15.1:

When I;d checked the beehive

When I'd checked the beehive

They were merely laid inside the baskets, but carefully arranged into a lovely display.

They weren't merely laid inside the baskets, but carefully arranged into a lovely display.

V1P8 ~58% and ~90%: The earlier reference mentions royal library's repository and the latter royal library archival storage...

~58%: "Be sure to comb through the royal library's repository as well."
~90%: "The prime minister mentioned something about 'royal library archival storage.'"

Are these referring to the same part of the royal library (as I could not find another reference that would fit)? The latter is used in quotes too, so the same words should be used for both if so. (The start of P8 goes back to calling it a repository too.)

V8 P4 (8% - 11th line down from top of page)

"But I could ask, the knight had already flown..."

add missing "before" in sentence

e.g. But before I could ask,...

V5 P8, 72%
“She just bound you to her word,” I heard Eri mutter.
The wording of this doesn't quite sit right, to my ear. Something more like "She just bound you to her will by those words"

v5P2p1:

Sometimes “Teach” was capitalized and sometimes it wasn’t, even if it seemed to still be used as a name rather than a verb…

6.8:

So, which is it?
Queeres or Qurees?
I'm presuming the name of the Garage matches the last name of the owner.

V7P8 ~36%

[...] their natural honing instincts [...]

Should probably be homing instincts.

Volume 5 - Part 8:

[24%]

Chapter Eight: Reclaiming Homeland

The formatting is off. It currently has the same format as the normal text.

v1p4 ~30%:

"It is a pleasure to meet you. My name is Freesia Salt. I hope we'll be well acquainted from now on," I I said with a curtsy.

I I said -> I said.

V3p5 18%: Wellmyr should instead be Wellmy

Volume 11 - Part 4:
[~70%]
The insert image does not appear to match the narrative.

V13P13

69%: "If her father were here, he knew he would have given her a brief look" -> she knew he

V1P3
~24%

“Hi, um...” Nodoka began.“E-Excruse me!”

Missing space? began.“E-Excruse ->began. “E-Excruse

@Hylebos This is referring to the the day having an evolution rather than the day of an evolution arriving. Thank you for pointing out that it could be made more clear though.

V7 P8, 47%
"When I changed and went outside, I found Kent standing by the bud."
'The bud' -> 'the buds' or 'a bud'

93%
“Those vegetables look delicious. I want them all.”
Perhaps not an error, but my reading from this is that she wants to buy the entire stock, not just one of each.

v1p7 ~96%

[...] training sessions, " I murmured [...]

Has a stray space after the comma.

v1p8

89% - Tena -> Tenan

V18P1

31% However, that wasn't wall ->Presumably that wasn't 'all'.