2.9:

Why had she been unable to she become the sort of person someone would love?

Why had she been unable to become the sort of person someone would love?

There's a multiple line section that makes no sense, and I'm damned if I'm transcribing all of it.
So here's the specific line that stands out as "Huh?" to me.

In the end, the maid simply gave her a bright smile. "You'd like to do so even if saying so is impertinent?"

It's like there should be something else right before that line, something missing, because as it is there's no proper lead in to this.
Or it could be that the line is wonky in itself.

10.12

Wridra dragged me forward with her vice grip and freakish strength.

The metaphorical tool is the “vise”. Vice is sin.

V2 P9, 11%

Daniel walked over to Elizabeth and Remilena --> Daniel walked over to Westalia and Remilena

Volume 4 - Part 10:

[70%] other girl’sactions >> needs a space

V5P7 75%:

Yet after this, it is not for myself that I must worry about.

Either "for" or "about" can stay, but they shouldn't both be there.

Volume 8, part 4

Ruri accepted that Chi saying it wasn't his forte meant that he **couldn't ** do it, but she assumed that he had no interest in making the effort.

Was this supposed to imply that Chi could do it if he made the effort?

v7p8:

1% - The two of us were smacked across the bottoms with paper pans. -> What is a paper pan? Should that be “paper fans”? 24% - Lilit wore an angelic dress -> Lilith

V4P6 ~91%:

"...and began quietly speaking the same time." -> "...and began quietly speaking at the same time."
(On re-read, I can see this being less an error and more just a style thing so ignore if you think it's an unnecessary change)

V4P7 ~82%:

"...she wasn't going save them." -> "...she wasn't going to save them."

V4P9 ~75%:

"...still hadn't been to locate Rebirth's..." -> "...still hadn't been able to locate Rebirth's..."

~85%:

"Having found a clear goal and trained diligently using his newfound sense..." -> "Having found a clear goal and trained training diligently using his newfound sense..."
(Suggestion here but "trained" doesn't sound right, I assume this isn't just me though...)

V1P1 70%:

"I'll rip them all the pieces."

the -> to

v3p6:

68% - Alphina grabbed the reluctant prince by his hand and dragged her to the hill behind the school. -> Seems to be the wrong gender, since she’s grabbed him: […] and dragged him to the hill […]

V3P15 ~41%:

"...Gino's wife. heh heh heh." -> "...Gino's wife. Heh heh heh."

@saffire said in The Ideal Sponger Life - Corrections Topic:

wortju

i mean, h and j and y and u are next to each other on keyboard, so worthy is definitely a safe vet.

V6P9
~0%

They’re being led by a black-haired general on a white horse and a silver-haired female general on a white horse!”

If I remember correctly (ignore me if I don't) but Zetsuei, who Sekiei has been said to be riding, is said to be a black horse?; black-haired general on a white horse->black-haired general on a black horse
(also the part later mentions Sekiei being on a black horse)

~47%

I tensed my muscles, willing strength into my core response to their intimidation, then flashed them a casual smile.

Missing word?; core response->core in response

~82%

That’s why he underestimated Jo Hiyou and Gan Retsurai, and wrote them off as bit players in this war, instead focusing all of his energy on settling things with me.

Maybe just me but not sure how the word would apply here so misspell?; bit->big

V2P1

There's a couple mentions of gunpowder, but I don't recall there being guns mentioned anywhere. Changing this to black powder would be more appropriate, as calling it gunpowder implies the existence of guns.

v5p4:

99% - […] relieved that the overhead conversation hadn’t […] -> Missing letter/wrong word: that the overheard conversation

v11 p9

~20%

Of course, I hadn’t onlyspent the past four daysfighting.

=> only spent the past four days fighting (missing spaces).

~22%

I was worried, especiallybecause it was Dhoran we were talking about.

=> especially because

~90%

I finallyrealized what the weight I’d felt on my back since jumping off the ship was.

=> finally realized

Volume 1 - Part 8:

[45%] Would you like someone else >> should be something (unless the food is a someone)

12.7

Much to my chagrin there was only one Kogure Kawanamis in the world.

“Kawanami”

9.11:

Shiori and Alev even got the dragon's scale

Who's Alev?

Shiori and Alex even got the dragon's scale

@xdbx Cion's real last name is "Kreuzwell", and "Cromwell" is an alias. Thank you for checking, though!