v4p3 ~35%:

Though I wanted to include Nelly as part of my friend group, she was now clearly drawing a line between herself and the other children, taking her manners more seriously even than Mia did.

even than -> than even.

V17P3

Orania ran, desperately chasing after Yanna and Kiryl in the cramped back allies of Ganudos.

allies -> alleys

v03 release: character profiles

Three different characters are described as "Shenley's father" in the character profiles section for the Holy Maple Leaf Empire.

v2p2 4%

Still, they did share some things in common

Sounds like it should be did have some things in common

Volume 4, Part 5:

[~70%]

"Tee hee. I guess it's my turn, huh?"
Gori had only been dodging Rand's attacks, but she suddenly stopped and said, "Tee hee. I guess it's my turn, huh?"

Confused if this is intentional or actually redundant. I'm guessing the first one actually needs to be removed.

Vol 10 part 3
88% in "so the JDSF probably wouldn't have been willing to adjust their schedule."

Shouldn't this be JSDF or JDAG? there isn't any prior use of this acronym

@00-biting said in The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic:

"Yes, my bodyguard here took her time," said Jinshi.

yes it is obvious this is Maomao talking and not Jinshi.
There is even a reference to him feeling carefree (ref to LN5 epilogue)

v3p13:

92% - Nina. who had come across a mother who’d lost her child, -> Wrong punctuation: Nina, who had

V2P2

"She hired adventurers and sent them after her opponent in the election's apprentice, right?"

This is a "garden path" sentence. Intended meaning:

She hired adventurers and {sent them after {her opponent in the election}'s apprentice}, right?

but is most naturally parsed (when you don't know how it is going to end) as something like

She hired adventurers and {sent them after her opponent} in the {election's apprentice}, right?

Please reword to something like
"She hired adventurers and sent them after the apprentice of her opponent in the election, right?"

V4P12, 4%:

They were currently on a trip to visit their **granddaughter**, who had moved to the port town when she married. "We have a fantastic **grandchild**, but we've been so busy, we've never had a chance to meet her. We're so excited!" "She's almost three years old now!"

They're either visiting their daughter, or it's their great-grandchild who is 3, because I doubt their granddaughter married at 3.

V6 P5, 34%
"Kano don't let any information slip about [topic]."
Don't quite know what would fit in there, but sentence looks to end short.

V14 P3 (88% - 13th line down from bottom of page)

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Correct "Prcs" to Orcs.

@Vorthod Thank you for the feedback!
This series has changed hands a few times now and unfortunately there has been a miscommunication on some terms.
I have been trying my best to rectify this, but this series has a habit of characters suddenly returning after six or seven volumes and they fall through the cracks.
I will pass along your feedback for the previous volumes and see what can be done.

Wails are definitely not large marine mammals .

V8 P4 (12% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

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Add missing word "flags" in high-lighted area.

--> The two squires bearing flags - one bearing a red flag,...

V14, P7, around 95%

“Natrurally Naturally, we realize that this alone is not sufficient,”

Extra letter.

V2P3, 94%: “That was [why] the enemy would never leave Mashdale alone”

v12p14:

46% - Baronness Rossetti […] baronness -> Extra letter: Baroness, unless you’re perhaps going for another language’s version of the word, I guess. My visitation with The Great Google showed me a lot of typos… 95% - […] perhaps she could get away with eating all these cookies if trained afterwards. -> Missing word? […] if she trained afterwards.

V8.2 P4
13%
And even with Sheryl Family's - And even with the Sheryl Family's

27%
Naturally, Shijima was almost certain already knew - Redundant wording here

v3p1 ~6%:

"How dare you..." the body grumbled once more.

Not sure that shortening bodyguard to body works...