V3P7, 4%:

Princess Edith, who had been walking merrily beside Roland, suddenly stopped. "This garden is so beautiful, Lord Riley. Is there any part of it you're particularly fond of?"

No matter how many times Riley asked her not to address him so formally, she refused to relent. He had long since given up trying to persuade her, though he still insisted on addressing her formally in turn.

from the context, should that be informally? From part 4:

Edith looked up. "Um, I visit them often. There's one I particularly like. I could take you there sometime, Lord Riley."

Silence fell over the lounge. Failing to notice the sarcasm between the two princes was troubling enough, but addressing Riley so casually without permission was an even more serious breach of etiquette.

I’m only just getting around to reading the book. The ebook’s not out here at JNC for a few hours. Did anyone get it from another retailer already? I’ll send this via email, too. I’ll add any others that haven’t already been noted (if there are any) to this post as I read the volume.

v7p2:

72% - The sight of all that flaccid flab barely contained by his oily was tough to look at. -> Missing word. Probably: barely contained by his oily skin was tough to look at. Could be something else, though.

v3p1 ~39%:

"I mean, this is you we're talking about," LIcia said, stating the obvious with an unconcerned expression.

LIcia -> Licia

A2 V1 P3 (88% - 4th, 5th and 6th lines up from bottom of page)

Text narrative of Marquess Heinlein:

"Marquess Alexis Heinlein entered first. Known as a major noble from the south and the Prime Minister of Knightley, he was the one supporting the framework of the Empire, both in name and substance."

Since Heinlein is a noble of the Kingdom of Knightley and it's Prime Minister, shouldn't "Empire" actually be "Kingdom"?

@Adam-Haffen Thank you sir. I had a feeling it was based on the original Japanese text.

V4P3
0%

Let’s see... It’s an object that chimes with the wind, so how about ‘wind chime?’

Maybe move ’ before question because ? is not in name? chime?’->chime’?

15.1:

When I;d checked the beehive

When I'd checked the beehive

They were merely laid inside the baskets, but carefully arranged into a lovely display.

They weren't merely laid inside the baskets, but carefully arranged into a lovely display.

Volume 14 Part 7
01% I'm here with other girls here today -> I'm here with other girls today
06% he nodded himself -> he nodded to himself - Crey got this
09% how excels at his craft -> how he excels at his craft
15% even he heard my pragmatic reply -> even [when|after] he heard my pragmatic reply - Crey got this
38% Metee's -> Metea's
42% plates of snakes -> plates of snaks - Crey got this
66% I'm gonna bring this up -> I'm not gonna bring this up - Geezer got this

V1P8 ~58% and ~90%: The earlier reference mentions royal library's repository and the latter royal library archival storage...

~58%: "Be sure to comb through the royal library's repository as well."
~90%: "The prime minister mentioned something about 'royal library archival storage.'"

Are these referring to the same part of the royal library (as I could not find another reference that would fit)? The latter is used in quotes too, so the same words should be used for both if so. (The start of P8 goes back to calling it a repository too.)

v6p3 ~27%:

Once I'd thickened it with potato starch, I threw in a generous amount of green leak tops.

leak -> leek.

V1P12
~11%

No sooner than Shizumi spoke the words, looks of horror appeared on the faces of her attendants.

Maybe missing word and wrong word? No sooner than Shizumi spoke the words, looks of horror appeared->No sooner had Shizumi spoke the words, than looks of horror appeared

~21%

Speakingly loudly, Shizumi turned to residents who lived in the manor and had come to see the cause of the commotion.

Extra letters? Speakingly->Speaking
Maybe missing word? turned to residents->turned to the residents

~21%

The retainers we disturbed by the thought of such a house turning traitor.

Wrong word / missing letters? we->were

~42%

The incessant chirping of the corporations and the rabble in Central Province has finally ceased.

Maybe wrong word? (Because the talk after is about Banda and the nobles from Shumon parliament underestimate Tsuguho and they try to make money, not about any from Takamagahara central province? It is maybe centre of this province (Shumon)?)

~63%

There was such a haze about him that he was difficult to see him at all.

Extra words? that he was difficult to see him at all->that it was difficult to see him at all
(or ->that he was difficult to see at all)

~63%

All that remained of his feelings was a single remnant—a desperate plea that purple spirits had saved and entrusted to Hanezu before they scattered and vanished.

Extra letter? (because only talk about Fuyo) spirits->spirit

~63%

She saw the usual buzz activity of Karen, but now it was a delightful sight, so much more alive and vibrant than before.

Maybe missing word? buzz activity->buzz of activity

~74%

That moment that thought occurred to me was the moment that Akira was born.

Maybe wrong word? That->The

V1 P5 60%

a fellow C-rank student named Jutta

Fellow C-rank student makes it sound like MC and Jutta are both C-rank, but MC is D-rank.

v1 p5

~37%

: Seriously?
: I mean I do know of how to add a little mana to swords and stuff, but I never heard that it would produce this much power...
: Yeah, it’s supposed to just be a little bit of support...right?
: Come on, only a monster could use this method to counter enemies who fight at long range...

This section of text is both italicized and monospaced. It should probably not be italicized, as a rule the chat logs are not italicized.

~45%

: Whoaaaa!
: I can’t believe it...
: At that level there’s no need for weapons w
: He’s such a monster w

Also probably should not be italicized.

v1 p5

~30%

Temples are training grounds for priests and are considered dwellings of the gods. Priests who pray there can be granted greater magical power. Since the Moon Goddess remains close to humanity, her temples can be found in every city. However, a donation is required to use the altar where prayers and offer prayers.

That final clause doesn't scan. I can't really guess what it should be though, maybe the altar where prayers are offered ?

V8 P4 (8% - 11th line down from top of page)

"But I could ask, the knight had already flown..."

add missing "before" in sentence

e.g. But before I could ask,...

V4 P11 (22% - 2nd & 3rd lines own from top of the page)

"WE WANTED TO GO THE FOREST."

Add missing word "TO" or "IN" in the sentence for better syntax:

e.g. WE WANTED TO GO TO THE FOREST.
-or-
WE WANTED TO GO IN THE FOREST

@Valanduin said in Keep Me Close: Finding My Home in You - Corrections Topic:

Volume 1 part 5 59%

How about the numbers for a three-year period from five years ago to three years ago, then?

Five years ago to three years ago is only a 2 year period.

Five years ago, four years ago, and three years ago. Three years in total.

V5P5:

17%: "“Right, yes.” Elaina ridded her arms of shell" -> rid 33% "“You could help it! You were fighting" -> couldn't 50%: "“If went up and disappeared on his own" -> If he 67%: "The Shrine of the Dragoon King" -> Dragon 67%: "Shrine of the Dragon King, as a dragon really had" -> as if a dragon 83%: "Canaria’s motivations lied wholly in personal interest." -> lay