2.7

Tigaro was hiding
her breasts and everything below

Stray paragraph break.

vol 7 part 1
63%

"We should run into those Heims soon!" the knight shouted.

This ethnic term ought to be replaced with Heimese / Heimites.
edit:
again at 68% as well.
again at vol 7 part 2 at 45%

Just picked this up, bought the V1 ebook and found that the ToC is slightly messed up so Part 2 appears as a child of Part 1. Thank goodness for Sigil...

v9p8:

Cyclopes or cyclops? They’re both being used in this part. or is the former just the plural of the latter? Kinda seems that way. … Yeah, just should have asked Google. It’s the plural. 95% - You can’ take it back now! -> Style of speaking, or missing letter: can’t

@Geezer-Weasalopes Well, it's not just italics this time. But they do need to be checked before this gets released.

Just found a conventional typo!

V12P11 90%:
"You don't need to be so said.
sad

@Shaun-C Thanks for the confirmation. I thought my new glasses were screwing with my eyes.

Volume 3 Part 7
53% Just desserts -> just deserts

(Something I'd been getting wrong myself til just recently, thinking with its pronunciation that desserts was only fitting. Quick googling shows it might be instead tied to 'deserves')

Vol 2. Pt. 2 - 24%

"Oh, you're awake. Very good. I'm proud of you!" Crysie said upon entering the house.

Missing "s" for Cryssie

v2p2:

24% - Laycesquinted angrily, […] -> Missing space: Layce squinted 98% - At the palace, when you told me you loved… I was really surprised. -> Missing word, or is that why the ellipsis is there: you loved me, or maybe: you loved yourself. ;p

Volume 8, P16, 57%: When discussing colors of everyone’s armor, Aina is mentioned twice - is one supposed to be Aura?

v3p9 ~43%

That was the second name given to Magic CIty Liam.

CIty -> City

@topgnu said in Death of the Skeleton Swordsman - Corrections Topic:

V2P5 96% torturous, not tortuous
Most likely. Tortuous is not impossible but feels unlikely in the context.

Thank you for catching that and you are exactly right. Should be fixed now.

v7fp12:

66% - Xenia clenched it’s left first and the sphere gradually began to cave in -> Probably “clenched its left fist” 89% - Thank for so, so much. -> Thank you for so, so much. Or: Thanks for so, so much. 100% - […] she gently chides the children who wants to fight the imperial army […] -> Too lazy to check how many there were, but is it “the child who wants to fight” or “the children who want to fight”?

Volume 5 - Part 4

[0%] Hearing that, I realized that Runa had considered becoming a model than I'd expected. -> I think that is missing a "more", but not sure, possibly it is missing a different word to make the "than" relation make sense.

v2p10:

79% - […] would assure his assent to the throne. -> Shouldn’t that be ascent? No approval or agreement (assent) here. Or having too much fun with “ass”es (assure/assent)? :p

Volume 3 - Part 6:

[71%] “There, in the quiet gallery, under the watchful gaze of 'Eternal Vow,'... > should this be 'Sacred Vow'? Earlier in this part (49%, 51%) and later (V3P7 59%) it is written as 'Sacred Vow'.

3.11

Marx said as he crossed his arms and leaned against the wall.”

Extra endquote.

“To be more precise, I’m a double.”

This is called “a hybrid” species or “mixed” race.

“Double” has literally the opposite meaning of “hafu,” if you're translating the word I think you're translating. “A double” also has the common meaning of someone who has the same appearance as someone else, so this is extra confusing.

You do hear “I'm half [whatever]” in English, (which is almost certainly where “hafu” comes from,) so transliterating to “half” would make more sense than “double” does, but neither is good, IMHO.