Volume 2 - Part 6:

[24%] “Huh” was the answer you’d expect to receive ► Missing question mark?

@Shiroi-Hane said in Otherside Picnic - Corrections Topic:

@Ingraman the first two are the same in the epub so you would need to email them in. For the last one it does say “it meant something different” in the epub so that is already corrected.

I just finished sending a second email with the complete post. :)

Thank you for the update on the epub, though. ^_^

2.10

Not only Seravimia and Baron Dulac, even Count Belmond—the liege-lord I should be counting on—was aiming for my territory.

“but even”

Volume 24 - Part 11:

[6%] remained in one piece Put simply, he had ► Missing period. [34%] Relying on him wou never allow Nozomu ► It should be would.

V1P8 19% - mustered by the struggling demons drew within reach of Heavy Rain - demons and drew within

@pcj Great catches, thank you! I've updated all of these.

Vol. 4 Part 10
7%
make this concert the epicest concert ever!"
make this concert the most epic concert ever!"

@nappingcub

Hello,

The bonus story will be added at a later date.

There will be a post about it in the V3 discussion topic when an update is out.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

Volume 6 - Part 7:

[Generic] The Queen is addressed, again, as Her/Your Highness, but it should be Her/Your Majesty. Usually Her/Your Highness is used for princesses. Previous volumes have the same issue, too. [10%] “She goes wherever my fiancée goes. Now...what ► This paragraph isn't indented like the others. [20%] «‘He’s right!’» Lord Percy thought, swallowing hard. ► It should be Viscount Percy for consistency.

Vol. 10 Part 10

20%
"I got a lot of maturing to do
"I've got a lot of maturing to do

60%
My Friend's Little Sister Is an Autogyro Beauty.
(She's a propeller airplane?)

67%
lose my connection to her all together.
lose my connection to her altogether.

me and my classmate companions were looking
my classmate companions and me were looking

Volume 20, part 4, 47%
And neither Moneygold and Teach were exceptions.
-> neither Moneygold nor Teach

74%
...two particular people becoming a coupole... -> a couple

Volume 2 - Part 8:

[69%] forced to curry flavor with the young man ► It should be favor.

Vol. 3 Part 10

60%
at the sight of her--me, Yuna, and Rinka included.
at the sight of her--Yuna, Rinka, and me included.

2.8

That would mean arcanestone could be dedicated to the light beam spell,

“mean one arcanestone”

Our nations and cities made them not just as decorative symbols, but also as a way to display how prosperous, to outdo their competitors.

“to display prosperity,” or “how prosperous they were,”

The golems I made this time had a different design from the ones I’dad made for Camus,

“I’d”

Volume 2 - Part 8:

[41%] 8 At the Theater ► It should be 8. (missing period) for consistency.

@Rinvelt Really weird, indeed. 🙄

Volume 16 - Part 11:

[44%] “Uhm, so Al. I have a request to make... said Tesfia. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

Volume 2 - Part 4:

[13%] I’m not yours, and I’m not cute, Alphina suppressed ► It should be adorable to match Lionett's thought. [41%] with your glossy leaves.You’ll be able to grow even ► Missing space. [52%] then fell quiet. “Status and heritage don’t matter ► Change of speaker. Add a line break before Alphina's dialogue.

Volume 3 EX - Part 5:

[69%] Semester 2, October: She Wasn’t a Tsundere When She Was Five ► The usual title format is missing. [73%] Your smile today is far too dazzling today, Your Highness. ► Duplicate today.