V5 P2, 67%
"Both the hallway and the entry hall had been renovated recently, much to my surprise; I’d only learned of the renovations plans after the work was already completed."
Could be a difference in dialect, but I've only heard it as 'renovation plans', (no matter how many renovations take place)

V13 P14, 16%
"Ishucaa was the temple’s head priest, and yet she hadn’t known a thing about this passageway."
Ishucaa -> Ishuca

56%
"The Wing had used the return device on the seventh floor"
Wing -> Jade Wings (or possibly just Wings, though I don't recall seeing their team name shortened that way)

61%
"This locked Kaho in the moment of deep thought."
Seems slightly off to me. Perhaps instead: "This locked [or knocked? or sent?] Kaho into a moment of deep thought."

V5 P7 (29% - 3rd line up from bottom of page)

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Change "someone" to "somewhere" as in:
She's hiding away somewhere safe, isn't she?!

v2p2 4%

Still, they did share some things in common

Sounds like it should be did have some things in common

Vol 10 part 3
88% in "so the JDSF probably wouldn't have been willing to adjust their schedule."

Shouldn't this be JSDF or JDAG? there isn't any prior use of this acronym

@00-biting said in The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic:

"Yes, my bodyguard here took her time," said Jinshi.

yes it is obvious this is Maomao talking and not Jinshi.
There is even a reference to him feeling carefree (ref to LN5 epilogue)

v3p13:

92% - Nina. who had come across a mother who’d lost her child, -> Wrong punctuation: Nina, who had

V14 P3 (88% - 13th line down from bottom of page)

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Correct "Prcs" to Orcs.

@Vorthod Thank you for the feedback!
This series has changed hands a few times now and unfortunately there has been a miscommunication on some terms.
I have been trying my best to rectify this, but this series has a habit of characters suddenly returning after six or seven volumes and they fall through the cracks.
I will pass along your feedback for the previous volumes and see what can be done.

Wails are definitely not large marine mammals .

V14, P7, around 95%

“Natrurally Naturally, we realize that this alone is not sufficient,”

Extra letter.

V3p9:

17%: “asked Wil with eyes” -> Wil asked with a wordless look/glare. 25%: “unordinary strength” -> extraordinary strength 25%: “seemingly fragile than” -> seemingly more fragile than 33%: “I just want all to get along” -> us all

V2 p6 multiple coach should be coachman

V4.5P7 45%
“I only ask for tailored breakfast ingredients when we only need to make it in small quantities,”

"Only" used twice.

V1P12 52%:
SIlence -> Silence
The letter i should be in lower case.

5.6:

Unlike the pawns, Merlin told me everything.

Unlike the pawns, Merlin told me everything."

v2p11 57%

Even if it were a lie.I knew

needs a space after the full stop

V1 P1, 81%
"Anyway, speaking of family, Vanitas had two little sisters—twins, in fact. They both had opposite personalities..."
Very minor, but 'both' seems superfluous (can't have just one with an opposite personality, but the other doesn't)

P3, 4%
"If one were truly skilled, it was also possible to transform into animals, monsters, or inorganic matter—but only few could do that.
'but only few' ->
'but only a few'
or 'but only few'

71% “To that end, I’m ready to pay any price,” I declared. Then after a short pause, I said, “ Christina.”
Extra space in front of 'Christina'

P4, 15%
"Being slaves, I never shared a meal with them."
Stared at this a little, but I can no longer tell if this is currently fine as is or not. If not:
'I had never shared...'
or 'I never shared meals...'

50%
"Shuka was a woman who looked like in her early twenties"
Could just be phrasing I'm not used to, otherwise:
'who looked like she was in her early twenties'
or 'who looked to be in her early twenties'

P5, 92%
"Ms. Ashley was such a worrier. We [had] had this conversation multiple times already."

V6 P5 (25% - 14th line up from the bottom of the page)

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Shouldn't this be "Boar" meat?

(31% - 5th line up from bottom of the page)

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Shouldn't this be "to snow"?

V9 part 9
67%-71% Mobile view

Well, not to brag, but the hands Akashi were gripping right now had already raised ten billion krams

It's not ten billion, it's only 1 billion that she gathered throughout the year. Why is this keep on happening?