V16 P5 9% "They were right [beShind] me just a second ago!" -> a wild S appeared

v6p6:

43% - “With less officials and soldiers, […] -> Wrong word, I think: With fewer officials and soldiers

With the Age Gap Gone
Page 4 capitalized letter in "Looked" should not be capitalized
Reads as "I Looked at Lord Helena"

V2P10 30%
*stealing Hyles formatting model

Thenjust give up already! What’s with you, coming here this often?

Thenjust -> Then just

10.1:

wrote with coal on a roll of parchment.

wrote with charcoal on a roll of parchment.

While both coal and charcoal can be used as fuel for heating stuff, only charcoal has seen widespread use for writing/drawings.
I'm not sure you could use coal this way.
Charcoal is made from wood, and thus readily obtainable in forested regions. For certain values of readily obtainable.
Coal...is something you mine from underground seams, like an ore.

V3P14
[66%] but Sieg and Weiss wouldn't let me." ➡ Diaz? I don't think Blanc has even met Sieg yet.

v1p11:

73% - “Y-Yes?!” Kartika squeaked**,learly** startled […] -> Missing space and letter: Kartika squeaked, clearly startled

V7 P3 (0% - end of last sentence on page)

Hey Lily. Why do you care so little about fashion?

Hey Sara.

Shouldn't this be 'Sara' since she's the one they are trying to get clothed. Besides, the five who went to the women's clothing store were: Stella, Sara, Ikki, Alisiun, and Shizuku. There was no Lily (unless it's a nick-name for Sara).

@xdbx I assume "Helenenemies" should just be "Helen". And/or swap "no one would be able to" to "no enemies would be able to".

I think "has" is correct in that sentence. The shift from past to present tense makes sense. If anything, change the last sentence to, "We don't really have any weak links."

V10 P10 (46%)

..he has searched every storage, room, and treasury in the palace...

searched every storage room, and...

(Remove comma between storage and room)

V8P1 77% Addyjust -> Addy just

v3 p4

~20%

“Felix and Hannah, you say? My, that’s terrible. We need to act immediately.” Frederick stood on his wary legs, stuck his hand in his pocket, and began to finger the seed inside.

Not sure here but should that be weary legs?

V3P2
~59%

Rosa earns tens of thousands of riels a month from her patents, and it’s only gonna increase in future.

Sorry if it's just Fu's way of speaking or if it's okay as it is but missing word?; in future->in the future

v2 p3
"And there’s no way she could have hidden a haul that league anywhere."

league -> large

The following is causing some debate over on the main forum:

"Until then, if Zen and Elysia could possibly produce an heir, it'd be some peace of mind for the Leadon family," said Yohia.

Perhaps it could be reworded to make it clear whether the heir being discussed is a Leadon heir or an imperial heir.

Volume 2 Part 9
23% manaed -> managed
31% seen to familiar -> seem so familiar
47% [grammar] me and Maria -> Maria and I

v3p12 ~0%:

Ow, that hurts, Mia!I can't help that my eyes were drawn to her chest.

Mia!I can't -> Mia! I can't

2.9:

Why had she been unable to she become the sort of person someone would love?

Why had she been unable to become the sort of person someone would love?

There's a multiple line section that makes no sense, and I'm damned if I'm transcribing all of it.
So here's the specific line that stands out as "Huh?" to me.

In the end, the maid simply gave her a bright smile. "You'd like to do so even if saying so is impertinent?"

It's like there should be something else right before that line, something missing, because as it is there's no proper lead in to this.
Or it could be that the line is wonky in itself.

Volume 24 part 2 has issues where names are mixed up, like "explained Radine". The "said Ryoma, laughing" at the end also seems dodgy.

Volume 7 - Part 2:

[28%]

"This is an urgent matter,and one involving Lily besides. What manner of wretch would I be to stay behind and rest on my laurels?"

Suggestion:

"This is an urgent matter,and one involving Lily. Besides, what manner of wretch would I be to stay behind and rest on my laurels?"