V1P11:

90%
As he stood between the landing and first floor, she noticed wounds all over his boy.

boy --> body

V1P11:

33%
“It’s about the stampede. I need you to put in front of the front line.”

to put in front of --> to put me in front of

94%
“I’m fine,” Cless snapped at Bonettt, his eyes looking straight forward, sparkling.

Bonettt --> Bonett

V12 P7, 47%
"She remembered feeling deeply guilty about [it] when she saw him do so..."

This might be unnecessary, but 69%:
"It was often too late to treat it once one knew what was happening, and it was said that even the temple was successful in fully curing the ailment [only] a handful of times.'

P8, 12%
"However, when she did lose her temper, she would grasp him by both shoulders, look him close in the eye, and lectured him until they reached a mutual understanding."
I think tenses change during this sentence, so (if I haven't made a hash of it) 'lectured' -> 'lecture'

40%
"If Yusef was the man she loved, why did he name her child a name that was linked to him?"
He -> she

P9, 67%
“Now, pick up your glass. Salt from Išrana, green lemon from Ehrlichia, alcohol from Esterland, and drank here in Ordine—that’s the Four Nation Alliance!”
I think I'm likely incorrect on this one, but drank -> drunk

75%
"They were dripping with grease and a little too charred, but she copied the other three men and took a bite of one."
And this is very persnickety of me, 'other three men' to either 'others' or to 'three men'

V6, P1, around 25%:

Nadiune Nadine hadn’t often been allowed to participate in such political or military meetings.

Extra letter.

Volume 21. Part 5:

26%: "I was you, ya know, supportin' her at lil' more"

37%: "Black Needles" should be "Shadow Needle". This attack's name was used both in volume 14 and volume 16.

67%: "Bibliotique" should be "Bibliotheque" like in volume 19.

v12 p7

~55%

“And one more important thing...” Annette lowered her voice as she stared at the other two ladies. “This mission is extremely dangerous. Please keep that in mind. If either of your identities are revealed, your lives may be in danger.” There was a moment of silence before she went on. “But I have faith that you can complete this mission. Lady Diana, you are the sister of Count Eimoor and the Rose of the Duel Grounds. Lady Helen, you’re known as the Lightning Strike. I firmly believe that the two of you are perfect for this mission.”

Doesn't everyone know who Diana and Helen are? If so, maybe that should be your missions or your jobs or your real purposes or something like that?

V13 P8, 66%
"Met seemed very happy while mixing up the barely, her tail was wagging up a storm"
Barely -> barley

V5 P8
[90%] use ropes to secure the boats to the shore ➡ floats

v5 p1

~50%

Linte suddenly looked at me with a strangely suspicious expression.“"Kudo, you don’t have mirrors at your place, do you?”

=> Kudo (extra double quote removed).

Volume 13:
Page 22: Since Reinbach had already retired, it was up to Reinbach to take on any chalenges the Jamils faced -> Reinhart
page 22: if Reinbach were to overstep and involve himself too much, the other nobles might see that as weakness on Reinbach’s part -> Reinhart's

Volume 14:
Page 14: as the grave slimes' Attract Haunts skill funneled them in -> Spirits
page 66: Class-4: 120,000+ sutes -> 12,000+
Page 106: Humas offer payment when giving quests -> Humans

Volume 15:
Page 75: They called Ryoma's grandpa the God of Military Arts again. See previous comment.

14.2:

First they weaved raw wool into fabric

First they wove raw wool into fabric

It's a verb tense thing.
It's describing the process, so it's more of a "You do this and then this" rather than "They'd done this and then that other thing."

With weaved it'd be "First they'd weaved raw wool into fabric"
All the tenses need to match.

v1p10:

34% - don’t ever aim your wind gun someone -> Missing word: don’t ever aim your wind gun at someone

V1 P1, 50%
"The lord of macig remained as expressionless as ever."
Macig -> magic

P5, 43%
"He was such a malicious man - how dared he look at her so tenderly?"
Dared -> dare

P6, 17%
"Most people would reply that Iora must’ve written the letter. Arvine had made the right decision, asking Iora if she was the author of the letter."
I think, unless I'm missing some other context, that that might be Arvine -> Aides or Leo

P10, 19%
"once they became, respectively, the crown princes and the marchioness"
Princes -> princess

V1 P10, 33%
"Why had the viscount corrected himself from saying Ren Ashton to the Asthon family?"
Asthon -> Ashton

V4 P6 (65% - 1s line at top of page)

They don't look a alike at all.

Remove excess "a".

V8.1P8
12%
then it was better than no one did - better that no one did

@Ingraman Thanks for that! Not quite sure what happened there -- I had to manually search for the line and it definitely took some wrestling to fix!

Volume 12 Part 1
26% the both Summons flew off -> both of the Summons flew off

Here is a special entry for all the old grognards out there:
The text mentions Magitech Mechanic and Magic Mechanic, but...
42% Let's not forget Manic Mechanic, who can make any vehicle twice as fast - but only while ZZ Top is playing.