V1P1
~19%

when we were in the cellar library that the previous head of House Lumiole had used.

Extra letter? Lumiole->Lumiol

V1P7
~21%

Two men were holding me down, and there were now other four men surrounding me as well.

Wrong word order? other four->four other

~63%

The opened up the front door, then bowed reverently

Missing letter and missing full stop? The->They and reverently->reverently.

V1P5
~42%

“Forget everything I said. Fight Ashley as if you’re trying to kill him.”

Missing start “? Fight Ashley->“Fight Ashley

V3 P1, 54%
When she opens her mouth again it’s to say, “I should have said this far sooner: Both I and my country own all of you a great debt."
Own -> owe

v5 p12

~90%

Another reason for their progress was that the Archangel had begun scaling back both the rank and frequency of its healing spells. It never once used the devastating ApE attack from earlier—Judgment Ray—again either. All of it the result of Lyrienne’s strategy.

Should that be AoE attack? As in Area of Effect attack?

It seems weird to comment on issues in the afterward (specifically the one for volume 2), but it seems like the translation for part of it has to be wrong, because the author is thanking the publisher for being allowed to advertise his "new" work despite it being under a different publisher, and that "new" works is Magic Stone Gourmet.

I must also give thanks for being graciously allowed to advertise my new work in this afterward despite it being under a different publisher. It'll be published under BOOKS and is called Magic Stone Gourmet.

The first volume of Sundering Fate was published in Japan in August of 2022 (and the second volume was published in March of 2023). The most recent volume of Magic Stone Gourmet was published in Japan in June of 2021. So, the entirety of what he's released for Magic Stone Gourmet came out before even a single volume of Sundering Fate came out. So, calling Magic Stone Gourmet a new series in the afterward for any volume of Sundering Fate doesn't make any sense.

So, I don't know what the afterward for volume 2 actually says in Japanese, but I don't see how it could say what the English version currently says about Magic Stone Gourmet being a new series.

Volume 10 - Part 5:

[49%]

"Got. Sorry for the trouble, Egil."

Missing a word. I suggest the ff:

"Got it. Sorry for the trouble, Egil."

v4 p2

~0%

“I’m very sorry, but we have a rule not to show [] inventors from foreign countries. Even those who hail from the Freja Kingdom... Oh, and please do drink your tea. It’s nothing fancy, I’m afraid.”

Not to show what to foreign inventors? Plans? Blueprints?

V3P4, 5% “Lakya drooped her head” - Rakya

20%: “A small scrap of paper in between the diary [pages].”

v1p7 ~96%

[...] training sessions, " I murmured [...]

Has a stray space after the comma.

v1p8

89% - Tena -> Tenan

V18P1

31% However, that wasn't wall ->Presumably that wasn't 'all'.

v1p7:

51% - If I can’t kill when she’s queen -> Missing word? If I can’t kill her when she’s queen

@eggnog said in In Another World with Household Spells - Corrections Topic:

V6P8 18% and everywhere else that "force" is mentioned:

"Force is what makes things work," I explained."[...] When force is applied to the food we eat, it becomes energy to move our bodies. A growing flower uses force to take energy from the sun[...]"

This is a very strange definition of force. The physics concept of force is a push or pull on a object, with a magnitude and direction. It's not the same thing as a chemical reaction which is what most of her examples sound like to me. While force is indeed applied to the food we eat when we chew it, I don't get the impression Patience is describing chewing there. Is Patience giving a meaningless explanation in Japanese, or is there another word that force might be translated as...? I think she's describing the conversion of energy from one form to another, so maaaaybe transduction? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transducer

I agree that what she is describing is a lot closer to energy transduction than anything else.
However, given the apparently primitive state of that world's natural philosophy, and the fact that Patience is just trying to get basic concepts across to her little brothers, I had assumed that she wasn't even trying to use the terminology correctly in terms of real world physics but was just repurposing terminology for her own ends.

V10 P13, 60%
"With a bouquet of flowers in his hands that he had convinced a florist [to] put together at the break of dawn..."

V5 P1, 30%
"Reina was dextrous, so she could do anything, but she had said that Zelos was bad at it."
Seems both dextrous and dexterous are valid spellings, but with the latter being more common thought I'd make a note just in case.

While I'm noting things:
45% “This island is relatively untouched by human hands, and yet there are surprisingly many artificial things here.”
Seems a little definitive for someone with amnesia. Perhaps is -> seems (unless this happens to be a slip/foreshadowing and she knows more than she's letting on, or her subconscious coming through)

64%
"The three of them had apparently gotten stronger lately and could beat some monsters now, but when their enemies got to the rank of rabbits, they still struggled unless they were ready to sacrifice themselves to take down their foes."
This could well be me being dense, or just simply forgetting previous events, but what on earth is 'the rank of rabbits'?

Volume 8 part 4 53%

They exploited their people, imposing heavy taxes to enrich himself.

The pronouns don't match but appear to refer to the same subject, one should change. Based on context it should probably be themselves instead of himself, but changing they could make a grammatically sensible sentence.

V10 throughout i.e. part 8 63%:

Camellia has been used constantly when referring to events in Hydrangea, as well as the events that actually took place in Camellia. I don't know if the issue is with the original or confusion from the translator, but it's very confusing to the reader.