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v5p13:

67%: [...] each of his older brothers met timely deaths. -> untimely deaths. The surrounding text implies death of unnatural causes, thus untimely deaths.

Volume 4 - Part 10:

[17%] whether they’re zombies or battle robots. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [66%] his ground. He doesn't seem to be ruling ► It should be doesn’t (different ’ ).

Volume 13 - Part 4:

[45%] fused together to form a women, who had then ► It should be woman (singular).

5.10

“Do I really seem like the kind of person to formulate such a plot?

A dialogue tag would help make it clear that this is Isana speaking here.

Volume 10 part 10 first sentence of the last paragraph at the very end of the sentence after the comma.

I believe the word

Soul

Is misspelled and is spelled as

sould

Instead.

Please remove the d at the end.

v3p4:

35% - […] just how difficult it was to get Alphonse to agree to anything […] -> There are two Alfonses that follow in the same paragraph, and many more later in the part.

@Terabyte
And both our posts got shifted here when someone noticed them there.
Making me look even more like an idiot than usual.
wry grin

v5p9:

87% - […] I wasn’t really a religious person, but Adonix-sana probably had a different mentality […] -> Too much time at the temple around this point? Did Adonix-san and Advastlis-sama get blended together? :)

Volume 2 - Part 3:

[2%] when they were all these mean things >> should probably be were saying all [6%] this new red bean—flavored one looks yummy! >> em-dash should be en-dash [32%] high school—appropriate >> em-dash should be en-dash

V3P8
90%: When the imperial magicians had conducted an analysis of the item ---> royal magicians

Why would the King ask foreign magicians from a hostile country to examine an item that caused the coup?

Vol. 2 Part 8

83%
Images flashed through their minds of Yotsuba losing all hope in humanity,
Images flashed through their minds of Yotsuba losing all faith in humanity,
Images flashed through their minds of Yotsuba losing all hope for humanity,

Volume 19 (Gaiden) - Part 1:

[50%] caused me to start hearing voices........ Wait. ► It should be 9 periods (currently 8). 😋

Volume 2 - Part 3:

[%] “Um... ” she uttered quietly and looked sheepish. ► Remove extra space.

Volume 9 Part 5

[70%] The moral framework of the Central Orthdox Church was shared... => Central Orthodox Church

Volume 4 - Part 9:

[53%] refresh yourself, and broaden your horizons” ► Missing period.

Volume 20 - Part 3:

[74%] “Aah!” suddenly overlapped with their chatter ► Missing period.

Vol. 7 Part 8

85%
Maika had brought up a good point. Rihn sighed in agreement.
Maika had brought up a good point.
Rihn sighed in agreement.

Volume 5 - Part 9:

[0%] ► These 4 paragraphs at the start are duplicates. Part 8 ended with the same ones, albeit slightly different. Heck yeah! A tea kettle and a tail means tanuki! No doubt about it! With a poof, a tanuki’s face and arms appeared, sticking out from the kettle. There was no mistaking what it was. “A-Are you a yōkai?” I asked. “Poko!” It apparently was as it nodded its head towards my question. [72%] “Oh, are you telling me to drink up? ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [72%] Tea Kettle Tanuki is too long to say. [...] ► This paragraph isn't indented like the others. Replace the line line break with a paragraph break. [78%] I expected to be outbid quicklyt, and I was ► It should be quickly. [80%] ► The tanuki's dialogue's closing double quote is missing. “Sorry, I was just a little surprised.” “Pom. [96%] ten-star quality when the rarit is only a one? ► It should be rarity.

Volume 6 - Part 5:

[98%] Much as I did before before, you lack words.” ► Duplicate before.