v11 p9

~20%

Of course, I hadn’t onlyspent the past four daysfighting.

=> only spent the past four days fighting (missing spaces).

~22%

I was worried, especiallybecause it was Dhoran we were talking about.

=> especially because

~90%

I finallyrealized what the weight I’d felt on my back since jumping off the ship was.

=> finally realized

19.5:

so he could use that sorcery

so he couldn't use that sorcery

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving."

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving.

Volume 1 - Part 8:

[45%] Would you like someone else >> should be something (unless the food is a someone)

12.7

Much to my chagrin there was only one Kogure Kawanamis in the world.

“Kawanami”

9.11:

Shiori and Alev even got the dragon's scale

Who's Alev?

Shiori and Alex even got the dragon's scale

@xdbx Cion's real last name is "Kreuzwell", and "Cromwell" is an alias. Thank you for checking, though!

Just read though most of V2 recently so this'll be across a couple of parts.

V2P5, ~72% in the JNC app:

Din't ever want... Didn't ever want...

V2P8, ~77% in the JNC app:

...the bark to back all that bite. ...the bite to back all that bark.

V2P10, ~6% in the JNC app:

Cabbage and canola plants... Cabbage and rapeseed plants...

For this last one, I wasn't sure what the original text said, but canola and rapeseed often get confused (since Canola was originally just a rebranding of rapeseed oil due to it's less-than-savory name though it now does refer specifically to some cultivars of rapeseed), I thought I'd just bring it up here.

@Mitalma The text has been replaced with the correct part.

Minor things I noticed in volume 9, part 8.
First bigger paragraph at 72% "It was a tingling sensation, liken there was only a [...]"
Should probably be changed to "like" or rephrased so liken works.
Second paragraph at 96% (ignoring the indicidual lines) "I think that we operate together plays a big part in it too."
Awkward phrasing, something like "how we operate together" sounds more natural to me.

Vol 10, P 11 90% : Ramses stared at her goggle-eyed, hands clasped to his next.

Should be neck.

Book XII Labyrinth, P7 (40%)

But this isn't simplya family issue anymore.
--> But this isn't simply a family issue anymore. (add a space)

V8 P9, 21%
"He roughed up his palms a little"
Palms -> palm (with him only having one arm/hand). Unless it was an habit of speech on Noor's part, not thinking of that.

V2 P8 (29%)

..., but they just gave shot back mean-natured smirks.
--> but they just shot back mean-natured smirks.

in vol 1, the king's name is Sashes (example: part 3, 29%)
vol 2, the king's name is Sachis (example: part 4, 9%)
Which is his name?

v3p13:

2% - … that the Tailors’ guildmaster, Forto’s, had a fondness for her … -> Extra possessive? I don’t think that the apostrophe and the s need to be there.

A few missing spaces here and there…

v2p8:

~12% - It had also been explained to them that the duchess was Princess Sonia's best friend... -> Should be viscountess if I am understanding the context correctly?

@Gamen said in My Instant Death Ability - Corrections Topic:

After p2
[50%] They had all assumed that meant she had been killed by Yogiri and therefore could have made it back to their world -> I assume this should be hadn't been killed by him

They all thought she was killed.
So, I think the correction should be:
"They had all assumed that meant she had been killed by Yogiri and therefore couldn't have made it back to their world, and yet here she was"

Edit: oh wait, I just realized the After Story is already published. I found some other typos. Do I just send it in email?

V5 P10, 0%
"What did this creature think, and what did it now?"
Now -> know
59%
"was a magic item that temporarily transformed its user into [a] fire elemental"
88%
"Although we would have to lift the fiend's curse that afflicted Arthur, but the breakdown of the game's story also made several individual events urgent"
I'm not sure that this sentence quite works as is - either the 'although' or the 'but' might need to be tweaked/dropped.

V4 P12
(25%)
But he had to admit it didn't quite as much as it once had.
--> But he had to admit it didn't hurt (or matter) as much as it once had.

(50% - below A Fool's Finality):
Yet nor was he granted the dignity...
--> Yet Nor was he granted the dignity...