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      The 100th Time's the Charm - Corrections Topic
      100th time j-novel heart • • lovelight

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      v3p6:

      68% - Alphina grabbed the reluctant prince by his hand and dragged her to the hill behind the school. -> Seems to be the wrong gender, since she’s grabbed him: […] and dragged him to the hill […]
    • schuburner

      Reincarnator and Goblin Maiden’s Happily Ever After - Corrections Topic
      goblin maiden • • schuburner

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      Poncho9761

      V3P15 ~41%:

      "...Gino's wife. heh heh heh." -> "...Gino's wife. Heh heh heh."

    • majikayo

      A Livid Lady's Guide to Getting Even - Corrections Topic
      livid lady • • majikayo

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      V6 part 8

      57%

      But...well, she is beautiful, so I can see why you might feel jealous. Lady Sylvia.

      => the . (period) should have been a comma

      94%
      I'm not sure if this is intentional, but the paragraphs for the future excerpt doesn't seem to be formatted correctly (at least on my device). The start of each paragraph has less indentation.

    • myskaros

      The Ideal Sponger Life - Corrections Topic
      ideal sponger • • myskaros

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      Gamen

      @saffire said in The Ideal Sponger Life - Corrections Topic:

      wortju

      i mean, h and j and y and u are next to each other on keyboard, so worthy is definitely a safe vet.

    • alahue

      Heavenly Swords - Corrections Topic
      heavenly swords • • alahue

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      V6P9
      ~0%

      They’re being led by a black-haired general on a white horse and a silver-haired female general on a white horse!”

      If I remember correctly (ignore me if I don't) but Zetsuei, who Sekiei has been said to be riding, is said to be a black horse?; black-haired general on a white horse->black-haired general on a black horse
      (also the part later mentions Sekiei being on a black horse)

      ~47%

      I tensed my muscles, willing strength into my core response to their intimidation, then flashed them a casual smile.

      Missing word?; core response->core in response

      ~82%

      That’s why he underestimated Jo Hiyou and Gan Retsurai, and wrote them off as bit players in this war, instead focusing all of his energy on settling things with me.

      Maybe just me but not sure how the word would apply here so misspell?; bit->big

    • philhouse

      Fluffy-Eared Realm Restoration - Corrections
      fluffy-eared • • philhouse

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      V2P1

      There's a couple mentions of gunpowder, but I don't recall there being guns mentioned anywhere. Changing this to black powder would be more appropriate, as calling it gunpowder implies the existence of guns.

    • morgenstern

      Formerly, the Fallen Daughter of the Duke - Corrections Topic
      j-novel heart fallen daughter • • morgenstern

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      v5p4:

      99% - […] relieved that the overhead conversation hadn’t […] -> Missing letter/wrong word: that the overheard conversation
    • myskaros

      The Great Cleric - Corrections Topic
      great cleric • • myskaros

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      v11 p9

      ~20%

      Of course, I hadn’t onlyspent the past four daysfighting.

      => only spent the past four days fighting (missing spaces).

      ~22%

      I was worried, especiallybecause it was Dhoran we were talking about.

      => especially because

      ~90%

      I finallyrealized what the weight I’d felt on my back since jumping off the ship was.

      => finally realized

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      An Archdemon's Dilemma: How to Love Your Elf Bride - Corrections Topic
      elf bride • • lovelight

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      19.5:

      so he could use that sorcery

      so he couldn't use that sorcery

      for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving."

      for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving.
    • Meiru

      Abducted Princess Running Rampant - Corrections
      wild princess • • Meiru

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      pcj

      Volume 1 - Part 8:

      [45%] Would you like someone else >> should be something (unless the food is a someone)
    • myskaros

      My Stepmom's Daughter Is My Ex - Corrections Topic
      stepexes • • myskaros

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      Iseguy

      12.7

      Much to my chagrin there was only one Kogure Kawanamis in the world.

      “Kawanami”

    • myskaros

      Housekeeping Mage from Another World - Corrections Topic
      housekeeping j-novel heart • • myskaros

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      9.11:

      Shiori and Alev even got the dragon's scale

      Who's Alev?

      Shiori and Alex even got the dragon's scale
    • philhouse

      The Hero-Killing Bride - Corrections Topic
      hero-kill bride • • philhouse

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      faye.d

      @xdbx Cion's real last name is "Kreuzwell", and "Cromwell" is an alias. Thank you for checking, though!

    • morgenstern

      The Misfit of Demon King Academy - Corrections Topic
      misfit • • morgenstern

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      9.7:

      tyrant."I don't

      tyrant. I don't

      Ditch the unnecessary quotation mark.

    • alahue

      A Cozy Life in the Woods with the White Witch - Corrections Topic
      white witch • • alahue

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      Poncho9761

      Just read though most of V2 recently so this'll be across a couple of parts.

      V2P5, ~72% in the JNC app:

      Din't ever want... Didn't ever want...

      V2P8, ~77% in the JNC app:

      ...the bark to back all that bite. ...the bite to back all that bark.

      V2P10, ~6% in the JNC app:

      Cabbage and canola plants... Cabbage and rapeseed plants...

      For this last one, I wasn't sure what the original text said, but canola and rapeseed often get confused (since Canola was originally just a rebranding of rapeseed oil due to it's less-than-savory name though it now does refer specifically to some cultivars of rapeseed), I thought I'd just bring it up here.

    • yuzumori

      VTuber Legend - Corrections Topic
      vtuber legend • • yuzumori

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      saffire

      @Mitalma The text has been replaced with the correct part.

    • yuzumori

      Otherside Picnic - Corrections Topic
      othersidepicnic • • yuzumori

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      Minor things I noticed in volume 9, part 8.
      First bigger paragraph at 72% "It was a tingling sensation, liken there was only a [...]"
      Should probably be changed to "like" or rephrased so liken works.
      Second paragraph at 96% (ignoring the indicidual lines) "I think that we operate together plays a big part in it too."
      Awkward phrasing, something like "how we operate together" sounds more natural to me.

    • yuzumori

      The Mythical Hero's Otherworld Chronicles - Corrections Topic
      mythical hero • • yuzumori

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      Vol 10, P 11 90% : Ramses stared at her goggle-eyed, hands clasped to his next.

      Should be neck.

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      The Tales of Marielle Clarac - Corrections Topic
      j-novel heart marielle clarac • • lovelight

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      karasutengu

      Book XII Labyrinth, P7 (40%)

      But this isn't simplya family issue anymore.
      --> But this isn't simply a family issue anymore. (add a space)

    • yuzumori

      I Parry Everything - Corrections Topic
      parry all • • yuzumori

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      V8 P9, 21%
      "He roughed up his palms a little"
      Palms -> palm (with him only having one arm/hand). Unless it was an habit of speech on Noor's part, not thinking of that.

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