V16p10 96% - Afterword says "Thanks for buying volume 15" - should be 16, unless the author genuinely made that mistake.

V6P7

"We shall deploy troops to the north of the city ...

"to the north" means outside the city and north of it. (See previous paragraph, where the river is "to the north".) These troops are being deployed along the northern wall of the city. So "deploy troops in the north of the city" would be the simplest correction.

v5p8 ~94%:

I shrugged. "This is nothing. ," I shrugged.

Need to do a pass on that sentence to remove leftover decisions from past revisions.

Volume 5, Part 1, 47%

She’d give them her blood, they’d become lesser zombies

Not a grammatical or spelling error but in the context of the story, “lesser zombies” should be “lesser vampires”

V7 P4, 14%
“So where are we going? [Will] Eris be there?” Rurika pressed them.

V6 P10, 47%
"Cody didn’t know it, but the other members of his crew—Pet, Luca, and Eddge..."
Pet -> Pett

mild typo about three quarters of the way through V4 part 2

... Carlos couldn't help but be reminded of Ludens's younger ears

that should be years right?

v3 p2

~77%

If it’s possible for me to be the spark that lights the powder keg, I should return to the village.

Please re-check this translation, I believe Ren does not want to return to the village if doing so would put them at risk, i.e.:

If it’s possible for me to be the spark that lights the powder keg, I should not return to the village.

v5 p4

~32%

“I am a direct descendant of His Grace, Duke Altishult Bingil Orvorus. My grandfather loves me to pieces. Now that you know who I am, you know that I must be telling the truth. If you try to fight back, I’ll get the duke’s imperial guardsmen to come and apprehend you... Is that what you want?”

There seems to be some continuing inconsistency in how this name is spelled. In previous volume previews it's usually Orvarus, but occasionally Orvorus as above. I'd suggest making it consistent.

For a prior example, see where @xdbx said in The Dorky NPC Mercenary Knows His Place - Corrections Topic:

The last name of Amilia Frannodol Orvarus's great uncle the Duke is spelled inconsistently. Sometimes it's spelled "Orvarus", but sometimes it's "Orvorus":

v2 p3 0%

It was decided that the duel between the Sasha, the [...]

~70%

orihalcon fists

This might be the correct spelling in this series, I did not find a reference quickly. Usually it's spelled along orichalcum though, so this may or may not be worth changing.

Volume 21. Part 11. 1%

Again, Bibliotique > Bibliotheque

Volume 21. Part 11. 69%

Asmodues > Asmodeus

Volume 21. Part 11. 77%

Bibliotique > Bibliotheque

Volume 21. Part 2. 65%

I'm sure there's a typo here since Zagan refers to Chastille as his "sworn ally", not "sword ally" as stated in volume 5.

V5 P2, 67%
"Both the hallway and the entry hall had been renovated recently, much to my surprise; I’d only learned of the renovations plans after the work was already completed."
Could be a difference in dialect, but I've only heard it as 'renovation plans', (no matter how many renovations take place)

@xdbx "lord mannerism" is a form of address in speech for marquesses/marquises, so it isn't incorrect. as for the parker fletcher bit, i'm guessing that a line must have been shifted or deleted accidentally during the editing process since parker fletcher is raymond's righthand man. i'll let the editor know. thanks

v4 p8

~50%

“The Divine Beast will appear on the 1st Level of Babel. While this means that we can use Ambrosia Tears, Hydra’s incurable venom is so powerful it can kill even gods. There’s a possibility that Ambrosia Tears won’t be enough to revive the slain. Even if they are,, the victim will surely experience lingering aftereffects. Do whatever you must to avoid the venom.”

=> are, the (Double commas.)

Manga Volume 11 Chapter 1

Not sure if this is the right place for the manga.... but
page 19, Helmio's stats boards (first and third panel) have Natrual instead of Natural

V13 P14, 16%
"Ishucaa was the temple’s head priest, and yet she hadn’t known a thing about this passageway."
Ishucaa -> Ishuca

56%
"The Wing had used the return device on the seventh floor"
Wing -> Jade Wings (or possibly just Wings, though I don't recall seeing their team name shortened that way)

61%
"This locked Kaho in the moment of deep thought."
Seems slightly off to me. Perhaps instead: "This locked [or knocked? or sent?] Kaho into a moment of deep thought."

V5 P7 (29% - 3rd line up from bottom of page)

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Change "someone" to "somewhere" as in:
She's hiding away somewhere safe, isn't she?!

P6V1, 99%: “Mathrew” - Matthew