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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Corrections in Discussion Topics
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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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      Taking My Reincarnation One Step at a Time: No One Told Me There Would Be Monsters! - Corrections Topic
      one-step • • mgottselig

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      V9 P6, 14%
      "Sara walked off, feeling a little embarrassed, and Allen followed, tugging along by her hand"
      Tugging -> tugged

    • philhouse

      The Amazing Village Creator - Corrections Topic
      village creator • • philhouse

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      V2 P3

      69% "I was the no different"

      Redundant word, the.

      61% "You've gained the Village Appraisal II skill." 70% "I also got the Villager Appraisal II skill." 75% "Village Appraisal II gave me way more detailed info"

      Village or Villager. Should these be consistent?

    • Meiru

      Miss Blossom’s Backward Beauty Standards - Corrections Topic
      backward beauty j-novel heart • • Meiru

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      Libri Liberorum

      V2P3

      I'd been having so much in the ladies' course

      I think that should be "... so much fun in ..."

    • Meiru

      Sowing Vengeance - Corrections Topic
      sowingvengeance • • Meiru

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      yzh4rjdzob6

      vol1p6 around 60%:

      The monster was a full five meters tall, and probably weighed a whopping eighty kilograms.

      Is this right? That's a beanpole of a beast! In US measurements, that's about 16 feet tall, 176 pounds. From the illustration, maybe 800 KG?

    • alahue

      The Petty Villain Plays by the Rules - Corrections Topic
      petty villain • • alahue

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      Mark Logue

      The Petty Villain Plays By The Rules
      Volume 1 Part 6

      22% and so much the learner -> and so must the learner

    • Meiru

      Isekai Walking - Corrections Topic
      isekai walking • • Meiru

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      @Khazidhea said in Isekai Walking - Corrections Topic:

      V5 P4, 21
      "If you asked me if it was delicious, I'd be forced to admit that I'd had better in this world"
      My memory is poor, and I'm reading too many isekais and some details are overlapping in my head, but I thought I'd check: has he had fish before in this world? Or is he instead remembering back to Earth? (Or is he instead saying, he's had better (non-fish dishes) in this world?)

      I think he's referring to having had better food (including non-fish dishes) in this world. It threw me off the first time I read it too, but it's more obvious after the following conversations where everyone else in the party is unimpressed by it, but Sora still picks up a bunch out of flavor nostalgia.

    • majikayo

      Disowned but Not Disheartened! Life Is Good with Overpowered Magic - Corrections
      disowned • • majikayo

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      V3 P2

      12% "Even still, to me he looked to me like..."

      Repetition. You could remove either one of the to mes here and still retain the same meaning.

    • myskaros

      Min-Maxing My TRPG Build - Corrections Topic
      minmaxing trpg • • myskaros

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      Libri Liberorum

      Vol 11 canto 1 p12

      or an time-tested blade
      "an" -> "a"

      feel like he'd becomean adult yet.
      -> become an

    • philhouse

      Trials and Tribulations - Corrections Topic
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      eggnog

      V3P2p10 19%:

      "I sit at the throne by the grace of God. But does god watch what goes on in the world we live in? Does God judge the good incidents from the bad? For if god truly exists [...]

      The capitalization of "God" is inconsistent. Either all four should be capitalized or none of them should be.

      53%:

      deliver a gift on Behalf of Master Reinald

      Behalf shouldn't be capitalized.

      88%:

      If I was going to consider things seriously, I needed a different tact.

      tact --> tack
      https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/do-you-change-tack-or-tact

    • philhouse

      The Tanaka Family Reincarnates - Corrections Topic
      tanakas • • philhouse

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      @Libri-Liberorum said in The Tanaka Family Reincarnates - Corrections Topic:

      V5P8

      This must've been one of those Loafcraftian creatures that drove you insane just by looking at them!

      That would normally be Lovecraftian, but perhaps this is an intentional play on the name.

      Given how many other names from our world have been fiddled with, I’m expecting this to be the latter. :)

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      Tearmoon Empire - Corrections Topic
      j-novel heart tearmoon • • lovelight

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      V16 P2, 56%
      "I’ve gone boat fishing in Gyrados beforeon my own before, but I can’t really do that here"
      and
      "Thus, Orania was dead-seton heading out on one of the fishing boats"
      Missing spaces

      P4 61%
      "jumping in without hesitation to save an innocent child as despite your standing"
      Perhaps that might work better without the 'as', or change to 'as Kiryl' (or similar) instead?

    • majikayo

      Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic
      zilbagias • • majikayo

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      In the premium edition epub the illustration of Daiagias and Libidine is after the epilogue instead of within the corresponding text

    • majikayo

      EXP Is Golden - Corrections Topic
      exp is golden • • majikayo

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      v4 p6

      “All right,” Wayne said. “I really don’t want to do this, but Thunderbolt!” A spear of lightning shot from his hand and struck an angel midair. It convulsed, wings seizing, then crashed down in front of Gil.
      Lightningbolt was the most basic offensive lighting spell. It hadn’t killed in one hit, nor had Wayne expected it to, but it struck hard enough to deal serious damage and ground the creature.

      I'd suggest using one name (Thunderbolt or Lightningbolt) consistently. I can't remember what if anything was used previously though.

    • philhouse

      The Villainess Speaks Not - Corrections Topic
      speak not • • philhouse

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      V1 Part 6 ~72% Suggestion for a less vocally specific verb:
      "Lilliana called over her handmaiden," -> "Lilliana summoned her handmaiden,"

    • majikayo

      Even Exiled, She’s Still the Beloved Saint! St. Evelyn’s Weird and Wonderful Friends - Corrections Topic
      st evelyn • • majikayo

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      v1p6:

      I’m pretty sure that I saw a missing space or two in today’s part. I didn’t note their locations, though…
    • philhouse

      The Bladesmith's Enchanted Weapons - Corrections Topic
      bladesmith • • philhouse

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      Hylebos

      v3p7 ~12%:

      "Do you think that I did something unnecessary?" Asked Lutz, still not entirely sure of the etiquette among adventurers in those kinds of situations.

      Asked -> asked.

    • schuburner

      The Reincarnation of the Strongest Exorcist in Another World - Corrections Topic
      strongexorcist • • schuburner

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      Gamen

      v2p7 34% the emperor has several other important cities -> empire

    • Meiru

      Repeated Vice - Corrections Topic
      repeated vice • • Meiru

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      Geezer Weasalopes

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      slumber to deep to be disturbed.

      slumber too deep to be disturbed.

      With Lunamaar as her, partner she was the female sailor possessed by a spirit.

      With Lunamaar as her partner, she was the female sailor possessed by a spirit.

      Better, but something still feels a bit off about the phrasing.

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