V2 P5

76% "things like dragons Though a few of them"

Appears to be missing some punctuation after dragons.

v5p2 ~28%:

"I'm asking if you say my...my...!" Edward stammered.

say -> saw.

V1, P3, around 6%

“Is it true that anyone can use magic withpractice with practice?”

Missing space.

V16 P7, 13%
"Then, he tossed his shield aside..."
"Abel lifted up the shield on his left arm"
If it's not a teleporting shield, perhaps include a line where Abel picks up and re-equips the shield after the match?

65%
"attuning herself to people's true feelings even moreso than even Orania"
I'm less certain on this one, but think it might work better if either 'even' is dropped.

78%
"Their actions [are] worthy of reproach"

v6p5 80% To the extent that it would frankly be better to use nothing at all.” -> Not sure where this bit of dialogue is supposed to begin, but if it and the previous two paragraphs were all dialogue from Seika it's styled wrong since they should have had only opening quotes until this closing quote.

@alahue this story definitely needs something like a tragedy tag to give people a heads up on what they're getting in to.
Many people don't enjoy being blind sided with

spoiler
At the same time, people who do love it and are specifically looking for these kinds of stories don't have any way to tell that this story will scratch their itch

V4 P10 (38% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe "as" is missing and should be added:
...it took me half as long as them...

Note: "as long as" is a phrase of "long"

during the whole time that.
"they have been there as long as anyone can remember" provided that.
"as long as you fed him, he would be cooperative" - Oxford/Cambriage Dictionaries

v7p10:

[…] it sounded like these crazy things happened on the daily for them. -> I’m not familiar with this specific phrase, although its meaning is obvious. From which variant of english does it come? I would have used “on a daily basis” in this instance, but if the translation team is happy with it, I’m good. :)

V3 P6, 4%
"If you mother tries to harm her, she'll get their comeuppance"
Their -> her

7%
"to say he had no affection for his own children would be untruet
untruet -> untrue

33%
"the coachman said, a surprisingly casually..."
Delete the 'a'

30% "Even if she was the retired matriarch of the household... it seemed odd she had no guards"
33% "The guard groaned in pain... then he turned on his heel and fled, abandoning my aunt"
Where'd this guard come from? None was introduced, as far as I can tell. At first I thought it might be talking about the coachman, but he sticks around (doesn't flee).

V4, P4, around 40%:

Particularly that mikagami no jutsu.Mikagami... jutsu. Mikagami... Was that “water mirror”?

Missing space.

V15P5

[37%] some of the information fee, though.I even got down on my knees < Missing spaces between the sentences

Volume 1 - Part 9:

[62%]

Also, I've heard that he formed some of these those connections because he's trying to find someone.

It's probably just one of these words. those sounds best tho.

@HarmlessDave It has indeed always been described that way, going back to about volume 4 from what I see. If it helps explain why, the JP term used is 魔界, which is quite literally "demon world."

Volume 2 - Part 6:

[64%]

Yeah, he must have a high-level mage working for him!Still, it would've taken a ton of mana.

Add space between sentences.

[77%]

That could only mean one thing: the moan definitely hadn't been there before.

moan > moat

@Poncho9761 said in The Frontier Lord Begins with Zero Subjects - Corrections Topic:

V12P4 ~0%
"It's been a day since the mother baar had..." -> "It's It'd been a day since the mother baar had..."

"...to the fact his wife chewed him out but good the day before." -> "...to the fact his wife had chewed him out but good the day before."
There are multiple ways I believe to fix the 2nd issue I'm pointing out, but this was the one based on the sentence and my preferences.

"chewed him out but good" is a form of idiomatic English, and Dias very much is an idiomatic kinda guy.
It really fit the kind of person Dias is, at least from my perspective.

V3P4 ~14%
"The room emptied as one after another their names were called..." -> "The room emptied as, one after another, their names were called..."

V3P5 ~0%
"...you can hardly have operas with orchestras." -> "...you can hardly have operas with without orchestras."
~37%
"I was a complete stranger to our selection." -> "I was a complete stranger to our selections."
~52%
"While it might not qualify a race, we could..." -> "While it might not qualify as a race, we could..."
~74%
"This was the sort of the pressure he exerted on the monsters in Mystic Forest..." -> "This was the sort of the pressure he exerted on the monsters in the Mystic Forest..."
2nd struck-through 'the' could be kept but I wouldn't personally but that's me.

v9p9 ~30%:

WIth a guild so big, there was probably a lot of trouble that needed responding to, she figured.

WIth -> With.

@Geezer-Weasalopes said in Scooped Up by an S-Rank Adventurer! - Corrections Topic:

@b-scot-morgan said in Scooped Up by an S-Rank Adventurer! - Corrections Topic:

Also, wouldn't that be "tolls" rather than "toll's"?

Not in this case. Toll is a man's name, and the sentence refers to Toll's expression.