This was a fun one, more amusing to me than the last couple.

Poor Keima, frantically trying to give anyone else the credit, even trying to spread nasty rumors about himself.

@cosmicspear said in Lazy Dungeon Master Vol. 9 Discussion:

I appreciate how despite trying to lay low this whole time Keima still wound up being legitimately pretty strong and cool.

Just like at the end of the last volume, the part Rokuko keeps watching over and over. Sleep-deprived Keima is mighty Keima :)

With his golem power armor programmed to mimic S-ranks and his own overpowered spell casting he probably is at least A-rank even without using dungeon master powers or summons.

Wow, that's another huge batch of bonus short stories.

@cibastian There’s sort of a workaround for this. (Again, not ideal.) If you go to the Search page, open up Advanced Search, and scroll down to Categories, you can select Members and check the box for “Search child categories” to get everything in the Members section. You could also select multiple categories if there are any series that you don’t follow. On the plus side, you can save Search Preferences, but the links always take you to the beginning of the thread.

Volume 4 (Premium Edition): 4 Bonus Short Stories Those Who Have It, Those Who Don’t The Beginning of Everything for the Young Girl Two Caged Birds For My Young Daughter

@rahul-balaggan said in Teogonia Volume 1 Discussion:

Volume 1 (Premium Edition): A Bonus Short Story Belmezzo, the Head of the Workshop

Thanks for the heads up. I've now read the bonus short story.

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The premium ebook has now been updated with Molly's translator column! Also, Asu Random Part 1 is currently scheduled to start up in March, so keep your eyes out!

That was some twist right there!

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Volume 4 - Part 6:

[27%] “Don’t move, Sven!!! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [71%] not a disguise. I was always the “corporal.” ► Wrap corporal in single quotes and leave the double for the dialogue? [74%] “M... Master! ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing.

@eric-bravo said in Outer Ragna: Volume 1 discussion!:

Personally, I think it is a quite unique isekai, it hooks you pretty much instantly,

Going to give it a try then

Part 8

2%
If the false impression that every member of the Biboth Clan shares your notion that being first equates to true glory, then I couldn't live with the shame,"
--insert "you have" or similar (as-is, "the false impression" is the grammatical subject of the "if" clause but it's missing a corresponding predicate/verb)

2%
Your insanity, on the other end, is far from 'florid.'"
--"hand"?

17%
"Wait, why am I writing this in Baronh?" he said scanning the Ath glyphs he'd engraved.
--insert comma; "Abh"

35%
Lafier interest was piqued, slightly.
--"Lafier's"

47%
Meanwhile, Samson was throwing multifarious ingredients into his giant caldron.
--"cauldron"?

47%
Thinking on it, this was the first time she'd ever seen somebody hand-preparing cuisine (as opposed to machines).
--insert "using", since the machines weren't hand-preparing things?

64%
A place that was typically dimly lit, but was not filled with the dazzling light provided by the brigade members' illumination devices.
--"now"

71%
Dyaho did not disdain her, but he wasn't yet in heat, so he passed her by without incident.
--"she"?

94%
but at Nanatei they warmed the juice and made a lemon wedge floating in it.
--"float"

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* Let’s Go To Sepaeda

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@bartzbb While I am quite appreciative of the artistic appeal of a good illustration as wallpaper, I do have to wonder about copyright laws. While that usage would probably be covered by fair use under U.S. Copyright law. I have no idea about other countries.

Keep in mind, I grew up in an era where record companies balked (quite loudly) over making cross-media and backup copies of recordings for personal use. My POV is somewhat skewed.

Did an unedited script got in a final ebook by any chance? Some parts of it were nigh unreadable.
I would have probably enjoyed this volume a lot more if I wasn't forced to reread paragraphs for a few times in order to guess (not understand, guess) wtf was happening there.

There's a problem with the first color illustration, the picture is "double" around Haruhiro's hand and the back of Shihoru's head.alt text

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@tgquan67 By B,

I pasted the wrong chapter title here, I usually put the story titles on my notes app then post them and copied the wrong title, my initial post has been updated.

At 8% of Part 7/Chapter 3, you're still alternating between Tiffes and Majic in the narration and dialogue with Claiomh. Majic currently isn't with Claiomh in this Part and has been accompanying Orphen and Leticia throughout the third chapter.

At 85% of Part 7, the line "Krylancelo has no self-control these days, huh.." should be italicized since it's written as Leticia's thoughts.

In Part 5 at 71%, There's a line in Forte's dialogue that doesn't make sense. He states to Orphen that "Yes. I'm Wall Kahlen of the Wall Kahlen classes now, I'm sure you haven't forgotten that." I don't know if this was meant as sarcasm on his part or if this is a botched line. Shouldn't it be: "Yes. It's Wall Kahlen of the Wall Kahlen classes now."?