4.5

the flames surrounding the blade were the drive force.

“driving force.”

Volume 5 - Part 9:

[63%] Charlotte's premonition did not come from text. She knew too much for that.
So it was smell, intuition, or sight?

Probably the best way to re-state this would be "Charlotte's premonition did not come from something she read."

Since those where the ways of "detecting" discussed before [47%]

Is it a smell? Is it intuition? Something they have read? Something they can see?

It makes me wonder what the original Japanese transcript for this was like? Did the author literally use the word "text"? ^_^

@Mark-Logue said in I Shall Survive Using Potions! - Corrections Topic:

upon the request being made, so no-one complained.

“no one”

Thanks, all!

Thanks for your work!

@Gamen I double-checked with the new translator to be sure, and I was wrong. Splintering is the same as Division. Different translators described it differently and I took that as they were different things. This will be fixed in v10 and in future volumes. Thanks for mentioning it!

v6p9:

84% - Though I may not have personally partook in the activities, […] -> I think that partook might work, since we don’t always use the best grammar as kids or because it is still a correct choice, partaken sounds better in my head. Compromise, and use partooken? ;p

V2 P7:

There were several shrines around here, TimeI didn't know where to start. Times like these are when

There were several shrines around here, I didn't know where to start. Times like these are when

maybe I'll get a late start," ¶ I suggested,

The ¶ indicates an uncalled for paragraph break.

@Ingraman said in The Misfit of Demon King Academy - Corrections Topic:

v4a1p7:

39% - We shall now be holding an expedition exam to Ahartherm. -> Previously, including in the chapter title a few lines above, it’s Aharthern, with an “n”, not an ”m”.

"While Ahathern is a nation, it is also a spirit."

Another variant upon Aharthern.

What could they do with that speck of magic or theirs?

What could they do with that speck of magic of theirs?

or => of

Volume 6 Part 6:

shouted, Berndt! If they won't listen to you, I'll go.

shouted, "Berndt! If they won't listen to you, I'll go.

Missing opening double quote.

@Terabyte said in Peddler in Another World - Corrections Topic:

Volume 3 - Part 1:

[70%] “I placed a barrier around the house that means only blood relatives ► Add a comma or period? Or reword the sentence.

Maybe replace "means only" with "only allows"?
Presuming that works with the rest of the sentence.

Volume 6 Part 8
50% - "Did they get any cooking-related skills to this?"
As written, this sentence doesn't make a lot of sense. Considering the flow of the conversation that follows, it is likely that it should be:
"Did they use any cooking-related skills to make this?"

67% - "It is possible to encounter dangerous forests even in the shallow areas of forests, after all.
Replace the first instance of forests with either creatures or monsters:
"It is possible to encounter dangerous creatures even in the shallow areas of forests, after all.
"It is possible to encounter dangerous monsters even in the shallow areas of forests, after all.

Volume 7 Part 4
14% - "My knight, we need to get out of the country!" They are in a city when she says this. As written, the phrase has the meaning of getting out of an undeveloped region when I believe she means she wants to get out of Great Keith altogether. The better phrasing for that would be: "My knight, we need to get out of this country!"

Volume 4 - Part 1:

[67%] No one could stop themselves wince at Sara’s self-directed sarcasm. >> should be from wincing

Okay, so apparently it's probably something to do with how stuff's automated at JNC, meaning we might end up needing to use hyphens instead, rather than using the usual Chicago rule. I'm not 100% sure where it happens along the line since it's appearing in the parts on site, but just expect hyphens from now on.

Volume 18 - Part 7:

[35%] won’t amount to much, ” Ryoma said. ► Remove extra space.

Volume 5 - Part 4:

[69%] said Jens, titling his head in a moment ► It should be tilting.

Thanks for the help, everyone!