Volume 4, Part 5:

[~70%]

"Tee hee. I guess it's my turn, huh?"
Gori had only been dodging Rand's attacks, but she suddenly stopped and said, "Tee hee. I guess it's my turn, huh?"

Confused if this is intentional or actually redundant. I'm guessing the first one actually needs to be removed.

v13p14:

10% - nearly a thousand text-covered titles -> Wrong word/extra letter: text-covered tiles

Vol 10 part 3
88% in "so the JDSF probably wouldn't have been willing to adjust their schedule."

Shouldn't this be JSDF or JDAG? there isn't any prior use of this acronym

@00-biting said in The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic:

"Yes, my bodyguard here took her time," said Jinshi.

yes it is obvious this is Maomao talking and not Jinshi.
There is even a reference to him feeling carefree (ref to LN5 epilogue)

v3p13:

92% - Nina. who had come across a mother who’d lost her child, -> Wrong punctuation: Nina, who had

V2P2

"She hired adventurers and sent them after her opponent in the election's apprentice, right?"

This is a "garden path" sentence. Intended meaning:

She hired adventurers and {sent them after {her opponent in the election}'s apprentice}, right?

but is most naturally parsed (when you don't know how it is going to end) as something like

She hired adventurers and {sent them after her opponent} in the {election's apprentice}, right?

Please reword to something like
"She hired adventurers and sent them after the apprentice of her opponent in the election, right?"

V4P12, 4%:

They were currently on a trip to visit their **granddaughter**, who had moved to the port town when she married. "We have a fantastic **grandchild**, but we've been so busy, we've never had a chance to meet her. We're so excited!" "She's almost three years old now!"

They're either visiting their daughter, or it's their great-grandchild who is 3, because I doubt their granddaughter married at 3.

V6 P5, 34%
"Kano don't let any information slip about [topic]."
Don't quite know what would fit in there, but sentence looks to end short.

V4 P7 (56% - 3rd line down from top of page)

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Replace "his" with "her"
e.g. - Sara crossed her arms

V5 P1 (33% - 16th line down from top and 14th line up from bottom of page)

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Shouldn't there be a "you" between "didn't" and "tell"?
(as in: why didn't you tell us...)

V14 P3 (88% - 13th line down from bottom of page)

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Correct "Prcs" to Orcs.

V5P3 0%

While that required me to take the long way around, the rolls were far cheaper.

Tolls?

v6p6 ~39%

They were only able to grasp such great political power in the first place was because...

v2 p2 ~22%

There's an encoding error, at least in the app:

In other words, it's better to be prepared...

Shows as

In other words, it’s better to be prepared

@Vorthod Thank you for the feedback!
This series has changed hands a few times now and unfortunately there has been a miscommunication on some terms.
I have been trying my best to rectify this, but this series has a habit of characters suddenly returning after six or seven volumes and they fall through the cracks.
I will pass along your feedback for the previous volumes and see what can be done.

Wails are definitely not large marine mammals .

If it’s not too late:
V6P11, 4%: “I’d have liked to capture [her] alive”

V8 P4 (12% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

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Add missing word "flags" in high-lighted area.

--> The two squires bearing flags - one bearing a red flag,...