@terrence said in Expiring Volumes!:
I'm already deceased (I wasted too much time playing Rocket League this month). T_T
Lol. I just realized that I'm actually mostly caught up with what I can. Just need Kokoro Connect, Amagi, and Orphen.
This part was far too short. I'm looking forward to the actual battle next time 😃
Volume 3 - Part 4:
[25%] "the safety of the fake reef offered," ► Remove of.
[73%] "Each and every one had been specialty-made." ► Given the context, I think it should be specially-made (double L)?
I didn't notice anything about the assassin's name until the end (Stark Neykid --> stark naked), but now I'm wondering if it's supposed to be an in-universe joke, or just a small joke for readers?
He did not get respect, but I don't remember any characters remarking on his name, so I was assuming it's just a small joke from the author for any readers who notice.
0%: Volkan lead the charge (led)
Looking forward to seeing these Dark Elves. But let's not forget Sylvie and the long, thick sausage 😂
Volume 7 - Part 1:
[32%] "to the former Demon Lord’s domain took even" ► It should be Domain (Capitalized) for consistency.
Volume 7 - Part 2:
[0%] "for when the day time came and a hero capable" ► Remove either day or time.
[8%] "Rem gasped as Sylvie’s words." ► It should be at.
[17%] “In short... It says she found a way to remove the remnants of Krebskulm from my body.” ► This dialogue is a (99%) duplicate of the one in the previous paragraph.
[30%] But you’re saying going alone would be dangerous?” ► Duplicate dialogue. (This one is also missing the starting double quote, too.)
[53%] "how to get to the Kingdom of Greenwood Kingdom," ► There's an additional Kingdom here.
[55%] "going to the former Demon Lord’s domain was easier" ► It should be Domain (Capitalized) for consistency.
[71%] "Preferably ones that don’t shake,” Rem asked" ► Missing period.
Hahaha, way to go Ingrid! And we also got to see Steinþórr youth a little. I'm looking forward to the next part.
As for Rífa, I'm sure something is gonna happen to her in the bar next interlude.
Volume 5 - Part 7:
[41%] "Despite their attempts to persuade her, but Rífa stubbornly refused" ► Remove but.
[61%] "He started down resentfully at his right hand," ► It should be stared.
[87%] "Röskva who singlehandedly controlled domestic affairs" ► It should be single-handedly (with a dash). Just nitpicking though.
@SomeOldGuy is right in this case. It's a fairly subtle distinction, but "I'm half elf" is a matter of blood, where "half" is an adjective describing one of two equal parts (half elf, half human). "Half-elf" is a noun referring to someone who has one elven parent. Hence, for Myusel, "I'm half elf" and "I'm a half-elf" are both true statements.
@charles-georges The demerit probably aren't anything big, just Merry's way to say "I'm worried when you're in danger, please at least don't put yourself in those situations".
The name of the bank is Yorozu deposit, insolent one ^^
It's not limited to human territory as they're was a branch near the wonderhole, but it may be linked to the volonteer soldier corps, explaining why there may be none in Vele.
I would bet on them keeping most of the money, as it seem like they're going back to the wild quite soon, what was strange tho is how they can paid while having mostly platinium coin which are probably too much for most merchants.
I think we can expect them to be out of Vele in 2 parts may be after buying some gears as it would be a shame to do it while in a big marchant city.
By the way, may be don't read the blurb for this vol right now, it contain some spoils, nothing big or too obvious tho.
"This must be destiny! I thought Surely the reason" - italics after 'thought'?
"I get another chance, I thought, I should try to observe them more closely!" - if I get?
"you can stash your things in those locker there" - those lockers?
"sounding like the general of an army ." - space
"pitied him his misfortune" - remove him
@terabyte said in Amagi Brilliant Park Volume 3 Discussion!:
[71%] "dead anyway.(`;ω;’)ﾌﾞｸッ》 Ahhh." ► Are those Japanese characters supposed to be there? Or was the emoticon right before supposed to replace them?
That's the whole emoticon. Whether you want to TL it or not is a different question. (you probably should because ﾌﾞﾜｯ has lexical meaning there, not graphical)
So we've got Atlantis in the mix now. And chapter 1's title seems to suggest some time traveling too this time around.
Volume 12 - Part 1:
[9%] "but properly maintained blade representative of her status" ► It should be a properly?
[14%] "the Golden Demon was using it as its lair" ► Missing period.
[21%] "the iron blade of the katana glance right off." ► It should be glanced.
[24%] "She swore absolutely loyalty to her master" ► It should be absolute.
[36%] "Nyanyan repeated those some fearful words" ► Remove some. (Or maybe replace it with same?)
[38%] "her handcuffed arms hang loosely dangle loosely in front of her" ► Duplicate loosely.
[38%] "made it hard to walk on an flat surface," ► It should be a flat.
[44%] "but it was just all seemed so utterly unreal." ► Remove was.
[45%] "Just where could they have run gone?" ► Remove run.
[62%] "She didn’t have a mirror to look see it for herself," ► Remove look.
[65%] "the crown on, Sherlyn went to remove it." ► It should be Shalen.
[71%] “Even though its still hot...” ► It should be it’s.
[82%] “Then let’s have one Rekka’s house after school today,” ► It should be at Rekka’s.
[99%] “She’d got a friend names Shalen Doteyes." ► It should be She’s.
Any Moon+Reader users here?
Getting used to my android device and reading this on Moon+Reader and came across something odd.
At about 25% mark, right after “And Shinichi-kun said he wants to see you in that dress, didn’t he? Goth-Loli Myusel!” and before “Ah...” on the next page, there's '[1/3]' in blue lettering. That doesn't show up in either my Kobo reader or calibre on my desktop. The page is blank after the first line, almost like expecting an image, and the parenthesis isn't a link either despite the differing color.
Edit; Some bug in M+H perhaps as it seems to repeat the first chapter before starting the second chapter...