Volume 2 Part 8
48% your worthless little beast -> you worthless little beast

@Gamen said in Zero Damage Sword Saint - Corrections:

@Geezer-Weasalopes

After the day’s classes, my teacher informed me that someone from the Dungeon Union had asked to see me.“
A summons from the 100th Level of Babel?”

With the assist from Gamen [thanks!]

After the day’s classes, my teacher informed me that someone from the Dungeon Union had asked to see me.
“A summons from the 100th Level of Babel?”

As you can see, shifting the " from the end of one line to the beginning of the next makes much more sense.

Volume 11 part 1 96%

If Krai had achieved something Yggdra that was impossible to overlook,...

A word is missing before Yggdra, in is probably the best but for could also work.

V17 p5

"You imbecil"

It's "imbecile."

Volume 21. Part 2. 95%

"Don't go stinkin' your neck in stupid shit while I ain't watchin', got it?" > Don't go stickin' your neck in stupid shit while I ain't watchin', got it?"

V1P10
There was a fixed regiment for infantrymen training - fixed regimen

V2P3
...will likely be seceded as part... - I don't think secede is the right word here. If the peace settlement will involve conceding territory outside the southern cities to Sabat, it should probably be "annexed"

v5p10 Afterword - "I think I managed to pack in quite a bit of web-exclusive content this time around" and "It looks like there are going to be more and more web-exclusive stories moving forward" - is it actually "web-exclusive", as in exclusive to the web novel? How can it be web-exclusive when it's included in the light novel?

Volume 8 Part 7
16% I was nothing like -> It was nothing like
69% some odd characters show up where it is supposed to say "I don't think being my partner would bring you trouble."

v5 p6

~90%

As always, the district had an air about it that was pretty suspect. But when I realized I was completely used to that at this point, I felt kind of frustrated and lonesome.

The shopping district itself was peaceful enough. I was bursting with sketchiness, not explosives.

Should that be It was bursting ?

@Hylebos Thanks! It's fixed in the final version.

v2p3 ~55%

He was reluctant to spend money so lavishly right of the bat, so couldn't bring himself to ask for it right away.

The second half seems to be missing either a conjunction like and so couldn't or the subject like so he couldn't bring.

~80%

"Excuse me, can you please tell me the way to the old annex."

Should in my opinion be ended with a question mark.

V6 P2 (50% - 9th line up from bottom of page)

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Replace "tit" with "it".

V16p10 96% - Afterword says "Thanks for buying volume 15" - should be 16, unless the author genuinely made that mistake.

V6P7

"We shall deploy troops to the north of the city ...

"to the north" means outside the city and north of it. (See previous paragraph, where the river is "to the north".) These troops are being deployed along the northern wall of the city. So "deploy troops in the north of the city" would be the simplest correction.

V7 P4, 14%
“So where are we going? [Will] Eris be there?” Rurika pressed them.

V13 P14, 16%
"Ishucaa was the temple’s head priest, and yet she hadn’t known a thing about this passageway."
Ishucaa -> Ishuca

56%
"The Wing had used the return device on the seventh floor"
Wing -> Jade Wings (or possibly just Wings, though I don't recall seeing their team name shortened that way)

61%
"This locked Kaho in the moment of deep thought."
Seems slightly off to me. Perhaps instead: "This locked [or knocked? or sent?] Kaho into a moment of deep thought."

V5 P7 (29% - 3rd line up from bottom of page)

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Change "someone" to "somewhere" as in:
She's hiding away somewhere safe, isn't she?!

v2p2 4%

Still, they did share some things in common

Sounds like it should be did have some things in common

@00-biting said in The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic:

"Yes, my bodyguard here took her time," said Jinshi.

yes it is obvious this is Maomao talking and not Jinshi.
There is even a reference to him feeling carefree (ref to LN5 epilogue)

v3p13:

92% - Nina. who had come across a mother who’d lost her child, -> Wrong punctuation: Nina, who had