"This must be destiny! I thought Surely the reason" - italics after 'thought'?
"I get another chance, I thought, I should try to observe them more closely!" - if I get?
"you can stash your things in those locker there" - those lockers?
"sounding like the general of an army ." - space
"pitied him his misfortune" - remove him
@terabyte said in Amagi Brilliant Park Volume 3 Discussion!:
[71%] "dead anyway.(`;ω;’)ﾌﾞｸッ》 Ahhh." ► Are those Japanese characters supposed to be there? Or was the emoticon right before supposed to replace them?
That's the whole emoticon. Whether you want to TL it or not is a different question. (you probably should because ﾌﾞﾜｯ has lexical meaning there, not graphical)
Any Moon+Reader users here?
Getting used to my android device and reading this on Moon+Reader and came across something odd.
At about 25% mark, right after “And Shinichi-kun said he wants to see you in that dress, didn’t he? Goth-Loli Myusel!” and before “Ah...” on the next page, there's '[1/3]' in blue lettering. That doesn't show up in either my Kobo reader or calibre on my desktop. The page is blank after the first line, almost like expecting an image, and the parenthesis isn't a link either despite the differing color.
Edit; Some bug in M+H perhaps as it seems to repeat the first chapter before starting the second chapter...
In the Premium notes of volume 4, Sam said that he intended to start translating the last volume beginning in July with the goal of having the whole thing out by year's end. I can only guess outside circumstances changed that as I don't think any part of 5 has been released yet (not that I blame Sam; adding manga and all the other things that have happened would eat away all the time that he already doesn't have).
Well I’m all caught up and have to thank you @Rahul-Balaggan for showing me this LN. This LN is so lit, I’m sad now I have to wait months for v5. Gotta admit this author sure knows how to write battles between life and death pretty good.
So I'm catching up on this volume, currently on part 5. Kiara's paparazzi like antics is definitely a call back to the inn's daughter in the main series right? I only read prepubs so I can't check back, but is there an in-universe connection here or is the author just messing around and making callbacks?
The janitor is the true principal, quite cliche, but I didn't see it coming. They never talked about it before now after all...
P.S.: I guess we're gonna get some romance for Dan, too? lol
Volume 5 - Part 8:
[14%] “My own prince to live happily ever after with...“ ► The closing double quote is wrongly a starting one.
[19%] "There were striped a menacing black and yellow," ► It should be They (the claws).
[27%] "Autumn’s attacks hammered as me as I struggled" ► It should be hammered at.
[28%] "underestimating a spider’s web! As I struggled" ► The dialogue's closing double quote after web! is missing.
[37%] "Mysterious Lady’s unique appearance was the two crystalline parts" ► It should be were.
[56%] "like it’s any fun to live with me33.” ► It should be me.
[72%] "the meaning of ‘working in the shadows?’” ► The question mark should be outside the single quotes?
[85%] "nickname of ‘Conscience of the Academy’. This" ► Move the period inside the single quotes.
[87%] "If you the core as the heart of an IS," ► It should be you think of.
So Zagan, in the heat of the moment, clearly called Nephy his bride. I wonder what he'll do when he remembers about it. And Barbatos' new second name shall be Handyman!
The epilogue takes the cake though. That was a masterpiece!
I must admit I'm not very interested with shoujo related genre because mostly they have reverse-harem in their story. Maybe because I'm a man and seeing the heroine surrounded by bunch of man is not sitting right with me. That the reason I'm not enthusiast when know JNC license shoujo LN back then.
However, lack of interesting book made me to tried to read two shoujo LN that license by JNC. Start with Bakarina and yup, I can't make my mind to continue because the reverse-harem tag. The good thing is make me move to read this book and boy I really like it. This story is pure love story between man and woman and even though this book have more male support character I can't find anything to hate because they behave normal. Definitely will bought this book with my December premium credit.
@paul-nebeling Most triumphant example of "First Girl Wins"
@paul-nebeling said in Rokujouma Volume 26 Discussion!:
@steelblaidd I've got this feeling that GoD: The Exchange Student is going to get some mileage in the story. Two or three volumes, at least.
At least. The still have a whole year of HS to get through. That's at least ten volumes at the current pace.
I'll definitely talk more once we get out of anime territory, but for now I'll say...
I know Aoki did what he had to do and that's fine, but going to his ex, who for all we know might still have feelings for him, just to tell her that he has someone else he likes now... it kind of feels a bit... Awkward? Off-putting? The perfect setup for Nana to move back later on in the story, join the group, and throw everything into chaos?
...that last situation might actually be pretty interesting to see happen, though.