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Once again we seem to be out of order: Carmine hears about Haculea's folly on page 28, then gets it explained to him on page 14. How is it that JNC is so very prone to publishing manga pages out of order?
The family tree (bottom of page 16 in the ordering I am currently seeing) does not agree with the text. It shows Haculea as mother of Cardinal. This should be the emperor's unnamed sister.
This one isn't a problem JNC can fix: In the map showing the minister of Ceremony returning to his duchy, the borders show Teyanave as a separate country, but it has not yet declared independence.
And finally, my regular criticism of architecture, this time the spy boss's compound. It is pretty good. The main issue is that there is no gate in the gateway. Given the effort put into the wall around the compound and the sensitivity of what goes on there, it makes no sense to have such an enormously wide unblocked gateway. Also, the gateway has a horizontal beam all the way across it. This is a huge distance (perhaps 10-15 meters?) and they don't have steel I beams in this world. Nor is this beam serving any purpose.
The courtyard is small and deep --- it will get very little sunlight. However, as it is a paved training ground rather than a garden, this is fine.
I feel there should be many more chimneys.