Volume 4 - Part 2: [9%] “I see now. I suppose that makes sense” ► Missing period. [34%] Is this an active place for worshipping someone ► It should be worshiping (US spelling). [40%] ::Uh-oh, my Danger Detection is off the charts!: ► Telepathic dialogue. It should end with a double colon (::). [49%] the power to absorb magic like Clotho does?” ► Telepathic dialogue. It should end with a double colon (::). [68%] ”I’ll stop it!” Gerard shouted. ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly a closing one.