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  Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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  I Shall Survive Using Potions! - Corrections Topic
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  V6P6 60%: And so, we went off of the street and into a thicket where we couldn’t be spotted. We didn’t want to be caught illegally camping out in the open, especially not somewhere we could be seen from the street. If you’re gonna camp, you have to do it somewhere where you can’t be seen. Street is usually used in a town or city; road fits the circumstance better. I brought out chairs and a table, a cooking table, a simple furnace, a water tank, cookware, and some ingredients, then got straight to making dinner. stove fits American usage better. We use furnaces to heat houses. Later, she describes the "furnace" as being like a camping/cooking fire.
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  Mapping: The Trash-Tier Skill That Got Me Into a Top-Tier Party - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 4 - Part 1: [37%] the gargoyle poked at me two or thee more ► It should be three. [38%] wasn’t working like normal. It less effective ► It should be It was. [53%] “Well... ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
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  By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 6 - Part 8: [28%] so this is more of a personal than a business issue. ► Maybe a personal issue than a business one?
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  Demon Lord, Retry! - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 6 - Part 4: [40%] their grudge leading to the/ inevitable revolution ► Remove random / character. Already reported. [69%] “Um..! You’ll get your hands dirty, Master Demon ► It should be 3 periods. [76%] their skin was supple and their hair were luscious. ► It should be was?
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  Outbreak Company - Corrections Topic
  outbreak • • lovelight  

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  @Terabyte said in Outbreak Company - Corrections Topic: [Note] The topic link at the end of the part still points wrongly to https://forums.j-novel.clubtopic/4069/outbreak-company-vol-17-discussion. Missing / after the domain. Thanks. This isn't a side of the site I know much about. @myskaros, is this something that's easy to fix?
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  The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic
  apothecary • • myskaros  

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  @nofairytale said in The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic: (content in spoiler tag) spoiler
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  Fushi no Kami - Corrections Topic
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  @LIbri-Liberorum I was just about to chime in with that one. She's not trying to fight the books.
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  Full Metal Panic! - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 10 - Part 11: [37%] darkness: it Leonard Testarossa and Chidori Kaname. ► Remove it. Or should it be it was?
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  The Sorcerer's Receptionist - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 3 - Part 7 [65%] He must have changed with that clash of light. >> should be flash
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  The Tales of Marielle Clarac - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 6 - Part 2: [49%] When I complained about this, Countless Estelle had ► It should be Countess. [50%] I must say, taking such a step making their behavior ► It should be makes? [82%] of enjoyment you desire from your favourite books.” ► It should be favorite (US spelling).
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  Tearmoon Empire - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 4 - Part 6: [3%] full bloom. He’d revelled in his bountiful ► It should be reveled (US spelling). [7%] knew about royalty and thier ilk pointed ► It should be their. [72%] let me think.... A-Are we assuming that ► It should be 3 periods.
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  A Wild Last Boss Appeared! - Corrections Topic
  wild last boss • • lovelight  

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  @Terabyte Thanks for pointing all these out! They've been updated. The forum link should also be working now.
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  My Friend's Little Sister Has It In for Me! - Corrections Topic
  imouza • • myskaros  

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  @Rawon said in My Friend's Little Sister Has It In for Me! - Corrections Topic: For the second one, I don't actually know the original Japanese (I could look it up, but there's a reason I'm the editor and not the TL), but it's sometimes used in English, too. We'll have to think about keeping it as-is, or replacing it to make it easier to read. Gotta balance "expanding vocabulary" with "keeping it accessible" after all. For reference, I've heard the term but would have assumed it would be written as schtum (although when I saw it written as stumm I immediately read it as the same word without a second thought). I am from England and it's not a word I've ever really used, it's just one I've read and heard a few times over the years and have always immediately understood from the context.
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  Black Summoner - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 4 - Part 1: [94%] hidden in Gerard’s shadow from the neck down.. ► Duplicate period.
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  Monster Tamer - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 3 - Part 4: [45%] a similar ring, although her’s was a different color. ► It should be hers.
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  The Magician Who Rose From Failure - Corrections Topic
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  @LIbri-Liberorum I'm not sure how much detail I should go into, as it concerns unreleased material, but I can assure you that Chain and Wedge aren't moons. It's a peculiarly placed bit of worldbuilding that likely won't be followed up on until next volume at the earliest.
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  Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight - Corrections Topic
  der werwolf • • lovelight  

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  Volume 11 - Part 1: [14%] to Fahn, I said,” Please call the three girls in.” ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly a closing one. Also, move the space before the quote. [56%] bothered to come all the way out the front lines, ► It should be to the ? [57%] Neither Pajam nor Veight was scared of Zagar. ► It should be were.
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  Bibliophile Princess - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 5 - Part 6: [51%] a stray snowball—came spiralling toward me. ► It should be spiraling (US spelling).
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  The White Cat's Revenge as Plotted from the Dragon King's Lap - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 4 - Part 5: [69%] from a nearby house.The soldiers raised ► Missing space.