V3P4:
~46% "And, or the record, I was the Vice President," or => for
~53% There are two paragraphs were talking about a good-for-nothing using he and him. While early on in the first of the paragraphs it mentioned the Second Prince, but based on what's been said in previous volumes, I believe the good-for-nothing should be referring to Laviange. Since Mihail healed Laviange when their mother attacked her.

Copying from main discussion to here:

@Libri-Liberorum said in Mercedes and the Waning Moon Vol. 4 Discussion!:

While the empire had promised to keep the academy's doors open, Beatrix had apprently planned to remove the female students and use the school as an isolation facility. Mercedes had confirmed this with Beatrix herself.

I am utterly perplexed by this paragraph. I can't connect anything in it to the context of the rest of the story. The empire doesn't run the academy, why are they promising to keep its doors open? They don't send students, so how can the female students be removed? How does removing them turn it into an isolation facility? Who is being isolated?

V3P1 ~77%
"Huh? Zodiac was in..." -> "Huh? Zodiac Zodian was in..."

V3P2 ~50%
"Oh, well this really something." -> "Oh, well this really is something."

V5P10 ~78%
"...the self-claimed Game Master..." -> "...the self-proclaimed Game Master..."

At 24%, It’s the simplest plance and I don’t need to use my head.

Not sure what was supposed to go here, possibly plan?

V2P9, 35%: “The mana inside her trashed about before flooding out of her.” - thrashed

Volume 4 Part 6
07% barely left that Char -> barely left when Char
08% didn't seem too share -> didn't seem to share
66% That's why y'all are here for. -> That's what y'all are here for.
72% areattacked -> are attacked

V9 P6, 14%
"Sara walked off, feeling a little embarrassed, and Allen followed, tugging along by her hand"
Tugging -> tugged

V2 P3

69% "I was the no different"

Redundant word, the.

61% "You've gained the Village Appraisal II skill." 70% "I also got the Villager Appraisal II skill." 75% "Village Appraisal II gave me way more detailed info"

Village or Villager. Should these be consistent?

V2P3

I'd been having so much in the ladies' course

I think that should be "... so much fun in ..."

vol1p6 around 60%:

The monster was a full five meters tall, and probably weighed a whopping eighty kilograms.

Is this right? That's a beanpole of a beast! In US measurements, that's about 16 feet tall, 176 pounds. From the illustration, maybe 800 KG?

The Petty Villain Plays By The Rules
Volume 1 Part 6

22% and so much the learner -> and so must the learner

@Khazidhea said in Isekai Walking - Corrections Topic:

V5 P4, 21
"If you asked me if it was delicious, I'd be forced to admit that I'd had better in this world"
My memory is poor, and I'm reading too many isekais and some details are overlapping in my head, but I thought I'd check: has he had fish before in this world? Or is he instead remembering back to Earth? (Or is he instead saying, he's had better (non-fish dishes) in this world?)

I think he's referring to having had better food (including non-fish dishes) in this world. It threw me off the first time I read it too, but it's more obvious after the following conversations where everyone else in the party is unimpressed by it, but Sora still picks up a bunch out of flavor nostalgia.

Vol 11 canto 1 p12

or an time-tested blade
"an" -> "a"

feel like he'd becomean adult yet.
-> become an

V3P2p10 19%:

"I sit at the throne by the grace of God. But does god watch what goes on in the world we live in? Does God judge the good incidents from the bad? For if god truly exists [...]

The capitalization of "God" is inconsistent. Either all four should be capitalized or none of them should be.

53%:

deliver a gift on Behalf of Master Reinald

Behalf shouldn't be capitalized.

88%:

If I was going to consider things seriously, I needed a different tact.

tact --> tack
https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/do-you-change-tack-or-tact

@Libri-Liberorum said in The Tanaka Family Reincarnates - Corrections Topic:

V5P8

This must've been one of those Loafcraftian creatures that drove you insane just by looking at them!

That would normally be Lovecraftian, but perhaps this is an intentional play on the name.

Given how many other names from our world have been fiddled with, I’m expecting this to be the latter. :)

V16 P2, 56%
"I’ve gone boat fishing in Gyrados beforeon my own before, but I can’t really do that here"
and
"Thus, Orania was dead-seton heading out on one of the fishing boats"
Missing spaces

P4 61%
"jumping in without hesitation to save an innocent child as despite your standing"
Perhaps that might work better without the 'as', or change to 'as Kiryl' (or similar) instead?

In the premium edition epub the illustration of Daiagias and Libidine is after the epilogue instead of within the corresponding text