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    • Meiru

      Lady Bumpkin and Her Lord Villain - Corrections Topic
      lady bumpkin • • Meiru

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      Poncho9761

      V5P8 ~38%
      "I guess two fellow pervers can get along." ->"I guess two fellow perverts can get along."

    • philhouse

      Zero Damage Sword Saint - Corrections
      zero damage • • philhouse

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      Shiroi Hane

      V1P8, 1%: “I refrained from suggesting that we [turn?] back.”

    • majikayo

      EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic
      exp is golden • • majikayo

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      Just noticed this but v3 p9

      ~40%

      After seeing off the wolf pack, Leah turned her attention to the goblin ranches. With her plans expanding to ranching entire dungeons, this small-scale operation wasn’t particularly useful anymore. Instead of shutting it down, she decided to Retain the goblins and form a new goblin corps for her grand army of the apocalypse. It was the least she could do to thank them for their endless service. They would not farm, instead of being farmed.

      Should that be They would now farm, instead of being farmed ?

      Also, in this chapter there are two instances of Lieflais being spelled Lieflay.

    • majikayo

      Management of a Novice Alchemist - Corrections Topic
      alchemist • • majikayo

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      v6p12:

      1% - The first group stood on the front line with bitter expressions, fighting though they weren’t really used to it. -> Missing word(?): […] fighting as though they weren’t really […]
    • myskaros

      The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic
      apothecary • • myskaros

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      thegreatgirafarig

      V15 P11 50%

      "Ho ho ho ho ho!" Maomao said- the closest thing to a laugh she could manage with such an intense frown on her face.
      「ほほほほ」猫猫は顔が引きつり、変な笑い声しか出ない。

      It does not seem like Maomao is frowning here, but rather her face is twitching/flinching from being nervous.

    • L

      Survival Strategies of a Corrupt Aristocrat - Corrections Topic
      corrupt noble • • lovelight

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      V3 P7 89%
      "and their families who fell in the Girrad territory - let's take revenge together"
      Girrad -> Girard

      V3 P8, 65%
      "You're too weak to beat me!" Seravimia lighty thrust me away with her hand
      Lighty -> lightly

    • schuburner

      Earl and Fairy - Corrections Topic
      earl and fairy j-novel heart • • schuburner

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      eggnog

      V11P9 13%:

      "Lord Ashenbert," Raven had joined them, "might I ask that you unhand Mr. Nico?"

      "Raven had joined them" isn't a dialog tag so it should be in a separate sentence. (Or maybe it could be rephrased to accompany a dialog tag, but I can't think of a way to do that gracefully).

      V11P10 28%:
      Oughted -> Oughtred

    • schuburner

      Let This Grieving Soul Retire - Corrections Topic
      grieving soul • • schuburner

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      karasutengu

      V8 P12 (38% - end of 4th line from bottom of the page)

      She flaw at me, every bit as energized as Eva had said.

      -->She flew at me,...
    • philhouse

      The Despicable Duke Settles His Affairs - Corrections Topic
      despicable duke jncknight • • philhouse

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      @faye-d Ah, ok. Thanks for the explanation.

    • L

      I Shall Survive Using Potions! - Corrections Topic
      potionloli • • lovelight

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      V11P4
      ~31%

      Then. there was a drawn out silence.

      Wrong punctation?; Then. there->Then, there

      Who'd invite such a suspicious visitor at night like this?

      Missing word?; Who'd invite such->Who'd invite in such

      ~38%

      I turned around left, the couple thanking me profusely with tears streaming down their faces, their kid sitting up in bed looking dumbfounded.

      Missing word?; I turned around left->I turned around and left

      ~69%

      As the guild master tried to regain composure and maintain an air of authority,Loreia, the receptionist, entered with a young girl who barely seemed to be an adult.

      Missing space?; authority,Loreia,->authority, Loreia,

    • majikayo

      The Tiny Witch from the Deep Woods - Corrections
      tiny witch • • majikayo

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      V2P9
      ~0%

      The realization he was doing that, together with the memory of all the times she had fallen on their way here for him to catch her, made her want to laugh.

