Looks like the last couple of changes didn't make it to the ebook. I still Dorino's name when I was reading it.

v3 p11

~15%

It was Liliana’s first time speaking directly with the imperial prince. Until then, she had only stood by Riley’s side with a reserved smile, either nodding or shaking her head to each question that was put to her, relaying none of her true thoughts to Roland or Edith.

Since Liliana doesn't speak, I'd suggest a more general term such as

It was Liliana’s first time communicating directly with the imperial prince. engaging directly or interacting directly are also options.

Arc 2 V1 P6

~70%

There is an old Japanese poem about staves that goes something like this: “If thrust, it is a spear. If swept, it is a naginata. When held, it is a sword. The stave is infallible in a myriad of ways. It teaches and disciplines without injury. Lessons are found beyond the stave.”
...
As soon as Zeke charged into the horde of orcs, he swung his stave. If an orc survived his onslaught, the attack left it too weak to keep fighting or pose a real threat. Zeke thrust his spear, stabbing again and again, as he moved through their ranks like a god of war.

I don't believe Zeke has a spear as well as a stave; he only has a stave, which can be used in a variety of styles. Perhaps that should be:

Zeke thrust his stave like spear, stabbing again and again, as he moved through their ranks like a god of war.

V7 P4, 6%
"Either way, beast meat was a delicacy to someone like Jaysha, who’d grown up in the barren dessert."
Dessert -> desert

V14 P11, 9%
"Hmm. Should I take the gamble and try chomping off those branches?"
I may be underestimating Nao's chompers, otherwise chomping -> chopping

23% "she watched the elder treant ruffle its needles and branches"
25% "The elder treant had stopped ruffling its body"
I can't say that this is incorrect, I'm not fluent in all the nuances of how ruffle can be used, but this sounds incorrect to my ears. Perhaps due me primarily hearing the term when one party affects another, rather than having heard of it being done to ones self (eg ruffling of feathers: disorder/messup/annoy someone else)

53%
"The person on the receiving end would need to be healed by Haruka or Natsuki if they somehow survived. It’d likely be [fine/healed/manageable with] healing magic, but the whole process would still feel incredibly embarrassing."

95%
"We had promised beforehand that we would evenly split up whatever we earned from selling elder treant materials with the Wind"
Wind -> Jade Wings

v1p7 ~24%

[…] yet if the temperature seemed to have suddenly shot up.

Probably without the if, or it seems as if the temperature.

Volume 10 Part 3
22% Credit for the paper revolution had never gone to Chise, but to the workers of th orphanage who helped her develop the methodologies.
Wasn't it Chise who helped the orphanage? In that case, shouldn't the sentence read:
Credit for the paper revolution had never gone to Chise, but to the workers of th orphanage whom she had helped to develop the methodologies.

V6 P7 Images seem incorrect. Image at 40% seems to be the one meant for 80% as it lines up with the situation at that point. The one at 80% seems to be meant for the next part.

Seems the image meant for 40% was skipped by mistake unless the images got out of sync earlier.

I forgot to note the percent through the chapter, but in today's release, there's an instance where one of Wayne's party members says quote-on-quote. That's not correct. It's quote unquote. The former is a common mistake (an "eggcorn" I want to say it's called?) but it's still definitely a mistake.

Vol 1 Pt 1 68% “my eyes caught on the crimson broach brooch”

Same error at 93%… and 98%. The jewelry is brooch , a broach is used to make holes .

V1 Pt2 , 93%

“Her interest peeked piqued,”

V2P2, 13%: “he thought it better not [to] interfere with his old unit more than he had to.”

V5P9:

22%: "I mean, we couldn’t get anyone with phony strength" -> ???

Volume 4 Part 6
14% I intended to make soft charcoal -then
40% I'd decided to plant ... sawtooth oaks
41% hard charcoal, which could be made from sawtooth oaks
42% dependant on our attempts to make soft charcoal
So yeah, sawtooth oak does make hardwood charcoal and it is pine that makes softwood charcoal. So, either the entries at 14%, and 42%, and other references further in the story should be changed to say 'hard', or all the references to the trees shoulc be changed to 'pine'. Also, if the wood references are changed to pine, then the bag or acorns would have to change too.

Alternatively, I suppose that the next chapter could have him preparing pine trees for the actual kiln work to make the soft charcoal. The pine would have to be prepared and dried too, so that order would have its own issues.

v7p2 ~10%

I'd have struggled to think of two people I'd prefer not to have seen me in combat than Kirigaya and Subaru.

I feel like this should be rather than or over.

~65%

"You know, I think it might even win this thing, no?"

Could be better as win this fight, especially with thing referring to Arthur just the sentence before.

V3 P4, 82%
"Right as the sun rose the following morning, everyone had breakfast together before Ren saw Licia and The Lizard off at the font gate."
Font -> front

V9P1.3

hoped against hope that Sheryl that running away - seems to be missing some words, maybe "that Sheryl could be convinced that running away"

none of them were foolish enough to declare openly that they were working with the gang, but their intentions had been obvious when they'd stopped coming all of a sudden - Again missing words, is the first part supposed to be "no longer working," considering the second part?

V14 P6 (6% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

All the while, Light move not an inch from his spot,...

Wrong tense. Correct to "moved not",

e.g. All the while, Light moved not an inch from his spot,...
-or-
All the while, Light didn't move an inch from his spot,...