v6p5:

A few instances of italicized words butting up against neighboring words.

@endoftheline Thank you for catching that!

Sorry, these are corrections for volume 2 that I realized I never sent, I know the volume has now expired but I am just sending them anyway just for my own completion's sake, apologies. Can delete this if it is problem though. Will start volume 3 soon.
V2P6
~11%

“Patience, a little higher,” Albert ordered, only to turn around and demand, “No, no, lower during that part,” when I’d strike a spot that made a higher note.

Wrong tense?; strike->struck

V2P7

~30%

“I don’t think I’ve seen these treats before,”she said.

Missing space?; before,”she->before,” she

~30%

my version sounded made the cookies sound more prestigious.

Extra word?; sounded made the cookies->made the cookies

~52%

“It can’t be helped. After all, Viscount Copperfield serves Count Capecot. Though we do not serve the Capecots, Maxwell is to the east of Capecot County, so we weren’t able to publicly interact with you very much.”

Wrong title and because of that wrong order of serving?; Viscount Copperfield->Marquess Copperfield and serves->is served by

~59%

flower arrangement was too tall, it would obscure the face of the other people at the table, and I wanted to have a good view of my brother’s faces.

Missing plural?; face->faces

~81%

while henry watched intently. “Go on, you try.”

Missing capital?; henry->Henry

V2P8
~32%

I wonder if the money from the Northcourts is enough for us to get a horse.Perhaps she’d known that I’d want the money for a horse.

Missing space?; horse.Perhaps->horse. Perhaps

~80%

I was the heir to the family, so I couldn’t let my sister do all the hard work on her own, but there wasn’t much I could do aside from helping Mattew out in the garden.

Missing letter?; Mattew->Matthew

~80%

After all, I wanted to enjoy her studies at the Royal Academy.

Missing word?; wanted to enjoy->wanted her to enjoy

V11P7 ~36%
"There were a least a couple of hundred of the monsters..." -> "There were a at least a couple of hundred of the monsters..."

~42%
"...and the goblins were always quick to pick up..." -> "...and the goblins monsters were always quick to pick up..."
I'm just verifying, but it seemed to be explicitly talking about the monsters, not the goblins.
I know it's VERY confusing that 'goblins' are little shark dudes in this and not the OBVIOUS monsters that have now shown up. I can even see this being an author error to be honest.

V5P6 ~100%
"The age of Reconquista Osete was..." -> "The age of Reconquista Osete Oeste was..."

V4P7

Missing word: "No matter how space there was between us" -> "No matter how much space there was between us"

Americans don't say it this way: "in future" -> "in the future"

V12 P4, 50%
"Yeah, sure," Yoshino replied. "But just to be."
Sentence looks to end abruptly

71%
"but i fear one problem remains to consider, videlicet, how much money..."
Bold word choice. Now I might just be ignorant, but I consider myself well read and had never heard of it before. Not wrong, I gather, just wonder how many are likely to know the word.

75%
"...how much money we can earn here in Laffa"
Laffa -> Laffan

79%
"Admittedly, it's [hard] even for me to believe that we own two houses..."

V1 P10

0% "the projectiles cut through the arrow and riddled the orc king's massive body."

What arrow is being discussed here? Should it instead be air?

"the projectiles cut through the air and riddled the orc king's massive body."

10% "the elves were firing arrows elves like crazy"

Redundant word.

15% "Even though the stone, I could almost feel his confusion."

Missing letter r; through.

"Even through the stone, I could almost feel his confusion."

@Geezer-Weasalopes

Thanks, will remember that going forward!

Sorry I know prepub parts have already expired but just putting this here for completion's sake as I only just finished this volume.
V11P5
~0%

Can had left the guild after finishing the delivery paperwork in a private room and accepted a portion of the payment in gold coins,

Wrong tense?; accepted->accepting

~47%

The Tears of the Goddess, alongside my degraded potions from Balmore and nearby kingdoms, appeared in every religious book written over the past seventy-odd years; not as myth, but it actually existed.

Sorry if it is okay as it is, but when reading it feels a bit 'odd' and does not seem to follow from the bit before?; but it actually existed->but as something that actually existed

P6
~0%

Then, realization hit me. I could’ve used a stamina potion instead of Reiko’s potion.

Wrong word?; potion->magic as Reiko has magic not potions?

~40%

Suddenly, I noticed the Eyes leader giving me a look as if to say he’d never allowed that.

Wrong tense? allowed->allow

P7
~40%

“Thirteen!’

Wrong speech ending?; ’->"

P8
~27%

A two-seater with cloaking to go invisible or disguise as a rock, with some sort of shield to prevent tampering when parked, autopilot, perfect safety system, and comes to us when called.

Wrong word/missing word? and comes to us->and that comes to us (or and->that)

V1P10 43%:
first-aid kid -> first-aid kit

Arc 1 Volume 6 - Part 1:

[~80%]

"Anyway, that's how yet name came up, Ryo.

Correct to yer.

@Zarabada-0h92w38 said in Imperial Reincarnation - Corrections Topic:

V4 P2

51% "riflemen will be forced to fire."

The story just told us (V4 P1, 55%) that their guns aren't rifled (at least in the Empire). Should the soldiers be called riflemen here if they don't have rifles? Musketmen or musketeers may be useful alternatives to consider, though the generic "soldier" could also work.

V4 P9

"Riflemen" is used again in V4 P9 at 73%, 74% and twice at 76%. At the same time, the story is telling us these riflemen are ineffective in firing at range (the exact opposite of a rifleman).

The first correction is for this topic to get moved to the corrections forum :P

Thanks for all of your posts, everyone! All of your corrections up to this point are in the series now.

V11P6, 0%

Volf, too, had prepared a celebratory gift for Firmo

His name is spelled 'Fermo'.

40%

wing in the castle.Since it was their first official

Missing a space after the period.

Volume 4 part 2, at about 60% mark, you duplicate the entire last 40% or so of part 2.

I suggest a search for duplicate sentences/paragraphs and remove all duplicates.

Volume 1 Part 10
"This near-distlled water quickly absorbs water-solvent materials in the air, thus becoming conductive."

solvent -> soluble