V3P2 ~60%

Return turned his back to her to go to his room.

Should probably be Ren.

This, combined with the outfits the party guests wore, the sight was absolutely resplendent no matter where one looked.

The sentence is wrong. It would be possible to use Thus in place of This, but I doubt that was the intention. So maybe

This combined with the outfits the party guests wore for a sight that was absolutely [...]

without the commas and with the small change in the middle.

~83%

Their daughters understood this, stepped away from their fathers' quiet battle.

Feels like something is wrong or missing. I'd say stepping instead of stepped would suffice, or an and connecting the halves.

@Valanduin said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

On top of that, at the moment Erhardt was most definitely confident that his was Jurgens, not me.

His what?

His enemy, likely.

I have noticed that in the most recent part the name of the capital changed from Crystal Palace to Silver Palace.

V6P5 90%:

hit the breaks

breaks -> brakes

@Valanduin Just double-checked it and nope, no error. If it helps, though, the spirit monster rank system seems to be something the Heavenly Realmers created to generalize how strong the different types of spirit monsters are, so this is saying that Minor Deity-rank spirit monsters are about as strong as literal Minor Deities.

v4p4:

12% - .Wayne -> Period probably shouldn’t be there. As a bonus, is there a good way to cut back on the commas in the rest of the sentence? Maybe break it into two sentences? It feels like it runs on a bit too much. :)

Volume 4 Part 12
97% one grader higher -> one grade higher

@Charlie85 You're right. I think the editor's brain read "is it" instead of "it is" and added a question mark at the end, then my brain did the same when I accepted the edit. Thanks for pointing it out!

@Tango said in I’ll Become an Elegant Villainess! - Corrections Topic:

V2P2
~10%

Given how I’d been born to a poor noble house in the midst of a terrible downfall in my previous life, the expensive clothes and bag made me reel.

Wrong word? (Because that is describe how her new life is start and if it is isekai old life is probably not have noble house?) previous->new

I think that you misunderstood the description of her previous life. In her previous life, she was a noble from a poorer house, and her parents sent her to social events with wealthier, more powerful houses where she always felt out of place, because her clothes weren't as expensive as those from the other noble families, since her family wasn't rich. She then died at one of those social events when an earthquake occurred and wished that she hadn't just always obediently done what her parents wanted (and thus decided in her new life to try to be like the villainess in one of her favorite books).

In her current life, she has once again been born into a noble family, but her noble family this time around is doing quite well.

v1p6:

10% - And it’s scabbard. -> Unnecessary apostrophe: And its scabbard.

V7 P5 (41% - 1st line at top of page)

She was certain he saw a curious look in his eye as he glanced at her.

Replace "he" with "she" for better syntax.

e.g. She was certain she saw a curious look in his eye as he glanced at her.

V1, P6, around 97%:

Most of the mana she’d focused hadn’t become part of the spell—nstead instead, it dissipated from her almost unceasingly.

Missing letter.

V3P9 35%

"I feel like half of these frostbitten patients are just reaping what they sown."

This should use they have/they've sown.

This a a fairly minor issue, and I'm not sure if it is the reader or the formatting of the part, but on desktop I am reading in the two page spread view, but the illustration in v1p6 ~40% appears that it is supposed to be a two page spread, but it is rendering as a small image half the height of one page with a page of text on the side.

Also, the view selection button is somewhat unintuitive, there are 3 modes, a button is used to cycle through them, and the button displays a graphic and has alt text indicating what the next one is. This is a weird way to select multiple choices and I probably would have gone with 3 buttons with the current one highlighted or a drop down or something that makes it more obvious that there are 3 options and what they are.

V3P1 ~0%

[…] not by Bael, but by the true Demon King. Not against some summoned child, but by a true Hero of the world.

Shouldn't this be the same word also in the second sentence, so both against or both by?

[…] no one cared of its true meaning […]

Should be about or for.

~91%

[…] do you think Gurba's going to be much longer?"

The direct meaning would be Gurba's about to die, but the following dialog seems to imply he's just away in his workshop, so maybe going to be away or going to need?

15.1:

When I;d checked the beehive

When I'd checked the beehive

They were merely laid inside the baskets, but carefully arranged into a lovely display.

They weren't merely laid inside the baskets, but carefully arranged into a lovely display.

V1P8 ~58% and ~90%: The earlier reference mentions royal library's repository and the latter royal library archival storage...

~58%: "Be sure to comb through the royal library's repository as well."
~90%: "The prime minister mentioned something about 'royal library archival storage.'"

Are these referring to the same part of the royal library (as I could not find another reference that would fit)? The latter is used in quotes too, so the same words should be used for both if so. (The start of P8 goes back to calling it a repository too.)

V1 P5 60%

a fellow C-rank student named Jutta

Fellow C-rank student makes it sound like MC and Jutta are both C-rank, but MC is D-rank.

v1 p5

~30%

Temples are training grounds for priests and are considered dwellings of the gods. Priests who pray there can be granted greater magical power. Since the Moon Goddess remains close to humanity, her temples can be found in every city. However, a donation is required to use the altar where prayers and offer prayers.

That final clause doesn't scan. I can't really guess what it should be though, maybe the altar where prayers are offered ?

V8 P4 (8% - 11th line down from top of page)

"But I could ask, the knight had already flown..."

add missing "before" in sentence

e.g. But before I could ask,...