V4 P10 (67% - 12th line up from bottom of page)

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Replace "hold" with hole to match the sentence proceeding this one.

Thank you for these corrections

V5, P8, around 31%:

The other members of the faulty faculty —myself included—implored Sage Godolphen to reduce it.

Missing letter.

v6p5 ~26%:

Francesca absolutely picked up on Emma nonchalant;y interpreting the cat language.

nonchalant;y -> nonchalantly

V1P15

Claws of wind tore ruthlessly through the monsters' thick hide, ...

Plural monsters, so hide -> hides

V7P1, 99%: "In the first place, my high offenses didn't mean much" - should probably be just "offense", since we're not talking about a stat rather than a list of crimes.

V4 P2, 28%
"I made my way down into the clearing and over to Sumire just as it started fussing, assumingly out of frustration."
Assumingly -> presumably, or 'I assumed'

Part 12, around 90%, Krai is thinking "I wanted to vomit" but IIRC in past prepubs he kept using "barf" in this sort of catchphrase situation. I'm not sure if this was later changed in the published volumes though, sorry.

V3P7 ~67%
"I couldn't tell. No. I couldn't, but I didn't want to. This couldn't be real." -> "I couldn't tell. No. I couldn't, but I didn't want to. This couldn't be real."

V6P7 ~95%
"...coming for you, Agnes." -> "...coming for from you, Agnes."

Vol. 3, Part 6

But honestly, we could care less about that.

couldn't care less.

V8.1 P7
46% "Immediately after receiving his gear, Akira set about trying everything on... equipping himself with his two blades and two of his guns"
68% "After checking his gun at the entrance..."

As the two scenes were relatively close to each other, just checking whether it should be 'gun' -> 'guns' (or even 'weapons', to include his blades)

Just sent to support for v4p2:

You might have already fixed it in the ebook, but just in case…

61% - We made our way up, tagging behind Pochi and Tama. -> I feel like a word is missing, but maybe it’s unnecessary these days: We made our way up, tagging along behind Pochi and Tama.

V16P7 83% Ludwig picked up two glasses... And sat opposite of Ludwig??? I think it's supposed to be opposite of Dion.

V2 P3 (66% - 10th line down from top of page)

..., she intendedbe kind to him.

add space and "to" for better syntax:

---> she intended to be kind to him.

V9 P1 24% - two adorable smiles began bouncing around - smiles should be slimes

@nihility said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

Sup on white rice? What does that mean?

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/sup
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sup
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/sup

v32p5 ~5%:

As Shilly Rou continued to mash up the shaska, it was easy to tell that the pulp was getting stickier and sticker over time.

sticker over time -> stickier over time.

V3 P9 (12% - Line 9 & 10 from top of the page)

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Change "award" to "away".

V2P8:

~44%:

You get coconut juice and oil from them

In English, I've only ever heard the liquid in a coconut referred to as coconut water. Unless it's mixed with a bunch of other junk, and then it's "juice". And the liquid from the flesh is "milk" somehow.

Also ~44%:

Even with easy jobs, this moment always was always a relief.

Extra always.