V1 P1, 49%
“Of course! But fear not, for you will have a perfect body, Satie!”
It confused me while reading it, til finding out in a bit that that's her reincarnated name. A bit of precognition/foretelling? Or should it be 'Satie' -> 'Saki' at this point (especially as she's then referred to as Saki Osanai just a few paragraphs later)?

V5 P2, 92%
"Though I’d felt their gazes on me, I hadn’t been able to sense them at all."
Probably correct, or not worth fussing over, but reads to me more like "though I'd sensed them, I hadn't been able to sense them". Maybe something more like "Though I’d felt their gazes on me, I hadn’t been able to sense [their source] at all"?

A1 V7 P16 (42% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

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Add "was" between the words outlned above for correct syntax -
e.g. "his allies' defensive line was at its' limits"

V7P3

After all, the Empire was firmly landlocked.

But the map shows that it is not.

V1 P1, 4%
"...sparing him no measure of animosity, scorn, [or] loathing."

4%
"Though he was only a young boy, but a month past his tenth birthday..."
In the time it's taken me to type this up I've talked myself out of it, but originally I had thought it worked better without the comma after 'boy'. Leaving this in anyway, for someone with better grammar skills than I to assess.

11%
Blight was a general term for any form of calamity brought about by a poison known as miasma, which was born from the realm of death**[.]**
(missing fullstop)

V1 P2, 23%
"In his heart was a young beast that still remembered the abuse he’d endured by the hand adults, and it was baring its fangs snarling now."
'Hand' doesn't seem right, but I'm not thinking of what might be intended instead.

83%
"...but don’t you think it’s a good idea to thin out the monsters on Mount Myoukaku, just in case?"
I think it was 'Myokaku' in part 1 (78%). Haven't read ahead to know which is correct, but one might need changing. (Myokaku in part 3, so likely part 2 is the one that needs changing)

P3, 13%
"The soldiers hastily spit themselves into two groups with their shields and spears at the ready."
Spit -> split

54% "For a moment, he felt relief, thinking the danger had passed, but then the hog’s evil eyes fixed on Akira from within the ice. He couldn’t help but shirk back."
Shirk -> shrink

Thank you for the corrections posted for vol 6 thus far.

V18 P2 (13% - 8th line down from top of page)

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Add "table" after coffee to match another sentence on the same page.

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Volume 13 Part 2
60% It only a few requests -> It only had a few requests

V4 P2 (47% - 11th line up from bottom of page)

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Insert missing "on" between outlined words
e.g. Astrid got up on Tien's shoulders.

V17 P8, 28%
"Ka Kunlou was a man well-versed in the Serpents’ secret techniques. He knew plenty of useful and peculiar medicines and poisons, how to mix a powder that glowed when wet, and even how to cause an explosion that could fill a room with dust."
By any chance, could the sentence be referring to a 'dust explosion'? If so: "and even how to cause an explosion [from a room filled] with dust."
Or more explicitly: "and even how to cause an explosion [with nothing more that the fine particles in the air of a room filled] with dust."

V2p10 10% - [There's a piece of paper pasted here] - I think this is meant to be replaced by an illustration?

V13 P6, 68%
“No, it hasn’t. The stronger one’s magic is, the more quirks it is likely to have. It tends to have more quirks."
Repetition. Could be there for emphasis or nuance, if so change one of the 'quirks'. Otherwise second portion could be deleted.

V4P7

67%: "“W-Well, stop it!” she yelled, her face beat red." -> beet

@Shiroi-Hane - I think you mean V4P1 instead of V4P12, yes?

v1p3 ~0%

[...] that they couldn't unable to abandon [...]

couldn't abandon or would be unable to abandon or wouldn't be able to abandon

~35%

My outrage piqued so dramatically [...]

Maybe peaked? There is no fitting meaning of piqued here.

v2p9 ~0%

They'd entered a tube that some brought [...]

Should likely be somehow.

~96%

"Well, after a half a year of [...]

The first "a" needs to go.

v2p8 ~97%

It seems I should leave this to you," [...]

Misses the opening double quotation mark.

v3p9 ~58%

Like I said , she's [...]

There's an extra space before the comma.

~85%

I think you're over reacting.

Overreacting should be one word.

~88%

Maybe she came in place of Diana?

Depending who is thinking this (and reasonable expectations about guard members, and information from the name), this might be better as he.