V1P12 12%

I couldn’t afford to waste resources on broken equipment.
> Driven by that

On the site in my Chome browser on iOS, it looks like equipment.Driven but when I copy paste, there is a line break between them as shown above. Same as the previous part.

59%
“I see.”
I understood what he was getting at. But—
“I want this to be a formal request.”
I looked him in the eye …
I see”I -> I see” I
request.”I -> request.” I

“… him.
Even from afar..”
him.
Even -> him.
 Even

“… item: a jar.
More specifically, it was a Jar of Thirst…”
jar.
More -> jar.
 More

71%
“… falling steadily since early that morning,. long enough now that both…”

morning,. long -> morning, long

“… window.
Come to think of it …”
window.Come -> window. Come

There’s at least 5 more of these in the last couple pages, as well as a comma at the end of a sentence instead of a period. Not worth going through and listing them at this point.

V16 P5 9% "They were right [beShind] me just a second ago!" -> a wild S appeared

With the Age Gap Gone
Page 4 capitalized letter in "Looked" should not be capitalized
Reads as "I Looked at Lord Helena"

V7 P3 (0% - end of last sentence on page)

Hey Lily. Why do you care so little about fashion?

Hey Sara.

Shouldn't this be 'Sara' since she's the one they are trying to get clothed. Besides, the five who went to the women's clothing store were: Stella, Sara, Ikki, Alisiun, and Shizuku. There was no Lily (unless it's a nick-name for Sara).

@xdbx I assume "Helenenemies" should just be "Helen". And/or swap "no one would be able to" to "no enemies would be able to".

I think "has" is correct in that sentence. The shift from past to present tense makes sense. If anything, change the last sentence to, "We don't really have any weak links."

V10 P10 (46%)

..he has searched every storage, room, and treasury in the palace...

searched every storage room, and...

(Remove comma between storage and room)

V8P1 77% Addyjust -> Addy just

v2 p3
"And there’s no way she could have hidden a haul that league anywhere."

league -> large

The following is causing some debate over on the main forum:

"Until then, if Zen and Elysia could possibly produce an heir, it'd be some peace of mind for the Leadon family," said Yohia.

Perhaps it could be reworded to make it clear whether the heir being discussed is a Leadon heir or an imperial heir.

Volume 2 Part 9
23% manaed -> managed
31% seen to familiar -> seem so familiar
47% [grammar] me and Maria -> Maria and I

2.9:

Why had she been unable to she become the sort of person someone would love?

Why had she been unable to become the sort of person someone would love?

There's a multiple line section that makes no sense, and I'm damned if I'm transcribing all of it.
So here's the specific line that stands out as "Huh?" to me.

In the end, the maid simply gave her a bright smile. "You'd like to do so even if saying so is impertinent?"

It's like there should be something else right before that line, something missing, because as it is there's no proper lead in to this.
Or it could be that the line is wonky in itself.

Volume 24 part 2 has issues where names are mixed up, like "explained Radine". The "said Ryoma, laughing" at the end also seems dodgy.

Volume 7 - Part 2:

[28%]

"This is an urgent matter,and one involving Lily besides. What manner of wretch would I be to stay behind and rest on my laurels?"

Suggestion:

"This is an urgent matter,and one involving Lily. Besides, what manner of wretch would I be to stay behind and rest on my laurels?"

10.12

Wridra dragged me forward with her vice grip and freakish strength.

The metaphorical tool is the “vise”. Vice is sin.

V2 P9, 11%

Daniel walked over to Elizabeth and Remilena --> Daniel walked over to Westalia and Remilena

V8 P7 (89%)

Why are you coming with, Elm?

-->Why are you coming with me, Elm?

Volume 4 - Part 10:

[70%] other girl’sactions >> needs a space

v3p10:

56% - If you asked whether I had feelings for Char, the answer was probably. -> That almost reads like an incomplete sentence: It was probably what? Maybe something like: […] the answer was ”probably”. Unless it’s supposed to be: […] the answer was probably yes.

V5P7 75%:

Yet after this, it is not for myself that I must worry about.

Either "for" or "about" can stay, but they shouldn't both be there.

at vol 7 part 3 at around 80% is this part

High-Speed Jonathan’s carriage went faster than Zelos’s Harley-Sanders Model 13, if not faster

but i just sounds weird shouldnt be it "as fast"