      Potentially missing word? Sorry if it is okay as it is, but to me when I first read it, it seemed that Misha was intentionally falling so that Kite would catch her (through the 'for him to catch her'); here for->here, only for

    • myskaros

      A Late-Start Tamer's Laid-Back Life - Corrections Topic
      latestart tamer • • myskaros

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      @Hylebos said in A Late-Start Tamer's Laid-Back Life - Corrections Topic:

      v13p12 ~72%:

      But this feat wasn't solelySilver-Haired's.

      Not sure if purposeful forum typo or whatever usual bug that happens with pre-pub parts involving italics but if it's the latter then you need a space after the solely :P

      There's also that it's 'soLeLy' not 'solely'.

      But this feat wasn't soLeLySilver-Haired's.

      But this feat wasn't solely Silver-Haired's.

      The thing that makes this fun is that it's in the forum discussion, so it could be deliberate.
      Because forum posters mess things up.
      And canny authors play upon that.

    • alahue

      Three Cheats from Three Goddesses - Corrections
      three cheats • • alahue

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      V2 P10, 63%
      "None of the people I curse broke for had suffered..."
      Sounds odd to me as is, though might work. If not, perhaps 'I broke the curse for' or similar instead

    • Meiru

      This Gyaru’s Got a Thing for Vampire Hunters - Corrections Topic
      gyaruvamphunter • • Meiru

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      Rennnnn

      Hi! Series editor here. Thank you both catching that missing quotation mark! I usually upvote corrections I've incorporated into the text, which I thought I did last week, but I might've forgotten to hit save or something. Anyway, it should be fixed in part 1 now.

    • majikayo

      Guild Handyman? More like Mastermind! Using My Hidden Skills in the Shadows - Corrections Topic
      handyman • • majikayo

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    • Meiru

      No Wife, No Problem: A Mage's Life with His Beloved Daughter - Corrections Topic
      no wife no prob • • Meiru

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      V1P12 12%

      I couldn’t afford to waste resources on broken equipment.
> Driven by that

      On the site in my Chome browser on iOS, it looks like equipment.Driven but when I copy paste, there is a line break between them as shown above. Same as the previous part.

      59%
      “I see.”
I understood what he was getting at. But—
      “I want this to be a formal request.”
I looked him in the eye …
      I see”I -> I see” I
      request.”I -> request.” I

      “… him.
Even from afar..”
      him.
Even -> him.
 Even

      “… item: a jar.
More specifically, it was a Jar of Thirst…”
      jar.
More -> jar.
 More

      71%
      “… falling steadily since early that morning,. long enough now that both…”

      morning,. long -> morning, long

      “… window.
Come to think of it …”
      window.Come -> window. Come

      There’s at least 5 more of these in the last couple pages, as well as a comma at the end of a sentence instead of a period. Not worth going through and listing them at this point.

    • L

      Campfire Cooking in Another World with My Absurd Skill - Corrections Topic
      campfire • • lovelight

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      Expendable

      V16 P5 9% "They were right [beShind] me just a second ago!" -> a wild S appeared

    • myskaros

      JNC OLN Contest Finalists! - Corrections Topic
      finalists jnc oln contest • • myskaros

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      With the Age Gap Gone
      Page 4 capitalized letter in "Looked" should not be capitalized
      Reads as "I Looked at Lord Helena"

    • L

      Chivalry of a Failed Knight - Corrections Topic
      chivalry • • lovelight

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      karasutengu

      V7 P3 (0% - end of last sentence on page)

      Hey Lily. Why do you care so little about fashion?

      Hey Sara.

      Shouldn't this be 'Sara' since she's the one they are trying to get clothed. Besides, the five who went to the women's clothing store were: Stella, Sara, Ikki, Alisiun, and Shizuku. There was no Lily (unless it's a nick-name for Sara).

    • majikayo

      Knight's & Magic - Corrections
      knightsmagic • • majikayo

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      Almond Magnum

      V8P1 77% Addyjust -> Addy just

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