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      Banner of the Stars - Corrections Topic
      banner • • lovelight

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      yumenokage

      Part 8

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      The base of operations of the Area 2 Fleet, the star system known as the Secar Viscountdom was virtually a war plant.
      --insert comma

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      As a result, the military succeeded in taking Lahkfacar, and gained control of the three
      --delete comma

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      There will be a different mission or you."
      --for

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      Its territory has been torn apart, with no ability to contact each other.
      --seems like odd phrasing

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      Our Crappy Social Game Club Is Gonna Make the Most Epic Game - Corrections Topic
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      Terabyte

      Volume 2 - Part 10:

      [Generic] The illustrator's name is Hyuga (single u) on the cover but it's written 2 times as Hyuuga (double u) in the afterword.
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      The Bloodline - Corrections Topic
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