v5p4:

95% - What did you think, Hedins? -> Hednis 96% - […] in a horse voice. -> Wrong spelling: hoarse

v4:

The series page shows the book as expired already, when it doesn’t even start until next week. The individual parts are shown as expiring on 2025-12-15, so I presume that they’re supposed to expire on 2026-12-15.

@Hylebos This is referring to the the day having an evolution rather than the day of an evolution arriving. Thank you for pointing out that it could be made more clear though.

v1 p1

0%

It was an age when the night sky still lacked its golden sovereign. Rain melted people and devoured them. Trees writhed and swallowed cities whole. The dead were turned into seedbeds from which demons were born. As fiends led by their kings poured forth from the east, it seemed that humanity’s extinction was not far off.

Then a woman stood upon the Hill of Wishes. When she raised her staff, a moon appeared in the lightless night sky and burned away every last demon.

Should that be silver sovereign, referring to a moon? Or is the moon golden in this world?

(I had to re-read that first paragraph multiple times, I thought it might be implying that the setting is a binary star system.)

v5 p8

~65%

Sara straightened her posture. “Y-Yes?! What is it, Your Highness?” “Do you...believe it likely that we’ll receive support from the halidom?”

A paragraph break is required between the two sentences, as the speaker changes from Sara back to Tiffa:

Sara straightened her posture. “Y-Yes?! What is it, Your Highness?” ¶
“Do you...believe it likely that we’ll receive support from the halidom?”

V14 P5, 60%
"Diola-san rattled on excitedly for a while before we could greet her. This prompted Haruka to hastily lift her hands and push back Diola-san in an attempt to calm her down."

Possibly a difference in dialect in how we each use those terms, but on my end those are condradictory in this instance. If not, drop the 'for a while' (or replace with something like 'Diola-san rattled on excitedly before we could greet her, and didn't look like she'd stop for a while/anytime soon)

V7 P8, 47%
"When I changed and went outside, I found Kent standing by the bud."
'The bud' -> 'the buds' or 'a bud'

93%
“Those vegetables look delicious. I want them all.”
Perhaps not an error, but my reading from this is that she wants to buy the entire stock, not just one of each.

V11 P10 (40% - 2nd line down from top of page)

"Though it could endure the attacks of a novice or keep someone safe in a minor accident, it offered next to protection from a hunter harnessing mana material."

Insert missing "no" between to and protection.

e.g. it offered next to no protection from a hunter...

@ca-lima Thank you for the hard work, i look forward to reading it!

V1P1
~19%

when we were in the cellar library that the previous head of House Lumiole had used.

Extra letter? Lumiole->Lumiol

V1P7
~21%

Two men were holding me down, and there were now other four men surrounding me as well.

Wrong word order? other four->four other

~63%

The opened up the front door, then bowed reverently

Missing letter and missing full stop? The->They and reverently->reverently.