New reports.
Vol.3 Chapter 4:
p2 2nd panel - Surely the MOM could've been transformed better onto the phone screen. The perspective does not align at all. p29 4th panel - "continue" is split between two lines and needs a connective dash. p35 - I think I get the tone you're going for with "Little Maria", but I don't think it translates great. I don't know what would be a good solution though.Chapter 5:
p6 3rd panel - Is there a reason why he says "This is a world where words like 'ability' and 'talent' mean everything." as opposed to "This is a world where ability and talent mean everything."? The former sounds less natural to me, to a point where I wonder if there's a specific reason why it's specifically that way. p22 2nd panel 2nd bubble - Would a middle aged mom from the countryside call nerds "nerds"? In my mind it wouldn't be in their vernacular. Wouldn't "emotionally stunted adults" fit the same bill and be a little more adequate? p26 4th panel 3rd bubble - Shouldn't it be "Serizawa's"? p34 2nd panel - Missing word "But being fulfilling is no substitute for adequate pay." p35 1st panel 1st bubble - Missing period.