v1p12:

Nanalie family is Ronamis in the chapter title and RonamisRominas in the rest of the chapter. Not sure what's the right one, but the latter looks like a bulk replace mistake.

V4 P1 P4 (32% - 3rd & 4th lines down from top of page)

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Something seems missing here such as "bird" or "thing"

V14P7, 62%: “even though we were playing against two against one”

96%: “foxifire” - should probably be just foxfire (狐火)

Volume 7 - Part 11:

[74%] I only tagged alone this time >> should be along

Volume 7 - Part 12:

[95%] on the head.She looked >> needs a space

a1v6p10 - 41%

While curry often appeared in iseskai stories,...

v3p4:

70% - And what are you gonna do, Ashia. -> Aishia, I presume.

@karasutengu "I'd felt" = "I had felt", meaning the verb is in the past perfect tense. Thus, the "felt" here is not a simple past tense but rather a past participle. The same is true of "opened". "I'd opened" = "I had opened". The "had" there also extends to "seen" because the "and" is joining the two verbs of the compound predicate. The "I" here is performing both the actions of "had opened" and "had seen", so the two verbs must be in the same tense, past perfect.

"I had opened and had seen" isn't technically incorrect, but it sounds stiff and awkward, which is why English allows the second "had" to be dropped!

V2 P8 (29% - 12th line up from bottom of page)

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Remove extra "further".

v4 p5

~ 80%

“Patience brought hot water bottles for you and Jane,”’ the princess shared. “She also brought some needle threaders.”

=> Jane,” (Extra single quote at the end)

V3 P7 (87% - 10th line down from top of page)

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Change "wishe" to "wish".

V1P4, 0%: “A few days had passed since we left Ishtar, and we currently traversed the forest while staying, making sure to keep up our guards.” - staying what? Missing word?

P6, 21%: “There was no longer a place of Allen within the Adventurer's Guild.” - for
80%: “Apparently, this whole area had been part of the demons' secret layer” - lair

P7, 93%: “I laid Clara down on the ground” - Claire

V2P3, 65%: “that leads us [to] today”
P4, 87%: “However, that's not a problem if I get just the one tocome running.”
P9, 8%: “A present's not just something you just give them at that's it” - and

Can Two-Law Tyrant be changed to Two-Law Usurper? The story will explain why he's called an usurper. Plus, there will be another character that uses Tyrant, so this would help prevent confusion.

v2 p8

~10%

Then Raoul heard the rumors that Luke, who had been banished to the wasteland, had built an unbelievably city in a matter of months.

"Unbelievably" is an adverb not an adjective. Instead maybe that should be an unbelievable city or an unbelievable large city or an unbelievable X city where X is some other missing adjective.

v9p10:

12% - “[…] after I had done my business,” Cara replied, her tone perfectly even. -> Carla 45% - We had invited the head honcho of all three nations to proceed with the signing of the contract […] -> Typo? Poor phrasing? There isn’t one head for all three, but one for each: the head honchos of all three nations or perhaps the head honchos of the three nations.

v17p8 ~40%:

"Kiara. I'm sure we can't pry him for details about an important job HIs Grace put him to."

HIs -> His.

@b-scot-morgan I noticed the same. Likely the last of the trio (is it Belle?)

V5P3 77%:

whatever god had reined in this world was dead.

reined -> reigned