V1P1 70%:

"I'll rip them all the pieces."

the -> to

v3p6:

68% - Alphina grabbed the reluctant prince by his hand and dragged her to the hill behind the school. -> Seems to be the wrong gender, since she’s grabbed him: […] and dragged him to the hill […]

V3P15 ~41%:

"...Gino's wife. heh heh heh." -> "...Gino's wife. Heh heh heh."

V6 part 8

57%

But...well, she is beautiful, so I can see why you might feel jealous. Lady Sylvia.

=> the . (period) should have been a comma

94%
I'm not sure if this is intentional, but the paragraphs for the future excerpt doesn't seem to be formatted correctly (at least on my device). The start of each paragraph has less indentation.

@saffire said in The Ideal Sponger Life - Corrections Topic:

wortju

i mean, h and j and y and u are next to each other on keyboard, so worthy is definitely a safe vet.

V6P9
~0%

They’re being led by a black-haired general on a white horse and a silver-haired female general on a white horse!”

If I remember correctly (ignore me if I don't) but Zetsuei, who Sekiei has been said to be riding, is said to be a black horse?; black-haired general on a white horse->black-haired general on a black horse
(also the part later mentions Sekiei being on a black horse)

~47%

I tensed my muscles, willing strength into my core response to their intimidation, then flashed them a casual smile.

Missing word?; core response->core in response

~82%

That’s why he underestimated Jo Hiyou and Gan Retsurai, and wrote them off as bit players in this war, instead focusing all of his energy on settling things with me.

Maybe just me but not sure how the word would apply here so misspell?; bit->big

V2P1

There's a couple mentions of gunpowder, but I don't recall there being guns mentioned anywhere. Changing this to black powder would be more appropriate, as calling it gunpowder implies the existence of guns.

v5p4:

99% - […] relieved that the overhead conversation hadn’t […] -> Missing letter/wrong word: that the overheard conversation

v11 p9

~20%

Of course, I hadn’t onlyspent the past four daysfighting.

=> only spent the past four days fighting (missing spaces).

~22%

I was worried, especiallybecause it was Dhoran we were talking about.

=> especially because

~90%

I finallyrealized what the weight I’d felt on my back since jumping off the ship was.

=> finally realized

19.5:

so he could use that sorcery

so he couldn't use that sorcery

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving."

for some reason, Selphy wasn't moving.

Volume 1 - Part 8:

[45%] Would you like someone else >> should be something (unless the food is a someone)

V15 P12, 46%
"Could you maybe be studying her"
Her -> here

12.7

Much to my chagrin there was only one Kogure Kawanamis in the world.

“Kawanami”

V2P10 34%:
Three sentences in a row begin with "But". I'm not sure if I'm parsing the intent of that paragraph correctly, but I think at least the second "But" can be safely removed.

9.11:

Shiori and Alev even got the dragon's scale

Who's Alev?

Shiori and Alex even got the dragon's scale

12.10

Tropical trees scattered on the pristine, white breach spread out around the mountain added a nice touch. Wow, this island is pretty nice!

“beach”

“Aye, aye, Cap-tain! Your wish our command!”

“Your wish is”, unless the mistake was intentional.

@xdbx Cion's real last name is "Kreuzwell", and "Cromwell" is an alias. Thank you for checking, though!

9.7:

tyrant."I don't

tyrant. I don't

Ditch the unnecessary quotation mark.

Just read though most of V2 recently so this'll be across a couple of parts.

V2P5, ~72% in the JNC app:

Din't ever want... Didn't ever want...

V2P8, ~77% in the JNC app:

...the bark to back all that bite. ...the bite to back all that bark.

V2P10, ~6% in the JNC app:

Cabbage and canola plants... Cabbage and rapeseed plants...

For this last one, I wasn't sure what the original text said, but canola and rapeseed often get confused (since Canola was originally just a rebranding of rapeseed oil due to it's less-than-savory name though it now does refer specifically to some cultivars of rapeseed), I thought I'd just bring it up here.

@Mitalma The text has been replaced with the correct part.