v1 p3

~60%

“Okay,then I’ll have an orange juice.”

=> Okay, then (missing space).

~78%

4I took out my phone and pointed it at Maya. She immediately noticed and threw up a peace sign.

=> I

V13P13

69%: "If her father were here, he knew he would have given her a brief look" -> she knew he

V1P3
~24%

“Hi, um...” Nodoka began.“E-Excruse me!”

Missing space? began.“E-Excruse ->began. “E-Excruse

V8.2 P16, 52%
"Akira was slowing his sense of time, but by a standard clock, their telepathic conversation took no longer than an instant."
I think 'so' might work better than 'but' here (the former being the reason for the latter).
Or alternatively "Akira wasn't slowing his sense of time, but by a standard clock, their telepathic conversation took no longer than an instant."

v5p4:

95% - What did you think, Hedins? -> Hednis 96% - […] in a horse voice. -> Wrong spelling: hoarse

v4:

The series page shows the book as expired already, when it doesn’t even start until next week. The individual parts are shown as expiring on 2025-12-15, so I presume that they’re supposed to expire on 2026-12-15.

@Hylebos This is referring to the the day having an evolution rather than the day of an evolution arriving. Thank you for pointing out that it could be made more clear though.

V7 P8, 47%
"When I changed and went outside, I found Kent standing by the bud."
'The bud' -> 'the buds' or 'a bud'

93%
“Those vegetables look delicious. I want them all.”
Perhaps not an error, but my reading from this is that she wants to buy the entire stock, not just one of each.

V11 P10 (40% - 2nd line down from top of page)

"Though it could endure the attacks of a novice or keep someone safe in a minor accident, it offered next to protection from a hunter harnessing mana material."

Insert missing "no" between to and protection.

e.g. it offered next to no protection from a hunter...

V1P1
~19%

when we were in the cellar library that the previous head of House Lumiole had used.

Extra letter? Lumiole->Lumiol

V1P7
~21%

Two men were holding me down, and there were now other four men surrounding me as well.

Wrong word order? other four->four other

~63%

The opened up the front door, then bowed reverently

Missing letter and missing full stop? The->They and reverently->reverently.

V1P5
~42%

“Forget everything I said. Fight Ashley as if you’re trying to kill him.”

Missing start “? Fight Ashley->“Fight Ashley

V3 P1, 54%
When she opens her mouth again it’s to say, “I should have said this far sooner: Both I and my country own all of you a great debt."
Own -> owe

Volume 7 part 9 71%

Within under a minute he'd torn out several more,

Within a minute and under a minute mean the same thing, using both is redundant, although within makes more sense in this particular sentance.

v5 p12

~90%

Another reason for their progress was that the Archangel had begun scaling back both the rank and frequency of its healing spells. It never once used the devastating ApE attack from earlier—Judgment Ray—again either. All of it the result of Lyrienne’s strategy.

Should that be AoE attack? As in Area of Effect attack?

It seems weird to comment on issues in the afterward (specifically the one for volume 2), but it seems like the translation for part of it has to be wrong, because the author is thanking the publisher for being allowed to advertise his "new" work despite it being under a different publisher, and that "new" works is Magic Stone Gourmet.

I must also give thanks for being graciously allowed to advertise my new work in this afterward despite it being under a different publisher. It'll be published under BOOKS and is called Magic Stone Gourmet.

The first volume of Sundering Fate was published in Japan in August of 2022 (and the second volume was published in March of 2023). The most recent volume of Magic Stone Gourmet was published in Japan in June of 2021. So, the entirety of what he's released for Magic Stone Gourmet came out before even a single volume of Sundering Fate came out. So, calling Magic Stone Gourmet a new series in the afterward for any volume of Sundering Fate doesn't make any sense.

So, I don't know what the afterward for volume 2 actually says in Japanese, but I don't see how it could say what the English version currently says about Magic Stone Gourmet being a new series.

Volume 10 - Part 5:

[49%]

"Got. Sorry for the trouble, Egil."

Missing a word. I suggest the ff:

"Got it. Sorry for the trouble, Egil."