How long will Beast Head Vol 2 be available. Last month I was addicted to a video game and barely did any reading other the Werewolf novel. Nevermind the answer is just above. Didn't notice the title since I call it beast head in my mind
@galactuskahn24 said in Gear Drive Vol. 1 Discussion!:
Sorry for possibly being "insensitive".
Nah, it's a legitimate question. You hire someone to do a job, they can't do that job, so it stands to reason that you're faced with either replacing that person, or putting off that job. I was released from a contract because I came down with the flu and couldn't fly down to work; in this case, the illustrator doubles as part of the identity of the series, so I think it makes sense to hold out on him since it's only on volume 2. Dunno when the breaking point is, though.
P1, 48%: this ties in with but extends one of Terabyte's comments
"Everyone there was treating Kaoru just about the same as the usually did. They only things they asked from her were to help cook and clean." - basically two words swapped around.
P2, 36%: 'At this rate, Balmore would steal away their "hold land" title' - Holy Land.
The picture are cool, the one in vol 11 and 12 look like they were loosing in quality so it's cool to see that vol13 doing better here.
The short stories are also better than the one in vol12 or 11 but still i would like some new ss in Grimgar. For exemple one on Kejiman usual trip, something on Yume training or Unjo daily life in Durunggar.
@novurdim Yeah i feel the same way, the end of vol 2 also as some part where it's kind of annoying.
Someone has tell me that later on she become aware of who love her, i just hope it happend soon enough.
The theory behind Haruto's & CO reincarnation is not explained, as far as I can tell.
Haruto merged with Rio in year 991 of the Holy Era. His date of death on Earth is not mentioned, only the time of traffic accident (3:23 pm or 15:23). He died at the age of 20, 4 years after Miharu disappeared.
Miharu appeared in year of 1000 of the Holy Era, 9 years after Haruto merged with Rio.
Note that he parted ways with Miharu when he was 7 years old. He merged with Rio when Rio was 7 years old. At the year 1000 of the Holy Era, Rio is 16 years old, exactly same age as Miharu when she disappeared.
Anyhow, the theory is A) Author trying to justify having a mature protagonist or B) The gods realised they fucked it up and Haruto's existence is their way of trying to correct their mistake.
She better, the whole harem will never progress while he is still pinning over someone in another world.
I think it would add a very interesting element to the story as well, how would she adapt to calling him Father or Brother if she does at all? How would the Wolf clan react to some random girl popping up in a position of authority?
All could be interesting plot points, but at the moment Mitsuki isn’t a terribly important character to the plot beyond being a reason for Yuuto to return home.
Found a typo in Volume 1, Chapter 3. In the part about "pulling a maya":
Oh, and “pulling a Maya” just menat you would put on a performance that rivaled the main girl from this famous shoujo manga
Meant is misspelled as menat.
As I mentioned earlier there's 2 ova's this sorta points to the second one, but until something comes up directly related to it wondering it was based on compilation of bits here and there, will not say what it was focused on till I see how this pans out.
3% making scarping sounds... sure its not scraping
6% in a charming manner manner. duplicate manner
10% Unfortunately,a single drop of water... missing space after coma
...I haven't directly raise my hand... should be raised (or I have yet to directly raise...)
Bifrons turned as they said that around. given context as this progresses, just drop around (could move to follow after turned, but not sure that be right. edit error?)
16% I can't let this continue! Zagan... this spot is right but there seems to be a kerning issue with the space bewteen the italic ! and none italic Z (hard to see with font I have in use here, I only use the smaller font size in the reader) ps after seeing an italic ? its kerning issue between the e and ! the ? appears closer to the last letter of word. Oh well
20% as Zagan who have... swap who with would
23% far to chatty to trust with her secret. given context trust her with a secret.
36% ...words that made "" want to initiate... him
...but Zagan that didn't deter Zagan's ministrations. um drop the first Zagan
byt her ears... but
40% that fact," um are the," reversed? it occurs again farther down
46% Does they have no... affected speech? or should that be Do they...
50% plus, that that country... duplicate that
There was a countless "" countries... number of? or There were countless.....
53% ..made it so "a the" adherents... hmm drop the a
The three knights straightened out with a snap.. may not be wrong, but should out be up?
60% It was a little to soon to jump to conclusions, but there was worth that invalidated the theory. This sentence seems contradictory, and missing something.
66% Ralph "look" at the forest..... looked
73% As Zagan once more pet his dauther's head.... not sure about this whole sentence can't say its wrong but maybe instead of, in an usual turn, which follows try, when in an unusual turn.. ah thats it, unusual instead usual should address it.
80% ...showed how she preciously she treated it... drop one of the two "she" and depending a coma after "it"
90% .. he's quite a rank ranking monster.... swap rank with high
...cover his face as "her" were wacthing it... "he" ?
Looks like Donda was just messing with them and wasn't expecting those conditions to be accepted.
Volume 2 - Part 3:
[0%] "than the path ahead.. Naturally, there" ► Duplicate period.
[4%] "involved with the Ruu house now that" ► It should be Ruu clan?
[5%] "facing such abuse.There’s no need" ► Add a space after the period.
[46%] "so I think it likely went well. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.
I guess it was Claiomh that hit Salua?
Volume 4 - Part 7:
[27%] "the support structured in the basement" ► Given the context, it should be structures?
[31%] “Watch my ear, you jackass!” ► Given the context, it should be rear?
[61%] "his head in acknowledgement as he squatted" ► It should be acknowledgment?
@terabyte said in Little Apocalypse Vol. 13 Discussion!:
Looks like this volume is going to be another pause from the usual style of solving all stories together at the end. There's no separate prologues for each heroine.
That aside, this series is complete with 16 volumes. We're nearing the end since we're in the last quarter.
That's good to know. I was getting burned out after finishing 11, with Rekka frozen in place as "densest MC of all time" for so many volumes. Knowing it ends makes me want to give 12-16 a chance.