@Geezer-Weasalopes said in By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic:

You don't make rope by laying, whatever the heck laying might be.

@Ambriella said in By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic:

I'll be honest, I was just as confused on the terminology and my search led me to Wikipedia's sources as well.
I think "braiding" works well and will go with that. I think at the very least, it will cause less confusion.

Rope laying is a real way to make rope. It's different from braiding. The distinction probably doesn't matter much for the purposes of the story though.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rope#Styles

v2 p4

~90%

“Gah ha ha! That’s what you get for laughing at me, AuntMerlyn!”

=> Aunt Merlyn

v4p2:

79% - He had cornered Mercedes and blandished the force of their guards […]. -> “Blandish” - Oxford says “coax (someone) with kind words or flattery”. I presume that you wanted the similarly-spelled “brandish” - “wave or flourish (something, especially a weapon) as a threat or in anger or excitement” -> He had cornered Mercedes and brandished the force of their guards […].

V2P4

"Would...you mind singing my copy as well, Miss Bartles?"

Should be "signing" instead of "singing".

V2 P4

62% "The entrance to the dungeon was surrounded by four inns" 95% "The dungeon entrance was in the courtyard in the middle of the three inns"

Inconsistency.

V1P7

"Nerve-wrecking" -> "nerve-racking" or "nerve -wracking"

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/nerve-wracking

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/nerve-racking

Nerve-wrecking literally isn't even in the dictionary. A simple mishearing of the word.

V12P9, 31%: “I don’t think it woud be a good idea” - would

37%: “everyone understood that there was an element of wishful thinking in Haruka’s works” - words

V1 P7 (23% - 7th line up from bottom of page)

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This should be meat since it's going to grilled.

V11 C1 P13 35% "Fortunately for Lembeck, the [arrow] hadn't pierced through bone." -> spear or spearhead

V11 P7, 90%
“Master Dahila’s father...? Very well. I will happily take it. Thank you.”
Dahila -> Dahlia

V3 P3 (83% - 9th printed line up from bottom of page)

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Should be: "when she saw"

Volume 1 Part 7
41% all the whileOnce -> all the while. Once

@xdbx said in EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic:

I'd suggest using one name (Thunderbolt or Lightningbolt) consistently. I can't remember what if anything was used previously though.

Based on the following examples of definitions for both, I think it would depend on the story's narrative in deciding which to use at the time:

Thunderbolt - a flash of lightning with a simultaneous crash of thunder.
Lightning-bolt often refers to Lightning only - an electric discharge in the atmosphere or between the atmosphere and the ground.

V5 P9 (4% - 4th line up from bottom of page)

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'The phrase "could have been smited" is grammatically incorrect in standard English, though it is sometimes used informally or in specific gaming contexts. The correct past participle of the verb "smite" is smitten (or sometimes the archaic "smit").
The correct ways to express the idea in standard English are:
"could have been smitten"
"could have been smitten down"
"could have been struck down" - Standard Dictionary Online'

V16 P5, 50%
"Orania as she is now and my past self are one in the same"
In -> and

@Jojajones said in The Canon Fodder’s Ascension from Pawn to World Unifier - Corrections Topic:

So, I'm guessing the first real correction would likely be the series' title because shouldn't this be "The Cannon Fodder's..."? Because I'm not sure what exactly Canon Fodder is supposed to be

Meant to be wordplay on "cannon fodder." Fodder is frequently used to describe Zil's role as he is discarded to prop up the future villains and power creep in the anime. "Canon" since that was how things happened in canon in the anime's part one and Zil is trying to change things from canon.

V9P6
~35%

For that reason, I was utterly baffled to hear the king acknowledge my efforts.

Should be emperor instead of king.

1.7:

But Lord Lightless has said not to push Sir Carlos too much.

But Lord Lightless has said not to punish Sir Carlos too much.