V7 P3, 14%
We’d been riding all day and had indeed managed to close the distance, but there was still something I was less than happy about. As we’d rode through the badlands, I’d gotten a vague feeling that had only grown stronger and stronger.
I'm not confident on this, but I'm thinking rode -> ridden. (Or, 'as we rode')

V2P3 ~10%:

Both Sasha and Hijiri exchanged fierce smiles like a pair of craven beasts.

Might be worth double-checking the word craven in that sentence.

Looking to Merriam-Webster, craven means "lacking the least bit of courage : contemptibly fainthearted" which is the exact opposite of how Sasha and Hijiri are before their duel.

I'm assuming the original text probably stated something closer to "bloodthirsty" or "savage" or "violent" or "ferocious" beasts.

Volume 21. Part 11. 1%

Again, Bibliotique > Bibliotheque

Volume 21. Part 11. 69%

Asmodues > Asmodeus

Volume 21. Part 11. 77%

Bibliotique > Bibliotheque

Volume 21. Part 2. 65%

I'm sure there's a typo here since Zagan refers to Chastille as his "sworn ally", not "sword ally" as stated in volume 5.

V5 P2, 67%
"Both the hallway and the entry hall had been renovated recently, much to my surprise; I’d only learned of the renovations plans after the work was already completed."
Could be a difference in dialect, but I've only heard it as 'renovation plans', (no matter how many renovations take place)

@xdbx "lord mannerism" is a form of address in speech for marquesses/marquises, so it isn't incorrect. as for the parker fletcher bit, i'm guessing that a line must have been shifted or deleted accidentally during the editing process since parker fletcher is raymond's righthand man. i'll let the editor know. thanks

v4 p8

~50%

“The Divine Beast will appear on the 1st Level of Babel. While this means that we can use Ambrosia Tears, Hydra’s incurable venom is so powerful it can kill even gods. There’s a possibility that Ambrosia Tears won’t be enough to revive the slain. Even if they are,, the victim will surely experience lingering aftereffects. Do whatever you must to avoid the venom.”

=> are, the (Double commas.)

Manga Volume 11 Chapter 1

Not sure if this is the right place for the manga.... but
page 19, Helmio's stats boards (first and third panel) have Natrual instead of Natural

V13 P14, 16%
"Ishucaa was the temple’s head priest, and yet she hadn’t known a thing about this passageway."
Ishucaa -> Ishuca

56%
"The Wing had used the return device on the seventh floor"
Wing -> Jade Wings (or possibly just Wings, though I don't recall seeing their team name shortened that way)

61%
"This locked Kaho in the moment of deep thought."
Seems slightly off to me. Perhaps instead: "This locked [or knocked? or sent?] Kaho into a moment of deep thought."

V5 P7 (29% - 3rd line up from bottom of page)

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Change "someone" to "somewhere" as in:
She's hiding away somewhere safe, isn't she?!

P6V1, 99%: “Mathrew” - Matthew

v4p3 ~35%:

Though I wanted to include Nelly as part of my friend group, she was now clearly drawing a line between herself and the other children, taking her manners more seriously even than Mia did.

even than -> than even.

V17P3

Orania ran, desperately chasing after Yanna and Kiryl in the cramped back allies of Ganudos.

allies -> alleys

Light Novel Volume 4 official release.
Special Story 1: I’d Like to Blame It on the Alcohol, 90%:

“Say, Scuba. You saw that Farseer guy before the race, right?”

Should say "Say, Scuna. You saw that Farseer guy before the race, right?”

v03 release: character profiles

Three different characters are described as "Shenley's father" in the character profiles section for the Holy Maple Leaf Empire.

v2p2 4%

Still, they did share some things in common

Sounds like it should be did have some things in common

Volume 4, Part 5:

[~70%]

"Tee hee. I guess it's my turn, huh?"
Gori had only been dodging Rand's attacks, but she suddenly stopped and said, "Tee hee. I guess it's my turn, huh?"

Confused if this is intentional or actually redundant. I'm guessing the first one actually needs to be removed.

Vol 10 part 3
88% in "so the JDSF probably wouldn't have been willing to adjust their schedule."

Shouldn't this be JSDF or JDAG? there isn't any prior use of this acronym

@00-biting said in The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic:

"Yes, my bodyguard here took her time," said Jinshi.

yes it is obvious this is Maomao talking and not Jinshi.
There is even a reference to him feeling carefree (ref to LN5 epilogue)