V3 P10 (81% - 4th line up from bottom of page)
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Should be:

...,Sora's ex-fiancee,...
-or- ...,his ex-fiancee,...

v1p9:

76% - Thank the lord. -> Missing capitalization? Given that it’s being said by the priest (especially), I’m presuming that it would be “Thank the Lord.”

Volume 8 - Part 6:

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got sent to an inescapableprison?

Add space.

13.8

“Full glad am I to see you young ones with so much energy. Very good, very good.”

“Gladful” is still a word, even if it doesn't rate being recognized by the spell checker.

“Joyful” also works if you want to stick with popular words, although it's slightly less apt for this meaning.

@Gaffary said in Goodbye, Overtime! - Corrections Topic:

v6p10:

40% - Lydia had learned that Mikhail was to summer in the Yulnova Duchy -> probably to spend the summer in or something like that

That one’s valid, but it might be more British than American english. I’ve encountered the phrase in the past, but I couldn’t tell you whether on TV or in print. Oxford English Dictionary says that “summer”, as a verb, means “spend the summer in a particular place.”

V1 P8 (50% - 2nd line up from bottom of page)

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Change "he" to "we" to match beginning of sentence subject: "We".

Have the typo and error in part 1 and 3 already addressed?

V2P9 ~6%

Speaking of, the boy was currently sitting on an armchair across from Lord Feilx...

This is going to sound incredibly pedantic, but you sit in an armchair.
Unless of course, he's sitting say, on the arm of the chair or something, which I doubt.

Because English is weird and dumb, despite sitting on a couch, or on a stool, you sit in a chair.

spoiler

Volume 1 - Part 8:
▪ [29%] “You! Did you make this?!” [...] “Y-Yes... I am,” >> should be did

V1P6 12%:

it certainly makes things easier to learn." <paragraph break> "When you mentioned

Both these paragraphs make a single uninterrupted piece of dialog from a single speaker, so the highlighted right double quotes shouldn't be there.

Alternatively you could add an extra speaker tag. Ex: it certainly makes things easier to learn." <para break> Liese paused, then added, "When you mentioned ...

84%:

As her designated Jump specialist slash guard

It's strange to see a punctuation mark written out in text. Is this deliberate?

V4 P7

~2%

“I’m pretty sure that large geyser is what we’re sensing. That means it’s no far.”

Should that be not far?

In Volume 11 part 5 there are numerous formatting issues with the character stats, mostly missing spaces/newlines in between stats.

V4 P8 (11% - 2nd line down from top of page)

The king was sat in an armchair,...

The king sat in an armchair,...

(remove"was")

v6p4:

25% - it’s enough just to have one fewer mouth to feed. -> I think that’s supposed to be: one less mouth to feed.

V2 P4, 6%
"I used to be so certain she hated me, but after seeing that face... tt was clear there had been a misunderstanding"
tt -> it

v3 p2

~60%

Lacey’s home used to be feared as a cursed property by the villagers, so other than Yorma, Reeve, their older brother Allen, and the fox-eyed merchant Lanze, who occasionally visited Plume Villages, people rarely visited the place.

=> Plume Village (singular)

v3 p4

~1%

“Family” was such a foreign word to her,something that she thought that she would never have a connection to.

=> her, something (missing space)

@Rinvelt alright, cool, thanks for the heads up on both of those (the unique spelling of 'Ser' and the mistake from the author). Cool to see how 'the sausage gets made' sometimes!

As for correction!
V6P9 ~50%
'He was a S-rank adventurer...' -> 'He was an S-rank adventurer...'

@Gamen

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