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  Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!
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  The World's Least Interesting Master Swordsman - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 5 - Part 4: [27%] her features, she’s cancelled out the sheer fright ► It should be canceled (US spelling). [35%] to my future brother-in-law. Can I borrow him?.” ► Remove period. [41%] no one would let a ten year old govern a territory. ► It should be ten-year-old (hyphens). [55%] the center of attention...honestly,she really needs ► Missing space.
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  Mapping: The Trash-Tier Skill That Got Me Into a Top-Tier Party - Corrections Topic
  mapping • • lovelight  

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  Volume 3 - Part 5: [58%] With a little room to breath, I took a moment ► It should be breathe. [63%] His judgement was always rapid and precise. ► It should be judgment (US spelling).
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  Fushi no Kami - Corrections Topic
  fushi no kami • • myskaros  

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  V2P7: 89%: "At this rate, they'll also be able to teach maths in the fall!" —> US English uses "math", not "maths".
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  Can Someone Please Explain What’s Going On?! - Corrections Topic
  corrections • • myskaros  

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  Volume 5 - Part 8: [4%] I’ve actually become the Vice-Captain, in fact. ► It should be Vice Captain (no hyphen). [4%] “As do I. Hahaha! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [7%] I think I got ‘em sparkling prettily. How’s that? ► It should be ’em (different ’ ). [10%] bashfulness!), Mr. Fisalis didn‘t even blink. ► It should be didn’t (different ’ ). [40%] The other two were wearing simple dresses, ► It should be are. [56%] is...” I jumped at the sudden jab. “Loves”!? ► The starting double quote alone isn't in italic format. [57%] Miss Verbena’s incredible change.) We also ► Move the period outside the parentheses. [71%] for larger jewelry. Mine had more of a cute ► It should be has. [74%] It’s not like I wanted them.... No! I should ► It should be 3 periods.
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  Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic
  girls kingdom • • lovelight  

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  Volume 2, Part 1 2%: “Thanks in large part to the Kononoe twins . . .” -> should be Kokonoe
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  The Apothecary Diaries - Corrections Topic
  apothecary • • myskaros  

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  30% she then married the late reagent's son. Assuming this is meant to be regent, I think it is still wrong. If it refers to the late emperor and you don't want to reuse 'emperor', try 'ruler'. 'Regent' has a different meaning. 50% If I ever thought I was going to see you again ... I think this would read more naturally as "If I thought I was ever going to see you again ..."
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  Record of Wortenia War - Corrections Topic
  wortenia • • lovelight  

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  Volume 9 - Part 5: [11%] Sara didn’t notice the way her shoulders shivered, ► Given the context, it should be did? [24%] it would have been more lethal,but ordinary water ► Missing space. [28%] He went from a vertical slash to an horizontal one. ► It should be a. [28%] The surrounding O&’ltormean and Helnesgoulan ► It should be O’ltormean. Remove &. [50%] Everyone was confident Moore was waning. ► It should be winning. [53%] Moore would pay a steep price, And once he used ► It should be and (lowercase). [55%] upper left position, and as it travelled to the right, ► It should be traveled (US spelling). [97%] in these conditions.In which case, there could ► Missing space.
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  By the Grace of the Gods - Corrections Topic
  graceofthegods • • lovelight  

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  Volume 6 - Part 3: [2%] students immediately went off, While some stayed ► It should be while (lowercase).
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  Altina the Sword Princess - Corrections Topic
  altina • • lovelight  

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  Are You Okay With a Slightly Older Girlfriend? - Corrections Topic
  slightlyoldergf • • myskaros  

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  @Terabyte Thank you!
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  Banner of the Stars - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 5 Part 4 57% She dressed himself - Presumably should be herself 78% I;'m presuming upon my soldiers' heroic resolve - Extra ; in the I'm 92% That cleared up one question, but that wasn;'t what - Extra ; again
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  Cooking with Wild Game - Corrections Topic
  wildgame cooking • • lovelight  

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  Volume 11 - Part 4: [3%] call out to me as I smouldered with rage was ► It should be smoldered (US spelling).
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  Tearmoon Empire - Corrections Topic
  tearmoon • • lovelight  

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  Volume 4 - Part 1: [74%] “Esmeralda... Hey, Esmerada...” ► It should be Esmeralda. [90%] to teach? Maybe if I ask really nicely...” ► No dialogue here. Remove the closing double quote. [94%] Mia, his wide eyes marvelling at the pair ► It should be marveling (US spelling).
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  The Sorcerer's Receptionist - Corrections Topic
  receptionist • • lovelight  

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  Volume 3 - Part 2: [Generic] This series uses !? usually but there are 3 instances of ?! in this part. [24%] Life As a Receptionist Lady, Year Two: ► The title in part 1 was Life As a Receptionist without Lady. Is the difference on purpose or an error? [28%] “Hey, did Naru say he’s going ‘save me’? ► It should be going to. [48%] tries to warn Benjamine what’s going on ► It should be of what’s. [56%] finally got as excited as was about seeing ► It should be I was.
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  My Friend's Little Sister Has It In for Me! - Corrections Topic
  imouza • • myskaros  

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  @pcj Thanks for info. Learnt something new. The cclaw translations didn't mention anything about this and technically ordinal naming has no prefixes to numbers hence had that doubt.
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  Black Summoner - Corrections Topic
  black summoner • • lovelight  

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  Volume 3 - Part 6: [16%] at any time, so just me know what you need.:: ► It should be let me. Already reported. [25%] out for a stroll through town.“You’ve got to be ► Missing space. [30%] ::That’s...well, I do.” ► Telepathic message. It should end with a double colon (::). [42%] Now you’re screwed, bitch!” screamed Ulfred ► Missing period. [59%] bright red. And it was not the color of blood. ► It should be now. [68%] my shield and the two cancelled each other ► It should be canceled (US spelling). [94%] “What a egotistical delusion.” ► It should be an.
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  I Refuse to Be Your Enemy! - Corrections Topic
  i refuse • • lovelight  

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  Volume 5 - Part 1: [24%] His threat was accompanied by a repugnant guffaw.. ► Duplicate period.
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  The Magician Who Rose From Failure - Corrections Topic
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  Volume 1 - Part 5: [23%] was a large, four-storey mansion situated in one ► It should be four-story (US spelling). [63%] very rude of you!” she exclaimed, “coming up here ► It should be Coming (Capitalized)? [68%] ensuring that his valiant efforts were all for nought. ► It should be naught (US spelling). As far as I know nought is mainly used in UK?
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  She's the Cutest... But We're Just Friends! - Corrections Topic
  cutestfriends • • myskaros  

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  @pcj Nope, not a TL comment! It was written in Japanese as "Nogizaka (?)", probably in reference to the idol group Nogizaka46. The joke is that their songs aren't really "energetic" so she must... really be putting her own spin on it ;)