@Shaun-C Thanks for the confirmation. I thought my new glasses were screwing with my eyes.

Volume 3 Part 7
53% Just desserts -> just deserts

(Something I'd been getting wrong myself til just recently, thinking with its pronunciation that desserts was only fitting. Quick googling shows it might be instead tied to 'deserves')

Vol 2. Pt. 2 - 24%

"Oh, you're awake. Very good. I'm proud of you!" Crysie said upon entering the house.

Missing "s" for Cryssie

v2p2:

24% - Laycesquinted angrily, […] -> Missing space: Layce squinted 98% - At the palace, when you told me you loved… I was really surprised. -> Missing word, or is that why the ellipsis is there: you loved me, or maybe: you loved yourself. ;p

@topgnu said in Death of the Skeleton Swordsman - Corrections Topic:

V2P5 96% torturous, not tortuous
Most likely. Tortuous is not impossible but feels unlikely in the context.

Thank you for catching that and you are exactly right. Should be fixed now.

v7fp12:

66% - Xenia clenched it’s left first and the sphere gradually began to cave in -> Probably “clenched its left fist” 89% - Thank for so, so much. -> Thank you for so, so much. Or: Thanks for so, so much. 100% - […] she gently chides the children who wants to fight the imperial army […] -> Too lazy to check how many there were, but is it “the child who wants to fight” or “the children who want to fight”?

Volume 5 - Part 4

[0%] Hearing that, I realized that Runa had considered becoming a model than I'd expected. -> I think that is missing a "more", but not sure, possibly it is missing a different word to make the "than" relation make sense.

v2p10:

79% - […] would assure his assent to the throne. -> Shouldn’t that be ascent? No approval or agreement (assent) here. Or having too much fun with “ass”es (assure/assent)? :p

Volume 3 - Part 6:

[71%] “There, in the quiet gallery, under the watchful gaze of 'Eternal Vow,'... > should this be 'Sacred Vow'? Earlier in this part (49%, 51%) and later (V3P7 59%) it is written as 'Sacred Vow'.

3.11

Marx said as he crossed his arms and leaned against the wall.”

Extra endquote.

“To be more precise, I’m a double.”

This is called “a hybrid” species or “mixed” race.

“Double” has literally the opposite meaning of “hafu,” if you're translating the word I think you're translating. “A double” also has the common meaning of someone who has the same appearance as someone else, so this is extra confusing.

You do hear “I'm half [whatever]” in English, (which is almost certainly where “hafu” comes from,) so transliterating to “half” would make more sense than “double” does, but neither is good, IMHO.

@toasterovenly

Hi,

Yes that is what I was saying. Not all changes can be cross made back into the pre-pub parts. It is a time consuming process that we are hoping to make simpler in the future. For now once an ebook is published it remains the most up-to-date version of that story. Correction wise.

We will take your suggestion into consideration.

Thank you

Act 6 - Part 8:

[26%] fine if I left now.” >> errant closing quote [89%] sAlicia had an orthodox cuteness >> should be Alicia [89%] the love interest all made me laugh >> should be interests

@Shaun-C

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your help on clarifying this for me and look forward to reading many more JNC series.

Vol 3 P8 (33%) - (Archbishop Mills)

"In any case, I can longer stay with the Arendts,"
--> "In any case, I can no longer stay with the Arendts",

v3p10:

18% - You overthing about all sorts of things. -> overthink, presumably 70% - Anunnatural noise came from the spot […] -> Missing space: An unnatural 72% - […] the same thing whenever dadbrings back something […] -> Missing space: dad brings

@Gamen

Hello,

Should be fixed now after a refresh. Thanks for reporting and sorry for the inconvenience.

Volume 7 part 2, 90%:
"Naturally, that was because she blamed him for his earlier guffaw."
Should this be gaffe? I don't see any preceding description of Adi laughing, but there was a verbal slipup.