Volume 9 - Part 10:

[0%] ＥＸ－９ ► The usual title format is missing. [7%] to defend against Arie's rainbow flames, ► It should be Aries’s (typo + different ’ ). [16%] Maiden title, Parthenos.She looked down ► Missing space. [42%] ＥＸ－10 ► The usual title format is missing. [67%] ＥＸ－11 ► The usual title format is missing. [98%] she was the opponent.This would infinitely ► Missing space. [99%] of character count here. so it’s about time ► Wrong period.

V2p3
[80%] “It won’t open?!” Agness tried pushing, -> Agnes

Volume 6, part 10 (33%):
"He met [her] at a benefit concert,..."
I believe the German word "Benefizkonzert" would be more commonly translated as "charity concert".
If I didn't know the German word, I would probably interpret "benefit concert" as the exact opposite - a concert for profit...

Volume 3 part 2 is missing, at the moment it is a duplicate of part 3.

Fixed

v4p8:

19% - “Besides, it wasn’t as if anyone looked at the scepter but so closely anyway.” -> Should that “but” really be there?

The sentence nearly always sounds better in my head when it’s absent, but something almost clicks in my head on occasion when it is there. I’m not sure if I’ve read a similar usage of the word, or it’s just close enough to some other word/usage (“naught but one”?).

Volume 5 - Part 6:

[63%] all were like, “So what?” I feel kinda dumb for ► Nested double quotes. Use single quotes instead. [63%] especially since it make me feel so bad and all. ► It should be made. [68%] I don’t know why. but this feels like a goodbye. ► It should be a comma. [75%] 　That evening, I tucked into some reheated ► This paragraph is more indented than the others. [99%] to the world-famous Dinkeyland. And Nishina’s ► It should be Dinkyland (no e) for consistency.

@iseguy Ah, that should be "yes" - went in and fixed it. Thanks for catching that!

Finally getting around to reading v2, and I can't believe no one commented on Kai's "ten-square-foot" bedroom... Guess I have to send an email about that...

Also included the "twenty-square-meter wide" living room.

8.8

Someday in the distant future

I don't think this phrase means what you think it means.

the four of us were able to rendezvous safely while the clergy was distracted via the hidden passageways that opened up.

“while the clergy were distracted the four of us were able to rendezvous safely via the hidden passageways that opened up.”

Volume 4, Part 11:

[35%] "I couldn't tell what the Emperor Maximillian was thinking," ► Remove the [General] Maximilian / Maximillian is inconsistently spelled (sometimes with one L and other times with two). Just noticed in this part, but could be in previous parts too (as I admittedly haven't paid too much attention and just happened to notice in this part because it happened back to back) - there are four instances of this right after the part called out above (at 35%) where it starts with 2 L's, goes to 1, then back to 2, and then back to 1 again in the span of a few paragraphs.

Volume 3, Part 10:

[34%] "Woe was me." (2 uses) ► isn't the saying "Woe is me."? [62%] "Very well, Lady Iris. We'll all go there together!" ► Hmm, this is just conjecture, but shouldn't this be directed to Werra, not Iris? Though I have no idea what the original text says, this sentence just seems off in context when the last thing Werra said (which was "Not at all! Not at all! We would love to have you accompany us!") was to try to convince Iris to go with them and then Werra speaks again and says the line in question to Iris, which feels like a line that Iris should have been saying to Werra. Though, I guess there could be some unspecified conversation going on in the inner dialogue between these two lines.

V6P3
61% - his name meant "nine." I went through a lot of... - Missing opening quote at the start of "I went through...

@terabyte Thanks!

Volume 14 - Part 10:

[13%] Diablo raised his voice and called out, ► Paragraph ends with a comma, merge the following dialogue into it. [28%] “Whaaaaaaaaaa!” he screamed ► Missing period. [34%] Mairabelle peered at them dubiously. ► It should be Mariabelle. [96%] newest volume of14-Year-Old and Illustrator ► Missing space.

@pcj said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

Volume 4 - Part 8:

[68%] I don’t think there’s anyone else who could Lady Saeko’s Seraph. >> missing be

Fixed, thank you!

@iseguy said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

4.9

Even Lady Angelica was audibly shocked by this. “My word!”
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“Why would she do that? It definitely came from Saeko? Matsuri wasn’t the one who wanted to quit?”

These should really be one paragraph, especially if you're forced to use incorrect quotes otherwise.

Yup, this one was just a typo. Thanks!

@iseguy said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

4.10

if you’re asking Matsuri to pay the insurance fee,

“deductible”
(You pay the fees before the accident.)

I knew there was a word I was looking for 😅 Thank you!

Thanks to @Weasalopes for pointing it out, and @pcj for looking into it ^^

They do indeed have spaces between, looks like it's a font issue on the web-reader. I checked the back-end as well where it's showing properly.

Appreciated as always!

Volume 13 Part 6 ~67% Broken image.

Re: v5p7

[76%] along with his own wims.

I haven’t looked up that spelling, but shouldn’t it be whims?

Or has the book been published already? I should double check. ^^;