V3 P2, 21%
"She was mid-conversation, yet hersky-blue eyes flashed with fear as sheapologised?"
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"I took another look at the Barometz, which bore thee unmistakable hallmarks..."
Thee -> the
24%
"he Barometz's movements stopped completely"
He -> the
31%
"The priest ... nodded solemnly, That would do."
Comma -> fullstop
56%
“Suspicious!? N-No, that’s not it! I’m definitely not a suspicious person...” Her voice was overcome with emotion."
It sounds like she's reacting to be referred to as suspicious, but if so I'm failing to find the word mentioned in the preceding paragraphs. Is 'suspicious' possibly an alternate translation for 'fangirl'?
83%
"The sound of clanging metal echoed again and again,and I felt the protective magic I’d placed on the fence surrounding the annex activate. Iran toward it."
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