v13p1, is the Chapter name missing? At a glance at previous volumes, they always start with a chapter name.

v5p8:

31% - How had they managed to cause so much chaos in the few months I’d be gone? -> Probable wrong word, given the tense: […] in the few months I’d been gone?

V2 P11, 39%
"Without much choice in the matter, I filtered my knights down to a selective few whom I trusted most."
I can't claim that I'm right on this, but my instincts are saying selective -> select

50%
"“Is there something wrong?” Starth asked."
Starth -> Strath

V2P6

... dangerous affliction --- hallucination, paralyzation, or even deadly poison.

paralysation -> paralysis

Got it, thank you!

~92%

be able to overwhelm him Abel—but Ryo could only tap into that power when he was totally and completely locked in. He couldn’t put himself into that state of mind whenever he wanted, unfortunately, so defeating Abel still remained out of reach. If he had any hope of surpassing him, it would have to be by combining swordsmanship with magic. He had no idea how to do that, though, so he was left with one option: return to the basics.

him Abel — with no punctuation between "him" and "Abel" — does not seem to scan correctly. Maybe it should be something like overwhelm Abel or overwhelm him or overwhelm him —Abel—

V4 P10 (67% - 12th line up from bottom of page)

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Replace "hold" with hole to match the sentence proceeding this one.

Thank you for these corrections

V5, P8, around 31%:

The other members of the faulty faculty —myself included—implored Sage Godolphen to reduce it.

Missing letter.

v6p5 ~26%:

Francesca absolutely picked up on Emma nonchalant;y interpreting the cat language.

nonchalant;y -> nonchalantly

This is a general thing, but sometimes the word "female" is used in odd places.

Volume 4 Part 1 Part 7 has sentences like "I'm glad to see another female reaching new heights...." and "I say nothing to females in jest." when it should be "another woman reaching new heights" and "I say nothing to women in jest."

V1P15

Claws of wind tore ruthlessly through the monsters' thick hide, ...

Plural monsters, so hide -> hides

V7P1, 99%: "In the first place, my high offenses didn't mean much" - should probably be just "offense", since we're not talking about a stat rather than a list of crimes.

V4 P2, 28%
"I made my way down into the clearing and over to Sumire just as it started fussing, assumingly out of frustration."
Assumingly -> presumably, or 'I assumed'

Part 12, around 90%, Krai is thinking "I wanted to vomit" but IIRC in past prepubs he kept using "barf" in this sort of catchphrase situation. I'm not sure if this was later changed in the published volumes though, sorry.

V5, P4, around 52%:

Count Vadpauvre was stripped of his title at the was firm request of the nobility.

Extra word.

V3 P6 (38% - end of 8th line down from top of page)

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Adding "see" helps the sentence make more sense.

V3 P11, 65% "After beating them senseless with physics"
Possibly as intended, though the phrasing is quite peculiar to me. Perhaps instead, 'After physically beating them senseless'?

96%
"I slowly exhaled the breath that threatened to stop..."
Might be just a failure of understanding on my part, but I couldn't quite make sense of this sentence as is.
I could come up with a few variations, but not quite sure on the emphasis:
"I slowly exhaled the breath that threatened to be my last..."
"I slowly exhaled the breath I had been holding, the pain threatening to stop me in my tracks..."