Volume 2 - Part 8:

[44%] didn’t do anything. In fact, I’d said that I did...” ► It should be say.

@Terabyte said in Private Tutor - Corrections Topic:

Volume 11 - Part 6:

[16%] We still can’t raise the southern capital, ► It should be reach?

Raise, as in "Open hailing frequencies."
Long distance communication magics are being blocked.
"I'm attempting to raise them on the radio but we're not getting through."

I'm pretty sure this use shows up in the original Star Trek series, as well as military-related films from the forties through sixties.

Found one.

5.6

This was one of the few areas was still ruled by demons.

“areas still ruled by demons”

Reincarnated Mage with Inferior Eyes: The Oppressed, Strongest Orphan Iis Invincible in a Different World.”

“Is”
And yes, it is capitalized. “Is” feels like a preposition, but it's a verb. A tense of the irregular verb “be.”

Volume 2 - Part 10:

[65%] Crow cut Rui off. “ Ahem. Thank you for the warning.” ► Remove extra space. [100%] SkyFish, Oct 2021 ► It should be SkyFarm. (Unless the author did it on purpose for...reasons? 🤨)

Just reading V9P1 and I have a very hard time locating people and following the story. One small example:

57% "... and chase the second son and his men out of the royal capital ..."

It might be necessary to read the complete chapter and make a difference between the royal capital and the regional capital of the local lord.

So the above example should be either "out of the regional capital" or "to the royal capital".

The same applies at the start of the chapter where Muno visits the main store in the capital. Afterwards he opens a branch in the capital and than leaves for the capital.

Where is he and where is he going?

Volume 15 - Part 10:

[0%] Afterword: ► There is no colon usually. [1%] Volume 15: Rising of the Battle Junkie. ► It should be The Rising like on the cover. [40%] There won’t be any movement yet” ► Missing question mark. [99%] and now that Grelbarelka is stable, ► It should be Grebarelka (extra L).

Volume 9 - Part 8:

[19%] 《I don’t understand,》said Al. ► Mising space.

v4p5:

15% - To start with, the Lupty hunting tournament was of old a means by which to choose a princess consort. -> Maybe it’s okay, but it doesn’t look right to me…: […] the Lupty hunting tournament of old was a means by which to choose […].

v4p9:

32% - […] that Claire had clutched in her first. -> fist

The above also sent to contact@j-novel.club, just in case… :)

Volume 6, Part 12:

[~36%] -- "he found that the lectures could nevertheless still had much to offer him" --> "could [...] had" is not grammatically correct; it should either be "could nevertheless still have" or just "nevertheless still had" (i.e. excise "could")

Volume 9, part 3, 7%:
..., and as a result anyone who wasn't past of their gang dared to approach the store.
-> Should be "noone"

Volume 14 - Part 12:

[11%] easygoing about everything.She was ► Missing space. [62%] a woman who failed the rights would ► It should be rites. [62%] as not knowing when ot give up if she ► It should be to. Already reported. [74%] about average for an Uppaslan woman, ► It should be Uppasalan.

Volume 2 - Part 7:

[53%] who had him granted the ability to sheathe ► It should be granted him (switch around).

Volume 2 - Part 7:

[76%] but the skirt gave it away:she was, in fact, a girl. ► Missing space.

Volume 16, part 3, 42%
They used the two combination spotlights to knock out the aliens...

-> This is a remnant of google translate...
Yes, "Strahler" can also mean "spotlight", but "Kombistrahler" is a beam weapon...

Same mistake a few lines further down.

58%
... which is bviously never.
-> missing "o"

61%
...fate can be read n the lines...
-> missing "i"

Volume 2 - Part 10:

[21%] a vague hunch about Ntalia’s case, and his theory ► It should be Natalia’s. [51%] my sister?! Isn’t this justProfessor Allen’s illusion?” ► Missing space.

2.9

Both were masterpieces I forced for him three hundred years prior.

“forged”

I’d had quite a touch time fending him off,

“tough”

Sat atop the golem and, looking the very image of the king of all that was unholy, I spoke

“Sitting atop the golem and looking”
“Sat” and “looking” aren't compatible tenses. Also, bad comma.

The holy blade neutralized any magic defenses with which God of Warfare.

Incomplete sentence.

That same sense of guilt prevented Rosa from drinking anyone else’s blood but own.

“my own,” I think.

Volume 3 - Part 7:

[74%] The circles must be sending that accumulated ► It should be were. The circles are destroyed now.

Unfortunately, my subscription has just expired, so I don't have access to the story anymore and can't say exactly which episode it was. But it was in the Tale of a self-centered girl chapter from Treyse's perspective.

"Bill Arnold, the eldest of the Rockmann sons, came from his own domain to visit together with his wife. A few hours later, the parents of Sir Alois’s stepsister, Melly Arnold, came for a visit, bringing flowers."

Original text: 容態が安定したアルウェスを公爵邸で引き受けてから、それはもう目まぐるしく、現在は自分の領地で生活を送っている長男のビル・アーノルドが妻を連れて見舞いに訪れたり、その妻でアルウェスの義理姉となるメリー・アーノルドの両親が数時間後には花を持って顔を見に来たり、 [...]

Alois doesn't have any stepsister, so 義理姉 should likely be translated here as "sister-in-law" instead of "stepsister". It has been previously mentioned in the story that Alois' older brother Bill is married. In the above passage, it sounds like Bill & his wife Melly first visited, then Melly's parents showed up later on.

Sorry if this comment is late. Thank you so much to the JNC team for all your hard work on this volume. I'm very happy that volume 4 was translated and thought the translation was truly excellent.

I checked and it didn't seem as if anyone reported on this. I'm reading the catch-up versions though so maybe it was corrected in the published version. However, I'll post it here just in case:

After Story:
part 9 30% This is after the group met up and are visiting the Kannen statue museum.

"I bet Iikanji would be able to explain all this stuff."
"You're right. It's a shame he's not here."
"Huh, Who's that?" Hadori-kun and Sato-san asked.

So, here's what I'm wondering. Is it that Hadori and Sato are asking who Iikanji is? Weren't they the ones that had him in their group earlier in the day?

part 10 77%
It had been on my mind about it ever since Hachijo-kun had mentioned it in Enoshima, and I told him I'd wanted to see it.

The bolded words seems superfluous in the sentence.