Volume 5 - Part 6:
[63%] all were like, “So what?” I feel kinda dumb for ► Nested double quotes. Use
single quotes instead.
[63%] especially since it make me feel so bad and all. ► It should be
made.
[68%] I don’t know why. but this feels like a goodbye. ► It should be a
comma.
[75%] That evening, I tucked into some reheated ► This paragraph is more indented than the others.
[99%] to the world-famous Dinkeyland. And Nishina’s ► It should be
Dinkyland (no e) for consistency.