Volume 5 - Part 11:

[43%]
Current: we departed Heberett Castle Soon, we arrived behind the Royal Naruyan Army.
Recommend: we departed Heberett Castle. Soon, we arrived behind the Royal Naruyan Army.

Missing a period.

v2p8:

49% - “That reminds me, are you gonna apply to that latest advertisement?” The one from whats-his-name, the new mayor of that frontier town.” -> There seems to be an extra closing quotation mark in the middle there, and there’s no verb in the second “sentence.” Should there be an apostrophe in the “whats” of whats-his-name? Maybe rewrite it as: “That reminds me, are you gonna apply to that latest advertisement, the one from what’s-his-name, the new mayor of that frontier town?” Does that stretch the sentence too far? :p Or: “That reminds me… Are you gonna apply to that latest advertisement? It’s the one from what’s-his-name, the new mayor of that frontier town.” Mix and match, choose something else, or maybe it’s actually fine and doesn’t need changing. :)

@LightningLeaf

Hello,

Should be fixed now.

Thank you

16.13

This is too late, just a note so I can find it later, but both instances of “torso” in this part should be “body,” instead. Been seeing this translation mistake a lot, lately; there must be a new dictionary out.

Suggested corrects to B&B #3
Diamond Knight -> Knight of Diamonds
Why?:
In the afterword of #2 Kagyu talks about "The next book will deal with KOD" KOD being the Knight of Diamonds. The second in the Wizardry first trilogy.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wizardry_II:_The_Knight_of_Diamonds

Considering this series references A LOT about the original games including the confusion the Japanese had over the joke on Cusinart. (They thought it really was a legendary blade maker. Of course Cusinart just makes kitchen stuff. In the books they just keep the joke going.) Vorpal bunnies, Catlob's Trading post and why Iarumas finds it confusing and thinks it should be different. The fact some people's names are just backwards words. All of that is in original Wizardry. (Werdna and Trebor being the creators: Andrew and Robert)
Yes Knight of Diamonds is long and clunky BUT for continuity sake and the fact it was referenced as KOD in book #2 it should really be (The) Knight of Diamonds.

Also if you were confused about what KOD meant and Diamond Knight wasn't "KOD" but "DK" there ya go.

Volume 6 - Part 7:

[84%] With the cold eating away at his body, he must have lost all feeling in his limbs by now, and his consciousness had ti be hazy at best. ► change ti to to

Volume 6 - Part 9:

[6%] ...Magic Energy Wind Bladeification.Liner’s sword, Rukh Bringer... ► Add a space after the dot that´s after Bladeification

@SilverFuton I went with block quotes for this section, along with Profeta’s inscriptions later on, but I didn’t realise that block quotes don’t work. For the actual proper release of the book, they’ve been center-aligned for easier reading!

@Shiroi-Hane Thank you for catching this! We've changed both instances to "coop".

Volume 3

Part 11

85 pct

They're quality

Should be their quality

Volume 7 - digital "print" edition
The tiniest nitpick and too late now that it's out, but in the Character Profiles, Glen is:
Part of the prince's
inner circle. He's a
knight in the imp
erial guard...

a dash after "imp"? 8-)

Volume 2 - Part 8:

[44%] didn’t do anything. In fact, I’d said that I did...” ► It should be say.

5.6

This was one of the few areas was still ruled by demons.

“areas still ruled by demons”

Reincarnated Mage with Inferior Eyes: The Oppressed, Strongest Orphan Iis Invincible in a Different World.”

“Is”
And yes, it is capitalized. “Is” feels like a preposition, but it's a verb. A tense of the irregular verb “be.”

Volume 2 - Part 10:

[65%] Crow cut Rui off. “ Ahem. Thank you for the warning.” ► Remove extra space. [100%] SkyFish, Oct 2021 ► It should be SkyFarm. (Unless the author did it on purpose for...reasons? 🤨)

Volume 15 - Part 10:

[0%] Afterword: ► There is no colon usually. [1%] Volume 15: Rising of the Battle Junkie. ► It should be The Rising like on the cover. [40%] There won’t be any movement yet” ► Missing question mark. [99%] and now that Grelbarelka is stable, ► It should be Grebarelka (extra L).

Volume 9 - Part 8:

[19%] 《I don’t understand,》said Al. ► Mising space.

Volume 6, Part 12:

[~36%] -- "he found that the lectures could nevertheless still had much to offer him" --> "could [...] had" is not grammatically correct; it should either be "could nevertheless still have" or just "nevertheless still had" (i.e. excise "could")

Volume 9, part 3, 7%:
..., and as a result anyone who wasn't past of their gang dared to approach the store.
-> Should be "noone"

Volume 2 - Part 7:

[53%] who had him granted the ability to sheathe ► It should be granted him (switch around).

Volume 2 - Part 7:

[76%] but the skirt gave it away:she was, in fact, a girl. ► Missing space.