V4 P2 P6 (43% -12th line up from bottom of page)

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The wording in the high lighted area is confusing. I believe the following would work better:
"you're dead set on a path"
-or-
"you're on a path"

( think the 1st suggestion above works the best)

Volume 1 - Part 12:

[56%] There was a man with him at the time >> should be her [79%] make the military consider committing their sentence. >> should be commuting [85%] Teodoro’s chair ratted violently >> should be rattled [90%] the soldier had their subordinated pinned >> should be subordinate

V1 P12 (48% - 1st & 2nd lines at top of page)

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I believe "his" is missing in the high-lighted text.
e.g.: give up his life,

V13 p9 10%:

make the trip to Laffan, Clewily, and back in about a month
-> make the trip from Laffan to Clewily and back in about a month

V3P8 63%
This city was full of factions who rooting for our downfall,

who rooting --> who were rooting

V5p2

"Yeah, looked bored at the reception desk."

That sentence seems to be missing a pronoun.

v6p1:

35% - […] in my official capacity as emperor. from the Empire’s […] -> Missing capitalization: From the 36% - […] for using their troops to go to war war with a third party. -> Too many wars going on: go to war with 60% - […] and was honestly a bit of a pain But I ended up stranded […] -> Missing period? Or missing comma with lower case “but” making a reeaallly long sentence. :) 62% - the emperor’s living space was located far back. -> Perhaps “farther back”?

V6 P5 (25% - 14th line up from the bottom of the page)

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Shouldn't this be "Boar" meat?

(31% - 5th line up from bottom of the page)

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Shouldn't this be "to snow"?

V9 part 9
67%-71% Mobile view

Well, not to brag, but the hands Akashi were gripping right now had already raised ten billion krams

It's not ten billion, it's only 1 billion that she gathered throughout the year. Why is this keep on happening?

V6 P11, 76%
"Only after I saw Kaeda fall down in front of me..."
Kaeda -> Kaede

v12p10:

67% - Some stories were included that would make any other person wouldn’t find remotely funny, -> Extra words? My brain doesn’t like that phrasing for the moment, at least. Maybe: Some stories were included that any other person wouldn’t find remotely funny… There might be a better option.

V4P7, 73%: "he had already [lost] enough blood to render him pale"

V1 P10, 55%
"I was out doing my usual training when I spotted some footsteps that weren’t there yesterday. You were lucky. Any longer, and the snow would’ve erased you along with your tracks."
Footsteps -> footprints

V6, P3, around 71%:

Incidentally, since there was no room aboard our ship for the rest of the galley’s crew—twenty or so soldiers-cum-oarsmen from the Dosuperion Dosuperior forces—they’d remained behind with their ship to continue toward the Yabré Baronry as planned.

Wrong letter.

V6, P4, around 2%:

With the exception of military affairs, the Dosuperior family had long maintained its distance from Yugrian society. Instead of sending each new generation to participate in what it deemed to be pointless bureaucracy and inefficient education, it trained them in the Dosuperion Dosuperior style of fighting and warfare

Wrong letter.

V1 P3 (89% - 10th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe this should be "his" fangs since "Ernst had finally bared his fangs" is a metaphor.
It acts as a metaphor because it directly applies an animalistic action ("bared his fangs") to a human subject ("Ernst") to imply aggression or extreme anger, without using words like "like" or "as". (Academic Journals Online)

(Apologies to the JNC staff for this late correction submittal. I just started reading this LN a day ago)

Volume 21. Part 5:

26%: "I was you, ya know, supportin' her at lil' more"

37%: "Black Needles" should be "Shadow Needle". This attack's name was used both in volume 14 and volume 16.

67%: "Bibliotique" should be "Bibliotheque" like in volume 19.

v12 p7

~55%

“And one more important thing...” Annette lowered her voice as she stared at the other two ladies. “This mission is extremely dangerous. Please keep that in mind. If either of your identities are revealed, your lives may be in danger.” There was a moment of silence before she went on. “But I have faith that you can complete this mission. Lady Diana, you are the sister of Count Eimoor and the Rose of the Duel Grounds. Lady Helen, you’re known as the Lightning Strike. I firmly believe that the two of you are perfect for this mission.”

Doesn't everyone know who Diana and Helen are? If so, maybe that should be your missions or your jobs or your real purposes or something like that?

V5 P8
[90%] use ropes to secure the boats to the shore ➡ floats