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    • schuburner

      Dagashi-ya Yahagi - Corrections Topic
      dagashi-ya yahagi • • schuburner

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      I’m not sure if this is applicable as the issue appears to be in the original work.

      The author revealed that Yahagi and Michelle were engaged in volume 3 part 1.

      “… I’ll also introduce you as my fiancée.” That was right. We were finally engaged.

      Later, in volume 4 part 9, Yahagi reveals that he plans on proposing that evening:

      What was going to happen when I proposed to her after this?

      If JNC has authorization, the plot hole could be resolved via modifying the 2nd quote to say that Yahagi is setting a wedding date.

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      I'll Never Set Foot in That House Again! - Corrections Topic
      illneversetfoot j-novel heart • • lovelight

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      V7P4 ~70%: "It's onlu lasts one generation."

      Should probably be It only?

    • majikayo

      The Hero and the Sage, Reincarnated and Engaged - Corrections Topic
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      V6P1
      ~74%

      as he finally yelled, still writhing over the ground

      Apologies if it is okay as it is, but maybe wrong word / missing an 'on'? writhing over the ground->writhing on the ground
      (or writhing over the ground->writhing over on the ground)

    • yuzumori

      An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic
      hookup hiccups • • yuzumori

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      @MFDelta said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

      v11p7 ~85%:

      I had heard on some trivia show that Finland was where Santa Clause was from, but who knows really.

      The Santa Clause was filmed in the United States and Canada by Hollywood Pictures, though it is possible that Yoshin does not know this

      It's a real classic, that one.

    • alahue

      Old Knight, New Post - Corrections Topic
      old knight • • alahue

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      karasutengu

      V1 P11 (80% - 11th line from bottom of page)

      A number of candidates had forth,...

      A number of candidates had come forth,...

      (Better syntex for understanding)

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      D-Genesis streaming problem
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      jpwong

      @jjyoung Just curious where you see that it should expire on Sep 15 because when I hover over the parts it shows they expired Aug 15 which seems to fall in line with the general expiration rule of the 15th of the month following the release of the ebook.

    • myskaros

      My Quiet Blacksmith Life in Another World - Corrections Topic
      blacksmith • • myskaros

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      Oops. I assume it's too late to fix since the book has already been available in print for a bit now, but was re-reading Volume 11 and noticed a continuity error.

      Halfway through Volume 11, Chapter 3, the family starts talking about an increase in parts of the animal population, and speculating that it's because they killed two bears. Diana later comments, "I've only seen one once."

      In the novels, Forge Eizo has actually killed three bears. Eizo soloed the first bear in Volume 1. They killed a second bear in Volume 4 when a bear invaded Jolanda's home (Diana actually dealt the killing blow on that one). And the third bear in Volume 5 was how they got Lucy.

      It's probably a discontinuity from the original web version of the story, since I believe Jolanda was a new character introduced for the novelization. I assume in the web version there were only two bears, and they forgot to correct the count in the Volume 11 reflections.

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      Demon Lord, Retry! - Corrections Topic
      retry • • lovelight

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      Iseguy

      10.9

      Tahara gestured to the variable mountain of food and drinks, all part of the hoard they’d confiscated from the central nobles

      “veritable”

    • majikayo

      From Two-Bit Baddie to Total Heartthrob: This Villainess Will Cross-Dress to Impress! Corrections Topic
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      karasutengu

      V4 P12 (% - 4th line from the bottom of the page)

      ..., He was easily in the running o be considered his closest aid.

      ...to be considered his closest aide.

      (an aide is an assistant to an important person, especially a political leader.)
      {source: Oxford Language Dictionary}

    • yuzumori

      Private Tutor - Corrections Topic
      private tutor • • yuzumori

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      V18P1
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      Chapter 1<

      Just guessing that this is a typo and it's not meant to be chapter 'greater than 1'? (Though guess we'll see if there is a chapter 1 or chapter 2 later in the prepubs) Chapter 1< -> Chapter 1

    • Meiru

      Lady Bumpkin and Her Lord Villain - Corrections Topic
      lady bumpkin • • Meiru

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      Poncho9761

      V5P8 ~38%
      "I guess two fellow pervers can get along." ->"I guess two fellow perverts can get along."

    • majikayo

      Management of a Novice Alchemist - Corrections Topic
      alchemist • • majikayo

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      v6p12:

      1% - The first group stood on the front line with bitter expressions, fighting though they weren’t really used to it. -> Missing word(?): […] fighting as though they weren’t really […]
    • myskaros

      The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic
      apothecary • • myskaros

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      thegreatgirafarig

      V15 P11 50%

      "Ho ho ho ho ho!" Maomao said- the closest thing to a laugh she could manage with such an intense frown on her face.
      「ほほほほ」猫猫は顔が引きつり、変な笑い声しか出ない。

      It does not seem like Maomao is frowning here, but rather her face is twitching/flinching from being nervous.

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      Survival Strategies of a Corrupt Aristocrat - Corrections Topic
      corrupt noble • • lovelight

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      V3 P7 89%
      "and their families who fell in the Girrad territory - let's take revenge together"
      Girrad -> Girard

      V3 P8, 65%
      "You're too weak to beat me!" Seravimia lighty thrust me away with her hand
      Lighty -> lightly

    • schuburner

      Earl and Fairy - Corrections Topic
      earl and fairy j-novel heart • • schuburner

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      eggnog

      V11P9 13%:

      "Lord Ashenbert," Raven had joined them, "might I ask that you unhand Mr. Nico?"

      "Raven had joined them" isn't a dialog tag so it should be in a separate sentence. (Or maybe it could be rephrased to accompany a dialog tag, but I can't think of a way to do that gracefully).

      V11P10 28%:
      Oughted -> Oughtred

    • schuburner

      Let This Grieving Soul Retire - Corrections Topic
      grieving soul • • schuburner

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      karasutengu

      V8 P12 (38% - end of 4th line from bottom of the page)

      She flaw at me, every bit as energized as Eva had said.

      -->She flew at me,...
    • philhouse

      The Despicable Duke Settles His Affairs - Corrections Topic
      despicable duke jncknight • • philhouse

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      @faye-d Ah, ok. Thanks for the explanation.

    • majikayo

      The Tiny Witch from the Deep Woods - Corrections
      tiny witch • • majikayo

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      V2P9
      ~0%

      The realization he was doing that, together with the memory of all the times she had fallen on their way here for him to catch her, made her want to laugh.

      Potentially missing word? Sorry if it is okay as it is, but to me when I first read it, it seemed that Misha was intentionally falling so that Kite would catch her (through the 'for him to catch her'); here for->here, only for

    • myskaros

      A Late-Start Tamer's Laid-Back Life - Corrections Topic
      latestart tamer • • myskaros

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      @Hylebos said in A Late-Start Tamer's Laid-Back Life - Corrections Topic:

      v13p12 ~72%:

      But this feat wasn't solelySilver-Haired's.

      Not sure if purposeful forum typo or whatever usual bug that happens with pre-pub parts involving italics but if it's the latter then you need a space after the solely :P

      There's also that it's 'soLeLy' not 'solely'.

      But this feat wasn't soLeLySilver-Haired's.

      But this feat wasn't solely Silver-Haired's.

      The thing that makes this fun is that it's in the forum discussion, so it could be deliberate.
      Because forum posters mess things up.
      And canny authors play upon that.

    • alahue

      Three Cheats from Three Goddesses - Corrections
      three cheats • • alahue

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      V2 P10, 63%
      "None of the people I curse broke for had suffered..."
      Sounds odd to me as is, though might work. If not, perhaps 'I broke the curse for' or similar instead

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