Volume 4, Part 11:

[35%] "I couldn't tell what the Emperor Maximillian was thinking," ► Remove the [General] Maximilian / Maximillian is inconsistently spelled (sometimes with one L and other times with two). Just noticed in this part, but could be in previous parts too (as I admittedly haven't paid too much attention and just happened to notice in this part because it happened back to back) - there are four instances of this right after the part called out above (at 35%) where it starts with 2 L's, goes to 1, then back to 2, and then back to 1 again in the span of a few paragraphs.

Volume 3, Part 10:

[34%] "Woe was me." (2 uses) ► isn't the saying "Woe is me."? [62%] "Very well, Lady Iris. We'll all go there together!" ► Hmm, this is just conjecture, but shouldn't this be directed to Werra, not Iris? Though I have no idea what the original text says, this sentence just seems off in context when the last thing Werra said (which was "Not at all! Not at all! We would love to have you accompany us!") was to try to convince Iris to go with them and then Werra speaks again and says the line in question to Iris, which feels like a line that Iris should have been saying to Werra. Though, I guess there could be some unspecified conversation going on in the inner dialogue between these two lines.

V6P3
61% - his name meant "nine." I went through a lot of... - Missing opening quote at the start of "I went through...

@terabyte Thanks!

Volume 14 - Part 10:

[13%] Diablo raised his voice and called out, ► Paragraph ends with a comma, merge the following dialogue into it. [28%] “Whaaaaaaaaaa!” he screamed ► Missing period. [34%] Mairabelle peered at them dubiously. ► It should be Mariabelle. [96%] newest volume of14-Year-Old and Illustrator ► Missing space.

@pcj said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

Volume 4 - Part 8:

[68%] I don’t think there’s anyone else who could Lady Saeko’s Seraph. >> missing be

Fixed, thank you!

@iseguy said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

4.9

Even Lady Angelica was audibly shocked by this. “My word!”
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“Why would she do that? It definitely came from Saeko? Matsuri wasn’t the one who wanted to quit?”

These should really be one paragraph, especially if you're forced to use incorrect quotes otherwise.

Yup, this one was just a typo. Thanks!

@iseguy said in Girls Kingdom - Corrections Topic:

4.10

if you’re asking Matsuri to pay the insurance fee,

“deductible”
(You pay the fees before the accident.)

I knew there was a word I was looking for 😅 Thank you!

Thanks to @Weasalopes for pointing it out, and @pcj for looking into it ^^

They do indeed have spaces between, looks like it's a font issue on the web-reader. I checked the back-end as well where it's showing properly.

Appreciated as always!

Volume 13 Part 6 ~67% Broken image.

Re: v5p7

[76%] along with his own wims.

I haven’t looked up that spelling, but shouldn’t it be whims?

Or has the book been published already? I should double check. ^^;

Volume 6 - Part 10:

[2%] The least I could was try >> should be could do was

Volume 12 - Part 6:

[31%] “Don’t say that,” Clouseau muttered. “I’ll start crying,” ► It should be a period.

Part 8

48%
The base of operations of the Area 2 Fleet, the star system known as the Secar Viscountdom was virtually a war plant.
--insert comma

67%
As a result, the military succeeded in taking Lahkfacar, and gained control of the three
--delete comma

67%
There will be a different mission or you."
--for

95%
Its territory has been torn apart, with no ability to contact each other.
--seems like odd phrasing

Volume 2 - Part 10:

[Generic] The illustrator's name is Hyuga (single u) on the cover but it's written 2 times as Hyuuga (double u) in the afterword.