V4P9, 20%: “Lord Syvel’s hands [missing word], rippling the paper in his grip” - clenched?

Volume 11 - Part 4:
[~70%]
The insert image does not appear to match the narrative.

V1P10
~12%

They say he’s always complaining that it’s more power than he needs it to be.

Maybe wrong word type / extra words? power->powerful (or more power than he needs it to be->more power than he needs)

~71%

Since the spear was only as big as what Akira could handle, it looked like a mere splinter embedded in oni’s massive body, capable of causing only slight discomfort.

Missing word? embedded in oni’s->embedded in the oni’s

V1P9
~40%

They were all eager to ask Martin their own questions, notepads in hand.

Missing letter? Martin->Martina

~40%

Whatever valuable secrets they’d been keeping before now need to be shared with all.

Maybe missing letter? need->needs (or remove 'to'? now need to be shared->now need be shared)

~53%

. If we gain access to the texts every other nations held in secrecy and esteem, we may just find the key we need to construct the summoning circle!

Full stop from before is in italic and missing ' (for 'every other nation has held')? . If we->If we and nations->nation's

~80%

“Martina. Do you think you can complete the remaining ten percent?” Sophian asked [...]
“I...should,” she answered,

Maybe missing words? (Because Martina is asked if she can do something not if she will do something?) I...should->I...should be able to

14.6:

given your lived experiences

given your life experience

v1 p2

~27%

He went on to inform me that there weren’t that many people in this world who could use magic—only about thirty percent of the population. Mages were a precious resource and bestowed with positions befitting their skills. There wasn’t such a surplus that any of them would willingly choose to be a personal tutor. I could ask one of the professors at the academy to tutor me privately after school, but I very much doubted any of them would want to waste their time on some F-rank like me.

Is thirty percent the translation correct? Because if 30% of the population are mages then they are pretty common. Maybe 3%? Or 30% of the nobility only?

v1 p3

~60%

“Okay,then I’ll have an orange juice.”

=> Okay, then (missing space).

~78%

4I took out my phone and pointed it at Maya. She immediately noticed and threw up a peace sign.

=> I

V13P13

69%: "If her father were here, he knew he would have given her a brief look" -> she knew he

V1P3
~24%

“Hi, um...” Nodoka began.“E-Excruse me!”

Missing space? began.“E-Excruse ->began. “E-Excruse

V5P3

0%: "the empire’s army and a large band of soldiers await them. " -> awaited 0%: "their shoulders, and from then on, they’d need only" -> definitely don't need the second comma, possibly don't need the first 0%: "easily kept watch of the kingsnake’s location" -> kingsnakes' (assuming plural possessive) 0%: "Its head peaked out of the ground" -> peeked (also at 13%) 50%: "could see. She weaved neatly through" -> wove 75%: "Lucica was the beast bowman (or bowwoman) in the whole empire." -> best 75%: in the last 1/5 of the page "thus" is used an excessive number of times?

V8.2 P16, 52%
"Akira was slowing his sense of time, but by a standard clock, their telepathic conversation took no longer than an instant."
I think 'so' might work better than 'but' here (the former being the reason for the latter).
Or alternatively "Akira wasn't slowing his sense of time, but by a standard clock, their telepathic conversation took no longer than an instant."

v5p4:

95% - What did you think, Hedins? -> Hednis 96% - […] in a horse voice. -> Wrong spelling: hoarse

v4:

The series page shows the book as expired already, when it doesn’t even start until next week. The individual parts are shown as expiring on 2025-12-15, so I presume that they’re supposed to expire on 2026-12-15.

@Hylebos This is referring to the the day having an evolution rather than the day of an evolution arriving. Thank you for pointing out that it could be made more clear though.

v1 p1

0%

It was an age when the night sky still lacked its golden sovereign. Rain melted people and devoured them. Trees writhed and swallowed cities whole. The dead were turned into seedbeds from which demons were born. As fiends led by their kings poured forth from the east, it seemed that humanity’s extinction was not far off.

Then a woman stood upon the Hill of Wishes. When she raised her staff, a moon appeared in the lightless night sky and burned away every last demon.

Should that be silver sovereign, referring to a moon? Or is the moon golden in this world?

(I had to re-read that first paragraph multiple times, I thought it might be implying that the setting is a binary star system.)

v5 p8

~65%

Sara straightened her posture. “Y-Yes?! What is it, Your Highness?” “Do you...believe it likely that we’ll receive support from the halidom?”

A paragraph break is required between the two sentences, as the speaker changes from Sara back to Tiffa:

Sara straightened her posture. “Y-Yes?! What is it, Your Highness?” ¶
“Do you...believe it likely that we’ll receive support from the halidom?”

V7 P8, 47%
"When I changed and went outside, I found Kent standing by the bud."
'The bud' -> 'the buds' or 'a bud'

93%
“Those vegetables look delicious. I want them all.”
Perhaps not an error, but my reading from this is that she wants to buy the entire stock, not just one of each.

V11 P10 (40% - 2nd line down from top of page)

"Though it could endure the attacks of a novice or keep someone safe in a minor accident, it offered next to protection from a hunter harnessing mana material."

Insert missing "no" between to and protection.

e.g. it offered next to no protection from a hunter...