Looks like the last couple of changes didn't make it to the ebook. I still Dorino's name when I was reading it.

Arc 2 V1 P6

~70%

There is an old Japanese poem about staves that goes something like this: “If thrust, it is a spear. If swept, it is a naginata. When held, it is a sword. The stave is infallible in a myriad of ways. It teaches and disciplines without injury. Lessons are found beyond the stave.”
...
As soon as Zeke charged into the horde of orcs, he swung his stave. If an orc survived his onslaught, the attack left it too weak to keep fighting or pose a real threat. Zeke thrust his spear, stabbing again and again, as he moved through their ranks like a god of war.

I don't believe Zeke has a spear as well as a stave; he only has a stave, which can be used in a variety of styles. Perhaps that should be:

Zeke thrust his stave like spear, stabbing again and again, as he moved through their ranks like a god of war.

v1p7 ~24%

[…] yet if the temperature seemed to have suddenly shot up.

Probably without the if, or it seems as if the temperature.

V6 P7 Images seem incorrect. Image at 40% seems to be the one meant for 80% as it lines up with the situation at that point. The one at 80% seems to be meant for the next part.

Seems the image meant for 40% was skipped by mistake unless the images got out of sync earlier.

I forgot to note the percent through the chapter, but in today's release, there's an instance where one of Wayne's party members says quote-on-quote. That's not correct. It's quote unquote. The former is a common mistake (an "eggcorn" I want to say it's called?) but it's still definitely a mistake.

Vol 1 Pt 1 68% “my eyes caught on the crimson broach brooch”

Same error at 93%… and 98%. The jewelry is brooch , a broach is used to make holes .

V1 Pt2 , 93%

“Her interest peeked piqued,”

V5P9:

22%: "I mean, we couldn’t get anyone with phony strength" -> ???

V9P1.3

hoped against hope that Sheryl that running away - seems to be missing some words, maybe "that Sheryl could be convinced that running away"

none of them were foolish enough to declare openly that they were working with the gang, but their intentions had been obvious when they'd stopped coming all of a sudden - Again missing words, is the first part supposed to be "no longer working," considering the second part?

V14 P6 (6% - 8th line up from bottom of page)

All the while, Light move not an inch from his spot,...

Wrong tense. Correct to "moved not",

e.g. All the while, Light moved not an inch from his spot,...
-or-
All the while, Light didn't move an inch from his spot,...

V8, P5, around 22%:

Neither! In all likelihood, our enemy is Marquess Dozraan Dozran!

Duplicated letter.

V4 P9 (0% - last sentence at bottom of page)

Then my mother lied down next to me,...
The correct word should be "laid", the past tense of lay.

e.g: Then my mother laid down next to me,...

FYI: Lied is the past tense of lie (an untruth).

V11, P5, around 56%:

Training mechs had limited fuel capacity—moving so rigorously would consume the fuel in an instant.

I'm 90% sure it should be "vigorously".

10.12:

I think if I ever divide and have ancestors of my own

Um, "ancestors"? Offspring are descendants.

v5p8 ~87%

[…] closely with the Treasure Guild to produce the Posiedon, and Milld […[

Should be Poseidon.

V11 final - would avail should be wouldn’t, out duties should be out their duties

V2P2
~44%

“If any of the facilities in this town are worse than that our capital’s, I’ll be sure to stick it to you!” he’d said.

Missing word? than that our capital’s->than that of our capital’s (or extra word ->`than our capital's)

V1p7 ~42%

“The pair's lips parted, andInami's hands followed the outline of Aoi's body, caressing him all over.”

Missing space

V6P5 90%:

hit the breaks

breaks -> brakes

v4p4:

12% - .Wayne -> Period probably shouldn’t be there. As a bonus, is there a good way to cut back on the commas in the rest of the sentence? Maybe break it into two sentences? It feels like it runs on a bit too much. :)