v1 p10

~27%

“The saint merely a bargaining chip to use against Baron Clausell. However, do you believe I would take such a heavy-handed approach to achieve only that?”

Should that be The saint is merely ?

V8.1P8
12%
then it was better than no one did - better that no one did

Doing a reread, so these are a bit old.
Volume 10 part 8:
Fernobelia is repeatedly referred to as a "she" in this side story despite being a male god in previous volumes.

Volume 11:
page 25-26 of epub: Sheruma was called Chelma in earlier volumes.
page 39, 48: Fernobelia is referred to as a god at the beginning of the visit and a goddess later (in the next chapter). Page 62 has Serelipta making fun of him for girly behavior despite being a man, so I think it's safe to say Fernobelia's supposed to be male
page 56-57: "an ancestor of the duke you befriended" -> the person they are talking about is from the duchess' side of the family rather than the duke's. But that's a bit nitpicky.
page 122-123: Tigar the Warrior God was previously Tigral the Champion in volume 7 (plus whatever Ryoma's title called him in volume 1, Martial God?). This should probably get some consistency. I think calling him a god is confusing since other characters are actual gods, so Champion seems the best choice out of those presented.
page 154: [the noble kids were there] to be celebrated and accessed. -> should that have been "assessed"? Accessed might technically work since it's a pseudo-debut, but it sounds odd.

@Ingraman Thanks for that! Not quite sure what happened there -- I had to manually search for the line and it definitely took some wrestling to fix!

Volume 21. Part 2 (95%).

The phrase Chastille uses to encourage Barbatos is a direct reference to the Haunted House in volume 14 ("Wells, have courage"), so I'd suggest using "Barbatos, have courage" too instead of "Be bold, Barbatos" since it's the same phrase she said to his past self (Wells was Barbatos's name when he was a kid).

Volume 21. Part 4 (25%)

In volume 20, the blade Asmodeus gave Kuroka was translated as "Serpent Slayer."

@Hylebos This one is going to continue to haunt me with Ryne and Kyne being one letter off from each other. Thanks to Durkan!

V5P7 around 43% and later:

either Amalia, Charlotta, or myself will attend the event as your guardian.

(And other instances of "guardian")
The word I've usually seen for an older woman who accompanies a young woman to a party is "chaperone". I have the impression "guardian" implies a long-term legal relationship. Would "chaperone" be an appropriate translation here?

Volume 12 Part 1
26% the both Summons flew off -> both of the Summons flew off

Here is a special entry for all the old grognards out there:
The text mentions Magitech Mechanic and Magic Mechanic, but...
42% Let's not forget Manic Mechanic, who can make any vehicle twice as fast - but only while ZZ Top is playing.

@Mark-Logue For the last, could also be 'a mite puzzled'

V1 P9, 85%
"and finally, they punched through the centre [of] the human upper body's forehead"

v4P2p3:

43% - “The Lubeck goes without saying, but […] ->Wrong word? Maybe “That Lubeck goes without […]”? Drop the word altogether? Or some other phrasing… (Edit: The Lubeck matter […] ?)

v3p4

0%: "The third floor was the haunt of human-sized bad monsters. " -> bat 0%: "and she clearly meant it as a complement." -> compliment

@groudonvert-own27br That was just a regular commercial treaty. It wasn't a magical contract. Friede probably just figured he wouldn't get caught. And he also is just monumentally stupid and lazy.

V6 P2, 73%
"It was usually at times like this that the chronically cheerful Al could be relied upon to lift the mood, but at the moment, his otherwise permanently positivity was nowhere to be seen."
Permanently positivity -> 'permanent positivity', or 'permanently positive [attitude]'

Vol.7 pt.2

Around 65% hoo-ha is used for a sound. Unfortunately, hoo-ha is slang for vagina.

v3p8:

0%: "I was the only person in the room without a status." -> without status or without a title 0%: "Leah and Fiore weren’t here, and apparently they were hanging out with each other." -> remove and

V3 P6, 50%
"This restaurant was kind of like a hidden gem among the imperial and high-ranking aristocratic families. Memories of the birthdays Airi and I had celebrated here flowed through my mind. After our academy training got tougher, though, he hadn’t been able to make time to come here."
He -> she (or I, I suppose, depending who Eugene's referring to)

77%
"He was over ten years older than Airi and m, so he had already graduated from the military academy by the time we entered it"
M -> me

V3 P7, 0%
"As an angel from Heaven and a servant of the Goddess of Fate, mom [was] absolutely certain."

(Edit 4/8/26) V3 P12, 9%
"we were children who couldn't even defend themselves"
Not sure if I'm correct, but in my head 'ourselves' sounds like it might be better fit.

V3 P10, 28%
"Tatiltiu growled, as if in response to what I said"
Tatiltiu -> Tailtiu