V5p2

"Yeah, looked bored at the reception desk."

That sentence seems to be missing a pronoun.

v6p1:

35% - […] in my official capacity as emperor. from the Empire’s […] -> Missing capitalization: From the 36% - […] for using their troops to go to war war with a third party. -> Too many wars going on: go to war with 60% - […] and was honestly a bit of a pain But I ended up stranded […] -> Missing period? Or missing comma with lower case “but” making a reeaallly long sentence. :) 62% - the emperor’s living space was located far back. -> Perhaps “farther back”?

V6 P5 (25% - 14th line up from the bottom of the page)

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Shouldn't this be "Boar" meat?

(31% - 5th line up from bottom of the page)

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Shouldn't this be "to snow"?

V9 part 9
67%-71% Mobile view

Well, not to brag, but the hands Akashi were gripping right now had already raised ten billion krams

It's not ten billion, it's only 1 billion that she gathered throughout the year. Why is this keep on happening?

V6 P11, 76%
"Only after I saw Kaeda fall down in front of me..."
Kaeda -> Kaede

V4P7, 73%: "he had already [lost] enough blood to render him pale"

V1 P10, 55%
"I was out doing my usual training when I spotted some footsteps that weren’t there yesterday. You were lucky. Any longer, and the snow would’ve erased you along with your tracks."
Footsteps -> footprints

Volume 21. Part 5:

26%: "I was you, ya know, supportin' her at lil' more"

37%: "Black Needles" should be "Shadow Needle". This attack's name was used both in volume 14 and volume 16.

67%: "Bibliotique" should be "Bibliotheque" like in volume 19.

v12 p7

~55%

“And one more important thing...” Annette lowered her voice as she stared at the other two ladies. “This mission is extremely dangerous. Please keep that in mind. If either of your identities are revealed, your lives may be in danger.” There was a moment of silence before she went on. “But I have faith that you can complete this mission. Lady Diana, you are the sister of Count Eimoor and the Rose of the Duel Grounds. Lady Helen, you’re known as the Lightning Strike. I firmly believe that the two of you are perfect for this mission.”

Doesn't everyone know who Diana and Helen are? If so, maybe that should be your missions or your jobs or your real purposes or something like that?

V5 P8
[90%] use ropes to secure the boats to the shore ➡ floats

Volume 13:
Page 22: Since Reinbach had already retired, it was up to Reinbach to take on any chalenges the Jamils faced -> Reinhart
page 22: if Reinbach were to overstep and involve himself too much, the other nobles might see that as weakness on Reinbach’s part -> Reinhart's

Volume 14:
Page 14: as the grave slimes' Attract Haunts skill funneled them in -> Spirits
page 66: Class-4: 120,000+ sutes -> 12,000+
Page 106: Humas offer payment when giving quests -> Humans

Volume 15:
Page 75: They called Ryoma's grandpa the God of Military Arts again. See previous comment.

v1p10:

34% - don’t ever aim your wind gun someone -> Missing word: don’t ever aim your wind gun at someone

V1 P1, 50%
"The lord of macig remained as expressionless as ever."
Macig -> magic

P5, 43%
"He was such a malicious man - how dared he look at her so tenderly?"
Dared -> dare

P6, 17%
"Most people would reply that Iora must’ve written the letter. Arvine had made the right decision, asking Iora if she was the author of the letter."
I think, unless I'm missing some other context, that that might be Arvine -> Aides or Leo

P10, 19%
"once they became, respectively, the crown princes and the marchioness"
Princes -> princess

V1 P10, 33%
"Why had the viscount corrected himself from saying Ren Ashton to the Asthon family?"
Asthon -> Ashton

V8.1P8
12%
then it was better than no one did - better that no one did

Volume 12 Part 1
26% the both Summons flew off -> both of the Summons flew off

Here is a special entry for all the old grognards out there:
The text mentions Magitech Mechanic and Magic Mechanic, but...
42% Let's not forget Manic Mechanic, who can make any vehicle twice as fast - but only while ZZ Top is playing.

V1 P9, 85%
"and finally, they punched through the centre [of] the human upper body's forehead"

v3p4

0%: "The third floor was the haunt of human-sized bad monsters. " -> bat 0%: "and she clearly meant it as a complement." -> compliment

@groudonvert-own27br That was just a regular commercial treaty. It wasn't a magical contract. Friede probably just figured he wouldn't get caught. And he also is just monumentally stupid and lazy.

Vol.7 pt.2

Around 65% hoo-ha is used for a sound. Unfortunately, hoo-ha is slang for vagina.