V4 P7 (88% - 2nd line up from bottom of page)

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Change "he" to the.

v5 p3

~55%

I’d been about to explain how the Northcours were constantly hosting guests, that Samuel and I would often play the hanon for those guests after dinner, and that that was the reason Samuel and I hadn’t had time to compose. I’d cut myself off so I could keep it a secret that Percival and Albert had visited the Northcourt manor.

=> Northcourts

@SilverFuton oh shoot, i forgot this is a general thread for the whole book series

Volume 13 Part 3
45% an extremely a deep sigh > an extremely deep sigh
46% chuckled as glanced -> chuckled as [she | we] glanced
81% should be fine also as you follow our instructions -> should be fine as long as you follow our instructions
89% Jade Winged -> Jade Wings

inb4 Shiō

v16p7:

48% - […] he had been known to work in nothing but a work shorts, […] -> Extra, or missing word(s)? “in nothing but work shorts” or “in nothing but a pair of work shorts”

Volume 5 - Part 8:

Ms Maliksi

I can't recall if I missed any from the other parts but the contractions Mr., Ms., and Mrs. should have a period after them. So in this case, Ms. Maliksi.

v1p5 ~40%:

Christina obeyd and carried an item envelopped in cloth to Dylac, placing it on the ground.

envelopped -> enveloped.

~80%:

While at a slow pace, I was steadily making progress in my mastery of Graspin Magic.

Graspin -> Grasping.

Volume 2 - Part 1:

[21%]

the man in all black

should be hyphenated since it's an adjective (or noun). all-black

Volume 3 - Part 6:

[8%]

By bending truths and lives,

lives > lies

[38%]

They had to be about three hundred meters away, so Dorth relaxed.

And then the arrow zoomed through the air, dashing Dorth's optimism.

These confused me because it is talking through a POV of Franco's vassal, facing Dorth's (or rather, Luke's) army. It doesn't make sense why Dorth is being described here.

p12v4 13%:

"Chairman Yusef, how about I send you a portrait of Jonas on the day he confers his barony?" -> wouldn't the barony be confered upon him? Later on Dahl thinks about receiving her barony so that's probably the right phrasing?

v1p5 ~46%:

A Rank-2species—Arachne."

2species -> 2 species.

v1 p5

~30%

I was nervous about setting out on a journey, but it was a good chance to get out of my normal environment. Rright now, I was eating a peaceful meal. That alone made it feel worth leaving the temple.

=> Right

@pcj said in orrections to Vol 13:

@karasutengu that just means it's been a while since they made any mistakes for anyone to report.

That, or that anyone felt engaged enough to report something. :p I’ve stopped reporting missed spaces for the most part, unless there were other things to report and I remembered where those missed spaces were. ^o^

SS1 P6 (54% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

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Need to add a missing "a", i.e. to a cafe.

(In English syntax "a" is used when referring to someone or something for the first time in a text or conversation.)

v3 p4 15%:

"The women who’d brought up Aoi frowned." -> woman

3.1:

This time,s he didn't bat my hand away.

This time, she didn't bat my hand away.

@Valanduin said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

In the latest part the word jealous and words derived from it like jealousy is used in many places. Although it is very commonly misused (it is up there with literally), technically jealousy is when you don't want other people to have what belongs to you and envy is when you want something that belongs to you, envy would fit better in most of the places jealous appears. It wouldn't be a big deal if it was a one off because of how frequently jealous of misused, but when it is relating to the powers of the Devil of Envy being both inconsistent and incorrect with the terminology stands out a lot more.

While it is true that is one meaning of "jealous," Merriam-Webster's top definition for it also states it to mean, "hostile toward a rival or one believed to enjoy an advantage." Even stating that definition is equivalant to "envious." On the MW website, they also state that jealous can hold the same meaning as envious in the way "to describe someone who feels or shows a very strong desire for something that belongs to someone else."

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/jealous