Volume 16 chapter 6—I am pretty sure Mia’s whole speech is a fishing metaphor—everything that Mia is doing in her speech a fisherman does while fishing—so all of this repeated “pushing”—shouldn't be pushing at all (at least not most of it)—she’s pulling hard at the end—like a fishing rod (maybe there is a push, pull, and tug in there, too). But maybe double-check the translation and make sure you aren't letting the big one get away! (AKA, killing the joke). You could probably read an except of someone fly-fishing in a story for inspiration, if you want to get really fancy!

(I am so excited to get Mia back! Yay you!)

V2p1 0%:

“of the princess’s marriage candidates. She’s even prettier than people say.” -> prince’s marriage candidates.

v12p6:

22% - […], nor could you dig from one floor to the text. -> Wrong letter/word: nor could you dig from one floor to the next. 36% - […] to the ground beneath her feed. -> Wrong letter/word: to the ground beneath her feet.

V4P9

I am under the impression these books are being localized to American English, not Commonwealth English. In two places in this part it says "in future". Americans don't say that. We say "in the future".

Also, "taking the piss" is British slang. I actually had to look that one up not long ago.

V4 P5 (42% - 8th line down from top of page)

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Should be "keep" - need to fix typo.

V11P7 22%

The pillow squirrel so adorable Volf knew Dahlia would fawn over it.

I'm assuming there's meant to be something along the lines of 'looked' or 'seemed' between 'squirrel' and 'so'.

81%

Dahlia vowed that if Volf ever told her father

Dahlia's father is long dead; Presumably that was meant to refer to his father.

v9p4:

87% - I shall thoroughly appriase your alcohol collection […] -> Typo’d appraise? I shall thoroughly appraise your alcohol collection […]

@b-scot-morgan said in EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic:

V4P4
[44%] it looked [less] like a newt or salamander and more like ➡ add less between looked and like.

[71%] The count gently removed her fist from his head ➡ his fist from her head, since clearly Blanc is the one who got bonked on the noggin here, not the count

for PC viewing it seems the 71% is at 69%

v5p6 ~38%:

"You've got nothing to worry about, Emma. I'm so stupid that I don't know who my little sister is."

I'm so stupid -> I'm not so stupid. :P

V4 P11

41% "We needed to shatter the enemy's morale because they could finish regrouping."

The key point here appears to be about timing. Rather than shattering them because they can regroup, a better fit may be to shatter them before they regroup.

"We needed to shatter the enemy's morale before they could finish regrouping."

V9, P3, around 27%

Now that he’s confident he can get by,he by, he can think about other people.

Missing space.

V1 P9

42% "and saw Colt, Ayle, Liz, and Belle... and Shenley... Dean was here... Felter Cayan and Rox were in attendance... That made seven students total,"

Is Foar bad at arithmetic or is this a mistranslation? Eight students are named but he counts seven.

SSP12, 85%: "with a furious grin plastered across my place" - face

V11 P2, 32%
"I heard a series of mechanic clunks from the other side of the door"
Mechanic -> mechanical
96%
"whoops, i guess it’s ’cause i was talking to to nago-chan"
Likely a duplicate (in character) due to the nature of chat messaging, but thought I'd point it out in case it was actually in error

V11 P4, 21%
"What, I should’ve considered with the possibility?"

38%
"I reheated the stew"
Likely not an error (and if so it would be in the original, not a translation error), just me struggling to picture the sequence of events and match to my own experience. I just can't identify any reasonable lengths of time for the following that would end with a cold stew:

From part 3, didn't leave work til after 10pm. Plus travel time, doesn't leave a whole lot of time for a stream (unless going unreasonable late). As prep + cooking didn't start til after the stream did, even cooking quickly with a pressure cooker, 1 hour might the quickest to be done. If the stream took 2 hours say, they'd still roughly line up, so can't see how it could've cooled down much at all.

Even with a really long streaming time (I'd say 2 hours would be a reasonable upper limit), prep + cooking

V11 P5, 27%
"... and wasn't inf touch with the rest of the team"
inf -> in
29%
"Even the shady clients you found on social media who got in legal trouble would gaggle at this"
Gaggle -> goggle

a1v6p3 ~27%:

"Now, now, don't be so angry. It is what it is," the crowd prince said with a rueful smile.

crowd -> crown

Part 2:
Liliana greeted the familiar palace guards, told her escorts to wait

Maybe commanded or something else would work better?

V3P8
[32%] Patience," Prince Keith said. ➡ Richard

@endoftheline Thank you for catching that!

V11P7 ~36%
"There were a least a couple of hundred of the monsters..." -> "There were a at least a couple of hundred of the monsters..."

~42%
"...and the goblins were always quick to pick up..." -> "...and the goblins monsters were always quick to pick up..."
I'm just verifying, but it seemed to be explicitly talking about the monsters, not the goblins.
I know it's VERY confusing that 'goblins' are little shark dudes in this and not the OBVIOUS monsters that have now shown up. I can even see this being an author error to be honest.

@Geezer-Weasalopes

Thanks, will remember that going forward!