Volume 2 - Part 10:

[26%] after having bought a gun and a dagger ► Missing period. [93%] designers, my editor, 0, and of course, ► Should the editor's initial be a O instead of a 0 (zero)?

Vol. 2 part 12

5%
every scrap of knowledge she could get her hand on,
every scrap of knowledge she could get her hands on,

40%
I can't! So even if you
I can't! So even if you

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3.9

Roy occupied Fie's mind during *her" absence,

“his”

being both a victim of being mistaken and a mistake maker herself.

“a mistake victim” or “a victim of mistakes”
(Passive voice makes her the indirect object, like she's the only one that made mistakes.)

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Volume 3 - Part 10:

[0%] with Yu and the Mark IIIenduring within its ► Missing space. [20%] the city at a gruesome skew.. They were ► Duplicate period. [40%] little bit more than she was prepared for.. ► Duplicate period.

Volume 9 - Part 10:

[0%] ＥＸ－９ ► The usual title format is missing. [7%] to defend against Arie's rainbow flames, ► It should be Aries’s (typo + different ’ ). [16%] Maiden title, Parthenos.She looked down ► Missing space. [42%] ＥＸ－10 ► The usual title format is missing. [67%] ＥＸ－11 ► The usual title format is missing. [98%] she was the opponent.This would infinitely ► Missing space. [99%] of character count here. so it’s about time ► Wrong period.

V2p3
[80%] “It won’t open?!” Agness tried pushing, -> Agnes

Volume 6, part 10 (33%):
"He met [her] at a benefit concert,..."
I believe the German word "Benefizkonzert" would be more commonly translated as "charity concert".
If I didn't know the German word, I would probably interpret "benefit concert" as the exact opposite - a concert for profit...

Volume 3 part 2 is missing, at the moment it is a duplicate of part 3.

Fixed

v4p8:

19% - “Besides, it wasn’t as if anyone looked at the scepter but so closely anyway.” -> Should that “but” really be there?

The sentence nearly always sounds better in my head when it’s absent, but something almost clicks in my head on occasion when it is there. I’m not sure if I’ve read a similar usage of the word, or it’s just close enough to some other word/usage (“naught but one”?).

Volume 5 - Part 6:

[63%] all were like, “So what?” I feel kinda dumb for ► Nested double quotes. Use single quotes instead. [63%] especially since it make me feel so bad and all. ► It should be made. [68%] I don’t know why. but this feels like a goodbye. ► It should be a comma. [75%] 　That evening, I tucked into some reheated ► This paragraph is more indented than the others. [99%] to the world-famous Dinkeyland. And Nishina’s ► It should be Dinkyland (no e) for consistency.

@iseguy Ah, that should be "yes" - went in and fixed it. Thanks for catching that!

Finally getting around to reading v2, and I can't believe no one commented on Kai's "ten-square-foot" bedroom... Guess I have to send an email about that...

Also included the "twenty-square-meter wide" living room.

8.8

Someday in the distant future

I don't think this phrase means what you think it means.

the four of us were able to rendezvous safely while the clergy was distracted via the hidden passageways that opened up.

“while the clergy were distracted the four of us were able to rendezvous safely via the hidden passageways that opened up.”

Volume 4, Part 11:

[35%] "I couldn't tell what the Emperor Maximillian was thinking," ► Remove the [General] Maximilian / Maximillian is inconsistently spelled (sometimes with one L and other times with two). Just noticed in this part, but could be in previous parts too (as I admittedly haven't paid too much attention and just happened to notice in this part because it happened back to back) - there are four instances of this right after the part called out above (at 35%) where it starts with 2 L's, goes to 1, then back to 2, and then back to 1 again in the span of a few paragraphs.

Volume 3, Part 10:

[34%] "Woe was me." (2 uses) ► isn't the saying "Woe is me."? [62%] "Very well, Lady Iris. We'll all go there together!" ► Hmm, this is just conjecture, but shouldn't this be directed to Werra, not Iris? Though I have no idea what the original text says, this sentence just seems off in context when the last thing Werra said (which was "Not at all! Not at all! We would love to have you accompany us!") was to try to convince Iris to go with them and then Werra speaks again and says the line in question to Iris, which feels like a line that Iris should have been saying to Werra. Though, I guess there could be some unspecified conversation going on in the inner dialogue between these two lines.