v2p11 57%

Even if it were a lie.I knew

needs a space after the full stop

V10P2, 18%: "Each one's face had groves in it" - grooves

Volume 6 - Part 5:

[~9%]

his gaze drifting slightly to somewhere behind the man Upon closer inspection,

Missing punctuation. Add a period after man, before Upon.

v14p4:

16% - Aruharu pounced then with near blinding speed, closing the distance between her in the blink of an eye. -> Doesn’t look right to me. :) “Between her” what? Her and him? Her and Klaus? I could see “closing the distance between them in the blink of an eye.” Or just “closing the distance to him in the blink of an eye.”

v1p12 33%

More than anything, though, was how she stopped and listened to me when I’d sid monsters were alive,

sid --> said

@kingpendragon said in Dahlia in Bloom - Corrections Topic:

V12, P11, around 8%:

“I believe so,” Ivan Ivano agreed.

Missing letter.

V12, P11, around 27%:

While everyone was ruminating, Ivan Ivano clapped his hands together.

Missing letter again.

He just lost a little weight. Well, if you consider 20% a little, that is.

V1 P1, 81%
"Anyway, speaking of family, Vanitas had two little sisters—twins, in fact. They both had opposite personalities..."
Very minor, but 'both' seems superfluous (can't have just one with an opposite personality, but the other doesn't)

P3, 4%
"If one were truly skilled, it was also possible to transform into animals, monsters, or inorganic matter—but only few could do that.
'but only few' ->
'but only a few'
or 'but only few'

71% “To that end, I’m ready to pay any price,” I declared. Then after a short pause, I said, “ Christina.”
Extra space in front of 'Christina'

P4, 15%
"Being slaves, I never shared a meal with them."
Stared at this a little, but I can no longer tell if this is currently fine as is or not. If not:
'I had never shared...'
or 'I never shared meals...'

50%
"Shuka was a woman who looked like in her early twenties"
Could just be phrasing I'm not used to, otherwise:
'who looked like she was in her early twenties'
or 'who looked to be in her early twenties'

P5, 92%
"Ms. Ashley was such a worrier. We [had] had this conversation multiple times already."

V6 P1 76% "It was only one story tall and about four square meters on each side, so "cabin" might have been" ->
"one story tall, square, and about four meters on each side," a page later the room is described as "about 15sq meters"

86% "didn't look much at first glance" -> like much

V5 P1 (89% - 8th line down from top of page)

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Maybe its just me, but this sounds out of context. Claudia knew she couldn't stop Lutz from doing what he felt he had to, so I think this should read:
"she couldn't stop him"

V1 P12 (48% - 1st & 2nd lines at top of page)

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I believe "his" is missing in the high-lighted text.
e.g.: give up his life,

V3P8 63%
This city was full of factions who rooting for our downfall,

who rooting --> who were rooting

V5p2

"Yeah, looked bored at the reception desk."

That sentence seems to be missing a pronoun.

V6 P5 (25% - 14th line up from the bottom of the page)

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Shouldn't this be "Boar" meat?

(31% - 5th line up from bottom of the page)

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Shouldn't this be "to snow"?

V9 part 9
67%-71% Mobile view

Well, not to brag, but the hands Akashi were gripping right now had already raised ten billion krams

It's not ten billion, it's only 1 billion that she gathered throughout the year. Why is this keep on happening?

V6 P11, 76%
"Only after I saw Kaeda fall down in front of me..."
Kaeda -> Kaede

V1 P10, 55%
"I was out doing my usual training when I spotted some footsteps that weren’t there yesterday. You were lucky. Any longer, and the snow would’ve erased you along with your tracks."
Footsteps -> footprints

v12 p7

~55%

“And one more important thing...” Annette lowered her voice as she stared at the other two ladies. “This mission is extremely dangerous. Please keep that in mind. If either of your identities are revealed, your lives may be in danger.” There was a moment of silence before she went on. “But I have faith that you can complete this mission. Lady Diana, you are the sister of Count Eimoor and the Rose of the Duel Grounds. Lady Helen, you’re known as the Lightning Strike. I firmly believe that the two of you are perfect for this mission.”

Doesn't everyone know who Diana and Helen are? If so, maybe that should be your missions or your jobs or your real purposes or something like that?

V5 P8
[90%] use ropes to secure the boats to the shore ➡ floats

Volume 13:
Page 22: Since Reinbach had already retired, it was up to Reinbach to take on any chalenges the Jamils faced -> Reinhart
page 22: if Reinbach were to overstep and involve himself too much, the other nobles might see that as weakness on Reinbach’s part -> Reinhart's

Volume 14:
Page 14: as the grave slimes' Attract Haunts skill funneled them in -> Spirits
page 66: Class-4: 120,000+ sutes -> 12,000+
Page 106: Humas offer payment when giving quests -> Humans

Volume 15:
Page 75: They called Ryoma's grandpa the God of Military Arts again. See previous comment.

V1 P1, 50%
"The lord of macig remained as expressionless as ever."
Macig -> magic

P5, 43%
"He was such a malicious man - how dared he look at her so tenderly?"
Dared -> dare

P6, 17%
"Most people would reply that Iora must’ve written the letter. Arvine had made the right decision, asking Iora if she was the author of the letter."
I think, unless I'm missing some other context, that that might be Arvine -> Aides or Leo

P10, 19%
"once they became, respectively, the crown princes and the marchioness"
Princes -> princess