[CONTEST OVER] JNC Original Light Novel Contest

jazzyjeoff

@zwabbit Congratulations on. getting to the next round!

Damon Cavalchini

@zwabbit Congratulations on making it through and good luck with the next round. Only two more hurdles to jump :)

Lamar0012

@hirei will there be another contest this year? Please say yes lol

Lamar0012

@admin will there be another contest this year?

admin

@Lamar0012 I suggest subscribing to the mailing list and paying attention since if we do another contest we will definitely announce it there (and elsewhere).
https://j-novel.club/jncolncontest

Lamar0012

@admin thanks a lot!

Rahul Balaggan

Hello,

Everyone who made it past round 1 may wish to check their inboxes. Emails have gone out to all those who passed round 1.

Thank you to everyone who made it this far, and good luck to everyone who made it to round 2.

jazzyjeoff

Congratulations to all who made it! I look forward to seeing your work posted!

zwabbit

Feedback for round 2 people who didn't make the cut are out, though of course the email filter decides it's spam so I had to go dig it out...

The good news from my perspective is that all of the critiques were centered around things I myself knew were likely to be problematic, and I suspect were also reasons why my second entry didn't get past round 1. Getting confirmation that the overall premise and prose were fine indicates that the foundation was good and is something I can work with for the future. I will have to think a little bit about how to rectify the noted issues, the challenge for me at least is to make sure there's sufficient action and development without also forcibly rushing the resolution as well. The catch I have is that, since I hewed towards a more realistic bent, often times the best solution to a problem is a direct solution (kill 'em all), and direct solutions tend to be quick solutions (no such thing as overkill). So, will need to get creative. Aside from just doubling the length of my next submission if JNC runs the contest again.

I did get a chuckle out of the "running around...committing copyright infringement" description of my main character.

Angelus

@zwabbit, are you considering publishing your stuff on another platform? From your short description some time ago, By Honor Bound sounded like something I'd really enjoy.

zwabbit

@Angelus Not in its current form. I need to very substantially overhaul several things to strike a better balance between plot progression and narrative depth. The main challenge I have here is with the initial premise, at the start it's more a police investigation than a "save the world" crisis, and such investigations take time if you want to be actually thorough. That means it might be genuinely difficult to set a faster pace without compromising narrative integrity/cohesion. I might be kind of in a Bookworm Part 1 Volume 1 slow pacing sort of situation, and to pull that off in an acceptable manner is going to require a lot of creativity on my part.

Rahul Balaggan

Some additional details on contest two electric boogaloo:

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mariechan_hime

@Rahul-Balaggan I would be very interested in submitting a longer series someday. Hopefully you will continue holding such contests from time to time in the future.

jazzyjeoff

@Rahul-Balaggan
Woo! Hoo! My original submission has found new steam lately. I barely made the minimum word cutoff the first time, but I am at over 70K now. I might have to trim things to make it fit! Thanks so much for part deux announcement!

zwabbit

Feedback from last time: Your story needs to be longer.
Me: Okay.
Rules this time for ongoing series: Word limit dropped to 60K.
Me: Uhhhhhhhhh........

Angelus

@zwabbit, that 60k limit got me too. I might have considered rejigging my previous submission taking into account the feedback I got, but I'd have to cut 10k words to fit it in now because it's definitely a part 1 of a longer series.

I really think 60k is too low. Take Bookworm, for example - that's a long series of novels with volume word counts in the 80k+ range.

admin

@Angelus the point is that the submission isn't a "volume 1", it's max the first 60K of the webnovel.

So it doesn't matter whether it has a conclusion or anything. If nothing interesting enough to hook us happens in that first 60K then that's a different problem.

Angelus

@admin OK, I think I get it now.

zwabbit

That makes much more sense. I think a lot of us implicitly carried over the "must be complete work" bit from the first category.

Angelus

Well, I've had a go at updating my previous submission according to the feedback, but given up. It's set in an alternate 19th century London and I just can't make the characters speak in anything else other than wordy Dickensian English no matter how hard I try!

I'd try to complete my isekai story "But the Meek Shall Inherit the Earth - I Was Reincarnated Two Hundred Million Years in the Future by a Crafty Goddess and Now the Whole World’s Turned to Sh*t" but there's no way I'll get it done in time.