V2 P10 13%

It knew it would all be worth it -> I knew it would all be worth it

She is referring to herself in this context.

@Geezer-Weasalopes Well, it's not just italics this time. But they do need to be checked before this gets released.

Just found a conventional typo!

V12P11 90%:
"You don't need to be so said.
sad

V2P1:

so I figured you'd probably to hear me sing your praises.

so I figured you'd probably want to hear me sing your praises.
so I figured you'd probably approach to hear me sing your praises.

V3P13:

He duddenly noticed

He suddenly noticed

@Shaun-C Thanks for the confirmation. I thought my new glasses were screwing with my eyes.

Volume 3 Part 7
53% Just desserts -> just deserts

(Something I'd been getting wrong myself til just recently, thinking with its pronunciation that desserts was only fitting. Quick googling shows it might be instead tied to 'deserves')

Vol 2. Pt. 2 - 24%

"Oh, you're awake. Very good. I'm proud of you!" Crysie said upon entering the house.

Missing "s" for Cryssie

I'm not sure if anyone has noticed this but in the published e-book, the color illustration listed the "Chief Researcher of the Slime Nursery" as Gildovan when it's suppose to be Idaealina.

v2p2:

24% - Laycesquinted angrily, […] -> Missing space: Layce squinted 98% - At the palace, when you told me you loved… I was really surprised. -> Missing word, or is that why the ellipsis is there: you loved me, or maybe: you loved yourself. ;p

Volume 8, P16, 57%: When discussing colors of everyone’s armor, Aina is mentioned twice - is one supposed to be Aura?

V26 Part 3

10% "unsucessful" conflicts with later lines
The Mikoshiba Grand Duchy's surprise attack was unsuccessful, ->
The Mikoshiba Grand Duchy's surprise attack was successful,

44% "than was" would make the comparison flow smoother
To ensure their survival, they often employed a larger army appropriate for a nation their size. ->
To ensure their survival, they often employed a larger army than was appropriate for a nation their size.

54% Add space between "now.All"
Well, there's not much I can do about it right now.All I can do...->
Well, there's not much I can do about it right now. All I can do...

v3p9 ~43%

That was the second name given to Magic CIty Liam.

CIty -> City

@topgnu said in Death of the Skeleton Swordsman - Corrections Topic:

V2P5 96% torturous, not tortuous
Most likely. Tortuous is not impossible but feels unlikely in the context.

Thank you for catching that and you are exactly right. Should be fixed now.

v7fp12:

66% - Xenia clenched it’s left first and the sphere gradually began to cave in -> Probably “clenched its left fist” 89% - Thank for so, so much. -> Thank you for so, so much. Or: Thanks for so, so much. 100% - […] she gently chides the children who wants to fight the imperial army […] -> Too lazy to check how many there were, but is it “the child who wants to fight” or “the children who want to fight”?

v9p9:

63% - It was a territory that belonged within the kingdom, but it was not under its control. -> belonged sounds a bit strong if the control isn’t there. Maybe: It was a territory that was contained within the kingdom […]? Vatican City is contained within Rome, etc…. Or something. :)
Edit: Or: territory that was surrounded by the kingdom… Multiple choice!

Volume 5 - Part 4

[0%] Hearing that, I realized that Runa had considered becoming a model than I'd expected. -> I think that is missing a "more", but not sure, possibly it is missing a different word to make the "than" relation make sense.

v1p6

~62%

That meant he had no intention of hiding the relationship between him and thier group.

thier -> their

V15 P8

25% Wide page view

Willem has two capital letters in his name for this one part.

The two guild employees both sighed. "anyways," WIllem said,..."

The two guild employees both sighed. "anyways," Willem said,..."

V15 P9

67% Wide page view

"That's not really the problem, Demiurge! I'm trying to say that if want to reward us, ..."

"That's not really the problem, Demiurge! I'm trying to say that if you want to reward us, ..."

9.11

but it aslo analyzed their levels and skills.

Typo.

It was a Magic Stone a Neko had refined akin to a monster egg that would transform

“that Neko had refined”?

Also, this would be easier to read with a comma after “refined.”

“What!” I protested.

“What!?”

Perhaps Doula’s worlds held more true than I believed, given her supposed neutrality and apparent concealment.

I don't remember why I tagged this (the forum software just now resurfaced this old in-progress post) but I assume this doesn't make sense in context.