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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Corrections in Discussion Topics
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    • Rahul Balaggan

      Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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    • yuzumori

      Now I'm a Demon Lord! - Corrections Topic
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      Iseguy

      4.5

      the flames surrounding the blade were the drive force.

      “driving force.”

    • myskaros

      The Magician Who Rose From Failure - Corrections Topic
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      Volume 5 - Part 9:

      [63%] Charlotte's premonition did not come from text. She knew too much for that.
      So it was smell, intuition, or sight?

      Probably the best way to re-state this would be "Charlotte's premonition did not come from something she read."

      Since those where the ways of "detecting" discussed before [47%]

      Is it a smell? Is it intuition? Something they have read? Something they can see?

      It makes me wonder what the original Japanese transcript for this was like? Did the author literally use the word "text"? ^_^

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      I Shall Survive Using Potions! - Corrections Topic
      potionloli • • lovelight

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      Iseguy

      @Mark-Logue said in I Shall Survive Using Potions! - Corrections Topic:

      upon the request being made, so no-one complained.

      “no one”

    • schuburner

      A Cave King's Road to Paradise - Corrections Topic
      cave king • • schuburner

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      Canipa

      Thanks, all!

    • yuzumori

      VTuber Legend - Corrections Topic
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      c933103

      Thanks for your work!

    • yuzumori

      The Unwanted Undead Adventurer - Corrections Topic
      unwanted undead • • yuzumori

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      Tomey

      @Gamen I double-checked with the new translator to be sure, and I was wrong. Splintering is the same as Division. Different translators described it differently and I took that as they were different things. This will be fixed in v10 and in future volumes. Thanks for mentioning it!

    • myskaros

      My Stepmom's Daughter Is My Ex - Corrections Topic
      stepexes • • myskaros

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      v6p9:

      84% - Though I may not have personally partook in the activities, […] -> I think that partook might work, since we don’t always use the best grammar as kids or because it is still a correct choice, partaken sounds better in my head. Compromise, and use partooken? ;p
    • morgenstern

      Yashiro-kun's Guide to Going Solo - Corrections Topic
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      Geezer Weasalopes

      V2 P7:

      There were several shrines around here, TimeI didn't know where to start. Times like these are when

      There were several shrines around here, I didn't know where to start. Times like these are when

      maybe I'll get a late start," ¶ I suggested,

      The ¶ indicates an uncalled for paragraph break.

    • morgenstern

      The Misfit of Demon King Academy - Corrections Topic
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      Geezer Weasalopes

      @Ingraman said in The Misfit of Demon King Academy - Corrections Topic:

      v4a1p7:

      39% - We shall now be holding an expedition exam to Ahartherm. -> Previously, including in the chapter title a few lines above, it’s Aharthern, with an “n”, not an ”m”.

      "While Ahathern is a nation, it is also a spirit."

      Another variant upon Aharthern.

      What could they do with that speck of magic or theirs?

      What could they do with that speck of magic of theirs?

      or => of

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      Bibliophile Princess - Corrections Topic
      mushikaburihime j-novel heart • • lovelight

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      Geezer Weasalopes

      Volume 6 Part 6:

      shouted, Berndt! If they won't listen to you, I'll go.

      shouted, "Berndt! If they won't listen to you, I'll go.

      Missing opening double quote.

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      Peddler in Another World - Corrections Topic
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      Geezer Weasalopes

      @Terabyte said in Peddler in Another World - Corrections Topic:

      Volume 3 - Part 1:

      [70%] “I placed a barrier around the house that means only blood relatives ► Add a comma or period? Or reword the sentence.

      Maybe replace "means only" with "only allows"?
      Presuming that works with the rest of the sentence.

    • myskaros

      To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic
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      Mark Logue

      Volume 6 Part 8
      50% - "Did they get any cooking-related skills to this?"
      As written, this sentence doesn't make a lot of sense. Considering the flow of the conversation that follows, it is likely that it should be:
      "Did they use any cooking-related skills to make this?"

      67% - "It is possible to encounter dangerous forests even in the shallow areas of forests, after all.
      Replace the first instance of forests with either creatures or monsters:
      "It is possible to encounter dangerous creatures even in the shallow areas of forests, after all.
      "It is possible to encounter dangerous monsters even in the shallow areas of forests, after all.

    • yuzumori

      Zero Believers - Corrections Topic
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      Mark Logue

      Volume 7 Part 4
      14% - "My knight, we need to get out of the country!" They are in a city when she says this. As written, the phrase has the meaning of getting out of an undeveloped region when I believe she means she wants to get out of Great Keith altogether. The better phrasing for that would be: "My knight, we need to get out of this country!"

    • morgenstern

      Death's Daughter and the Ebony Blade - Corrections Topic
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      pcj

      Volume 4 - Part 1:

      [67%] No one could stop themselves wince at Sara’s self-directed sarcasm. >> should be from wincing
    • yuzumori

      Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic
      hookup hiccups • • yuzumori

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      Okay, so apparently it's probably something to do with how stuff's automated at JNC, meaning we might end up needing to use hyphens instead, rather than using the usual Chicago rule. I'm not 100% sure where it happens along the line since it's appearing in the parts on site, but just expect hyphens from now on.

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      Record of Wortenia War - Corrections Topic
      wortenia • • lovelight

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      Terabyte

      Volume 18 - Part 7:

      [35%] won’t amount to much, ” Ryoma said. ► Remove extra space.
    • myskaros

      Housekeeping Mage from Another World - Corrections Topic
      housekeeping j-novel heart • • myskaros

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      Terabyte

      Volume 5 - Part 4:

      [69%] said Jens, titling his head in a moment ► It should be tilting.
    • morgenstern

      Conqueror from a Dying Kingdom - Corrections Topic
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      Pomelo

      Thanks for the help, everyone!

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