In the latest part (vol 5 part 12) there seems to be some inconsistency with the name of Edgar's mecha, it sometimes appears as aldiracumber and sometimes aldiradcumber, or an abbreviated form of either of those. I am not sure which is correct but the spelling should probably be reviewed.

V14 P9, 54%
"We bode as much time as possible, and while Her Highness waits..."
Not sure of the tenses here (or of 'bode', that's a new one for me!), but does 'bide' fit better?

V14 P10, 45%
"As despicable as may be, it ends today..."
Might just be a failing to read on my part, but something seems off on this sentence structure. Not sure on the emphasis, could be a missing word ('as despicable as [it/that] may be'; or '[yet] it ends today'). Or even 'As despicable as may be. It ends today'?

V14 P10, 73%
"...I see. So Princess Mia saw through..." muttered Letizia.
"Understood. I shall be right back." Gerta silently slipped out of the kitchen.

Could be foreshadowing/something I hadn't picked up on, but doesn't sound like Letizia. And with Gerta still in the kitchen, would it instead be Rina for both?

91% "Had that Mia seen Siona and Tiona like this..." (Siona -> Sion)

@Tango said in Disowned but Not Disheartened! Life Is Good with Overpowered Magic - Corrections:

V1P10
~70%

When we arrived at the Aspozat residence, it seemed awful busy.

awful -> awfully

I was assuming she just wasn’t being grammatically correct. :) When a character is narrating, it can sometimes be hard to tell, but I suppose that we might as well point it out and let JNC’s editors decide which way to go. ^_^

78%
“It’s a pleasure to make your acquaintance. I’m the head of House Lyntch, Baronet Debbie.”

This should either be baroness or baronetess. Baronet is the male version of a title that's ranked below that of a baron/ess.

Volume 8, Part 1

The loser of each bracket will be invited to a veryspecial project!

I don't think you intended that to be one word.

@Tango said in The Hero and the Sage, Reincarnated and Engaged - Corrections Topic:

V3P5
~32%

“Some people could have theorized, regardless of its veracity, that possessing unique mana could bring one past the realm of humanity.”

Maybe remove the first 'could'? Some have / did theorize it but weren't able to prove it.

Or replace one of the "coulds" with "might"?
Thesaurus time!

V10P4
~24%

A group of sahuagin swarmed her now that she was defenseless. Some raised their harpoons for a swing, others pulled their back for a stab.

Second their -> theirs?

~71%

“As an individual, sure, I was strong. Right now, I’m confident I won’t lose to my old man. With that said—the real strength game from that old man... The fifth head.”

game->came

1.3:

he'd said."Rather than

he'd said. "Rather than

Concerning "swot."
Yep, UK slang.
But I've no clue what would be an equivalent US version.
Or at least not one that isn't completely derogatory.

V4 P7 (88%)

I cannot trustanything yousay.
--> I cannot trust anything you say.
(need to add spaces between words)

8.14:

What w0uld normally

What would normally

Bomiras ain't cool enough to speak L33T.

Vol 5 P3 (13%)

she'd get out of dodge...
--> she'd get out of Dodge...
(This idiom refers to Dodge City, KS in the USA, so the "D" should be capitalized)

v2p11:

14% - Normally, that would have been enough, but. -> Uh… Is a period really the right choice after “but”? Maybe an ellipsis, instead? Get rid of the “but” altogether, and put the ellipsis after “enough”? Or ignore my suggestions, but it feels like I’m reading through the story and hit the current “but.”, trip over it, and fall on my face. All due to the way that sentence ends. It’s a hurtful sentence. :p

v3p6:

38% - dancefloor -> I don’t think that’s a compound noun, and it should be two words: dance floor

I forget the percentages, but I’m wondering why the circonflexe/circumflex is allowed, but the cedille is not. I’ll try to ignore the regular usage of the accent aigu as a comparison, but the circonflexe is not nearly as common. Yeah, this is all about “coup de grâce” getting its diacritic mark and fakahd façade facade not getting what it deserves, too. The cedille has been used elsewhere here with JNC. Is there just no standard governing its usage, leaving it entirely up to each editor?

Thank you once more…

v1p9:

31% - He made their way toward them, […] -> Seems like the wrong possessive…: his

Volume 10 Part 11
85% she buried her face in her pillow. She stood still in that position for a while, but she eventually got up again.
Burying her face in her pillow is something one usually does while lying down, but it could be done standing. However, "she eventually got up again" reinforces that she was lying down. So I believe the line should read:
She stayed still in that position for a while, but she eventually got up again.

11.9

you could just barely tell itwas a staff.

“it was”

Your place, not mine, is by this mystery’s side.

“This mystery's place is by your side, not mine.”

The sea of change in Leila was a testament

“sea change”

From Shakespeare's Tempest. It means something like “sudden metamorphosis.”

Part 10, 14%:

"Hmpf! Color me surprised to see you siding with the rabble. You do know that you're just a guess in their class, I presume?"

guess should be guest.

15.2:

habitat yet.I'd have to walk

habitat yet. I'd have to walk

lol, it's the paragraph just before that mentioned by @MFDelta