v3p6:

38% - dancefloor -> I don’t think that’s a compound noun, and it should be two words: dance floor

I forget the percentages, but I’m wondering why the circonflexe/circumflex is allowed, but the cedille is not. I’ll try to ignore the regular usage of the accent aigu as a comparison, but the circonflexe is not nearly as common. Yeah, this is all about “coup de grâce” getting its diacritic mark and fakahd façade facade not getting what it deserves, too. The cedille has been used elsewhere here with JNC. Is there just no standard governing its usage, leaving it entirely up to each editor?

Thank you once more…

Part 10, 14%:

"Hmpf! Color me surprised to see you siding with the rabble. You do know that you're just a guess in their class, I presume?"

guess should be guest.

v8 p2

~15% “Lord Acer, I would humbly request that you come with us to mee Zhang Shegong.” => meet?

v2 p10

~65%

“An a- adu- Me? You think I’m an- an adult? Hee hee. Eheheh, ha ha ha ha ha.”
“I guess you don’t. That’s a bit freaky.”

Should that be aren't?

~80% Just as he’d done then, Lacey waved her fined a little and made globules of water. => finger? Or maybe wand?

Volume 9 - Part 2:

[88%] one last reluctant door at the backroom door >> should be look

@SomeOldGuy Thank you for catching this!

Vol. 3, Part 3

The red slime shot fireballs at the organic mass to no effect—the slimes were inflammable thanks to their current wet and sticky coating.

Inflammable means flammable. If the intent here is to say that the slimes are currently not flammable because they're wet, a different word should be used. Nonflammble is the most common.

Vol 3 p 6:

began drilling the clams -> began grilling the clams

2.7

Tigaro was hiding
her breasts and everything below

Stray paragraph break.

vol 7 part 1
63%

"We should run into those Heims soon!" the knight shouted.

This ethnic term ought to be replaced with Heimese / Heimites.
edit:
again at 68% as well.
again at vol 7 part 2 at 45%

Just picked this up, bought the V1 ebook and found that the ToC is slightly messed up so Part 2 appears as a child of Part 1. Thank goodness for Sigil...

v9p8:

Cyclopes or cyclops? They’re both being used in this part. or is the former just the plural of the latter? Kinda seems that way. … Yeah, just should have asked Google. It’s the plural. 95% - You can’ take it back now! -> Style of speaking, or missing letter: can’t

@Geezer-Weasalopes Well, it's not just italics this time. But they do need to be checked before this gets released.

Just found a conventional typo!

V12P11 90%:
"You don't need to be so said.
sad

@Shaun-C Thanks for the confirmation. I thought my new glasses were screwing with my eyes.

Volume 3 Part 7
53% Just desserts -> just deserts

(Something I'd been getting wrong myself til just recently, thinking with its pronunciation that desserts was only fitting. Quick googling shows it might be instead tied to 'deserves')

Vol 2. Pt. 2 - 24%

"Oh, you're awake. Very good. I'm proud of you!" Crysie said upon entering the house.

Missing "s" for Cryssie

v2p2:

24% - Laycesquinted angrily, […] -> Missing space: Layce squinted 98% - At the palace, when you told me you loved… I was really surprised. -> Missing word, or is that why the ellipsis is there: you loved me, or maybe: you loved yourself. ;p

Volume 8, P16, 57%: When discussing colors of everyone’s armor, Aina is mentioned twice - is one supposed to be Aura?

V26 Part 3

10% "unsucessful" conflicts with later lines
The Mikoshiba Grand Duchy's surprise attack was unsuccessful, ->
The Mikoshiba Grand Duchy's surprise attack was successful,

44% "than was" would make the comparison flow smoother
To ensure their survival, they often employed a larger army appropriate for a nation their size. ->
To ensure their survival, they often employed a larger army than was appropriate for a nation their size.

54% Add space between "now.All"
Well, there's not much I can do about it right now.All I can do...->
Well, there's not much I can do about it right now. All I can do...