V9 P1 24% - two adorable smiles began bouncing around - smiles should be slimes

V2P8
though she sometimes said some words that were too difficult for me to grasp, such as, "I wonder how I can get some good old fan service to happen. Maybe Prince Raph would be happy if he got a good glimpse of my panties?"

I think you should probably reword the whole sentence around the word "pantsushot".
Like "Maybe Prince Ralph would be glad if I gave him a pantsushot from time to time?"

Part 8, at 69%, pretty sure the wrong name was used. All 4 of them are supposed to have attacked, yet Franz's name is used twice. I think the first one, where Franz ised magic, as supposed to be Connie instead, as Franz was running with a sword at the time.

V14P8 91%: All six types of ogres - Red Ogre, Blue Ogre, Yellow Ogre, White Ogre, Yellow Ogre, and Black Ogre : Yellow Ogre is listed twice instead of some other colour.

V5 P9
(9% - 9th line down from top of page)

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Add missing "she" to sentence

(91% - 11th line down from top of page)

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"First and foremost" - most importantly; more than anything else.
e.g. "I'm first and foremost a writer"

v4p7:

64% - Even in death, he had been robbed his dignity. -> Probable missing word: he had been robbed of his dignity. I think that some versions of english (British? Another American dialect? Other?) sometimes don't use “of”, but it probably should be there in this case.

@Jojajones We're witnessing the cannonization of a pun. Seen it used in another book title already. A bit blunt if you ask me, but to each generation their sense.

Volume 7 - Part 11:

[74%] I only tagged alone this time >> should be along

Volume 7 - Part 12:

[95%] on the head.She looked >> needs a space

V2P3, 65%: “that leads us [to] today”
P4, 87%: “However, that's not a problem if I get just the one tocome running.”
P9, 8%: “A present's not just something you just give them at that's it” - and

Can Two-Law Tyrant be changed to Two-Law Usurper? The story will explain why he's called an usurper. Plus, there will be another character that uses Tyrant, so this would help prevent confusion.

v9p10:

12% - “[…] after I had done my business,” Cara replied, her tone perfectly even. -> Carla 45% - We had invited the head honcho of all three nations to proceed with the signing of the contract […] -> Typo? Poor phrasing? There isn’t one head for all three, but one for each: the head honchos of all three nations or perhaps the head honchos of the three nations.

V2 P2 (16% - 5th line down from top of page)

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Just FYI from Merriam-Webster Dictionary online:
Sneaked is the original past tense form of sneak, but in the late 1800s, the alternative past tense form snuck began making its way into American English. It is now very common and is considered standard.

V10 P1 35% "heir to the [Wayne] family headship." -> Wynne

@alahue this story definitely needs something like a tragedy tag to give people a heads up on what they're getting in to.
Many people don't enjoy being blind sided with

spoiler
At the same time, people who do love it and are specifically looking for these kinds of stories don't have any way to tell that this story will scratch their itch

V4 P10 (38% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe "as" is missing and should be added:
...it took me half as long as them...

Note: "as long as" is a phrase of "long"

during the whole time that.
"they have been there as long as anyone can remember" provided that.
"as long as you fed him, he would be cooperative" - Oxford/Cambriage Dictionaries

V1 P8

Was some content dropped between P7 and P8? P7 ended with Evelyn passing out after Europa manipulates her into promising to visit her every day:

Lady Europa ignored the big splash echoing from below and crawled on all fours toward my collapsed form. Peeking out from her disheveled long hair was her terrifyingly beautiful face, with her tongue sticking out, licking at her cheek.
“Lady Eeevelyn...”
“Ee, eee...”
“We’ll be together...forever and ever and ever.” She paused ominously. “Won’t we?”
Kira! Save me, Kiraaa!
As I screamed my reliable companion’s name internally, I was overcome with terror and passed out right then and there.

But then P8 begins after some sort of "costume fitting", not mentioned in the previous part, is over:

After the costume fitting was done, I changed into simple clothes any town girl would wear and went with Lord Theodore to tour the festival. There was still time before my ceremony, and since nobody knew what the saint looked like, the Grand Basilica had given me permission to go out.

Was some text between these two parts omitted?

V6P3
~0%

Perhaps because it was mostly out of sight, it had become a dumping ground for all kinds of everyday waste—rusty cartwheels, smashed crates, and discolored sofas to wine bottles, chairs with broken legs, and assorted fragments of other items.

Wrong word? and->from

V6P6
~29%

AS YOU WISH.FOR YOU, MY FRIEND, I WILL REDUCE ALL YOUR FOES TO ASH.

Missing space?; WISH.FOR->WISH. FOR

V5P10 ~78%
"...the self-claimed Game Master..." -> "...the self-proclaimed Game Master..."

@Khazidhea
Volume 14 has been published.
The prepub may not reflect the final edits.
They don't make corrections to the prepubs after the final work is published.
Once a work has been published, JNC accepts corrections to the contents of the ebook via email to support@j-novel.club

The errors you are reporting may or may not exist within the published work.
The folks who would handle them don't monitor the correction topics.
So posting here after the work is published is an exercise in futility, and may also be concerning stuff that got corrected in the published work.

v6 p7

More missing or misplaced spaces around italics (text inside <em></em> tags), for instance at around 1%:

“Even from Sharon, I didn’t expectthis ,” Kent grumbled as he wiped sweat from his face. As usual, he was leading our formation. “Are we seriously doing this? I guess we have to...”

I won't mention any others, but please re-check this.