Koshiro is a riot!

This feels like a different break from JN usual fair. It kind of reminds me of a Harlequin manga a bit. Not enough going on in the first chapter to form a opinion over. I wonder if other series like Palace Meidi are on the list of possibilities.

I just hope we don't a lot of white knighting in comments over age gaps by people who ignore it is a different culture and time period and not their own.

Ah, wonderfully silly! I'll go get the popcorn.

Getting mom-zoned by your crush. Ignorance fortunately is bliss.

chapter 1 page 18 panel 1 - "is apparently they're some god" - sentence has redundant terms

Chapter 1, page 41:
“WE DON'T KNOW WHEN A PROPER TREATMENT MIGHT BE DEVELOPED. UNTIL THEN...” - the “A” seems to be bolded for no obvious reason.

Art is good but there’s no unique hook yet, however the whole “eyes” thing is yet to be shown so we’ll see.

The Zashiki-Warashi would like to play.

...In an abandoned house that's clearly seen better days. It sounds more like the start of a horror film than this series normally goes for...

@Adam-Jankowski

On pages 2-3 of chapter 24, I believe some content was omitted from the inner two margins. The two pages, when viewed together, should form a partial double spread, with the top and bottom panels seamlessly blending together:

https://i.imgur.com/FhMliIJ.jpeg

Instead, there's a discontinuity between the top and bottom panels of the two pages.

Chapter 5, Page 4, last panel

Back an army of seven million attacked Rohzenheim.

Should this be Back then,? Feels off as a sentence. Back when and then continued into the next panel? Just An army of... as a statement?

The head-dwelling mouse(?) appears to have shed some details. Most of the details, actually. Just a blob with glasses, now

So much whispering and muttering seem to occur around Aoi. Maybe it’s an area-effect that she continually, unconsciously produces.

One book ends, but the next is already on the way…

I had a lot of fun working on this. The letterer had a lot of fun matching typefaces to each of the multiple (more upcoming) visual style homages. Please blame me for any puns you don't like. There's no missing page! The blank page in the pre-pub is where the opening volume and TOC spread go in the full-volume version.

Goliath:
I set up the perfect bait.

I don't think that the word bait means what you think it means in this context, lol. The only thing you've managed to set up here is your complete downfall, if not death.

Did Pochi hit her head or somethin'?.What's This fixation about shoulders?