Thank you for the corrections to vol. 2 posted thus far.

V11P1
~12%

We’ve secured permission to relocate.

Missing starting "?; We've->"We've

~35%

Therefore, complete annihilation was almost unheard in ordinary battles

Missing word?; unheard->unheard of

~35%

I’ve submitted the paperwork to change our base of operations to the Hunter’s Guild in the royal capital.

Wrong word?; As far as I can remember Can doesn't have a hunter's party and it's just her; our->my

13.10:

There was just something to cool about

There was just something too cool about

though itwas partly their fault

though it was partly their fault

So with the reveal that it was Satomi who was the Consultant for Aera, I think volume 2 needs to be revisited. Does anyone have the Japanese version of this:

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This would read much better as they/them if it was not explicitly using male pronouns in the original.

I know I would need to email support for changes to a published volume. Just wanted a discussion here first as I do not have access to the original.

V4P3 ~74%:
'...Gawain when standing Sol and his girls.' -> '...Gawain when standing next to Sol and his girls.'
V4P4 ~57%:
'...made of water came into be in this world.' -> '...made of water came into being in this world.'

V5P1 ~58%:
'...the new variety of artichoke wouldn't...' -> '...the new variety of sunchoke wouldn't...'

V5P2 ~30%
'The duke could visit the school often...' -> 'The duke could would visit the school often...'
This feels like it's just phrased in a way where the meaning is lost without this minor change. I could be wrong but I think this minor change makes the logic of the statement fit better.

V5P9 ~47%
'Arnette Halserg' -> 'Arnette Halsberg'

~87%
'...and If they had arrived...' -> '...and If if they had arrived...'

Volume 5 Part 5
34% The mushroom from before when nowhere to be seen. -> The mushrooms from before were nowhere to be seen.
43% Every time you had to put or remove them -> Every time you had to put them on or remove them
57% Both my hands were both firmly planted (remove the latter 'both')
93% Although "I have fiiiiiiish!" is gramatically correct, I wonder if it isn't supposed to be 'hate' instead of 'have' in that sentence. It would make more sense with his previous comment about not wanting to be in the water.

1.2:

dog or cat here.But still...! There's no way I'm abandoning beast ears!I may look like

dog or cat here. But still...! There's no way I'm abandoning beast ears! I may look like

10.2

each gold medallion was worth more than the average salary of the working class.

So, average hourly salary, daily salary, weekly salary, yearly salary, or lifetime salary?

I've seen this mistake in probably half a dozen translated novels. In fact, I don't think I've ever seen it translated correctly. I've never seen it corrected all the times I've reported it, which makes wonder if there's some kind of cultural disconnect. Is it rude to define it?

“If you would have told me a month ago that we’d been hauling crates full of gold medallions...”

“you'd told me” “we'd be” (If you had told me we would be [I would have called you crazy].)

v1p1:

9% - You finally figured it out. -> Missing opening quotation mark: “You finally figured […]

V1P2, 63%: “ It had only taken two days of people-hunting to send me into a funk.” - random bold letter

v4p1:

64% - “Guan’s saying, ‘I’ve never eaten anything […]. I wanna eat the raw monster meat!” -> Missing internal(?) closing quotation mark: “Guan’s saying, ‘I’ve never […] monster meat!’”

v1 c1

~70%

“It’s been a century since I last allowed a student in here! You should be proud of yourself, Eugene! ” I remembered the headmaster telling me jovially.

=> Eugene!” (no space between the ! and the ")

v15p7

71%: But saying no was one thing she couldn’t do. -> "the one thing"? 86%: It would have been awful trouble to actually explain, however, so she kept quiet. -> "awfully troublesome"?

First reference in part one has it as Barron's Company, which seemed odd giving it being a Baron's company.
Next mention, in part two, has it as Baron's Company.

I'd argue the first is the error; this isn't Barron's.

v1 p2

~50%

Wow! It’s a whole three stories tall!This place is exactly what I’m looking for, I just know it!

=> tall! This (missing space)

~55%

Say what now?!C-Cute dresses?!

=> now?! C-Cute (missing space)

V11P1 was Yoshin's temperature expressed in Fahrenheit in the original text? I'd prefer if measurements aren't localized in the Imperial system if they are metric in the Japanese text.