V7 part 8
[0%] employed by the ancient Astrans to elect their parliament. ➡ senate, maybe, since Astra was the psuedo-Rome of this world? This isn't really a correction so much as a suggestion.

V7P3 ~13%
"Caim turned his way with a smile." -> "Caim Lenka turned his way with a smile."

V2P5

100%: "This miasma killed a former S-rank adventurer with east.” -> ease

v5p8:

31% - How had they managed to cause so much chaos in the few months I’d be gone? -> Probable wrong word, given the tense: […] in the few months I’d been gone?

V2P6

... dangerous affliction --- hallucination, paralyzation, or even deadly poison.

paralysation -> paralysis

Got it, thank you!

V4 P10 (67% - 12th line up from bottom of page)

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Replace "hold" with hole to match the sentence proceeding this one.

Thank you for these corrections

v6p5 ~26%:

Francesca absolutely picked up on Emma nonchalant;y interpreting the cat language.

nonchalant;y -> nonchalantly

V1P15

Claws of wind tore ruthlessly through the monsters' thick hide, ...

Plural monsters, so hide -> hides

V7P1, 99%: "In the first place, my high offenses didn't mean much" - should probably be just "offense", since we're not talking about a stat rather than a list of crimes.

V4 P2, 28%
"I made my way down into the clearing and over to Sumire just as it started fussing, assumingly out of frustration."
Assumingly -> presumably, or 'I assumed'

Part 12, around 90%, Krai is thinking "I wanted to vomit" but IIRC in past prepubs he kept using "barf" in this sort of catchphrase situation. I'm not sure if this was later changed in the published volumes though, sorry.

V3P7 ~67%
"I couldn't tell. No. I couldn't, but I didn't want to. This couldn't be real." -> "I couldn't tell. No. I couldn't, but I didn't want to. This couldn't be real."

V6P7 ~95%
"...coming for you, Agnes." -> "...coming for from you, Agnes."

Vol. 3, Part 6

But honestly, we could care less about that.

couldn't care less.

V8.1 P7
46% "Immediately after receiving his gear, Akira set about trying everything on... equipping himself with his two blades and two of his guns"
68% "After checking his gun at the entrance..."

As the two scenes were relatively close to each other, just checking whether it should be 'gun' -> 'guns' (or even 'weapons', to include his blades)

V16P7 83% Ludwig picked up two glasses... And sat opposite of Ludwig??? I think it's supposed to be opposite of Dion.

V2 P3 (66% - 10th line down from top of page)

..., she intendedbe kind to him.

add space and "to" for better syntax:

---> she intended to be kind to him.

V9 P1 24% - two adorable smiles began bouncing around - smiles should be slimes