V3P9, 61%: “let me eat thiいんs bastard”

V2P1 16%:

chastity of his backend

If this is a computing pun then it's fine, but if not, "back end" with a space would be better.

V4 P4, 22%
"It definitely shouldn't look like it's just rolled off the converter belt at the statue factory"
This could just be what I'm familiar with, not having a knowledge of converter belts as such, but converter -> conveyer

V3P9 26%:
The conversation "Now that I think about it, I should have seen the hints..." - "In what way?" - "Yeah. Making the medicine...is a lot of work, right?" doesn't make sense. Is part of it missing?

@Hylebos That's a great point! I checked over the original, and the line was, "メルティは刀を手にするのは初めてであり、その美しさと鋭さにしばし見入っていた。" So, it does say that it was the first time she had ever held a katana.

I also checked back to the other part you mentioned, and it clearly states that she was holding the Lutz's katana then, too.

The translation itself is accurate, but really nice catch. We might consider giving it a minor tweak to make a bit more sense.

V3 P6 (75% - beginning of 13th line up from bottom of page)

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Correct to read: "over ten years older than Airi and me,"

V3 P13, 6%
"However, if any sacred beast, like Cass or Lag, had refused the release, I wouldn’t have been able to do it."
Cass -> Cas

16%
"Epilogue: The Most Frightening Guard (The Pope)"
This line looks like it should be a heading, with paragraph spaces before and after it.
Same with "Afterword", 83%

74%
"However, I’d had no idea that, through my magic, demonic charm power had accumulated within the priests themselves."
It works as is, but unless 'charm' is specified it might work better simply as 'demonic power'

V3 P1 (0% - end of 1st line on page 1)

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This sentence would make more sense if it said:
However, it was because a god made a mistake,...

V5 P6 (48% - End of 13th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe this would sound better as:
What're you guys gonna do...

4.3:

The mages flew into a range and aimed their staffs at me.

The mages flew into a rage and aimed their staffs at me.
The mages flew into range and aimed their staffs at me.

Have to check the raws to determine which.
Unless, of course, it's a lovely play on words and quite deliberate.

V5 P9, 16%
"You are not to breathe a word of this to anyone, understood?" Mihale asked
Mihale -> Michale

80%
"As the Hill Path Club’s reputation had skyrocketed, so had Stella, the captain’s."
Stella -> Stella's
Edit: On second thought, I'm not so sure. Leaving it in, just in case

98%
"...it’s impossible to walk down the streets in Runelirea these days without hearing the name Allen Rovene five or six times"
Runelirea -> Runerelia (or viceversa, the latter was used at 94%)

@A-human
Sorry, Whately -> Whateley

v3p8:

6% - the town of Carassa -> Carcassa (as used a bit later in this part) 25% - […] where we’d encounter the last amount of monsters, […] -> the least amount of

I know I'm likely too late to suggest any edits for this volume, but just in case this could be of use:
V11.1 P6, 60%
"In a real battle, soldiers would use heavy spears—about seven meters long by Imperial standard"
Seven meters (23 feet, or about 4x a mans height) seems a little excessive.
If instead meaning to convert from 7', then perhaps two meters might be a little more manageable.

Also, V11.1 P12, 14%
"He moved with such quick and easy steps that you'd be forgiven for forgetting he wasn't wearing heavy armour"
Wasn't -> was

@Valanduin said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

It might be a little late for it, but the term mold is used frequently when discussing the mints and it isn't really correct. Molds are used when casting by pouring molten metal, however casting isn't a technique that was ever particularly widely used for minting coinage. Coins are struck from blanks using using dies (the basic process is a plain disk of solid metal called a blank is placed between two tools with the inverse of the coin pattern carved into it, then the top piece is struck with a hammer), so die would be a more appropriate term, although this error might be an issue in the original source.

I concur, "mold" should be "die." (I spotted at least two uses of "mold".) Also:

"Well, the mintage facilities have been fully restored ..."

'mintage facilities' -> 'mints'.

V7P3 ~13%
"Caim turned his way with a smile." -> "Caim Lenka turned his way with a smile."

v5p8:

31% - How had they managed to cause so much chaos in the few months I’d be gone? -> Probable wrong word, given the tense: […] in the few months I’d been gone?

Thank you for these corrections

v6p5 ~26%:

Francesca absolutely picked up on Emma nonchalant;y interpreting the cat language.

nonchalant;y -> nonchalantly

Part 12, around 90%, Krai is thinking "I wanted to vomit" but IIRC in past prepubs he kept using "barf" in this sort of catchphrase situation. I'm not sure if this was later changed in the published volumes though, sorry.