Volume 3 Part 12
34% placing himself in position to Duke Ealdred -> placing himself in opposition to Duke Ealdred

v1p11:

16% - What had she fallen for this man? -> Seems like something’s wrong. Perhaps “Why had she fallen for this man?” Or maybe “What had she fallen for in this man?”, but less likely? There’s always “None-of-the-above”, too.

V7P3, 76%: "As soon as they saw that we were [making] a break for it"

@Hylebos said in Looks like a Job for a Maid! The Tales of a Dismissed Supermaid - Corrections Topic:

v5p6 ~71%:

"I could tell just by watching the way he cooked—it was all a bit off, from the way he chopped the veges to how he cooked the meat.

veges -> veggies? This might legitimately be one of those style guide things where y'all are to prefer the spelling of certain words one way or another but I just wanted to double check to make sure.

I had assumed that it was an intentional misspelling, but searching through the previous four books doesn’t show any previous uses of “veges” or “veggies”. It’s been “vegetables” all the way… What will the overlord here decide? :)

V8P9, 46%:

I channeled mithril into my sword, took aim, and swung down
[…]
I looked down and saw my mithril sword crumble to dust until it had disappeared completely.
That was because I'd infused it with divine power.

should be divine power judging by the later text (from the start of the next section down the page).

93%:

I unleashed an area Tornado spell. It swept up the monsters in its funnel...but then disappeared a moment later.
It won't work after all, then. Chris had said that the magic-type monsters at the back had ways to interfere with attack spells, and she was right. The reason I'd decided to join the fray directly was because it had looked like spells would work.

should that be wouldn’t?

v6p5:

33% - traveling along the cost, -> Typo: coast 97% - when they wake up they’re head is perfectly clear -> their

V1, P10 around 52%:

One Saturday after everything calmed down,Maya down, Maya and I were visiting our parents’ graves.

Missing space.

Around 78%:

Ruka hurriedly shook her head, denying what RInne Rinne had said.

Capitalization mistake.

V7 P2 (37% - 13th line down from top of page)

As time passed, it wore down there their physical and mental strength.

Remove "there" from sentence.

e.g. As time passed it wore down their physical and mental strength.

For volume 18: In part 5, 'beat red' should be 'beet red'

Edit: Also in part 6 it should be 'bare skin' not 'bear skin'

In part 7 it should be "forbidden tome" not "forbidden tomb" and "gripped heart" should be "gripped her heart"

In part 8, "to empty her stomach" should probably be something like "to fill her empty stomach"

Looks like the last couple of changes didn't make it to the ebook. I still Dorino's name when I was reading it.

Vol 1 Pt 1 68% “my eyes caught on the crimson broach brooch”

Same error at 93%… and 98%. The jewelry is brooch , a broach is used to make holes .

V5P9:

22%: "I mean, we couldn’t get anyone with phony strength" -> ???

V14 P6 (6% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

All the while, Light move not an inch from his spot,...

Wrong tense. Correct to "moved not",

e.g. All the while, Light moved not an inch from his spot,...
-or-
All the while, Light didn't move an inch from his spot,...

V4 P9 (0% - last sentence at bottom of page)

Then my mother lied down next to me,...
The correct word should be "laid", the past tense of lay.

e.g: Then my mother laid down next to me,...

FYI: Lied is the past tense of lie (an untruth).

V11, P5, around 56%:

Training mechs had limited fuel capacity—moving so rigorously would consume the fuel in an instant.

I'm 90% sure it should be "vigorously".

10.12:

I think if I ever divide and have ancestors of my own

Um, "ancestors"? Offspring are descendants.

V11 final - would avail should be wouldn’t, out duties should be out their duties

V1p7 ~42%

“The pair's lips parted, andInami's hands followed the outline of Aoi's body, caressing him all over.”

Missing space

V6P5 90%:

hit the breaks

breaks -> brakes

v4p4:

12% - .Wayne -> Period probably shouldn’t be there. As a bonus, is there a good way to cut back on the commas in the rest of the sentence? Maybe break it into two sentences? It feels like it runs on a bit too much. :)