v2p7:

8% - Over the course of their plan, Nortold had fallen in love […] -> Unless they’re just similar names, it should be Notorld, as used at least three times before in this part. 74% - Londard Trading Company … It belonged to Viscount Londart. -> Are those supposed to be two different spellings? The owner’s name is repeated another time or two in this part, but not the business name… (If only we could have flashbacks to earlier times with the name written as Lawndart.) :)

V17 P4 Chapter 5 :
Uh, since this is the chapter about how not to raze the capitol, I think the following sentence is missing a major word:

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Shouldn't "raze" be in it as follows:
Do you want to raze the capital to the ground or something?!

(This is the last line at the bottom of the page at (89%.)

v5p9 ~50%:

[…] should still be intact , but […]

there's a stray space before the comma.

V4 P7 (28% - 10th line down from top of page)

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Correct indicated wording with "it's".

V8 P7 70%:
I don't think being my partner
The ' above is in the page as a text description of the mark, and should be fixed.

@Hylebos Thanks! It's fixed in the final version.

V4 P7, 9%
"Normally, this wouldn’t be a weapon that you’d pull out in a student tournament, but the union’s top brass don’t want fighters from the halidom and empire [to] hog all the attention"

V8.2 P7, 20%
“Ver well. Oh, actually, hold up a sec, Akira.”
Ver -> Very

58%
"[He] Then switched back to his guns and targetted the foot soldiers."

V6 P5 (58% - 2nd line down from top of page)

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Replace "here" with "her".
(e.g.- ...stolen Wisteria's seat from her...)

V6 p5, ~11%

[…] it also mediated and intervened in quarrels between assault clans. So it wasn't utterly toothless, it thus needed the the strength [...]

The beginning of the second sentence doesn't match up. Maybe

In order not to be toothless, it needed the strength […]

Or something along that idea.

v2p4:

2% - Now that she’d finally come too, […] -> Too many “o”s, I think: she’d finally come to 43% - I lsaw the swordsman […] -> A stray letter wandered into the sentence: I saw the

v7p11 ~62%

Prince Willie is spelled as Willi in

"Please, don't," Willi said with a rueful smile.

v2p3 ~55%

He was reluctant to spend money so lavishly right of the bat, so couldn't bring himself to ask for it right away.

The second half seems to be missing either a conjunction like and so couldn't or the subject like so he couldn't bring.

~80%

"Excuse me, can you please tell me the way to the old annex."

Should in my opinion be ended with a question mark.

5.5:

guarantees!"But some

guarantees!" But some

v12p9 ~44%

The little dragon and its rider floated into the air, and rained rainbow light over them.

The actor in the second half sentence is off, as in <someone> rained the rainbow light. Changing the order to

The little dragon and its rider floated into the air, and rainbow light rained over them.

keeps things open (it's Megades' action).

~63%

He had read the bird in a book […]

Should probably be

He had read about the bird in a book […]

Volume 21. Part 12. 55%

Like in part 7, it's the same song Selphy sang in volume 19 ("Can you hear my song?")

Volume 4 part 5 about 91%

It says

staying in the Fierce Ogrefolk village

but the characters right now are in the Beastfolk village

V6 P2 (50% - 9th line up from bottom of page)

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Replace "tit" with "it".