V2 P9 (0% - 11th line down from top of page)

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Why is Quinza's father wearing a dress? (I don't recall anything in the narrative so far to indicate he was a cross-dresser) I believe this is an error and should read as:
"The man was wearing exceptionally fanciful dress and wielding a magnificent staff."

(Remove "an")

V5P10 ~78%
"...the self-claimed Game Master..." -> "...the self-proclaimed Game Master..."

At 24%, It’s the simplest plance and I don’t need to use my head.

Not sure what was supposed to go here, possibly plan?

V2P9, 35%: “The mana inside her trashed about before flooding out of her.” - thrashed

V3P2p10 19%:

"I sit at the throne by the grace of God. But does god watch what goes on in the world we live in? Does God judge the good incidents from the bad? For if god truly exists [...]

The capitalization of "God" is inconsistent. Either all four should be capitalized or none of them should be.

53%:

deliver a gift on Behalf of Master Reinald

Behalf shouldn't be capitalized.

88%:

If I was going to consider things seriously, I needed a different tact.

tact --> tack
https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/do-you-change-tack-or-tact

In the premium edition epub the illustration of Daiagias and Libidine is after the epilogue instead of within the corresponding text

V1 Part 6 ~72% Suggestion for a less vocally specific verb:
"Lilliana called over her handmaiden," -> "Lilliana summoned her handmaiden,"

v3p7 ~12%:

"Do you think that I did something unnecessary?" Asked Lutz, still not entirely sure of the etiquette among adventurers in those kinds of situations.

Asked -> asked.

@rhysm
That I'm paying attention enough for that to have registered as weird speaks well toward both the story and the translation team; I am enjoying this one!

Volume 8 - Part 13:

[13%] fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [13%] two hundred and fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [83%] But if she’d said that she was coming to ours, so it must be fine. >> either the if or the so needs to go away. this doesn't make sense with both.

@Khazidhea
Volume 14 has been published.
The prepub may not reflect the final edits.
They don't make corrections to the prepubs after the final work is published.
Once a work has been published, JNC accepts corrections to the contents of the ebook via email to support@j-novel.club

The errors you are reporting may or may not exist within the published work.
The folks who would handle them don't monitor the correction topics.
So posting here after the work is published is an exercise in futility, and may also be concerning stuff that got corrected in the published work.

V6, P5, around 46%:

Ignoring her servant, Alicia stuck her head out from the terrace window. Theo and Bibi Vivi were both momentarily shocked.

Wrong name.

V3 P2

~50%

Item stolen: Naval Piercing.

Should that be Navel Piercing? (I mean, Yuri could have stolen something for piercing through battleships, but somehow I reckon that a bellybutton piercing is more likely given some of the other junk that got stolen.)

V1 P5 (22% - 4th line down from top of page)

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Add missing "what" to sentence, e.g. - "Are you certain that's not what you would do".

("Not what you would do": This is used to contrast an action with what someone else would do, often implying that the action is out of character or different from their typical behavior. - AI Overview)

v6 p7

More missing or misplaced spaces around italics (text inside <em></em> tags), for instance at around 1%:

“Even from Sharon, I didn’t expectthis ,” Kent grumbled as he wiped sweat from his face. As usual, he was leading our formation. “Are we seriously doing this? I guess we have to...”

I won't mention any others, but please re-check this.

V4P9

I am under the impression these books are being localized to American English, not Commonwealth English. In two places in this part it says "in future". Americans don't say that. We say "in the future".

Also, "taking the piss" is British slang. I actually had to look that one up not long ago.

V4 P5 (42% - 8th line down from top of page)

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Should be "keep" - need to fix typo.

V4 P11

41% "We needed to shatter the enemy's morale because they could finish regrouping."

The key point here appears to be about timing. Rather than shattering them because they can regroup, a better fit may be to shatter them before they regroup.

"We needed to shatter the enemy's morale before they could finish regrouping."

SSP12, 85%: "with a furious grin plastered across my place" - face

V11 P2, 32%
"I heard a series of mechanic clunks from the other side of the door"
Mechanic -> mechanical
96%
"whoops, i guess it’s ’cause i was talking to to nago-chan"
Likely a duplicate (in character) due to the nature of chat messaging, but thought I'd point it out in case it was actually in error

V11 P4, 21%
"What, I should’ve considered with the possibility?"

38%
"I reheated the stew"
Likely not an error (and if so it would be in the original, not a translation error), just me struggling to picture the sequence of events and match to my own experience. I just can't identify any reasonable lengths of time for the following that would end with a cold stew:

From part 3, didn't leave work til after 10pm. Plus travel time, doesn't leave a whole lot of time for a stream (unless going unreasonable late). As prep + cooking didn't start til after the stream did, even cooking quickly with a pressure cooker, 1 hour might the quickest to be done. If the stream took 2 hours say, they'd still roughly line up, so can't see how it could've cooled down much at all.

Even with a really long streaming time (I'd say 2 hours would be a reasonable upper limit), prep + cooking

V11 P5, 27%
"... and wasn't inf touch with the rest of the team"
inf -> in
29%
"Even the shady clients you found on social media who got in legal trouble would gaggle at this"
Gaggle -> goggle