V1 P1, 4%
"...sparing him no measure of animosity, scorn, [or] loathing."

4%
"Though he was only a young boy, but a month past his tenth birthday..."
In the time it's taken me to type this up I've talked myself out of it, but originally I had thought it worked better without the comma after 'boy'. Leaving this in anyway, for someone with better grammar skills than I to assess.

11%
Blight was a general term for any form of calamity brought about by a poison known as miasma, which was born from the realm of death**[.]**
(missing fullstop)

Thank you for the corrections posted for vol 6 thus far.

V18 P2 (13% - 8th line down from top of page)

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Add "table" after coffee to match another sentence on the same page.

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Volume 13 Part 2
60% It only a few requests -> It only had a few requests

V4 P2 (47% - 11th line up from bottom of page)

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Insert missing "on" between outlined words
e.g. Astrid got up on Tien's shoulders.

V17 P8, 28%
"Ka Kunlou was a man well-versed in the Serpents’ secret techniques. He knew plenty of useful and peculiar medicines and poisons, how to mix a powder that glowed when wet, and even how to cause an explosion that could fill a room with dust."
By any chance, could the sentence be referring to a 'dust explosion'? If so: "and even how to cause an explosion [from a room filled] with dust."
Or more explicitly: "and even how to cause an explosion [with nothing more that the fine particles in the air of a room filled] with dust."

V2p10 10% - [There's a piece of paper pasted here] - I think this is meant to be replaced by an illustration?

V13 P6, 68%
“No, it hasn’t. The stronger one’s magic is, the more quirks it is likely to have. It tends to have more quirks."
Repetition. Could be there for emphasis or nuance, if so change one of the 'quirks'. Otherwise second portion could be deleted.

V4P7

67%: "“W-Well, stop it!” she yelled, her face beat red." -> beet

@Shiroi-Hane - I think you mean V4P1 instead of V4P12, yes?

v7p15 ~69%

[...] and the neutral faction that was neither openly hostile toward him nor particularly friendly toward him.

The duplication of toward him feels ugly. I'd just drop the first occurrence.

v1p3 ~0%

[...] that they couldn't unable to abandon [...]

couldn't abandon or would be unable to abandon or wouldn't be able to abandon

~35%

My outrage piqued so dramatically [...]

Maybe peaked? There is no fitting meaning of piqued here.

v2p9 ~0%

They'd entered a tube that some brought [...]

Should likely be somehow.

~96%

"Well, after a half a year of [...]

The first "a" needs to go.

v2p8 ~97%

It seems I should leave this to you," [...]

Misses the opening double quotation mark.

v3p9 ~58%

Like I said , she's [...]

There's an extra space before the comma.

~85%

I think you're over reacting.

Overreacting should be one word.

~88%

Maybe she came in place of Diana?

Depending who is thinking this (and reasonable expectations about guard members, and information from the name), this might be better as he.

Volume 2 Part 18
17% I know him, but we've never met. -> I know of him, but we've never met.
I believe this is probably the English version of what the author is trying to say.

Volume 4 Part 9
60% shrieked as shot -> shrieked as he shot
61% all had a similar aura to them, and they -> all had a similar aura, and they

@hornet65 oh sorry, they should be the same ranks. Should be earl