Volume 8 - Part 12:

[42%] Tahara. Prepared to travel to the Holy Castle. ► It should be Prepare.

Volume 14 - Part 10:

[11%] appearance of anyone at Trojan Prison. [A] ► Remove random [A] ? [37%] a flash of light burst around him as he poured ► It should be A (uppercase). [44%] Oboro Hien rained down to finish them off ► Missing period. [97%] writing, it feels like I am reading it from ► It should be it felt like I was?

3.9

Roy occupied Fie's mind during *her" absence,

“his”

being both a victim of being mistaken and a mistake maker herself.

“a mistake victim” or “a victim of mistakes”
(Passive voice makes her the indirect object, like she's the only one that made mistakes.)

Volume 14 - Part 11:

[20%] it had pleased her so Upon learning >> missing period

Volume 3 - Part 10:

[14%] insistent with their One-China policy. Won’t they say they need ► It should be One-Sina to keep it consistent with the names? [15%] “What about the Oriental Republic of Sina and the Republic ► The previous paragraphs were all about the Oriental Republic of Sina and now he asks again about it? It doesn't make sense. [15%] of Earth’s population, so. they must also have a proportional ► Wrong period. [36%] UC weapon middle sword.Hobkobolds were Rank-D monsters ► Missing space.

@lovelight in Volume 9 part 9 When Lutin talks with her:

"if you stand out here you'll catch a child" -> a cold (I guess)

@Terabyte said in My Instant Death Ability - Corrections Topic:

[12%] which his powers worked. Hehimself had agreed that ► Missing space.

I saw that one... and wondered to myself, I did, if this was a funky label he had created for self-reference...
If it were, one would hope for some form of internal punctuation, such as he/himself, but it still did cross my mind.
My mind is a very strange place.

@Oddmoonlight

Hello,

Thank you for taking the the time to point this out.

Just for reference; after a volume is officially released as an ebook, the pre-pub parts become out of date, and are not the most up to date version.

As such corrections pointed out in pre-pubs may have already been corrected in the ebook.

For errors found in published books corrections can be emailed to, support@j-novel.club

Thank you

Volume 3 - Part 10:

[0%] with Yu and the Mark IIIenduring within its ► Missing space. [20%] the city at a gruesome skew.. They were ► Duplicate period. [40%] little bit more than she was prepared for.. ► Duplicate period.

Volume 9 - Part 10:

[0%] ＥＸ－９ ► The usual title format is missing. [7%] to defend against Arie's rainbow flames, ► It should be Aries’s (typo + different ’ ). [16%] Maiden title, Parthenos.She looked down ► Missing space. [42%] ＥＸ－10 ► The usual title format is missing. [67%] ＥＸ－11 ► The usual title format is missing. [98%] she was the opponent.This would infinitely ► Missing space. [99%] of character count here. so it’s about time ► Wrong period.

Volume 8 - Part 12:

[23%] the middle of a forest. M-My, how strange. Wasn’t ► The dialogue's starting double quote is missing. [44%] together on one horse—oh,let me tell you!—that’s ► Missing space. [82%] prepared a few days ago (Liora apparently hunted ► Missing period before the parenthesis. [98%] Mochitsuki: “ I see. Well, I guess seeing things you ► Remove extra space.

The mistakes I found had already been reported, so good job all.

Something which I noticed as a bit awkward is the line: "Honestly, the Sacula region did not want to cooperate either. But we could not leave hem to their own devices either". Ending two sentences in a row with 'either' seems a bit clunky, so you could consider re-wording it a little.

In Volume 4 part 9 around %70 "head made" should be 'head maid'

V2p3
[80%] “It won’t open?!” Agness tried pushing, -> Agnes

Volume 7 - Part 12:

[82%] “Satsuki-san, Satsuki-san, please return.” >> return needs context in English, otherwise it means "return to us" which doesn't make sense here. Maybe "go away" or "return to where you came from"?

@terabyte said in Forget Being the Villainess, I Want to Be an Adventurer! - Corrections Topic:

[67%] Hey, come on! This was an act of goddess! ► It should be an act of the goddess or maybe a godly act ?

It parallels the phrase "Act of God," just modified as to gender.

At about 59%, it says "Swatch" twice, and I think it's supposed to be "Shuwacchi". I got super confused when reading it.

@zwabbit
The rifling does help, yes. Increased accuracy and range.
I'm still wondering how many volleys they were able to get in, and how many hits per horsemen were required to remove them from play.

I'm trying to remember.. there was mention of metal casing previously?
That'd dramatically speed up rate of fire even with single shot weaponry, if they're using breach loading case shot, or whatever the proper terminology is.
Akin to modern hunting rifles.

Volume 6, part 10 (33%):
"He met [her] at a benefit concert,..."
I believe the German word "Benefizkonzert" would be more commonly translated as "charity concert".
If I didn't know the German word, I would probably interpret "benefit concert" as the exact opposite - a concert for profit...