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  Sorcerous Stabber Orphen Vol. 5 Discussion!
  orphen • • myskaros

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  Did an unedited script got in a final ebook by any chance? Some parts of it were nigh unreadable. I would have probably enjoyed this volume a lot more if I wasn't forced to reread paragraphs for a few times in order to guess (not understand, guess) wtf was happening there.
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  By the Grace of the Gods Vol. 2 Discussion!
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  @jpwong oh I forgot we had an illustration already, right, that makes a lot of sense. I mean, in all likelihood it would've been her anyways since she's definitely the closest of the bunch to Ryoma
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  Altina the Sword Princess Vol. 3 Discussion!
  altina • • myskaros

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  @steelblaidd Smacking him up the side of his head with the flat of her sword might work. That is a really big sword.
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  Demon Lord, Retry! Vol. 3 Discussion
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  @terabyte Totally agree. The only question is how many parts old Milligan is going to get carved into.
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  Potion Loli Vol. 4 Discussion!
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  @dry-eyes No, that's what Terabyte means. Dialogue from Kaoru continues, so previous paragraphs shouldn't end with a closing quote to signify that. If you closed the quote you would expect the speaker to change, and this isn't the case.
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  Otherside Picnic Vol. 3 Discussion!
  othersidepicnic • • myskaros

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  @harunachiep said in Otherside Picnic Vol. 3 Discussion!: 28% - “Did I have that scary a look on my face?” (maybe remove the 'a') This one is fine. Removing the "a" changes the context completely. "Did I have that scary (of) a look on my face?" - Was the expression on my face scary? "Did I have that scary look on my face?" - There is a previously mentioned "scary look" that I sometimes get, did that happen again?
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  Teogonia Volume 1 Discussion
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  That was definitely some super heavy plot armor. The new waifu (He's got three, so it's officially a harem.) seems to also be a guardian bearer, or did I read that wrong? Volume 2 is going to be even bloodier, I suspect.
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  Banner of the Stars Vol. 2 Discussion
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  I didn't like Maydeen at first, but I came to respect him when he chose the female prisoners' safety over his own. What a way for him to go. I liked this paragraph: "Jint gazed at the leader of the Central Zone with pity in his eyes. While Anguson was even worse, Dohkfoo was clearly lacking in knowledge about the Abh. To think he would choose issuing threats to the Empire over the more sensible option: dying here and now." Part 5 29% "But half of every Abh doesn't have a mother..." --"half of the Abhs don't" 91% Inadvertently, a self-assured smile crept on Jint's face, --I feel like "onto" or "over" would sound better here
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  Ascendance of a Bookworm Vol. 1 Discussion!
  bookworm • • Aimee Zink

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  I really hope when and if J-Novel starts having to do additional print runs, that Sam will indicate in the copyright page which print it is, like how Viz Media does with manga.
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  Seirei Gensouki Vol. 8 Discussion
  seirei gensouki • • myskaros

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  @shiny I'm glad you liked it as much as I did! ^^
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  Sexiled Vol. 2 Discussion!
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  @rahul-balaggan That sounds tasty.
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  Realist Hero Vol. 9
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  @jindo90 https://forums.j-novel.club/topic/2690/delays-in-continuing-series
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  Master of Ragnarok Vol. 10 Discussion
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  I finally got around to reading this volume before it'll expire, and wow, I think it was my favorite volume to date. Looking forward to when the series starts up again.
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  Grimgar Volume 13 Discussion
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  There's a problem with the first color illustration, the picture is "double" around Haruhiro's hand and the back of Shihoru's head.
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  Bookworm Part 1 Vol. 3 Discussion!
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  Picked up a print copy at a local independent bookstore in my town which I ordered online. Dropped by first thing in the morning so nobody was in the store so had a time to chat with the store owner. This is the store I used to go for midnight sale of Harry Potter, where hundreds of people lined up in the parking lot to buy the latest edition as early as possible. He looked at the book and said it looks interesting so I gave him my elevator pitch on the Bookworm. It was pretty fun to talk about this book to the bookstore owner, who, obviously loves book. He said he would check it out with his friend who is more versed in the genre, and stock it up if it seems promising.
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  By the Grace of the Gods Vol. 1 Discussion!
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  It was an easy read and at the end it felt lacking. I had hoped it would finish the public service sup plot this volume but it seems like it will be dragged into the next one. If the second book is just as easy of a read I'll continue but this is definitely not one of my favorites.
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  The Underdog of the Eight Greater Tribes - Volume 1 Discussion!
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  Volume 1 (Premium Edition): 3 Bonus Short Stories The First Girls’ Night Out for the Fox, Spirit and Bat A Spirit’s Necessities Your Big Sis Wants You to Eat Meat
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  For My Daughter Vol. 9
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  @tgquan67 By B, I pasted the wrong chapter title here, I usually put the story titles on my notes app then post them and copied the wrong title, my initial post has been updated.
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  Campfire Cooking (aka Tondemo Skill) Vol. 1 Discussion!
  campfire • • Aimee Zink

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  @myskaros thanks!
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  Sorcerous Stabber Orphen Vol. 6 Discussion
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  At 8% of Part 7/Chapter 3, you're still alternating between Tiffes and Majic in the narration and dialogue with Claiomh. Majic currently isn't with Claiomh in this Part and has been accompanying Orphen and Leticia throughout the third chapter. At 85% of Part 7, the line "Krylancelo has no self-control these days, huh.." should be italicized since it's written as Leticia's thoughts. In Part 5 at 71%, There's a line in Forte's dialogue that doesn't make sense. He states to Orphen that "Yes. I'm Wall Kahlen of the Wall Kahlen classes now, I'm sure you haven't forgotten that." I don't know if this was meant as sarcasm on his part or if this is a botched line. Shouldn't it be: "Yes. It's Wall Kahlen of the Wall Kahlen classes now."?