v10p6:

16% - Miliansha -> The names before and after are Miliasha, without the n. 65% - […] I was surprised to hear she’d approached goodhood so casually. -> Extra o, although maybe it’s the first one and not the second: godhood. Shirley is good, but a few sentences previously she was entering the realm of gods.

v7p4:

36% - If it melts anymore -> I think that a space is needed: any more 37% - That’s ourDevil Slime! -> Missing space: our Devil

Volume 7 Part 7:

At about 18% random line of text that says insert5 guessing that was supposed to be an insert image.

Volume 14 Part 16 [50%]

He was a member of one of the named clans, but a failure. He was a failure, but a member of the named clans.

Is the repetition of ideas intentional?

V3 P6 (93% - last page, 3rd sentence from bottom)

...and immediately lied down in bed...
if you want to use the word "lie" in this context, it should read: and had to immediately lie down in bed.. (lie down -verb)
The term "lied" means to speak falsely/untruthfully in English, so a better word to use is laid (past tense of lay).
e.g...and immediately laid down in bed...

P5V4
~64%

"I didn't think we'd actually finish in a day.

Missing closing "?; day.->day."

v15p13
63% His claims are that the church executed him without cause and were so self-righteous as they took someone’s life. -> What? "were so self-righteous as they took someone’s life" is that supposed to mean something like "and did so while being so self-righteous about it?" Also not sure that should be "and were" instead of "and was"... "and they were/it was being so self-righteous when they took his life" or something?

v16p3 ~71%

“This contrast stands out because it benefits one party at the expense of the other. I wouldn’t be surprised if you had delegated the drafting to someone else as you tended to your many duties, but that contract seemed malicious.”

contrast -> contract

v2p1:

53% - That’s why we he had to go on our own. -> Probably should get rid of that: That’s why we had to go on our own. 56% - Which is why you two outta come with us. -> Typo, or just his way of speaking? outta perhaps should be oughtta. It looks like out to vs ought to. The outta at 64% works, because it’s out of.

V2 P9 87% "but I'd wait to [burn] that bridge until if I ever got to it." -> "cross" Also the phrasing "until if I ever got to it" doesn't match the idiom, but I have no idea if that's just the authors choice of wording.

9.8:

reward for that job doing they're doing for America

reward for that job they're doing for America

Around180 yen.

Around 180 yen.

V6P8
~71%

Shocked by my comment, U clapped her hands to her cheeks in despair.

More a suggestion than a 'correction' here but since 'U' is the family name (even though it is known who is being talked about), since Sekiei and Oto are close enough, and since I think it is what is more done in this series, maybe changing so that it is the first name instead?; U->Oto