Vol. 3, Part 6

But honestly, we could care less about that.

couldn't care less.

V5 P7, 93%
"Annoying, he managed to save himself by driving his sword into the dirt wall"
Annoying -> Annoyingly

V8.1 P7
46% "Immediately after receiving his gear, Akira set about trying everything on... equipping himself with his two blades and two of his guns"
68% "After checking his gun at the entrance..."

As the two scenes were relatively close to each other, just checking whether it should be 'gun' -> 'guns' (or even 'weapons', to include his blades)

V2 P4 (% - 72% 9th line up from bottom of page)

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Again, "hands" should be hand since Lofus has only one arm.

(I believe the illustration also shows this.)

v3 p3

~28%

“Yes, I do. The Great Beast Haagenti, right? When I was a boy, my teachers used to threaten us by saying they brought misbehaving children to Haagenti.’”

Since Eugene is only paraphrasing, there's an extra single quote at the end of the paragraph.

Just sent to support for v4p2:

You might have already fixed it in the ebook, but just in case…

61% - We made our way up, tagging behind Pochi and Tama. -> I feel like a word is missing, but maybe it’s unnecessary these days: We made our way up, tagging along behind Pochi and Tama.

V16P7 83% Ludwig picked up two glasses... And sat opposite of Ludwig??? I think it's supposed to be opposite of Dion.

V2 P3 (66% - 10th line down from top of page)

..., she intendedbe kind to him.

add space and "to" for better syntax:

---> she intended to be kind to him.

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@ebaldwin said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

Volume 6, part 9:

[28%] “It’s getting pretty hot these days, isn’t it?” […]

“Oh... Y-Yeah, it has.”

"has" -> "is" (or alternatively change the previous line to “It’s gotten pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”)

Thanks, should be fixed now.

That's usually the case, but not this time, it seems. Now it is “It’s getting pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”

Should be good to go now.

Volume 2, Part 9

interlude: Diaego.

it spellling of Aoi Konominatos' wrong as: [Aoi knominato]

V9 P1 24% - two adorable smiles began bouncing around - smiles should be slimes

@nihility said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

Sup on white rice? What does that mean?

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/sup
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sup
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/sup

v32p5 ~5%:

As Shilly Rou continued to mash up the shaska, it was easy to tell that the pulp was getting stickier and sticker over time.

sticker over time -> stickier over time.

V3 P9 (12% - Line 9 & 10 from top of the page)

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Change "award" to "away".

v5p4:

92% - Without her rope, it probably would’ve taken a lot longer for Lilia and I to reach the shore. -> Probably a case where me should be used, since “a lot longer for I to reach the shore” just doesn’t work: a lot longer for Lilia and me to reach the shore.

V2P8:

~44%:

You get coconut juice and oil from them

In English, I've only ever heard the liquid in a coconut referred to as coconut water. Unless it's mixed with a bunch of other junk, and then it's "juice". And the liquid from the flesh is "milk" somehow.

Also ~44%:

Even with easy jobs, this moment always was always a relief.

Extra always.

v4 p10

~5%

<Holy mother of vague, Mali. If you worded it that way on purpose to both grab my attention, then congratulations, it worked.>

Something seems awkward here. "Both" is used to indicate two or more things -- but there is no additional thing mentioned beyond the grabbing of Leah's attention, e.g. both grab my attention and confuse me. Maybe the both is unnecessary and can be omitted?

@zeji13 said in The Petty Villain Plays by the Rules - Corrections Topic:

v1p12:

Nanalie family name is Ronamis in the chapter title and RonamisRominas in the rest of the chapter. Not sure which is the right one, but the latter looks like a bulk replace mistake.

Yep, "Replace All" mistake was the first thing I thought of too.

V5 P11, ~26%

I kept Detect Mana active and watched as Chris's mana level went down. Then I used Regulate Mana to restock her with my Euini's mana stores.

Should probably be "my and Euini's".

V2P8
though she sometimes said some words that were too difficult for me to grasp, such as, "I wonder how I can get some good old fan service to happen. Maybe Prince Raph would be happy if he got a good glimpse of my panties?"

I think you should probably reword the whole sentence around the word "pantsushot".
Like "Maybe Prince Ralph would be glad if I gave him a pantsushot from time to time?"