@groudonvert-own27br That was just a regular commercial treaty. It wasn't a magical contract. Friede probably just figured he wouldn't get caught. And he also is just monumentally stupid and lazy.

V6 P2, 73%
"It was usually at times like this that the chronically cheerful Al could be relied upon to lift the mood, but at the moment, his otherwise permanently positivity was nowhere to be seen."
Permanently positivity -> 'permanent positivity', or 'permanently positive [attitude]'

Vol.7 pt.2

Around 65% hoo-ha is used for a sound. Unfortunately, hoo-ha is slang for vagina.

v3p8:

0%: "I was the only person in the room without a status." -> without status or without a title 0%: "Leah and Fiore weren’t here, and apparently they were hanging out with each other." -> remove and

V3 P6, 50%
"This restaurant was kind of like a hidden gem among the imperial and high-ranking aristocratic families. Memories of the birthdays Airi and I had celebrated here flowed through my mind. After our academy training got tougher, though, he hadn’t been able to make time to come here."
He -> she (or I, I suppose, depending who Eugene's referring to)

77%
"He was over ten years older than Airi and m, so he had already graduated from the military academy by the time we entered it"
M -> me

V3 P7, 0%
"As an angel from Heaven and a servant of the Goddess of Fate, mom [was] absolutely certain."

(Edit 4/8/26) V3 P12, 9%
"we were children who couldn't even defend themselves"
Not sure if I'm correct, but in my head 'ourselves' sounds like it might be better fit.

V3 P10, 28%
"Tatiltiu growled, as if in response to what I said"
Tatiltiu -> Tailtiu

V12 p5

Quenching had strengthened the axe, yes, but it has also made it more brittle. By heating it back up and slowly cooling it, the axe would retain it's toughness but also become more flexible and less prone to breakage. In not sure if this was an error of the original author (there have been many in this series) or an error in translation, but there are a few incorrect uses of technical terms here.

In metallurgy, strength can refer to several different properties. Quenching does not improve all of them and in fact reduces some.

Quenching increases hardness (the resistance to abrasion and ability to hold a fine cutting edge) in steel(but not in most other metals), at the cost of dramatically reducing toughness, which is the opposite of brittleness and describes the ability to survive impact without damage or deformation.

A more technically correct way to describe the process is that quenching hardened the steel, making it more brittle, and tempering (the process of reheating to a lower temperature after quenching) allows the steal to regain lost toughness while retaining most of the hardness gained through quenching.

There are a handful of other inaccuracies on the forging process but they seem unlikely to be the result of a translation error, whole sentences are wrong rather than one technical term being swapped for a different one with a similar meaning.

V3P9

[53%] I'm gonna have to ask him to lend me his power.,. Hey Luke! < There seems to be some extra punctuation or the comma is meant to be another period

V1 p8:

~65% -- "After all, not only it wasn't my own" -> "After all, not only was it not my own"

V3 P6 87%: "Nina started." I trinkt it should be "startled"

v33p7 ~50%:

Yamiru Suun had coated herself in giba blood and tried to pressure into marrying her.

pressure into -> pressure me into

V9 part 6
Around 88%-91% (mobile view)

Well, that's just the way the cookie crumbles.
“What a surprise!”

These two sentences should have extra spacing since the settings had changed from Nia in front of her rented house with Lynoxis to Nia is in school

V8 P10 (69% - 11th line up from bottom of page)

All my worries are on.

All my worries are gone.

V3 P3 (47% - 11th line up from bottom of page)

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"go down without a fight"

V1P7

70%: It was an investment, and investments could be recuperated. -> That should be recouped, no?

V2 P9 starting at 50%:
One of the jobs is labeled 'spy' although it was previously called 'scout'. And I think 'scout' is way more fitting.

@karasutengu it's implied. They're thugs, and in less posh circles it's common to leave the action implied instead of using correct English, especially when he already suggested it in the first half of the sentence.

v1p7 ~5%:

It could be a storm before we know it, so we're closeing up early."

closeing -> closing.

V13 P14 (23% - last line at bottom of page)

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For proper English syntax, "I" should be changed to "I'll".
i.e.: I'll ask the king about doing something,

V4 P8: There’s an extra quotation mark in the beginning of this paragraph.

“”Even those devoted to the Light faith are still demonkin. As long as you’re a demonkin, you can’t sever your connection to the Almighty. But the way you spoke back there, it sounds like the Disciples of Light, a human-based faith, has found a way to sever the connection between Chiyou and demonkin. I can’t ignore that.”