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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Corrections in Discussion Topics
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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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    • alahue

      Notorious No More - Corrections Topic
      notorious j-novel heart • • alahue

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      v1 p5

      ~50%

      “Ah! Kartika truly is thoughtful. She already prepared the stones for cooking,” I observed.She’d arranged a circle of large stones a safe distance from the fire—probably using earth magic to pull them from the ground.

      => observed. She’d (missing space)

    • alahue

      Lacey Longs for Freedom - Corrections Topic
      lacey j-novel heart • • alahue

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      hornet65

      V3P3:
      ~21%

      Ellie took in more air in her pouty cheeks, like her father's forge blower.\

      A Bellows?

    • alahue

      The Poison King - Corrections Topic
      poison king • • alahue

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      v5p6:

      67% - Sorry, I’m taking too much. -> Sorry, I’m talking too much.
    • Meiru

      Knock Yourself Out! The Goddess Beat the Final Boss in the Tutorial, So Now I'm Free to Do Whatever - Corrections Topic
      knock yourself • • Meiru

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      Hylebos

      v2p2 ~84%:

      I've got time stopped in my closed space, mister, so we'll be just fine.Man, I'm glad I thought to build those wooden boxes to store them in.

      Missing space between sentences.

    • alahue

      Mercedes and the Waning Moon - Corrections Topic
      mercedes • • alahue

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      v2p14:

      2% - they were the atoms that Mercede and every other -> Mercedes
    • schuburner

      The Reincarnation of the Strongest Exorcist in Another World - Corrections Topic
      strongexorcist • • schuburner

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      V5P6
      ~0%

      “Still, it’s within what skilled adventurers can handle. It wouldn’t be easy, but they’d be able to gather materials as the defeated monsters—if it weren’t for the hydra, that is,”

      Missing letter / wrong word? Since the general discussion is about how you can get ore from the mountains I assume that the passage here is about how strong parties can both deal with the monsters and also gather the ore?; as the defeated monsters->as they defeated monsters

      ~35%

      “Lulum shook her head.

      Extra " at start?; “Lulum shook her head.->Lulum shook her head.

      ~59%

      If I forget about them, it really will be over. For all us—me, them, and the world. That’s what I thought

      Sorry if it is just the way Lulum speaks but missing word?; all us->all of us

      ~59%

      “I think so too. Demons and humans both profit from war, but enough is enough. If you feel the same way, then there’s a good reason for you to cooperate with us.

      Missing ending "?; with us.->with us"

      ~82%

      “Now that I think about it, though, there was no reason for me to suspect you might be the Demon Lord.

      Missing ending "?; Demon Lord.-> Demon Lord."

    • myskaros

      To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic
      land mines • • myskaros

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      Mark Logue

      Volume 11 Part 1
      91% Precious wood was Laffan's most important expert -> export

    • alahue

      Three Cheats from Three Goddesses - Corrections
      three cheats • • alahue

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      v1 chapter 3 Aruna threw up both her arms in utter joy. > Should be Foure

    • schuburner

      No One Gets Past This Gatekeeper - Corrections Topic
      gatekeeper • • schuburner

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      Poncho9761

      V4P6 ~91%:

      "...and began quietly speaking the same time." -> "...and began quietly speaking at the same time."
      (On re-read, I can see this being less an error and more just a style thing so ignore if you think it's an unnecessary change)

      V4P7 ~82%:

      "...she wasn't going save them." -> "...she wasn't going to save them."

      V4P9 ~75%:

      "...still hadn't been to locate Rebirth's..." -> "...still hadn't been able to locate Rebirth's..."

      ~85%:

      "Having found a clear goal and trained diligently using his newfound sense..." -> "Having found a clear goal and trained training diligently using his newfound sense..."
      (Suggestion here but "trained" doesn't sound right, I assume this isn't just me though...)

    • Meiru

      Lady Bumpkin and Her Lord Villain - Corrections Topic
      lady bumpkin • • Meiru

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      Poncho9761

      V4P5 ~100%:

      "...like a doll and never wrapped up in anything unnecessary." -> "...like a doll and never got wrapped up in anything unnecessary."

    • yuzumori

      Welcome to Japan, Ms. Elf! - Corrections Topic
      elf-san • • yuzumori

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      v10p9:

      87% - Eve’s energy was crazy high, and I should’ve known better than to get anywhere near in that state. -> Maybe it’s fine unspoken, but possibly missing word: […] and I should’ve known better than to get anywhere near her in that state.
    • alahue

      I Could Never Be a Succubus! - Corrections Topic
      not a succubus • • alahue

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      v7p7:

      54% - What’s this\?! -> Extra character: What’s this?!
    • L

      By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic
      graceofthegods • • lovelight

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      v16p7 ~39%: "He also sad that he sometimes took samples and tested them..." -> said

    • Meiru

      Bullet Hellion - Corrections
      bullet hellion • • Meiru

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      karasutengu

      V2 P4 (83%)
      The beast's still-beating heard caused blood to spray forth...
      -->The beast's still-beating heart caused blood

    • myskaros

      The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic
      apothecary • • myskaros

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      arghc

      Vol 15 P 1 [78%]

      The only villagers left are my family .... (were my family)
    • alahue

      The Frontier Lord Begins with Zero Subjects - Corrections Topic
      frontier lord • • alahue

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      karasutengu

      V9 P5 (%)

      ...she's a bit weary.
      -->she's a bit wary.
      (wary - feeling or showing caution about possible dangers or problems)

    • myskaros

      Min-Maxing My TRPG Build - Corrections Topic
      minmaxing trpg • • myskaros

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      V10 P2, 61%
      "Etan had deftly slipped passed Yorgos"
      Passed -> past (I think - I got less sure on googling, but that still instinctively seems more correct)
      V10 P3, 63%
      "was running fresh boulders to the firing line When his betters had run out spears"
      When -> when, and run out [of] spears
      66%
      "but he's got the skin of a maiden!." (unneeded fullstop at the end)
      V10 P4, 88%
      "at the cost of the occasional hand with chores around the shop ." (space before the fullstop)

    • myskaros

      Dimension Wave - Corrections Topic
      dimension wave • • myskaros

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      Hylebos

      v4p6 ~40%:

      I'm not...sure how I feel about that, I thoughtI.

      Erroneous I at end.

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