@Khazidhea Thank you very much for bringing it to our attention. I'm currently thinking about just changing the convention to have all sword names capitalized.

v2p2p8 ~19%

The stone constructed imperial palace, as seen from my window, was a formidable site, and while new buildings spread out around the area, the All-Seeing Tower was ever present at the district's center.

Technically it could be correct as is, but is site perhaps supposed to be sight? Just wanted to double check.

v3p6:

68% - Alphina grabbed the reluctant prince by his hand and dragged her to the hill behind the school. -> Seems to be the wrong gender, since she’s grabbed him: […] and dragged him to the hill […]

V10 P4 (36%)
...he had gone on quite the tangent and steer the conversation back on course.
--> and steered the conversation back on course.
(needs to be past tense to match the rest of the sentence)

V1 P5, 25%
"In the life before this one, I was a princess. In the one before that, an old woman who lived eighty-six long years"
Shouldn't that be the other way around? Old woman previously, then before that princess?
71%
"Iit was charmingly sustainable" (Iit -> It)
"The storm had devastated a wide area, including the homelands of several students - Ralf among them"
I think that might work better as Ralf -> Ralf's

V4 P2, 6%
"even Blitz and Mimioza hadn't said a word" (Mimioza -> Mimoza)

v11 p2

~30%

Back on Earth, there were many instances when I thought I had more than enough time, only to barely make it on schedule. Ugh. And each time, I had to pull all-nighters. I’m sure I could do that again for most projects, but not whenworking with orichalcum.

=> when working (missing space).

v5p5:

78% - Millicia Garnet is currently the top of Mount Garank in the southeast. -> Missing word, probably: Millicia Garnet is currently at the top of Mount Garank […]

v2 p13

~50%

It was incredibly ironic. She had thought she was nothing her whole life, but she was really a princess. Meanwhile, the girl who thought she was a princess was a mere nobody. Sieglinde figured she at least deserved another chance. But instead, the now-nameless girl had died, and it filled Sieglinde with sorrow. It was a fate she herself may have suffered.

=> might have suffered may be preferable here.

(She's still alive so this is a past-tense counterfactual; might is preferred over may in such cases, see What is the difference between "may" and "might"?.)

v2p1 ~21%:

tThe Goddess turned me loose in this world—armed with peerless spatial magic, no less—saying I was free to do whatever I wanted!

tThe -> The.

v1p2 ~71%:

So that's why breakfast is always premade soup and hard bread.

The t in that's appears to be accidentally italicized in the text.

v1p3 ~90%:

"MayI have some time to think about it?"

MayI -> May I

@Zarabada-0h92w38 Correct. It could be a period, but the previous line used an exclamation for Duke Raul's crime so I suggested the same.

@Geezer-Weasalopes said in D-Genesis - Corrections Topic:

While I haven't checked to see if it gets used in scientific texts, "particular" would follow the same means of being formed from "particle" as "molecular" has in relation to "molecule."

I suggested "molecular" as an alternate specifically because I thought "particular" was being used in that context. Before I even posted I googled "particular" to see if it had an archaic definition like "of or relating to particles". All dictionary definitions related to how you would normally use it in modern parlance.

Way back in highschool, my German teacher used to tell us, "Only nerds translate words." meaning that a literal translation is not guaranteed to effectively communicate between languages. Even if the JP original uses a word for [of or relating to particles], EN doesn't use "particular" in that fashion, and as such its a poor choice for a translation. Kind of like how [noun-cum-noun] only exists in translated light novels. I choose to believe that that's a long running inside joke among translators, and ignore it as such. Particular isn't though.

V18 P9 (38%)
Let's start the weak with a good meal,...
--> Lets's start the week with a good meal,...

v3p10:

1% - […] plenty of children underworking age […] -> Missing space: under working 23% - Emma snide retort cut the king like a knife. -> Missing apostrophe “s”? Emma’s snide retort 61% - the servants had instructed Robert in the way his father had this duty, so his father was to blame […] -> While it might work this way, should it be either: the servants had instructed Robert in the way his father had done this duty […] Or: the servants had instructed Robert in the way his father had performed this duty […].

Volume 5 - Part 1:

[42%]

"Here's the final amount we'll be transferrin' to yer account."The sum written on it was...

Add space or a paragraph break.

"Here's the final amount we'll be transferrin' to yer account."
The sum written on it was...

Volume 7 Part 8 (7%) into the part on android app reader.

Princess Salacia is referred to as Prince Salacia.
"Prince Glenn, are you aware of what they are?" Prince(ss) Salacia asked.

KSW

v3 p1

~50%

“G-Gyaah! No, no, no! That’s too much fire! Everything’s up in flames!” Lacey screamed as she watched the burning tree in shock and horror. She and Wayne had managed to reach Tee and Noi, and they ended up standing in a clearing with no vegetation in sight other than a single conifer tree. Tee had been focusing all its efforts into burning down that tree, opening its mouth as much as it could and breathing out as much fire as possible. It was a mystery how its tiny body could produce flames that were over ten times larger than itself. The fires danced and wrapped around the tree’s leaves, completely covering them up to their tips.

Conifers (e.g. pine trees) mostly have needles not leaves. While not impossible, it sounds incongruous.

~67%

The tree that Tee had set ablaze appeared to be unscathed. Its leaves looked healthy and seemed to reach up into the sky, as if they hadn’t been enveloped in flames just moments earlier.

Again, maybe that should be needles.

(I had initially visualized the tree as looking something like a sequoia or ponderosa pine, then when I read "leaves" I immediately had to re-visualize it as something like a live oak or olive tree.)

V13P1

[5%] onAlyssa's recommendation. < missing a space

V10 P10 36%:
Is that something couples usually talk about?" I asked
Period at end of sentence is missing.