V8.2 P4
13%
And even with Sheryl Family's - And even with the Sheryl Family's

27%
Naturally, Shijima was almost certain already knew - Redundant wording here

v2 p1 ~100%

She had been the who forced […]

She had been the one who forced […]

v3p1 ~6%:

"How dare you..." the body grumbled once more.

Not sure that shortening bodyguard to body works...

@trutherford2388 FYI, from my understanding, this will likely be the new norm moving forward, to better support annotations down the line. Just so you know to expect it!

V4 P6, 92%
"Eugene was the off man out; he had landed on his feet. He reached down and helped me up."
Off -> odd

Volume 21. Part 9 (23%)

Kasytilio should be Kaslytilio like in volume 19

v7 p8

~5%

The following day, just as the Imperial Magic Division departed the royal capital, a lavish entourage arrived at the north gate. It was none other than the King’s younger brother, Duke Raymond of Flitwick, accompanied by his personal knights. On that day, the sixth since the fall of Crystal Palace, the north gate was finally opened.
...
Parker Fletcher, the king’s younger brother, nodded vigorously. “I couldn’t agree more.”

Please re-check this translation. While Duke Flitwick is the king's younger brother, I do not believe this Parker Fletcher is another brother; I think he's just Raymond's right-hand man.

~ 40%

“Yes, Lord Mannerism, thank you for coming.”
Marquis Meusel, supreme commander of the Empire’s expedition, was accompanied by his chief adjutant and son, Linus. Dozens of northern Knightley nobles were already in the room.

~65%

Seated upon the throne, King Raymond addressed Marquis Meusel, who sat in the visitors’ section.
“Now then, Lord Mannerism, don’t you have a word or two for my ascension?”

Please re-check these translations. Should Lord Mannerism be Lord Meusel?

V6P5 ~0%

To begin with, not a one of them

Not one of them, or not a single one of them

V10 P3, 44%
“So this is just a guess, but so you think they just wanted to impress you, Chris?”
So -> do

v16 part 12 0%

"Yes, my bodyguard here took her time," said Jinshi.

Should this be actually be Maomao saying this instead (about Jinshi)? Jinshi is the one posing as a bodyguard, so it wouldn't make sense for him to say this about her. It also would make more sense for Maomao to be the one replying to Dr Wan-Wan since they know each other.

I was a little confused about the reference to the Sengoku and Azuchi-Momoyama periods. The Wikipedia article on Azuchi-Momoyama says it is a subset of the Sengoku period, but the article on the Sengoku period says there is disagreement about when the period ends.

How much of it is Ekaterina not remembering everything, and how much is disagreement among historians?

I mention it because it took me out of the story a bit and I stopped reading and looked it up and became more confused. Maybe there's a way to change the wording a bit to make the reading experience smoother.

V10Pr, 57%: “the skylight Runa that had complimented” -that Runa had

5.5:

I might as well help you find him.

I might as well help you find him."

Volume 13 Part 12
10% they could barrel aged as well ->

they could be barrel aged as well OR they barrel aged well

13% capable of producing rice

It doesn't really produce rice though. Maybe 'converting' or 'fermenting' also covered by xdbx

17% take our time with this on -> take our time with this one

62% bought stocked up on a ton of it -> bought enough to get us stocked up on a ton of it.

also covered by xdbx

V3p9:

17%: “asked Wil with eyes” -> Wil asked with a wordless look/glare. 25%: “unordinary strength” -> extraordinary strength 25%: “seemingly fragile than” -> seemingly more fragile than 33%: “I just want all to get along” -> us all

@isekai-geek

Hello,

I moved your post.

For reference, the opening of every volume discussion post has a direct link to the series correction's topic.

V2 p6 multiple coach should be coachman

V5 P1 70%:
What a pain!"She just barely
Space missing after quote character. Could also be a paragraph break there.