J-Novel Club
    • Login
    • Search
    • Categories
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Users
    1. Home
    2. Streaming Discussion
    3. Prepub Corrections
    Log in to post
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Most Posts
    • Most Votes
    • Most Views
    • schuburner

      Banished Former Hero - Corrections Topic
      banished hero • • schuburner

      36
      0
      Votes
      36
      Posts
      1159
      Views

      karasutengu

      V4 P12
      (25%)
      But he had to admit it didn't quite as much as it once had.
      --> But he had to admit it didn't hurt (or matter) as much as it once had.

      (50% - below A Fool's Finality):
      Yet nor was he granted the dignity...
      --> Yet Nor was he granted the dignity...

    • morgenstern

      Seventh - Corrections Topic
      seventh • • morgenstern

      179
      0
      Votes
      179
      Posts
      13531
      Views

      I

      @Tango said in Seventh - Corrections Topic:

      V10P10
      ~64%

      Come up beside me, Miranda confirmed our plans going forward.

      Maybe wrong word?; Come up->Coming up

      I was considering: Having come up beside me, Miranda confirmed… It’s an option. :)

    • schuburner

      Dagashi-ya Yahagi - Corrections Topic
      dagashi-ya yahagi • • schuburner

      25
      0
      Votes
      25
      Posts
      779
      Views

      hornet65

      @YowamushiInuhan said in Dagashi-ya Yahagi - Corrections Topic:

      In Japanese, Zetter Gungalf is spelled as ゼッター not ゼ―タ! So I guess that means keeping it as Zetter should be fine?

      If that's how it's spelled, then it definitely seems like the author was going for a Zeta Gundam and a Getter Robo reference. It's got Zeta for Zeta Gundam, with the Getter spelling for Getter Robo. So, Zetter Gungalf makes the most sense, and you get references to two mecha anime at the same time!

      @YowamushiInuhan said in Dagashi-ya Yahagi - Corrections Topic:

      If that's how the Gundam series have been handling their names, I'll discuss this with the others to see if it'd be best to do that as well!

      As far as I know, that's the way they've always done it, and I think they do name their mobile suits with the English names already chosen. Most mobile suit names are written in Katakana, and the ones that aren't, such as the Hyaku Shiki (百式) are usually Romanized, rather than translated. The model kits also have the English names printed right on them, and have since the 80's when they first started making them. Which leaves very little room for misinterpretation. The only exception to this that I can think of, is the RGM-79 GM from the original Mobile Suit Gundam. You'd think each letter in GM would be pronounced, like jee-em. However, it's spelled ジム(Jimu) in Japanese, and pronounced "jim" in dubs of the series.

      As an aside, it's never been officially stated why it's pronounced this way, but people believe that, just as the Zaku's name is possibly derived from Zako (meaing small fry), the GM could possibly be derived from Jimi (meaning plain).

    • L

      Der Werwolf: The Annals of Veight - Corrections Topic
      der werwolf • • lovelight

      72
      0
      Votes
      72
      Posts
      5491
      Views

      Geezer Weasalopes

      16:12:

      The first mention of Veight Gerun Friedensrichter has Friedensrichter misspelled. There may be other such errors.

    • majikayo

      Shannon Wants to Die! - Corrections Topic
      shannon • • majikayo

      5
      0
      Votes
      5
      Posts
      130
      Views

      pcj

      Volume 1 - Part 7:

      [28%] “Heh, cut it out,” Gain said. >> So far so references to this guy until here have called him Gaine
    • L

      Demon Lord, Retry! - Corrections Topic
      retry • • lovelight

      87
      0
      Votes
      87
      Posts
      4928
      Views

      S

      Volume 9 part 9 - 14%

      Jack landed on the street once more

      I think that should be Zero instead of Jack

    • alahue

      After-School Dungeon Diver - Correction Topic
      after-school dungeon diver • • alahue

      33
      0
      Votes
      33
      Posts
      1098
      Views

      X

      v4 p10

      ~25% Once one could make a steady living by farming on other floors, picking thea wasn’t an attractive option anymore. => there?

    • yuzumori

      Reborn to Master the Blade: From Hero-King to Extraordinary Squire - Corrections Topic
      hero-king • • yuzumori

      195
      0
      Votes
      195
      Posts
      28341
      Views

      T

      V12P8

      She found herself through into the sky, falling helplessly. Humans were not meant to fly, and she couldn’t help the wave of instinctive fear that struck her.

      through -> thrown?

