Volume 1 - Part 3

[53%] “There’s no mistaking it. That’s the Lightning Spear Demon Kamikiri.
→ “There’s no mistaking it. That’s the Lightning Spear Demon Kamikiri.” [Missing ”] [54%] That’s why the enemy’s lighting magic is even more effective.
→ That’s why the enemy’s lightning magic is even more effective. [76%] I was probably still within the bomb blast’s range.
[Sounds odd to me. Maybe grenade’s blast range.]

33.2:

I'm sure what ahpenned must've left

I'm sure what happened must've left

Volume 2 Part 5
40% Dana -> Diana
57% could help but -> couldn't help but
79% union...n the future -> union... in the future
99% unimpressed he looked -> unimpressed she looked

the reference is to Kris.

Iniquity is not the same as inequity. And den of iniquity is an idiom.

12.2:

Volf carried the Ice-Wing Sword so, just a hilt)

Volf carried the Ice-Wing Sword (so, just a hilt)
Volf carried the Ice-Wing Sword (so just a hilt)

v3p1:

26% - empress’ ire -> I’d probably put the “s” there (empress’s), since empress is singular, but I’m not sure it’s required.

V8.1 P11, 53%
"...what if she though her death might bright Reina [around] eventually, leading her to accept the maid's final gift?"
Not sure, but I think there might be a word missing here.

@Libri-Liberorum said in Zilbagias the Demon Prince - Corrections Topic:

V6P16

... his other older brother who pretended to not have a care in the world with all of his affections

Is "affections" supposed to be "affectations"?

It is indeed meant to be affectations. Thank you for catching this. Should be fixed now.

V3 P2 ~73%

sSince nobody here was gravely injured, […]

sSince -> Since

V7P5, 22%: “Then there was Clay” - Cray

v3p10:

72% - The preparations have been made, holy savor -> Typo: savior

Volume 1 - Part 3:

[99%] She’dgotten so worked up >> missing space

V19P3
~31%

It must be sacred ground—a true sanctuary—although no dragon appeared as they did in the city of water and the imperial capital.”

The only dragons (recently) in the Imperial Capital were the 3 skeletal dragons summoned during the attack on the Alverns, because this mentions the water dragon in the city of water being seen, is it maybe about the flower dragon in the republic's capital? the imperial capital->the city of craft (or the republic's capital)

~31%

“The flower dragon alighted in the city of water.

I think the dragon in the city of water is the water dragon (volume 12 epilogue)?; The flower dragon->The water dragon (unless it is talking about the Republic's capital city of water->city of craft)

V19P7
~59%

“I have always told you...that she died of an illness. But I had my doubts from the first, and I never stopped investigating in secret.

Sorry if I am wrong, I tried searching but could not see this as a phrase, so maybe wrong word?; first->start

V19P10

@Charlie85 heads up...

Additionally, when mentioning any errors found in a published book, please send them to support@j-novel.club. -Welcome to the Corrections Sub-Forum!

I noticed there's a whole lot of italicizing of Ai's thoughts, especially at the start of chapter 1. I don't to a lot of (any) writing, but if the book is already first person, do Ai's thoughts really need to be italicized? Everything at the start of the chapter is already her thoughts if she's the one narrating the story.
Later it goes to third person, but the first person section at the beginning I don't think should have any italics for thoughts, right?

@hornet65 said in Proud to Be the Villainess - Corrections Topic:

@Geezer-Weasalopes
In Japanese I don't believe there is a difference between the two. They would both be spelled the same using the same characters. It's only an English distinction, and basically only the United Kingdom uses Earl.
This seems more like a translation error. It was translated as Earl a single time and every other time it was translated as count.

Gack.
Idiot me, I didn't look at the story text you quoted.
Yes, TL error, given the context.

Excuse me while I go slam my head against a wall repeatedly.

V6P2, 53%: “He’ds probably been worried“ - He’d
82%: “bigger than the redboars” - redbears.

V16 part6 near the end 8th paragraph from the end
Particularly frightening was the fact that unlike gold, snow was free. You'd think there'd be label costs.

Should that not be * Labour* costs?