V7P2, around 65%:

Not that she had any reason to lose to begin with.

Missing word.

v6p2p16 ~58%

He can still move like that, even after I slammed that huge blade into his stomach and ripped his insides apart?!Shit! I'm running out of time!

Missing space after interrobang.

V6 part 8

57%

But...well, she is beautiful, so I can see why you might feel jealous. Lady Sylvia.

=> the . (period) should have been a comma

94%
I'm not sure if this is intentional, but the paragraphs for the future excerpt doesn't seem to be formatted correctly (at least on my device). The start of each paragraph has less indentation.

@saffire said in The Ideal Sponger Life - Corrections Topic:

wortju

i mean, h and j and y and u are next to each other on keyboard, so worthy is definitely a safe vet.

V6P9
~0%

They’re being led by a black-haired general on a white horse and a silver-haired female general on a white horse!”

If I remember correctly (ignore me if I don't) but Zetsuei, who Sekiei has been said to be riding, is said to be a black horse?; black-haired general on a white horse->black-haired general on a black horse
(also the part later mentions Sekiei being on a black horse)

~47%

I tensed my muscles, willing strength into my core response to their intimidation, then flashed them a casual smile.

Missing word?; core response->core in response

~82%

That’s why he underestimated Jo Hiyou and Gan Retsurai, and wrote them off as bit players in this war, instead focusing all of his energy on settling things with me.

Maybe just me but not sure how the word would apply here so misspell?; bit->big

V2P1

There's a couple mentions of gunpowder, but I don't recall there being guns mentioned anywhere. Changing this to black powder would be more appropriate, as calling it gunpowder implies the existence of guns.

Vol 7 part 17

'The vast majority of them had worthwhile capabilities and were referred to as things like "trash" or "junk."'

Worthwhile things aren't trash, missing a no?

v5p4:

99% - […] relieved that the overhead conversation hadn’t […] -> Missing letter/wrong word: that the overheard conversation

v11 p9

~20%

Of course, I hadn’t onlyspent the past four daysfighting.

=> only spent the past four days fighting (missing spaces).

~22%

I was worried, especiallybecause it was Dhoran we were talking about.

=> especially because

~90%

I finallyrealized what the weight I’d felt on my back since jumping off the ship was.

=> finally realized

@Khazidhea Hello! Series editor here. You're correct in that it sounds like Liluetta's actively doing something--I think it's a matter of "scuffed" having multiple definitions. Scuffed can refer to the state of being scratched or roughed up, and it sounds like this is the definition you have in mind (for example, "Her shoes were all scuffed up"). But it can also be the act of scraping your feet or shoes along a surface, which is how it's used in this week's part. Hope this makes sense!

Oh, and since this is my first forum post ever (!), thank you to everyone in this thread for your corrections so far! The last one or two might not have made it into the prepub, but they should all be in the final ebook for volume 1.

19.5:

so he could use that sorcery

so he couldn't use that sorcery

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving."

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving.

Volume 1 - Part 8:

[45%] Would you like someone else >> should be something (unless the food is a someone)

V15 P12, 46%
"Could you maybe be studying her"
Her -> here

12.7

Much to my chagrin there was only one Kogure Kawanamis in the world.

“Kawanami”

V3P7 85% “ If Claude was left to his own devices, he would surely act to save the kingdom without any reqard for himself.”

Reqard should be “regard”

V4P9
~0%

In any case, this squadron would move to their designated station in compact formation before the troops scatter to execute the operation.

Wrong tense when reading maybe?; scatter->scattered

~31%

AIn the distant past, he had used his overwhelming power to rule the thieves and bandits in felling cities and towns, until his [...]

Wrong word potentially? I couldn't find a definition of 'felling' that would work here and I couldn't see 'felling city' or 'felling town' as a phrase, so maybe wrong word? Though I'm not sure what it would be otherwise, so probably just me not knowing where to look, sorry if it is, just adding this in case it is an accident wrong word.

V2P10 34%:
Three sentences in a row begin with "But". I'm not sure if I'm parsing the intent of that paragraph correctly, but I think at least the second "But" can be safely removed.

9.11:

Shiori and Alev even got the dragon's scale

Who's Alev?

Shiori and Alex even got the dragon's scale

12.10

Tropical trees scattered on the pristine, white breach spread out around the mountain added a nice touch. Wow, this island is pretty nice!

“beach”

“Aye, aye, Cap-tain! Your wish our command!”

“Your wish is”, unless the mistake was intentional.

@xdbx Cion's real last name is "Kreuzwell", and "Cromwell" is an alias. Thank you for checking, though!