Is there an other correction topic for this series ?
Two mistakes I found in part one of volume 12 (76%) :

Alo went through the gate first while the two girls followed, both clearly doubting Alo's sincerity.

Both should be written Aloh like the rest of the chapter.

V 10 P 6 - "Precedent really has meaning" should be "has no meaning". It's unprecedented in the following paragraph.

@karasutengu said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

V5 P11 (58% - 1st line at top of page)

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I believe a word is missing here, and it may be due to translation. However, for proper English syntax "the" should be inserted as in: ...come to the capital...

Given it being Carmine, "come to our capital" also works.
But there needs to be something there, yes.

V4 P7 (88% - 2nd line up from bottom of page)

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Change "he" to the.

v5 p3

~55%

I’d been about to explain how the Northcours were constantly hosting guests, that Samuel and I would often play the hanon for those guests after dinner, and that that was the reason Samuel and I hadn’t had time to compose. I’d cut myself off so I could keep it a secret that Percival and Albert had visited the Northcourt manor.

=> Northcourts

@SilverFuton oh shoot, i forgot this is a general thread for the whole book series

Volume 13 Part 3
45% an extremely a deep sigh > an extremely deep sigh
46% chuckled as glanced -> chuckled as [she | we] glanced
81% should be fine also as you follow our instructions -> should be fine as long as you follow our instructions
89% Jade Winged -> Jade Wings

inb4 Shiō

v16p7:

48% - […] he had been known to work in nothing but a work shorts, […] -> Extra, or missing word(s)? “in nothing but work shorts” or “in nothing but a pair of work shorts”

Volume 5 - Part 8:

Ms Maliksi

I can't recall if I missed any from the other parts but the contractions Mr., Ms., and Mrs. should have a period after them. So in this case, Ms. Maliksi.

v1p5 ~40%:

Christina obeyd and carried an item envelopped in cloth to Dylac, placing it on the ground.

envelopped -> enveloped.

~80%:

While at a slow pace, I was steadily making progress in my mastery of Graspin Magic.

Graspin -> Grasping.

Volume 2 - Part 1:

[21%]

the man in all black

should be hyphenated since it's an adjective (or noun). all-black

Volume 3 - Part 6:

[8%]

By bending truths and lives,

lives > lies

[38%]

They had to be about three hundred meters away, so Dorth relaxed.

And then the arrow zoomed through the air, dashing Dorth's optimism.

These confused me because it is talking through a POV of Franco's vassal, facing Dorth's (or rather, Luke's) army. It doesn't make sense why Dorth is being described here.

p12v4 13%:

"Chairman Yusef, how about I send you a portrait of Jonas on the day he confers his barony?" -> wouldn't the barony be confered upon him? Later on Dahl thinks about receiving her barony so that's probably the right phrasing?

v1p5 ~46%:

A Rank-2species—Arachne."

2species -> 2 species.

v1 p5

~30%

I was nervous about setting out on a journey, but it was a good chance to get out of my normal environment. Rright now, I was eating a peaceful meal. That alone made it feel worth leaving the temple.

=> Right

@pcj said in orrections to Vol 13:

@karasutengu that just means it's been a while since they made any mistakes for anyone to report.

That, or that anyone felt engaged enough to report something. :p I’ve stopped reporting missed spaces for the most part, unless there were other things to report and I remembered where those missed spaces were. ^o^

SS1 P6 (54% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

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Need to add a missing "a", i.e. to a cafe.

(In English syntax "a" is used when referring to someone or something for the first time in a text or conversation.)