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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Corrections in Discussion Topics
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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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    • majikayo

      From Old Country Bumpkin to Master Swordsman - Corrections Topic
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      v8 p12

      ~10%

      I wonder if Allucia is enjoying the hot spring as well.But hey,the men’s and women’s baths are obviously separated, so there’s no need to ask that question.

      => well. But hey, the (missing spaces).

      ~20%

      I’m acting like a suspicious old man—this is a bad look, I know, but I have no idea what to do.Please, someone save me.

      => do. Please (missing space).

      ~85%

      Buteither way, sitting around a dining table like this is nice.

      => But either (missing space).

    • philhouse

      The Goddess Says, "Kill the Tsundere Witch!" - Corrections
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      V1p10 11% close to the sealing -> ceiling

    • majikayo

      The Dorky NPC Mercenary Knows His Place - Corrections Topic
      dorky npc • • majikayo

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      karasutengu

      V4 P3 (39% - 10th line from bottom of page)

      Since this tactic involved aiming at an attack at the underbellies of enemies flying above,...

      aiming an attack...

      (Better syntex - you're aiming at enemy ships, not at the battle itself)

    • alahue

      Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic
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      v4p3:

      60% - since the private forces of the nobility were just that—private--they followed -> A double hyphen was used, instead of a dash.
    • alahue

      Notorious No More - Corrections Topic
      notorious j-novel heart • • alahue

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      v2p9:

      98% - […], Ria launched herself from my arms -> Lia
    • majikayo

      The Hero and the Sage, Reincarnated and Engaged - Corrections Topic
      hero and sage • • majikayo

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      V6P1
      ~74%

      as he finally yelled, still writhing over the ground

      Apologies if it is okay as it is, but maybe wrong word / missing an 'on'? writhing over the ground->writhing on the ground
      (or writhing over the ground->writhing over on the ground)

    • yuzumori

      An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic
      hookup hiccups • • yuzumori

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      @MFDelta said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

      v11p7 ~85%:

      I had heard on some trivia show that Finland was where Santa Clause was from, but who knows really.

      The Santa Clause was filmed in the United States and Canada by Hollywood Pictures, though it is possible that Yoshin does not know this

      It's a real classic, that one.

    • alahue

      In Another World with Household Spells - Corrections Topic
      house-spells j-novel heart • • alahue

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      eggnog

      V3P2 46%:
      I'm so happy that the weaving class uses the right weaving terms! However, I don't think "wrapping the thread around the loom" makes sense. That sounds like Patience is making a yarn ball with the loom frame at its center. I guess that could apply to looms without moving parts, like tapestry frames, where you manually snake the weft between stationary warp threads for every row. But Patience later says "the wefts were threaded with a quick swish", so that means the warp must've been threaded into heddles that can move up and down, so I'm assuming the class is using rigid heddle looms or tabletop harness looms. To my limited knowledge, "wrapping the warp around the loom" wouldn't be possible with those models. A common general term for setting up a new warp on a loom is "warping the loom".

    • alahue

      Royal Spirits - Corrections Topic
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      V1P5:

      15%: "Could someone pop off back to Japan and grab me a bike or segway, please?"

      This might need some review. According to Wikipedia "Segway" is a registered trademark and I've usually seen it spelled with a capital S.

    • majikayo

      Duchess in the Attic - Corrections Topic
      attic duchess • • majikayo

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      karasutengu

      V4 P6 (94% - 3rd line from bottom of last page)

      She had competed with her brother before as target practice and won,...

      competed with her brother before at target practice...
      -or- competed with her brother before in target practice...
    • alahue

      From Villainess to Healer - Corrections Topic
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      v5p10:

      98% - I imagined that these peeches could get you […] -> It’s been all about the peaches on either side of this spelling, so I’m assuming that it’s a typo. :)
    • myskaros

      To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic
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      Hylebos

      v11p6 ~26%:

      If Metea found a hole that was the perfect shape, I bed she'd—"

      bed -> bet

    • schuburner

      Nia Liston - Corrections Topic
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      kingpendragon

      V8, P4, around 8%:

      I’d rather you didn’t expectme expect me to do anything else.

      Missing space.

    • alahue

      Old Knight, New Post - Corrections Topic
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      karasutengu

      V1 P11 (80% - 11th line from bottom of page)

      A number of candidates had forth,...

      A number of candidates had come forth,...

      (Better syntex for understanding)

    • philhouse

      Pens Down, Swords Up - Corrections Topic
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      Serah

      It might be just me and my bad English, so I ask first if someone can explain it to me if I just misunderstood

      prepub snippet

      I do not understand why the verb Scout is written like a subject.

      I can somewhat understand it when it is in other parts meant to highlight Scouting Magic, making it stand out more so people understand it is something special.

      But sometimes it feels rather confusing like in this case where it does not feel right? Can someone enlighten me? Thanks in advance!

    • majikayo

      Looks like a Job for a Maid! The Tales of a Dismissed Supermaid - Corrections Topic
      job for a maid • • majikayo

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      karasutengu

      V1 P4 (44% - 3rd line below Sentence beginning with:"Astrid, the president"...)

      ...presented their inventions and hobnob with colleagues.

      and hobnobbed with colleagues.

      (since the verb "presented" is used (past-tense) "hobnob" should also be past-tense (e.g. ...in which all inventors in attendance presented their inventions and hobnobbed with colleagues.

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      D-Genesis streaming problem
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      jpwong

      @jjyoung Just curious where you see that it should expire on Sep 15 because when I hover over the parts it shows they expired Aug 15 which seems to fall in line with the general expiration rule of the 15th of the month following the release of the ebook.

    • alahue

      Water Magician - Corrections Topic
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      Arc 1 v5 p17

      ~10%

      He couldn’t cut through the knives when he got close, and the moment he moved away, the throwing knives hurtled his way. Ryo had never faced such an before, which was perhaps why—

      such an what before? Maybe opponent?

      ~63%

      Ryo remembered that Sera, the Matriarc, and the guardian beast from Nils’s village had said regarding the substance emanating from his body.

      => Matriarch

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