Volume 2 - Part 2:

[Generic] This part has an insert2.jpg illustration but there was never insert1.jpg after the cover in part 1. It's missing somewhere in between. [2%] an entire civil war on a three year vacation—his ► Missing hyphen. [6%] experiences, Agrippina's excessive degeneracy ► It should be Agrippina’s (different ’ ).

@terabyte This has been updated! Thank you :)

Volume 2 - Part 2:

[6%] “I’m your guard. I cannot fulfil my duties ► It should be fulfill (US spelling). [36%] Beneath his chiselled nose, his lips were ► It should be chiseled (US spelling).

Volume 15 part 1, 65%

Reina Ruu replied with with a smile,

Should be

Reina Ruu replied with a smile,

Volume 6 - Part 10:

[40%] was staring down an opponent rivalling Remno’s ► It should be rivaling (US spelling). [44%] assassin whose prowess rivalled the likes of Dion ► It should be rivaled (US spelling). [52%] future for which they yearned.Until the dogged will ► Missing space. [64%] Abandoning all semblance of defence, he leaned in ► It should be defense (US spelling).

@terabyte Fixed, thank you.

Volume 1 - Part 13:

[43%] making some real progress.I had made plenty ► Missing space.

Volume 5 - Part 2:

[27%] it would be her lack of social connections” ► Missing period. [43%] ► Ash was awarded three more (medals) from other territories. The paragraph below lists only 2 though. Where's the 3rd? Or should it be only 2 medals (6 total) in the previous paragraph? “From Viscount Sukuna and Baron Nepton. They were overjoyed when Ash disclosed the recipe for manufacturing soap. They awarded him with the steam silver medal and the tsunami silver medal respectively, both medals unique to their territories.” [45%] just seem jealous of his accomplishments” ► Missing period.

@shiroi-hane First one, I'd substitute a for some instead. Context later is looking at one page.

"Dukedom" should be "Duchy" unless there is some reason for the non-standard usage.

V6 p10 26% Evolved into a daemon - P1 at least spelt it daimon. Not checking other parts to see if there's other inconsistencies.

Volume 15, part 3:
50% - "Oh, and now that I think about it, you even have {Ultra Transformation}. A splendid skill that lets you die three times per day.

According to the known skill levels for Ultra Transformation, at level 3 Keima can die and revive once every 72 hours. So should it be something like "A splendid skill that lets you die and revive once every three days".

Volume 5, Epilogue: — Level 3: Once per 72 hour period, if you die while transformed, you can revive by undoing the transformation.

7.7

“Her and I now have an understanding,”

“She” has an understanding.

Volume 1 - Part 3:

[91%] events in terms of lovey-dovey-ness.. ► Duplicate period. [93%] “Now that I think of it...don’t you like him? ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

Volume 2 - Part 4:

[Generic] Is Sybe still a horned rabbit or did it get changed to unicorn rabbit (used 3 times in this part)? [Generic] There's 1 more instances of Sir Balirossa. Based on a previous reply it should be Ser? [Generic] Sometimes she is used for Hiya and sometimes they instead. Already reported. [26%] Rys rejoined. Ulimina responded by pretending to ► It should be Uliminas. [35%] feel like it today. Tell ‘em to come back tomorrow.” ► It should be ’em (different ’ ). [38%] her throw that ssscoundrel in the dungeons....” ► It should be 3 periods.

At 12%, "As I assumed!" is something no one really says in English, and it sounds really awkward. It's probably better translated to something like "Yeah, I figured" or "I knew it"

9-6

[55%] Alas our country sort of fell into our laps -> lexically closest would be county (in the historical sense of land attached to a title of count). Arguably title would be better in context, as it's the title/position of count that seems to be specifically being referred to here. "Countship" would also work, but is a fairly uncommon word.

Volume 13 - Part 1:

[12%] “‘Kay.” ► It should be ’Kay (different ’ ). [14%] “‘Cause meat’s tasty?” ► It should be ’Cause (different ’ ). [29%] at the battle of Ryunheit, and took her captive,” ► It should be a period. [30%] Friede signed and muttered, “Is there any major ► It should be sighed. [40%] arms, and the nobles in Originia was no different. ► It should be were. [77%] could I get a little support here?” Friede asked ► Missing period. [78%] Eleora Kastoneiv Originia Rolmund was one of ► It should be Kastoniev. [99%] “Splendid. That was wonderful, Friede. That’s ► The dialogue's starting double quote (alone) is in italic format.

Volume 5 - Part 5:

[0%] All I had really needed was free reign, the leeway to act ► It should be rein. [6%] at the Doctor’s Guild is humbly requested by noon, sir.” ► It should be tomorrow by noon? (At first I thought it would be today, but the next section specifically says next day.) [23%] I braced myself for sight similar to the Healer’s Guild, ► It should be a sight. [99%] “Trust in your judgement. If you decide it wise to retreat, ► It should be judgment (US spelling).