So far I'm enjoying the series as being a bit different from the rest.
I have never thought of Economic of Prophecy as particularly wordy, but that might be because I alternative between light novels and regular Western full length novels.
14%: "Neither dogs nor beastmen, kobolds were instead bonafide members of the fairy species." > As is, instead needs to be set apart by commas. Consider rewording by moving it to the end of the sentence.
16%: "to visit, and would purposely" > no comma
16%: "And, in fact, one person had in fact" > "in fact" used twice in one sentence
16%: "of a post, and had gone" > no comma
19%: "seven feet tall, and was so" > no comma
23%: "across the gate, and saw that" > no comma
50%: "coincidence, or when" > no comma
59%: "wound on its leg, and the fact" > no comma
73%: "the silence, and turned around" > no comma
76%: "to himself, and reached" > no comma
80%: "to stop, and tried to follow" > no comma
@Zing The 1st and 2nd part had some pictures in it, however I don't think there were any in the 3rd and 4th parts.
Just finished reading this one, Liked the developments so far definitely a light read considering all the silly situations/misunderstandings Mia develops through all her actions so far. Looking forwards to more parts to come.
Finished reading V1.
And harem senses are tingling of course by the end of this. Wonder if we'll get a full harem, or it's going to be Sven as the sole winner.
It was kind of funny when they started explaining really mundane things halfway through the story (like, the scientific cause of car sickness).
Ditto on being hooked! I've been looking for a good story that covers the "NPC"-perspective in a game. Some stories touch on it (Infinite Dendrogram and Log Horizon come to mind), but they don't base a significant amount of the story around it. The only one I can think of is a western novel, Mogworld.
Really looking forward to the next part!
Wrong genre, but all I could think of was: "What are you doing with a knife?" "What do you mean? You run faster with a knife. Everyone runs faster with a knife"
@raitoiro It really depends on how is done, and how much the High Bishop and the temple want to spread the temple's influence among commoners.
As described so far in the novel, the temple is only important to commoners at two times in their lives; Baptism and Marriage. I'm guessing there is a third, reaching adulthood, but that hasn't happened for any of our intrepid explorers of the Myneverse.
Myne has been studying the bible, and probably has at least as good an understanding of it as the Bishop, although she may not interpret it in the same way he does. The High Priest will be seeing it soon enough for review, because he's going to have to approve it.
@terabyte You and me both. I really loved the web novel and was shocked and amazed to see it get an official license from JNC. It just hurts having to wait for every Friday to roll around so that I can get my fix for this series.
the entirety of the sports world is filled with "also-rans" who clearly have no shot at the top. There is still money to be made and a viable career to be had... nobody in their right mind is going to dissuade someone who is a pro tier competitor from playing a pro sport just because they lack the talent to be the very top.