V5 P7, 93%
"Annoying, he managed to save himself by driving his sword into the dirt wall"
Annoying -> Annoyingly

V8.1 P7
46% "Immediately after receiving his gear, Akira set about trying everything on... equipping himself with his two blades and two of his guns"
68% "After checking his gun at the entrance..."

As the two scenes were relatively close to each other, just checking whether it should be 'gun' -> 'guns' (or even 'weapons', to include his blades)

V2 P4 (% - 72% 9th line up from bottom of page)

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Again, "hands" should be hand since Lofus has only one arm.

(I believe the illustration also shows this.)

V3P1 88%:

she continued by weaving paper into a small bird

The next sentence says she folded the bird from a single sheet of paper. Perhaps the Japanese text used a word that could mean several crafts including weaving? In English, weaving is a specific physical craft very different from origami. It would be more natural to fashion or form paper into a small bird. (It would also be natural to weave something in an obviously figurative sense, like weaving words, but weaving a non-woven physical object is just confusing.)

V3P2 17%:

eyes widening as his words sunk in

sunk -> sank
sunk is the past participle, sank is the simple past tense.

v3 p3

~28%

“Yes, I do. The Great Beast Haagenti, right? When I was a boy, my teachers used to threaten us by saying they brought misbehaving children to Haagenti.’”

Since Eugene is only paraphrasing, there's an extra single quote at the end of the paragraph.

Just sent to support for v4p2:

You might have already fixed it in the ebook, but just in case…

61% - We made our way up, tagging behind Pochi and Tama. -> I feel like a word is missing, but maybe it’s unnecessary these days: We made our way up, tagging along behind Pochi and Tama.

V16P7 83% Ludwig picked up two glasses... And sat opposite of Ludwig??? I think it's supposed to be opposite of Dion.

V8 part 4

Around 18% it states Patience is 11 years old, but the queen at the end stated she’d be 13 next year. I believe she would only be 12 the next year. She was 10 when she started her first year so it seems she should only be 11 now and 12 the following year.

V3 P8 (0% - 5 lines up from bottom of 1st page)

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---> add "as" for proper sentence syntax
e.g.: Just as I took a step...

V2 P3 (66% - 10th line down from top of page)

..., she intendedbe kind to him.

add space and "to" for better syntax:

---> she intended to be kind to him.

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@ebaldwin said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

@Tube said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

Volume 6, part 9:

[28%] “It’s getting pretty hot these days, isn’t it?” […]

“Oh... Y-Yeah, it has.”

"has" -> "is" (or alternatively change the previous line to “It’s gotten pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”)

Thanks, should be fixed now.

That's usually the case, but not this time, it seems. Now it is “It’s getting pretty hot these days, hasn’t it?”

Should be good to go now.

Volume 2, Part 9

interlude: Diaego.

it spellling of Aoi Konominatos' wrong as: [Aoi knominato]

V9 P1 24% - two adorable smiles began bouncing around - smiles should be slimes

Volume 1 Part 10

"black father" vs "black knight's father"
Both of these seem to be used throughout the text, but only the latter seems appropriate. At 70% in the text [I had ... little talent for swords or spells], it is revealed that the father was never a member of any knight order, whether white, gold, or black.

@nihility said in To Another World... with Land Mines! - Corrections Topic:

Sup on white rice? What does that mean?

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/sup
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/sup
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/sup

V4 P8 (81% - 7th line up from bottom of page)

And it was obvious who'd turn on next.

Missing "they".

And it was obvious who'd they turn on next,

V1P13
[94%] "They're certainly lovely," Liliana replied. ➡ should this be Petra? Liliana hasn't met the sister yet, in this life at least, so she wouldn't say that, right? Also, she is pretending to still be mute in front of Paul, isn't she? So it would make more sense to me if this was Petra's reply, though I'm not sure since it isn't entirely in character for her.

@Iseguy said in The Otome Heroine’s Fight for Survival - Corrections Topic:

6.2

Elena glutched the knife to her chest and nodded.

“clutched”

Hi, sorry for the tardy reply! This is actually correct; per Merriam-Webster, "to glutch" is "to clutch an object received from, bequeathed by, or pertaining to the Grinch." That's actually where Elena got that knife. It's all explained in this year's Christmas bonus story, but sadly, due to licensing issues, it probably will not be translated, hence the apparent continuity error.

Spoilered just in case:

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We still haven't gotten last year's Christmas story, in which

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