V6 P8 (50% - 3rd line down from top of page)

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I believe the encircled word should be alert not alter.

V4P12, 55%: "the dress I was wearing was one I had ordered back in back in Spring"

90%: "Good work out there, Lera. Oh. You do appear truly worked." - is this an actually expression? Not familiar with it and can't find it searching, unless it's meant to be a novel pun on "good work"?

V13P5

25% - The sword Volfnow carefully sheathed -> missing a space.

v5 p6

~5%

A bow of light materialized in the Archangel’s hand. He drew it swiftly in one, continuous motion, loosing an arrow that flew toward Leah with incredulous speed—an immediate use of force. Either that was how he greeted all intruders, or Leah had successfully provoked him.

=> incredible. "Incredulous" is a state of mind, specifically "skeptical" or "disbelieving".

That being said, Merriam-Webster indicates there is a non-standard meaning of "incredible":

nonstandard : incredible sense 1
incredible adjective
1 : too extraordinary and improbable to be believed

So maybe the usage was intended here?

~ 15%

But the fact that she even could execute such precise, stable movements at her absolute limit... That was all thanks to her relentless training. Since she couldn’t train her muscles in real life, her physical speed could never improve. So instead, she honed everything else to a razor’s edge. Her ability to read ahead—her perception, her insight.

Something seems off with the phrasing -- why can't she train her muscles in real life? Maybe that sentence should be:

Since she couldn’t train her virtual muscles in real life, her physical speed in the game could not be improved that way. So instead, she honed everything else to a razor’s edge. Her ability to read ahead—her perception, her insight.

v5 p3

~54%

It helped thatCarter had thrown himself forward to avoid taking the full impact of the strike.

=> that Carter

v18p1:
29%: The mold might be her choice of fertilizer -> his (see my previous comments about Fernobelia switching genders. I assume the original Japanese is light on pronouns, but based on some of Serelipta's teases in previous volumes, I think male is the correct gender for this deity)
96%: No book would be discarded, even if it looks damaged -> looked (to match verb tenses)

And @Ambriella, I'm happy to help. This series does seem particularly awkward to hand off to a new team with all the jumping between separate sets of characters.

V6 P11, 4%
"At the same time, the white coats were improving noticeably, [each/every] slash of their weapons and spell slung visibly brimming with raw power."

V7 P3, 28%
"Mwa ha ha... Perfect! Okay, it’s actually a little clumsy, but I’m sure he’ll scrap by."
Scrap -> scrape

62%
"The Royal Academy... I won’t deny that it’s got its merits as an academy institution..."
Possibly fine as is, but just in case: academy -> academic

V2 P8 (52% - last line at bottom of page)

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Replaced outlined word with "stairs" since this paragraph mentioned stairs leading downward.

V4 P8 15%:
superior talentHowever...
talent. However
(missing punctuation and space)

V2 p17 ~12%:
I don't know the source material, so just beware that this might be an issue with the source itself. It could very well be intended for all I know though.

I've never seen her put her all into a fight.
Should probably be "She" or the paragraph should be italicized.

V5P6 29%:

plateeees
earthquakeeeees

The drawing-out-vowels thing that gets attributed to some characters in J-novels doesn't really work in English and I can't understand how those characters are supposed to sound. But drawing out the silent vowels makes no sense. It should probably be the A in these words that gets extended.

v10p8 (very optional correction?):

18% - […] I guarantee you it’s something nobody would want to touch with a ten-foot pole.” […] A ten-foot pole? -> Given that Japan is metric, this phrase is rather jarring to me, but I don’t have any guesses on the words used in the Japanese original… Same? 3m pole? Some other phrase that shares the concept?

v12p13 ~27%

Strength returned to its broken limbs, Its broken four limbs regained their strength, [...]

The duplication of "broken limbs" is ugly.
Also, the comma should be a dot, or the "Its" should be lowercase.

v10 p8
~1%

Even back in Beaden, Curuni had carried the saberboars on the assumption that she wouldn’t be fighting—it was unreasonable to ask anyone to join a battle

¶ carrying so much weight around.“Mmmgh...”

Inappropriate paragraph break.

@SomeOldGuy said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

V13P6 8%:
we realized that we alsO needed to
also

65%:
WHen it came to me
When

Thank you for catching this!!

V4 P9
(75% - 16th line down from top of page or 14th line up from bottom of page)

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Since the story-line talks about the feline and canine tribes attacking Lily's tribe together, there should be another word between the two in the high-lighted box such as:

"How can we fight off two tribes at once?"

or

"How can we fight off multiple tribes at once?"

V4 P10
(5% - 4th line up from bottom of page
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Correct word in highlighted box to potion's
e.g., "the potion's effects"

(74% - 13th line down from top of page
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Add missing word it in highlighted box
e.g., "What the heck is it made of?"

4.6:

She was the one who had fallenin love

She was the one who had fallen in love