I’m only just getting around to reading the book. The ebook’s not out here at JNC for a few hours. Did anyone get it from another retailer already? I’ll send this via email, too. I’ll add any others that haven’t already been noted (if there are any) to this post as I read the volume.

v7p2:

72% - The sight of all that flaccid flab barely contained by his oily was tough to look at. -> Missing word. Probably: barely contained by his oily skin was tough to look at. Could be something else, though.

v7p4:

Various% - Lots of instances of “divinity” (~23) and “Divinity” (~6 plus 1 capitalized when starting a sentence). I think that it’s an error when it’s a lower case “d”, but I might be overlooking some logic or a rule regarding capitalization… In v7p1, there were ~38 “Divinity”s and 0 “divinities”. In v7p2, it was ~59-0. In v7p3, ~18-0.

V4P3
0%

Let’s see... It’s an object that chimes with the wind, so how about ‘wind chime?’

Maybe move ’ before question because ? is not in name? chime?’->chime’?

15.1:

When I;d checked the beehive

When I'd checked the beehive

They were merely laid inside the baskets, but carefully arranged into a lovely display.

They weren't merely laid inside the baskets, but carefully arranged into a lovely display.

V1P8 ~58% and ~90%: The earlier reference mentions royal library's repository and the latter royal library archival storage...

~58%: "Be sure to comb through the royal library's repository as well."
~90%: "The prime minister mentioned something about 'royal library archival storage.'"

Are these referring to the same part of the royal library (as I could not find another reference that would fit)? The latter is used in quotes too, so the same words should be used for both if so. (The start of P8 goes back to calling it a repository too.)

V1P12
~11%

No sooner than Shizumi spoke the words, looks of horror appeared on the faces of her attendants.

Maybe missing word and wrong word? No sooner than Shizumi spoke the words, looks of horror appeared->No sooner had Shizumi spoke the words, than looks of horror appeared

~21%

Speakingly loudly, Shizumi turned to residents who lived in the manor and had come to see the cause of the commotion.

Extra letters? Speakingly->Speaking
Maybe missing word? turned to residents->turned to the residents

~21%

The retainers we disturbed by the thought of such a house turning traitor.

Wrong word / missing letters? we->were

~42%

The incessant chirping of the corporations and the rabble in Central Province has finally ceased.

Maybe wrong word? (Because the talk after is about Banda and the nobles from Shumon parliament underestimate Tsuguho and they try to make money, not about any from Takamagahara central province? It is maybe centre of this province (Shumon)?)

~63%

There was such a haze about him that he was difficult to see him at all.

Extra words? that he was difficult to see him at all->that it was difficult to see him at all
(or ->that he was difficult to see at all)

~63%

All that remained of his feelings was a single remnant—a desperate plea that purple spirits had saved and entrusted to Hanezu before they scattered and vanished.

Extra letter? (because only talk about Fuyo) spirits->spirit

~63%

She saw the usual buzz activity of Karen, but now it was a delightful sight, so much more alive and vibrant than before.

Maybe missing word? buzz activity->buzz of activity

~74%

That moment that thought occurred to me was the moment that Akira was born.

Maybe wrong word? That->The

V1 P5 60%

a fellow C-rank student named Jutta

Fellow C-rank student makes it sound like MC and Jutta are both C-rank, but MC is D-rank.

v1 p5

~30%

Temples are training grounds for priests and are considered dwellings of the gods. Priests who pray there can be granted greater magical power. Since the Moon Goddess remains close to humanity, her temples can be found in every city. However, a donation is required to use the altar where prayers and offer prayers.

That final clause doesn't scan. I can't really guess what it should be though, maybe the altar where prayers are offered ?

V8 P4 (8% - 11th line down from top of page)

"But I could ask, the knight had already flown..."

add missing "before" in sentence

e.g. But before I could ask,...

V4 P11 (22% - 2nd & 3rd lines own from top of the page)

"WE WANTED TO GO THE FOREST."

Add missing word "TO" or "IN" in the sentence for better syntax:

e.g. WE WANTED TO GO TO THE FOREST.
-or-
WE WANTED TO GO IN THE FOREST

V5P5:

17%: "“Right, yes.” Elaina ridded her arms of shell" -> rid 33% "“You could help it! You were fighting" -> couldn't 50%: "“If went up and disappeared on his own" -> If he 67%: "The Shrine of the Dragoon King" -> Dragon 67%: "Shrine of the Dragon King, as a dragon really had" -> as if a dragon 83%: "Canaria’s motivations lied wholly in personal interest." -> lay

V5 P8, 72%
“She just bound you to her word,” I heard Eri mutter.
The wording of this doesn't quite sit right, to my ear. Something more like "She just bound you to her will by those words"

V4, P2, Around 10%:

However, I must also point out that this is an esoteric spell in Learute Lenarute, so I ask that you both keep this knowledge to yourselves.

Missing letter.

v5P2p1:

Sometimes “Teach” was capitalized and sometimes it wasn’t, even if it seemed to still be used as a name rather than a verb…

6.8:

So, which is it?
Queeres or Qurees?
I'm presuming the name of the Garage matches the last name of the owner.

First, there isn't a link to the correction topic from the first post for Volume 6; the text is there but no link.

6.3:

Is it Sureia or Sureira? Both show up for the same individual.

V7P8 ~36%

[...] their natural honing instincts [...]

Should probably be homing instincts.

Volume 14 - Part 1:

[Around 75%] Upon making the one-eighty-degree degree reversion

Guessing it should only have degree written once.

Volume 5 - Part 8:

[24%]

Chapter Eight: Reclaiming Homeland

The formatting is off. It currently has the same format as the normal text.

v1p4 ~30%:

"It is a pleasure to meet you. My name is Freesia Salt. I hope we'll be well acquainted from now on," I I said with a curtsy.

I I said -> I said.

V1P4 ~ 57%

“Inami looked proud. While he'd said Inami* was his secretary and friend, it sounded more like the two of them were true comrades in arms.”

*Sakou