Volume 8 - Part 10:

[25%] Those are for purging malice, which makes them ► Before it was called miasma. (Or is this another term change that happened when the new TL/ED team took over?) [54%] That was why they preferredmaterials instead of ► It should be preferred materials (space). [72%] for food lately! Sister Lilian even hunts monsters ► It should be Lillian (double L).

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Volume 04 - Part 4:

[0%] In short, you could not wrong as long as you prayed to one of the great gods. ► Should be could not go wrong OR couldn't go wrong
1. 'In short, you could not go wrong as long as you prayed to one of the great gods.'
2. 'In short, you couldn't go wrong as long as you prayed to one of the great gods.' [38%] "Huh? What? U-Uhm... Maika, what should I say?" Lady Renge muttered. ► Shouldn't this be Suiren?

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Volume 04 - Part 6:

[10%] "In regard to the compost trials, our problem was that the people opposed to work with it or sample the food produced as a result." ► Consider deleting the OR adding were while restructuring tense.
1. '"In regard to the compost trials, our problem was that the people were opposed to work with it or sample the food produced as a result."'
2. '"In regard to the compost trials, our problem was that people were opposed to working with it or sampling the food produced as a result."' [90%] Still, I did no tell them what was the fertilizer that we mixed into the soil made of. ► Um, consider revising... Either type of fertilizer it was that OR the fertilizer we mixed into the soil was made of.
1. 'Still, I did no tell them what type of fertilizer it was that we mixed into the soil.'
1. 'Still, I did no tell them what the fertilizer we mixed into the soil was made of.'

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Volume 04- Part 8:

[0%] The three of us had decided at the meeting that Chief Marco deserved punishment. ► Should be Louis Already mentioned [0%] "Well take someone like Chief Marco. ..." ► Louis Already mentioned [39%] "... Now we've got to stay alive for the honor of the gods," I soldier said. ► Needs correction Already mentioned [61%] Then we ignited the combustible we had set all over the site beforehand, ► Should this be plural combustible's? [78%] ", so we can judge whether they can go back or they have to move somewhere else..." ► Add if
1. '", so we can judge whether they can go back or if they have to move somewhere else..."'

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Vol 17 part 11 at around 95%:
" he gripped sword and was about to swing," => missing a "his" between "gripped" and "sword".

Volume 18 - Part 9:

[50%] Is this really mid-twenty-firstt-century Japan?” ► Remove the extra t.

Volume 6 - Part 10:

[2%] The least I could was try >> should be could do was

Volume 12 - Part 6:

[31%] “Don’t say that,” Clouseau muttered. “I’ll start crying,” ► It should be a period.

Volum2, part 5, 22%:
The quote is "Evacuate? In our moment of triumph?"

Though I guess that makes as little sense as "Surrender"... Maybe "Retreat" would be better? It is not the Star Wars quote either, but it fits the context better - both for Star Wars and for this scene...

Volume 6 - Part 8:

[6%] Papa has lost weight, I guess.If she had actually hated ► Missing space. Already reported. [10%] a question, she’s voicing an objection to my decision ► Missing period. [57%] Kacho had worried that Fukei end up that way for over ► It should be Fukei would. Already reported. [59%] Suiboku’s shadow and influence.The fact that he had ► Missing space. [66%] respected them, and wanted to emulate him. That was ► It should be them?

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Volume 02 - Part 1:

[22%] with a population of 1.4 billion and 9.6 square kilometers of land, ► Um, is there supposed to be a million/billion attached to this? Already mentioned [45%] The inside of the support facility at Sapporo was nowhere near as intimidating the one in Yokohama. ► Add as Already mentioned
1. 'The inside of the support facility at Sapporo was nowhere near as intimidating as the one in Yokohama.'

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Volume 02 - Part 3:

[Generic] Three mentions of the name Liu Fongguan, however one instance is Fonnguan. Already mentioned

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Volume 02 - Part 4:

[9%] "... Just what it is that's motivating him?" ► Should these be swapped? is it [36%] I found myself marveling once again at how variety we had in the group. ► Add much or other adjustments
1. 'I found myself marveling once again at how much variety we had in the group. ' [64%] Then I used Teleportation to bring all of them to Abyss, the Rank A dungeon Shishibone, Edogawa City. ► Needs full-stop after dungeon, and possibly new line, brackets [] and placement after the section break for the location of a new section and perspective OR add in
1. 'Then I used Teleportation to bring all of them to Abyss, the Rank A dungeon in Shishibone, Edogawa City.'
2. 'Then I used Teleportation to bring all of them to Abyss, the Rank A dungeon. {Section break} [Shishibone, Edogawa City - Ezoe Kazuhiko]'

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Volume 02 - Part 6:

[58%] "... After that, we can say goodbye to ever allowing Gamerican troops step foot on Japanese soil again." ► Add to

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Volume 02 - Part 7:

[7%] -her entire back, as well as both of her arms from the shoulder down, was completely bare. ► Should be were

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Volume 02 - Part 8:

[Generic] Multiple references to Meng Zemin, however one towards the end of the page is Zeming, check to make sure all references correlate. Already mentioned [70%] there was no need to look to look any further than Yuwaku Onsen, ► Remove double up

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In Volume 5, Part 8, it says the Aoi intended to confess after “summer” break. However, in volume 5, part 7, it seems to imply that she intended to confess after “spring“ break when she became a third year. I wanted to point this out just in case it is in fact a discrepancy.

