v7 p8
~5%
The following day, just as the Imperial Magic Division departed the royal capital, a lavish entourage arrived at the north gate. It was none other than the King’s younger brother, Duke Raymond of Flitwick, accompanied by his personal knights. On that day, the sixth since the fall of Crystal Palace, the north gate was finally opened.
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Parker Fletcher, the king’s younger brother, nodded vigorously. “I couldn’t agree more.”
Please re-check this translation. While Duke Flitwick is the king's younger brother, I do not believe this Parker Fletcher is another brother; I think he's just Raymond's right-hand man.
~ 40%
“Yes, Lord Mannerism, thank you for coming.”
Marquis Meusel, supreme commander of the Empire’s expedition, was accompanied by his chief adjutant and son, Linus. Dozens of northern Knightley nobles were already in the room.
~65%
Seated upon the throne, King Raymond addressed Marquis Meusel, who sat in the visitors’ section.
“Now then, Lord Mannerism, don’t you have a word or two for my ascension?”
Please re-check these translations. Should Lord Mannerism be Lord Meusel?