Thanks to @Weasalopes for pointing it out, and @pcj for looking into it ^^

They do indeed have spaces between, looks like it's a font issue on the web-reader. I checked the back-end as well where it's showing properly.

Appreciated as always!

Volume 13 Part 6 ~67% Broken image.

V7.8

That meathead... the attendants spat internally with a bitter expression.

Should that space be there before that 'the'? Not sure if the cursive text changes it in your guidelines.
I guess the space makes sense but maybe capitalising that 'the' makes sense then? Idk

Re: v5p7

[76%] along with his own wims.

I haven’t looked up that spelling, but shouldn’t it be whims?

Or has the book been published already? I should double check. ^^;

Vol 17 part 11 at around 95%:
" he gripped sword and was about to swing," => missing a "his" between "gripped" and "sword".

Volume 18 - Part 9:

[50%] Is this really mid-twenty-firstt-century Japan?” ► Remove the extra t.

Volume 6 - Part 10:

[2%] The least I could was try >> should be could do was

Volume 12 - Part 6:

[31%] “Don’t say that,” Clouseau muttered. “I’ll start crying,” ► It should be a period.

Volum2, part 5, 22%:
The quote is "Evacuate? In our moment of triumph?"

Though I guess that makes as little sense as "Surrender"... Maybe "Retreat" would be better? It is not the Star Wars quote either, but it fits the context better - both for Star Wars and for this scene...

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Volume 02 - Part 1:

[22%] with a population of 1.4 billion and 9.6 square kilometers of land, ► Um, is there supposed to be a million/billion attached to this? Already mentioned [45%] The inside of the support facility at Sapporo was nowhere near as intimidating the one in Yokohama. ► Add as Already mentioned
1. 'The inside of the support facility at Sapporo was nowhere near as intimidating as the one in Yokohama.'

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Volume 02 - Part 3:

[Generic] Three mentions of the name Liu Fongguan, however one instance is Fonnguan. Already mentioned

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Volume 02 - Part 4:

[9%] "... Just what it is that's motivating him?" ► Should these be swapped? is it [36%] I found myself marveling once again at how variety we had in the group. ► Add much or other adjustments
1. 'I found myself marveling once again at how much variety we had in the group. ' [64%] Then I used Teleportation to bring all of them to Abyss, the Rank A dungeon Shishibone, Edogawa City. ► Needs full-stop after dungeon, and possibly new line, brackets [] and placement after the section break for the location of a new section and perspective OR add in
1. 'Then I used Teleportation to bring all of them to Abyss, the Rank A dungeon in Shishibone, Edogawa City.'
2. 'Then I used Teleportation to bring all of them to Abyss, the Rank A dungeon. {Section break} [Shishibone, Edogawa City - Ezoe Kazuhiko]'

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Volume 02 - Part 6:

[58%] "... After that, we can say goodbye to ever allowing Gamerican troops step foot on Japanese soil again." ► Add to

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Volume 02 - Part 7:

[7%] -her entire back, as well as both of her arms from the shoulder down, was completely bare. ► Should be were

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Volume 02 - Part 8:

[Generic] Multiple references to Meng Zemin, however one towards the end of the page is Zeming, check to make sure all references correlate. Already mentioned [70%] there was no need to look to look any further than Yuwaku Onsen, ► Remove double up

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Part 7:
[39%] That’s my rival, you know. My rival for Rockmann’s love. > Should it be Sir Alois’s love since this is Maris’s line?
[48%] It’s a tiny human! Oh my…” > delete a double quotation mark.
[91%] …but he groans “no!” so I just stop trying … > “No!”

Part 9:
[77%] Who is “Stadal?” > Move quotation mark before the question mark.
[82%] “ ‘Stadal!’ It’s written right here!” > Move single quotation mark before exclamation mark.

Part 10:
[6%] “Oi, you two laggards! Aren’t you supposed to me men?” > Should it be Hey?
[89%] Didn’t it say, “every living creature on the continent?” > Should the double quotation mark be placed before question mark?

Part 11:
[16%] Come on, we should be thinking up ways to squash Stadal, not offer me up to it. > The “ä” in Stadal is tiny.
[16%] … he points up at Stadal floating up in the sky… > The “ä” in Stadal is tiny.
[47%] “In mine own name of Hades, I beseech you…” > It said “In my own name of …” in Volume 2.

Part 12:
[0%] In mine own name of …, I beseech you > It said “In my own name of …” in Volume 2
[4%] “What they ‘really do?’ ” & “ ‘Make connections?’ ”> Move single quotation mark before question mark.
[29%] “Lady**!** Nanalie!” > Should it be “Lady Nanalie!” ?
[75%] …answer her question about “quitting my job:” > Should the quotation mark be placed before the colon?

Part 8

48%
The base of operations of the Area 2 Fleet, the star system known as the Secar Viscountdom was virtually a war plant.
--insert comma

67%
As a result, the military succeeded in taking Lahkfacar, and gained control of the three
--delete comma

67%
There will be a different mission or you."
--for

95%
Its territory has been torn apart, with no ability to contact each other.
--seems like odd phrasing

Volume 2 - Part 10:

[Generic] The illustrator's name is Hyuga (single u) on the cover but it's written 2 times as Hyuuga (double u) in the afterword.

Volume 5 - Part 10:

[28%] learning how the lady of the manner had suffered ► It should be manor.