

      V16 P8

      "Forcing them to first live in destitute inspired ...

      destitute -> destitution

    • majikayo

      The Tiny Witch from the Deep Woods - Corrections
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      V3P2 22% Rosmaria and Lyla, her father's wife and her own step sister -> should be half sister, as they have the same father.

    • philhouse

      Trials and Tribulations - Corrections Topic
      trials n tribs j-novel heart • • philhouse

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      eggnog

      V4P1p2 21%:

      it allowed time for Reinald and I to speak alone

      I -> me

      94%:

      thank you for all your help Geoff.

      Suggest adding a comma after "help".

    • L

      By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic
      graceofthegods • • lovelight

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      Hylebos

      v17p7 ~0%:

      With bracelets around my wrists and the rake I made last night in my hand, I asked everyone to give me five meters' birth and encircle me.

      birth -> berth.

    • majikayo

      EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic
      exp is golden • • majikayo

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      b.scot.morgan

      @xdbx said in EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic:

      Should that be rot damage?

      I'm not sure. It could be "rot damage" was intended, or that "DoT damage" (from Damage over Time) was intended.. Both apply in this case, so it could be either.

    • alahue

      Fearsome Witch - Corrections Topic
      fearsome witch • • alahue

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      V2 P5

      76% "things like dragons Though a few of them"

      Appears to be missing some punctuation after dragons.

    • majikayo

      From Two-Bit Baddie to Total Heartthrob: This Villainess Will Cross-Dress to Impress! Corrections Topic
      two-bit baddie • • majikayo

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      Hylebos

      v5p2 ~28%:

      "I'm asking if you say my...my...!" Edward stammered.

      say -> saw.

    • alahue

      The Petty Villain Plays by the Rules - Corrections Topic
      petty villain • • alahue

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      kingpendragon

      V1, P3, around 6%

      “Is it true that anyone can use magic withpractice with practice?”

      Missing space.

    • schuburner

      The Reincarnation of the Strongest Exorcist in Another World - Corrections Topic
      strongexorcist • • schuburner

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      Gamen

      v6p5 80% To the extent that it would frankly be better to use nothing at all.” -> Not sure where this bit of dialogue is supposed to begin, but if it and the previous two paragraphs were all dialogue from Seika it's styled wrong since they should have had only opening quotes until this closing quote.

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