@hornet65 said in Proud to Be the Villainess - Corrections Topic:

@Geezer-Weasalopes
In Japanese I don't believe there is a difference between the two. They would both be spelled the same using the same characters. It's only an English distinction, and basically only the United Kingdom uses Earl.
This seems more like a translation error. It was translated as Earl a single time and every other time it was translated as count.

Gack.
Idiot me, I didn't look at the story text you quoted.
Yes, TL error, given the context.

Excuse me while I go slam my head against a wall repeatedly.

v1p2 ~63%:

"Which means we could take care of this quickly if you met Aurelio in person,, but..."

Double comma.

v1p1 ~58%:

"The divine blade responds to the archfiend's ressurrection, though, so if it showed up, that meansthe archfiend has too."

meansthe -> means the

V1P2, 6%: “That wasn't a problem for me, as I would naturally wake up once the other started talking” - should that be ‘others’?

V6P2, 53%: “He’ds probably been worried“ - He’d
82%: “bigger than the redboars” - redbears.

a1v6p8 ~4%

"No, they are"

"No, they are having one / going to have one" or "No, here will be"

a1v6p8 ~18%

"no active adventures above A-rank in"

should probably be "no active adventures above B-rank in" - if there were A-Ranks in Twilightland, Abel would not be something as special to them.

a1v6p8 ~41%

the party wanted Abel

wanted to talk to Abel

a1v6p8 ~46%

between an A-rank and a B-rank

a1v6p8 ~80%

All were twenty-five years old.

but at ~50%

Incidentally, all five members of the party were twenty-five years old.

I'd leave out the duplicate at 80%.

a1v6p10 ~84%
First Fairy King, then Water Fairy King - I think it would be better the other way round, leading with the specific Water Fairy King.

a1v6p11 ~63%

They had debriefed together

They had planned together / They had exchanged information / Abel had briefed them / ...

a1v6p11 ~64%

... , there are also a few magicians on guard who started...

Should be were

a1v6p12 ~84%
Vicent should be Vicente

V16 part6 near the end 8th paragraph from the end
Particularly frightening was the fact that unlike gold, snow was free. You'd think there'd be label costs.

Should that not be * Labour* costs?

@Devon unsure if this is a correction or just an error from the author but in p2 the # after the / in "wooden sword mastery" jumped from 1000 to 1500 on the second appearance. Nothing big, but was noticed.

V1 P1 61% "fifth [frincess]" -> princess

v12p1:

73% - There was a marinaded white fish made to look […] -> Best choice? It looks weird to me. ^^; A google search seemed to indicate that marinade can be a verb, but most of the results said that “marinade” is the noun, and “marinate” is what you do with it… “a marinated white fish”. Eeny meeny miney mo?

V5 P1 (48% - 14th line down from top of page -beginning line of 3rd paragraph.

alt text
Remove redundant "d".

V2P9

This huge building was built of prime estate, ...

Possibly supposed to be 'built on prime real estate'? Also, 'building' and 'built' so close together is repetitive.

Potions ... were ... ineffective against monsters ...

Given we're talking about healing potions here, the word 'against' is odd.

V2P8

0%: "He ran as quickly as he could, like a fleeing hair." -> hare 0%: "However, ... Mischel was nowhere to be seen. But why?" -> Why? 14%: "abnormality the demons had no intel on—that marked his fate" -> sealed 14%: "We debated employing the Heroes," -> deploying? 57%: "In his left hand was a staff even taller than her was," -> he

I'm not sure... English is not my maternal language so I refrain to participate in that kind of topic in general, but I think this is a mistake :

V7 part2 59% :

Your body is still having trouble making the moments,...

moments would be movements I guess.