V4 P7 (5% - 1 line below line beginning with "It sounds like fun.")

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we'd like to leave society behind...

Didn't Stein and Vile fist have a fight in the last pre-pub and wasn't vile fist already killed? Why is stein asking Lutz to investigate in this pre-pub?

@Khazidhea said in Notorious No More - Corrections Topic:

V2 P10, 33%
"Even when I had tried to provoke ,other into turning on me instead"
,other -> mother

“Not that she would do something as untoward as screaming, of course—he was a proper young lady.
I glanced at her... wWit, what exactly was that spellbound expression she was wearing?!"
He -> she. Not sure about 'wWit', maybe wait?

Yeah, has to be a Wait.
There are also these two:
"fresh welts.I had" < missing space
"on his face face to boot" < repetition

V2 P4, 6%
"I used to be so certain she hated me, but after seeing that face... tt was clear there had been a misunderstanding"
tt -> it

v3 p2

~60%

Lacey’s home used to be feared as a cursed property by the villagers, so other than Yorma, Reeve, their older brother Allen, and the fox-eyed merchant Lanze, who occasionally visited Plume Villages, people rarely visited the place.

=> Plume Village (singular)

v3 p4

~1%

“Family” was such a foreign word to her,something that she thought that she would never have a connection to.

=> her, something (missing space)

@Poncho9761 said in The Frontier Lord Begins with Zero Subjects - Corrections Topic:

V11P2 ~50%
'...a child, started up at me...' -> '...a child, stared up at me...' EDIT: oops, @heimdal7 beat me to it...
~71%
'...and give it some that good ol' energy.' -> '...and give it some of that good ol' energy.'
~96%
'...and the grandma all let out...' -> '...and the grandmas all let out...'

Funny enough I just happen to wake in the middle of the night and saw this posted in real time.

@Rinvelt alright, cool, thanks for the heads up on both of those (the unique spelling of 'Ser' and the mistake from the author). Cool to see how 'the sausage gets made' sometimes!

As for correction!
V6P9 ~50%
'He was a S-rank adventurer...' -> 'He was an S-rank adventurer...'

@somerandomperson-29-2dnw0hn said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@majikayo
V5 P6 85%

" The boisterous soldiers who had returned to camo"
camo -> camp

Thanks, that should be fixed now.

V1 P5

31% "to check in on Baul's"

Checking in on Baul's what? As nothing requiring ownership is indicated, you could simplify this, "to check in on Baul"

V1P5 0%:

Miss Mystère walked along, asking the servants to prepare tea before showing me into the estate. -> "ushered" ? “My name is Cocolette Blossom,” I replied politely. “I am here today on Miss Mystère’s invitation. -> "at"?
25%: “You got an interest in magic?” Lord Dwarphister asked suddenly. -> wouldn't a noble at least say "You've" or "You have"?
83%: I may not even live to see the seeds I would plant sprout, if they even do at all. -> "to see if the seeds I plant would sprout..."

"Ny name is Daniel Kimberley"
V3p1 89% Ny => My

@Gamen

Hello,

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I’m not sure if this is applicable as the issue appears to be in the original work.

The author revealed that Yahagi and Michelle were engaged in volume 3 part 1.

“… I’ll also introduce you as my fiancée.” That was right. We were finally engaged.

Later, in volume 4 part 9, Yahagi reveals that he plans on proposing that evening:

What was going to happen when I proposed to her after this?

If JNC has authorization, the plot hole could be resolved via modifying the 2nd quote to say that Yahagi is setting a wedding date.

V6P5
~19%

“Then why did you join the way five hundred years ago?”

Wrong word?; way->war

~29%

“If we can get results against the humans, just like our ancestors with as part of the Demon Lord’s army—no, if we can even just get the chance to fight alongside the other races, then maybe that’ll be the spark we need to start advancing our race and reclaim the five hundred years we’ve lost.”

Wrong word?; with->did (or just remove?)

~38%

“Yes, yes. The king says, ‘Our race continues to develop and has been able to maintain a generally stable society. Certainly, there are numerous minor issues, but none that would seriously threaten our survival as a people. If I were to identify the point of greatest concern,” the silver devil paused for a moment as though uncertain, “‘it would be me.’”

Missing an ending '?; concern,"-> concern,'"

V2 P3 (42% - next to last line on page)

..., I threw my first out in front of me.

I threw my fist out in front of me.

(since the next line says the pope's fist slammed into hers, "first" should be changed to "fist")

V7P4 ~70%: "It's onlu lasts one generation."

Should probably be It only?

@Khazidhea and there I thought it had something to do with rancors from Star Wars...

v2p9 ~4%:

Gwynn began to speak, his voice strained as if he were opening a heavy stone door. "My only desire is to see the federation grow prosperous," said Gwynn, his voice strained as if he were opening a heavy stone door.

Redundant heavy stone door imagery.

But as thing are now, If I were to strike you down, this nation would fall into chaos."

If -> if