V3 P11, 65% "After beating them senseless with physics"
Possibly as intended, though the phrasing is quite peculiar to me. Perhaps instead, 'After physically beating them senseless'?

96%
"I slowly exhaled the breath that threatened to stop..."
Might be just a failure of understanding on my part, but I couldn't quite make sense of this sentence as is.
I could come up with a few variations, but not quite sure on the emphasis:
"I slowly exhaled the breath that threatened to be my last..."
"I slowly exhaled the breath I had been holding, the pain threatening to stop me in my tracks..."

V3P7 ~67%
"I couldn't tell. No. I couldn't, but I didn't want to. This couldn't be real." -> "I couldn't tell. No. I couldn't, but I didn't want to. This couldn't be real."

V7P2 ~64%
"I arrived in just in time, before..." -> "I arrived in just in time, before..."

V6P7 ~95%
"...coming for you, Agnes." -> "...coming for from you, Agnes."

V12P6 ~91%
"...much in the way of romance the dogkin's explanation..." -> "...much in the way of romance, the dogkin's explanation..."

Shortly into today's release, Demon God becomes Demon king and every instance after that is the same way until the end of the release.

V2P4

0%: "Partially, this was to guard the city, but his real intentions lied elsewhere" => lay "For one, long years of use had left them in tatters, and they currently" => remove comma or add in "for two" or "plus"? 10%: "Galland through a punch, which Daggers easily caught." => threw 70%: "Thus, most earned the title right at the age when talent shined the brightest" => shone 80%: "The boy had studied the bow on his own, and had thus watched countless adventures" => adventurers "The two gathered the red slimes’ corpses and stored them away with magic." => and Cross stored them away "Just a few days prior, had been banished from Ishtar and stripped of his" => prior, he had been banished

@Seizan Please tell me that's not canon.

Vol. 3, Part 6

But honestly, we could care less about that.

couldn't care less.

V5 P7, 93%
"Annoying, he managed to save himself by driving his sword into the dirt wall"
Annoying -> Annoyingly

V8.1 P7
46% "Immediately after receiving his gear, Akira set about trying everything on... equipping himself with his two blades and two of his guns"
68% "After checking his gun at the entrance..."

As the two scenes were relatively close to each other, just checking whether it should be 'gun' -> 'guns' (or even 'weapons', to include his blades)

V2 P4 (% - 72% 9th line up from bottom of page)

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Again, "hands" should be hand since Lofus has only one arm.

(I believe the illustration also shows this.)

v3 p3

~28%

“Yes, I do. The Great Beast Haagenti, right? When I was a boy, my teachers used to threaten us by saying they brought misbehaving children to Haagenti.’”

Since Eugene is only paraphrasing, there's an extra single quote at the end of the paragraph.

Just sent to support for v4p2:

You might have already fixed it in the ebook, but just in case…

61% - We made our way up, tagging behind Pochi and Tama. -> I feel like a word is missing, but maybe it’s unnecessary these days: We made our way up, tagging along behind Pochi and Tama.

V16P7 83% Ludwig picked up two glasses... And sat opposite of Ludwig??? I think it's supposed to be opposite of Dion.

V8 part 4

Around 18% it states Patience is 11 years old, but the queen at the end stated she’d be 13 next year. I believe she would only be 12 the next year. She was 10 when she started her first year so it seems she should only be 11 now and 12 the following year.

V2 P3 (66% - 10th line down from top of page)

..., she intendedbe kind to him.

add space and "to" for better syntax:

---> she intended to be kind to him.

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@ebaldwin said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

Volume 6, part 9:

[28%] “It’s getting pretty hot these days, isn’t it?” […]

“Oh... Y-Yeah, it has.”

"has" -> "is" (or alternatively change the previous line to “It’s gotten pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”)

Thanks, should be fixed now.

That's usually the case, but not this time, it seems. Now it is “It’s getting pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”

Should be good to go now.