@MFDelta said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

v11p7 ~85%:

I had heard on some trivia show that Finland was where Santa Clause was from, but who knows really.

The Santa Clause was filmed in the United States and Canada by Hollywood Pictures, though it is possible that Yoshin does not know this

It's a real classic, that one.

V1 P11 (80% - 11th line from bottom of page)

A number of candidates had forth,...

A number of candidates had come forth,...

(Better syntex for understanding)

@jjyoung Just curious where you see that it should expire on Sep 15 because when I hover over the parts it shows they expired Aug 15 which seems to fall in line with the general expiration rule of the 15th of the month following the release of the ebook.

Oops. I assume it's too late to fix since the book has already been available in print for a bit now, but was re-reading Volume 11 and noticed a continuity error.

Halfway through Volume 11, Chapter 3, the family starts talking about an increase in parts of the animal population, and speculating that it's because they killed two bears. Diana later comments, "I've only seen one once."

In the novels, Forge Eizo has actually killed three bears. Eizo soloed the first bear in Volume 1. They killed a second bear in Volume 4 when a bear invaded Jolanda's home (Diana actually dealt the killing blow on that one). And the third bear in Volume 5 was how they got Lucy.

It's probably a discontinuity from the original web version of the story, since I believe Jolanda was a new character introduced for the novelization. I assume in the web version there were only two bears, and they forgot to correct the count in the Volume 11 reflections.

V1, P10, 75%: “It was oozing so much power that it was as if I'd poured straight mana.” - incomplete sentence

10.9

Tahara gestured to the variable mountain of food and drinks, all part of the hoard they’d confiscated from the central nobles

“veritable”

V4 P12 (% - 4th line from the bottom of the page)

..., He was easily in the running o be considered his closest aid.

...to be considered his closest aide.

(an aide is an assistant to an important person, especially a political leader.)
{source: Oxford Language Dictionary}

V3, P12, around 39%:
>Beneki Benkei didn't have six hands just for show.

V18P1
~42%

Chapter 1<

Just guessing that this is a typo and it's not meant to be chapter 'greater than 1'? (Though guess we'll see if there is a chapter 1 or chapter 2 later in the prepubs) Chapter 1< -> Chapter 1

V5P8 ~38%
"I guess two fellow pervers can get along." ->"I guess two fellow perverts can get along."

v6p12:

1% - The first group stood on the front line with bitter expressions, fighting though they weren’t really used to it. -> Missing word(?): […] fighting as though they weren’t really […]

V15 P11 50%

"Ho ho ho ho ho!" Maomao said- the closest thing to a laugh she could manage with such an intense frown on her face.
「ほほほほ」猫猫は顔が引きつり、変な笑い声しか出ない。

It does not seem like Maomao is frowning here, but rather her face is twitching/flinching from being nervous.

V3 P7 89%
"and their families who fell in the Girrad territory - let's take revenge together"
Girrad -> Girard

V3 P8, 65%
"You're too weak to beat me!" Seravimia lighty thrust me away with her hand
Lighty -> lightly

V11P9 13%:

"Lord Ashenbert," Raven had joined them, "might I ask that you unhand Mr. Nico?"

"Raven had joined them" isn't a dialog tag so it should be in a separate sentence. (Or maybe it could be rephrased to accompany a dialog tag, but I can't think of a way to do that gracefully).

V11P10 28%:
Oughted -> Oughtred

V8 P12 (38% - end of 4th line from bottom of the page)

She flaw at me, every bit as energized as Eva had said.

-->She flew at me,...

@faye-d Ah, ok. Thanks for the explanation.

V2P9
~0%

The realization he was doing that, together with the memory of all the times she had fallen on their way here for him to catch her, made her want to laugh.

Potentially missing word? Sorry if it is okay as it is, but to me when I first read it, it seemed that Misha was intentionally falling so that Kite would catch her (through the 'for him to catch her'); here for->here, only for

@Hylebos said in A Late-Start Tamer's Laid-Back Life - Corrections Topic:

v13p12 ~72%:

But this feat wasn't solelySilver-Haired's.

Not sure if purposeful forum typo or whatever usual bug that happens with pre-pub parts involving italics but if it's the latter then you need a space after the solely :P

There's also that it's 'soLeLy' not 'solely'.

But this feat wasn't soLeLySilver-Haired's.

But this feat wasn't solely Silver-Haired's.

The thing that makes this fun is that it's in the forum discussion, so it could be deliberate.
Because forum posters mess things up.
And canny authors play upon that.

V2 P10, 63%
"None of the people I curse broke for had suffered..."
Sounds odd to me as is, though might work. If not, perhaps 'I broke the curse for' or similar instead

Hi! Series editor here. Thank you both catching that missing quotation mark! I usually upvote corrections I've incorporated into the text, which I thought I did last week, but I might've forgotten to hit save or something. Anyway, it should be fixed in part 1 now.