Volume 6 - Part 10:

[3%] throughout their mouths.Shrimp had a savory flavor ► Missing space. [22%] someone had just cancelled their reservation, so ► It should be canceled (US spelling). [34%] to say, “There’s no way it I didn’t have fun.” I was ► Remove it.

Volume 2 - Part 12:

[23%] to be a fine lass. Just me?” Barbaros kept talking ► It should be like me? [75%] You’ve thrown yourselves at our mercy precisely ► It should be yourself (Count Porque Nadar)? [84%] agreement between Leon and Aluas,, but a deal ► Duplicate comma.

Part 7:
[39%] That’s my rival, you know. My rival for Rockmann’s love. > Should it be Sir Alois’s love since this is Maris’s line?
[48%] It’s a tiny human! Oh my…” > delete a double quotation mark.
[91%] …but he groans “no!” so I just stop trying … > “No!”

Part 9:
[77%] Who is “Stadal?” > Move quotation mark before the question mark.
[82%] “ ‘Stadal!’ It’s written right here!” > Move single quotation mark before exclamation mark.

Part 10:
[6%] “Oi, you two laggards! Aren’t you supposed to me men?” > Should it be Hey?
[89%] Didn’t it say, “every living creature on the continent?” > Should the double quotation mark be placed before question mark?

Part 11:
[16%] Come on, we should be thinking up ways to squash Stadal, not offer me up to it. > The “ä” in Stadal is tiny.
[16%] … he points up at Stadal floating up in the sky… > The “ä” in Stadal is tiny.
[47%] “In mine own name of Hades, I beseech you…” > It said “In my own name of …” in Volume 2.

Part 12:
[0%] In mine own name of …, I beseech you > It said “In my own name of …” in Volume 2
[4%] “What they ‘really do?’ ” & “ ‘Make connections?’ ”> Move single quotation mark before question mark.
[29%] “Lady**!** Nanalie!” > Should it be “Lady Nanalie!” ?
[75%] …answer her question about “quitting my job:” > Should the quotation mark be placed before the colon?

Part 8

48%
The base of operations of the Area 2 Fleet, the star system known as the Secar Viscountdom was virtually a war plant.
--insert comma

67%
As a result, the military succeeded in taking Lahkfacar, and gained control of the three
--delete comma

67%
There will be a different mission or you."
--for

95%
Its territory has been torn apart, with no ability to contact each other.
--seems like odd phrasing

Thank you for your support and reports as always, @Terabyte and @SomeOldGuy!

Volume 2 - Part 10:

[Generic] The illustrator's name is Hyuga (single u) on the cover but it's written 2 times as Hyuuga (double u) in the afterword.

Volume 5 - Part 10:

[28%] learning how the lady of the manner had suffered ► It should be manor.

Volume 02 - Part 3:

[90%] who had been standing behind the sofa, pull her lips tight as if she was trying not to cry. ► Should be pulled

Volume 9 - Part 8:

[13%] “Yeah.” There were three skeletons in leather armor ► Dora-chan telepathic message(?). It should be wrapped in 《...》. (Or is Fel replying here? In that case it should be in bold format instead.) [15%] 《Do you not have your perfect defense skill?》 ► Fel's telepathic message. It should be in bold format. [15%] ► Fel's telepathic message. It should be in bold format. 《Well, that is true. But I believe a trap set by humans should be the same...》 [16%] ► Fel's telepathic message. It should be in bold format. 《Mrr, then I will apply a barrier on you. As well as Dora and Sui.》 [16%] ► Fel's telepathic message. It should be in bold format. 《Right. It should not break under any trap a human could devise, so rest assured. Still though, I wish you would be just a little braver.》 [17%] 《We are proceeding.》 ► Fel's telepathic message. It should be in bold format. [37%] 《What?! Why is this language here?!》 I had a tablet ► Mukohda's talking here. It should be wrapped in the usual double quotes “...”. [95%] volume 9: Grilled Entrails and the Festival of Gluttony! ► The subtitle on the cover actually says Fried rather than Grilled. I guess it's the cover that should be fixed?