v1 p5

~30%

Temples are training grounds for priests and are considered dwellings of the gods. Priests who pray there can be granted greater magical power. Since the Moon Goddess remains close to humanity, her temples can be found in every city. However, a donation is required to use the altar where prayers and offer prayers.

That final clause doesn't scan. I can't really guess what it should be though, maybe the altar where prayers are offered ?

V8 P4 (8% - 11th line down from top of page)

"But I could ask, the knight had already flown..."

add missing "before" in sentence

e.g. But before I could ask,...

V5 P8, 72%
“She just bound you to her word,” I heard Eri mutter.
The wording of this doesn't quite sit right, to my ear. Something more like "She just bound you to her will by those words"

v5P2p1:

Sometimes “Teach” was capitalized and sometimes it wasn’t, even if it seemed to still be used as a name rather than a verb…

6.8:

So, which is it?
Queeres or Qurees?
I'm presuming the name of the Garage matches the last name of the owner.

V7P8 ~36%

[...] their natural honing instincts [...]

Should probably be homing instincts.

Volume 5 - Part 8:

[24%]

Chapter Eight: Reclaiming Homeland

The formatting is off. It currently has the same format as the normal text.

v1p4 ~30%:

"It is a pleasure to meet you. My name is Freesia Salt. I hope we'll be well acquainted from now on," I I said with a curtsy.

I I said -> I said.

V3p5 18%: Wellmyr should instead be Wellmy

Volume 11 - Part 4:
[~70%]
The insert image does not appear to match the narrative.

V13P13

69%: "If her father were here, he knew he would have given her a brief look" -> she knew he

V1P3
~24%

“Hi, um...” Nodoka began.“E-Excruse me!”

Missing space? began.“E-Excruse ->began. “E-Excruse

@Hylebos This is referring to the the day having an evolution rather than the day of an evolution arriving. Thank you for pointing out that it could be made more clear though.

V7 P8, 47%
"When I changed and went outside, I found Kent standing by the bud."
'The bud' -> 'the buds' or 'a bud'

93%
“Those vegetables look delicious. I want them all.”
Perhaps not an error, but my reading from this is that she wants to buy the entire stock, not just one of each.

v1p7 ~96%

[...] training sessions, " I murmured [...]

Has a stray space after the comma.

v1p8

89% - Tena -> Tenan

V18P1

31% However, that wasn't wall ->Presumably that wasn't 'all'.

v1p7:

51% - If I can’t kill when she’s queen -> Missing word? If I can’t kill her when she’s queen