V4 P7

~2%

“I’m pretty sure that large geyser is what we’re sensing. That means it’s no far.”

Should that be not far?

v3 p2

~60%

Lacey’s home used to be feared as a cursed property by the villagers, so other than Yorma, Reeve, their older brother Allen, and the fox-eyed merchant Lanze, who occasionally visited Plume Villages, people rarely visited the place.

=> Plume Village (singular)

v3 p4

~1%

“Family” was such a foreign word to her,something that she thought that she would never have a connection to.

=> her, something (missing space)

@Gamen

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I’m not sure if this is applicable as the issue appears to be in the original work.

The author revealed that Yahagi and Michelle were engaged in volume 3 part 1.

“… I’ll also introduce you as my fiancée.” That was right. We were finally engaged.

Later, in volume 4 part 9, Yahagi reveals that he plans on proposing that evening:

What was going to happen when I proposed to her after this?

If JNC has authorization, the plot hole could be resolved via modifying the 2nd quote to say that Yahagi is setting a wedding date.

V7P4 ~70%: "It's onlu lasts one generation."

Should probably be It only?

V6P1
~74%

as he finally yelled, still writhing over the ground

Apologies if it is okay as it is, but maybe wrong word / missing an 'on'? writhing over the ground->writhing on the ground
(or writhing over the ground->writhing over on the ground)

V1 P11 (80% - 11th line from bottom of page)

A number of candidates had forth,...

A number of candidates had come forth,...

(Better syntex for understanding)

@jjyoung Just curious where you see that it should expire on Sep 15 because when I hover over the parts it shows they expired Aug 15 which seems to fall in line with the general expiration rule of the 15th of the month following the release of the ebook.

10.9

Tahara gestured to the variable mountain of food and drinks, all part of the hoard they’d confiscated from the central nobles

“veritable”

v6p12:

1% - The first group stood on the front line with bitter expressions, fighting though they weren’t really used to it. -> Missing word(?): […] fighting as though they weren’t really […]

V3 P7 89%
"and their families who fell in the Girrad territory - let's take revenge together"
Girrad -> Girard

V3 P8, 65%
"You're too weak to beat me!" Seravimia lighty thrust me away with her hand
Lighty -> lightly

V11P9 13%:

"Lord Ashenbert," Raven had joined them, "might I ask that you unhand Mr. Nico?"

"Raven had joined them" isn't a dialog tag so it should be in a separate sentence. (Or maybe it could be rephrased to accompany a dialog tag, but I can't think of a way to do that gracefully).

V11P10 28%:
Oughted -> Oughtred

@faye-d Ah, ok. Thanks for the explanation.

V2 P10, 63%
"None of the people I curse broke for had suffered..."
Sounds odd to me as is, though might work. If not, perhaps 'I broke the curse for' or similar instead

Hi! Series editor here. Thank you both catching that missing quotation mark! I usually upvote corrections I've incorporated into the text, which I thought I did last week, but I might've forgotten to hit save or something. Anyway, it should be fixed in part 1 now.

V1P12 12%

I couldn’t afford to waste resources on broken equipment.
> Driven by that

On the site in my Chome browser on iOS, it looks like equipment.Driven but when I copy paste, there is a line break between them as shown above. Same as the previous part.

59%
“I see.”
I understood what he was getting at. But—
“I want this to be a formal request.”
I looked him in the eye …
I see”I -> I see” I
request.”I -> request.” I

“… him.
Even from afar..”
him.
Even -> him.
 Even

“… item: a jar.
More specifically, it was a Jar of Thirst…”
jar.
More -> jar.
 More

71%
“… falling steadily since early that morning,. long enough now that both…”

morning,. long -> morning, long

“… window.
Come to think of it …”
window.Come -> window. Come

There’s at least 5 more of these in the last couple pages, as well as a comma at the end of a sentence instead of a period. Not worth going through and listing them at this point.

With the Age Gap Gone
Page 4 capitalized letter in "Looked" should not be capitalized
Reads as "I Looked at Lord Helena"

V7 P3 (0% - end of last sentence on page)

Hey Lily. Why do you care so little about fashion?

Hey Sara.

Shouldn't this be 'Sara' since she's the one they are trying to get clothed. Besides, the five who went to the women's clothing store were: Stella, Sara, Ikki, Alisiun, and Shizuku. There was no Lily (unless it's a nick-name for Sara).

The following is causing some debate over on the main forum:

"Until then, if Zen and Elysia could possibly produce an heir, it'd be some peace of mind for the Leadon family," said Yohia.

Perhaps it could be reworded to make it clear whether the heir being discussed is a Leadon heir or an imperial heir.

Volume 2 Part 9
23% manaed -> managed
31% seen to familiar -> seem so familiar
47% [grammar] me and Maria -> Maria and I