V7P5, 22%: “Then there was Clay” - Cray

v3p10:

72% - The preparations have been made, holy savor -> Typo: savior

V1 P2 (10% - 6th line down from top of page)

That might be why none of the Gabak Platoon members had dared to sexually harassed me.

Should be corrected to read:
"had dared to sexually harass me."

Volume 1 - Part 3:

[99%] She’dgotten so worked up >> missing space

v1p3 ~18%

[...] and she still giving me [...]

and she still was giving me

v1p3 ~40%

as I thrust my first into the air

should likely be fist

v1p3 ~59%

I never would've thought that telling Diana he was a coward [...]

He told Rubens, not Diana (yet).

v1p4 ~2%

In response to that, I'd said, "Is it....

One of the commas should go.

v1p4 ~62%

[...] wouldn't hesitate to get rid of those soldiers ."

v1p5 ~23%

[...] I genuinely that believe every woman [...]

should be believe that

v1p9 ~57%

we'll be delivering a monthly supply of [...] to her every month

should probably be "a monthlong supply"

v1p11 ~29%

[...] she pleaded desperately .

v1p12 ~50%

[...] nodding and blushing..

v1p12 ~78%

"I apologize. my emotions [...]

v1p12 ~86%

"Please take car of my son, "

v1p13 ~1%

"young master, "as

same sentence:

[...] children of nobles,but [...]

v1p13 ~66%

[...] may be used to deceive men.

Misses the closing quotation sign.

V19P3
~31%

It must be sacred ground—a true sanctuary—although no dragon appeared as they did in the city of water and the imperial capital.”

The only dragons (recently) in the Imperial Capital were the 3 skeletal dragons summoned during the attack on the Alverns, because this mentions the water dragon in the city of water being seen, is it maybe about the flower dragon in the republic's capital? the imperial capital->the city of craft (or the republic's capital)

~31%

“The flower dragon alighted in the city of water.

I think the dragon in the city of water is the water dragon (volume 12 epilogue)?; The flower dragon->The water dragon (unless it is talking about the Republic's capital city of water->city of craft)

V19P7
~59%

“I have always told you...that she died of an illness. But I had my doubts from the first, and I never stopped investigating in secret.

Sorry if I am wrong, I tried searching but could not see this as a phrase, so maybe wrong word?; first->start

V19P10

V1 P2

~20%

Her soft, bewitching smile and the warmth where her body touchedmine left me dizzy.

=> touched mine

@Charlie85 heads up...

Additionally, when mentioning any errors found in a published book, please send them to support@j-novel.club. -Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!

I noticed there's a whole lot of italicizing of Ai's thoughts, especially at the start of chapter 1. I don't to a lot of (any) writing, but if the book is already first person, do Ai's thoughts really need to be italicized? Everything at the start of the chapter is already her thoughts if she's the one narrating the story.
Later it goes to third person, but the first person section at the beginning I don't think should have any italics for thoughts, right?

@hornet65 said in Proud to Be the Villainess - Corrections Topic:

@Geezer-Weasalopes
In Japanese I don't believe there is a difference between the two. They would both be spelled the same using the same characters. It's only an English distinction, and basically only the United Kingdom uses Earl.
This seems more like a translation error. It was translated as Earl a single time and every other time it was translated as count.

Gack.
Idiot me, I didn't look at the story text you quoted.
Yes, TL error, given the context.

Excuse me while I go slam my head against a wall repeatedly.

V6P2, 53%: “He’ds probably been worried“ - He’d
82%: “bigger than the redboars” - redbears.

V16 part6 near the end 8th paragraph from the end
Particularly frightening was the fact that unlike gold, snow was free. You'd think there'd be label costs.

Should that not be * Labour* costs?

@Devon unsure if this is a correction or just an error from the author but in p2 the # after the / in "wooden sword mastery" jumped from 1000 to 1500 on the second appearance. Nothing big, but was noticed.

V1 P1 61% "fifth [frincess]" -> princess

v12p1:

73% - There was a marinaded white fish made to look […] -> Best choice? It looks weird to me. ^^; A google search seemed to indicate that marinade can be a verb, but most of the results said that “marinade” is the noun, and “marinate” is what you do with it… “a marinated white fish”. Eeny meeny miney mo?