v1 p1 (yes I'm a little late):

The name of "Mount Rengyo[u]" is spelled inconsistently:

It was then that he felt some indescribable impulse, something that welled from deep inside his heart, thrust his emotions to the surface. Akira felt fury consume him as he turned his back on his former home and charged wildly along the gravel road to Tsuzura. He hurried down the side of Mount Rengyo, leaving the Ugetsu manor behind and heading for Tsuzura.

But also

After some time yelling, he grew calm once more and took a charm from his pocket—a keepsake from his grandmother. It had originally come from a shrine in the foothills of Mount Rengyou. Akira had found it among her clothing and basic belongings after her death.

I don't know which would be correct, but, assuming these are the same mountain, I'd suggest it be consistent.

Volume 4 Part 5
10% certain my would actually -> my father would actually

Charlie85 has a good suggestion for this one as well.

94% massive amounts of high-quality wood -> massive amounts of high-quality fuel

Ellen is already aware of the plans to use the kilns to convert wood into charcoal. As charcoal is a higher quality fuel than raw wood, it is unlikely that she is looking forward to using wood when charcoal is available.

@karasutengu said in Fearsome Witch - Corrections Topic:

V5 P9 (20% - 6th line up from bottom of page)

It's a good thing that you Owain aren't interested in power of status.
Need an "or" or "and" between "you Owain"
e.g.:

...good thing that you or Owain aren't interested...
-or-
...good thing that you and Owain aren't interested...

My vote is for and
Alternatively, if Strath is supposed to be affecting a more formal type of speech, it could also be:

It's a good thing that neither you nor Owain are interested in either power or status.

Volume 3 Part 9
10%: it transformed Dunhill into a flaming blade as he charged his opponent. | Then at 11%: Standing amid them as though entirely unaffected, he smirked and sprang forward | wasn't he already charding his opponent? Perhaps the first entry should be: as he prepared to charge his opponent.

v6 p3

~50%

“He’s illiterate and old, as is every custodian that has ever been employed to manage the royal archive. Frankly, I find it a questionable practice, but an illiterate custodian cannot disseminate the contents of the archive to the outside world. And an old custodian is more or less a guarantee they can’t learn how to read even if they wanted to. That they would go so far speaks volumes about the secrets being kept here.”

Something awkward about the grammar here -- an old custodian isn't a guarantee, rather employing an old custodian is a guarantee. And the the singular "old custodian" clashes with the with the plural "they can't" IMO. Maybe that was intended to be a gender-neutral "they", but as an alternative:

And an old custodian is more or less guaranteed to be unable to learn to read even given the desire to do so.

v6p5 ~54%

While getting mobbled by all these choco lovers, […]

I am not sure if mobbled really makes sense here after looking the word up, but being mobbed (as in attacked by a mob, not the other meaning) seems fitting.

v5p8 ~87%

[…] closely with the Treasure Guild to produce the Posiedon, and Milld […[

Should be Poseidon.

Vol 14 part 5

~83%: shoulda figured you’d be too dim-witted to refuse my generous offer,” said Santor

refuse should probably be accept

shoulda figured you’d be too dim-witted to accept my generous offer,” said Santor

Volume 14 Part 9
75% something that caught my idea -> something that caught my eye
Although, I like xdbx' suggestion on this too.

96% the deciding factor lied ->the deciding factor lay

V11 final - would avail should be wouldn’t, out duties should be out their duties

V2P2
~44%

“If any of the facilities in this town are worse than that our capital’s, I’ll be sure to stick it to you!” he’d said.

Missing word? than that our capital’s->than that of our capital’s (or extra word ->`than our capital's)

Volume 7 - Part 2:

[99%] see them fruition. >> see them to fruition.

V1p7 ~42%

“The pair's lips parted, andInami's hands followed the outline of Aoi's body, caressing him all over.”

Missing space

10.1

we’d written, just to see gauge the outside world’s reactions.

V3P2 ~60%

Return turned his back to her to go to his room.

Should probably be Ren.

This, combined with the outfits the party guests wore, the sight was absolutely resplendent no matter where one looked.

The sentence is wrong. It would be possible to use Thus in place of This, but I doubt that was the intention. So maybe

This combined with the outfits the party guests wore for a sight that was absolutely [...]

without the commas and with the small change in the middle.

~83%

Their daughters understood this, stepped away from their fathers' quiet battle.

Feels like something is wrong or missing. I'd say stepping instead of stepped would suffice, or an and connecting the halves.

@Valanduin said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

On top of that, at the moment Erhardt was most definitely confident that his was Jurgens, not me.

His what?

His enemy, likely.

I have noticed that in the most recent part the name of the capital changed from Crystal Palace to Silver Palace.

V6P5 90%:

hit the breaks

breaks -> brakes