V3 P4 (91% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe this should read:
"...left open and unguarded."

V3 P4, 12%
"Hein, I intend to ask His Majesty..."
I assume Hein is a nickname, but including it here just in case it should instead be Heinz

23%
Come to think of it, there was Priest Nax, Prince Robur, and a boy who was the lady's classmate there with her"
Should that be Prince Regulus? (Or if instead her brother turned up, Lord (/Marquess, or other subsidiary title) Robur?)

"Since I made a donation... you ought to provide commensurate assistant"
Assistant -> assistance

"What?! Duchess Rober?!"
Rober -> Robur

35%
"Ever the high priest. No sooner had she spoken than he deployed a barrier spell around herself"
She -> he, herself -> himself

55%
"That day, when that good-for-nothing Second Prince got a wonderful fiancee far beyond his station but couldn’t even manage the simple task of meeting her face-to-face for the first time, it confirmed once more what a failure he was."
I don't think this sentence quite makes sense as is, unless Duchess Robur thinks that the Second Prince is also a good for nothing, and that Lavi is a wonderful fiancee. Instead, perhaps:
"That day, when that good-for-nothing got a wonderful fiancee of the Second Prince, far beyond her station, but couldn’t even manage the simple task of meeting him face-to-face for the first time, it confirmed once more what a failure she was."

"I’d ripped open that failure’s belly with my signature magic. But I didn’t kill him. I left my son, who was learning healing magic, by that failure’s side."
Him -> her

65%
"She does meet with the former prince outside sometimes, doesn’t she?”
I think this is referring to Heinz (since Prince Regulus is neither former or, I gather, hasn't visited the nearby atelier). I'm not fully on top of terms for nobility, but prince should only fit if the son of a Royal Duke (which I can't recall if this is the case here or not). If not, perhaps Lord (or even a subsidiary title like Marquess) might fit better.

Volume 7 - Part 7:

[57%] preconceptions aboutthe Dark Isle >> add space [90%] “We didn’t realize that I remembered it wrong! Ba ha ha!” >> should be we

Copying from main discussion to here:

@Libri-Liberorum said in Mercedes and the Waning Moon Vol. 4 Discussion!:

While the empire had promised to keep the academy's doors open, Beatrix had apprently planned to remove the female students and use the school as an isolation facility. Mercedes had confirmed this with Beatrix herself.

I am utterly perplexed by this paragraph. I can't connect anything in it to the context of the rest of the story. The empire doesn't run the academy, why are they promising to keep its doors open? They don't send students, so how can the female students be removed? How does removing them turn it into an isolation facility? Who is being isolated?

V5P10 ~78%
"...the self-claimed Game Master..." -> "...the self-proclaimed Game Master..."

At 24%, It’s the simplest plance and I don’t need to use my head.

Not sure what was supposed to go here, possibly plan?

V2P9, 35%: “The mana inside her trashed about before flooding out of her.” - thrashed

Volume 4 Part 6
07% barely left that Char -> barely left when Char
08% didn't seem too share -> didn't seem to share
66% That's why y'all are here for. -> That's what y'all are here for.
72% areattacked -> are attacked

V9 P6, 14%
"Sara walked off, feeling a little embarrassed, and Allen followed, tugging along by her hand"
Tugging -> tugged

@Khazidhea said in Isekai Walking - Corrections Topic:

V5 P4, 21
"If you asked me if it was delicious, I'd be forced to admit that I'd had better in this world"
My memory is poor, and I'm reading too many isekais and some details are overlapping in my head, but I thought I'd check: has he had fish before in this world? Or is he instead remembering back to Earth? (Or is he instead saying, he's had better (non-fish dishes) in this world?)

I think he's referring to having had better food (including non-fish dishes) in this world. It threw me off the first time I read it too, but it's more obvious after the following conversations where everyone else in the party is unimpressed by it, but Sora still picks up a bunch out of flavor nostalgia.

V3P2p10 19%:

"I sit at the throne by the grace of God. But does god watch what goes on in the world we live in? Does God judge the good incidents from the bad? For if god truly exists [...]

The capitalization of "God" is inconsistent. Either all four should be capitalized or none of them should be.

53%:

deliver a gift on Behalf of Master Reinald

Behalf shouldn't be capitalized.

88%:

If I was going to consider things seriously, I needed a different tact.

tact --> tack
https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/do-you-change-tack-or-tact

In the premium edition epub the illustration of Daiagias and Libidine is after the epilogue instead of within the corresponding text

V1 Part 6 ~72% Suggestion for a less vocally specific verb:
"Lilliana called over her handmaiden," -> "Lilliana summoned her handmaiden,"

v3p7 ~12%:

"Do you think that I did something unnecessary?" Asked Lutz, still not entirely sure of the etiquette among adventurers in those kinds of situations.

Asked -> asked.

v2p7 34% the emperor has several other important cities -> empire

@rhysm
That I'm paying attention enough for that to have registered as weird speaks well toward both the story and the translation team; I am enjoying this one!

Volume 8 - Part 13:

[13%] fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [13%] two hundred and fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [83%] But if she’d said that she was coming to ours, so it must be fine. >> either the if or the so needs to go away. this doesn't make sense with both.

@Khazidhea
Volume 14 has been published.
The prepub may not reflect the final edits.
They don't make corrections to the prepubs after the final work is published.
Once a work has been published, JNC accepts corrections to the contents of the ebook via email to support@j-novel.club

The errors you are reporting may or may not exist within the published work.
The folks who would handle them don't monitor the correction topics.
So posting here after the work is published is an exercise in futility, and may also be concerning stuff that got corrected in the published work.

Arc 1 Volume 6 - Part 4:

[~36%]

The monthlong journey from the royal to their destination

It's missing a word. Should be royal capital.

V6, P5, around 46%:

Ignoring her servant, Alicia stuck her head out from the terrace window. Theo and Bibi Vivi were both momentarily shocked.

Wrong name.