V1P4, 0%: “A few days had passed since we left Ishtar, and we currently traversed the forest while staying, making sure to keep up our guards.” - staying what? Missing word?

P6, 21%: “There was no longer a place of Allen within the Adventurer's Guild.” - for
80%: “Apparently, this whole area had been part of the demons' secret layer” - lair

P7, 93%: “I laid Clara down on the ground” - Claire

V2P3, 65%: “that leads us [to] today”
P4, 87%: “However, that's not a problem if I get just the one tocome running.”
P9, 8%: “A present's not just something you just give them at that's it” - and

Can Two-Law Tyrant be changed to Two-Law Usurper? The story will explain why he's called an usurper. Plus, there will be another character that uses Tyrant, so this would help prevent confusion.

Thank you for the corrections to vol 4 posted thus far.

v2 p8

~10%

Then Raoul heard the rumors that Luke, who had been banished to the wasteland, had built an unbelievably city in a matter of months.

"Unbelievably" is an adverb not an adjective. Instead maybe that should be an unbelievable city or an unbelievable large city or an unbelievable X city where X is some other missing adjective.

v9p10:

12% - “[…] after I had done my business,” Cara replied, her tone perfectly even. -> Carla 45% - We had invited the head honcho of all three nations to proceed with the signing of the contract […] -> Typo? Poor phrasing? There isn’t one head for all three, but one for each: the head honchos of all three nations or perhaps the head honchos of the three nations.

v17p8 ~40%:

"Kiara. I'm sure we can't pry him for details about an important job HIs Grace put him to."

HIs -> His.

@b-scot-morgan I noticed the same. Likely the last of the trio (is it Belle?)

V5P3 77%:

whatever god had reined in this world was dead.

reined -> reigned

V3 P7

19% "yet you don't know a miorc is?"

Missing word. Perhaps, "yet you don't know what a miorc is?"

34% "Lord Peylon? What is this? Don't tell me you haven't-" 36% "Pardon me, Lord Peylon, you can forget we ever spoke."

In the room are Lera, Lord Duval, Lord and Lady Aspozat and the new "sharp eyed" character who is identified as "Qualos."

Is Lord Duval intentionally pretending to be Lord Peylon, or is this a mistranslation?

V7 P7 (33% - 7th line up from bottom of page)

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Delete extra "sword".

V2 P1 (40% - 6th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe this should be "leave" instead of 'love'.

V3P8 60%:

staring intently at Usa and I

I -> me
It's the object of a preposition.

V6P1

32% boarder -> border (twice)

v1p11 ~26%:

"No! Please, lift your head, Sir Reid!" she pleaded desperately .

Erroneous space before the period.

@Segoth said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

@sorvani said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

V12 P12 Multiple time they reference Broze needing to get to Rank 2, but I believe it is rank 4 that is needed to enter the dungeon? Was this an author mistake or a translation mistake or my mistake remembering the rules.

You need to be rank 2 to even be allowed to enter. Sai’s only rank 2. You just need to have someone with you who is at least rank 4.

But neither member of the that party was rank 4 at all, so did they not need at least one to be rank 4?

3 P1 (75% - End of 2nd line up from bottom of page)

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This seems out of syntax to me. Sould it actually read as:
And what use does a witch have for a staff anyway?

V2 P2 (16% - 5th line down from top of page)

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Just FYI from Merriam-Webster Dictionary online:
Sneaked is the original past tense form of sneak, but in the late 1800s, the alternative past tense form snuck began making its way into American English. It is now very common and is considered standard.