Volume 1 Part 3
16% topped backward -> toppled backward

v1p4:

58% - from the young female knights perspective -> female knights’ perspective ? (“their” is used later in the same sentence instead of “her”, so I presume that the “knights” is supposed to be a plural possessive, instead of a singular possessive).

Volume 4 Part 10
52% "The Colt Highland Federation truly is skilled at sales. It's impressive how you keep making new products."
Sales and product development are two very different things. Should the first line perhaps be referring to 'business' instead of sales?

V8.2 P10, 90%

that I have demonstrated efficiency and capability of the units ->
that I have demonstrated the efficiency and capability of the units

V3, P10, around 85%:

delivered to the guest palace.Once palace. Once they arrive,

Missing space.

“Once that kind of culture was establish”
established

V2 P9, 9%
"However, the adventures here were aware of the power such influential people possessed."
Adventures -> adventurers

45%
"I don’t believe a man of Marquis Ignard’s standing would get angry over something so trivial."
Ignard -> Ignart

In part 3, we had this list: alt text

But the current part makes it clear that Hihi'irokane is STR, which I assume makes adamantite VIT. (Which honestly makes more sense anyway.)

Edit: this was acknowledged on Discord as author error and will be fixed in post

V1 P1, 49%
“Of course! But fear not, for you will have a perfect body, Satie!”
It confused me while reading it, til finding out in a bit that that's her reincarnated name. A bit of precognition/foretelling? Or should it be 'Satie' -> 'Saki' at this point (especially as she's then referred to as Saki Osanai just a few paragraphs later)?

V5 P2, 92%
"Though I’d felt their gazes on me, I hadn’t been able to sense them at all."
Probably correct, or not worth fussing over, but reads to me more like "though I'd sensed them, I hadn't been able to sense them". Maybe something more like "Though I’d felt their gazes on me, I hadn’t been able to sense [their source] at all"?

A1 V7 P16 (42% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

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Add "was" between the words outlned above for correct syntax -
e.g. "his allies' defensive line was at its' limits"

V7P3

After all, the Empire was firmly landlocked.

But the map shows that it is not.

V1 P1, 4%
"...sparing him no measure of animosity, scorn, [or] loathing."

4%
"Though he was only a young boy, but a month past his tenth birthday..."
In the time it's taken me to type this up I've talked myself out of it, but originally I had thought it worked better without the comma after 'boy'. Leaving this in anyway, for someone with better grammar skills than I to assess.

11%
Blight was a general term for any form of calamity brought about by a poison known as miasma, which was born from the realm of death**[.]**
(missing fullstop)

V1 P2, 23%
"In his heart was a young beast that still remembered the abuse he’d endured by the hand adults, and it was baring its fangs snarling now."
'Hand' doesn't seem right, but I'm not thinking of what might be intended instead.

83%
"...but don’t you think it’s a good idea to thin out the monsters on Mount Myoukaku, just in case?"
I think it was 'Myokaku' in part 1 (78%). Haven't read ahead to know which is correct, but one might need changing. (Myokaku in part 3, so likely part 2 is the one that needs changing)

P3, 13%
"The soldiers hastily spit themselves into two groups with their shields and spears at the ready."
Spit -> split

54% "For a moment, he felt relief, thinking the danger had passed, but then the hog’s evil eyes fixed on Akira from within the ice. He couldn’t help but shirk back."
Shirk -> shrink

Thank you for the corrections posted for vol 6 thus far.

Volume 13 Part 2
60% It only a few requests -> It only had a few requests

V4 P2 (47% - 11th line up from bottom of page)

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Insert missing "on" between outlined words
e.g. Astrid got up on Tien's shoulders.

V17 P8, 28%
"Ka Kunlou was a man well-versed in the Serpents’ secret techniques. He knew plenty of useful and peculiar medicines and poisons, how to mix a powder that glowed when wet, and even how to cause an explosion that could fill a room with dust."
By any chance, could the sentence be referring to a 'dust explosion'? If so: "and even how to cause an explosion [from a room filled] with dust."
Or more explicitly: "and even how to cause an explosion [with nothing more that the fine particles in the air of a room filled] with dust."

V2p10 10% - [There's a piece of paper pasted here] - I think this is meant to be replaced by an illustration?