It was evening, and the sun cooled the air to the same temperature as our crackling campfire.

I didn't think to keep track of where it is because I figured someone else would've reported it already but this sentence seems kinda wonky. Unless they're living on Venus, the Sun shouldn't be cooling the air to the temperature of fire. Is this actually what the sentence is supposed to say or did something get mixed up along the way?

Vol. 5 Part 3

67% cute side do you, -> cute side don't you,

@pcj Thank you for those great catches on parts 1, 4, and 5! I've updated everything. :)

V2P4: "I thought you'd be tough [enough] to handle it"

V3P4
52% - defeat the Demon Kingmade perfect sense - insert space

5.3

His next words were a carried everything he could muster.

Maybe just “carried”

Volume 3 - Part 1:

[58%] people for help. When we said that they would ► It should be I (Chidori)? [80%] 'You seem to be enjoying yourself,” Sousuke ► The dialogue's starting double quote is a single one.

Volume 2 - Part 2:

[32%] using the word “growth” in a way that ► The closing double quote alone is in italic format. [83%] whispered to me, “Is there’s a tax taken ► It should be that there’s.

Volume 11 - Part 3:

[77%] ‘That’s...fair. I’m sorry.” Ange fell to the ► The dialogue's starting double quote is a single one. [83%] fool shon? Here I ’m, lovin’ Shera and ► Remove extra space.

Volume 5 - Part 9:

[10%] Which inn is accomodating you during your time ► It should be accommodating.

Volume 16 - Part 4:

[51%] "and these babies magic direct in proportion to their size." A word seems to be missing here. Maybe have magic? Contain magic? [70%]: "(...) to a future there was no winning." Missing "where"?

Volume 11 - Part 8:

[23%] with him for help, he hadn't hesitated to try ► It should be hadn’t (different ’ ).

Volume 9 - Part 1:

[51%] health in some way.More often than not, ► Missing space. [77%] because she wasted no time in saying, ► Paragraph ends with a comma, merge the following dialogue. (Or use a colon?)

Volume 2 - Part 7:

[40%] adventurers seemed to surprise the newbie ► Missing period. [49%] then close the gun’s apron. Then, all that was ► The word apron should probably be something else. [75%] Divine Blessing(s): Traitor to the Chief God ► Previous statuses all used Divine Blessing (no plural).

Volume 7 - Part 4:

[49%] knew immediately what she was going to talk about. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [70%] take care!” Pullum said. Once you take care of the ► The dialogue's starting double quote is missing. [71%] Vrrrm.... Vrrrm... Vrrrm... ► It should be 3 periods. [80%] “Let’s go, Rani! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [83%] them. Probably beats showing up all gloomy , right?” ► Remove extra space.

I read the part 3 that was accidentally released but I can't access it anymore since it was taken down, so I don't know where it is anymore, but there's a part where he talks to Foret and it says she "brayed" in response. Horses don't really bray, that's something that donkeys and mules. You should change it to "neigh" or "whinny".

@Ingraman said in Conqueror from a Dying Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

@Terabyte said in Conqueror from a Dying Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

Volume 2 - Part 4:

[5%] I’ve never even masurbated once yet. ► The best word to have a typo in. 😅

They saved that one just for you, Terabyte. ;)

Just wanted to make sure you guys were paying attention to the story. ;)

Thanks for catching these mistakes! For the dust one, I meant to put a blanket OF dust collecting on the floor. I forgot to put the "of"... 🤦

Perry Rhodan Neo #9 (online version)

Part 1 (free preview) ends with chapter 3, part 2 starts with chapter 6, so it seems chapter 4 & 5 are missing (only in the online version, the ebook is complete).