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    • myskaros

      Min-Maxing My TRPG Build - Corrections Topic
      minmaxing trpg • • myskaros

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      Libri Liberorum

      Vol 11 canto 1 p12

      or an time-tested blade
      "an" -> "a"

      feel like he'd becomean adult yet.
      -> become an

    • philhouse

      Trials and Tribulations - Corrections Topic
      trials n tribs • • philhouse

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      eggnog

      V3P2p10 19%:

      "I sit at the throne by the grace of God. But does god watch what goes on in the world we live in? Does God judge the good incidents from the bad? For if god truly exists [...]

      The capitalization of "God" is inconsistent. Either all four should be capitalized or none of them should be.

      53%:

      deliver a gift on Behalf of Master Reinald

      Behalf shouldn't be capitalized.

      88%:

      If I was going to consider things seriously, I needed a different tact.

      tact --> tack
      https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/do-you-change-tack-or-tact

    • philhouse

      The Tanaka Family Reincarnates - Corrections Topic
      tanakas • • philhouse

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      @Libri-Liberorum said in The Tanaka Family Reincarnates - Corrections Topic:

      V5P8

      This must've been one of those Loafcraftian creatures that drove you insane just by looking at them!

      That would normally be Lovecraftian, but perhaps this is an intentional play on the name.

      Given how many other names from our world have been fiddled with, I’m expecting this to be the latter. :)

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      Tearmoon Empire - Corrections Topic
      j-novel heart tearmoon • • lovelight

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      K

      V16 P2, 56%
      "I’ve gone boat fishing in Gyrados beforeon my own before, but I can’t really do that here"
      and
      "Thus, Orania was dead-seton heading out on one of the fishing boats"
      Missing spaces

      P4 61%
      "jumping in without hesitation to save an innocent child as despite your standing"
      Perhaps that might work better without the 'as', or change to 'as Kiryl' (or similar) instead?

    • majikayo

      Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic
      zilbagias • • majikayo

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      In the premium edition epub the illustration of Daiagias and Libidine is after the epilogue instead of within the corresponding text

    • majikayo

      EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic
      exp is golden • • majikayo

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      v4 p6

      “All right,” Wayne said. “I really don’t want to do this, but Thunderbolt!” A spear of lightning shot from his hand and struck an angel midair. It convulsed, wings seizing, then crashed down in front of Gil.
      Lightningbolt was the most basic offensive lighting spell. It hadn’t killed in one hit, nor had Wayne expected it to, but it struck hard enough to deal serious damage and ground the creature.

      I'd suggest using one name (Thunderbolt or Lightningbolt) consistently. I can't remember what if anything was used previously though.

    • philhouse

      The Villainess Speaks Not - Corrections Topic
      speak not • • philhouse

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      V1 Part 6 ~72% Suggestion for a less vocally specific verb:
      "Lilliana called over her handmaiden," -> "Lilliana summoned her handmaiden,"

    • majikayo

      Even Exiled, She’s Still the Beloved Saint! St. Evelyn’s Weird and Wonderful Friends - Corrections Topic
      st evelyn • • majikayo

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      v1p6:

      I’m pretty sure that I saw a missing space or two in today’s part. I didn’t note their locations, though…
    • philhouse

      The Bladesmith's Enchanted Weapons - Corrections Topic
      bladesmith • • philhouse

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      Hylebos

      v3p7 ~12%:

      "Do you think that I did something unnecessary?" Asked Lutz, still not entirely sure of the etiquette among adventurers in those kinds of situations.

      Asked -> asked.

    • schuburner

      The Reincarnation of the Strongest Exorcist in Another World - Corrections Topic
      strongexorcist • • schuburner

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      Gamen

      v2p7 34% the emperor has several other important cities -> empire

    • Meiru

      Repeated Vice - Corrections Topic
      repeated vice • • Meiru

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      1.6:

      slumber to deep to be disturbed.

      slumber too deep to be disturbed.

      With Lunamaar as her, partner she was the female sailor possessed by a spirit.

      With Lunamaar as her partner, she was the female sailor possessed by a spirit.

      Better, but something still feels a bit off about the phrasing.

    • alahue

      Royal Spirits - Corrections Topic
      royal spirits • • alahue

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      @rhysm
      That I'm paying attention enough for that to have registered as weird speaks well toward both the story and the translation team; I am enjoying this one!

    • schuburner

      Nia Liston - Corrections Topic
      nialiston • • schuburner

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      pcj

      Volume 8 - Part 13:

      [13%] fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [13%] two hundred and fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [83%] But if she’d said that she was coming to ours, so it must be fine. >> either the if or the so needs to go away. this doesn't make sense with both.
    • yuzumori

      The Unwanted Undead Adventurer - Corrections Topic
      unwanted undead • • yuzumori

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      @Khazidhea
      Volume 14 has been published.
      The prepub may not reflect the final edits.
      They don't make corrections to the prepubs after the final work is published.
      Once a work has been published, JNC accepts corrections to the contents of the ebook via email to support@j-novel.club

      The errors you are reporting may or may not exist within the published work.
      The folks who would handle them don't monitor the correction topics.
      So posting here after the work is published is an exercise in futility, and may also be concerning stuff that got corrected in the published work.

    • myskaros

      To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic
      land mines • • myskaros

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      V12p7 50% - Yuki took the snout back from Haruka - Haruka gave the snout to Yuki 3 paragraphs up, so either names around the wrong way or something went wrong elsewhere.

    • alahue

      Water Magician - Corrections Topic
      water magician • • alahue

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      SilverFuton

      Arc 1 Volume 6 - Part 4:

      [~36%]

      The monthlong journey from the royal to their destination

      It's missing a word. Should be royal capital.

    • majikayo

      The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic
      otome heroine • • majikayo

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      kingpendragon

      V6, P5, around 46%:

      Ignoring her servant, Alicia stuck her head out from the terrace window. Theo and Bibi Vivi were both momentarily shocked.

      Wrong name.

    • Meiru

      Blade Skill Online - Corrections Topic
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      V3 P2

      ~50%

      Item stolen: Naval Piercing.

      Should that be Navel Piercing? (I mean, Yuri could have stolen something for piercing through battleships, but somehow I reckon that a bellybutton piercing is more likely given some of the other junk that got stolen.)

    • Meiru

      Reforming an Icy Final Boss - Corrections Topic
      icy-final-boss • • Meiru

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      karasutengu

      V1 P5 (22% - 4th line down from top of page)

      alt text

      Add missing "what" to sentence, e.g. - "Are you certain that's not what you would do".

      ("Not what you would do": This is used to contrast an action with what someone else would do, often implying that the action is out of character or different from their typical behavior. - AI Overview)

    • alahue

      From Villainess to Healer - Corrections Topic
      vill-heal • • alahue

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      v6 p7

      More missing or misplaced spaces around italics (text inside <em></em> tags), for instance at around 1%:

      “Even from Sharon, I didn’t expectthis ,” Kent grumbled as he wiped sweat from his face. As usual, he was leading our formation. “Are we seriously doing this? I guess we have to...”

      I won't mention any others, but please re-check this.

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