@homura1650 said in Tearmoon Empire - Corrections Topic:

She saw a learning opportunity

Nope. That's in Ludwig's POV and She refers to Mia there.

@b-scot-morgan Thanks for catching those!

Volume 2 P10

[68%] I lay back on the huge bed big, which was large enough to sleep the three of us all at once -> big ?; not sure [71%] "It's fine, Aya said we shouldn't wake up, seeing as you looked so tired." -> you?

@iseguy Ah, that should be "yes" - went in and fixed it. Thanks for catching that!

V8p3
[56%] Sitting on the throne before a massive status of an angel -> statue

Volume 8 - Part 4:

[16%] that of an ouroboros,those tasked with representing ► Missing space. [26%] A chain of explosions were whipped up, sending Lufas ► It should be was? [52%] so there was no point in leaving behind descendents. ► It should be descendants. [67%] Orm finally realized that,at some point, the Goddess’s ► Missing space.

Volume 8 - Part 3:

[4%] the ground explode to her heart's content. However, ► It should be heart’s (different ’ ). [50%] human beings, though.Having strengthened herself ► Missing space.

@kevin-s Just to add to this

spoiler

From the author

https://twitter.com/NaMelanza/status/1163327079187800064?s=20

Volume 6 - Part 3:

[79%] in bird puns, or they were so so above it all that ► Duplicate so. [87%] that a bird pun-crackingIroha looked attractive ► It should be pun-cracking Iroha (space). [93%] giving me a doubtful frown,but now wasn’t the ► Missing space.

Volume 4 - Part 3:

[32%] her eyes sharp. “I must tell my sister Kintsuno the ► The dialogue's starting double quote alone is in italic format. [78%] the Dark World. At your service, General Valentine. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [93%] Despite her words, she had a big smile on her face ► Missing period. [95%] impulse struck Flio to check on his childrens’ status. ► It should be children’s.

Volume 4 P5

[77%] That's why, from the perspective of a guardian, she continue to keep watch over Rafinha. -> she would continue?

Volume 4 - Part 1:

[8%] Emperor Egbert hasn’t asked the couple to ► It should be hadn’t? [58%] before the owners had even even moved in. ► Duplicate even.

Volume 7 - Part 2:

[99%] “It’s experience.They have to see that ► Missing space.

Volume 19 - Part 9:

[2%] Felicia, who was stood next to him, said with a hard, ► Maybe who stood (remove was) or who was standing? [49%] for the Glass Gobletwas well known among members ► It should be Goblet was (space). [59%] as the masked man who brought Homura to tears..” ► Duplicate period. [81%] Despite his lack of talent, however. he had persevered. ► Wrong period.

Volume 2 - Part 2:

[94%] You swore an oath to Lady Elsa. You promised ► It should be Erza.

3.9

run home and ger her something to wear...

“get”

3.4

I guess two to three months is how long it takes on average to learn magic skills.

“I guess on average it takes two to three months to learn magic skills.”
(Not technically wrong, just odd syntax and a redundant phrase.)

Reaches maximum speed of 50 kmph
When its Ability is activated, reaches 100 kmph

“km/h” or “kph,” the former being technically correct.
(“kmph” is never used in the US; probably because we think it's “thousand miles per hour.”)

Volume 1 - Part 10:

[Generic] Checking again part 8 I noticed the nickname there is Lightning Blades (plural) instead of Lightning Blade (singular) like in part 10 (where it's used not once but 6 times). [34%] a female dwarven blacksmith named Rike Tanya. ► It should be Lieke.

Volume 9 P4

[~48%] The gate behind them was partially destroyed, creating an opening for the others to escape though -> through [~88%] [...] given to them by the concierge Celestina, who had met in Quenza. -> who they had met?