Volume 2 - Part 7:

[76%] but the skirt gave it away:she was, in fact, a girl. ► Missing space.

Volume 16, part 3, 42%
They used the two combination spotlights to knock out the aliens...

-> This is a remnant of google translate...
Yes, "Strahler" can also mean "spotlight", but "Kombistrahler" is a beam weapon...

Same mistake a few lines further down.

58%
... which is bviously never.
-> missing "o"

61%
...fate can be read n the lines...
-> missing "i"

Volume 2 - Part 10:

[21%] a vague hunch about Ntalia’s case, and his theory ► It should be Natalia’s. [51%] my sister?! Isn’t this justProfessor Allen’s illusion?” ► Missing space.

2.9

Both were masterpieces I forced for him three hundred years prior.

“forged”

I’d had quite a touch time fending him off,

“tough”

Sat atop the golem and, looking the very image of the king of all that was unholy, I spoke

“Sitting atop the golem and looking”
“Sat” and “looking” aren't compatible tenses. Also, bad comma.

The holy blade neutralized any magic defenses with which God of Warfare.

Incomplete sentence.

That same sense of guilt prevented Rosa from drinking anyone else’s blood but own.

“my own,” I think.

Volume 3 - Part 7:

[74%] The circles must be sending that accumulated ► It should be were. The circles are destroyed now.

Unfortunately, my subscription has just expired, so I don't have access to the story anymore and can't say exactly which episode it was. But it was in the Tale of a self-centered girl chapter from Treyse's perspective.

"Bill Arnold, the eldest of the Rockmann sons, came from his own domain to visit together with his wife. A few hours later, the parents of Sir Alois’s stepsister, Melly Arnold, came for a visit, bringing flowers."

Original text: 容態が安定したアルウェスを公爵邸で引き受けてから、それはもう目まぐるしく、現在は自分の領地で生活を送っている長男のビル・アーノルドが妻を連れて見舞いに訪れたり、その妻でアルウェスの義理姉となるメリー・アーノルドの両親が数時間後には花を持って顔を見に来たり、 [...]

Alois doesn't have any stepsister, so 義理姉 should likely be translated here as "sister-in-law" instead of "stepsister". It has been previously mentioned in the story that Alois' older brother Bill is married. In the above passage, it sounds like Bill & his wife Melly first visited, then Melly's parents showed up later on.

Sorry if this comment is late. Thank you so much to the JNC team for all your hard work on this volume. I'm very happy that volume 4 was translated and thought the translation was truly excellent.

I checked and it didn't seem as if anyone reported on this. I'm reading the catch-up versions though so maybe it was corrected in the published version. However, I'll post it here just in case:

After Story:
part 9 30% This is after the group met up and are visiting the Kannen statue museum.

"I bet Iikanji would be able to explain all this stuff."
"You're right. It's a shame he's not here."
"Huh, Who's that?" Hadori-kun and Sato-san asked.

So, here's what I'm wondering. Is it that Hadori and Sato are asking who Iikanji is? Weren't they the ones that had him in their group earlier in the day?

part 10 77%
It had been on my mind about it ever since Hachijo-kun had mentioned it in Enoshima, and I told him I'd wanted to see it.

The bolded words seems superfluous in the sentence.

Volume 2 - Part 6:

[24%] “Huh” was the answer you’d expect to receive ► Missing question mark?

Volume 24 - Part 11:

[6%] remained in one piece Put simply, he had ► Missing period. [34%] Relying on him wou never allow Nozomu ► It should be would.

V1P8 19% - mustered by the struggling demons drew within reach of Heavy Rain - demons and drew within

@pcj Great catches, thank you! I've updated all of these.

Vol. 4 Part 10
7%
make this concert the epicest concert ever!"
make this concert the most epic concert ever!"

@nappingcub

Hello,

The bonus story will be added at a later date.

There will be a post about it in the V3 discussion topic when an update is out.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

Volume 20, part 4, 47%
And neither Moneygold and Teach were exceptions.
-> neither Moneygold nor Teach

74%
...two particular people becoming a coupole... -> a couple

Volume 2 - Part 8:

[69%] forced to curry flavor with the young man ► It should be favor.

2.8

That would mean arcanestone could be dedicated to the light beam spell,

“mean one arcanestone”

Our nations and cities made them not just as decorative symbols, but also as a way to display how prosperous, to outdo their competitors.

“to display prosperity,” or “how prosperous they were,”

The golems I made this time had a different design from the ones I’dad made for Camus,

“I’d”

Volume 2 - Part 8:

[41%] 8 At the Theater ► It should be 8. (missing period) for consistency.

@Rinvelt Really weird, indeed. 🙄

Volume 16 - Part 11:

[44%] “Uhm, so Al. I have a request to make... said Tesfia. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.