@xdbx said in EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic:

I'd suggest using one name (Thunderbolt or Lightningbolt) consistently. I can't remember what if anything was used previously though.

Based on the following examples of definitions for both, I think it would depend on the story's narrative in deciding which to use at the time:

Thunderbolt - a flash of lightning with a simultaneous crash of thunder.
Lightning-bolt often refers to Lightning only - an electric discharge in the atmosphere or between the atmosphere and the ground.

V5 P9 (4% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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'The phrase "could have been smited" is grammatically incorrect in standard English, though it is sometimes used informally or in specific gaming contexts. The correct past participle of the verb "smite" is smitten (or sometimes the archaic "smit").
The correct ways to express the idea in standard English are:
"could have been smitten"
"could have been smitten down"
"could have been struck down" - Standard Dictionary Online'

V16 P5, 50%
"Orania as she is now and my past self are one in the same"
In -> and

@Jojajones said in The Canon Fodder’s Ascension from Pawn to World Unifier - Corrections Topic:

So, I'm guessing the first real correction would likely be the series' title because shouldn't this be "The Cannon Fodder's..."? Because I'm not sure what exactly Canon Fodder is supposed to be

Meant to be wordplay on "cannon fodder." Fodder is frequently used to describe Zil's role as he is discarded to prop up the future villains and power creep in the anime. "Canon" since that was how things happened in canon in the anime's part one and Zil is trying to change things from canon.

V9P6
~35%

For that reason, I was utterly baffled to hear the king acknowledge my efforts.

Should be emperor instead of king.

1.7:

But Lord Lightless has said not to push Sir Carlos too much.

But Lord Lightless has said not to punish Sir Carlos too much.

V2 P9 (0% - 11th line down from top of page)

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Why is Quinza's father wearing a dress? (I don't recall anything in the narrative so far to indicate he was a cross-dresser) I believe this is an error and should read as:
"The man was wearing exceptionally fanciful dress and wielding a magnificent staff."

(Remove "an")

V3 P4, 12%
"Hein, I intend to ask His Majesty..."
I assume Hein is a nickname, but including it here just in case it should instead be Heinz

23%
Come to think of it, there was Priest Nax, Prince Robur, and a boy who was the lady's classmate there with her"
Should that be Prince Regulus? (Or if instead her brother turned up, Lord (/Marquess, or other subsidiary title) Robur?)

"Since I made a donation... you ought to provide commensurate assistant"
Assistant -> assistance

"What?! Duchess Rober?!"
Rober -> Robur

35%
"Ever the high priest. No sooner had she spoken than he deployed a barrier spell around herself"
She -> he, herself -> himself

55%
"That day, when that good-for-nothing Second Prince got a wonderful fiancee far beyond his station but couldn’t even manage the simple task of meeting her face-to-face for the first time, it confirmed once more what a failure he was."
I don't think this sentence quite makes sense as is, unless Duchess Robur thinks that the Second Prince is also a good for nothing, and that Lavi is a wonderful fiancee. Instead, perhaps:
"That day, when that good-for-nothing got a wonderful fiancee of the Second Prince, far beyond her station, but couldn’t even manage the simple task of meeting him face-to-face for the first time, it confirmed once more what a failure she was."

"I’d ripped open that failure’s belly with my signature magic. But I didn’t kill him. I left my son, who was learning healing magic, by that failure’s side."
Him -> her

65%
"She does meet with the former prince outside sometimes, doesn’t she?”
I think this is referring to Heinz (since Prince Regulus is neither former or, I gather, hasn't visited the nearby atelier). I'm not fully on top of terms for nobility, but prince should only fit if the son of a Royal Duke (which I can't recall if this is the case here or not). If not, perhaps Lord (or even a subsidiary title like Marquess) might fit better.

V5P10 ~78%
"...the self-claimed Game Master..." -> "...the self-proclaimed Game Master..."

At 24%, It’s the simplest plance and I don’t need to use my head.

Not sure what was supposed to go here, possibly plan?

V2P9, 35%: “The mana inside her trashed about before flooding out of her.” - thrashed

Volume 4 Part 6
07% barely left that Char -> barely left when Char
08% didn't seem too share -> didn't seem to share
66% That's why y'all are here for. -> That's what y'all are here for.
72% areattacked -> are attacked

V9 P6, 14%
"Sara walked off, feeling a little embarrassed, and Allen followed, tugging along by her hand"
Tugging -> tugged

@Khazidhea said in Isekai Walking - Corrections Topic:

V5 P4, 21
"If you asked me if it was delicious, I'd be forced to admit that I'd had better in this world"
My memory is poor, and I'm reading too many isekais and some details are overlapping in my head, but I thought I'd check: has he had fish before in this world? Or is he instead remembering back to Earth? (Or is he instead saying, he's had better (non-fish dishes) in this world?)

I think he's referring to having had better food (including non-fish dishes) in this world. It threw me off the first time I read it too, but it's more obvious after the following conversations where everyone else in the party is unimpressed by it, but Sora still picks up a bunch out of flavor nostalgia.

V3P2p10 19%:

"I sit at the throne by the grace of God. But does god watch what goes on in the world we live in? Does God judge the good incidents from the bad? For if god truly exists [...]

The capitalization of "God" is inconsistent. Either all four should be capitalized or none of them should be.

53%:

deliver a gift on Behalf of Master Reinald

Behalf shouldn't be capitalized.

88%:

If I was going to consider things seriously, I needed a different tact.

tact --> tack
https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/do-you-change-tack-or-tact

In the premium edition epub the illustration of Daiagias and Libidine is after the epilogue instead of within the corresponding text

V1 Part 6 ~72% Suggestion for a less vocally specific verb:
"Lilliana called over her handmaiden," -> "Lilliana summoned her handmaiden,"

v3p7 ~12%:

"Do you think that I did something unnecessary?" Asked Lutz, still not entirely sure of the etiquette among adventurers in those kinds of situations.

Asked -> asked.

v2p7 34% the emperor has several other important cities -> empire

@rhysm
That I'm paying attention enough for that to have registered as weird speaks well toward both the story and the translation team; I am enjoying this one!