v4 p6

“All right,” Wayne said. “I really don’t want to do this, but Thunderbolt!” A spear of lightning shot from his hand and struck an angel midair. It convulsed, wings seizing, then crashed down in front of Gil.
Lightningbolt was the most basic offensive lighting spell. It hadn’t killed in one hit, nor had Wayne expected it to, but it struck hard enough to deal serious damage and ground the creature.

I'd suggest using one name (Thunderbolt or Lightningbolt) consistently. I can't remember what if anything was used previously though.

V1 Part 6 ~72% Suggestion for a less vocally specific verb:
"Lilliana called over her handmaiden," -> "Lilliana summoned her handmaiden,"

v1p6:

I’m pretty sure that I saw a missing space or two in today’s part. I didn’t note their locations, though…

v3p7 ~12%:

"Do you think that I did something unnecessary?" Asked Lutz, still not entirely sure of the etiquette among adventurers in those kinds of situations.

Asked -> asked.

v2p7 34% the emperor has several other important cities -> empire

1.6:

slumber to deep to be disturbed.

slumber too deep to be disturbed.

With Lunamaar as her, partner she was the female sailor possessed by a spirit.

With Lunamaar as her partner, she was the female sailor possessed by a spirit.

Better, but something still feels a bit off about the phrasing.

v2p8:

15% - Time to rain some complements to help Hennyt’s miracles? -> Extraneous letter: Henny’s

So here I am reporting the same mistake from previous volumes in this one. I feel frustrated. Might stop trying to help.

P3V3

"In future" -> "in the future". No American says in future. That is a Commonwealth English thing.

@rhysm
That I'm paying attention enough for that to have registered as weird speaks well toward both the story and the translation team; I am enjoying this one!

12.10

“There’s no precedent, but it’s definitely not a problem. Also... Oh, I wanted to ask you about Baron Veldoole’s son.”

Who? It took me a second, but a face came to mind. “You mean Hudom?”

“Yes. You didn’t know his family name?” Reinhart asked.

"Only that his father was a duke. He said he didn't deserve to use his family name, and I didn't want to pry. I'm sorry to derail our conversation."

duke ---> baron

Volume 8 - Part 13:

[13%] fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [13%] two hundred and fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [83%] But if she’d said that she was coming to ours, so it must be fine. >> either the if or the so needs to go away. this doesn't make sense with both.

Volume 7 - Part 6:

[8%] He was unable to tolerate the silence and went ahead and revealed the truth. >> should be She (the pronoun refers to Sita) [42%] had been analyzingAgard’s memoir >> needs a space added [80%] back to her.Had she managed >> needs a space added

@Khazidhea
Volume 14 has been published.
The prepub may not reflect the final edits.
They don't make corrections to the prepubs after the final work is published.
Once a work has been published, JNC accepts corrections to the contents of the ebook via email to support@j-novel.club

The errors you are reporting may or may not exist within the published work.
The folks who would handle them don't monitor the correction topics.
So posting here after the work is published is an exercise in futility, and may also be concerning stuff that got corrected in the published work.

V12p7 50% - Yuki took the snout back from Haruka - Haruka gave the snout to Yuki 3 paragraphs up, so either names around the wrong way or something went wrong elsewhere.

Arc 1 Volume 6 - Part 4:

[~36%]

The monthlong journey from the royal to their destination

It's missing a word. Should be royal capital.

V6, P5, around 46%:

Ignoring her servant, Alicia stuck her head out from the terrace window. Theo and Bibi Vivi were both momentarily shocked.

Wrong name.

V3 P2

~50%

Item stolen: Naval Piercing.

Should that be Navel Piercing? (I mean, Yuri could have stolen something for piercing through battleships, but somehow I reckon that a bellybutton piercing is more likely given some of the other junk that got stolen.)

V1 P5 (22% - 4th line down from top of page)

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Add missing "what" to sentence, e.g. - "Are you certain that's not what you would do".

("Not what you would do": This is used to contrast an action with what someone else would do, often implying that the action is out of character or different from their typical behavior. - AI Overview)

v6 p7

More missing or misplaced spaces around italics (text inside <em></em> tags), for instance at around 1%:

“Even from Sharon, I didn’t expectthis ,” Kent grumbled as he wiped sweat from his face. As usual, he was leading our formation. “Are we seriously doing this? I guess we have to...”

I won't mention any others, but please re-check this.

V4P9

I am under the impression these books are being localized to American English, not Commonwealth English. In two places in this part it says "in future". Americans don't say that. We say "in the future".

Also, "taking the piss" is British slang. I actually had to look that one up not long ago.