V3 P7, 3%
“...Lady Robur’s grasp is very refined. I’ve come to understand that it’s beyond the comprehension of a commoner like me.”
It feels really odd for the Prince to refer to himself as a commoner. I'm presuming he's meaning only within context of the subject (an entry level understanding of the topic). Neophyte, or perhaps amateur, novice, layperson, or even hobbyist might be alternatives?

24%
"No doubt she wass lost in thought about what to write in the new art book."
Wass -> was

39%
"The prince’s bloodshot crimson eyes were fixed fixated on me"

50%
"The first prince seems to have returned quietly."
After saying he had left a few paragraphs back I initially thought this was saying that the prince was back already. However on rereading I suspecting it's instead intended to reinforce the previous paragraph. For clarity, perhaps replace with left/departed, or add on after returned 'to the castle'.

78%
Snapping back to reality, I frowned at the erotic painting the princess held. “How utterly... shameless,” I spat. I hoped she wasn’t about to start commenting on it in red pen.
Likely just me, but the meaning of this sentence escapes me entirely.

V3 P3 (89% - 12th line up from bottom of page)

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Looks like there was indecision to use "her" or "them". Since "her" was used in the previous sentence, I suggest "her" be used in the above sentence.

14.8

If she were found herself in a situation where she had to choose

Volume 2 - Part 5:

[46%]

amenuenses

amenuenses > amanuenses

[77%]

"I didn't do anything!'

' > "
Also, not sure if this shouldn't have been italicized or not. It didn't seem to be internal monologue to be italicized.

v2 p4

~5%

“In my eyes, there’s a ninety percent chance that Cormeca is a witch. She is a really fishy person. However, we cannot deal with this independently. You understand why Erifell and Dergo are waiting for the Carbuncles, attempting to do this the right way, don’t you?”

=> Derg

~85%

“The five-day arrival estimate refers to when all members of the Carbuncles unit come to Esma on carriage through other intermediary villages. However, that’s not a problem if I get just the one tocome running.”

=> to come

V6 P9, 92%
As I slipped past the ragged cloth serving as a door, a young dogfolk child, alerted by the greeting, wagged his tail and clung to my leg. Elena, who had been playing with the dwarven child, looked up at me and smiled warmly.
My read is that this is the same child in each instance. Unless I've missed something and dogfolk and dwarf can be used interchangably, dwarven -> dogfolk.

V12P5 ~17%
"Had he perhaps already realized the Eldan's visit was all in an effort..." -> "Had he perhaps already realized the that Eldan's visit was all in an effort..."

V6P3 ~56%
"I'd been affected by Master Robin's once before, but after..." -> "I'd been affected by Master Robin's magic once before, but after..."
Might be unnecessary, but it just felt off reading it w/o the explicit reference to his magic.

v11.1 p16 ~38%

He had some blue blood in him, being the grandson of a noble's illegitimate child

Could this please be double checked, unless I'm mistaken Giesebrecht's father was married to his mother according to part 3 ~76%.

He fell for her after seeing her ephemeral beauty and immaculate grace on the dance floor, eventually whisking her away from her life in her troupe and marrying her. Every night he enjoyed watching her dance, and soon they were blessed with a child. However, as his wife was an immigrant, he couldn't simply raise his child under him.

The parts contradict each other.

~48%

Isolde

Erich and Margit's daughter's name was translated as Iseult back in volume 1, so ideally should be translated the same way here to maintain consistency.

V16 P8

"Forcing them to first live in destitute inspired ...

destitute -> destitution

V3P2 22% Rosmaria and Lyla, her father's wife and her own step sister -> should be half sister, as they have the same father.

V4P1p2 21%:

it allowed time for Reinald and I to speak alone

I -> me

94%:

thank you for all your help Geoff.

Suggest adding a comma after "help".

@xdbx said in EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic:

Should that be rot damage?

I'm not sure. It could be "rot damage" was intended, or that "DoT damage" (from Damage over Time) was intended.. Both apply in this case, so it could be either.

@alahue this story definitely needs something like a tragedy tag to give people a heads up on what they're getting in to.
Many people don't enjoy being blind sided with

spoiler
At the same time, people who do love it and are specifically looking for these kinds of stories don't have any way to tell that this story will scratch their itch

V4 P10 (38% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe "as" is missing and should be added:
...it took me half as long as them...

Note: "as long as" is a phrase of "long"

during the whole time that.
"they have been there as long as anyone can remember" provided that.
"as long as you fed him, he would be cooperative" - Oxford/Cambriage Dictionaries

v7p10:

[…] it sounded like these crazy things happened on the daily for them. -> I’m not familiar with this specific phrase, although its meaning is obvious. From which variant of english does it come? I would have used “on a daily basis” in this instance, but if the translation team is happy with it, I’m good. :)

V4, P4, around 40%:

Particularly that mikagami no jutsu.Mikagami... jutsu. Mikagami... Was that “water mirror”?

Missing space.

V15P5

[37%] some of the information fee, though.I even got down on my knees < Missing spaces between the sentences

Volume 1 - Part 9:

[62%]

Also, I've heard that he formed some of these those connections because he's trying to find someone.

It's probably just one of these words. those sounds best tho.

v9p9 ~30%:

WIth a guild so big, there was probably a lot of trouble that needed responding to, she figured.

WIth -> With.