Errors:
Part 1: "robbed the people their will to live" - of their will
Part 2: triangles that separate sub-parts aren't formatted the same way as in other parts
Part 5: "I watching your hilarious transformation sequence" - was watching
Part 8: "Ha! I found you!" - Rekka talks about a wound so I assume there was no object pronoun in original and it should actually be "found it".
Part 6: "It had been tens of millions of years on the outside. Since time passed even slower in this fake world, it must have felt like an eternity here alone." - also something that needs to be checked against original because it's stated multiple times that shorter intervals of time pass here while longer intervals pass on outside, i.e. time flies by faster inside the seal, so saying "time passed even slower" doesn't seem appropriate.

Typos:
"took out a knife and starting cutting away at the belts on my gauntlets" - started cutting away
"Sit Touya" - Sir Toya
"we did find two shelves of books still in tact" - intact. This one occurs in other parts too, so Ctrl+F is your friend.

@Terrence I finished this one the other day. It was so enjoyable... Loved the ending :ok_hand: ... and the ecchi. :persevere:

54% "I watching your hilarious transformation sequence" to "I was watching your"

48% "A moment later, a flame the size of a first appeared" to "the size of a fist"

@Rahul-Balaggan Ah, it seems I had a typo in the filename so it wasn't working!

Fixed now!

91% "that there building is" to "That building there is" ... I think -,-"

There was another song Juna sang too during the America's Got Talent competition to serve the king. Find that one? xD

Occultic Nine: After you read the forumer say "Snaaaaaaake" watch this.

https://youtu.be/aqXRGQJLsCk

In part 3, 35% "he feel like he" --> he felt.

Such depth in this story! Such pathos! Such power!

The book definitely does drag in some parts and at times becomes pretty lame siscon material but the joyful humor and affably self aware silliness just clicks for me and I really enjoy this series. Roll on volume three!!

FYI Sam, I like 10 parts per book for this series, bite sized chunks work a charm here.

I thought I was only going to need a credit every other month for O9, which I prefer to read at my own pace, but the bonus for the premium ebook is an exclusive authors interview. Very tempting.

PS: Maybe what's going to be premium content should be posted outside of Twitter.

At 66%-ish (I am on my iPad) Yoriko is spelled as Noriko, it's the scene when Aiko is on Yuichi's bed.
The sentence reads, "Aiko looked at Noriko with eyes glowing red."

I have now decided I need 2 very important things from this book:

for Orihara to be happy, I don't care what has to happen but I want one of the books in the series to be all about her and her happiness.

I want Ibaraki to be in danger and Yuichi finally accepts he is a good guy and goes to save him (Since this is a Harem book I highly doubt the author taking this in a BL direction...and for all I know the Fujoshi like Ibaraki X Yuichi the way they are now...yes I am making Yuichi the Uke)

Also that illustration of Aiko and Yoriko on the bed, PRICELESS!

@Sam-Pinansky True enough. That does seem the likely case.

My favorite scene this chapter was definitely Will dodging the three arrows that Menel fired so fast one at a time, and then just jabbing the fire without looking. So COOL.

I love Menel too. I love Will. I love ALL the characters, darn it.

Sorry I didn't reply last week, but please know I giggled when everyone was going "MENEL'S GOTTA BE A GIRL!"

I hope Menel sticks around for a while, The broseph vibe is strong with him.

76%. "An reference from before our time." Should be "A reference"

Yesssss! NeeChuu boy B-team go! :laughing:

Around 44%: It didn't terribly descriptive to Furu

Seems to be missing a word, possibly "It didn't seem terribly descriptive".