V3p5 18%: Wellmyr should instead be Wellmy

Volume 11 - Part 4:
[~70%]
The insert image does not appear to match the narrative.

V13P13

69%: "If her father were here, he knew he would have given her a brief look" -> she knew he

V1P3
~24%

“Hi, um...” Nodoka began.“E-Excruse me!”

Missing space? began.“E-Excruse ->began. “E-Excruse

V8.2 P16, 52%
"Akira was slowing his sense of time, but by a standard clock, their telepathic conversation took no longer than an instant."
I think 'so' might work better than 'but' here (the former being the reason for the latter).
Or alternatively "Akira wasn't slowing his sense of time, but by a standard clock, their telepathic conversation took no longer than an instant."

@Hylebos This is referring to the the day having an evolution rather than the day of an evolution arriving. Thank you for pointing out that it could be made more clear though.

V7 P8, 47%
"When I changed and went outside, I found Kent standing by the bud."
'The bud' -> 'the buds' or 'a bud'

93%
“Those vegetables look delicious. I want them all.”
Perhaps not an error, but my reading from this is that she wants to buy the entire stock, not just one of each.

V11 P10 (40% - 2nd line down from top of page)

"Though it could endure the attacks of a novice or keep someone safe in a minor accident, it offered next to protection from a hunter harnessing mana material."

Insert missing "no" between to and protection.

e.g. it offered next to no protection from a hunter...

V1P5
~42%

“Forget everything I said. Fight Ashley as if you’re trying to kill him.”

Missing start “? Fight Ashley->“Fight Ashley

Volume 10 - Part 5:

[49%]

"Got. Sorry for the trouble, Egil."

Missing a word. I suggest the ff:

"Got it. Sorry for the trouble, Egil."

v4 p2

~0%

“I’m very sorry, but we have a rule not to show [] inventors from foreign countries. Even those who hail from the Freja Kingdom... Oh, and please do drink your tea. It’s nothing fancy, I’m afraid.”

Not to show what to foreign inventors? Plans? Blueprints?

v1p7 ~96%

[...] training sessions, " I murmured [...]

Has a stray space after the comma.

v1p8

89% - Tena -> Tenan

V18P1

31% However, that wasn't wall ->Presumably that wasn't 'all'.

v1p7:

51% - If I can’t kill when she’s queen -> Missing word? If I can’t kill her when she’s queen

@eggnog said in In Another World with Household Spells - Corrections Topic:

V6P8 18% and everywhere else that "force" is mentioned:

"Force is what makes things work," I explained."[...] When force is applied to the food we eat, it becomes energy to move our bodies. A growing flower uses force to take energy from the sun[...]"

This is a very strange definition of force. The physics concept of force is a push or pull on a object, with a magnitude and direction. It's not the same thing as a chemical reaction which is what most of her examples sound like to me. While force is indeed applied to the food we eat when we chew it, I don't get the impression Patience is describing chewing there. Is Patience giving a meaningless explanation in Japanese, or is there another word that force might be translated as...? I think she's describing the conversion of energy from one form to another, so maaaaybe transduction? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transducer

I agree that what she is describing is a lot closer to energy transduction than anything else.
However, given the apparently primitive state of that world's natural philosophy, and the fact that Patience is just trying to get basic concepts across to her little brothers, I had assumed that she wasn't even trying to use the terminology correctly in terms of real world physics but was just repurposing terminology for her own ends.

V10 P13, 60%
"With a bouquet of flowers in his hands that he had convinced a florist [to] put together at the break of dawn..."

V5 P1, 30%
"Reina was dextrous, so she could do anything, but she had said that Zelos was bad at it."
Seems both dextrous and dexterous are valid spellings, but with the latter being more common thought I'd make a note just in case.

While I'm noting things:
45% “This island is relatively untouched by human hands, and yet there are surprisingly many artificial things here.”
Seems a little definitive for someone with amnesia. Perhaps is -> seems (unless this happens to be a slip/foreshadowing and she knows more than she's letting on, or her subconscious coming through)

64%
"The three of them had apparently gotten stronger lately and could beat some monsters now, but when their enemies got to the rank of rabbits, they still struggled unless they were ready to sacrifice themselves to take down their foes."
This could well be me being dense, or just simply forgetting previous events, but what on earth is 'the rank of rabbits'?