v1 p5

~50%

“Ah! Kartika truly is thoughtful. She already prepared the stones for cooking,” I observed.She’d arranged a circle of large stones a safe distance from the fire—probably using earth magic to pull them from the ground.

=> observed. She’d (missing space)

V3P3:
~21%

Ellie took in more air in her pouty cheeks, like her father's forge blower.\

A Bellows?

v5p6:

67% - Sorry, I’m taking too much. -> Sorry, I’m talking too much.

v2p2 ~84%:

I've got time stopped in my closed space, mister, so we'll be just fine.Man, I'm glad I thought to build those wooden boxes to store them in.

Missing space between sentences.

v2p14:

2% - they were the atoms that Mercede and every other -> Mercedes

V5P6
~0%

“Still, it’s within what skilled adventurers can handle. It wouldn’t be easy, but they’d be able to gather materials as the defeated monsters—if it weren’t for the hydra, that is,”

Missing letter / wrong word? Since the general discussion is about how you can get ore from the mountains I assume that the passage here is about how strong parties can both deal with the monsters and also gather the ore?; as the defeated monsters->as they defeated monsters

~35%

“Lulum shook her head.

Extra " at start?; “Lulum shook her head.->Lulum shook her head.

~59%

If I forget about them, it really will be over. For all us—me, them, and the world. That’s what I thought

Sorry if it is just the way Lulum speaks but missing word?; all us->all of us

~59%

“I think so too. Demons and humans both profit from war, but enough is enough. If you feel the same way, then there’s a good reason for you to cooperate with us.

Missing ending "?; with us.->with us"

~82%

“Now that I think about it, though, there was no reason for me to suspect you might be the Demon Lord.

Missing ending "?; Demon Lord.-> Demon Lord."

Volume 11 Part 1
91% Precious wood was Laffan's most important expert -> export

v1 chapter 3 Aruna threw up both her arms in utter joy. > Should be Foure

V4P6 ~91%:

"...and began quietly speaking the same time." -> "...and began quietly speaking at the same time."
(On re-read, I can see this being less an error and more just a style thing so ignore if you think it's an unnecessary change)

V4P7 ~82%:

"...she wasn't going save them." -> "...she wasn't going to save them."

V4P9 ~75%:

"...still hadn't been to locate Rebirth's..." -> "...still hadn't been able to locate Rebirth's..."

~85%:

"Having found a clear goal and trained diligently using his newfound sense..." -> "Having found a clear goal and trained training diligently using his newfound sense..."
(Suggestion here but "trained" doesn't sound right, I assume this isn't just me though...)

V4P5 ~100%:

"...like a doll and never wrapped up in anything unnecessary." -> "...like a doll and never got wrapped up in anything unnecessary."

v10p9:

87% - Eve’s energy was crazy high, and I should’ve known better than to get anywhere near in that state. -> Maybe it’s fine unspoken, but possibly missing word: […] and I should’ve known better than to get anywhere near her in that state.

v7p7:

54% - What’s this\?! -> Extra character: What’s this?!

v16p7 ~39%: "He also sad that he sometimes took samples and tested them..." -> said

V2 P4 (83%)
The beast's still-beating heard caused blood to spray forth...
-->The beast's still-beating heart caused blood

Vol 15 P 1 [78%]

The only villagers left are my family .... (were my family)

V9 P5 (%)

...she's a bit weary.
-->she's a bit wary.
(wary - feeling or showing caution about possible dangers or problems)

V10 P2, 61%
"Etan had deftly slipped passed Yorgos"
Passed -> past (I think - I got less sure on googling, but that still instinctively seems more correct)
V10 P3, 63%
"was running fresh boulders to the firing line When his betters had run out spears"
When -> when, and run out [of] spears
66%
"but he's got the skin of a maiden!." (unneeded fullstop at the end)
V10 P4, 88%
"at the cost of the occasional hand with chores around the shop ." (space before the fullstop)

v4p6 ~40%:

I'm not...sure how I feel about that, I thoughtI.

Erroneous I at end.