@terabyte I'm starting to think that the War of All is going to end up starting because of R's interference with the timeline.

@sasha-mcglynn Thank you kindly for the reply, glad to hear it's being fixed :D

Yay, can finally look out for the premium pre-order

@mihest Thank you for the info! This is exactly what I was looking for!

@timaaahh Thanks for pointing that out, I didn't notice!

@myskaros Cheers mate, wasn’t aware of that.

Didn't see anyone mention this one
Vol 3, part 10 [25%] "One one side, there was a group" > Probably meant to read "On one side,"

Well, I just finished reading this, and wow, my decision to hold off checking out the prepubs was right! That was one heck of an emotional roller coaster of a story. And the climax of events in chapter 9... Unexpected and yet expected at the same time... As soon as Heartseed showed up, it kind of telegraphed the following events, but that's because of what kind of fellow it is.

I wasn't sure I'd like it, but it was an enjoyable read, but not one of the stories that grabbed me as must buy immediately. That said, I'll be looking into the future books, though it will be a lower priority. For a rating, I'll give it a solid thumb up.

@dryurimom 👍👍👍 and I do agree with you the $6 credit is cheaper way to buy a book.

Whoops! You're right! My original count was correct!

Part 1:
"There some who were praised" - there were
Part 3:
"”You’re all ready?”" - inverted quotation mark
Part 4:
"Merry silent peeked over" - silently
Part 7:
"like “nuan and “wakundawo,”" - missing quotation mark
"The coated group had collected Yume and the others’ weapons after Jessie had forced them to drop them, and then returned them to them before they left the village." - that's a lot of 'them'. Also one of many instances of overused 'and the others'
Part 8:
"That’s why you’re hidden yourselves away in Thousand Valley." - you've hidden?
"”My name " - inverted quotation mark
Part 9:
"Were they positioned with one in the north, south, east, and west, and then one in each of the northeast, southeast, northwest, and southwest." - question mark?
Part 10:
"A guorellas was" - guorella
"Merry healed Kuzaku’s wounds for him." - probably Haruhiro's, from the context

Ah, whoops. I might have done the silver = blonde hair stand in thing, so I just lumped her in with the others. Still, all the Europeans in the series so far have really light hair colors. Interested to see the American of the group if they get one (they compared America to the Mafia in V1 iirc... So maybe we won't get a positive American IS user). xC

Be interesting to see if they diversify the crew with maybe some Latin American or African IS pilots later too.

@terabyte now that is good news. Thanks 😁

I don’t know how I would feel if it ever goes down that route

Part 8

??%: Ai's report, she gave her won. (I think "one" was intended, though as a suggestion, I would just go with "gave hers.") 23%: "Wah>!" (The ">" seemed out of place, though maybe I'm just not familiar with some use of it) 23%: R protected me this so-called L. (me from this) 35%: I's true Lea and Corona were older, but would never do something like this ("It's true". Also, I would suggest "but they would never".) 48%: watching run off, (her run) 81%: replied to my curtly (to me)

Part 2:
"gunmen straight out of a spaghetti western" - gunslinger/gunfighter thends to be a better TL for ガンマン
Part 9:
"There were glutenous people" - gluttonous

If this is still up, I think I'll read this one today if I can. Unfortunately, the other expiring titles I'm not caught up on (Magic Too Far Behind), I want to purchase to show support (SisKan), or I am trying to avoid touching until rereading (Dendro).

So this was the one left (otherwise, I'd be content to wait for a catch-up month). x)