V2 P5 (38%)

She was always kept locked up in the basement of the area,...
-->She was always kept locked up in the basement of the arena,...

V3 P10 (5%)

I gave myself a metal slap:...
-->I gave myself a mental slap:....

V3 P8 (92% - last sentence of last page)

I thought one of us might have been flushing a little bit...
-->I thought one of us might have been blushing a little bit...

V2 P2 (42%)

...the audience chamber was hit capacity quickly,
-->the audience chamber hit capacity quickly,

@xdbx I'm hoping this gets fixed soon, since right now half the chapter is basically unreadable.

v2p5 ~6%

The girlsran around to their heart's content during the day, so I probably don't need to worry about them waking up in the middle of the night and making a racket.

girlsran -> girls ran.

Side Stories part 12:

20% "horned rabbit fut" (fur? foot?)

P5V8
~0%

“then I’m happy.

~27%

"We should have enough for a brief stay.

~73%

“Sorry for interrupting when you’re clearly enjoying yourself, but I have no idea what you’re talking about.

~73%

Elman looked baffled for a moment, then burst into laughter. “Ha ha ha ha ha! Well, now!

Missing end "?;
happy.->happy."
stay.->stay."
about.->about."
now!->now!"

v1p6:

86% - Although my residence was equipped with plenty of expensive magical tools catered to everyday comfort, […]. -> Maybe that was okay, maybe not. Missing word?: […] plenty of expensive magical tools that catered to everyday comfort, […]. Or possibly a different version of the word: […] plenty of expensive magical tools catering to everyday comfort, […].

V1 P6 (0% - 1st page)

...the level of civility to move abandon violence...
--->the level of civility to abandon violence...
(remove "move")

V2P2 Part9 (88%)

When I last saw here in Falkrum, she was...
--> When I last saw her in Falkrum,

v1 ch 6

I told Armeria about what I'd noticed > should be Azalea

V11 P1, 37%
"Jurisdiction over land was an important part of a lord's authority, so for Viscount Nernas to make such an offer was extremely accessible"
Is accessible the correct word here? I'm not sure what else it might be instead, but it just didn't sit right when I read it. (Initially thought perhaps 'attractive', but the following sentences don't show them having much use/enthusiasm for it)
47%
"Uhhh, distally," Yuki replied.
I had to look up the meaning for this one, so my apologies if it has more uses that those I found. The use of 'distally' seems to be mostly relating to anatomy, so might it instead be 'Distantly'?

V9 P11 35% "You need [enemies.And] what better" -> space needed
82% "I'm a friend of [Azusa's.Please], go ahead" -> space needed

V1P6 ~50%

Ooh, he angy

Ooh, he's angry

v1 p5

~50%

“Ah! Kartika truly is thoughtful. She already prepared the stones for cooking,” I observed.She’d arranged a circle of large stones a safe distance from the fire—probably using earth magic to pull them from the ground.

=> observed. She’d (missing space)

V3P3:
~21%

Ellie took in more air in her pouty cheeks, like her father's forge blower.\

A Bellows?

v5p6:

67% - Sorry, I’m taking too much. -> Sorry, I’m talking too much.