SS2 P1

The entire prologue is in bold. [33%] Mia could think about someone else's unbalanced for hours on end -> I think that's meant to be something like 'unbalanced diet', isn't it? [78%] At that point, critical mass had been reached: The circle of dangers started swelling on its own -> That should be 'dancers'.

V7P7, ~9%

"If you can't even take this guy, [...]

I am pretty sure he didn't mean to disparage Kirigaya, and instead meant to say

"If even you can't take this guy, [...]

like, despite the strength shown in the fight before can't beat him.

V4P10

... the future events that I knew from TokiRella! Would greatly deviate.

"Would" -> "would". Also, perhaps italicize TokiRella!

(Incidentally, the recent update to the forum software now italicizes quotations. I really don't like this, as sometimes italicization vs not is an important distinction.)

@Charlie85 said in The Reincarnated Mastermind: Sundering Fate with Magic Swords - Corrections Topic:

Thanks for the fix!

V3P8 ~88%

The silhouette inside the tent started in shock.

Should probably be stared? It doesn't sound like he started anything.

Not necessarily. "Started" can mean "jumped or twitched as from being startled or surprised," so it does work.

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Arc 2 Volume 1 - Part 8:

[12%]

Heard that the knights of each region will come protect us as we travel from town to town too,"

I suggest I heard, unless the grammar was intentional as something like casual/informal speech(?)

Volume 1 - Part 7:

[~42%]

And ever since Juliues knew they'd be marching into the capital themselves,

Juliues > Julius

v6p4:

41% - I certainly looked like […] -> It certainly looked like […]

Volume 10 Part 7
64% dug an shelter -> dug a shelter

V6 P11, 52%
"There was already a chance that the light mana I’d inadvertently given them would affect their growth; I couldn’t risk them becoming malnutritioned too."
Malnutritioned -> malnourished

59%
"The presumed dark god somewhere overheard was still rambling, though I was no longer paying much attention to what he was saying."
Overheard -> overhead, methinks

V13P11

~11%-14%, ~61%

I know this is a bit early, but Gaia is a goddess in Greek mythology, not a god. Of course this might be different in this story, but it's sometimes also difficult to infer gender from Japanese, especially with -sama or -dono , so I'll just leave it here as a reminder until a real meeting happens (if ever).

V8P8 ~86%

Their pro-Empire faction in Rocourt […]

Should likely only be The pro-Empire faction.

v6 p4

~65%

“Tatiliu, isn’t there something you should tell them?” I said.

Tailtiu

V6P5, 30%:

Prior to today, Leah controlled the portal town in Hilith. Lyla, the one in Oral. Magna Malum controlled two of six on the continent.
That number just grew to six with Leah's acquisition of Kiefer.
That left three more to lock down..

- the maths suggests this should be three

93%: “half an houror so?”

P8, 8%: “That cluster of shrubs was the only [thing] that sprouted more than a few feet off the ground for miles”

V1P5 88%

Takane. You picked a young one to get back at me, and you made sure he was uneducated to protect your pride, right?

Hoshi was making it sound like Inami hadn't been able to bear the fact that Aoi was less educated than him.

The second paragraph doesn't make sense after the first. Why would Inami be unable to bear that Aoi was less educated than him when, according to Hoshi, Inami specifically selected Aoi because he was uneducated to protect his pride?

I think it's is actually about Inami being unable to bear that he was less educated than Hoshi

v11p4 57%
smiths!"wd

Then I'll personally feed you nutricious, gentle meals

”Gentle meals” is not a common expression in English.
Does Vute mean something like "nutricious and delicious" or more like "nutricious and easily to digest"?

V6 P4, 48%
"Like Airi said, there must have been a spell over this place that made the interior seem much more spacious than it appeared."
Seem and appear are synonyms, so with the way the sentence is structured one should be changed. Some options might be:
"There must have been a spell over this place that made the interior seem much more spacious than it (first) appeared."
Or "there must have been a spell over this place that made the interior seem much more spacious than [its appearance from outside would suggest could be possible]

V6 P5, 8%
"SuddenlyI heard someone speak to me."
Missing space