I hope this improves somewhat because i thought i started reading some nice fluff with airhead mc, but suddenly the MC is incredibly stupid and acts super rashly ignores the voices of reason from simeon someone who actually works defending people, and puts herself at risk, to not even talk about needing to add a new character that is interested on the MC now, like why, do authors get an orgasm every time they ruin their stories by trying to do a love triangle? Because otherwise i dont get it
Also this is more of a comment than a correction, but (part 4 page 9) with the font that's used it really really looks like the MC says that you need to fuck the flashlight to use it. It may be worth playing with the spacing a little bit to separate the L and I.
And here I wonder why no one admonishs him for his cause of going to war. Not like anyone could die only because he want goats. Although I assume his father and retainer are happy with helping the others.