I liked this story overall and looked forward to the weekly releases. I really liked the reveal while Tao was listening. However, I think it could be improved with a bit more attention to the characters. I thought Aurelio was inconsistent - I would have liked for him to be a complex character with a consistent story line to back up his actions. The shocking violent banquet was good but felt a bit out of place, as there wasn't a lead up to it in Luca's or Aurelio's point of view. The end felt rushed and incomplete, with a story line that was interesting but went too far beyond the main events at the estate. It could have been a good cliffhanger. I think there are some great things here that would benefit from a more detailed story and with some sections retold from another main character's point of view.
Subcategories
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Ascendance of a Bookworm
If there aren't any books, I'll just have to $@#! up society until I get them!
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How a Realist Hero Rebuilt the Kingdom
Step into my office and let me tell you about crop rotation...
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My Next Life as a Villainess: All Routes Lead to Doom!
Can't die by the hero's hand if all the heroes love you!