V1 P8

Was some content dropped between P7 and P8? P7 ended with Evelyn passing out after Europa manipulates her into promising to visit her every day:

Lady Europa ignored the big splash echoing from below and crawled on all fours toward my collapsed form. Peeking out from her disheveled long hair was her terrifyingly beautiful face, with her tongue sticking out, licking at her cheek.
“Lady Eeevelyn...”
“Ee, eee...”
“We’ll be together...forever and ever and ever.” She paused ominously. “Won’t we?”
Kira! Save me, Kiraaa!
As I screamed my reliable companion’s name internally, I was overcome with terror and passed out right then and there.

But then P8 begins after some sort of "costume fitting", not mentioned in the previous part, is over:

After the costume fitting was done, I changed into simple clothes any town girl would wear and went with Lord Theodore to tour the festival. There was still time before my ceremony, and since nobody knew what the saint looked like, the Grand Basilica had given me permission to go out.

Was some text between these two parts omitted?

V6P3
~0%

Perhaps because it was mostly out of sight, it had become a dumping ground for all kinds of everyday waste—rusty cartwheels, smashed crates, and discolored sofas to wine bottles, chairs with broken legs, and assorted fragments of other items.

Wrong word? and->from

V6P6
~29%

AS YOU WISH.FOR YOU, MY FRIEND, I WILL REDUCE ALL YOUR FOES TO ASH.

Missing space?; WISH.FOR->WISH. FOR

V5P10 ~78%
"...the self-claimed Game Master..." -> "...the self-proclaimed Game Master..."

V2P9, 35%: “The mana inside her trashed about before flooding out of her.” - thrashed

v3p7 ~12%:

"Do you think that I did something unnecessary?" Asked Lutz, still not entirely sure of the etiquette among adventurers in those kinds of situations.

Asked -> asked.

Volume 8 - Part 13:

[13%] fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [13%] two hundred and fifty billion yen >> should be krams (already reported) [83%] But if she’d said that she was coming to ours, so it must be fine. >> either the if or the so needs to go away. this doesn't make sense with both.

@Khazidhea
Volume 14 has been published.
The prepub may not reflect the final edits.
They don't make corrections to the prepubs after the final work is published.
Once a work has been published, JNC accepts corrections to the contents of the ebook via email to support@j-novel.club

The errors you are reporting may or may not exist within the published work.
The folks who would handle them don't monitor the correction topics.
So posting here after the work is published is an exercise in futility, and may also be concerning stuff that got corrected in the published work.

V3 P2

~50%

Item stolen: Naval Piercing.

Should that be Navel Piercing? (I mean, Yuri could have stolen something for piercing through battleships, but somehow I reckon that a bellybutton piercing is more likely given some of the other junk that got stolen.)

v6 p7

More missing or misplaced spaces around italics (text inside <em></em> tags), for instance at around 1%:

“Even from Sharon, I didn’t expectthis ,” Kent grumbled as he wiped sweat from his face. As usual, he was leading our formation. “Are we seriously doing this? I guess we have to...”

I won't mention any others, but please re-check this.

V4 P5 (42% - 8th line down from top of page)

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Should be "keep" - need to fix typo.

V4 P11

41% "We needed to shatter the enemy's morale because they could finish regrouping."

The key point here appears to be about timing. Rather than shattering them because they can regroup, a better fit may be to shatter them before they regroup.

"We needed to shatter the enemy's morale before they could finish regrouping."

SSP12, 85%: "with a furious grin plastered across my place" - face

V11 P2, 32%
"I heard a series of mechanic clunks from the other side of the door"
Mechanic -> mechanical
96%
"whoops, i guess it’s ’cause i was talking to to nago-chan"
Likely a duplicate (in character) due to the nature of chat messaging, but thought I'd point it out in case it was actually in error

V11 P4, 21%
"What, I should’ve considered with the possibility?"

