v4p4 ~80%:

It was the first time she had ever held a katana, so she was entranced by its lethal beauty.

Now it's entirely possible that this is simply the result of honoring the source material with an accurate translation, but I figured I'd double check all the same: technically speaking, Melty held a katana in just the previous chapter when the protagonists were trying to convince her that Lutz was a reputable Blacksmith, so shouldn't this be perhaps this katana rather than a katana ?

Volume 7 (3rd page) :
Gazaru is spelled Garazu.

V2P3, around 30%:

Though her town tone was usually humorous, when it came to my mother, she was always very earnest.

V4P4

"Confiscating the toy he's playing tends to work well"

I think should be "playing with."

V7 P3

~40%

“And I would like the stone tables, if possible. I can use them to raise a skill called Ancient Language,” Millie said.

They are called tablets elsewhere in the chapter.

V3 P6 (75% - beginning of 13th line up from bottom of page)

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Correct to read: "over ten years older than Airi and me,"

V3 P13, 6%
"However, if any sacred beast, like Cass or Lag, had refused the release, I wouldn’t have been able to do it."
Cass -> Cas

16%
"Epilogue: The Most Frightening Guard (The Pope)"
This line looks like it should be a heading, with paragraph spaces before and after it.
Same with "Afterword", 83%

74%
"However, I’d had no idea that, through my magic, demonic charm power had accumulated within the priests themselves."
It works as is, but unless 'charm' is specified it might work better simply as 'demonic power'

V3 P1 (0% - end of 1st line on page 1)

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This sentence would make more sense if it said:
However, it was because a god made a mistake,...

V13P2 ~8%
"...it wasn't the done thing for a duke to get their hands dirty..."
This is less a 'correction' and more a general question: I'd never actually heard this phrasing before and did some checking and it looks like it's more common in all other forms of English except American English, I guess? Is this something that, while thinking to himself, Dias would use?
I'm more curious than anything else about if the translator(s) keep a kind of speaking style in mind when choosing expression/idiom usage on a per-character basis.

V15 P6 (83% - 10th line up from bottom of page)

Ready to burn my shit at the drop of a hate,...

Should be "hat"

---> Ready to burn my shit at the drop of a hat,...

Part 1 (p123/776: Outside the Barrier)

The greater boar used earth magic to launch throwing stones as ranged attacks and the pace at which with which it charged its target was close to the speed of sound.

i feel like the translator intended to replace one of these 'whiches' and forgot to finish. probably the the latter.
it happens, but i'm surprised nobody caught it during the prepubs?

v16p2:

89% - […] more to become a doctor. -> It looks like there’s an extra space or two here. The large gap was present whether I was reading on the iOS app in landscape or portrait.

V6P1, 38%: “[Engineering/Construction Lv. MAX [Shield Arts Lv. MAX]” - missing ]

V6P16

Two giant crows approached from the sky. Their massive side afforded them Rank 3, but ...

side -> size

V5 P6 (48% - End of 13th line up from bottom of page)

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I believe this would sound better as:
What're you guys gonna do...

@JustWaiting said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

V6 P13 ~21%

"Then she opened her mouth wide, and sank her fangs into his neck." There shouldn't be a comma after 'wide'. "sank her fangs into his neck" is not an independent clause.

V6 P13 ~19%

"His desperation was earnest, but at the same time depressingly comical, like a child throwing a tantrum." Same situation as above. The comma after 'earnest' shouldn't be there.

Thanks, should be fixed now.

4.3:

The mages flew into a range and aimed their staffs at me.

The mages flew into a rage and aimed their staffs at me.
The mages flew into range and aimed their staffs at me.

Have to check the raws to determine which.
Unless, of course, it's a lovely play on words and quite deliberate.

V2 P9
20% "beam of light , her arms spread" -> "beam of light, her arms spread"