Volume 2 - Part 4:

[6%] from head to toe with mud.. Alicia quaked with anger; ► Duplicate period. [9%] after all that, you haven’t improved not one little bit! ► Remove not. (Or maybe add a comma?) [34%] and every part of her was like a piece of beautiful ► It should be is? [61%] Oh. That’s right, I‘d forgotten all about that. ► It should be I’d (different ’ ). [75%] That much is obvious.You’re different from everyone ► Missing space. [87%] “ So you really were able to use even water magic, ► Remove extra space. [88%] monster. “I-it’s alive! My dear Cerberooo! Th-Thank ► It should be It’s (Capitalized).

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“Marriage” is the state and the institution, not an event. The ceremony is called a “wedding.”

Volume 13 - Part 10:

[21%] “Indeed.,” Ai Fa replied with a firm nod as I laid ► Duplicate punctuation. [35%] into her mouth alongside the meat and chatchi.” ► No dialogue here. Remove the closing double quote.

Vol 7 part 4

“Marielle, I’ve found you!” ► Since the speaker is Alain, would he really call his boss' wife with just her name instead of Madame Marielle or something like that?

the title of the Afterword section is missing the usual title formatting.

i really loved this anime and wish the light novel would get picked up, its just sad to see something like this not get the attention it deserves. it is by far the best harem anime ive ever seen, it doesnt even feel like harem, but just a group of friends where one of them brings along her brother. every feels like real people rather than just some trope for the checklist.

Shame I hear volume 5 is a premature end. The art in this is great and I liked his last series...

Volume 7 to be released in July

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GKIDS acquired the rights to release the movie in North America:
https://gkids.com/films/the-deer-king/

The trailer:
https://twitter.com/GKIDSfilms/status/1405555846822739974?s=19

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@terabyte Thanks!

Cover illustration for volume 1

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Volume 2 - Part 2:

[5 %] ...I felt I sort of kinship when I met you... ► It should be a. [30 %] Lyse was relieved to hear her that brother was alive and well. ► It should be that her.

Volume 5 - Part 12:

[Generic] I've noticed some of Demon Lord Zel dialogues not having the first and last character capitalized like all others. Here's a list of them: [31%] “(My bodY Is WarninG Me ThaT ThE RedheaD Is ThE ► BodY [32%] “(HeH heH heH. WomaN, WhaT HavE YoU DonE To ► HeH HeH [37%] “(Hng?!)” ► HnG [40%] “(A HigH-tiereD BindinG SpelL. GriM ReapeR, JusT ► HigH-TiereD or High-tiereD [50%] MagiC Rushing Up BehinD Me. No, IT’s RotatinG ► RushinG / It’s (Or It’S?) [54%] I Do Not Feel ThE PaiN, ThE RapiD DraininG Of My ► NoT FeeL [8%] a feat achievable by only true gluttons—those ► Maybe only by (switch around)? [16%] Sonic Boots was apparently cancelling out the ► It should be canceling (US spelling). [36%] be invisible and could now be be seen with the ► Duplicate be. [48%] opposite direction, effectively cancelling it out. ► It should be canceling (US spelling).

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[19%] they had brushed him off with vagaries -> since the original word was のらりくらり I assume vague replies or similar was what was meant, not "an unexpected and inexplicable change in a situation or in someone's behavior"
[37%] she’ll assumably return home -> assuredly or presumably

Volume 2 - Part 2:

[0%] Chapter II: Inglis, Age 15: Chiral Knights’ Academy (2) ► Chapter 1's title had a different format: Age 15—The Chiral Knights’ Academy (1) (dash instead of colon + missing The).

@terabyte I've changed all three uses of the spell name to "Restriction Marsh." And thanks for catching the missed period, lol.