V10 P10 (46%)

..he has searched every storage, room, and treasury in the palace...

searched every storage room, and...

(Remove comma between storage and room)

V8P1 77% Addyjust -> Addy just

v3 p4

~20%

“Felix and Hannah, you say? My, that’s terrible. We need to act immediately.” Frederick stood on his wary legs, stuck his hand in his pocket, and began to finger the seed inside.

Not sure here but should that be weary legs?

V3P2
~59%

Rosa earns tens of thousands of riels a month from her patents, and it’s only gonna increase in future.

Sorry if it's just Fu's way of speaking or if it's okay as it is but missing word?; in future->in the future

Creed: "This left eye is all I have left."

But looking at the illustration, his right eye is show. Is this translation error or a graphic one?
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v2 p3
"And there’s no way she could have hidden a haul that league anywhere."

league -> large

The following is causing some debate over on the main forum:

"Until then, if Zen and Elysia could possibly produce an heir, it'd be some peace of mind for the Leadon family," said Yohia.

Perhaps it could be reworded to make it clear whether the heir being discussed is a Leadon heir or an imperial heir.

Volume 2 Part 9
23% manaed -> managed
31% seen to familiar -> seem so familiar
47% [grammar] me and Maria -> Maria and I

v2 p5
"spreaded" isn't a word. "spread" is the proper past-tense of spread.

v3p12 ~0%:

Ow, that hurts, Mia!I can't help that my eyes were drawn to her chest.

Mia!I can't -> Mia! I can't

V2P6: 34%
“Other than the countless bookcases were also numerous desks and chairs occupied by…”

Feels like it needs a “there” between the two words. If the sentence started with “Along with the countless…” it would be fine. At least to my eyes/brain, but I can’t cite a rule as to why.

2.9:

Why had she been unable to she become the sort of person someone would love?

Why had she been unable to become the sort of person someone would love?

There's a multiple line section that makes no sense, and I'm damned if I'm transcribing all of it.
So here's the specific line that stands out as "Huh?" to me.

In the end, the maid simply gave her a bright smile. "You'd like to do so even if saying so is impertinent?"

It's like there should be something else right before that line, something missing, because as it is there's no proper lead in to this.
Or it could be that the line is wonky in itself.

Volume 24 part 2 has issues where names are mixed up, like "explained Radine". The "said Ryoma, laughing" at the end also seems dodgy.

Volume 7 - Part 2:

[28%]

"This is an urgent matter,and one involving Lily besides. What manner of wretch would I be to stay behind and rest on my laurels?"

Suggestion:

"This is an urgent matter,and one involving Lily. Besides, what manner of wretch would I be to stay behind and rest on my laurels?"

V5P8 ~45%:

'Pleasure coursed him at the...' -> 'Pleasure coursed through him at the...'

10.12

Wridra dragged me forward with her vice grip and freakish strength.

The metaphorical tool is the “vise”. Vice is sin.

v29p5 ~13%

Today would be the first time that the people of the forest's edge were participating in the meat market. and since I happened to have the day off from work in the post town, I had made the decision to accompany them.

There's a period after meat market instead of a comma.

V2 P9, 11%

Daniel walked over to Elizabeth and Remilena --> Daniel walked over to Westalia and Remilena

V2 P5
(58%)
...as long asnot registered with the...

-->as long as I'm not registered with the adventurer's guild.
(space between as not and add I'm)

(58%)
...for a little whlie now,...
for a little while now...
(correct misspell)

Yeah, I’ll eventually email this to JNC…

v4p1:

16% - […] and partly because King Betrand’s unusual circumstances […] -> Missing letter: King Bertrand