Vol 1 Pt 1 68% “my eyes caught on the crimson broach brooch”

Same error at 93%… and 98%. The jewelry is brooch , a broach is used to make holes .

V1 Pt2 , 93%

“Her interest peeked piqued,”

V2P2, 13%: “he thought it better not [to] interfere with his old unit more than he had to.”

V5P9:

22%: "I mean, we couldn’t get anyone with phony strength" -> ???

Volume 4 Part 6
14% I intended to make soft charcoal -then
40% I'd decided to plant ... sawtooth oaks
41% hard charcoal, which could be made from sawtooth oaks
42% dependant on our attempts to make soft charcoal
So yeah, sawtooth oak does make hardwood charcoal and it is pine that makes softwood charcoal. So, either the entries at 14%, and 42%, and other references further in the story should be changed to say 'hard', or all the references to the trees shoulc be changed to 'pine'. Also, if the wood references are changed to pine, then the bag or acorns would have to change too.

Alternatively, I suppose that the next chapter could have him preparing pine trees for the actual kiln work to make the soft charcoal. The pine would have to be prepared and dried too, so that order would have its own issues.

V9P1.3

hoped against hope that Sheryl that running away - seems to be missing some words, maybe "that Sheryl could be convinced that running away"

none of them were foolish enough to declare openly that they were working with the gang, but their intentions had been obvious when they'd stopped coming all of a sudden - Again missing words, is the first part supposed to be "no longer working," considering the second part?

V14 P6 (6% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

All the while, Light move not an inch from his spot,...

Wrong tense. Correct to "moved not",

e.g. All the while, Light moved not an inch from his spot,...
-or-
All the while, Light didn't move an inch from his spot,...

V8, P5, around 22%:

Neither! In all likelihood, our enemy is Marquess Dozraan Dozran!

Duplicated letter.

V4 P9 (0% - last sentence at bottom of page)

Then my mother lied down next to me,...
The correct word should be "laid", the past tense of lay.

e.g: Then my mother laid down next to me,...

FYI: Lied is the past tense of lie (an untruth).

V11, P5, around 56%:

Training mechs had limited fuel capacity—moving so rigorously would consume the fuel in an instant.

I'm 90% sure it should be "vigorously".

10.12:

I think if I ever divide and have ancestors of my own

Um, "ancestors"? Offspring are descendants.

V5 P9, 48%
“I see... I think I understand why elven sorcery hasn’t progressed or seen much innovated over the years."
Innovated -> innovation

v5p8 ~87%

[…] closely with the Treasure Guild to produce the Posiedon, and Milld […[

Should be Poseidon.

V11 final - would avail should be wouldn’t, out duties should be out their duties

V2P2
~44%

“If any of the facilities in this town are worse than that our capital’s, I’ll be sure to stick it to you!” he’d said.

Missing word? than that our capital’s->than that of our capital’s (or extra word ->`than our capital's)

V1p7 ~42%

“The pair's lips parted, andInami's hands followed the outline of Aoi's body, caressing him all over.”

Missing space

V6P5 90%:

hit the breaks

breaks -> brakes

v4p4:

12% - .Wayne -> Period probably shouldn’t be there. As a bonus, is there a good way to cut back on the commas in the rest of the sentence? Maybe break it into two sentences? It feels like it runs on a bit too much. :)

Volume 4 Part 12
97% one grader higher -> one grade higher

@Charlie85 You're right. I think the editor's brain read "is it" instead of "it is" and added a question mark at the end, then my brain did the same when I accepted the edit. Thanks for pointing it out!