v17p3 ~46%:

Mizelia and Cilia expertly dragged MIya off by her arms, and the other two followed.

MIya -> Miya.

V2 P9 (0% - 11th line down from top of page)

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Why is Quinza's father wearing a dress? (I don't recall anything in the narrative so far to indicate he was a cross-dresser) I believe this is an error and should read as:
"The man was wearing exceptionally fanciful dress and wielding a magnificent staff."

(Remove "an")

V3 P4 (91% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe this should read:
"...left open and unguarded."

V3 P4, 12%
"Hein, I intend to ask His Majesty..."
I assume Hein is a nickname, but including it here just in case it should instead be Heinz

23%
Come to think of it, there was Priest Nax, Prince Robur, and a boy who was the lady's classmate there with her"
Should that be Prince Regulus? (Or if instead her brother turned up, Lord (/Marquess, or other subsidiary title) Robur?)

"Since I made a donation... you ought to provide commensurate assistant"
Assistant -> assistance

"What?! Duchess Rober?!"
Rober -> Robur

35%
"Ever the high priest. No sooner had she spoken than he deployed a barrier spell around herself"
She -> he, herself -> himself

55%
"That day, when that good-for-nothing Second Prince got a wonderful fiancee far beyond his station but couldn’t even manage the simple task of meeting her face-to-face for the first time, it confirmed once more what a failure he was."
I don't think this sentence quite makes sense as is, unless Duchess Robur thinks that the Second Prince is also a good for nothing, and that Lavi is a wonderful fiancee. Instead, perhaps:
"That day, when that good-for-nothing got a wonderful fiancee of the Second Prince, far beyond her station, but couldn’t even manage the simple task of meeting him face-to-face for the first time, it confirmed once more what a failure she was."

"I’d ripped open that failure’s belly with my signature magic. But I didn’t kill him. I left my son, who was learning healing magic, by that failure’s side."
Him -> her

65%
"She does meet with the former prince outside sometimes, doesn’t she?”
I think this is referring to Heinz (since Prince Regulus is neither former or, I gather, hasn't visited the nearby atelier). I'm not fully on top of terms for nobility, but prince should only fit if the son of a Royal Duke (which I can't recall if this is the case here or not). If not, perhaps Lord (or even a subsidiary title like Marquess) might fit better.

Volume 7 - Part 7:

[57%] preconceptions aboutthe Dark Isle >> add space [90%] “We didn’t realize that I remembered it wrong! Ba ha ha!” >> should be we

Copying from main discussion to here:

@Libri-Liberorum said in Mercedes and the Waning Moon Vol. 4 Discussion!:

While the empire had promised to keep the academy's doors open, Beatrix had apprently planned to remove the female students and use the school as an isolation facility. Mercedes had confirmed this with Beatrix herself.

I am utterly perplexed by this paragraph. I can't connect anything in it to the context of the rest of the story. The empire doesn't run the academy, why are they promising to keep its doors open? They don't send students, so how can the female students be removed? How does removing them turn it into an isolation facility? Who is being isolated?

V3P1 ~77%
"Huh? Zodiac was in..." -> "Huh? Zodiac Zodian was in..."

V3P2 ~50%
"Oh, well this really something." -> "Oh, well this really is something."

V5P10 ~78%
"...the self-claimed Game Master..." -> "...the self-proclaimed Game Master..."

At 24%, It’s the simplest plance and I don’t need to use my head.

Not sure what was supposed to go here, possibly plan?

V2P9, 35%: “The mana inside her trashed about before flooding out of her.” - thrashed

Volume 4 Part 6
07% barely left that Char -> barely left when Char
08% didn't seem too share -> didn't seem to share
66% That's why y'all are here for. -> That's what y'all are here for.
72% areattacked -> are attacked

V9 P6, 14%
"Sara walked off, feeling a little embarrassed, and Allen followed, tugging along by her hand"
Tugging -> tugged

V2 P3

69% "I was the no different"

Redundant word, the.

61% "You've gained the Village Appraisal II skill." 70% "I also got the Villager Appraisal II skill." 75% "Village Appraisal II gave me way more detailed info"

Village or Villager. Should these be consistent?

V2P3

I'd been having so much in the ladies' course

I think that should be "... so much fun in ..."

vol1p6 around 60%:

The monster was a full five meters tall, and probably weighed a whopping eighty kilograms.

Is this right? That's a beanpole of a beast! In US measurements, that's about 16 feet tall, 176 pounds. From the illustration, maybe 800 KG?

The Petty Villain Plays By The Rules
Volume 1 Part 6

22% and so much the learner -> and so must the learner

@Khazidhea said in Isekai Walking - Corrections Topic:

V5 P4, 21
"If you asked me if it was delicious, I'd be forced to admit that I'd had better in this world"
My memory is poor, and I'm reading too many isekais and some details are overlapping in my head, but I thought I'd check: has he had fish before in this world? Or is he instead remembering back to Earth? (Or is he instead saying, he's had better (non-fish dishes) in this world?)

I think he's referring to having had better food (including non-fish dishes) in this world. It threw me off the first time I read it too, but it's more obvious after the following conversations where everyone else in the party is unimpressed by it, but Sora still picks up a bunch out of flavor nostalgia.

Vol 11 canto 1 p12

or an time-tested blade
"an" -> "a"

feel like he'd becomean adult yet.
-> become an