V10P3 97%
WIth -> With

In volume 9 part 9, Tsuji says, "Maybe Peter Carol’s pentagram ritual... No, maybe it needs to be more abstract than that." His name is Peter Carroll, not Peter Carol. He wrote Liber Null and Liber Kaos and he was one of the founders of the Illuminates of Thanateros. He's a niche figure, so I understand not knowing about him, but he is a specific real guy who's surname is spelled with two rs and two ls.

v5P1p4:

82% - […] why were some of Estavarde’s people chasing me […] -> Typo: Estaverde, as its spelled everywhere else in this part 91% - […] sometimes made for fierce arguments across vertical plains […] -> Wrong spelling: planes

v10p6 ~39%:

The reality was that I was an old woman inside, so that could be why we were able to understand each other or at least be on a somewhat similar page.

old woman -> old fogey?

We were discussing this on the JNC discord a bit, to the best of our recollections, previously Nia has stated that she's unsure of what gender she was in her previous life, whereas here she seems to be taking a more concrete stance on her gender.

If that's what the Japanese translates out to then that's well and good, but we figured it was worth double checking. If not, a more gender-neutral term like fogey would be appropriate. She's certainly called herself as such in the past, such as in v3:

v3p4 ~82%:

Honestly, I wished that the real Nia Liston got to survive rather than an old fogey like me.

V6 P8 (50% - 3rd line down from top of page)

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I believe the encircled word should be alert not alter.

v5 p6

~5%

A bow of light materialized in the Archangel’s hand. He drew it swiftly in one, continuous motion, loosing an arrow that flew toward Leah with incredulous speed—an immediate use of force. Either that was how he greeted all intruders, or Leah had successfully provoked him.

=> incredible. "Incredulous" is a state of mind, specifically "skeptical" or "disbelieving".

That being said, Merriam-Webster indicates there is a non-standard meaning of "incredible":

nonstandard : incredible sense 1
incredible adjective
1 : too extraordinary and improbable to be believed

So maybe the usage was intended here?

~ 15%

But the fact that she even could execute such precise, stable movements at her absolute limit... That was all thanks to her relentless training. Since she couldn’t train her muscles in real life, her physical speed could never improve. So instead, she honed everything else to a razor’s edge. Her ability to read ahead—her perception, her insight.

Something seems off with the phrasing -- why can't she train her muscles in real life? Maybe that sentence should be:

Since she couldn’t train her virtual muscles in real life, her physical speed in the game could not be improved that way. So instead, she honed everything else to a razor’s edge. Her ability to read ahead—her perception, her insight.

v5 p3

~54%

It helped thatCarter had thrown himself forward to avoid taking the full impact of the strike.

=> that Carter

V6 P11, 4%
"At the same time, the white coats were improving noticeably, [each/every] slash of their weapons and spell slung visibly brimming with raw power."

V5P6 29%:

plateeees
earthquakeeeees

The drawing-out-vowels thing that gets attributed to some characters in J-novels doesn't really work in English and I can't understand how those characters are supposed to sound. But drawing out the silent vowels makes no sense. It should probably be the A in these words that gets extended.

v10 p8
~1%

Even back in Beaden, Curuni had carried the saberboars on the assumption that she wouldn’t be fighting—it was unreasonable to ask anyone to join a battle

¶ carrying so much weight around.“Mmmgh...”

Inappropriate paragraph break.

@SomeOldGuy said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

V13P6 8%:
we realized that we alsO needed to
also

65%:
WHen it came to me
When

Thank you for catching this!!

4.6:

She was the one who had fallenin love

She was the one who had fallen in love

Volume 5 part 10 55%

There are plenty of jobs that an adventurer can do ... and guard envoys

Is envoys the correct word here? In this context an envoy would be a diplomat, guarding them would usually be a job for the knights in this sort of setting, adventurers who aren't professional bodyguards would not be a typical choice, it might happen if there is a staffing shortage but shouldn't be a typical job for adventures. Convoys would make a lot more sense in context.

V2P7:
15%:

He was so infatuated with his wife that he disliked even the idea of letting her see his family in the empire.

Isn’t the wife the one with family in the empire? If so, this should say her family.

58%:

He soon reached his destination: the Londard Trading Company, a major trading firm.

Shouldn’t this be Londart?

Volume 2 Part 8
48% your worthless little beast -> you worthless little beast

Volume 21. Part 2. 95%

"Don't go stinkin' your neck in stupid shit while I ain't watchin', got it?" > Don't go stickin' your neck in stupid shit while I ain't watchin', got it?"

v5p10 Afterword - "I think I managed to pack in quite a bit of web-exclusive content this time around" and "It looks like there are going to be more and more web-exclusive stories moving forward" - is it actually "web-exclusive", as in exclusive to the web novel? How can it be web-exclusive when it's included in the light novel?

Volume 8 Part 7
16% I was nothing like -> It was nothing like
69% some odd characters show up where it is supposed to say "I don't think being my partner would bring you trouble."

@Hylebos Thanks! It's fixed in the final version.

V16p10 96% - Afterword says "Thanks for buying volume 15" - should be 16, unless the author genuinely made that mistake.