V2 P8 (52% - last line at bottom of page)

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Replaced outlined word with "stairs" since this paragraph mentioned stairs leading downward.

V4 P8 15%:
superior talentHowever...
talent, However
(missing punctuation and space)

V2 p17 ~12%:
I don't know the source material, so just beware that this might be an issue with the source itself. It could very well be intended for all I know though.

I've never seen her put her all into a fight.
Should probably be "She" or the paragraph should be italicized.

V5P6 29%:

plateeees
earthquakeeeees

The drawing-out-vowels thing that gets attributed to some characters in J-novels doesn't really work in English and I can't understand how those characters are supposed to sound. But drawing out the silent vowels makes no sense. It should probably be the A in these words that gets extended.

v10p8 (very optional correction?):

18% - […] I guarantee you it’s something nobody would want to touch with a ten-foot pole.” […] A ten-foot pole? -> Given that Japan is metric, this phrase is rather jarring to me, but I don’t have any guesses on the words used in the Japanese original… Same? 3m pole? Some other phrase that shares the concept?

v12p13 ~27%

Strength returned to its broken limbs, Its broken four limbs regained their strength, [...]

The duplication of "broken limbs" is ugly.
Also, the comma should be a dot, or the "Its" should be lowercase.

v10 p8
~1%

Even back in Beaden, Curuni had carried the saberboars on the assumption that she wouldn’t be fighting—it was unreasonable to ask anyone to join a battle

¶ carrying so much weight around.“Mmmgh...”

Inappropriate paragraph break.

@SomeOldGuy said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

V13P6 8%:
we realized that we alsO needed to
also

65%:
WHen it came to me
When

Thank you for catching this!!

V4 P9
(75% - 16th line down from top of page or 14th line up from bottom of page)

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Since the story-line talks about the feline and canine tribes attacking Lily's tribe together, there should be another word between the two in the high-lighted box such as:

"How can we fight off two tribes at once?"

or

"How can we fight off multiple tribes at once?"

V4 P10
(5% - 4th line up from bottom of page
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Correct word in highlighted box to potion's
e.g., "the potion's effects"

(74% - 13th line down from top of page
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Add missing word it in highlighted box
e.g., "What the heck is it made of?"

4.6:

She was the one who had fallenin love

She was the one who had fallen in love

V13P4

0%: "The long wait time for the share also meant that there was" -> shade 64%: "Then, it began taking in the magic from Dahlia’s fingertips like it was unraveling a thread." -> "thread" doesn't really unravel. Fabric or braids can unravel. I think the visual/metaphor that you want might be: "unraveling like thread/yarn from a sweater/spool"

V5 P2 (10% - 13th line down from top of page)

Remove redundant "once"
e.g:

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or

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V2 P7 (38% - 4th line down from top of page)

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Seems like a word is missing such as "now"...
e.g. "You said 'the next' just now, right?"
I think that sounds better.

@Geolykt Agreed. I've heard of "choice produce" in grocery stores (which I think is the idea here), but not "depends" as a level of quality--which would be especially inappropriate for a higher level of quality.

V17 P3, 0%
"Yet despite Ganudo’s small size, the wealth gap was vast."
Ganudo's -> Gyrados Ganudos'

Volume 5 part 10 55%

There are plenty of jobs that an adventurer can do ... and guard envoys

Is envoys the correct word here? In this context an envoy would be a diplomat, guarding them would usually be a job for the knights in this sort of setting, adventurers who aren't professional bodyguards would not be a typical choice, it might happen if there is a staffing shortage but shouldn't be a typical job for adventures. Convoys would make a lot more sense in context.

v3p6 ~13%

"I'm sorry? [...] what you discussed?""

has an extra " at the end.

v7p14 ~87%

Then must assume you're using your fae facet to fuel [...]

should likely be

Then I must assume [...]