v4p8 ~50%:

Pervical chuckled.

A somewhat amusing, but fairly unfortunate typo I caught while doubling back to check what his name was. "Wait, if it was spelled like this the entire time, then why haven't we made fun of it by now?!"

cough

Pervical -> Percival

V3 P8 (0% - 5 lines up from bottom of 1st page)

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---> add "as" for proper sentence syntax
e.g.: Just as I took a step...

V2 P3 (66% - 10th line down from top of page)

..., she intendedbe kind to him.

add space and "to" for better syntax:

---> she intended to be kind to him.

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@ebaldwin said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

Volume 6, part 9:

[28%] “It’s getting pretty hot these days, isn’t it?” […]

“Oh... Y-Yeah, it has.”

"has" -> "is" (or alternatively change the previous line to “It’s gotten pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”)

Thanks, should be fixed now.

That's usually the case, but not this time, it seems. Now it is “It’s getting pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”

Should be good to go now.

Volume 2, Part 9

interlude: Diaego.

it spellling of Aoi Konominatos' wrong as: [Aoi knominato]

V9 P1 24% - two adorable smiles began bouncing around - smiles should be slimes

Volume 1 Part 10

"black father" vs "black knight's father"
Both of these seem to be used throughout the text, but only the latter seems appropriate. At 70% in the text [I had ... little talent for swords or spells], it is revealed that the father was never a member of any knight order, whether white, gold, or black.

V8.1 P6, 18%
"Though he had astounded many with his extraordinary rapid growth as a hunter..."
Not sure on this, but I'm thinking extraordinary -> extraordinarily

@nihility said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

Sup on white rice? What does that mean?

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/sup
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sup
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/sup

V4 P8 (81% - 7th line up from bottom of page)

And it was obvious who'd turn on next.

Missing "they".

And it was obvious who'd they turn on next,

V5 P6, 32% "As he did, however, a tremendous rubble sounded..."
Rubble -> rumble

73%
"Oh, it's a spellsword technique..."
"Allen's desire for Leo to learn the so-called swordspell technique..."
'Spell' and 'sword', presumably one of these has these ordered the wrong way around. My guess is the latter.

V1P13
[94%] "They're certainly lovely," Liliana replied. ➡ should this be Petra? Liliana hasn't met the sister yet, in this life at least, so she wouldn't say that, right? Also, she is pretending to still be mute in front of Paul, isn't she? So it would make more sense to me if this was Petra's reply, though I'm not sure since it isn't entirely in character for her.

V2 P3 (55% - 11th & 12th line down from top of page,

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It's already been established several times that Lofus lost his left arm and left eyesight during the sea battle. His own father stated: "I also heard that you lost your left arm and sight in your left eye." during his discussion with Lofus.

If the left arm is missing, so is the left hand. Therefore, for accuracy in the story line, "hands" should be changed to "hand".

@Iseguy said in The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic:

6.2

Elena glutched the knife to her chest and nodded.

“clutched”

Hi, sorry for the tardy reply! This is actually correct; per Merriam-Webster, "to glutch" is "to clutch an object received from, bequeathed by, or pertaining to the Grinch." That's actually where Elena got that knife. It's all explained in this year's Christmas bonus story, but sadly, due to licensing issues, it probably will not be translated, hence the apparent continuity error.

Spoilered just in case:

spoiler

We still haven't gotten last year's Christmas story, in which

spoiler

v3 p2

~45%

Einharjar Palace, where the emperor resided with his family, was situated in the heart of the capital of Grenflare.

~55%

The complex designs gracing Einherjar Palace’s walls slowly came into view.

The spelling of the palace's name should be consistent. I believe the usual spelling is Einherjar.

v32p5 ~5%:

As Shilly Rou continued to mash up the shaska, it was easy to tell that the pulp was getting stickier and sticker over time.

sticker over time -> stickier over time.

V3 P9 (12% - Line 9 & 10 from top of the page)

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Change "award" to "away".

v5p4:

92% - Without her rope, it probably would’ve taken a lot longer for Lilia and I to reach the shore. -> Probably a case where me should be used, since “a lot longer for I to reach the shore” just doesn’t work: a lot longer for Lilia and me to reach the shore.