@silverleaf said in Dahlia in Bloom - Corrections Topic:

I felt this section was probably fine because it's a simple back and forth, back and forth:

The back and forth did actually feel fine, I felt the most uncertain right after a narration break, where I wasn't certain if it was alternating to the next person, or them resuming after a pause. I think those two minor lines fix things greatly so that someone won't have to flip back a page to reorientate.