Just reading V9P1 and I have a very hard time locating people and following the story. One small example:
57% "... and chase the second son and his men out of the royal capital ..."
It might be necessary to read the complete chapter and make a difference between the royal capital and the regional capital of the local lord.
So the above example should be either "out of the regional capital" or "to the royal capital".
The same applies at the start of the chapter where Muno visits the main store in the capital. Afterwards he opens a branch in the capital and than leaves for the capital.
Where is he and where is he going?