Volume 10 - Part 11: [37%] darkness: it Leonard Testarossa and Chidori Kaname. ► Remove it. Or should it be it was?

Volume 3 - Part 7 [65%] He must have changed with that clash of light. >> should be flash

Volume 6 - Part 2: [49%] When I complained about this, Countless Estelle had ► It should be Countess. [50%] I must say, taking such a step making their behavior ► It should be makes? [82%] of enjoyment you desire from your favourite books.” ► It should be favorite (US spelling).

Volume 4 - Part 6: [3%] full bloom. He’d revelled in his bountiful ► It should be reveled (US spelling). [7%] knew about royalty and thier ilk pointed ► It should be their. [72%] let me think.... A-Are we assuming that ► It should be 3 periods.

Yeah this one seems my flavor. Snarky protag. I'm down. Edit: I read the 2 manga chapters that are available <on that one website> and gotta say... this is pretty great.

@db0ssman I guess I'll take that one off my "Buy" list.

@Terabyte Thanks for pointing all these out! They've been updated. The forum link should also be working now.

well i hope for that https://bookwalker.jp/de94dfbcfe-565b-46ec-887b-c1d892c1d675/ or that one https://bookwalker.jp/de95feb1bf-be9d-4879-913d-79e2014892d3/

@Rawon said in My Friend's Little Sister Has It In for Me! - Corrections Topic: For the second one, I don't actually know the original Japanese (I could look it up, but there's a reason I'm the editor and not the TL), but it's sometimes used in English, too. We'll have to think about keeping it as-is, or replacing it to make it easier to read. Gotta balance "expanding vocabulary" with "keeping it accessible" after all. For reference, I've heard the term but would have assumed it would be written as schtum (although when I saw it written as stumm I immediately read it as the same word without a second thought). I am from England and it's not a word I've ever really used, it's just one I've read and heard a few times over the years and have always immediately understood from the context.

Volume 4 - Part 1: [94%] hidden in Gerard’s shadow from the neck down.. ► Duplicate period.

Volume 3 - Part 4: [45%] a similar ring, although her’s was a different color. ► It should be hers.

@LIbri-Liberorum I'm not sure how much detail I should go into, as it concerns unreleased material, but I can assure you that Chain and Wedge aren't moons. It's a peculiarly placed bit of worldbuilding that likely won't be followed up on until next volume at the earliest.

2nd ep was very interesting, especially those Po po po sounds in the background if you listen to it closely during the Hasshaku-sama scene. Also, they made Abarato hot, erm, quite decent here (vs the manga). As for the OP and ED songs, the translated lyrics do fit the inner struggles of the main characters, I know Funimation doesn't have those translated but if you get the chance to watch the Ani-One subbed version, you'll see what I mean. Speaking of which, there's a mistranslation Funi did in one of the scenes, you'll know what it is, especially if you started with the novels. And also, next episode is an anime original, so that's something I'm looking forward to

Volume 11 - Part 1: [14%] to Fahn, I said,” Please call the three girls in.” ► The dialogue's starting double quote is wrongly a closing one. Also, move the space before the quote. [56%] bothered to come all the way out the front lines, ► It should be to the ? [57%] Neither Pajam nor Veight was scared of Zagar. ► It should be were.

Volume 5 - Part 6: [51%] a stray snowball—came spiralling toward me. ► It should be spiraling (US spelling).

Volume 4 - Part 5: [69%] from a nearby house.The soldiers raised ► Missing space.

Volume 5 part 1 [about 18%] His name was Herschelik Gracis, the Seventh Prince of the Gracis Kingdom. - Herscherik

Volume 4 - Part 2 [37 %] We left the store, half forced to by Tsubaki. --> half forced by Tsubaki

@myskaros @hiroto I figured that was the case when the WN gets taken down with the release of the LN but had no idea what the case would be when both are still active, which seems to be a somewhat common situation. Thanks for clarifying. So yeah, while a US Licensor may not have any rights specific to the WN it would be well within the Japanese rights holder to request that they pursue fan translations of them. Which is still not to say that's happened here, I'm only theorizing from sightly outdated knowledge of how it has worked for anime and manga in the past.

Volume 2 - Part 4: [52%] that she had gotten stuck up there, he realized. ► Remove italic format from he. [78%] “...That’s... true....” ► It should be 3 periods.