    • yuzumori

      My Daughter Left the Nest and Returned an S-Rank Adventurer - Corrections Topic
      s-rank adv • • yuzumori

      262
      2
      Votes
      262
      Posts
      32400
      Views

      I

      v12p10:

      25% - […] the formerly crowded and bustline house had more or less settled down. -> Because Angeline and her harem were there? :p bustling, I presume. :) 39% - […] the farmers had to contend with less with the frost than their own sweat […] -> I think that’s an extra with, and needs to be removed.

      v12p11:

      96% - […] she pondered what to stock up on if did end up going to Elvgren. -> Missing word: if she did end up going
    • majikayo

      The Diary of a Middle-Aged Sage's Carefree Life in Another World - Corrections Topic
      diary of a sage • • majikayo

      18
      0
      Votes
      18
      Posts
      737
      Views

      karasutengu

      Vol 5 P3 (13%)

      she'd get out of dodge...
      --> she'd get out of Dodge...
      (This idiom refers to Dodge City, KS in the USA, so the "D" should be capitalized)

    • schuburner

      Jeanette the Genius - Corrections Topic
      jeanette genius j-novel heart • • schuburner

      23
      0
      Votes
      23
      Posts
      715
      Views

      I

      v3p6:

      38% - dancefloor -> I don’t think that’s a compound noun, and it should be two words: dance floor

      I forget the percentages, but I’m wondering why the circonflexe/circumflex is allowed, but the cedille is not. I’ll try to ignore the regular usage of the accent aigu as a comparison, but the circonflexe is not nearly as common. Yeah, this is all about “coup de grâce” getting its diacritic mark and fakahd façade facade not getting what it deserves, too. The cedille has been used elsewhere here with JNC. Is there just no standard governing its usage, leaving it entirely up to each editor?

      Thank you once more…

    • alahue

      Brilliant Healer - Corrections Topic
      brill-heal • • alahue

      29
      0
      Votes
      29
      Posts
      1330
      Views

      wanderer_1204

      Part 10, 14%:

      "Hmpf! Color me surprised to see you siding with the rabble. You do know that you're just a guess in their class, I presume?"

      guess should be guest.

    • majikayo

      Meals Made to Order - Corrections Topic
      meals made • • majikayo

      1
      0
      Votes
      1
      Posts
      57
      Views

      No one has replied

    • yuzumori

      Reincarnated as a High Elf - Corrections Topic
      slow life elf • • yuzumori

      86
      1
      Votes
      86
      Posts
      4448
      Views

      X

      v8 p2

      ~15% “Lord Acer, I would humbly request that you come with us to mee Zhang Shegong.” => meet?
    • myskaros

      The Reincarnated Princess Spends Another Day Skipping Story Routes - Corrections Topic
      j-novel heart skipping routes • • myskaros

      122
      0
      Votes
      122
      Posts
      10566
      Views

      pcj

      Volume 9 - Part 2:

      [88%] one last reluctant door at the backroom door >> should be look
    • alahue

      Slime Duke - Corrections Topic
      slime duke • • alahue

      11
      0
      Votes
      11
      Posts
      313
      Views

      hornet65

      Vol. 3, Part 3

      The red slime shot fireballs at the organic mass to no effect—the slimes were inflammable thanks to their current wet and sticky coating.

      Inflammable means flammable. If the intent here is to say that the slimes are currently not flammable because they're wet, a different word should be used. Nonflammble is the most common.

    • alahue

      RVing My Way into Exile - Corrections Topic
      rving • • alahue

      48
      0
      Votes
      48
      Posts
      1741
      Views

      Innovan

      Vol 3 p 6:

      began drilling the clams -> began grilling the clams

    • alahue

      From Desk Job to Death Beam - Corrections Topic
      death beam • • alahue

      8
      0
      Votes
      8
      Posts
      275
      Views

      Iseguy

      2.7

      Tigaro was hiding
      her breasts and everything below

      Stray paragraph break.

    • schuburner

      Magic Stone Gourmet - Corrections Topic
      stone gourmet • • schuburner

      69
      0
      Votes
      69
      Posts
      3842
      Views

      S

      vol 7 part 1
      63%

      "We should run into those Heims soon!" the knight shouted.

      This ethnic term ought to be replaced with Heimese / Heimites.
      edit:
      again at 68% as well.
      again at vol 7 part 2 at 45%

    • L

      A Pale Moon Reverie - Corrections Topic
      pale moon • • lovelight

      15
      0
      Votes
      15
      Posts
      688
      Views

      Angelus

      Just picked this up, bought the V1 ebook and found that the ToC is slightly messed up so Part 2 appears as a child of Part 1. Thank goodness for Sigil...

    • 1
    • 2
    • 3
    • 4
    • 5
    • 6
    • 7
    • 8
    • 12
    • 13
    • 6 / 13