@segoth said in Zero Believers Vol. 1 - Corrections Topic:

Vol. 2 part 2

~80%: I couldn’t move my hands. Or my legs. It was like I didn’t even exist

If this is referring to her arms and legs I should be replaced with they

I couldn’t move my hands. Or my legs. It was like they didn’t even exist

There's the possibility that at that point in her thinking she wasn't considering a body that didn't have arms or legs, so not having them could be taken as evidence that she didn't exist. There's a certain amount of panic going on in her mind, after all.
Need to see what the raws show, I'd think, to be sure that isn't what the author intended.

6.6

daughter of the head nobels!

“nobles”

v5p5:

because it would be, and I quote, "a pain the ass."
because it would be, and I quote, "a pain in the ass."
Unless, of course, the Japanese explicitly doesn't include the 'in'... since he does say it's a quote.

Wait. Did Mashiro take the lead because she didn't trust me to sort a date myself?
'sort a date'? Maybe 'arrange a date', 'organize a date', or 'manage a date'? Dunno. But 'sort' doesn't get used with 'date' in this context.

v1p1:

I made sure to cover her with a futon (or a blanket, I should say
Futon!? A futon would be a mattress-like object, and not something you would cover someone with. I don't know what the Japanese term would be for a blanket-like covering, but futon ain't it.

Volume 12 - Part 2:

[30%]: "(...) as I and my four companions (...)" I -> me? [52%]: "Sitting at a corner table nursing a cup of wine was Mileena." Judging from the cup on the illustration, isn't that actually sake, or some short drink? It really looks too tiny to hold wine. [67%]: "Corrosion" I'm not sure that word works for describing Gubagg's ability. I mean, it does not corrode anything, there isn't even any metal around for that. It's more like... "absorption" maybe? It's like both of his abilities do something similar, just in different ways.

2.10

throw him offtrack

“off track”

Hopefully resurrecring this thread isn't going to bite me in the ass, but I kept forgetting to ask this question, and this thread seemed to be the only viable place...

"The Palatial tongue"

Is it Palatial from "Palace", meaning that it's a "court dialect"
Or Palatial from "Pallette", meaning the roof of the mouth?

Both technically fit, but the reason I'm asking is pronunciation:
When I read, my inside voice is really, really loud, and this word just feels like sticking a stick in my own bike wheel.

In the first example, the "tia" would be closer to a "sha" sound(think like in "action").
While in the second example, the T maintains the pronunciation(Like in the word "History").

Volume 1 P3

[90%] We must needs prepare ourselves properly for this journey. -> We must prepare?

Volume 3 - Part 8:

[4%] Treat her well, ‘kay?” Lord Tris stared ► It should be ’kay (different ’ ). [10%] with her. Lady Stacy’s eyes widened ► It should be Stacey’s. [32%] how little you think of me as a man” ► Missing period. [96%] “It seems that you’re troubling Lady ► The dialogue's starting double quote alone is in italic format.

@pcj Not me giving Miriela the promotion in rank in a lifetime >_>

8.8

Someday in the distant future

I don't think this phrase means what you think it means.

the four of us were able to rendezvous safely while the clergy was distracted via the hidden passageways that opened up.

“while the clergy were distracted the four of us were able to rendezvous safely via the hidden passageways that opened up.”

7.10

our usual pre-meal greeting

Isn't this more of an “expression” or “appreciation”? (“Thanksgiving” might be accurate but is a little too on-the-nose.)

a creature about four meters in height

“length”

The building on the second floor was still under construction.

“The second floor of the building was still under construction.”

These items are updated!

Regarding Eagle Eye and White Castle:

We've been going with "the Eagle Eye" because it's a one-of-a-kind, kind of famous monster. It's a griffon, but it's title that people call it is "the Eagle Eye," kind of like how "the Blue Light" the title of the demon king (and Elyas' sister).

As for White Castle, despite the name, it's not just referring to the castle itself, but also to the surrounding area and probably even the town that used to be near the castle back when people lived in Huzak.

Volume 4 - Part 7:

[96%] “I got there a lot, so I’ll show you the way.” ► It should be go.

Volume 8 - Part 6:

[23%] help that everyone had so much baggage.” ► It should be luggage to keep it consistent? [87%] on the job, so I’m interested in doing even ► Given the context it should be not interested.

Volume 4 - Part 12:

[65%] the old fart ‘Daddy,’ he’d anything you asked, ► It should be he’d do.

Volume 12 - Part 5:

[85%] similarly be equipped with the strongestweapons. ► It should be strongest weapons (space).

Volume 10 - Part 4:

[24%] Eudom, meanwhile, seemed positively astounded. ► It should be Hudom. Already reported. [59%] make sure it’s empty and begin the demo, right?” ► Not really an error, but I'd just go with demolition. [63%] wouldn’t have been there ready to demo the building. ► Not really an error, but I'd just go with demolish. [99%] smirks on their faces Everyone couldn’t help ► Missing period.

Volume 5, part10, 33%:
600 km per hour is not a rate of acceleration but a velocity/speed.

Also, I forgot to comment on that, but back in part six (56%) it says that the Good Hope accelerated to just below the speed of light "within half a second", which if true means that ship maneuverability is increased by several orders of magnitude compared to the original series where the ship had a rate of acceleration of 500km/s², at which rate it would take more than 10 minutes to reach relativistic speeds.
It is possible that this is an error in the original, but if true it would render almost all space battles infeasible:
If an antique ship like the Good Hope is capable of such accelerations, that would mean that all modern ships in the series henceforth also are.