v10p8 (very optional correction?):

18% - […] I guarantee you it’s something nobody would want to touch with a ten-foot pole.” […] A ten-foot pole? -> Given that Japan is metric, this phrase is rather jarring to me, but I don’t have any guesses on the words used in the Japanese original… Same? 3m pole? Some other phrase that shares the concept?

v12p13 ~27%

Strength returned to its broken limbs, Its broken four limbs regained their strength, [...]

The duplication of "broken limbs" is ugly.
Also, the comma should be a dot, or the "Its" should be lowercase.

v10 p8
~1%

Even back in Beaden, Curuni had carried the saberboars on the assumption that she wouldn’t be fighting—it was unreasonable to ask anyone to join a battle

¶ carrying so much weight around.“Mmmgh...”

Inappropriate paragraph break.

@SomeOldGuy said in An Introvert’s Hookup Hiccups - Corrections Topic:

V13P6 8%:
we realized that we alsO needed to
also

65%:
WHen it came to me
When

Thank you for catching this!!

V4 P9
(75% - 16th line down from top of page or 14th line up from bottom of page)

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Since the story-line talks about the feline and canine tribes attacking Lily's tribe together, there should be another word between the two in the high-lighted box such as:

"How can we fight off two tribes at once?"

or

"How can we fight off multiple tribes at once?"

V4 P10
(5% - 4th line up from bottom of page
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Correct word in highlighted box to potion's
e.g., "the potion's effects"

(74% - 13th line down from top of page
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Add missing word it in highlighted box
e.g., "What the heck is it made of?"

4.6:

She was the one who had fallenin love

She was the one who had fallen in love

V13P4

0%: "The long wait time for the share also meant that there was" -> shade 64%: "Then, it began taking in the magic from Dahlia’s fingertips like it was unraveling a thread." -> "thread" doesn't really unravel. Fabric or braids can unravel. I think the visual/metaphor that you want might be: "unraveling like thread/yarn from a sweater/spool"

V5 P2 (10% - 13th line down from top of page)

Remove redundant "once"
e.g:

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or

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Volume 4 Part 7
55% push past through -> push through

V2 P7 (38% - 4th line down from top of page)

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Seems like a word is missing such as "now"...
e.g. "You said 'the next' just now, right?"
I think that sounds better.

@Geolykt Agreed. I've heard of "choice produce" in grocery stores (which I think is the idea here), but not "depends" as a level of quality--which would be especially inappropriate for a higher level of quality.

V17 P3, 0%
"Yet despite Ganudo’s small size, the wealth gap was vast."
Ganudo's -> Gyrados Ganudos'

Volume 5 part 10 55%

There are plenty of jobs that an adventurer can do ... and guard envoys

Is envoys the correct word here? In this context an envoy would be a diplomat, guarding them would usually be a job for the knights in this sort of setting, adventurers who aren't professional bodyguards would not be a typical choice, it might happen if there is a staffing shortage but shouldn't be a typical job for adventures. Convoys would make a lot more sense in context.

v3p6 ~13%

"I'm sorry? [...] what you discussed?""

has an extra " at the end.

v7p14 ~87%

Then must assume you're using your fae facet to fuel [...]

should likely be

Then I must assume [...]

And while we're at v2p7 69% (76% in the app)

[...] sludge, it immediately clear it wasn't [...]

lacking a became or was

V4 P8, 10%
"Reina was ranked seventh, Zelos was sixth, and Meryln was fifth."
Meryln -> Merlyn

V2P7:
15%:

He was so infatuated with his wife that he disliked even the idea of letting her see his family in the empire.

Isn’t the wife the one with family in the empire? If so, this should say her family.

58%:

He soon reached his destination: the Londard Trading Company, a major trading firm.

Shouldn’t this be Londart?