V13P2 ~8%
"...it wasn't the done thing for a duke to get their hands dirty..."
This is less a 'correction' and more a general question: I'd never actually heard this phrasing before and did some checking and it looks like it's more common in all other forms of English except American English, I guess? Is this something that, while thinking to himself, Dias would use?
I'm more curious than anything else about if the translator(s) keep a kind of speaking style in mind when choosing expression/idiom usage on a per-character basis.

V15 P6 (83% - 10th line up from bottom of page)

Ready to burn my shit at the drop of a hate,...

Should be "hat"

---> Ready to burn my shit at the drop of a hat,...

Part 1 (p123/776: Outside the Barrier)

The greater boar used earth magic to launch throwing stones as ranged attacks and the pace at which with which it charged its target was close to the speed of sound.

i feel like the translator intended to replace one of these 'whiches' and forgot to finish. probably the the latter.
it happens, but i'm surprised nobody caught it during the prepubs?

v16p2:

89% - […] more to become a doctor. -> It looks like there’s an extra space or two here. The large gap was present whether I was reading on the iOS app in landscape or portrait.

V6P1, 38%: “[Engineering/Construction Lv. MAX [Shield Arts Lv. MAX]” - missing ]

V6P16

Two giant crows approached from the sky. Their massive side afforded them Rank 3, but ...

side -> size

V5 P6 (48% - End of 13th line up from bottom of page)

alt text

I believe this would sound better as:
What're you guys gonna do...

@JustWaiting said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

V6 P13 ~21%

"Then she opened her mouth wide, and sank her fangs into his neck." There shouldn't be a comma after 'wide'. "sank her fangs into his neck" is not an independent clause.

V6 P13 ~19%

"His desperation was earnest, but at the same time depressingly comical, like a child throwing a tantrum." Same situation as above. The comma after 'earnest' shouldn't be there.

Thanks, should be fixed now.

4.3:

The mages flew into a range and aimed their staffs at me.

The mages flew into a rage and aimed their staffs at me.
The mages flew into range and aimed their staffs at me.

Have to check the raws to determine which.
Unless, of course, it's a lovely play on words and quite deliberate.

V2 P9
20% "beam of light , her arms spread" -> "beam of light, her arms spread"

V5 P9, 16%
"You are not to breathe a word of this to anyone, understood?" Mihale asked
Mihale -> Michale

80%
"As the Hill Path Club’s reputation had skyrocketed, so had Stella, the captain’s."
Stella -> Stella's
Edit: On second thought, I'm not so sure. Leaving it in, just in case

98%
"...it’s impossible to walk down the streets in Runelirea these days without hearing the name Allen Rovene five or six times"
Runelirea -> Runerelia (or viceversa, the latter was used at 94%)

Volume 2 Part 2
09% gave me an resolute smile -> gave me a resolute smile
11% He father -> Father or My father
37% Whatever ever happens -> Whatever happens
53% absolute tattered -> absolute tatters
55% I could hardly breath -> I could hardly breathe
59% "I feel like this isn't the wrong way to go about spending time together..."
This should probably be either 'this isn't the right way' or 'this is the wrong way'
62% Dane called out -> Danae called out
82% her mother's illness -> my mother's illness
83% She mother seemed -> Mother seemed

@A-human
Sorry, Whately -> Whateley

v3p8:

6% - the town of Carassa -> Carcassa (as used a bit later in this part) 25% - […] where we’d encounter the last amount of monsters, […] -> the least amount of

I know I'm likely too late to suggest any edits for this volume, but just in case this could be of use:
V11.1 P6, 60%
"In a real battle, soldiers would use heavy spears—about seven meters long by Imperial standard"
Seven meters (23 feet, or about 4x a mans height) seems a little excessive.
If instead meaning to convert from 7', then perhaps two meters might be a little more manageable.

v3p5 91% “That sounds a bit too difficult for me,” dad said. -> given Eu's thoughts after that, it seem like that should be I said

@Valanduin said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

It might be a little late for it, but the term mold is used frequently when discussing the mints and it isn't really correct. Molds are used when casting by pouring molten metal, however casting isn't a technique that was ever particularly widely used for minting coinage. Coins are struck from blanks using using dies (the basic process is a plain disk of solid metal called a blank is placed between two tools with the inverse of the coin pattern carved into it, then the top piece is struck with a hammer), so die would be a more appropriate term, although this error might be an issue in the original source.

I concur, "mold" should be "die." (I spotted at least two uses of "mold".) Also:

"Well, the mintage facilities have been fully restored ..."

'mintage facilities' -> 'mints'.

V3 P12 0%
"That was undoubtedly the magic fool activating his powers"
Odd phrasing. 'Foolish mage' is the easiest substitution, or something along the lines of 'the magically adept fool' (or better yet, 'the fool activating his magical powers')

Same for "Stepping ahead of that magic fool"
Edit: used a few times this chapter (31%, 34%, 38%, 41%), as a sort of title. Perhaps 'magic obsessed fool' might fit best.

3%
"An appraisal spell revealed holy magic that radiated inward from it"
Radiate is usually (but not always) paired with outward - would that be intended instead? Otherwise the picture is of any holy magic in the area being drawn to the robe.

10%
"Could that be Casquette, the sacred beast that Lady Robur had a pact with?!"
From the preceding paragraphs, it sounds like the king only knew of the pact with Vamillia. If so, the sentence might instead go something like:
"Could she be referring to Casquette? Had Lady Robur made a pact with another Sacred Beast?!"
(Or perhaps a mistake of referring to the wrong character. Instead "Could that be Casquette, the sacred beast that Princess Beljeanne had a pact with?!"

16%
"...collapsed in the pool of pitch-black blood. s if possessed of its own will..."
s -> As

19%
"Though holy in nature, this flame carried a distinct, purifying power."
Though might be deleted - holy & purifying surely would be complementary, rather than competing in nature.

21%
"...and Lady Robur’s grandmother had passed away, never again permitted to have anything to do with House Robur."
'Permission' is unlikely to be a factor for a deceased person. Perhaps reordering the sentence:
"The sister’s anger had never subsided, and Lady Robur’s grandmother was never again permitted to have anything to do with House Robur, until the day she passed away."

22%
"Lady Robur placed the skill and magic stone carelessly on her crossed legs"
Skill -> skull

32%
"Not only had he abruptly summoned the king, but he’d given me orders on a scrap of paper?!"
'The king' sounds like he's referring to someone else. 'his king' might be the easiest fix.

76%
"After all, the princess [had] the magical power and talent, as well as the knowledge to do it."
Missing word