V2P2
~44%

“If any of the facilities in this town are worse than that our capital’s, I’ll be sure to stick it to you!” he’d said.

Missing word? than that our capital’s->than that of our capital’s (or extra word ->`than our capital's)

Volume 7 - Part 2:

[99%] see them fruition. >> see them to fruition.

V14P9, 86%: “A treant posing [as] a piece of driftwood”

v6p5 ~94%:

Oh, you can practice with the one I just use.

just use. -> just used.

V1p7 ~42%

“The pair's lips parted, andInami's hands followed the outline of Aoi's body, caressing him all over.”

Missing space

10.1

we’d written, just to see gauge the outside world’s reactions.

V6P2, 37%: "those worn knives were [re]placed with fresh ones"

Volume 3 Part 8
56% every night in the royal order -> every knight in the royal order
76% kept in tough -> kept in touch - pcj got this one
88% mother had become further with father -> mother had become distant with father - although xbdx could be right with furious too

Volume 5 Part 8
52% chance like that." No, Aoi's request -> chance like that. No, Aoi's request
61% Strath silently pat Shenly on the head
-the illustration looks more like petting than patting

Volume 4 Part 4
31% According to [CR/LF] Mer
-there is an improper paragraph end in the middle of this sentence

V3P2 ~60%

Return turned his back to her to go to his room.

Should probably be Ren.

This, combined with the outfits the party guests wore, the sight was absolutely resplendent no matter where one looked.

The sentence is wrong. It would be possible to use Thus in place of This, but I doubt that was the intention. So maybe

This combined with the outfits the party guests wore for a sight that was absolutely [...]

without the commas and with the small change in the middle.

~83%

Their daughters understood this, stepped away from their fathers' quiet battle.

Feels like something is wrong or missing. I'd say stepping instead of stepped would suffice, or an and connecting the halves.

@Valanduin said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

On top of that, at the moment Erhardt was most definitely confident that his was Jurgens, not me.

His what?

His enemy, likely.

I have noticed that in the most recent part the name of the capital changed from Crystal Palace to Silver Palace.

V6P5 90%:

hit the breaks

breaks -> brakes

@Valanduin Just double-checked it and nope, no error. If it helps, though, the spirit monster rank system seems to be something the Heavenly Realmers created to generalize how strong the different types of spirit monsters are, so this is saying that Minor Deity-rank spirit monsters are about as strong as literal Minor Deities.

v4p4:

12% - .Wayne -> Period probably shouldn’t be there. As a bonus, is there a good way to cut back on the commas in the rest of the sentence? Maybe break it into two sentences? It feels like it runs on a bit too much. :)

Volume 4 Part 12
97% one grader higher -> one grade higher

@Charlie85 You're right. I think the editor's brain read "is it" instead of "it is" and added a question mark at the end, then my brain did the same when I accepted the edit. Thanks for pointing it out!