Vol 2. Pt. 2 - 24%

"Oh, you're awake. Very good. I'm proud of you!" Crysie said upon entering the house.

Missing "s" for Cryssie

v2p2:

24% - Laycesquinted angrily, […] -> Missing space: Layce squinted 98% - At the palace, when you told me you loved… I was really surprised. -> Missing word, or is that why the ellipsis is there: you loved me, or maybe: you loved yourself. ;p

Volume 8, P16, 57%: When discussing colors of everyone’s armor, Aina is mentioned twice - is one supposed to be Aura?

v3p9 ~43%

That was the second name given to Magic CIty Liam.

CIty -> City

@topgnu said in Death of the Skeleton Swordsman - Corrections Topic:

V2P5 96% torturous, not tortuous
Most likely. Tortuous is not impossible but feels unlikely in the context.

Thank you for catching that and you are exactly right. Should be fixed now.

v7fp12:

66% - Xenia clenched it’s left first and the sphere gradually began to cave in -> Probably “clenched its left fist” 89% - Thank for so, so much. -> Thank you for so, so much. Or: Thanks for so, so much. 100% - […] she gently chides the children who wants to fight the imperial army […] -> Too lazy to check how many there were, but is it “the child who wants to fight” or “the children who want to fight”?

Volume 5 - Part 4

[0%] Hearing that, I realized that Runa had considered becoming a model than I'd expected. -> I think that is missing a "more", but not sure, possibly it is missing a different word to make the "than" relation make sense.

v3p4!

51% - “[…],” said Melulu kneeling courteously. […] Next paragraph: Adel and Melulu quickly followed her lead. -> Has Melulu multiplied, or was the second one Mash? He is right there…

v2p10:

79% - […] would assure his assent to the throne. -> Shouldn’t that be ascent? No approval or agreement (assent) here. Or having too much fun with “ass”es (assure/assent)? :p

Volume 3 - Part 6:

[71%] “There, in the quiet gallery, under the watchful gaze of 'Eternal Vow,'... > should this be 'Sacred Vow'? Earlier in this part (49%, 51%) and later (V3P7 59%) it is written as 'Sacred Vow'.

13.9

Are you here to post a commision?

Typo.

this was a pretty dog eat dog world.

“dog-eat-dog world.”

“I saw a real strange-looking guy earlier, Niedz”

Period.

3.11

Marx said as he crossed his arms and leaned against the wall.”

Extra endquote.

“To be more precise, I’m a double.”

This is called “a hybrid” species or “mixed” race.

“Double” has literally the opposite meaning of “hafu,” if you're translating the word I think you're translating. “A double” also has the common meaning of someone who has the same appearance as someone else, so this is extra confusing.

You do hear “I'm half [whatever]” in English, (which is almost certainly where “hafu” comes from,) so transliterating to “half” would make more sense than “double” does, but neither is good, IMHO.

@toasterovenly

Hi,

Yes that is what I was saying. Not all changes can be cross made back into the pre-pub parts. It is a time consuming process that we are hoping to make simpler in the future. For now once an ebook is published it remains the most up-to-date version of that story. Correction wise.

We will take your suggestion into consideration.

Thank you

Act 6 - Part 8:

[26%] fine if I left now.” >> errant closing quote [89%] sAlicia had an orthodox cuteness >> should be Alicia [89%] the love interest all made me laugh >> should be interests

@Shaun-C

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your help on clarifying this for me and look forward to reading many more JNC series.

Vol 3 P8 (33%) - (Archbishop Mills)

"In any case, I can longer stay with the Arendts,"
--> "In any case, I can no longer stay with the Arendts",

v3p10:

18% - You overthing about all sorts of things. -> overthink, presumably 70% - Anunnatural noise came from the spot […] -> Missing space: An unnatural 72% - […] the same thing whenever dadbrings back something […] -> Missing space: dad brings