v5 p3

~10%

You’d think with that being the case, the mood would be a bit more solemn—reverent—asthe new queen faced down her death.

=> as the

~53%

Stanislav was evidently quite mind-boggled. No surprise there, Leah supposed. In that dinky underground ruin, he would’ve never had the change to fit a reagent this large, let alone try one in an experiment.

Should that be chance ?

V3 P5 (89% - 10th & 11th line up from bottom of page)

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"pet" should be "petted" to stay in context with "stood" (past tense) and "said" (past tense).
e.g. I petted them both, stood up, and said goodbye to Niheik.

v2p5 ~26%

Outside of the container dangerous magic beasts abound, but [...]

The sentence structure feels weird. A preposition could help

The outside of the container abounded with dangerous magic beasts, but [...]

or some reordering

Dangerous magic beasts abounded outside of the container, but [...]

or it's just the use of present tense while the second half is in past tense.

~48%

[...] the goblin's head when flying [...]

Should likely be went flying.

~65%

Then there was a clang. Hyse had materialized a massive rifle.
"Barret M-82!" he said, summoning his anti-material rifle.

Somehow the order feels off, like summoning, then summoning again. Maybe

Then there was a clang. Hyse had materialized a massive weapon.
"Barret M-82!" he had said, summoning his anti-material rifle.

~78%

[...] the level of the magic beasts he fought were very high.

Either levels, or was.

v5 p6

~90%

As always, the district had an air about it that was pretty suspect. But when I realized I was completely used to that at this point, I felt kind of frustrated and lonesome.

The shopping district itself was peaceful enough. I was bursting with sketchiness, not explosives.

Should that be It was bursting ?

V2 p7

To that end, we have decided to make it seem like we are only punishing Turgis for his foolish feelings and Shizolda for pushing him in the wrong direction. That way, if Baslam had truly orchestrated this to cause a rebellion in our nation, we should at least be able to avoid a war."

Balsam

Manga Volume 11 Chapter 2
Page 13, 4th panel - "Bright!" might be "Right!" - it does not seem to make any sense as-is.

V17 P4 Chapter 5 :
Uh, since this is the chapter about how not to raze the capitol, I think the following sentence is missing a major word:

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Shouldn't "raze" be in it as follows:
Do you want to raze the capital to the ground or something?!

(This is the last line at the bottom of the page at (89%.)

v5p9 ~50%:

[…] should still be intact , but […]

there's a stray space before the comma.

V4 P7 (28% - 10th line down from top of page)

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Correct indicated wording with "it's".

V8 P7 70%:
I don't think being my partner
The ' above is in the page as a text description of the mark, and should be fixed.

@Hylebos Thanks! It's fixed in the final version.

V4 P7, 9%
"Normally, this wouldn’t be a weapon that you’d pull out in a student tournament, but the union’s top brass don’t want fighters from the halidom and empire [to] hog all the attention"

V8.2 P7, 20%
“Ver well. Oh, actually, hold up a sec, Akira.”
Ver -> Very

58%
"[He] Then switched back to his guns and targetted the foot soldiers."

V6 P5 (58% - 2nd line down from top of page)

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Replace "here" with "her".
(e.g.- ...stolen Wisteria's seat from her...)

V6 p5, ~11%

[…] it also mediated and intervened in quarrels between assault clans. So it wasn't utterly toothless, it thus needed the the strength [...]

The beginning of the second sentence doesn't match up. Maybe

In order not to be toothless, it needed the strength […]

Or something along that idea.

v2p4:

2% - Now that she’d finally come too, […] -> Too many “o”s, I think: she’d finally come to 43% - I lsaw the swordsman […] -> A stray letter wandered into the sentence: I saw the

v7p11 ~62%

Prince Willie is spelled as Willi in

"Please, don't," Willi said with a rueful smile.

v2p3 ~55%

He was reluctant to spend money so lavishly right of the bat, so couldn't bring himself to ask for it right away.

The second half seems to be missing either a conjunction like and so couldn't or the subject like so he couldn't bring.

~80%

"Excuse me, can you please tell me the way to the old annex."

Should in my opinion be ended with a question mark.