v5 p6

~5%

A bow of light materialized in the Archangel’s hand. He drew it swiftly in one, continuous motion, loosing an arrow that flew toward Leah with incredulous speed—an immediate use of force. Either that was how he greeted all intruders, or Leah had successfully provoked him.

=> incredible. "Incredulous" is a state of mind, specifically "skeptical" or "disbelieving".

That being said, Merriam-Webster indicates there is a non-standard meaning of "incredible":

nonstandard : incredible sense 1
incredible adjective
1 : too extraordinary and improbable to be believed

So maybe the usage was intended here?

~ 15%

But the fact that she even could execute such precise, stable movements at her absolute limit... That was all thanks to her relentless training. Since she couldn’t train her muscles in real life, her physical speed could never improve. So instead, she honed everything else to a razor’s edge. Her ability to read ahead—her perception, her insight.

Something seems off with the phrasing -- why can't she train her muscles in real life? Maybe that sentence should be:

Since she couldn’t train her virtual muscles in real life, her physical speed in the game could not be improved that way. So instead, she honed everything else to a razor’s edge. Her ability to read ahead—her perception, her insight.

v5 p3

~54%

It helped thatCarter had thrown himself forward to avoid taking the full impact of the strike.

=> that Carter

V6 P11, 4%
"At the same time, the white coats were improving noticeably, [each/every] slash of their weapons and spell slung visibly brimming with raw power."

V5P6 29%:

plateeees
earthquakeeeees

The drawing-out-vowels thing that gets attributed to some characters in J-novels doesn't really work in English and I can't understand how those characters are supposed to sound. But drawing out the silent vowels makes no sense. It should probably be the A in these words that gets extended.

v10p8 (very optional correction?):

18% - […] I guarantee you it’s something nobody would want to touch with a ten-foot pole.” […] A ten-foot pole? -> Given that Japan is metric, this phrase is rather jarring to me, but I don’t have any guesses on the words used in the Japanese original… Same? 3m pole? Some other phrase that shares the concept?

v10 p8
~1%

Even back in Beaden, Curuni had carried the saberboars on the assumption that she wouldn’t be fighting—it was unreasonable to ask anyone to join a battle

¶ carrying so much weight around.“Mmmgh...”

Inappropriate paragraph break.

@SomeOldGuy said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

V13P6 8%:
we realized that we alsO needed to
also

65%:
WHen it came to me
When

Thank you for catching this!!

4.6:

She was the one who had fallenin love

She was the one who had fallen in love

Volume 5 part 10 55%

There are plenty of jobs that an adventurer can do ... and guard envoys

Is envoys the correct word here? In this context an envoy would be a diplomat, guarding them would usually be a job for the knights in this sort of setting, adventurers who aren't professional bodyguards would not be a typical choice, it might happen if there is a staffing shortage but shouldn't be a typical job for adventures. Convoys would make a lot more sense in context.

V2P7:
15%:

He was so infatuated with his wife that he disliked even the idea of letting her see his family in the empire.

Isn’t the wife the one with family in the empire? If so, this should say her family.

58%:

He soon reached his destination: the Londard Trading Company, a major trading firm.

Shouldn’t this be Londart?

Volume 2 Part 8
48% your worthless little beast -> you worthless little beast

V17 p5

"You imbecil"

It's "imbecile."

Volume 21. Part 2. 95%

"Don't go stinkin' your neck in stupid shit while I ain't watchin', got it?" > Don't go stickin' your neck in stupid shit while I ain't watchin', got it?"

v5p10 Afterword - "I think I managed to pack in quite a bit of web-exclusive content this time around" and "It looks like there are going to be more and more web-exclusive stories moving forward" - is it actually "web-exclusive", as in exclusive to the web novel? How can it be web-exclusive when it's included in the light novel?

Volume 8 Part 7
16% I was nothing like -> It was nothing like
69% some odd characters show up where it is supposed to say "I don't think being my partner would bring you trouble."

v5 p6

~90%

As always, the district had an air about it that was pretty suspect. But when I realized I was completely used to that at this point, I felt kind of frustrated and lonesome.

The shopping district itself was peaceful enough. I was bursting with sketchiness, not explosives.

Should that be It was bursting ?

@Hylebos Thanks! It's fixed in the final version.

V16p10 96% - Afterword says "Thanks for buying volume 15" - should be 16, unless the author genuinely made that mistake.

V7 P4, 14%
“So where are we going? [Will] Eris be there?” Rurika pressed them.

V13 P14, 16%
"Ishucaa was the temple’s head priest, and yet she hadn’t known a thing about this passageway."
Ishucaa -> Ishuca

56%
"The Wing had used the return device on the seventh floor"
Wing -> Jade Wings (or possibly just Wings, though I don't recall seeing their team name shortened that way)

61%
"This locked Kaho in the moment of deep thought."
Seems slightly off to me. Perhaps instead: "This locked [or knocked? or sent?] Kaho into a moment of deep thought."