v3p13:

2% - … that the Tailors’ guildmaster, Forto’s, had a fondness for her … -> Extra possessive? I don’t think that the apostrophe and the s need to be there.

A few missing spaces here and there…

v2p8:

~12% - It had also been explained to them that the duchess was Princess Sonia's best friend... -> Should be viscountess if I am understanding the context correctly?

@Gamen said in My Instant Death Ability - Corrections Topic:

After p2
[50%] They had all assumed that meant she had been killed by Yogiri and therefore could have made it back to their world -> I assume this should be hadn't been killed by him

They all thought she was killed.
So, I think the correction should be:
"They had all assumed that meant she had been killed by Yogiri and therefore couldn't have made it back to their world, and yet here she was"

Edit: oh wait, I just realized the After Story is already published. I found some other typos. Do I just send it in email?

V5 P10, 0%
"What did this creature think, and what did it now?"
Now -> know
59%
"was a magic item that temporarily transformed its user into [a] fire elemental"
88%
"Although we would have to lift the fiend's curse that afflicted Arthur, but the breakdown of the game's story also made several individual events urgent"
I'm not sure that this sentence quite works as is - either the 'although' or the 'but' might need to be tweaked/dropped.

V4 P12
(25%)
But he had to admit it didn't quite as much as it once had.
--> But he had to admit it didn't hurt (or matter) as much as it once had.

(50% - below A Fool's Finality):
Yet nor was he granted the dignity...
--> Yet Nor was he granted the dignity...

@Tango said in Seventh - Corrections Topic:

V10P10
~64%

Come up beside me, Miranda confirmed our plans going forward.

Maybe wrong word?; Come up->Coming up

I was considering: Having come up beside me, Miranda confirmed… It’s an option. :)

16:12:

The first mention of Veight Gerun Friedensrichter has Friedensrichter misspelled. There may be other such errors.

Volume 1 - Part 7:

[28%] “Heh, cut it out,” Gain said. >> So far so references to this guy until here have called him Gaine

v4 p10

~25% Once one could make a steady living by farming on other floors, picking thea wasn’t an attractive option anymore. => there?

V12P8

She found herself through into the sky, falling helplessly. Humans were not meant to fly, and she couldn’t help the wave of instinctive fear that struck her.

through -> thrown?

v12p10:

25% - […] the formerly crowded and bustline house had more or less settled down. -> Because Angeline and her harem were there? :p bustling, I presume. :) 39% - […] the farmers had to contend with less with the frost than their own sweat […] -> I think that’s an extra with, and needs to be removed.

v12p11:

96% - […] she pondered what to stock up on if did end up going to Elvgren. -> Missing word: if she did end up going

v3p6:

38% - dancefloor -> I don’t think that’s a compound noun, and it should be two words: dance floor

I forget the percentages, but I’m wondering why the circonflexe/circumflex is allowed, but the cedille is not. I’ll try to ignore the regular usage of the accent aigu as a comparison, but the circonflexe is not nearly as common. Yeah, this is all about “coup de grâce” getting its diacritic mark and fakahd façade facade not getting what it deserves, too. The cedille has been used elsewhere here with JNC. Is there just no standard governing its usage, leaving it entirely up to each editor?

Thank you once more…

v8 p2

~15% “Lord Acer, I would humbly request that you come with us to mee Zhang Shegong.” => meet?

Volume 9 - Part 2:

[88%] one last reluctant door at the backroom door >> should be look

Vol. 3, Part 3

The red slime shot fireballs at the organic mass to no effect—the slimes were inflammable thanks to their current wet and sticky coating.

Inflammable means flammable. If the intent here is to say that the slimes are currently not flammable because they're wet, a different word should be used. Nonflammble is the most common.

Vol 3 p 6:

began drilling the clams -> began grilling the clams

2.7

Tigaro was hiding
her breasts and everything below

Stray paragraph break.

vol 7 part 1
63%

"We should run into those Heims soon!" the knight shouted.

This ethnic term ought to be replaced with Heimese / Heimites.
edit:
again at 68% as well.
again at vol 7 part 2 at 45%

Just picked this up, bought the V1 ebook and found that the ToC is slightly messed up so Part 2 appears as a child of Part 1. Thank goodness for Sigil...