V1 P2

10% "Depends on what it is," Milly replied coldly. "Eh?!"

The "Eh?!" is Bibi's reply, so should probably be on a new line. Otherwise, it looks like Milly is responding to her own comment.

44% > At present 50% > She opened 55% > "Ah."

What is the purpose of the > symbol? It appears at the start of some paragraphs but there isn't anything particular of note in the narrative to require a special symbol.

@Jojajones We're witnessing the cannonization of a pun. Seen it used in another book title already. A bit blunt if you ask me, but to each generation their sense.

Volume 12 P3:

Haruka, I think you and Haruka could

The double reference to Haruka is weird I could also read it as: Haruka, I think Haruka and Haruka could

Volume 12 P5:

it had been an eternity since last we were able to sup on white rice and the like.

Sup on white rice? What does that mean?

V4P1p4 71%:

Leave it to Martina and I

Should be "to Martina and me". It's the object of a preposition.

V8.1 P4 59% "... someone paid 2 Billion... only took 200 mil in cash... does a hundredth of that price sound realist to you?" -> math ain't mathin'. its either a "tenth" or there is a rogue zero.

v6p2:

34% - Well, if the king’s okay with it, then so am I. Emma thought, dreamily watching the king’s uninhibited eating habits. -> Should that period be a comma, as you’d use when having spoken dialogue ([…], then so am I, Emma thought […])? It looks rather weird to me as two sentences. It’s also been a while since I covered this in school, and maybe punctuation usage has changed. :p

V1 P11

“It must be convenient to have candles that light and extinguish themselves.”
“They’re imbued with a spell that makes them do that,” Petra said. “They’re expensive, though, and they only react to people with mana. Not very useful to the general public.”
“I see.”
There weren’t many people with enough mana to activate magical devices. For the candles to reach the masses, they would need to be altered to react to both those with mana and those without.
“Why don’t nobles have them, then?”

=> “I see.” (I believe that line is Liliana's so it's telepathic not spoken.)

@AlexUsman said in The Villainess Speaks Not - Corrections Topic:

Liliana greeted the familiar palace guards, told her escorts to wait
Maybe commanded or something else would work better?

Maybe signalled to?

Thank you for the corrections posted to vol 6 thus far.

v1p12:

Nanalie family name is Ronamis in the chapter title and RonamisRominas in the rest of the chapter. Not sure which is the right one, but the latter looks like a bulk replace mistake.

V14P7, 62%: “even though we were playing against two against one”

96%: “foxifire” - should probably be just foxfire (狐火)

Volume 7 - Part 11:

[74%] I only tagged alone this time >> should be along

Volume 7 - Part 12:

[95%] on the head.She looked >> needs a space

a1v6p10 - 41%

While curry often appeared in iseskai stories,...

v3p4:

70% - And what are you gonna do, Ashia. -> Aishia, I presume.

@karasutengu "I'd felt" = "I had felt", meaning the verb is in the past perfect tense. Thus, the "felt" here is not a simple past tense but rather a past participle. The same is true of "opened". "I'd opened" = "I had opened". The "had" there also extends to "seen" because the "and" is joining the two verbs of the compound predicate. The "I" here is performing both the actions of "had opened" and "had seen", so the two verbs must be in the same tense, past perfect.

"I had opened and had seen" isn't technically incorrect, but it sounds stiff and awkward, which is why English allows the second "had" to be dropped!

V2 P8 (29% - 12th line up from bottom of page)

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Remove extra "further".

v4 p5

~ 80%

“Patience brought hot water bottles for you and Jane,”’ the princess shared. “She also brought some needle threaders.”

=> Jane,” (Extra single quote at the end)

V3 P7 (87% - 10th line down from top of page)

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Change "wishe" to "wish".

V1P4, 0%: “A few days had passed since we left Ishtar, and we currently traversed the forest while staying, making sure to keep up our guards.” - staying what? Missing word?

P6, 21%: “There was no longer a place of Allen within the Adventurer's Guild.” - for
80%: “Apparently, this whole area had been part of the demons' secret layer” - lair

P7, 93%: “I laid Clara down on the ground” - Claire