V2P1

There's a couple mentions of gunpowder, but I don't recall there being guns mentioned anywhere. Changing this to black powder would be more appropriate, as calling it gunpowder implies the existence of guns.

v5p4:

99% - […] relieved that the overhead conversation hadn’t […] -> Missing letter/wrong word: that the overheard conversation

v11 p9

~20%

Of course, I hadn’t onlyspent the past four daysfighting.

=> only spent the past four days fighting (missing spaces).

~22%

I was worried, especiallybecause it was Dhoran we were talking about.

=> especially because

~90%

I finallyrealized what the weight I’d felt on my back since jumping off the ship was.

=> finally realized

19.5:

so he could use that sorcery

so he couldn't use that sorcery

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving."

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving.

Volume 1 - Part 8:

[45%] Would you like someone else >> should be something (unless the food is a someone)

V15 P12, 46%
"Could you maybe be studying her"
Her -> here

12.7

Much to my chagrin there was only one Kogure Kawanamis in the world.

“Kawanami”

V2P10 34%:
Three sentences in a row begin with "But". I'm not sure if I'm parsing the intent of that paragraph correctly, but I think at least the second "But" can be safely removed.

9.11:

Shiori and Alev even got the dragon's scale

Who's Alev?

Shiori and Alex even got the dragon's scale

@xdbx Cion's real last name is "Kreuzwell", and "Cromwell" is an alias. Thank you for checking, though!

9.7:

tyrant."I don't

tyrant. I don't

Ditch the unnecessary quotation mark.

Just read though most of V2 recently so this'll be across a couple of parts.

V2P5, ~72% in the JNC app:

Din't ever want... Didn't ever want...

V2P8, ~77% in the JNC app:

...the bark to back all that bite. ...the bite to back all that bark.

V2P10, ~6% in the JNC app:

Cabbage and canola plants... Cabbage and rapeseed plants...

For this last one, I wasn't sure what the original text said, but canola and rapeseed often get confused (since Canola was originally just a rebranding of rapeseed oil due to it's less-than-savory name though it now does refer specifically to some cultivars of rapeseed), I thought I'd just bring it up here.

@Mitalma The text has been replaced with the correct part.

Minor things I noticed in volume 9, part 8.
First bigger paragraph at 72% "It was a tingling sensation, liken there was only a [...]"
Should probably be changed to "like" or rephrased so liken works.
Second paragraph at 96% (ignoring the indicidual lines) "I think that we operate together plays a big part in it too."
Awkward phrasing, something like "how we operate together" sounds more natural to me.

Vol 10, P 11 90% : Ramses stared at her goggle-eyed, hands clasped to his next.

Should be neck.

Book XII Labyrinth, P7 (40%)

But this isn't simplya family issue anymore.
--> But this isn't simply a family issue anymore. (add a space)

V8 P9, 21%
"He roughed up his palms a little"
Palms -> palm (with him only having one arm/hand). Unless it was an habit of speech on Noor's part, not thinking of that.

V2 P8 (29%)

..., but they just gave shot back mean-natured smirks.
--> but they just shot back mean-natured smirks.

in vol 1, the king's name is Sashes (example: part 3, 29%)
vol 2, the king's name is Sachis (example: part 4, 9%)
Which is his name?