38%
"I reheated the stew"
Likely not an error (and if so it would be in the original, not a translation error), just me struggling to picture the sequence of events and match to my own experience. I just can't identify any reasonable lengths of time for the following that would end with a cold stew:

From part 3, didn't leave work til after 10pm. Plus travel time, doesn't leave a whole lot of time for a stream (unless going unreasonable late). As prep + cooking didn't start til after the stream did, even cooking quickly with a pressure cooker, 1 hour might the quickest to be done. If the stream took 2 hours say, they'd still roughly line up, so can't see how it could've cooled down much at all.

Even with a really long streaming time (I'd say 2 hours would be a reasonable upper limit), prep + cooking

V11 P5, 27%
"... and wasn't inf touch with the rest of the team"
inf -> in
29%
"Even the shady clients you found on social media who got in legal trouble would gaggle at this"
Gaggle -> goggle

Sorry I know prepub parts have already expired but just putting this here for completion's sake as I only just finished this volume.
V11P5
~0%

Can had left the guild after finishing the delivery paperwork in a private room and accepted a portion of the payment in gold coins,

Wrong tense?; accepted->accepting

~47%

The Tears of the Goddess, alongside my degraded potions from Balmore and nearby kingdoms, appeared in every religious book written over the past seventy-odd years; not as myth, but it actually existed.

Sorry if it is okay as it is, but when reading it feels a bit 'odd' and does not seem to follow from the bit before?; but it actually existed->but as something that actually existed

P6
~0%

Then, realization hit me. I could’ve used a stamina potion instead of Reiko’s potion.

Wrong word?; potion->magic as Reiko has magic not potions?

~40%

Suddenly, I noticed the Eyes leader giving me a look as if to say he’d never allowed that.

Wrong tense? allowed->allow

P7
~40%

“Thirteen!’

Wrong speech ending?; ’->"

P8
~27%

A two-seater with cloaking to go invisible or disguise as a rock, with some sort of shield to prevent tampering when parked, autopilot, perfect safety system, and comes to us when called.

Wrong word/missing word? and comes to us->and that comes to us (or and->that)

Thanks for all of your posts, everyone! All of your corrections up to this point are in the series now.

V6P4, 54%: "Hakugei no Tachhi"

Oops, hit post early by mistake

99%: "maybe she used a return item to warm back to the castle?" - warp

V1P2 4%:

I may be able to find a specialization

may -> might

31%:

the possibility that he may not be from this country

may -> might

33%:

Up until recently, I haven't had the time

haven't -> hadn't

42%:

That said, I've never seen him take one up on her offer

I've -> I'd

v4 p8

~47%

About one hour had passed since the start of our party when Aero, who already seemed pretty drunk, leaned against me and brought up something that had happened before the race.
“Say, Scuba. You saw that Farseer guy before the race, right?”

Unless Aero is drunk and mispronouncing her name, it's Scuna.

@Iseguy said in The Dorky NPC Mercenary Knows His Place - Corrections Topic:

4.8

“Handsome Schoolboy and Handsome Schoolgirl Escape with their Lives from Corrupt Tyrannical Teacher’s Trap!”

“Beautiful Schoolgirl”

Handsome used to be used for women as well as men, I can remember one of my grandmothers using it. See

Can you still call a woman "handsome"? The Britannica Dictionary.

According to those definitions, as someone who is apparently quite athletic (and tomboyish?), "Handsome" might apply to Scuna.

However, I've never heard the term used for women in 21st century American English, so probably "Beautiful" would be preferred?

v9 p3

~95%

Also, it would be completely meaningless if I went missing right after her. If she was in danger, it was best to save her, but joining her in defeat would be the worst possible outcome. If I could save Surena by throwing mine away, I would gladly do so. However, throwing my life away and gaining nothing in return was out of the question. I had to calmly make that distinction.

There's something a bit awkward here: the possessive pronoun "mine" is used prior to the possessive determiner "my (life)". I think it should be switched so that the determiner comes first, so either:

If I could save Surena by throwing my life away, I would gladly do so. However, throwing mine away and gaining nothing in return was out of the question. I had to calmly make that distinction.

Or

If I could save Surena's life by throwing mine away, I would gladly do so. However, throwing mine away and gaining nothing in return was out of the question. I had to calmly make that distinction.