I forgot to note the percent through the chapter, but in today's release, there's an instance where one of Wayne's party members says quote-on-quote. That's not correct. It's quote unquote. The former is a common mistake (an "eggcorn" I want to say it's called?) but it's still definitely a mistake.

Vol 1 Pt 1 68% “my eyes caught on the crimson broach brooch”

Same error at 93%… and 98%. The jewelry is brooch , a broach is used to make holes .

V1 Pt2 , 93%

“Her interest peeked piqued,”

V2P2, 13%: “he thought it better not [to] interfere with his old unit more than he had to.”

V5P9:

22%: "I mean, we couldn’t get anyone with phony strength" -> ???

Volume 4 Part 6
14% I intended to make soft charcoal -then
40% I'd decided to plant ... sawtooth oaks
41% hard charcoal, which could be made from sawtooth oaks
42% dependant on our attempts to make soft charcoal
So yeah, sawtooth oak does make hardwood charcoal and it is pine that makes softwood charcoal. So, either the entries at 14%, and 42%, and other references further in the story should be changed to say 'hard', or all the references to the trees shoulc be changed to 'pine'. Also, if the wood references are changed to pine, then the bag or acorns would have to change too.

Alternatively, I suppose that the next chapter could have him preparing pine trees for the actual kiln work to make the soft charcoal. The pine would have to be prepared and dried too, so that order would have its own issues.

Volume 3 Part 10
50% at a young ago -> at a young age pcj strikes again!
58% he might resort to text -> he might resort to next Shiroi's comment on this was priceless!
71% Throughout out, however, -> Throughout the [voyage | trip | journey], however,

v7p2 ~10%

I'd have struggled to think of two people I'd prefer not to have seen me in combat than Kirigaya and Subaru.

I feel like this should be rather than or over.

~65%

"You know, I think it might even win this thing, no?"

Could be better as win this fight, especially with thing referring to Arthur just the sentence before.

V3 P4, 82%
"Right as the sun rose the following morning, everyone had breakfast together before Ren saw Licia and The Lizard off at the font gate."
Font -> front

V9P1.3

hoped against hope that Sheryl that running away - seems to be missing some words, maybe "that Sheryl could be convinced that running away"

none of them were foolish enough to declare openly that they were working with the gang, but their intentions had been obvious when they'd stopped coming all of a sudden - Again missing words, is the first part supposed to be "no longer working," considering the second part?

V14 P6 (6% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

All the while, Light move not an inch from his spot,...

Wrong tense. Correct to "moved not",

e.g. All the while, Light moved not an inch from his spot,...
-or-
All the while, Light didn't move an inch from his spot,...

Arc 2 V1 P5

At around 30% Ryo states:

“I see. So, it’s like the Crimson Sword of the past.”

“Warren the shield bearer was the absolute supportive pillar of the party, and he could do anything, from defense to cooking. The brains of the party was Rihya, who had been a renowned priest. Lyn, who could even cast Bullet Rain, was our main source of offense. Despite this, our leader was Abel, because he was the prince.”

While Ryo did fight alongside Crimson Sword from time to time, I don't think he was ever actually a member, was he? If so, the first-person plural possessive might not be appropriate. Suggest instead:

“Warren the shield bearer was the absolute supportive pillar of the party, and he could do anything, from defense to cooking. The brains of the party was Rihya, who had been a renowned priest. Lyn, who could even cast Bullet Rain, was the main source of offense. Despite this, its leader was Abel, because he was the prince.”

~ 50%

While the news was no bother to him—he’d just finished enjoying not only a Mont Blon but a modified mille-crêpes as well—he didn’t think it was right for this person to be so loud that they were causing trouble for the other patrons. He glanced over and saw three youths, likely adventurers, were the cause of the commotion.

"Mont Blon" -- "Mount Blonde"? I cannot find a reference to "Mont Blon" anywhere via search, so maybe that should also be

Mont Blanc

V8, P5, around 22%:

Neither! In all likelihood, our enemy is Marquess Dozraan Dozran!

Duplicated letter.

Volume 13 part 6 0%

If we can beat it, we will retreat and wait for Krena and Haku...

"can" should probably be "can't".

V4 P9 (0% - last sentence at bottom of page)

Then my mother lied down next to me,...
The correct word should be "laid", the past tense of lay.

e.g: Then my mother laid down next to me,...

FYI: Lied is the past tense of lie (an untruth).

V7 Part 3

At the moment, Elvan was making his way to a dungeon with said viscount's daughter, Alicia, and his younger brother Amor.

Amor is the king's younger brother, but the way this is written, it looks like he is Elvan's younger brother. There should also be a comma before "Amor".

Clara knew, from her past life, that he otome game furnished the characters with several opportunities to receive gifts.

"he" should be "the".

Volume 14 Part 10
07% Yuki tilted her head as looked -> Yuki tilted her head as she looked
30% you could use burn mana -> you could burn mana
30% and Transport only would if the target wasn't resisting -> and Transport would only work if the target wasn't resisting
79% yourselves,after -> yourselves, after [missing space after comma]

v10p2:

62% - […] reported everything to us.”The man […] - Missing space: everything to us.” The man