v10 p2

~80%

There apparently wasn’t that big a difference between a human spending a colossal amount of mana to perform aDivine Summoning and the goddesses themselves choosing to descend into the world to show their own might, in terms of the Church’s reaction.

a Divine (missing space)

V6, P6, around 53%:

“ You’ve got the processing side handled?”

It's missing the opening quotation mark.

V11, P5, around 56%:

Training mechs had limited fuel capacity—moving so rigorously would consume the fuel in an instant.

I'm 90% sure it should be "vigorously".

V7, P3, around 22%:

What that possibility really revealed, more than anything, was just how far from grace Evlan Elvan had already fallen.

Typo.

Around 40%:

It was a magic steel halberd, split halfway down the hilt.

Missing word.

V5P8:

44%: "She was stronger than Daggers and amazing;y sharp."

v5p3, ~26%

Smiling, Nina headed for the table where Nina and the others were waiting for her.

While I wouldn't put it past Nina to be able to exist in multiple places at once (any maid could do the same), I nevertheless suspect that someone else's name should be in the latter part of the sentence.

10.12:

I think if I ever divide and have ancestors of my own

Um, "ancestors"? Offspring are descendants.

V5 P9, 48%
“I see... I think I understand why elven sorcery hasn’t progressed or seen much innovated over the years."
Innovated -> innovation

v1 p11

~10%

“I was never told that Tranquil Firelight can grant the power of flight,” Tsugho said.

Tsuguho

Volume 4 Part 5
10% certain my would actually -> my father would actually

Charlie85 has a good suggestion for this one as well.

94% massive amounts of high-quality wood -> massive amounts of high-quality fuel

Ellen is already aware of the plans to use the kilns to convert wood into charcoal. As charcoal is a higher quality fuel than raw wood, it is unlikely that she is looking forward to using wood when charcoal is available.

Volume 3 Part 9
10%: it transformed Dunhill into a flaming blade as he charged his opponent. | Then at 11%: Standing amid them as though entirely unaffected, he smirked and sprang forward | wasn't he already charding his opponent? Perhaps the first entry should be: as he prepared to charge his opponent.

v6 p3

~50%

“He’s illiterate and old, as is every custodian that has ever been employed to manage the royal archive. Frankly, I find it a questionable practice, but an illiterate custodian cannot disseminate the contents of the archive to the outside world. And an old custodian is more or less a guarantee they can’t learn how to read even if they wanted to. That they would go so far speaks volumes about the secrets being kept here.”

Something awkward about the grammar here -- an old custodian isn't a guarantee, rather employing an old custodian is a guarantee. And the the singular "old custodian" clashes with the with the plural "they can't" IMO. Maybe that was intended to be a gender-neutral "they", but as an alternative:

And an old custodian is more or less guaranteed to be unable to learn to read even given the desire to do so.

v5p8 ~87%

[…] closely with the Treasure Guild to produce the Posiedon, and Milld […[

Should be Poseidon.

Vol 14 part 5

~83%: shoulda figured you’d be too dim-witted to refuse my generous offer,” said Santor

refuse should probably be accept

shoulda figured you’d be too dim-witted to accept my generous offer,” said Santor

Volume 14 Part 9
75% something that caught my idea -> something that caught my eye
Although, I like xdbx' suggestion on this too.

96% the deciding factor lied ->the deciding factor lay

V11 final - would avail should be wouldn’t, out duties should be out their duties

V2P2
~44%

“If any of the facilities in this town are worse than that our capital’s, I’ll be sure to stick it to you!” he’d said.

Missing word? than that our capital’s->than that of our capital’s (or extra word ->`than our capital's)

V1p7 ~42%

“The pair's lips parted, andInami's hands followed the outline of Aoi's body, caressing him all over.”

Missing space