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    • majikayo

      The Dorky NPC Mercenary Knows His Place - Corrections Topic
      dorky npc • • majikayo

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      6.8:

      So, which is it?
      Queeres or Qurees?
      I'm presuming the name of the Garage matches the last name of the owner.

    • philhouse

      Pens Down, Swords Up - Corrections Topic
      pens down • • philhouse

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      V7P8 ~36%

      [...] their natural honing instincts [...]

      Should probably be homing instincts.

    • philhouse

      The Amazing Village Creator - Corrections Topic
      village creator • • philhouse

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      SilverFuton

      Volume 5 - Part 8:

      [24%]

      Chapter Eight: Reclaiming Homeland

      The formatting is off. It currently has the same format as the normal text.

    • ca.lima

      Déjà Vute: Betrayal Begets New Beginnings - Corrections Topic
      deja vute j-novel heart • • ca.lima

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      Hylebos

      v1p4 ~30%:

      "It is a pleasure to meet you. My name is Freesia Salt. I hope we'll be well acquainted from now on," I I said with a curtsy.

      I I said -> I said.

    • alahue

      Proud to Be the Villainess - Corrections Topic
      proudvillainess • • alahue

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      V3p5 18%: Wellmyr should instead be Wellmy

    • yuzumori

      I Parry Everything - Corrections Topic
      parry all • • yuzumori

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      Nutaris

      Volume 11 - Part 4:
      [~70%]
      The insert image does not appear to match the narrative.

    • myskaros

      Dahlia in Bloom - Corrections Topic
      dahlia j-novel heart • • myskaros

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      arghc

      V13P13

      69%: "If her father were here, he knew he would have given her a brief look" -> she knew he
    • Devon

      Fleet-Footed Dungeon Delver: Tune in for Magical Girls and Motion Blur! - Corrections Topic
      fleet-footed • • Devon

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      V1P3
      ~24%

      “Hi, um...” Nodoka began.“E-Excruse me!”

      Missing space? began.“E-Excruse ->began. “E-Excruse

    • morgenstern

      Rebuild World - Corrections Topic
      rebuild world • • morgenstern

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      V8.2 P16, 52%
      "Akira was slowing his sense of time, but by a standard clock, their telepathic conversation took no longer than an instant."
      I think 'so' might work better than 'but' here (the former being the reason for the latter).
      Or alternatively "Akira wasn't slowing his sense of time, but by a standard clock, their telepathic conversation took no longer than an instant."

    • L

      By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic
      graceofthegods • • lovelight

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      Ambriella

      @Hylebos This is referring to the the day having an evolution rather than the day of an evolution arriving. Thank you for pointing out that it could be made more clear though.

    • alahue

      From Villainess to Healer - Corrections Topic
      vill-heal • • alahue

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      V7 P8, 47%
      "When I changed and went outside, I found Kent standing by the bud."
      'The bud' -> 'the buds' or 'a bud'

      93%
      “Those vegetables look delicious. I want them all.”
      Perhaps not an error, but my reading from this is that she wants to buy the entire stock, not just one of each.

    • majikayo

      An Otaku Prince Finds Love in Akiba - Corrections Topic
      otaku prince • • majikayo

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    • ca.lima

      Mirror, Mirror on the Wall - Corrections Topic
      mirror mirror j-novel knight • • ca.lima

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    • myskaros

      Housekeeping Mage from Another World - Corrections Topic
      housekeeping j-novel heart • • myskaros

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      SilverFuton

      Volume 10 - Part 5:

      [49%]

      "Got. Sorry for the trouble, Egil."

      Missing a word. I suggest the ff:

      "Got it. Sorry for the trouble, Egil."

    • majikayo

      Looks like a Job for a Maid! The Tales of a Dismissed Supermaid - Corrections Topic
      job for a maid • • majikayo

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      v4 p2

      ~0%

      “I’m very sorry, but we have a rule not to show [] inventors from foreign countries. Even those who hail from the Freja Kingdom... Oh, and please do drink your tea. It’s nothing fancy, I’m afraid.”

      Not to show what to foreign inventors? Plans? Blueprints?

    • ca.lima

      Father, Have You Sinned? An Assassin in Priest’s Robes - Corrections Topic
      father • • ca.lima

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      v1p7 ~96%

      [...] training sessions, " I murmured [...]

      Has a stray space after the comma.

    • Devon

      A Young Maiden’s Growing Pains: I Reincarnated and All I Got Was This 100X Stat Buff! - Corrections Topic
      young maiden • • Devon

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      v1p8

      89% - Tena -> Tenan
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      Tearmoon Empire - Corrections Topic
      j-novel heart tearmoon • • lovelight

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      kuali

      V18P1

      31% However, that wasn't wall ->Presumably that wasn't 'all'.
    • Devon

      Sorry Darling, but You Won’t Kill Me Again! - Corrections Topic
      sorry darling • • Devon

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      v1p7:

      51% - If I can’t kill when she’s queen -> Missing word? If I can’t kill her when she’s queen
    • alahue

      In Another World with Household Spells - Corrections Topic
      house-spells j-novel heart • • alahue

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      b.scot.morgan

      @eggnog said in In Another World with Household Spells - Corrections Topic:

      V6P8 18% and everywhere else that "force" is mentioned:

      "Force is what makes things work," I explained."[...] When force is applied to the food we eat, it becomes energy to move our bodies. A growing flower uses force to take energy from the sun[...]"

      This is a very strange definition of force. The physics concept of force is a push or pull on a object, with a magnitude and direction. It's not the same thing as a chemical reaction which is what most of her examples sound like to me. While force is indeed applied to the food we eat when we chew it, I don't get the impression Patience is describing chewing there. Is Patience giving a meaningless explanation in Japanese, or is there another word that force might be translated as...? I think she's describing the conversion of energy from one form to another, so maaaaybe transduction? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transducer

      I agree that what she is describing is a lot closer to energy transduction than anything else.
      However, given the apparently primitive state of that world's natural philosophy, and the fact that Patience is just trying to get basic concepts across to her little brothers, I had assumed that she wasn't even trying to use the terminology correctly in terms of real world physics but was just repurposing terminology for her own ends.

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