Volume 4 - Part 3:

[81%] Her words took my surprise, so I froze in place, ► It should be me by.

Volume 8 - Part 4:

[23%] your training days as saint candidates, are you? ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [26%] our operation so that he would be there when we ► It should be wouldn’t. [69%] to do with the rules I’ve set for accepting jobs. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [92%] of the royal family, Cardinal Fugue was an active ► It should be Fuge.

Cover illustration for volume 2, released October 5th.

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Cover illustration for volume 3, releasing November 10th

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Cover illustration for volume 5, releasing November 10th

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Volume 7 - Part 6:

[29%] I understand why you’re afraid this labyrinth too.” ► It should be afraid of. [40%] something stabbed into one after another, injecting ► It should be into her bones? [86%] Eve, you three access the situation and attack as ► It should be assess. [91%] Bloodstone’s boots rang out,scraping the ground ► Missing space.

Volume 8 - Part 2:

[19%] the meeting was cancelled at the last minute ► It should be canceled (US spelling).

@terabyte Updated, thank you!

Let's not have this thread devolve into a "Let's guess what actually has happened to Sol Press" discussion.

Reasoned speculation has kind of reached its end here, without any new information there is nothing more that could be said.

Please try and keep it to discussing new information/statements, or about how their stopping affects the works involved that they publish.

Volume 4 - Part 8:

[7%] Whatever it was, she knew it would be angry. ► It should be he (Jinshi).

Volume 4, Part 9:

[13%] "The current is fast, but the lindwyrms should be able to make it, and we can have our engineers set up a small bridge for." ► Seems like for should be removed, or maybe replaced with across / to cross. Or maybe change and to which, as that might work as well with for staying there. Or changing and to then and still getting rid of for. Or, maybe it should be for the heavy infantry, if that's how the original text goes. Or, of course, some better alternative option :) [30%] "with primal glare in his eyes." ► "with a primal glare" might work better [61%] "Now this could come in handy.." ► Should be three periods in the ellipsis [70%] "the only thing I could from it was the desire to fly even faster." ► Should be "could tell from it" (or maybe hear would work better)

v9p9:

last paragraph!

that was only foran extreme emergency
that was only for an extreme emergency

As @Rahul-Balaggan suggested posting this in the corrections topic...

Anyway, the constant ackward translation of "Sensie" to "Sir" has been getting on my nerves, it feels "stiff" to me (making me think she's saying "Sir, Yes Sir,!" while her back is ramrod-strait.

My preference would have been to leave it as Sensei with a note the first time that it was a title given honorarily to teachers, OR, to change it to "Master", which feels a lot more soft and sweet imagining her wheedling up to him saying "Please, Master! Call me Adorable!"

@terabyte @pcj These updates have been made! Thank you as always!

@campbella said in Dahlia in Bloom - Corrections Topic:

@gaffary said in Dahlia in Bloom - Corrections Topic:

[55%] "You're favoring your right leg. Did you hurt it?" ► Isn't this contradictory? As in, wouldn't she have hurt her left leg if she were favoring her right; or vice versa? Should it say "You're favoring your left leg." (based off of context in the next few passages) or something like that? Or is that just how its written originally?

No, if she was favoring that leg that means she was [subconsciously] trying to use it as little as possible. Favoring in this context means to treat gently because it's hurt

Ooh, yeah, that makes sense. Maybe I shouldn't be a few drinks in when doing these, lol. Thanks for the explanation though!

Volume 15 - Part 6:

[24%] ‘No, but, well... It’d be rude to say anything ► The dialogue's starting double quote is a single one. [56%] it had definitely been a while.. And yet he ► Duplicate period.

Volume 2 - Part 7:

[43%] time-honored Rhinian judgement—with the alf ► It should be judgment (US spelling).

Volume 2 - Part 3:

[29%] since it’s an undershirt.”. Unlike the one ► Duplicate period after the quote.

12.1

Dante was practically half-naked due to how worn through his prison uniform was.

I feel like it should be “worn-through”.