@Tango said in Seventh - Corrections Topic:

V10P10
~64%

Come up beside me, Miranda confirmed our plans going forward.

Maybe wrong word?; Come up->Coming up

I was considering: Having come up beside me, Miranda confirmed… It’s an option. :)

16:12:

The first mention of Veight Gerun Friedensrichter has Friedensrichter misspelled. There may be other such errors.

Volume 1 - Part 7:

[28%] “Heh, cut it out,” Gain said. >> So far so references to this guy until here have called him Gaine

v4 p10

~25% Once one could make a steady living by farming on other floors, picking thea wasn’t an attractive option anymore. => there?

V12P8

She found herself through into the sky, falling helplessly. Humans were not meant to fly, and she couldn’t help the wave of instinctive fear that struck her.

through -> thrown?

v12p10:

25% - […] the formerly crowded and bustline house had more or less settled down. -> Because Angeline and her harem were there? :p bustling, I presume. :) 39% - […] the farmers had to contend with less with the frost than their own sweat […] -> I think that’s an extra with, and needs to be removed.

v12p11:

96% - […] she pondered what to stock up on if did end up going to Elvgren. -> Missing word: if she did end up going

v3p6:

38% - dancefloor -> I don’t think that’s a compound noun, and it should be two words: dance floor

I forget the percentages, but I’m wondering why the circonflexe/circumflex is allowed, but the cedille is not. I’ll try to ignore the regular usage of the accent aigu as a comparison, but the circonflexe is not nearly as common. Yeah, this is all about “coup de grâce” getting its diacritic mark and fakahd façade facade not getting what it deserves, too. The cedille has been used elsewhere here with JNC. Is there just no standard governing its usage, leaving it entirely up to each editor?

Thank you once more…

v8 p2

~15% “Lord Acer, I would humbly request that you come with us to mee Zhang Shegong.” => meet?

Volume 9 - Part 2:

[88%] one last reluctant door at the backroom door >> should be look

Vol. 3, Part 3

The red slime shot fireballs at the organic mass to no effect—the slimes were inflammable thanks to their current wet and sticky coating.

Inflammable means flammable. If the intent here is to say that the slimes are currently not flammable because they're wet, a different word should be used. Nonflammble is the most common.

Vol 3 p 6:

began drilling the clams -> began grilling the clams

2.7

Tigaro was hiding
her breasts and everything below

Stray paragraph break.

vol 7 part 1
63%

"We should run into those Heims soon!" the knight shouted.

This ethnic term ought to be replaced with Heimese / Heimites.
edit:
again at 68% as well.
again at vol 7 part 2 at 45%

Just picked this up, bought the V1 ebook and found that the ToC is slightly messed up so Part 2 appears as a child of Part 1. Thank goodness for Sigil...

v9p8:

Cyclopes or cyclops? They’re both being used in this part. or is the former just the plural of the latter? Kinda seems that way. … Yeah, just should have asked Google. It’s the plural. 95% - You can’ take it back now! -> Style of speaking, or missing letter: can’t

@Geezer-Weasalopes Well, it's not just italics this time. But they do need to be checked before this gets released.

Just found a conventional typo!

V12P11 90%:
"You don't need to be so said.
sad

@Shaun-C Thanks for the confirmation. I thought my new glasses were screwing with my eyes.

Volume 3 Part 7
53% Just desserts -> just deserts

(Something I'd been getting wrong myself til just recently, thinking with its pronunciation that desserts was only fitting. Quick googling shows it might be instead tied to 'deserves')

Vol 2. Pt. 2 - 24%

"Oh, you're awake. Very good. I'm proud of you!" Crysie said upon entering the house.

Missing "s" for Cryssie