9.1:

You should go on dates where there aren't any monsters or medicinal plants."

"You should go on dates where there aren't any monsters or medicinal plants."

Missing leading double quote.

V8, P9, 62-63%

"Personally I wanted her to win. Compare to Lynette,..."

It should be "him" since Nia is talking about Asuma Hinoki. On the same note, 61-62% Nia spoke his name as "Kenki" idk if it was translation error or not but I haven't heard about it.

This is also I'm not sure, but around 37-38%

"Now that the first matches of the tourney were over with, there were roughly seventy-five fighters left. It was a number that allowed for an even split..."

75 is an odd number, even split cannot be done unless of course the real number is an even number because it says “roughly" so idk if it should be fixed or nah

V11, P5, around 40%:

“Dorino! Look, um, there has to be someone even better out there for you! You’re a real catch!” Volf consulted conforted him.

Wrong word, I think.

Around 42%:

Dorini Dorino couldn’t let them do such a thing for his sake. “No, you really don’t have to do that! I should be going now anyway!”

Wrong letter.

VSS P10 11% "Maybe you should do your damn [job!he] screamed internally." -> job! He

V3 P10 (81% - 4th line up from bottom of page)
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Should be:

...,Sora's ex-fiancee,...
-or- ...,his ex-fiancee,...

v1p9:

76% - Thank the lord. -> Missing capitalization? Given that it’s being said by the priest (especially), I’m presuming that it would be “Thank the Lord.”

V6P9
~47% (same place as other)

“Because I’m your queen. I might be as capable as the others, but I know a lot about money. If you’re even in need of money, I’ll help you.”

Wrong word?; even->ever

v3P2p5:

75% - Lord Gerhad, however, did not say much […]. -> Typo/missing letter: Lord Gerhard, however, […].

V4 P6, 84%
"Much to my relief, Tudeo managed to nod in response—albeit barely—and I continued my overly familiar speel."
Speel -> spiel

4.5

“After selling everything that was left on the ship, I got them to quit and paid them their severance, thought it wasn’t all that much.”

“though”

V5P3 ~3%

The shipping containers they'd originally prepared for the amblypygids had been full up with owata pods, so the not-so-little guys were staying in the same rooms as the family during the voyage.

full → filled

@Khazidhea Yes, you're right, this should say "Rank F" instead. Thanks for catching this!

Volume 2 Part 7. "wrecked havoc" -> "wreaked havoc".

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/wreak-havoc

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/wreak havoc

v2p4:

99% - […] with Quinza’s group staring over. -> Typo: starting over. :)

Volume 8 - Part 6:

[0%]

got sent to an inescapableprison?

Add space.

V4P8

... with the self-proclaimed Duke Raul because I'd killed the chancellor --- his father --- publicly announced his crimes, and declared that I would be seizing his holdings.

This is a list of three items: killed chancellor, announced his crimes, declared seizure. There should be a comma separating them, but the em-dashed insertion (--- his father ---) messes this up, making "killed the chancellor publicly announced his crimes" into a single item. Either second em-dash becomes a comma, or rearrange the order to make it work.

Less importantly, it is unclear whether the two "his" refer to the current or former Duke Raul. (Although for the second "his", the holdings are the same holdings, so it doesn't really matter.)

V7P1
~10%

With Operation Quiet Convo a total bust, I had no choice but to pivot to Operation Try to Keep Everyone Watching from Getting Crazy Ideas About Me

Very small, but for consistency and since everything is capitalized including the 'Me' (so small words are included), missing capital?; from->From

~10%

but she was currently with the prince, speaking of the future of the town with the clan chief.As for Safina, she’d left Kairomea atop Snow

I stopped to pat myself on the back for my excellent idea before declaring to Orthoaguina,“I’d like to learn about controlling or restraining incredible power.

~19%

when Orthoaguina had fallen, she jumped to his defense.Perhaps he realized as much and was grateful for it

Missing spaces?;
chief.As->chief. As
Orthoaguina,“I’d->Orthoaguina, “I’d
defense.Perhaps->defense. Perhaps

~19%

Sita’s descendants were the first to speak with Orthoaguina

Wrong word? Since Sita does not have descendants yet and it was the people that came before her, not after? descendants->ancestors

~76%

“Did the Argent Knight not have any allies?” Safina wondered. “As far as I know, I he didn’t, but...”

Extra word / letter? I know, I he didn’t->I know, he didn’t

~76%

Caught off guard and mind overloaded with so many different concerns, she was petrified and couldn’t suppress her loudly beating heart .

Extra space?; heart .->heart.

~86%

Of course, he’d instantly shot me a glance upon asking that, and all I could do was avert my gaze and flee from the situation...Point being, Orthoaguina copied the spirit tree’s method to step outside.

Since it's a capital assuming missing space?; situation...Point->situation... Point (or make P lowercase? P->p?)

V2 P13 (23% - 8th line down from top of page.)

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Vamillia was seen by both...

(Correct typo)

13.8

“Full glad am I to see you young ones with so much energy. Very good, very good.”

“Gladful” is still a word, even if it doesn't rate being recognized by the spell checker.

“Joyful” also works if you want to stick with popular words, although it's slightly less apt for this meaning.

@Gaffary said in Goodbye, Overtime! - Corrections Topic:

v6p10:

40% - Lydia had learned that Mikhail was to summer in the Yulnova Duchy -> probably to spend the summer in or something like that

That one’s valid, but it might be more British than American english. I’ve encountered the phrase in the past, but I couldn’t tell you whether on TV or in print. Oxford English Dictionary says that “summer”, as a verb, means “spend the summer in a particular place.”