Arc 1 v5 p17

~10%

He couldn’t cut through the knives when he got close, and the moment he moved away, the throwing knives hurtled his way. Ryo had never faced such an before, which was perhaps why—

such an what before? Maybe opponent?

~63%

Ryo remembered that Sera, the Matriarc, and the guardian beast from Nils’s village had said regarding the substance emanating from his body.

=> Matriarch

Oops. I assume it's too late to fix since the book has already been available in print for a bit now, but was re-reading Volume 11 and noticed a continuity error.

Halfway through Volume 11, Chapter 3, the family starts talking about an increase in parts of the animal population, and speculating that it's because they killed two bears. Diana later comments, "I've only seen one once."

In the novels, Forge Eizo has actually killed three bears. Eizo soloed the first bear in Volume 1. They killed a second bear in Volume 4 when a bear invaded Jolanda's home (Diana actually dealt the killing blow on that one). And the third bear in Volume 5 was how they got Lucy.

It's probably a discontinuity from the original web version of the story, since I believe Jolanda was a new character introduced for the novelization. I assume in the web version there were only two bears, and they forgot to correct the count in the Volume 11 reflections.

V1, P10, 75%: “It was oozing so much power that it was as if I'd poured straight mana.” - incomplete sentence

V5P9, 55%: “A hit before I even used Fever Lore” - lure

Not a correction from the book itself, but the series description:

After all, wherever legends of great tread, great trouble is sure to follow.

This should probably be "great legends" instead.

After all, wherever great legends tread, great trouble is sure to follow.

@Geezer-Weasalopes said in One Last Hurrah! The Grayed Heroes Explore a Vivid Future - Corrections Topic:

A reexamination of the Japanese is very much in order.

Fortunately, that part of the text is freely available as a preview on Bookwalker. Now, I don't know Japanese all that well, but throwing the first bit of the chapter in to DeepL results in the following, with the sentence you quoted above bolded:

There are quite a few people classified as martial arts masters. Those who survived the great war of the past have refined their martial arts skills once again, in case the same war were to break out again. However, as is to be expected, in the process of mastering their skills, masters often end up leaning toward either protecting people or killing them without mercy. Therefore, it was fair to say that the two were opposites. Their lifestyles and the goals they pursued with their swords were, on the surface, completely different.

This, I'm sorry to say, seems like a much more understandable translation. Whether it's accurate though, I have no idea because I don't know Japanese.

10.9

Tahara gestured to the variable mountain of food and drinks, all part of the hoard they’d confiscated from the central nobles

“veritable”

V4 P12 (% - 4th line from the bottom of the page)

..., He was easily in the running o be considered his closest aid.

...to be considered his closest aide.

(an aide is an assistant to an important person, especially a political leader.)
{source: Oxford Language Dictionary}

V3, P12, around 39%:
>Beneki Benkei didn't have six hands just for show.

@UrchinStar47 said in Mercedes and the Waning Moon - Corrections Topic:

Petals of flowers, not pedals. Around the end of chapter 68.

V18P1
~42%

Chapter 1<

Just guessing that this is a typo and it's not meant to be chapter 'greater than 1'? (Though guess we'll see if there is a chapter 1 or chapter 2 later in the prepubs) Chapter 1< -> Chapter 1

V5P8 ~38%
"I guess two fellow pervers can get along." ->"I guess two fellow perverts can get along."

V1P8, 1%: “I refrained from suggesting that we [turn?] back.”

Just noticed this but v3 p9

~40%

After seeing off the wolf pack, Leah turned her attention to the goblin ranches. With her plans expanding to ranching entire dungeons, this small-scale operation wasn’t particularly useful anymore. Instead of shutting it down, she decided to Retain the goblins and form a new goblin corps for her grand army of the apocalypse. It was the least she could do to thank them for their endless service. They would not farm, instead of being farmed.

Should that be They would now farm, instead of being farmed ?

Also, in this chapter there are two instances of Lieflais being spelled Lieflay.

v6p12:

1% - The first group stood on the front line with bitter expressions, fighting though they weren’t really used to it. -> Missing word(?): […] fighting as though they weren’t really […]

V15 P11 50%

"Ho ho ho ho ho!" Maomao said- the closest thing to a laugh she could manage with such an intense frown on her face.
「ほほほほ」猫猫は顔が引きつり、変な笑い声しか出ない。

It does not seem like Maomao is frowning here, but rather her face is twitching/flinching from being nervous.

V3 P7 89%
"and their families who fell in the Girrad territory - let's take revenge together"
Girrad -> Girard

V3 P8, 65%
"You're too weak to beat me!" Seravimia lighty thrust me away with her hand
Lighty -> lightly

V11P9 13%:

"Lord Ashenbert," Raven had joined them, "might I ask that you unhand Mr. Nico?"

"Raven had joined them" isn't a dialog tag so it should be in a separate sentence. (Or maybe it could be rephrased to accompany a dialog tag, but I can't think of a way to do that gracefully).

V11P10 28%:
Oughted -> Oughtred

V8 P12 (38% - end of 4th line from bottom of the page)

She flaw at me, every bit as energized as Eva had said.

-->She flew at me,...

@faye-d Ah, ok. Thanks for the explanation.

V11P4
~31%

Then. there was a drawn out silence.

Wrong punctation?; Then. there->Then, there

Who'd invite such a suspicious visitor at night like this?

Missing word?; Who'd invite such->Who'd invite in such

~38%

I turned around left, the couple thanking me profusely with tears streaming down their faces, their kid sitting up in bed looking dumbfounded.

Missing word?; I turned around left->I turned around and left

~69%

As the guild master tried to regain composure and maintain an air of authority,Loreia, the receptionist, entered with a young girl who barely seemed to be an adult.

Missing space?; authority,Loreia,->authority, Loreia,

V2P9
~0%

The realization he was doing that, together with the memory of all the times she had fallen on their way here for him to catch her, made her want to laugh.

Potentially missing word? Sorry if it is okay as it is, but to me when I first read it, it seemed that Misha was intentionally falling so that Kite would catch her (through the 'for him to catch her'); here for->here, only for