[21%] “Indeed.,” Ai Fa replied with a firm nod as I laid ► Duplicate punctuation.
[35%] into her mouth alongside the meat and chatchi.” ► No dialogue here. Remove the closing double quote.
I admit it's pretty silly and it's just similar to "Farming Life in Another World/Isekai Nonbiri Nouka" as things just work out and they keep getting new people, but I enjoyed this more cuz the 2 main character have this nice partner/trust relationship.
Also, I think the people who like cooking with weird monster stuff like "Delicious in Dungeon/Dungeon Meshi" would love this one.
