@Hylebos said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

v14p12 ~8%:

"Feelo free to soak as much as you'd like," I said.

Feelo -> Feel.

I was wondering if it should be “Feel free to soak up as much as you’d like”, since they’re talking about learning and not bathing… :)

v7 p5

~1%

I’d come to a pivotal decision point. I wasn’t about to let this group of soldiers deliver the supplies, of course. But I needed to locate the Jaysha’s party as a matter of priority, because with each passing minute, there was a growing danger that they might launch an ambush on Camille and the others. I had a good chance of finding them if I followed the resupply team, but I’d need to take into consideration that I might end up in a head-on fight. I’d make things a lot easier for myself if I destroyed the supplies and exhausted their resupply team first.

@zeji13 said in The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic:

locate the Jaysha's party -> locate Aishe's party

There's definitely something wrong there, but it's not clear what the fix should be. It might be what you propose, but since there are multiple other parties in the dungeon it might be something like:

But I needed to locate the other parties as a matter of priority, because with each passing minute, there was a growing danger that they might launch an ambush on Camille and the others. I had a good chance of finding at least one of them if I followed the resupply team

V1, P10 around 52%:

One Saturday after everything calmed down,Maya down, Maya and I were visiting our parents’ graves.

Missing space.

Around 78%:

Ruka hurriedly shook her head, denying what RInne Rinne had said.

Capitalization mistake.

V5 P5 (21% - 10th line down from top of page)

She'd gone and dived into a river...

• Dove is more common in American and Canadian English (e.g., “We dove right in”).
• Dived is the traditional form and is strongly favored in British English and most other English-speaking regions. (Merriam-Webster dictionary)

As an American, I'm more used to "dove" in this type of sentence, but I guess dived could be used for a larger audience (proper king's english, eh?).

v5.1 p9

~45%

“My apologies. Still, Sir Reinald has made it clear that he does not wish to see you dead, Your Highness.”
“If that’s the case, I can only imagine he has some horrid reason for wanting me to leave.”

In the context of the previous sentence, should that be

to live

V7 P2 (37% - 13th line down from top of page)

As time passed, it wore down there their physical and mental strength.

Remove "there" from sentence.

e.g. As time passed it wore down their physical and mental strength.

For volume 18: In part 5, 'beat red' should be 'beet red'

Edit: Also in part 6 it should be 'bare skin' not 'bear skin'

In part 7 it should be "forbidden tome" not "forbidden tomb" and "gripped heart" should be "gripped her heart"

In part 8, "to empty her stomach" should probably be something like "to fill her empty stomach"

V3 P5, 6%
"Fiona then passed the comb through Licia’s hair. The sound of the strange untangling sounded strangely loud."
Repetition. Perhaps one could be deleted, or swapped with a synonym

V7 P3, 79%
"I had never seen Satsuki look at me with such earnest hope before, so I felt obliged to raise my first and give her the best smile I could manage as I reaffirmed my promise."
First -> fist

88%
"I failed to completely dodge his lightning-fast stroke, and it cut a deep gash in my side."
I'm not certain, but I think stroke -> strike fits better

v13p7 ~80%

Gamut hat to go through Rohzenheim […]

Should probably be Giamut.

Volume 3 - Part 11:

[78‰] The information reaching him through official channels was often lacing, >> should be lacking

Looks like the last couple of changes didn't make it to the ebook. I still Dorino's name when I was reading it.

Arc 2 V1 P6

~70%

There is an old Japanese poem about staves that goes something like this: “If thrust, it is a spear. If swept, it is a naginata. When held, it is a sword. The stave is infallible in a myriad of ways. It teaches and disciplines without injury. Lessons are found beyond the stave.”
...
As soon as Zeke charged into the horde of orcs, he swung his stave. If an orc survived his onslaught, the attack left it too weak to keep fighting or pose a real threat. Zeke thrust his spear, stabbing again and again, as he moved through their ranks like a god of war.

I don't believe Zeke has a spear as well as a stave; he only has a stave, which can be used in a variety of styles. Perhaps that should be:

Zeke thrust his stave like spear, stabbing again and again, as he moved through their ranks like a god of war.

v1p7 ~24%

[…] yet if the temperature seemed to have suddenly shot up.

Probably without the if, or it seems as if the temperature.

Volume 10 Part 3
22% Credit for the paper revolution had never gone to Chise, but to the workers of th orphanage who helped her develop the methodologies.
Wasn't it Chise who helped the orphanage? In that case, shouldn't the sentence read:
Credit for the paper revolution had never gone to Chise, but to the workers of th orphanage whom she had helped to develop the methodologies.

V6 P7 Images seem incorrect. Image at 40% seems to be the one meant for 80% as it lines up with the situation at that point. The one at 80% seems to be meant for the next part.

Seems the image meant for 40% was skipped by mistake unless the images got out of sync earlier.

I forgot to note the percent through the chapter, but in today's release, there's an instance where one of Wayne's party members says quote-on-quote. That's not correct. It's quote unquote. The former is a common mistake (an "eggcorn" I want to say it's called?) but it's still definitely a mistake.

Vol 1 Pt 1 68% “my eyes caught on the crimson broach brooch”

Same error at 93%… and 98%. The jewelry is brooch , a broach is used to make holes .