V8.2 P7, 20%
“Ver well. Oh, actually, hold up a sec, Akira.”
Ver -> Very

58%
"[He] Then switched back to his guns and targetted the foot soldiers."

V6 P5 (58% - 2nd line down from top of page)

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Replace "here" with "her".
(e.g.- ...stolen Wisteria's seat from her...)

v7p11 ~62%

Prince Willie is spelled as Willi in

"Please, don't," Willi said with a rueful smile.

v2p3 ~55%

He was reluctant to spend money so lavishly right of the bat, so couldn't bring himself to ask for it right away.

The second half seems to be missing either a conjunction like and so couldn't or the subject like so he couldn't bring.

~80%

"Excuse me, can you please tell me the way to the old annex."

Should in my opinion be ended with a question mark.

Volume 21. Part 12. 55%

Like in part 7, it's the same song Selphy sang in volume 19 ("Can you hear my song?")

Volume 4 part 5 about 91%

It says

staying in the Fierce Ogrefolk village

but the characters right now are in the Beastfolk village

V6 P2 (50% - 9th line up from bottom of page)

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Replace "tit" with "it".

4.2:

Please be rest assured.

Something is off with this. I think the "please be" is not normally associated with "rest assured"?
"Please be reassured"?
"Please rest assured"?

V16p10 96% - Afterword says "Thanks for buying volume 15" - should be 16, unless the author genuinely made that mistake.

V6P7

"We shall deploy troops to the north of the city ...

"to the north" means outside the city and north of it. (See previous paragraph, where the river is "to the north".) These troops are being deployed along the northern wall of the city. So "deploy troops in the north of the city" would be the simplest correction.

V7 P4, 14%
“So where are we going? [Will] Eris be there?” Rurika pressed them.

V6 P10, 47%
"Cody didn’t know it, but the other members of his crew—Pet, Luca, and Eddge..."
Pet -> Pett

V5 P2, 67%
"Both the hallway and the entry hall had been renovated recently, much to my surprise; I’d only learned of the renovations plans after the work was already completed."
Could be a difference in dialect, but I've only heard it as 'renovation plans', (no matter how many renovations take place)

V13 P14, 16%
"Ishucaa was the temple’s head priest, and yet she hadn’t known a thing about this passageway."
Ishucaa -> Ishuca

56%
"The Wing had used the return device on the seventh floor"
Wing -> Jade Wings (or possibly just Wings, though I don't recall seeing their team name shortened that way)

61%
"This locked Kaho in the moment of deep thought."
Seems slightly off to me. Perhaps instead: "This locked [or knocked? or sent?] Kaho into a moment of deep thought."

V5 P7 (29% - 3rd line up from bottom of page)

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Change "someone" to "somewhere" as in:
She's hiding away somewhere safe, isn't she?!

V17P3

Orania ran, desperately chasing after Yanna and Kiryl in the cramped back allies of Ganudos.

allies -> alleys

v03 release: character profiles

Three different characters are described as "Shenley's father" in the character profiles section for the Holy Maple Leaf Empire.

v2p2 4%

Still, they did share some things in common

Sounds like it should be did have some things in common

Vol 10 part 3
88% in "so the JDSF probably wouldn't have been willing to adjust their schedule."

Shouldn't this be JSDF or JDAG? there isn't any prior use of this acronym

@00-biting said in The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic:

"Yes, my bodyguard here took her time," said Jinshi.

yes it is obvious this is Maomao talking and not Jinshi.
There is even a reference to him feeling carefree (ref to LN5 epilogue)