V6P1
~74%

as he finally yelled, still writhing over the ground

Apologies if it is okay as it is, but maybe wrong word / missing an 'on'? writhing over the ground->writhing on the ground
(or writhing over the ground->writhing over on the ground)

@MFDelta said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

v11p7 ~85%:

I had heard on some trivia show that Finland was where Santa Clause was from, but who knows really.

The Santa Clause was filmed in the United States and Canada by Hollywood Pictures, though it is possible that Yoshin does not know this

It's a real classic, that one.

V4 P6 (94% - 3rd line from bottom of last page)

She had competed with her brother before as target practice and won,...

competed with her brother before at target practice...
-or- competed with her brother before in target practice...

v5p10:

98% - I imagined that these peeches could get you […] -> It’s been all about the peaches on either side of this spelling, so I’m assuming that it’s a typo. :)

v11p6 ~26%:

If Metea found a hole that was the perfect shape, I bed she'd—"

bed -> bet

V8, P4, around 8%:

I’d rather you didn’t expectme expect me to do anything else.

Missing space.

V1 P11 (80% - 11th line from bottom of page)

A number of candidates had forth,...

A number of candidates had come forth,...

(Better syntex for understanding)

V1 P4 (44% - 3rd line below Sentence beginning with:"Astrid, the president"...)

...presented their inventions and hobnob with colleagues.

and hobnobbed with colleagues.

(since the verb "presented" is used (past-tense) "hobnob" should also be past-tense (e.g. ...in which all inventors in attendance presented their inventions and hobnobbed with colleagues.

@jjyoung Just curious where you see that it should expire on Sep 15 because when I hover over the parts it shows they expired Aug 15 which seems to fall in line with the general expiration rule of the 15th of the month following the release of the ebook.

Arc 1 v5 p17

~10%

He couldn’t cut through the knives when he got close, and the moment he moved away, the throwing knives hurtled his way. Ryo had never faced such an before, which was perhaps why—

such an what before? Maybe opponent?

~63%

Ryo remembered that Sera, the Matriarc, and the guardian beast from Nils’s village had said regarding the substance emanating from his body.

=> Matriarch

V2 P2: "absorbed into the magestone" should be "magesword" -- this is the Emperor trying to power up his sword.

Oops. I assume it's too late to fix since the book has already been available in print for a bit now, but was re-reading Volume 11 and noticed a continuity error.

Halfway through Volume 11, Chapter 3, the family starts talking about an increase in parts of the animal population, and speculating that it's because they killed two bears. Diana later comments, "I've only seen one once."

In the novels, Forge Eizo has actually killed three bears. Eizo soloed the first bear in Volume 1. They killed a second bear in Volume 4 when a bear invaded Jolanda's home (Diana actually dealt the killing blow on that one). And the third bear in Volume 5 was how they got Lucy.

It's probably a discontinuity from the original web version of the story, since I believe Jolanda was a new character introduced for the novelization. I assume in the web version there were only two bears, and they forgot to correct the count in the Volume 11 reflections.

Didn't spot this until reading the manga, but:
V1P1 81% the second son of the duke of the Kingdom of Karvun -> That should either be 'the second son of a duke of the Kingdom of Karvun' or 'the second son of the Duke of Karvun'. 'the duke' doesn't apply to a Kingdom.

Also, the LN spells the country as 'Karvun', but the manga uses 'Carvan'.

Volume 11 Canto 1 part 2 about 76%

a punch or too my way.

"too" isn't spelled wrong, but for the context of the sentence, that's the wrong one to use. It should be

a punch or two my way.

Too = too much, too cold, too many, etc.
To = to eat, to the store, to celebrate, etc.
Two = two cats, two people, basically when it's for quantity (which is what should be used)

V1P3 66%:

He was after the entirety of my being.

This sentence is repeated two sentences later. The second instance fits better than the first instance, so I suggest deleting the first instance.

V1P3 67%:

I wondered if the way he scratched at his white hair was a tick.

The behavior is "tic", "tick" is the parasite and the superhero.

v6p5:

42% - […] could possibly replicate a son after hearing it once -> Missing letter: song

V1, P10, 75%: “It was oozing so much power that it was as if I'd poured straight mana.” - incomplete sentence

v30p6 ~27%:

"That's because Kamyua Yoshi was working very hard to make that happen," I went ahead and chimed in, since Melfried wasn't saying anything.

Yoshi -> Yoshu

v3.1 p10

~45%

“What he’s trying to say is, when she slams the door like that she’s saying, ‘Stay out.’ So yeah, you can go inside, just don’t say we didn’t want you.”

Should that be didn't warn?