V4P12 ~63%

"...but he's grown weary of it..." -> "...but he's he'd grown weary of it..."

10.9

Tahara gestured to the variable mountain of food and drinks, all part of the hoard they’d confiscated from the central nobles

“veritable”

V14 P3 (0% - Chapter 2, page 1, bottom line)

...allow information to spread far and wide across and world,...

spread far and wide across the world,...

V4 P7, 21%
"Now that they had money to spare, though, she had no reason [not] to try to learn to cook"

V3 P3 (57% - 5th line from the bottom of the page)

...it struck not just Gnome, but the Lunamaria as well.

not just Gnome, but Lunamaria as well.

(remove "the" for proper English syntax)

ADDED:
V3 P3 (86% - 9th line from top of page)

Here it comes!...she though0,...

she thought,...

(correct typo)

V7 P4 80% "Of course I did, she smugly." -> missing a verb

V4 P12 (% - 4th line from the bottom of the page)

..., He was easily in the running o be considered his closest aid.

...to be considered his closest aide.

(an aide is an assistant to an important person, especially a political leader.)
{source: Oxford Language Dictionary}

V3, P12, around 39%:
>Beneki Benkei didn't have six hands just for show.

@UrchinStar47 said in Mercedes and the Waning Moon - Corrections Topic:

Petals of flowers, not pedals. Around the end of chapter 68.

V18P1
~42%

Chapter 1<

Just guessing that this is a typo and it's not meant to be chapter 'greater than 1'? (Though guess we'll see if there is a chapter 1 or chapter 2 later in the prepubs) Chapter 1< -> Chapter 1

3.2:

isn't it?" said Peridot. You don't spend

isn't it?" said Peridot. "You don't spend

@Poncho9761
For Ser Ildana, it's the first time, so of course there isn't a previous instance!

For "daemon," you're right. The term was coined by Caim for himself after fusioning with the Poison Queen, so it should be "demon lord" and not "daemon" here. But the author does use "daemon" in the JP text, so we decided to keep the mistake.

Thanks for the rest! I made the changes.

V5P8 ~38%
"I guess two fellow pervers can get along." ->"I guess two fellow perverts can get along."

V10P8 ~89%
"...escaped through the window much in same the way she had entered." -> "...escaped through the window in much the same way she had entered."

Sent this to support, but I thought that I should also mention it here. I don’t buy the ebooks, so I don’t know if it’s already been corrected. Probably has been.

v2p9:

30% - Though I’d told Katsuragi-san that I needed to go to the store as welI, that wasn’t entirely true. -> Typo. The second “l” in “well” was a capital “I”.

V1P8, 1%: “I refrained from suggesting that we [turn?] back.”

Just noticed this but v3 p9

~40%

After seeing off the wolf pack, Leah turned her attention to the goblin ranches. With her plans expanding to ranching entire dungeons, this small-scale operation wasn’t particularly useful anymore. Instead of shutting it down, she decided to Retain the goblins and form a new goblin corps for her grand army of the apocalypse. It was the least she could do to thank them for their endless service. They would not farm, instead of being farmed.

Should that be They would now farm, instead of being farmed ?

Also, in this chapter there are two instances of Lieflais being spelled Lieflay.

v4p7:

32% - But Lord Fukushima, we haveto go to the owatas […] -> Missing space: we have to go to

v6p12:

1% - The first group stood on the front line with bitter expressions, fighting though they weren’t really used to it. -> Missing word(?): […] fighting as though they weren’t really […]

V15 P11 50%

"Ho ho ho ho ho!" Maomao said- the closest thing to a laugh she could manage with such an intense frown on her face.
「ほほほほ」猫猫は顔が引きつり、変な笑い声しか出ない。

It does not seem like Maomao is frowning here, but rather her face is twitching/flinching from being nervous.

V10 P10L

33% "However, the ties that bound people together were mysterious things." - even tho this is a flashback I still think this should be present tense, after all it is Oz's PoV inner monologue from a time that he's not reminiscing? "...the ties that bind people together are ...."