v6p2 ~67%:

For hard-to-find ingredients, the jungle was the obvious answer.

Since jungle here appears to be an Amaz*n stand-in, I wonder if it should be capitalized, or if there's enough guidance on the Japanese side of the translation where it should be clearly lowercase. Just thought I'd mention it.

V5 P8 (13% -lines 10 & 11 down from top of the page)

...,so the queen and her shoulders started to evacuate,...

Correct to:

so the queen and her soldiers started to evaculate,...

v1p4 ~30%:

"It is a pleasure to meet you. My name is Freesia Salt. I hope we'll be well acquainted from now on," I I said with a curtsy.

I I said -> I said.

V1P4 ~ 57%

“Inami looked proud. While he'd said Inami* was his secretary and friend, it sounded more like the two of them were true comrades in arms.”

*Sakou

Volume 11 part 2 about 65%

when she was bought for fifty million krams,

It's supposed to be billion not million

when she was bought for fifty billion krams,

Part 7, ~21%

Tsuguho had been wondering why he looked so much more human than those said to have attained a state of void in the past.

Part 11, 89%

Akira was only the second Godless Palanquin in history to attain such a state

Assuming the sentence in part 11 is correct, the word choice for the earlier sentence in part 7 is inconsistent with it, as it implies that there were at least two before Akira.

v1 p4

~40%

Trust mattered more than anything in a party. More than skill or experience. At least, that was true at Silver Rank and below.
And I was destroyed that trust.

That sentence doesn't scan. Maybe it should be I had destroyed that trust ?

V5P3

80% "I mean, it wouldn't be easy, per say"

It's not "per say," but "per se" that should be used here.

Volume 1 part 10 19% "... so that might mean he's searching a more broader area than I was." more is redundant and improper grammar here.

V5 P9 (76% - 7th line down from top of page)

After that, wed had time on our hands,...

Correct to:

After that, we'd had time on our hands,

V5P4 ~48%

[…] and what remained were slashed away […]

Should be was, or the remains.

~81%

[…] dark-haired and chestnut-colored hair boys […]

The construct feels inconsistent. Maybe something like "The dark-haired boy and the one with chestnut-colored hair"…

~86%

[…] shredding countless crystal ghosts into shreds […]

Shredding into shreds is duplicate.

~95%

[…] make it in time.Lilka could […]

Misses a space after the dot.

V3p5 18%: Wellmyr should instead be Wellmy

V7P8 ~14%

Not a one of the three […]

The a should not be there.

~59%

It was incredibly pleasant to merely observing the overwhelming sense [...]

Should be observe.

~68%

[…] the ice in his heart , he played at [...]

Has an extra space before the comma.

V4P9, 20%: “Lord Syvel’s hands [missing word], rippling the paper in his grip” - clenched?

Volume 11 - Part 4:
[~70%]
The insert image does not appear to match the narrative.

14.6:

given your lived experiences

given your life experience

v1 p2

~27%

He went on to inform me that there weren’t that many people in this world who could use magic—only about thirty percent of the population. Mages were a precious resource and bestowed with positions befitting their skills. There wasn’t such a surplus that any of them would willingly choose to be a personal tutor. I could ask one of the professors at the academy to tutor me privately after school, but I very much doubted any of them would want to waste their time on some F-rank like me.

Is thirty percent the translation correct? Because if 30% of the population are mages then they are pretty common. Maybe 3%? Or 30% of the nobility only?

v1 p3

~60%

“Okay,then I’ll have an orange juice.”

=> Okay, then (missing space).

~78%

4I took out my phone and pointed it at Maya. She immediately noticed and threw up a peace sign.

=> I