V5P3 77%:

whatever god had reined in this world was dead.

reined -> reigned

V3 P7

19% "yet you don't know a miorc is?"

Missing word. Perhaps, "yet you don't know what a miorc is?"

34% "Lord Peylon? What is this? Don't tell me you haven't-" 36% "Pardon me, Lord Peylon, you can forget we ever spoke."

In the room are Lera, Lord Duval, Lord and Lady Aspozat and the new "sharp eyed" character who is identified as "Qualos."

Is Lord Duval intentionally pretending to be Lord Peylon, or is this a mistranslation?

V7 P7 (33% - 7th line up from bottom of page)

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Delete extra "sword".

V2 P1 (40% - 6th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe this should be "leave" instead of 'love'.

V3P8 60%:

staring intently at Usa and I

I -> me
It's the object of a preposition.

V6P1

32% boarder -> border (twice)

Volume 9 Part 10
39% those who undermine vampires -> those who underestimate vampires
53% the Emperor of Ischea -> the Emperor of Mubad

v1p11 ~26%:

"No! Please, lift your head, Sir Reid!" she pleaded desperately .

Erroneous space before the period.

V2.p6
[54%] "So smart..." Ayle praised. ➡ Ayle is the one being praised here, so I think someone else is calling her smart, though I'm not sure which character.

@Segoth said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

@sorvani said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

V12 P12 Multiple time they reference Broze needing to get to Rank 2, but I believe it is rank 4 that is needed to enter the dungeon? Was this an author mistake or a translation mistake or my mistake remembering the rules.

You need to be rank 2 to even be allowed to enter. Sai’s only rank 2. You just need to have someone with you who is at least rank 4.

But neither member of the that party was rank 4 at all, so did they not need at least one to be rank 4?

3 P1 (75% - End of 2nd line up from bottom of page)

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This seems out of syntax to me. Sould it actually read as:
And what use does a witch have for a staff anyway?

V2 P2 (16% - 5th line down from top of page)

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Just FYI from Merriam-Webster Dictionary online:
Sneaked is the original past tense form of sneak, but in the late 1800s, the alternative past tense form snuck began making its way into American English. It is now very common and is considered standard.

V10 P1 35% "heir to the [Wayne] family headship." -> Wynne

v19 p2

~18%

“Oh really?” Fiery plumes struck up a mad dance as a young woman with gorgeous, long scarlet hair and a practice sword for sparring Tina shot me a dirty look. Lydia Leinster, the Lady of the Sword, had been the albatross around my neck since our Royal Academy days.

Should that be for sparring with Tina?

V2 P7 (% -

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felt - [verb] past tense of feel
opened - [verb] simple past tense of open.
seen - [verb] past participle of see.
saw - [verb] past tense of see.
(source -Dictionary.com)

Since the sentence begins with two past tense verbs (felt and opened), I believe "saw" should be used instead of "seen" for better syntax.

V4 P4 (35% - exact center of page - 15th line from from top or bottom of page)

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Ths should be "Patience" since there is only one MC by that name.

V3 P7, 3%
“...Lady Robur’s grasp is very refined. I’ve come to understand that it’s beyond the comprehension of a commoner like me.”
It feels really odd for the Prince to refer to himself as a commoner. I'm presuming he's meaning only within context of the subject (an entry level understanding of the topic). Neophyte, or perhaps amateur, novice, layperson, or even hobbyist might be alternatives?

24%
"No doubt she wass lost in thought about what to write in the new art book."
Wass -> was

39%
"The prince’s bloodshot crimson eyes were fixed fixated on me"

50%
"The first prince seems to have returned quietly."
After saying he had left a few paragraphs back I initially thought this was saying that the prince was back already. However on rereading I suspecting it's instead intended to reinforce the previous paragraph. For clarity, perhaps replace with left/departed, or add on after returned 'to the castle'.

78%
Snapping back to reality, I frowned at the erotic painting the princess held. “How utterly... shameless,” I spat. I hoped she wasn’t about to start commenting on it in red pen.
Likely just me, but the meaning of this sentence escapes me entirely.

V3 P3 (89% - 12th line up from bottom of page)

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Looks like there was indecision to use "her" or "them". Since "her" was used in the previous sentence, I suggest "her" be used in the above sentence.